'kay.i have no brain, ill see what ill put there
01:41:746 - 01:51:401 - my 2ct but undermapping so much isn't really necessary. I think there is enough room you could use some neato pattern.
eally don't see the need of HP6 here, nerf it down to HP5.i think i gotta ask you a bit of stuff about the last point, but i tried changing a bit there
Nerf the OD to 4.
00:32:780 (55) - move the note to 00:33:125 - , by far a stronger sound you could follow and provide a better break phase.
00:57:263 (114) - might skip this note to break off the relatively long combo chain.
02:01:056 - 02:20:367 - it's strange how much lighter you've made the late kiai parts compared to the first one. I don't think it's design-wise a good concept, try to make them approx. equal from the density. (Either nerf first kiai or buff late kiais)
hihi, uh i accidentally closed out of the tab when i wass writing but thankfully i did get a screenshot of what i wrote... most of it at least sorry for the clumsinesssorry for late reply, fixed it all! thank you!!
01:41:746 (1) - 01:57:953 (1) - similarly to what i said at 01:19:677 (1) - , try to use all the sounds available to make this section fit in between the kantan and muzukashii correctly
-> remember to apply 1st kiai changes to 2nd kiai as well
in the 3rd kiai, feel free to apply the same changes as you did in the other two kiais, but the intensity here is slightly higher due to the presence of bass kicks, etc. for instance, 02:10:539 (1,1,1,1,1) - could be k k d d k d d k k d. more freedom for denser
02:21:056 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - try to make this section more dense, as this is kind of the final buildup of the song after all
hope this helped a bit c:
just in case someone thinks i didn't write that screenshot, here is the full pic https://puu.sh/zeLNl/a17a030b6f.png