-Sh1n1- wrote:
Volta's Salad
- 01:25:531 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much jump to be salad, I'll recommend you to remove jump between 01:26:197 (2,3) - keeping the same distance with 01:26:531 (3,4) - so it will be more confortable to play for newcomers. fixed
Volta's Platter + added hdash in the middle of kiai and some distance tweaks
- 00:00:531 (1,2,3) - antiflow movement here is unconfortable for platter, many players will miss droplets here cause they will need to follow the curve of 00:01:031 (2) - and then a dash to catch 00:01:531 (3) -, also it's not a good introduction to the diff cause this part it's probably the most calmest part of the song and movements should reflect it. changed the movement
- 00:03:197 (1,2,3) - same here pls. ^
- 00:13:197 (7,1) - I'll suggest you to add more distance here cause there is a high piano pitch, current distance is totally walkable. There should be a jump here. fixed
- 00:16:197 (7,1) - I wanna suggest you the same as above here for consistency. ^
- 00:18:531 (7,1) - a good place to add hyperdash, make 00:18:531 (7) - fully horizontal and move 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit to the right, more than 2.80x of distance will create a hyperdash. i try
- 00:33:364 (4,5) - current distance is similar as a stack movement, also is less enphasis to the next movement ( 00:34:197 (5,6) - ) hmm i ctrl + g 00:33:197 (3,4) - to give emphasis
- 00:43:531 (2,3,4,5,6) - this part is kinda monotonous, so I'll suggest you to enphasize the high piano pitch on 00:45:864 -, so maybe you can change 00:45:531 (5) - into notes and add a little jump between such notes ok
- 00:50:864 (5) - same as above for consistency. ^
- 00:59:864 (3,4) - don't you want to add more distance here? the sound of 01:00:197 - deserve it imo yes
- 01:01:864 (1,2) - why they looks like stacked? if there were a distance of 1/2 between such notes, it could be acceptable but 01:01:864 (1,2) - have a dstance of 1/1 and the upcomming 1/2 (01:02:531 (2,3) -) have more distance and looks weird at game play, increase the current distance between 01:01:864 (1,2) - pls fixed
- 01:14:531 (7,1,2,3,4) - add a change of direction or something else, this part shouldn't be too straight cause the sound of 01:14:697 - is totally different compared with 01:14:531 - and you are not reflecting it with the movement.alrigth
- 01:24:197 (1,2) - why distance here is longer than 01:25:531 (3,4) - if 01:25:864 - is stronger than 01:25:197 -? my suggestion is: 01:24:197 (1,2) - decreasse distance here and the distance between 01:25:531 (3,4) - should be similar as 01:23:864 (8,1) - fixed
- Hitsounds pls! dem sur sir
Volta's Rain
- 00:01:364 (3,4) - 00:04:031 (5,6) - 00:05:531 (2,3) - jump is enough, not hyperdash, intro is a calm section so you can't start with this kind of patterns removed the hdashes in the intro
- 00:16:197 (7,1) - add hyperdash here for consistency with 00:13:531 (1,2) -, I know you are not following drums but 00:13:864 - and 00:16:531 - are basically the same, also I think that you should press ctrl+g at 00:14:864 (5,6) - talking about structure, repeat sounds better at 00:15:197 - added hdash, but i'm not agree to ctrl + g since i want to emphasis the drum at 00:15:864 - with higher distance, not repeat slider
- 00:26:531 (1,2,3) - movement here is too lineal and don't enphasize the song propertly imo, try holding ctrl+g at 00:26:864 (2) - but keeping the current distance between 00:26:864 (2,3) - to don't create problems. hmm since this section is very calm, i don't want to make fancy movement.
i think linear is fine- 01:33:531 (9,1) - hyperdash here, same as 00:16:197 (7,1) -, consistency. fix!
- wow the amount of hyperdashes on kiai are extreme, if you wanna keep, I recommend you to add a couple of hyperdashes at Platter's Kiai to fix spread, or... remove two or four hyperdashes from rain's kiai, up to you. blame cymbal lol. will try to buff platter's kiai
Ayy sorry for delay, finally I'm back :3 Call me back for re-check when you are done, now I have more time >.<
thanks a lot shini :3
update: http://puu.sh/xMle5/1edf75584a.rar