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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-27T16:10:50+00:00

Sangzin wrote:

[Doyak's Normal]
00:36:776 - 여기 S:C2로 힛사 넣어두시는게?
00:49:853 - ^ 개인적으로 틱힛사를 싫어해서(노트가 없는 곳에서 반응을 듣는다는 게...) 그걸 고려해서 주변에 심심하지 않게 휘슬들을 넣어준 거라 일단 패스하겠습니다.
01:06:007 (4) - 개인적으로는 슬라이더 마지막부근에 노트가 없었으면 좋겠네요. 그렇게 큰 음도 없는데다 앞에서는 끊었는데 여기서는 있으니 뭔가 어색하기도 하고... 앞과는 다르게 보컬이 있습니다. 꽤 중요하다고 생각하는데 뺄 필요는 없다고 봅니다.

모딩 감사합니다~

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-02-27T18:52:55+00:00

Len wrote:
1:1 req

Enon:
00:04:084 (6,1) - 이거 두개 거리를 조금 더 벌려줬으면 좋았을거같다는 생각이듬 근데 이것보다 00:03:314 - ~ 00:04:276 - 이부분 타임라인을 http://puu.sh/nnmCz/e52b927ca4.jpg 이렇게하고 7하고 1을 스택시켜서 http://puu.sh/nnmCT/2411374988.jpg 00:04:276 (7) - 여기에 브레이킹이 걸리고 00:04:853 (1) - 를 시작하는느낌이라고 해야하나 이런식의 흐름이 더 좋아보이는듯 가장 강한 비트인 00:04:276 - 부분이 슬라끝으로 끝나버리니까 뭔가 너무 아쉬운느낌이 강함 반대로 00:16:007 (2) - 이런건 잘 끊어줘서 ㄱㅊ ✔ 확실히 그렇게 하니까 나은 것 같네요 고쳤습니다
00:14:084 (1) - 거리가 너무 멀은듯 ✔ 조금 줄여봤습니다
00:16:584 (3,4) - 이거 너무 거리를 정직하게해서 빻빻 이라는 느낌이안나는느낌 디스턴스를 1.5~6정도로 조금 늘려도 괜찮다 싶은 부분 ✔ 노력해봤습니당
00:18:122 (4,5) - 이 두개를 1/2슬라로 바꾸면 00:17:930 (3,4) - 스택 , 00:18:122 (4,5,6) - 1직선흐름을 피할수도있고 더 자연스럽게 할수있다고 생각해용 ✔ 이것도 노력해봤습니당
00:19:084 (2) - 일부러 강조할필요까지는 없는듯 컨G? ✔ 그런듯 고쳤습니다
00:28:314 (2,4,5,6) - 위험해보이는 오버랩 ✐ 이 정도 오버랩은 괜찮다고 생각하고 있습니다
00:29:468 - , 00:29:853 - 피니쉬 swap 다른부분도 마찬가지 00:29:468 - 여기서 이이이이이 하고 00:29:853 - 빵 터지는거라서 피니쉬를 바꿔주는게 좋은듯 ✔ 앙 기무띠
01:14:661 (2) - , 01:16:199 (2) - 디스턴스 ✔ 언락님 모딩에서도 말씀드렸지만 패턴이 마음에 들어서 계속 보류를 했던 부분인데, 계속 모딩이 들어온다는 것은 문제가 있다는 거라고 판단하고 고쳤습니다
01:28:314 (2) - 샘플셋 드럼이라서 둥 울리는게 너무 뜬금없는듯 ✔ 전 모딩에서 고쳤던 건데 맵셋 주인분이 업뎃을 안해주셨네요 ㅠㅠ

수고람쥐!@~!@

모딩 감사합니다~

이번엔업데이트를해주시면정말감사할것같은부분입니다

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Blackweb

56 posts

Joined September 2015

Blackweb 2016-02-27T21:21:42+00:00

Believe
00:04:084 (7) - get rid of finish on this note, it is unnecessary
00:07:930 (1) - make this 1/4 longer
00:16:584 (2) - put this here http://puu.sh/nnG76/8bf319549e.PNG (but this is a personal opinion so you dont have to do it)
00:17:930 (3) - move this up a tad
00:22:738 (2) - stack on top top 3 of previous combo
00:28:314 (2) - make this like this http://puu.sh/nnGjL/658d9aa3e6.PNG
00:29:853 (2) - make this more centered inbetween 5 and 6 of previous combo
00:49:853 (2) - make this like this http://puu.sh/nnGuf/e4b10f7ca8.PNG
00:57:161 (1) - put this on top of 2 from previous combo, i know it seems like a stretch but imo i feel like it'll make this jump not so over-distanced
01:14:468 (3) - either put this on top of 6 or 6 on top of this
that's it for that diff, gj. very fun

Habi's Insane
00:03:988 (4,5) - make this like http://puu.sh/nnGRw/c1fca0076f.PNG
00:22:930 (3,4,5) - make this like http://puu.sh/nnGXc/a3f3770402.PNG
00:25:238 (6,7,8) - make this like 00:03:988 (4,5)
00:42:545 (2) - no nc
that's all i got for that diff
that's all im gonna mod b/c i suck at modding easier diffs. (sorry)
altho when i get better at modding easier diffs i'll probably pm you and mod them

nice map btw, gl!

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-02-28T08:46:53+00:00

Blackweb wrote:
Believe
00:04:084 (7) - get rid of finish on this note, it is unnecessary No, it sounds better if there is a finish
00:07:930 (1) - make this 1/4 longer I don't really think it should be longer
00:16:584 (2) - put this here http://puu.sh/nnG76/8bf319549e.PNG (but this is a personal opinion so you dont have to do it) i'll keep it
00:17:930 (3) - move this up a tad it's blanket pattern
00:22:738 (2) - stack on top top 3 of previous combo its same as first pattern
00:28:314 (2) - make this like this http://puu.sh/nnGjL/658d9aa3e6.PNG
00:29:853 (2) - make this more centered inbetween 5 and 6 of previous combo its blanket pattern
00:49:853 (2) - make this like this http://puu.sh/nnGuf/e4b10f7ca8.PNG
00:57:161 (1) - put this on top of 2 from previous combo, i know it seems like a stretch but imo i feel like it'll make this jump not so over-distanced nope its still ok
01:14:468 (3) - either put this on top of 6 or 6 on top of this
that's it for that diff, gj. very fun
that's all i got for that diff
that's all im gonna mod b/c i suck at modding easier diffs. (sorry)
altho when i get better at modding easier diffs i'll probably pm you and mod them
nice map btw, gl!

No comment = fix
Thanks for modding!

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-02-28T11:48:12+00:00

Sorry for late

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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-02-28T12:23:49+00:00

일단 제난이도 뺴고 저도 몇몇개 짚어드릴게요

[Easy]

00:06:391 (2) - 시작부분에 피니쉬를 넣으면 더 강조하기 좋은부분입니다. 저는 실수하신거라 생각해요
00:20:045 (4,1) - 정말 여기는 콤보배치 바꾸셔야 할거같아요 4에서 뉴콤 넣어주는 편이 훨씬 좋아요
00:21:776 - 피니쉬 너무 안어울리네요 여긴 제거하시는게 좋겠습니다.
00:22:930 - 여기에 휘슬추가해주세요
00:28:699 (4,5) - 리듬 서로 바꿔주시는게 흐름이 더 보여요 동일한 리듬이 뒤에도 있는데 1/1 슬라 그대로 통일하는게 좋아요
00:40:045 (2) - 보컬에만 너무 치중한 패턴같은데 이건 보컬 무시하셔서 하얀선에 맞춰주시면 좋겠네요 그리고 00:40:045 (2) - 여기에 노트도 추가해주시고
00:42:161 - 00:45:238 - 00:46:391 - 이곳들 전부 피니쉬 추가해주세요
00:51:007 (1) - 앞부분 피니쉬 정말 필요없어보여요 피니쉬를 강조할만한 리듬도 딱히 없으니 제거해주시는게 좋습니다.
00:52:545 (3,4) - 이것도 제 힛사 참고해서 넣어보세요..

개인적으로 히트사운드가 너무나 부실하다고 느꼈습니다. 특히나 피니쉬와 휘슬만 사용하신점이 너무나 흠이라고 느낍니다. 제가 지적한곳 외에 더 어색한 부분들도 많이 있으니 도약님이나 제 난이도를 참고하셔서 히트사운드를 바로잡아 주시는게 훨씬 좋다고 생각합니다.

[Doyak's Normal]

00:00:238 (1,2,3,4) - 이건 제가봐도 노멀에서는 너무 비적합한 패턴입니다. 스피너로 대체하시는 편이 훨씬 좋습니다.
00:06:199 (4) - 왜 리핏하셨는지 모르겠네요 보컬 맞출필요 없이 뒤에 음만 강조하시는 편이 덜 어색하고 좋습니다.
01:01:776 (1) - 이건 실수라고 생각합니다. 시작부분 피니쉬
01:06:391 (5,6,7,8) - 리듬 자체는 좋습니다.. 그런데 패턴때문에 집었습니다. 지금 단일노트 3개를 배치하셨고 8번을 7에 겹치셨는데 겹친 패턴을 과연 초보자들이 리딩을 할수 있을까 정말 의문이 들 정도입니다. 다른 도안이 필요할듯 싶습니다.
01:27:930 (5) - NC

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-28T12:36:44+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]

00:00:238 (1,2,3,4) - 이건 제가봐도 노멀에서는 너무 비적합한 패턴입니다. 스피너로 대체하시는 편이 훨씬 좋습니다. 1/2 슬라이더가 몇 개 붙어있는 게 왜 비적합한지 모르겠네요. 1/2 클릭도 여러 차례 있는데... 그리고 스피너를 넣기엔 박자가 애매해요. 끝낼 곳이 00:01:007 - 00:01:391 - 00:01:776 - 정도인데 첫째는 스피너도 너무 짧을 뿐더러 소리를 중간에 끊어버리는 느낌이고, 두번째는 그 다음 00:01:776 - 부터 노트를 넣기에 시간차가 너무 짧고, 셋째는 시작 부분에 2박동안 노트를 못 넣는다는 게 걸리네요.
00:06:199 (4) - 왜 리핏하셨는지 모르겠네요 보컬 맞출필요 없이 뒤에 음만 강조하시는 편이 덜 어색하고 좋습니다. 글쎄요, 일단 저는 이 맵에서 보컬을 중심으로 따라가고 있는데 여기서만 무시해야 할 필요도 없고, 그렇다고 다운비트에 박은 무시하기엔 너무 강하잖아요?
01:01:776 (1) - 이건 실수라고 생각합니다. 시작부분 피니쉬 이것도 딱히 실수가 아니라 피니시를 넣어줘야 할 특별한 소리도 없고 그렇게 강한 느낌보다는 앞에서 이어져가는 느낌이 들어서 일부러 안 넣은 거에요. 구간의 시작점이라고 해서 항상 그런 강한 소리가 있는 건 아니니까요.
01:06:391 (5,6,7,8) - 리듬 자체는 좋습니다.. 그런데 패턴때문에 집었습니다. 지금 단일노트 3개를 배치하셨고 8번을 7에 겹치셨는데 겹친 패턴을 과연 초보자들이 리딩을 할수 있을까 정말 의문이 들 정도입니다. 다른 도안이 필요할듯 싶습니다. 아무래도 좀 그러니 일단 수정해보았습니다.
01:27:930 (5) - NC 맵 전체에서 2 다운비트 뉴콤을 지켜왔는데 여기만 뉴콤하는 건 도리어 일관성을 깨뜨린다고 생각합니다.

모딩 감사합니다~ (하나 고쳤더니 별이 2.14 -> 2.10으로 하락)

Doyak's Normal

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Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Elasia 2016-02-29T01:10:14+00:00

[Easy]
00:11:007 (1) - 00:11:776 (2) - 이것과 일직선되게 수정하시면 좋을듯
00:12:353 (3) - 슬라 휘는방향이 위쪽으로 휘는게 더 낫지않을까요?
00:31:007 (2,3,1,2) - 사이사이 간격을 비슷하게 맞춰주면 낫지않았을까 싶네요
00:43:314 (2,3,1) - 이렇게 애매하게 틀어져 있는거보단 각도를 통일하는게 좋아보입니다
01:12:161 (2) - 스택하려고하신거같은데 살짝 삐뚤어져있어요

전체적으로 담요도 살짝 애매하게 덮인거도 있는것같고
모양을 조금씩 다듬어주는게 좋을거같아요

[Doyak's Normal]
00:05:814 (3) - 서클 하나로해서 끊어 주는건 어떨까요?
00:18:122 (2) - ^

전체적으로 괜찮은거같아서 좋네요.

[Enon's Hard]
00:03:699 (5) - 00:02:930 (3,4) - 이것과 간격 똑같게 맞춰주시면 더 깔끔할거같아요
00:09:468 (1,2) - 좀 넓은거같은 느낌이..
00:12:353 (1,2) - ^
00:20:045 (1,2) - ^
00:42:545 (3) - 00:41:776 (1) - 꼬리에 스택시키는게 깔끔하지 않을까싶네요
00:52:545 (1,2) - 00:51:776 (3,4) - 이거처럼 사이간격 맞추시는게?

사실 하드는 잘 볼줄 몰라요...

[Habi's Insane]
00:09:468 (1) - 블랭킷이 살짝 아쉽네요
00:25:814 (1,2,3) - 1자배치보다는 살짝 꺾어주는게 어떨까요?
00:27:545 (5,6,1) - 움직임이 직선인데 5,6이 넓다가 6,1에서 갑자기 좁아지니 어려운 느낌이 있네요
01:06:199 (4,1) - 스택 말고 퍼뜨려놨으면 하는 의견입니다
01:21:776 (1,2,3) - 이것도 1자배치보다는 살짝 꺾어주는게 좋을거같아요

[Believe]
00:47:545 (7) - 00:46:391 (1) - 이쪽 슬라머리에 스택하셨는데 갑자기 팍꺾이는느낌이라 별로 좋지않네요
00:50:045 (3) - 반복슬라 말고 슬라하나에 서클하나로 박자를 짰으면 더 괜찮을거같아요
01:22:161 (7) - 그냥 4번에 스택시켜버리는게

전체적으로 DS가 넓고 각진 움직임이 많은거같아서 치기 힘드네요

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Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-02-29T02:06:17+00:00

이지 힛사 관련은 처음에 맵 서브밋했을때 빌리브 난이도 힛사를 복붙했습니다.
애초에 한번 갈아 엎으려곤 했었고요.

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-02-29T07:26:22+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
일단 제난이도 뺴고 저도 몇몇개 짚어드릴게요

[Easy]

00:06:391 (2) - 시작부분에 피니쉬를 넣으면 더 강조하기 좋은부분입니다. 저는 실수하신거라 생각해요
00:20:045 (4,1) - 정말 여기는 콤보배치 바꾸셔야 할거같아요 4에서 뉴콤 넣어주는 편이 훨씬 좋아요
00:21:776 - 피니쉬 너무 안어울리네요 여긴 제거하시는게 좋겠습니다.
00:22:930 - 여기에 휘슬추가해주세요
00:28:699 (4,5) - 리듬 서로 바꿔주시는게 흐름이 더 보여요 동일한 리듬이 뒤에도 있는데 1/1 슬라 그대로 통일하는게 좋아요
00:40:045 (2) - 보컬에만 너무 치중한 패턴같은데 이건 보컬 무시하셔서 하얀선에 맞춰주시면 좋겠네요 그리고 00:40:045 (2) - 여기에 노트도 추가해주시고
00:42:161 - 00:45:238 - 00:46:391 - 이곳들 전부 피니쉬 추가해주세요
00:51:007 (1) - 앞부분 피니쉬 정말 필요없어보여요 피니쉬를 강조할만한 리듬도 딱히 없으니 제거해주시는게 좋습니다.
00:52:545 (3,4) - 이것도 제 힛사 참고해서 넣어보세요..

개인적으로 히트사운드가 너무나 부실하다고 느꼈습니다. 특히나 피니쉬와 휘슬만 사용하신점이 너무나 흠이라고 느낍니다. 제가 지적한곳 외에 더 어색한 부분들도 많이 있으니 도약님이나 제 난이도를 참고하셔서 히트사운드를 바로잡아 주시는게 훨씬 좋다고 생각합니다. 일단 히트사운드를 다 고쳤습니다

All fixe...d?

Yuria wrote:
[Easy]
00:11:007 (1) - 00:11:776 (2) - 이것과 일직선되게 수정하시면 좋을듯
00:12:353 (3) - 슬라 휘는방향이 위쪽으로 휘는게 더 낫지않을까요?
00:31:007 (2,3,1,2) - 사이사이 간격을 비슷하게 맞춰주면 낫지않았을까 싶네요 다 맞지 않았나요?
00:43:314 (2,3,1) - 이렇게 애매하게 틀어져 있는거보단 각도를 통일하는게 좋아보입니다
01:12:161 (2) - 스택하려고하신거같은데 살짝 삐뚤어져있어요

전체적으로 담요도 살짝 애매하게 덮인거도 있는것같고
모양을 조금씩 다듬어주는게 좋을거같아요

[Believe]
00:47:545 (7) - 00:46:391 (1) - 이쪽 슬라머리에 스택하셨는데 갑자기 팍꺾이는느낌이라 별로 좋지않네요 2번노트를 옮겼습니다
00:50:045 (3) - 반복슬라 말고 슬라하나에 서클하나로 박자를 짰으면 더 괜찮을거같아요
01:22:161 (7) - 그냥 4번에 스택시켜버리는게 취향이라서 놔두겠습니다

전체적으로 DS가 넓고 각진 움직임이 많은거같아서 치기 힘드네요

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-29T07:46:22+00:00

Yuria wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]
00:05:814 (3) - 서클 하나로해서 끊어 주는건 어떨까요? 배경에 괜찮은 소리도 있고 너무 뚝뚝 끊고 싶지 않아서 그대로 두겠습니다.
00:18:122 (2) - ^ 여기도 끊는 것보다는 이어주는 게 느낌이 좋네요. 흰 틱이기도 하고요.

전체적으로 괜찮은거같아서 좋네요.

모딩 감사합니다~

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-02-29T09:12:47+00:00

Yuria wrote:
[Enon's Hard]
00:03:699 (5) - 00:02:930 (3,4) - 이것과 간격 똑같게 맞춰주시면 더 깔끔할거같아요 ✔ 디스턴스 간격이 소수점으로 어긋난 걸 고쳐달라는 걸로 해석하고 그렇게 했습니다.
00:09:468 (1,2) - 좀 넓은거같은 느낌이.. ✐ 저도 실감하고 있습니다만.. 패턴이 너무 마음에 들어서 큰 문제가 없다면 보류하고 싶습니다.
00:12:353 (1,2) - ^ ✐ 이것도 위와 같은 이유로 보류해두고 싶습니다.
00:20:045 (1,2) - ^ ✐ ^
00:42:545 (3) - 00:41:776 (1) - 꼬리에 스택시키는게 깔끔하지 않을까싶네요 ✐ 저도 스택 엄청 좋아해서 그렇게 해보려고 했는데, 너무 스택에만 신경쓰려고 하다보니 디스턴스가 막 깨지고 그러는 것 같아서 여긴 살짝 어긋나게 해봤습니다.
00:52:545 (1,2) - 00:51:776 (3,4) - 이거처럼 사이간격 맞추시는게? ✔ 이것도 디스턴스 간격이 소수점으로 어긋난 걸 고쳐달라는 걸로 해석하고 그렇게 했습니다.

사실 하드는 잘 볼줄 몰라요...

넵

모딩 감사합니다 갓갓님 ~_~

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276,140,29468,6,0,P|264:72|296:-8,1,150,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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380,8,30238,2,0,P|388:56|376:104,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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436,284,31007,6,0,P|404:320|296:308,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,318,32161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,228,32353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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361,198,52545,6,0,L|530:183,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,272,53122,2,0,L|316:286,2,150,4|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,54468,6,0,L|190:348,3,37.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,316,54853,2,0,L|122:312,3,37.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,280,55238,2,0,L|54:276,3,37.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,240,55622,6,0,P|-7:175|8:103,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,44,56199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,44,56391,2,0,L|184:36,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,122,56776,2,0,L|168:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,212,57161,6,0,P|317:173|328:86,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,122,57738,2,0,P|183:161|172:248,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,294,58314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,353,58507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,353,58603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,353,58699,6,0,L|390:345,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,263,59084,2,0,L|325:271,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,185,59468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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212,164,61007,2,0,P|224:214|200:322,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,61584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,61680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,61776,6,0,P|194:217|274:245,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,309,62353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,354,62545,2,0,L|44:350,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,260,62930,2,0,L|137:264,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,230,63314,6,0,P|309:171|296:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,145,63891,2,0,P|168:204|180:278,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,349,64468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,302,64661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,302,64757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,302,64853,6,0,L|395:285,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,204,65238,2,0,L|242:231,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,145,65814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,77,66007,2,0,P|304:105|310:141,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,229,66391,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,261,66584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,319,66776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,351,66968,6,0,P|411:318|421:219,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,152,67545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
479,115,67738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,115,67834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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406,277,74853,2,0,P|380:210|310:200,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Elasia

160 posts

Joined December 2010

Elasia 2016-02-29T09:34:52+00:00

Enon wrote:
Yuria wrote:
[Enon's Hard]
00:03:699 (5) - 00:02:930 (3,4) - 이것과 간격 똑같게 맞춰주시면 더 깔끔할거같아요 ✔ 디스턴스 간격이 소수점으로 어긋난 걸 고쳐달라는 걸로 해석하고 그렇게 했습니다.
00:52:545 (1,2) - 00:51:776 (3,4) - 이거처럼 사이간격 맞추시는게? ✔ 이것도 디스턴스 간격이 소수점으로 어긋난 걸 고쳐달라는 걸로 해석하고 그렇게 했습니다.
제 말은 http://puu.sh/npxuB/262a82f1fb.jpg

http://puu.sh/npxB4/e0680351d8.jpg

이런식으로 사이사이 간격을 말씀드린거였는데 전달이 제대로 안된거같군용

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-02-29T11:40:30+00:00

Yuria wrote:
제 말은 http://puu.sh/npxuB/262a82f1fb.jpg

http://puu.sh/npxB4/e0680351d8.jpg

이런식으로 사이사이 간격을 말씀드린거였는데 전달이 제대로 안된거같군용

그렇다면 첫번째껀 의도하신 바와 같이 고친 것 같네요.

두번째껀 지금 그대로가 취향이라 보류하겠습니다

ecdonald

336 posts

Joined January 2012

ecdonald 2016-03-04T09:28:23+00:00

Hello~, from my NM queue. I'm very sorry for my lateness

and I could only found slight issues ;_; it's just like perfect xd

[Easy]
I think it's perfect XD

[Normal]
sorry I couldn't found any problems ;_;

[Enon's Hard]
sorry I couldn't too ;_;

[Habi's Insane]
I think AR:8.5 OD:6.5 would be nice for spread because the Hard is AR8 OD6 and Believe is AR9.1 OD7.1 (though I guess the current prarameters is even ok since this is guest diff)

00:26:007 (2) - how about moving to http://puu.sh/nuiZy/6a937ce226.jpg ?(for consistent distance)
00:28:314 (2) - just slight point, but I think making it stack to 00:27:161 (4) - would be more neat

[Believe]

00:18:507 (1) - (#nazi) off blanket xd http://puu.sh/nui8v/ea1a19866b.jpg how about x:388 y:125? it would be perfect
00:35:238 (6) - I think making this pararell to 00:35:622 (1) - looks more beautiful owo http://puu.sh/nuidD/e907a453f8.jpg (example)change to sliderend cordinate to x:343 :y:37?
00:48:699 (3) - I felt this a bit too low (touching scoremeter) http://puu.sh/nuiou/fbf8784a9b.jpg move slightly highter?
01:15:238 (6) - move to x:140 y:191?(minor fix) this make absolute straight pair with 01:15:526 (1) -

overall really nice mapset! good luck

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-04T10:47:20+00:00

ecdonald wrote:
Hello~, from my NM queue. I'm very sorry for my lateness and I could only found slight issues ;_; it's just like perfect xd

[Easy]
I think it's perfect XD <3

[Believe]

00:18:507 (1) - (#nazi) off blanket xd http://puu.sh/nui8v/ea1a19866b.jpg how about x:388 y:125? it would be perfect
00:35:238 (6) - I think making this pararell to 00:35:622 (1) - looks more beautiful owo http://puu.sh/nuidD/e907a453f8.jpg (example)change to sliderend cordinate to x:343 :y:37? nope, i think current one is better
00:48:699 (3) - I felt this a bit too low (touching scoremeter) http://puu.sh/nuiou/fbf8784a9b.jpg move slightly highter?
01:15:238 (6) - move to x:140 y:191?(minor fix) this make absolute straight pair with 01:15:526 (1) -

overall really nice mapset! good luck

No comment = fixed
Thanks for modding!

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-03-09T18:26:21+00:00

FROM MY NM Q

Easy and Normal looks fine to me

[Hard]
My only complaint is that 01:28:699 (3,4) - this is a very bland ending

[Insane]
00:07:930 (4) - compared to 00:06:007 (1,2,3) - this is quite a big difference in spacing I would put it close to the triple, plus there's no significant change in the music that would suggest a sudden leap in spacing, especially afterwards you went back to the small spacing on 00:08:891 (1,2,1) -

00:11:776 (4) - maybe press ctrl G for this? just so people won't press it early when there is this: 00:10:045 (2,3) - which is large spacing for 2/4, and then such a small spacing for 4/4

01:18:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - curve it maybe? just slightly S shape it and it will match 01:18:507 (1) - this slider better. idk maybe like this. Plus it puts emphasis on the last note of the violin by increasing the spacing between the stream and 01:19:661 (1) - this slider. (basically anything but just a straight line would be great, here's one more)

[Believe]it practically plays perfectly so at this point I'm just nazi-ing, meaning you can ignore all these suggestion and it will still play well.

01:00:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - is this part just a to keep beat, or is it suppose to represent a part of the song that I'm not aware of.

01:11:968 (2) - just move this in the blanket a little bit more to make it the perfect blanket and triangle

01:14:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the switch up in what you're mapping to in the music doesn't transition smoothly/ transition too suddenly

01:18:507 (1) - there is a hold in the electric piano(?) that I would think it is better represented by a low SV 4/4 slider, then follow up by 01:18:988 (3,4,5) -

Yup you're good, I'm just nit picking at this point.

Last edited by N0thingSpecial 2016-03-09T18:29:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

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kanpakyin 2016-03-09T18:28:37+00:00

Can I make some taiko diffs for this?

Doyak

osu! Alumni

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Doyak 2016-03-09T18:48:20+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Can I make some taiko diffs for this?

omg I hope someone wants their Taiko diffs on my mapsets too

Cellina

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Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-09T21:11:25+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
Can I make some taiko diffs for this?

Wow that sounds nice but i'm worrying about new rc rules

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2016-03-10T06:30:01+00:00

Reana wrote:
kanpakyin wrote:
Can I make some taiko diffs for this?
Wow that sounds nice but i'm worrying about new rc rules

I've checked the ranking criteria thoroughly and I don't see anything contradicts it if I make two taiko diffs, of which one of them is muzukashii.

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-10T06:58:28+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
I've checked the ranking criteria thoroughly and I don't see anything contradicts it if I make two taiko diffs, of which one of them is muzukashii.

Then taiko gd might be nice, thanks!

Cellina

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Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-10T10:35:32+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
FROM MY NM Q

Easy and Normal looks fine to me

[Believe]it practically plays perfectly so at this point I'm just nazi-ing, meaning you can ignore all these suggestion and it will still play well.

01:00:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - is this part just a to keep beat, or is it suppose to represent a part of the song that I'm not aware of. Well I followed both vocal and background music so it might be ok

01:11:968 (2) - just move this in the blanket a little bit more to make it the perfect blanket and triangle

01:14:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the switch up in what you're mapping to in the music doesn't transition smoothly/ transition too suddenly Well I think there is highlighted part so I used kind of weird...? technique

01:18:507 (1) - there is a hold in the electric piano(?) that I would think it is better represented by a low SV 4/4 slider, then follow up by 01:18:988 (3,4,5) - Well I want to leave as note, to highlight that the weird part (wut) is ended.

Yup you're good, I'm just nit picking at this point.

No comment = fix
Thanks for modding!

Moa

453 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-03-11T13:15:20+00:00

하이 모딩와씀
[이지]
00:06:007 - 여긴 서클하나 박는게좋을듯
00:09:084 - 여기에 소리가있는데 00:07:930 (1) - 이건 리버스보단 리버스풀고 저자리에 매핑하는게좋을듯
ex http://puu.sh/nCFoL/d5089e0098.jpg <- 이박자 사용 추천
솔직히 전 00:16:584 (4) - 이거뺴고
00:17:161 - 여기서 슬라시작 하거나 서클을 넣었음 좋겟지만 (클릭하게) 우선이건 뒷부분도 다바꿔야대서 패스
뭐랄까 00:24:084 (2,3) - 이런 텀들이 엄청많은데 이런 애매한텀을 주기보다는 http://puu.sh/nCFAE/7edd97645f.jpg 이렇게 매핑하는게 더좋음 1/1텀 유지하게
00:29:853 (2) - 이건 http://puu.sh/nCFDx/c16c357478.jpg이렇게 늘려도 상관없음 1/1 텀도 유지하게되고
00:31:007 (3) - 이건 리버스 해주는게 좋을듯 그럼 이렇게 http://puu.sh/nCFKt/3df693eff4.jpg 텀유지하면서 리듬 좋게 매핑할수있음
00:39:853 - 매핑
00:35:622 (1,2) - 블랭킷?
00:42:161 (1) - 여기부턴 앞에 말했던 리듬하고 같으니 우선 패스
00:58:699 (1,2) - 블랭킷?
01:01:776 (1,2) - 블랭킷픽스
01:07:930 (1,2) - 블랭킷
01:16:391 (4,1) - 블랭킷
01:18:122 (2,3) - ^
01:21:776 (2,1) - ^
01:27:930 (3,4) - ^

이지는 사소한 블랭킷 미스 다 티나서 잘고쳐주셔야되고
안잡은부분도 꽤있는데 우선 위에건 참고하세염
[노말]
? 엄청 무난하게 잘찍으셔서 잡을게없네요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ;;
[하드]
00:07:930 (1,2) - 좀많이 떨어져있는느낌 아무리 텀이있어도.. 하드인데
00:16:584 (3) - 좀더 강조되어야할거같은데 위에거보다 점프가 더 작음
00:56:199 (2,3) - 01:01:584 (4,5,1) - 여기둘은 같게 하는게 어떨까요? 01:07:738 (3,4,1) - 이런 시작점엔 삼연타가 있는걸로보아
00:56:199 (2,3) - 여기도 들어가야할거같습니다
[잉셍]
00:21:391 (4,1) - 블랭킷?
00:27:161 (4,2) - 스택?
으앙.. 뭘잡아야할지 모르겟다
잘찍으셔써영
[막난]
어려운거못바영 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ.. 근데 잘찍힌듯

ㅁㅂㄷㅂㄷ.. 바카모딩 ㅈㅅㅈㅅ 쿧오스만 날름해가네

Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-03-11T14:01:37+00:00

굳건한 마음가짐으로

Easy

*00:27:161 (2,3) - 이거 일부러 블랭킷 안맞추신거?

*00:51:007 (1) - 슬라머리를 00:47:930 (1) - 슬라꼬리랑 스택

*00:57:161 (2,1) - 블랭킷

*01:07:930 - 굳이 클랩 넣을필요 있나요 없는게 깔끔해요

*01:14:084 (1,2,3,4) - 강한 느낌을 갖다주는 부분이기에 휘슬없애고 머리와꼬리 전부 클랩 넣어요

*01:21:776 (2,1) - 1슬라이더를 -15 회전하고 블랭킷

*01:25:622 (5,1) - 이거 충분히 블랭킷 가능하네요

Doyak's Normal

*00:08:891 (2,3,4) - 이어져라 자연스레 http://puu.sh/nCFCz/0b634072b4.jpg

*01:28:699 (7) - 특별한부분같은데 어색하지않게라도 뉴콤넣어봐요

Enon's Hard

*00:01:776 (1,2) - 블랭킷

*00:06:007 (4,1) - ^

*00:08:891 (2,1) - ^

*00:15:430 (5,1,2) - ^

*00:19:853 (6,1) - ^

*00:31:584 (2,4,5,1) - 역시 오버랩은 피해주셔요

*00:34:853 (2) - x316 y32 로 배치해주세요 간격 일정한게 보기좋네요 http://puu.sh/nCG5i/5740983583.jpg

*00:36:776 (4,1) - 블랭킷

*01:01:776 (1,2) - ^

*01:27:738 (6,2) - ^

앙 시간 없어서 하드까지밖에 못하넹

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-03-12T01:32:21+00:00

[Believe]
01:00:814 (3) - 슬라 모양을 살짝만 다듬어주세용

[Habi's Insane]
여유있을때 블랭킷 좀 다듬는걸 추천할게요..

00:28:314 (2) - 얘는 00:27:161 (4) - 꼬리에 스택시키는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:29:468 (1,1,2,3) - 이런 부분들이 총 네번 나오는데, 다 반시계방향으로 돌아서 약간 지루했달까.. 그냥 참고만 해주세요
01:27:161 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 좋을듯..?

[Enon's Hard]
00:30:045 (2,3,4) - 00:42:353 (2,3,4) - 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - 이 세개는 00:33:122 (2,3,4) - 처럼 노트를 놓는게 좋아보이는데.. 다 고치기 힘들것같다면 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - 여기에만 서클-서클-1/1슬라로 고치는것도 좋을듯
01:01:776 (1) - 블랭킷
01:21:776 (1) - 앞 노트들과의 흐름은 좋은데 그 다음 (2)번 슬라와는 그다지 어울리지 않는 것 같아요
01:28:699 (3,4) - 대충 이런 식으로 (2)와의 거리를 벌리는 것도 좋았을 법 한데, 지금의 패턴을 고수하는것도 나쁘진 않아보여요. 대신 01:27:930 (1,2,3,4) - 의 모양을 좀 다듬어 줄 수 있을까요?

[Doyak's Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - 슬라 끝이 01:06:199 - 에 있는게 최대한 드럼+보컬을 따라가려고 노력하신 것 같긴 한데, 전 이도저도 아닌 느낌을 받았습니다. 차라리 01:04:853 (1,2) - 에서 드럼을 따라가지 말고 그냥 보컬을 따라가셨으면 더 나았을 것 같은데.. 아니면 01:05:622 (3,4) - 를 드럼 소리만 따라가게 (4)에 슬라이더 대신 서클만 놓는다거나..

도약님 믿고 DS는 확인 안했습니다

[Easy]
슬라이더 틱에 히트사운드를 넣는건 사실 그다지.. 그치만 이건 개인 취향 문제이니ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

00:31:007 (3) - 00:40:238 (2) - DS

00:58:699 (1,2) - 01:18:507 (3) - 블랭킷을 맞춰주셨으면 좋았을텐데요..
01:16:391 (4) - 01:23:314 (1) - 이 두개는 블랭킷 맞추는걸 고려해보는 정도로만

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-12T11:25:04+00:00

Moa wrote:
하이 모딩와씀
[이지]
00:06:007 - 여긴 서클하나 박는게좋을듯 보컬 따라갔어염
00:09:084 - 여기에 소리가있는데 00:07:930 (1) - 이건 리버스보단 리버스풀고 저자리에 매핑하는게좋을듯
ex http://puu.sh/nCFoL/d5089e0098.jpg <- 이박자 사용 추천
솔직히 전 00:16:584 (4) - 이거뺴고
00:17:161 - 여기서 슬라시작 하거나 서클을 넣었음 좋겟지만 (클릭하게) 우선이건 뒷부분도 다바꿔야대서 패스
뭐랄까 00:24:084 (2,3) - 이런 텀들이 엄청많은데 이런 애매한텀을 주기보다는 http://puu.sh/nCFAE/7edd97645f.jpg 이렇게 매핑하는게 더좋음 1/1텀 유지하게 취향이여서 놔두겠는데, 지적 더 들어오면 바꾸겠음
00:29:853 (2) - 이건 http://puu.sh/nCFDx/c16c357478.jpg이렇게 늘려도 상관없음 1/1 텀도 유지하게되고 보까르
00:31:007 (3) - 이건 리버스 해주는게 좋을듯 그럼 이렇게 http://puu.sh/nCFKt/3df693eff4.jpg 텀유지하면서 리듬 좋게 매핑할수있음 ^
00:39:853 - 매핑
00:35:622 (1,2) - 블랭킷?
00:42:161 (1) - 여기부턴 앞에 말했던 리듬하고 같으니 우선 패스
00:58:699 (1,2) - 블랭킷?
01:01:776 (1,2) - 블랭킷픽스
01:07:930 (1,2) - 블랭킷
01:16:391 (4,1) - 블랭킷
01:18:122 (2,3) - ^
01:21:776 (2,1) - ^
01:27:930 (3,4) - ^

이지는 사소한 블랭킷 미스 다 티나서 잘고쳐주셔야되고
안잡은부분도 꽤있는데 우선 위에건 참고하세염

[막난]
어려운거못바영 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ.. 근데 잘찍힌듯

ㅁㅂㄷㅂㄷ.. 바카모딩 ㅈㅅㅈㅅ 쿧오스만 날름해가네

Sky Future wrote:
굳건한 마음가짐으로

Easy

*00:27:161 (2,3) - 이거 일부러 블랭킷 안맞추신거?

*00:51:007 (1) - 슬라머리를 00:47:930 (1) - 슬라꼬리랑 스택

*00:57:161 (2,1) - 블랭킷

*01:07:930 - 굳이 클랩 넣을필요 있나요 없는게 깔끔해요

*01:14:084 (1,2,3,4) - 강한 느낌을 갖다주는 부분이기에 휘슬없애고 머리와꼬리 전부 클랩 넣어요 ㄴ 있는게 더 듣기 좋은거같음

*01:21:776 (2,1) - 1슬라이더를 -15 회전하고 블랭킷

*01:25:622 (5,1) - 이거 충분히 블랭킷 가능하네요

앙 시간 없어서 하드까지밖에 못하넹

Dailycare wrote:
[Believe]
01:00:814 (3) - 슬라 모양을 살짝만 다듬어주세용

[Easy]
슬라이더 틱에 히트사운드를 넣는건 사실 그다지.. 그치만 이건 개인 취향 문제이니ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

00:31:007 (3) - 00:40:238 (2) - DS 이정도는 괜찮을듯

00:58:699 (1,2) - 01:18:507 (3) - 블랭킷을 맞춰주셨으면 좋았을텐데요..
01:16:391 (4) - 01:23:314 (1) - 이 두개는 블랭킷 맞추는걸 고려해보는 정도로만

No comment = fix
모딩 감사합니다!

Anze

266 posts

Joined April 2012

Anze 2016-03-12T11:38:47+00:00

hi

[Believe]

00:19:276 (3,4) - 1번 슬라이더의 기울임과 각도가 맞지 않아서 조금 어색해 보이는데 -5도 정도 돌려보셈
00:26:391 (1) - ctrl+G
00:29:276 (6) - x304 y268 정도로 옮기면 무빙이 좀 더 편해질듯
01:03:891 (2) - ctrl+G
01:04:276 (3) - ^
01:11:007 (1) - ^
01:20:814 (3) - 뒷 슬라이더 각도처럼 조금 오른쪽으로 옮겨보셈
01:23:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 별점테러 예상해봄

[Habi's Insane]

00:33:314 (1,2) - 스택이 약간 안 맞네요
00:45:622 (2,3) - ^
01:14:853 (5,6) - ctrl+G?

[Enon's Hard]
01:09:084 (4,1) - 스택

맵 퀄리티 보고 감동함

이지와 노멀은 잡을 게 보이지 않아서 안 했습니다

Cellina

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-12T12:09:22+00:00

Ayalis wrote:
hi

[Believe]

00:19:276 (3,4) - 1번 슬라이더의 기울임과 각도가 맞지 않아서 조금 어색해 보이는데 -5도 정도 돌려보셈
00:26:391 (1) - ctrl+G
00:29:276 (6) - x304 y268 정도로 옮기면 무빙이 좀 더 편해질듯
01:03:891 (2) - ctrl+G 노래 쎄지는데 굳이 디스턴스 줄일필요 없을듯
01:04:276 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:007 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:814 (3) - 뒷 슬라이더 각도처럼 조금 오른쪽으로 옮겨보셈
01:23:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 별점테러 예상해봄 ^^;;;;;

맵 퀄리티 보고 감동함

이지와 노멀은 잡을 게 보이지 않아서 안 했습니다

No comment = fix
모딩 감사합니다!

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2016-03-12T12:17:01+00:00

ㅎㅇ

이지
00:09:468 (3,4) - 피니시?

노말
딱히 집을 덴 없네요

하드
점프 제외하고도 간격이 좀 랜덤해보입니다

인센
OD7~7.5요. 6은 인센에겐 너무 작아요
00:29:468 (1) - 여기 슬라이더엔드 부분이 오히려 강세를 줄만한 부분인 것 같은데 그냥 슬라이더엔드가 돼버리네요..
00:32:545 (1) - 00:41:776 (1) - 00:44:853 (1) - ^

비ㅣㅣㅣㅣㄹ리ㅣㅣㅣㅣㅂ
OD8? 이 정도 난이도에 OD8 정도는 들어가야
00:06:199 (1) - 슬라 가운데에 강세를 딱 줄만한데 좀 표현이 어색하다고 해야하나요
01:15:430 (1) - ^
01:28:699 (1,2,3,4) - 강세가 이전 점프 패턴에 비해서 좀 강해야할 만한 부분인데 이전 점프 패턴들과 비슷합니다. 좀 넓히실 생각 있으신가요

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Last edited by Akiyama Mizuki 2016-03-12T12:18:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2016-03-12T12:17:08+00:00

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Akiyama Mizuki

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Akiyama Mizuki 2016-03-12T12:19:07+00:00

ㅁㅊ 타이밍이

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-03-12T12:19:53+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
ㅁㅊ 타이밍이

수정해서 다시 올렸음요

Cellina

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Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-12T12:20:22+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
ㅁㅊ 타이밍이

fd?

Cellina

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Topic Starter

Cellina 2016-03-12T12:30:40+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
ㅎㅇ

이지
00:09:468 (3,4) - 피니시?

비ㅣㅣㅣㅣㄹ리ㅣㅣㅣㅣㅂ
OD8? 이 정도 난이도에 OD8 정도는 들어가야
00:06:199 (1) - 슬라 가운데에 강세를 딱 줄만한데 좀 표현이 어색하다고 해야하나요 어떻게 해야할지 모르겠음 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
01:15:430 (1) - ^ ^
01:28:699 (1,2,3,4) - 강세가 이전 점프 패턴에 비해서 좀 강해야할 만한 부분인데 이전 점프 패턴들과 비슷합니다. 좀 넓히실 생각 있으신가요

asdf

No comment = fix

모딩 감사합니다!
~~님 님이 간격 넓히라고 해서 이제 저 욕먹음~~

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-03-12T13:07:43+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
FROM MY NM Q

[Hard]
My only complaint is that 01:28:699 (3,4) - this is a very bland ending ✐ I prefer this way

Moa wrote:
하이 모딩와씀

[하드]
00:07:930 (1,2) - 좀많이 떨어져있는느낌 아무리 텀이있어도.. 하드인데 ✐ 이 정도는 괜찮다고 생각하고 있습니다
00:16:584 (3) - 좀더 강조되어야할거같은데 위에거보다 점프가 더 작음 ✐ 충분히 강조는 됐다고 생각하는데, 앞에꺼보다 이펙트가 부족한건 사실인 것 같네요.. 그렇지만 이걸 고치려면 좀 많이 뜯어 고쳐야 할 것 같아서 일단은 보류해두겠습니다.
00:56:199 (2,3) - 01:01:584 (4,5,1) - 여기둘은 같게 하는게 어떨까요? 01:07:738 (3,4,1) - 이런 시작점엔 삼연타가 있는걸로보아
00:56:199 (2,3) - 여기도 들어가야할거같습니다 ✐ 이 부분은 김밥님 모딩에서 고친 부분인데, 지적하신 부분은 01:01:776 (1,2,3,4) - 과의 일관성을 위해 3연타가 아니라 서클 하나만으로 하는 걸로 했습니다.

ㅁㅂㄷㅂㄷ.. 바카모딩 ㅈㅅㅈㅅ 쿧오스만 날름해가네

Sky Future wrote:
굳건한 마음가짐으로

Enon's Hard

*00:01:776 (1,2) - 블랭킷

*00:06:007 (4,1) - ^

*00:08:891 (2,1) - ^

*00:15:430 (5,1,2) - ^

*00:19:853 (6,1) - ^

*00:31:584 (2,4,5,1) - 역시 오버랩은 피해주셔요 ✐ 나쁘지 않다고 생각합니다만...

*00:34:853 (2) - x316 y32 로 배치해주세요 간격 일정한게 보기좋네요 http://puu.sh/nCG5i/5740983583.jpg ✔ 고쳤습니다

*00:36:776 (4,1) - 블랭킷

*01:01:776 (1,2) - ^

*01:27:738 (6,2) - ^

✐ 블랭킷 지적해주신 부분은 확실히 제가 꼼꼼하게 하지 못해 놓친 부분이 많긴 했는데, 진짜 아니다 싶은걸 제외하고는 지금 상태로 만족하는 걸로 하고, 이대로 가겠습니다.

Ayalis wrote:
hi

01:09:084 (4,1) - 스택 ✔ 고쳤습니다

맵 퀄리티 보고 감동함 이거 좋은 뜻이겠죠? 감사합니다 감사합니다 감사합니다 감사합니다 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

이지와 노멀은 잡을 게 보이지 않아서 안 했습니다

bbj0920 wrote:
ㅎㅇ

하드
점프 제외하고도 간격이 좀 랜덤해보입니다 ✐ 좀 그런 면이 없지 않은데 하드에서 이 정도 간격은 괜찮을거라고 생각하는데 일단 보류해두겠습니다.

asdf

모딩 해주신 모두 감사합니다!

asdasdasdasdas

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-03-12T13:29:22+00:00

@Reana
00:41:391 (4) - 0.9는 너무 먼 것 같지않나요?

@Enon
저는... 어디...?

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-03-12T16:24:23+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[Enon's Hard]
00:30:045 (2,3,4) - 00:42:353 (2,3,4) - 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - 이 세개는 00:33:122 (2,3,4) - 처럼 노트를 놓는게 좋아보이는데.. 다 고치기 힘들것같다면 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - 여기에만 서클-서클-1/1슬라로 고치는것도 좋을듯 ✐ 개인적으로 지금도 괜찮다고 생각해서 그대로 갈게요 ㅠㅠ
01:01:776 (1) - 블랭킷 ✔ 고쳤습니다!
01:21:776 (1) - 앞 노트들과의 흐름은 좋은데 그 다음 (2)번 슬라와는 그다지 어울리지 않는 것 같아요 ✐ 지금이 마음에 들어서 그대로 가겠습니다 ㅠㅠ
01:28:699 (3,4) - 대충 이런 식으로 (2)와의 거리를 벌리는 것도 좋았을 법 한데, 지금의 패턴을 고수하는것도 나쁘진 않아보여요. 대신 01:27:930 (1,2,3,4) - 의 모양을 좀 다듬어 줄 수 있을까요? ✔ 지금 패턴을 고수하는 대신 데일리케어님께서 말씀하신 대로 조금 다듬어봤습니다!

모딩 수정할 때 분명히 확인했는데 답변을 할 때 한꺼번에 하다보니 빼먹었나 보네요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 죄송하고 모딩 감사합니다!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-12T18:11:03+00:00

Sky Future wrote:
Doyak's Normal

*00:08:891 (2,3,4) - 이어져라 자연스레 http://puu.sh/nCFCz/0b634072b4.jpg ㅇㅋ 근데 처음이나 지금이나 그닥 마음에 쏙 들진 않는...데 더 좋은 게 안 떠오름

*01:28:699 (7) - 특별한부분같은데 어색하지않게라도 뉴콤넣어봐요 특별하긴 한데 맵 전체에서 주기를 부순 적이 한 번도 없기 때문에 여기도 일관성 유지하겠습니다.

Dailycare wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - 슬라 끝이 01:06:199 - 에 있는게 최대한 드럼+보컬을 따라가려고 노력하신 것 같긴 한데, 전 이도저도 아닌 느낌을 받았습니다. 차라리 01:04:853 (1,2) - 에서 드럼을 따라가지 말고 그냥 보컬을 따라가셨으면 더 나았을 것 같은데.. 아니면 01:05:622 (3,4) - 를 드럼 소리만 따라가게 (4)에 슬라이더 대신 서클만 놓는다거나.. 설명하기가 애매하긴 한데, 일단 보컬은 어떻게든 소리를 빼고 싶진 않았고요, 그렇지만 일단 저기선 드럼이 강해서 드럼 위주로 따라가고는 있습니다. 그래서 적어도 클릭은 보컬이 아닌 드럼에서 나게끔 만들어준 것이고, 이 정도면 두 마리 토끼를 다 잡는(?) 표현 방법이 된다고 생각합니다. 하나만 절대적으로 따라가느라 다른 중요한 소리를 놓치는 걸 전 개인적으로 별로 좋아하지 않기 때문에...

도약님 믿고 DS는 확인 안했습니다

두 분 모딩 감사합니다~

Doyak's Normal

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Cellina

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Cellina 2016-03-12T22:55:27+00:00

Doyak wrote:

Sky Future wrote:
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*00:08:891 (2,3,4) - 이어져라 자연스레 http://puu.sh/nCFCz/0b634072b4.jpg ㅇㅋ 근데 처음이나 지금이나 그닥 마음에 쏙 들진 않는...데 더 좋은 게 안 떠오름

*01:28:699 (7) - 특별한부분같은데 어색하지않게라도 뉴콤넣어봐요 특별하긴 한데 맵 전체에서 주기를 부순 적이 한 번도 없기 때문에 여기도 일관성 유지하겠습니다.

Dailycare wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - 슬라 끝이 01:06:199 - 에 있는게 최대한 드럼+보컬을 따라가려고 노력하신 것 같긴 한데, 전 이도저도 아닌 느낌을 받았습니다. 차라리 01:04:853 (1,2) - 에서 드럼을 따라가지 말고 그냥 보컬을 따라가셨으면 더 나았을 것 같은데.. 아니면 01:05:622 (3,4) - 를 드럼 소리만 따라가게 (4)에 슬라이더 대신 서클만 놓는다거나.. 설명하기가 애매하긴 한데, 일단 보컬은 어떻게든 소리를 빼고 싶진 않았고요, 그렇지만 일단 저기선 드럼이 강해서 드럼 위주로 따라가고는 있습니다. 그래서 적어도 클릭은 보컬이 아닌 드럼에서 나게끔 만들어준 것이고, 이 정도면 두 마리 토끼를 다 잡는(?) 표현 방법이 된다고 생각합니다. 하나만 절대적으로 따라가느라 다른 중요한 소리를 놓치는 걸 전 개인적으로 별로 좋아하지 않기 때문에...

도약님 믿고 DS는 확인 안했습니다

두 분 모딩 감사합니다~

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