1. Hard (3,62 stars, 361 notes)
2. Normal (1,37 stars, 228 notes)

1. 11/28: Uploaded and moved to pending.
2. 11/29: Odaril's fixes according to Beuchi-chan's post.
3. 12/01: Card_N'FoRcE's fixes according to Beuchi-chan's post, added a simple storyboard to display the mapper's name.
4. 12/03: Fixes according to Jarby's mod.
   Fix according to Lanttu's mod.
   Fixes according to Jeffro's mod.
   Odaril's fixes according to Rukarioman's mod.
5. 12/04: Card_N'FoRcE's fixes according to Rukarioman's mod.
6. 12/05: Card_N'FoRcE's fixes and Odaril's fixes according to Garven's mod.
7. 12/06: Odaril's fixes according to Zekira's mod.
8. 12/07: Odaril's fixes according to jericho2442's mod.
9. 12/08: Card_N'FoRcE's fixes according to jericho2442's mod.
   first bubble by jericho2442 !
   ranked

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~ <3

Remember these are just suggestions you can totslly ignore totslly *nods*

~All Diffs~
- Timing seems perfect, but maybe you will need another Timing Section for the end around 04:13:716. Don't trust me though, I'm not good at timing, it just sounds a bit off imo will see with Card_N'FoRcE for that
- Do you plan to make images with your names so we know who mapped which part? It would be useful oxo. Yeah ;_;
- Have you thought about using a silent sliderwhistle (or whatever the name of the slidertrack sound is)? Sometimes it sounds really loud and a bit ugly... >.< Normal or soft ?

~Normal~
01:39:813 (1,1) - Delete New Combos here? o.o nope, it's done for teh colourshaxxx
02:47:725 (1) - I don't really understand these sudden changes from normal to soft sets, I'd just decrease the volume of the hitsounds but leaving the normal set oxo change of mapper, also I kinda like it, since Helene Segara has a more high-pitched voice, it does fit imo, I'll increase the volume a bit

~Hard~
01:53:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just throwing my personal opinion here, but I think this breaks totally the flow with those stops D: Yeah I thought it was weird, I'm gonna remap that
02:00:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same
02:47:725 (1) - Again, I don't understand the changes from normal to soft hitsounds. same answer as for Normal
03:42:737 (1,2,3) - These 3 notes sound a bit off... But I can't put them on a better place... :/ They are... but the lyrics there are offbeat
04:09:527 (1) - Use soft hitsounds for the end of the spinner? okay

Lovely <3 :)
Good luck with this!! :3 I will need it... *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All Diffs~
- Timing seems perfect, but maybe you will need another Timing Section for the end around 04:13:716. Don't trust me though, I'm not good at timing, it just sounds a bit off imo
- Do you plan to make images with your names so we know who mapped which part? It would be useful oxo. I'm going to do that, obviously.

~Normal~
01:17:764 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd recommend to increase the spacing on all the objects instead of making jumps, it's the easiest diff after all... =x I don't think they should be considered "Jumps" since they're really tiny, but you're right anyway. Fixed, it also looks better.
01:42:459 (1) - This part sounds too loud, decrease the colume of the timing section? >.< Odaril took care of that
03:01:836 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Again here, I'd recommend to increase the spacing instead of making jumps. Same as above

~Hard~
01:42:459 (1) - Same as in Easy, this part sounds too loud >.< As said above, fixed
03:05:364 (1) - This might be too nazi but... Stack the endpoint with the previous (3)? Redesigned some patterns (tweaked some spacing, fixed)

Lovely <3
Good luck with this!! :3 *star*

Jarby wrote:

Cool kids use ampersands in artist fields. k

Normal:

01:39:813 (1,1) - Remove new combo, these lengths clash with the previous sections for no good reason. There is a reason actually, but yeah.

Hard:

00:29:697 (1,1) - Remove new combo, these lengths clash with the previous sections for no good reason. There is a reason actually... but yeah.
01:41:357 (1) - Remove new combo. no sir :/
There were some other consistencies in combo length throughout, but who gives a fuck reall Well actually the combos do make sense
02:52:134 (1,2,3) - Use the magic of ctrl+h to fix the symmetry. I did it for him.

Lanttu wrote:

Oh, I love this combo color thing you guys are doing<3 o/

[Hard]
01:42:459 (1) - This change to normal-hitsounds doesn't sound nice to my ears at this part of the song. ;_; Maybe continue the same hitsound pattern that Odaril used before this? If not, please lower the volume of this section couple of ticks? Card_N'FoRcE agreed, changed.
03:09:333 (1) - Exactly the same slider as in beginning, maybe make it different? >: He wants to keep it like that for now.

..And the same hitsound suggestions to [Normal]. I simply couldn't find anything else that bugged me, sorry for not being very helpful. OTL *throws you a star* Help is help, thanks.

Jeffro wrote:

[General]
The 2nd timing section for the volume can be exactly on the note, peppy fixed that bug that made the note sound different if you missclicked and stuff. I don't like doing this, I prefer to place it before the note, it's clearer for me, and for the modder.

[Normal]
00:18:453 (3) - Not exactly the same at the end, use ctrl-h to check if its symmetrical. Fixed by myself o/
01:01:889 (3) - ^ only you can't check this one with ctrl-h same
01:49:515 (1) - ^ Almost but just a few pixels off same
03:30:721 (3) - ^ same

[Hard]
01:55:468 (5) - I don't like the curve of this slider. I like it, myself. Not changing.
02:02:524 (5) - ^ same
02:45:740 (2) - Not symmetrical D: fixed by myself
02:57:426 (4) - Hold alt and move this 1 pixel to the left changed its location

Most of this mod is nazi'ing but good map <3

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Please remove the unnecessary transparency on Odaril.png and cnf.png on the right side. Done.

Normal:
Maybe tick rate 1 for this diff? okay
00:18:452 (3) - take this slider 00:11:397 (3) - and make a horizontal flip of it. looks better Did.
01:33:199 - add a note here to stay consistent to the previous combo? The absence of note here is done on purpose, you find the same in the two next combos
01:40:254 - maybe add a note here too? same
03:33:587 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - flip these vertically Looks a lot better, thanks

Hard:
02:05:170 (3) - spacing oups, indeed

Beautiful map.
Star + KD Star~

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Please remove the unnecessary transparency on Odaril.png and cnf.png on the right side. NO DAMN NO. IT'S NEEDED FOR THE STORYBOARD. ODARIL WHY DID YOU DO THAT. Replace with the old ones in the archive i first sent you. Ask me about the SB next time, please ;~;

Normal:
00:28:374 (1,2) - Maybe don't stack these? I actually missed there because I was confused if that was a 1/4 or a 1/2. Ok :<
01:01:007 (1) - one grid right so the spacing is right. This was ok when i mapped it, actually. Fixed
01:51:720 - add a note here Nope :<
02:19:502 (1,2) - I'd like these unstacked better again^^ Same, done.

Hard:
01:17:764 (1) - start this 1/4 earlier but end it at the same time? That sounds weird... The intention is to stop following the voice and follow the music here.
03:24:988 - add a note? Nope
03:54:313 - ^ Nope

Beautiful map.
Star + KD Star~

Odaril wrote:

There were some other consistencies in combo length throughout, but who gives a fuck reall Well actually the combos do make sense

Garven wrote:

Quit ranking your maps before I can get to them. :<

[General]
Please cut the unnecessary transparency from cnf and odaril.png please. Read what i said before. There's a reason why there's transparency to the right (and it's not THAT BIG much to overload the sb)

[Normal]
Having a higher OD compared to AR doesn't make sense. Line them up. I'll let Odaril decide
CnF:
01:04:314 (4) - Think you can smooth this slider out a little? The kinks on the insides are painful to look at for so long. ;_; Ok, done (i think)
02:52:134 - This part feels disproportionately louder compared to the rest. Indeed, the volume was slightly higher than how it was supposed to be, fixed

[Hard]

Odaril:
CnF:
01:24:820 (1) - Remove that whistle from the slider body please. >< But i want it :<

Garven wrote:

Quit ranking your maps before I can get to them. :< b-but ;_; I didn't even remember I had asked you for a mod

[General]
Please cut the unnecessary transparency from cnf and odaril.png please. Card_N'FoRcE said he was using it.
Remove normal-hitwhistle and normal-whistleslider.wav since they're not being used. I give my maps the standard sampleset, I'd rather not.
The slider ticks don't sound very good to me for this song. I thought silencing ticks was unrankable. o_o
Hey, it's only two difficulties. And there doesn't seem to be a super-excited map that is for me in here. ww

[Normal]
Having a higher OD compared to AR doesn't make sense. Line them up. Okay.

Odaril:
I kind of wish that you kept the same spacing as CnF so that your circles don't slightly overlap each other. Okay, re-spaced the whole diff.
00:57:920 (1) - This didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner to me. Though it looks like you use them a lot for the held notes. I find the spinners kind of detract from the slow and smooth layout you two have set up since spinners tend to communicate more of a spinspinspinspinspinspinspinfasterfasterspinspin feel instead of something smooth and fluid. But anyway, just my two cents on that. But I hate slow down slider for held notes... ;_; made a normal speed slider
01:11:591 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:11:370 - ? okay
03:44:170 (1) - Felt kind of short to me. made a bit longer
04:00:046 (1) - ^ And the note afterward is worryingly soon too. Made longer, and for the note, I don't think it's a problem with a slow BPM.
04:16:803 (1) - Silence/lower the volume on this spinner dramatically, please. woops, forgot that


[Hard]

Odaril:
03:43:509 (1) - Remove that whistle from the slider body please. >< okay
04:16:803 (1) - Silence/lower the volume on this spinner a bit more, please. Forgot that, too

It's nice, but I shouldn't play this when I should be in bed. bad boy

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Please check the green lines that are unsnapped if you really want them to be like that. I don't think unsnapped timing sections are a problem ? ;_;

[Normal]
On a sidenote I like how this difficulty actually requires sightreading in a reasonable degree. :D
01:28:348 (1) - symmetry? that slider was not meant to be symmetrical
01:31:876 (1) - hitsound on tail? I put the hitnormal there there
01:35:404 (1) - ^ Added whistle on (3)

[Hard]
00:53:069 (1) - kinda ruined the curve of the combo what
00:56:156 (1) - remove NC it's there for a reason
02:06:052 (5) - maybe a bit nazi, but I think you can improve the look of this slider... okay
03:42:737 (1,2,3,1) - snap to 1/3, shorten slider to white tick (tail) took me forever... but done
04:16:582 (4) - highly suggest delete okay

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Please check the green lines that are unsnapped if you really want them to be like that.

[Normal]
01:04:314 (4 and other slow sliders) - [Opinion]...really, really, really slow. The song and SV is already slow in itself... is it really necessary to make this @_@ Not to mention a jump after some of them... Yes, slow to enhance the voice.
03:04:923 (2) - [Suggestion] put below 1 instead of to the left Huh? o.o

[Hard]
03:28:074 (1) - *super nazi* not perfectly stacked below You can't notice that with the new stacking code (Also i'd like to avoid messing up the colour-hax ;_;)

jericho2442 wrote:

Normal
check every spinner once you have finished the mod to make sure they have kept there new combos

Odaril
(suggestion) 01:57:453 (5) - give this a new combo so that it flows the same as 02:03:626 (1) No. The new combo at 02:03:626 - only indicates the singer has changed.
04:15:701 (5,6) - im not 100% sure of how your wanting to time these 2 notes, are you follow rhythm or vocals, if your following vocals you sound abit early Indeed, used 1/6 to snap them correctly.

Hard
check every spinner once you have finished the mod to make sure they have kept there new combos


Odaril
03:42:700 (1,2,3) - the spacing you have used here is NASTY to read because its the same as your 1/4 part and this is 1/3 notes, pleeease give it this spacing so it goes with your current DS Commented on IRC. ;_;

03:43:582 (1) - remove this new combo, plays much better without it changed the combo pattern but I really can't remove that new combo, it would fuck the whole combo pattern
(suggestion) 04:08:424 (3) - this slider is abit ugly, give it a better curve since all the other sliders look nice? done

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niiiice maps, call me back once you have fixed the few things

jericho2442 wrote:

CnF it is quite easy enough to get the IDENTICAL effect on the SB without having the unnecessary transparency Not really, there's a tiny little difference.

but as you said its 1.08X load so its not really much anyway to care about xD Exactly.

Normal
Card N'FoRcE
00:29:918 (2) - the flow of this note to the vocals you are following is really bad, give it either of these to follow the vocals better and to not kill your flow, or if you can find a better way please do, but this really kills your flow :/ Followed the first image ^^
(suggestion) 03:01:836 (1,2,1,2) - make this pattern so that both of the (2)s stack under each other Maybe this is what Zekira meant too. Ok done btw.

Hard
Card N'FoRcE
(suggestion) 02:27:660 (6,7,8) - only a tiiiiiny thing, but these note's have abit different spacing even though they are the same timing, think about fixing this ;p Oh. Didn't notice because the end of the slider doesn't have an approach circle and i get fooled sometimes. Done