1. Hard (2,91 stars, 440 notes)
2. Hol0Wide's Normal (1,56 stars, 201 notes)
3. Insane (4,26 stars, 726 notes)
4. Witch Gate (4,95 stars, 822 notes)

Alexey wrote:

Теперь гораздо лучше, можно другие сложности пилить (если хочешь ранкеда нужно чтобы одна сложность была <2 звезд, для новичков)
04:07:839 - Тут можно еще одну ноту поставить

Buptyo3 wrote:

Мой совет тебе: не выдавать кудосу, людям которые перепроверили карту. По правилам повторно выдавать кудосу можно только если карта полностью переделанна.


Тайминг точки:
1. Offset:     4661ms     BPM: 128,00
2. Offset: 186535ms     BPM: 134,00
3. Offset: 188348ms     BPM: 138,00
4. Offset: 189784ms     BPM: 136,00
5. Offset: 190144ms     BPM: 140,00
6. Offset: 191888ms     BPM: 144,00
7. Offset: 193266ms     BPM: 146,00
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Также стоит на некоторых местах сделать звук тише.

00:50:832 (6,7,8) - тут можно сделать треугольник, будет лучше выглядеть и читаться.
И вовсе тут всё собрано неаккуратно, если у тебя возникнет желание, то могу обсудить это с тобой в игровом чате.

Alexey wrote:

Источники:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/RU:Ranking_Criteria
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/RU:Easy_(Difficulty)

1. 00:05:129 (2,3,4) - feel like these three notes should be ascending as the music is also
2. 00:08:117 (4) - this should start on 00:08:176 and end on 00:08:352
3. 00:08:410 - I don't see why you lowered the SV all of a sudden.
4. 00:10:051 (4) - make this part similar to 00:08:117 (4,5) , it's kinda empty
5. 00:29:035 (5) - extend this to 00:29:504 to make it sound better
6. 00:32:082 (2,3,4) - distance is quite different compared to 00:20:832 (3,4,5) - and 00:13:332 (4,5,6) -
7. 00:34:660 (1) - why is this unattached?
8. 00:36:535 (9) - make it a circle
9. 00:36:887 (10) - This sounds really awkward
10. 00:38:762 (4) - ^
11. 00:39:582 (2,3,4) - again, distance is not consistant
12. 00:40:285 (6) - doesn't really matter but it would be better if you extend
13. 00:42:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remap, here is the correct rhythm
14. 00:44:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same here http://puu.sh/o4rWM/c58a61d1d3.jpg
15. 00:47:785 (1,2,3,4) - and here too http://puu.sh/o4rYu/24770e41b2.jpg
    DO THE SAME FOR THE REST
16. 00:49:192 (4,5,1) - space them out evenly
17. 00:58:332 (7,8,9) - move the 8th circle up a little so they have the same DS with 00:57:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these
18. 00:59:504 (2,3,4) - same
19. 01:01:613 (2,3,4,5,6) - reduce them all by 1 tick
20. 01:04:543 (8,1) - again, make the DS similar
21. 01:10:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - same deal ive menctioned above
22. 01:33:957 (2,3) - recommended rhythm
23. 01:42:981 (4) - extend 1 tick
24. 01:49:426 (6,1) - stack
25. 01:52:121 (4) - start on 01:52:004
    

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello! #modreqs

jossieP wrote:

#TimingHelp

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Mijii wrote:

My mod after you modded my map:

(Sorry for the short mod but your map is pretty nice)

General:

The SB has a bug. Look: http://puu.sh/qow1x/db6f578124.jpg
(That happens on all the black & white parts)

P.D: I'm not sure, but probably you will need a Normal diff to can rank this map

Hard:

00:52:473 (1,2,3) Make a little triangle with this 3 circles, something like this: http://puu.sh/qov1G/5452554054.jpg

01:38:387 I think you can do a better slider. That slider looks a little ugly xD

01:53:387 (7) NC here

02:19:637 (1) You can try to put here a higher hitsound.

Insane and Witch Gate: Why not CS4 on this diffs?

I didn't found more issues.

xNyamx wrote:

Im not good at English sorry.
I feel that flow of aim is little bad.
but fun map XD

1. Distance spacing at 00:13:801 (7,8) - and 00:19:426 (6,7) - feels awkwardly low compared to the emphasis in the music.
2. 00:32:551 (5,6) - also feel like more spacing would benefit the feeling of the map. it feels awkward going through low spacing when there's an emphasised sound.
3. 00:58:332 (1,2,3) - These three circles are very spaced compared to the triples before it which is confusing. It's quite easy to assume the pattern won't be a triple.
4. 00:47:785 (5) - This slider ends a bit late, probably an accident.
5. 01:02:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is very sudden after the previous pattern dies down. Will likely take players by surprise. It doesn't make much sense that you have jumps much more extreme than before seen when it's the actual track is barely more emphasised here compared to the last bar.
6. 01:03:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What the hell is this pattern? O.o This is a very awkward pattern and I don't see a reason why it would fit in here. If you really want it, you should at least NC here 01:04:192 (5) -
7. 01:07:473 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is cool, but to fit the music better, you could do the first 4 circles heading right, and the next 4 left.
8. 01:33:875 (2) - Slider starts slightly before the correct time.
9. 01:39:324 (9) - NC?
10. 01:48:933 (4) - Definitely NC here to make the patterns stand out from each other.
11. 01:49:402 (6,1) - Spacing should be closer between these two to show they're 1/4th away
12. 02:02:644 (6,1) - the change from this jump pattern to this slider is awkward as hell, and there's emphasis on the slider that's ignored. Space the slider from the jumps.
13. 02:19:637 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this intentional? There' s a bunch of out of time stuff here.
14. 03:28:460 (9) - NC here again?
15. 03:31:292 (3,4,5) - Massive spacing here, but 03:32:792 (3,4,5) - here there isn't and it's more emphasised in the music. there's actually quite a few cases of this at the end.
16. Make sure to NC when there's a change in slider curve. 03:39:355 (5) - 03:54:355 (5) - 03:54:730 (9) -
17. A lot of patterns throughout are messy, you might want to neaten them out. Blanket sliders, fix overlaps, create parallels. It'll really help.

1. 00:06:301 (5) - It's best not to end a slider on an emphasised sound. Ruins the impact.
2. Same here 00:08:176 (5) - and 00:13:801 (5) - so on
3. 00:49:192 (2,3) - More spacing would be best here. I think you get the idea by now. Emphasised sounds should have larger spacing compared to notes in nearby patterns.
4. 01:07:942 (5) - NC here?
5. 01:52:918 (5) - NC to highlight change in curve
6. 02:11:668 (5) - And here
7. The same thing about messy patterns on the other diff I covered.

1. 00:05:598 (3,4) - Random spacing change
2. You keep foing stuff like 00:27:629 (1,2,3,4) - and it feels very uncomfortable.
3. 01:28:543 (2,4) - Maybe blanket these?
4. 01:43:308 (3,4,5) - These have suck low spacing they look like a stream
5. 02:06:512 (1) - SV changes like this in a "hard" difficulty aren't advised.
6. 02:10:613 (2,3) - How is the player supposed to know to click early on (3)?
7. 03:02:762 (3) - Hard to read when to click this as it comes earlier than expected.
8. 03:27:710 (5) - One repeat slider is kinda boring. You could probably switch to another one half way at least.
9. The same thing about messy patterns on the other diff I covered.

001thefish wrote:

Hey, from #modreqs :3/

Witch Gate

1. Distance spacing at 00:13:801 (7,8) - and 00:19:426 (6,7) - feels awkwardly low compared to the emphasis in the music. indeed
2. 00:32:551 (5,6) - also feel like more spacing would benefit the feeling of the map. it feels awkward going through low spacing when there's an emphasised sound.done
3. 00:58:332 (1,2,3) - These three circles are very spaced compared to the triples before it which is confusing. It's quite easy to assume the pattern won't be a triple. oh my dear triple... looks like it really unnecessary
4. 00:47:785 (5) - This slider ends a bit late, probably an accident. Fixed
5. 01:02:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is very sudden after the previous pattern dies down. Will likely take players by surprise. It doesn't make much sense that you have jumps much more extreme than before seen when it's the actual track is barely more emphasised here compared to the last bar. I misunderstood what you wanted to say, but I don't want to do just a stream, because here the buildup of the melody
6. 01:03:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What the hell is this pattern? O.o This is a very awkward pattern and I don't see a reason why it would fit in here. If you really want it, you should at least NC here 01:04:192 (5) - It's not hell, it's Witch Gate hehehe rofl. Fixed
7. 01:07:473 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is cool, but to fit the music better, you could do the first 4 circles heading right, and the next 4 left. And here isn't it?
8. 01:33:875 (2) - Slider starts slightly before the correct time. disagree
9. 01:39:324 (9) - NC? Yeah, NC
10. 01:48:933 (4) - Definitely NC here to make the patterns stand out from each other. Ok
11. 01:49:402 (6,1) - Spacing should be closer between these two to show they're 1/4th away Ok
12. 02:02:644 (6,1) - the change from this jump pattern to this slider is awkward as hell, and there's emphasis on the slider that's ignored. Space the slider from the jumps. I tried after such fearsome jumps to highlight the slowdown in the slider... but you're right
13. 02:19:637 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this intentional? There' s a bunch of out of time stuff here.
14. 03:28:460 (9) - NC here again? Yeah
15. 03:31:292 (3,4,5) - Massive spacing here, but 03:32:792 (3,4,5) - here there isn't and it's more emphasised in the music. there's actually quite a few cases of this at the end. oh my dear triples... when I did them, I liked them. but that was long ago, and now my opinion has changed
16. Make sure to NC when there's a change in slider curve. 03:39:355 (5) - 03:54:355 (5) - 03:54:730 (9) - No
17. A lot of patterns throughout are messy, you might want to neaten them out. Blanket sliders, fix overlaps, create parallels. It'll really help.

Insane

1. 00:06:301 (5) - It's best not to end a slider on an emphasised sound. Ruins the impact.Ok
2. Same here 00:08:176 (5) - and 00:13:801 (5) - so on
3. 00:49:192 (2,3) - More spacing would be best here. I think you get the idea by now. Emphasised sounds should have larger spacing compared to notes in nearby patterns.Ok
4. 01:07:942 (5) - NC here? No
5. 01:52:918 (5) - NC to highlight change in curve No
6. 02:11:668 (5) - And hereThe same
7. The same thing about messy patterns on the other diff I covered.

Hard

1. 00:05:598 (3,4) - Random spacing change Not random, but to emphasised sounds
2. You keep foing stuff like 00:27:629 (1,2,3,4) - and it feels very uncomfortable.
3. 01:28:543 (2,4) - Maybe blanket these?Yes
4. 01:43:308 (3,4,5) - These have suck low spacing they look like a stream Ok
5. 02:06:512 (1) - SV changes like this in a "hard" difficulty aren't advised. don't see anything sudden
6. 02:10:613 (2,3) - How is the player supposed to know to click early on (3)? Fixed
7. 03:02:762 (3) - Hard to read when to click this as it comes earlier than expected. Fixed
8. 03:27:710 (5) - One repeat slider is kinda boring. You could probably switch to another one half way at least.Ok, it will be two repeat sliders :^)
9. The same thing about messy patterns on the other diff I covered.

That's all from me! Hope I helped! :3/

Mikii wrote:

General

1. Check aimod on your easy gd, there are some unsnapped objects and one object isn't distance snapped
2. I think you should put all your storyboard elements into an SB folder Okay
3. You have an unused hitsound normal-hitclap.wav just redownload map

Hard

1. 00:32:550 (3) - Same issue ,just don't end a slider on a large white tick when the downbeat is so prominent. I won't complain about this anymore since you can fix this across the whole map I understood... you're goddamn right
2. 00:48:488 (1,2,3) - I can't spot spacing issues very well but be careful of spacing like this
   00:55:051 (2,1) - ^
   01:32:293 (3,4) - A mistake?
3. 01:29:480 (4) - Blanketed way too close, space if out further to the right? Fixed
4. 01:59:949 (1) - This spinner is way too short Got it
5. 02:02:058 (3,4,5) - Space this out, this stack is difficult for hard players Fixed
6. 01:49:637 (1,3) - Avoid slider overlaps like this when you can Okay
7. 02:10:262 (1,2,3) - Fix these hitcircles, they are simply too instinctive to read on a blue tick, no hard player can predict this rhythm well. Okay
8. 02:19:637 (1) - I have to give note the rhythm here to 02:41:199 (7) - is nicely spaced and mapped well and you should do this for the whole map
9. 02:37:215 - Add hitcircle Okay
10. 02:38:738 (1) - Just make this a triple I see no reason
11. 03:27:710 (1,2) - Space out Spacing here, I think, good as at 01:38:387 (1,2)
12. 03:46:292 (2,3) - W W-what?

Insane

1. 00:04:660 (1,2) - Since Distance snap is going to get larger on insane, you can try to stack if you're having issues with comfortably placing hitobjects Got it
2. 00:33:254 (1) - The violin isn't the only prominent piece of sound that you can map. On insane it's probably better to keep flow going by mapping the drum beats. This can be applied to the whole map Got it
3. 00:40:285 (6,7) - Questionable kicksliders I'll think about it
4. 00:41:574 (8) - Questionable blue tick slider Fixed
5. 00:42:629 (1) - Why end on blue tick? It's a mistake
6. 01:35:340 (3,3) - The white ticks here are all loud and so should be mapped to the sliderheads. Why add variation to the sliders. You can probably use two hitcircles. I take note of it, but I'm not going to change because it's not bad imho
7. 01:49:168 (9,1) - Too close to eachother Fixed

I'll probably end the mod here, there are way too many issues to point out so I tried my best to construct my main points onto the first few points on a diff. Focus on spacing and rhythm and you'll improve your map that much more