Cupids Chocolates OP

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Topic Starter
Pokegn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Pokegn
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Michiiii-
  • Expert:
  1. 00:14:214 You should put there a note, because it's empty and you will klick too early to the slider.
  2. 00:21:018 Just one beat earlier -> 00:20:959
  3. 00:21:492 - 00:22:202 let them jump, so that the both last ones are on the other side of the map, so it's flows better.
  4. 00:33:207 - 00:34:508 Just change this part, you can't click this
  5. 00:58:649 Also just one beat earlier. 00:58:590
  6. 01:27:167 - 01:28:528 Stack them
Topic Starter
Pokegn
I´ve uploaded it with your mod, thank you!
Halozy
Hi, this is my suggestion

00:07:646 (1,2,3,4) - This is not necessary
00:20:958 (2,3,4) - Not need 1/6
00:21:492 (5,6,1,2) - Not good jumps for the sound
00:25:219 (2,3,4,1) - This is spaced with (2), (3) and (1) http://prntscr.com/a0fjkf
00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,1) - Too insane part in (2), (3), (4)
00:41:372 (8) - Innecessary Break
00:58:590 (1,2,3) - Not need 1/6
01:15:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream has a lot of distance, so insane
Put hitsound's
00:27:527 (1) - Bad slider
00:33:207 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - This part does not go with the sound of the song
00:50:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Not necessary insane jumps
01:15:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part does not go with the sound of the song
01:21:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - too many jumps and 19 combo

This song has a bad offset, the background image is very bad quality and need hitsounds too!

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Pokegn
Thank you! About the background, Ill change it soon.
Electoz
Just call me in game whenever you need me to point out some general stuff.
nignog9000
Hey, sorry for the late mod. This is for your insane diff

There's quite a bit wrong here so i'm just going to give you some pointers instead of modding the whole map. First of all, empty spaces like 00:04:623 to 00:06:220 need to be filled in with something, it's such a short map, you don't need to put so many breaks in it, speaking of breaks, get rid of the break at 00:41:366 there is no need for it. Another thing to watch out for is parts like 00:53:081 (3) - where you have a hit circle every tick, don't overlap them, its just aggravating, keep the same distance for each circle until you've been beatmapping for a while, and you can understand how to pull stull like that off. I'm going to stop here because after seeing 01:10:476 to 01:15:446, you might just be getting lazy, you can't have a beatmap with boring sections like that, especially an insane difficult. Maybe reduce the amount of diffs to 2 for right now and work on them instead of spreading it out.

Remember quality over quantity. If you need additional help, just PM me i'd be glad to give you some more help.
Topic Starter
Pokegn
Thank you! Tomorrow I will update the map with the changes you suggested!
Electoz
Alright, here's some tips that you should know about mapping.
Some technical words. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Glossary
Some general knowledge about mapping that you should know. > p/4763558/
Some rules and guidelines about mapping. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
Guidelines for each difficulties. > https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements

11:48 Pokegn: Hello, I just saw you are online, and you told me on my map (https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/415772) that I could call you, to point some general things
11:49 Electoz: yes
11:49 Electoz: ya
11:49 Electoz: how about now?
11:49 Pokegn: yes I would appreciate it
11:52 Electoz: can you link your map?
11:52 Pokegn: ?
11:53 Pokegn: sorry Im mexican, and I have some limited english :/
11:54 Electoz: I mean
11:54 Electoz: can you put the link of your map in here?
11:54 Pokegn: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412096
11:54 Electoz: so I can download it
11:55 Pokegn: (sorry for the bat background Im searching for a good one, but I didnt like no background)
11:57 Electoz: this is gonna take long
11:57 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/896349 Cupids Chocolates OP [Normal]]
11:57 Electoz: ^I'll go with this first
11:58 Electoz: by the way, you can say "ok" or something while I'm pointing out general things
11:59 Electoz: so I know that you're reading
11:59 Pokegn: ok
12:01 Electoz: 00:24:687 (4,1) - When mapping a song that doesn't have any vocals, you shouldn't leave an empty space like this
12:01 Electoz: it's too big and players will get bored
12:01 Pokegn: I have a background, updating now
12:01 Pokegn: ok
12:01 Pokegn: on what difficulty?
12:01 Electoz: this song has many instruments to follow so you should try mapping them based on instruments
12:01 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/896349 Cupids Chocolates OP [Normal]]
12:02 Electoz: 00:36:757 (1) - 00:41:727 (3) - Also, slider like these didn't make much sense, because you're "skipping" many instruments for no reason
12:02 Electoz: When you're mapping, try to follow the instruments consistently
12:03 Pokegn: ok, ill have that in mind
12:03 Electoz: don't randomly skipped some instruments you're following
12:03 Electoz: *skip
12:04 Electoz: 00:00:546 (1,2,3,4) - 00:48:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In easier difficulties, we use sliders more than circles
12:04 Electoz: you used too much circles here, and the pattern seems pretty old
12:04 Electoz: This kind of pattern was used like, 5 years ago or something
12:04 Pokegn: ok
12:04 Electoz: If I remembered correctly
12:05 Electoz: Don't try to put too many circles at one
12:05 Electoz: try to have a good transition between circles and slider
12:05 Pokegn: ok
12:05 Electoz: have a good balance between them
12:06 Electoz: 01:10:127 (1,2,3,4) - We'll stacking objects only when the song presents the "exact" same sound
12:07 Electoz: if you think the song didn't represent the same sound then you shouldn't stack them
12:07 Electoz: also, in easier difficulties, don't stack objects too much
12:07 Electoz: like, you can stack 2 objects
12:07 Electoz: but more than that it'll be harder to read for players in this level
12:07 Pokegn: ok
12:07 Electoz: 01:27:878 (2,3) - Also , stack like this, under the slider tail
12:08 Electoz: is what we won't do nowadays
12:08 Electoz: well you can stack this but, it's pretty uncommon
12:08 Electoz: just be sure to keep that in mind
12:09 Pokegn: ok
12:09 Electoz: If you're having trouble finding where the each instrument lands
12:09 Electoz: try listening to the song with 25% speed, that will make things a lot easier
12:10 Pokegn: ok
12:10 Electoz: let's see
12:10 Electoz: well, that's pretty much I'll point out now
12:10 Electoz: I'll give you some links in your beatmap forum later
12:11 Pokegn: ok thank you
12:11 Electoz: np
12:11 Electoz: you're welcome
12:11 Electoz: also
12:11 Electoz: Things I pointed out there
12:11 Electoz: are just "some" of the issues
12:11 Electoz: not all of them
12:11 Electoz: I want you to get the "concept" what I'm trying to explain
12:12 Electoz: so be sure to get what I'm saying and apply what you learned throughout the map

To those who're wondering, we disscussed about basics of mapping.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Pokegn
Thank you!!!
OblivioN
Hey
From Lazy modding team
  1. First of all,I think what I posted is"OblivioN: 2 slots for M4M" in my last post of our queue. So,no NM slot.
  2. Besides, in the first page, my personal rule is "★Please write "(‘ ω<☆)" in your post if you wanna OblivioN to mod your map" according to your reply,I don't think you have read our rules before posted.
  3. The reason why I told you about these, it is a guide to recommend you'd better obey their rules when you post mod request.These are etiquettes.:)

Cause you're a green hand, I'd love to help you. :)

The tips showed by Electoz are pretty helpful, please read them carefully and try to understand them.
Mapping is an extremely protracted process. If you wanna be a real mapper, just have patience and keep thinking during mapping.
Practice is an effective method to improve mapping ability.

As for this beatmap
  • Artist:桑泉
    Romanised Artist:Sangquan
    Tags:opening 爱神巧克力进行时
    Source:爱神巧克力ING

"Anime" is not necessary lable,delet it.
The title of the song never come up with in the anime.
you can ask for help at here :KwaN's Metadata Checking Queue ヽ(✿゚▽゚)ノ


bpm:169
offset:197
00:58:634 (1,2,3) - unsnap is unrankable
00:20:973 (2,3,4) - same


Rhythm:
use 25% playback rate and follow the beat.
you ignored a planty of beats
example:
00:04:451 -
00:16:166 -
00:20:072 -
and so many, find out them :)

Other else:
Cancel the "Widescreen Support"(In ”song setup”, select "Desigh") ,cause you don't have any storyboard.
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