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Blackweb
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, March 5, 2016 at 3:47:30 PM

Artist: Danny Baranowsky
Title: Sacrificial
Source: The Binding of Isaac
Tags: flash english steam tears kid naked guy edmund afterbirth rebirth soundtrack ost
BPM: 166
Filesize: 827kb
Play Time: 00:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.47 stars, 181 notes)
  2. Insane (5.08 stars, 254 notes)
  3. Normal (1.58 stars, 70 notes)
Download: Danny Baranowsky - Sacrificial
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD 2/2716, RE-NAMED EASY DIFF TO NORMAL DIFF

mp3 and bg taken from: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/354360
Insane diff is ready for mods. Hard diff is ready for mods. Normal diff is ready for mods.
Thanks:
SPOILER
Rohulk for helping me fix streams and hitsounds.
HUGE THANKS to Tarrasky for fixing the timing and overall being a super heplful mod.
Flo453_xP for modding.
Miss Mandii for modding.
deadpon3 for modding and helping me fix some issues.
Kei for being a helpful mod and making my map a lot better.
RVMathew for helping a lot on the hard diff and insane diff.
Nimfagryuf for modding and helping out my diffs a ton.
Poison Panda for being a super helpful mod and fixing some stuff that would've made the map unrankable.
ProEzreal for modding and helping with flow and missing beats
Dusk for helping out the map a lot, i didn't change everything mentioned but changed most
Reana for helping me hands on w/ an irc mod and helping me fix some of my nc issues
6th for modding and helping me with SV issues
Change log:
SPOILER
-Fixed streams and hitsounds (Thanks Rohulk <3)
-Fixed timing (Thanks Tarrasky <3)
-Fixed hitsounds again
-Added preview point
-Fixed timing again (Thanks Tarrasky <3)
-Fixed spacing and some jumps, fixed some streams (Thanks deadpon3 <3)
-Fixed confusing parts (Thanks Miss Mandii <3)
-Finsihed Hard diff
-Fixed some jumps
-Fixed flow (Thanks Kei <3)
-Fixed timing errors in Hard difficulty and much more in the same diff (Thanks Kei <3)
-Fixed more stuffs in Hard difficulty, some more stuffs in Insane diff. (Thanks [ Nimfagryuf ] <3)
-Fixed more Hard difficulty stuff (Thanks RVMathew <3)
-Fixed more insane difficulty stuff (Thanks (RVMathew <3)
-Changed CS size and fixed flow on Hard diff (Thanks Poison Panda <3)
-Fixed flow on some parts of both diffs (Thanks Poison Panda <3)
-Fixed tags
-Fixed unsnapped notes (Thanks Poison Panda <3)
-Fixed missing beats in both finished diffs, fixed some flow (Thanks ProEzreal <3)
-Fixed flow a tad
-Fixed some stuff mentioned by Dusk (Thanks <3) on isane diff
-Fixed most stuff mentioned by Dusk on the hard diff (Thanks <3)
-Fixed distance and nc's in insane diff (Thanks Reana <3)
-Finished Normal diff
-Fixed SV on Normal diff, finished remapping (Thanks 6th <3)
-Fixed a thingy in insane diff (Thanks 6th <3)
Mandii
Insane:

00:43:274 (5,6,7) - these notes here have x2 the spacing then the others notes, causes a bit of confusion, i would keep the notes the same that follow the same rythem.

00:51:768 (3,4,5) - if your going to have a wide jump, i would build into it. for now its where all notes of the same beat are spaced evenly, then theses notes suddenly jumps from each corner of the map. If you want to do that have a build up going to it.

00:45:624 (1) - i feel the kai is way too long, where you have the long sliders i would end the kai there due to slowing down the pace of the notes placed.

00:45:624 (1,2,3) - these sliders, i personally feel they can have more definition to them ( personal opinion)

On song set up, Disable (Enable Count Down)
deadpon3
Insane:
00:02:973 (1) - I think it doesn't fit to the song, you should remove it.
00:08:575 (3,1) - You can move that slider a bit further from the circle.
00:25:382 (8) - You can add new combo to that one.
00:26:467 (2,3,4) - Move it from the slider, and try to space them a little bit.
00:28:093 (5,6,7) - This triple could also be spaced a bit.
00:28:635 (2,3,4) - Space this one too.
00:28:997 (1,2,3) - And this one.
00:35:322 (2,3,4) - This one too.
00:35:684 (1,2,3) - That one too.
00:36:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make it a bit easier, it's too spaced. Also try to make it more beauty, it's just a simple line.
00:38:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - This one too. :)
00:38:937 (1,2,3) - Another stacked triple, try to space it a bit.
00:39:298 (1,2,3) - This one too.
00:40:382 (3,4,5) - Another stacked one.
00:40:744 (1,2,3) - And this one aswell.
00:41:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - Too spaced and boring.
00:43:274 (5,6,7) - Stack it a bit, 1/2 of it.
00:43:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Boring square, spacing.
00:45:623 (1) - You can keep the beat, no need to follow the slow part.
00:46:708 (2) - Same here.
00:47:792 (3) - And here.
00:49:418 (1,2,3) - Space it a bit.
00:51:045 (1,2) - Spacing, you can move these objects different way.
00:51:768 (3,4,5) - I don't think making the ending of any song harder than the rest is cool. Make these 3 notes closer to each other.

That's all, cool map m8.
Also, m4m if you want ;)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/404485
Topic Starter
Blackweb

deadpon3 wrote:

Insane:
00:02:973 (1) - I think it doesn't fit to the song, you should remove it.
00:08:575 (3,1) - You can move that slider a bit further from the circle.
00:25:382 (8) - You can add new combo to that one.
00:26:467 (2,3,4) - Move it from the slider, and try to space them a little bit.
00:28:093 (5,6,7) - This triple could also be spaced a bit.
00:28:635 (2,3,4) - Space this one too.
00:28:997 (1,2,3) - And this one.
00:35:322 (2,3,4) - This one too.
00:35:684 (1,2,3) - That one too.
00:36:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make it a bit easier, it's too spaced. Also try to make it more beauty, it's just a simple line.
00:38:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - This one too. :)
00:38:937 (1,2,3) - Another stacked triple, try to space it a bit.
00:39:298 (1,2,3) - This one too.
00:40:382 (3,4,5) - Another stacked one.
00:40:744 (1,2,3) - And this one aswell.
00:41:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - Too spaced and boring.
00:43:274 (5,6,7) - Stack it a bit, 1/2 of it.
00:43:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Boring square, spacing.
00:45:623 (1) - You can keep the beat, no need to follow the slow part.
00:46:708 (2) - Same here.
00:47:792 (3) - And here.
00:49:418 (1,2,3) - Space it a bit.
00:51:045 (1,2) - Spacing, you can move these objects different way.
00:51:768 (3,4,5) - I don't think making the ending of any song harder than the rest is cool. Make these 3 notes closer to each other.

That's all, cool map m8.
Also, m4m if you want ;)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/404485
fixed, thank you very much
Topic Starter
Blackweb

Miss Mandii wrote:

Insane:

00:43:274 (5,6,7) - these notes here have x2 the spacing then the others notes, causes a bit of confusion, i would keep the notes the same that follow the same rythem.

00:51:768 (3,4,5) - if your going to have a wide jump, i would build into it. for now its where all notes of the same beat are spaced evenly, then theses notes suddenly jumps from each corner of the map. If you want to do that have a build up going to it.

00:45:624 (1) - i feel the kai is way too long, where you have the long sliders i would end the kai there due to slowing down the pace of the notes placed.

00:45:624 (1,2,3) - these sliders, i personally feel they can have more definition to them ( personal opinion)

On song set up, Disable (Enable Count Down)
fixed spacing and wide jumps although personally i feel that the sliders and the kiai time is fine
Kei
M4M!

  • General
  1. Some tags are unnecessary: binding of isaac blackweb lamb english. "Binding of Isaac" is the source, already count as a tag. "Blackweb" is the map's creator, aka you, that also works as a tag. "lamb" and "english" are written twice. Just once it's enough!
  2. How about adding some NC custom colors? Tones of gray would look good with the dark background.
  3. Consider adding a silent normal-sliderslide.wav file because some sliders sound too noisy (for example in Hard: 00:25:744 (2)).
  4. I know this is a WIP map, so the mapset might be incomplete but I'll mention anyway that you need a Normal difficulty. Also the difficulty gap between Hard and Insane is kinda big. Insane is 5 stars while Hard is just 3,5.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:00:082 (1) - This slider ends too early, make it end at 00:00:443 so it follows correctly the music.
  2. 00:00:895 (2,3) - These two notes sound off as well. Select them and move them to 00:00:986 (2) and 00:01:166 (3) respectively.
  3. 00:01:437 (4) - This note should be placed at 00:01:527.
  4. 00:01:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Select them all at once and move them one tick forward on the timeline.
  5. 00:04:238 (2) - Move this slider one tick forward on the timeline as well.
  6. 00:04:780 (3) - And this note too.

    Well, in fact, all the intro is incorrectly snapped on the timeline. Not sure what happened but you should fix it yourself. (:

  7. 00:08:756 (1) - Consider moving this circle over here for better flow.
  8. 00:13:094 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This looks messy and doesn't flow good at all. I suggest you to rearrange this spacing. For example like this:
  9. 00:17:069 (9,1) - Ugly overlap. Move (1) away from (9)?
  10. 00:17:431 (1) - This slider should end at 00:18:154. Also, the shape can be improved. Looks kinda ugly like that tbh. Something like this looks better imo:
  11. 00:26:286 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - All this spacing looks scrambled and like.. tight. You should try spreading out these notes' spacings more. You have a lot of playground to place notes at but you placed them all over the same place (for example 00:26:106 (1,2,3,1,2,3)). Also, you should try changing the flow direction. Its always a circle that goes clockwise. ):
    00:29:720 (4,5) - Messy overlap imo ;_; move them away from each other.
  12. 00:46:347 (3,1) - Same here.
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:00:624 (2,3) - There's no sound here so this is considered as overmapping. I suggest you to delete these circles.
  2. 00:03:876 (1,2) - Same here.
  3. 00:04:870 (3,4,5,1) - More overmapped streams >< I'll stop mentioning these. If you agree please get rid of overmapped notes by yourself.
  4. 00:17:430 (1) - Rotate this slider like this for better flow?
  5. 00:17:792 (2) - Place it where 00:17:069 (2)'s was?
  6. 00:31:888 (1) - Rotate horizontally for better flow?
  7. 00:45:623 (1,2,3) - These slider shapes look original but they overlap with each other and look messy ):
  8. 00:50:684 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo. Remove it?

    This difficulty is overdone imo, some streams and triplets are overmapped. It also has too many jumps but that's how people map Insanes nowadays so I guess it's okay. It's not my style and I don't agree with it, yeah, but it's your style and choice so I won't say anything about it. :D
    ______________

Good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
Blackweb

Kei wrote:

M4M!

  • General
  1. Some tags are unnecessary: binding of isaac blackweb lamb english. "Binding of Isaac" is the source, already count as a tag. "Blackweb" is the map's creator, aka you, that also works as a tag. "lamb" and "english" are written twice. Just once it's enough!
  2. How about adding some NC custom colors? Tones of gray would look good with the dark background.
  3. Consider adding a silent normal-sliderslide.wav file because some sliders sound too noisy (for example in Hard: 00:25:744 (2)).
  4. I know this is a WIP map, so the mapset might be incomplete but I'll mention anyway that you need a Normal difficulty. Also the difficulty gap between Hard and Insane is kinda big. Insane is 5 stars while Hard is just 3,5.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:00:082 (1) - This slider ends too early, make it end at 00:00:443 so it follows correctly the music.
  2. 00:00:895 (2,3) - These two notes sound off as well. Select them and move them to 00:00:986 (2) and 00:01:166 (3) respectively.
  3. 00:01:437 (4) - This note should be placed at 00:01:527.
  4. 00:01:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Select them all at once and move them one tick forward on the timeline.
  5. 00:04:238 (2) - Move this slider one tick forward on the timeline as well.
  6. 00:04:780 (3) - And this note too.

    Well, in fact, all the intro is incorrectly snapped on the timeline. Not sure what happened but you should fix it yourself. (:

  7. 00:08:756 (1) - Consider moving this circle over here for better flow.
  8. 00:13:094 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This looks messy and doesn't flow good at all. I suggest you to rearrange this spacing. For example like this:
  9. 00:17:069 (9,1) - Ugly overlap. Move (1) away from (9)?
  10. 00:17:431 (1) - This slider should end at 00:18:154. Also, the shape can be improved. Looks kinda ugly like that tbh. Something like this looks better imo:
  11. 00:26:286 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - All this spacing looks scrambled and like.. tight. You should try spreading out these notes' spacings more. You have a lot of playground to place notes at but you placed them all over the same place (for example 00:26:106 (1,2,3,1,2,3)). Also, you should try changing the flow direction. Its always a circle that goes clockwise. ):
    00:29:720 (4,5) - Messy overlap imo ;_; move them away from each other.
  12. 00:46:347 (3,1) - Same here.
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:00:624 (2,3) - There's no sound here so this is considered as overmapping. I suggest you to delete these circles.
  2. 00:03:876 (1,2) - Same here.
  3. 00:04:870 (3,4,5,1) - More overmapped streams >< I'll stop mentioning these. If you agree please get rid of overmapped notes by yourself.
  4. 00:17:430 (1) - Rotate this slider like this for better flow?
  5. 00:17:792 (2) - Place it where 00:17:069 (2)'s was?
  6. 00:31:888 (1) - Rotate horizontally for better flow?
  7. 00:45:623 (1,2,3) - These slider shapes look original but they overlap with each other and look messy ):
  8. 00:50:684 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo. Remove it?

    This difficulty is overdone imo, some streams and triplets are overmapped. It also has too many jumps but that's how people map Insanes nowadays so I guess it's okay. It's not my style and I don't agree with it, yeah, but it's your style and choice so I won't say anything about it. :D
    ______________

Good luck! ;)
fixed all the probs in hard difficulty, working on a normal difficulty and possibly a light insane difficulty and fixed most of the stuff in the insane diff. although you're very concerned about overmapping (which i agree is a bad thing) most of the stuff people say im overmapping is part of the bg music, but kinda quiet. i included it in b/c i dont like maps that pause in-between two notes for a measure or so. thank you very very much for this, helped me out a ton.
nimfa109
Good luck with that map :3
INSANE

00:05:142 (5) and (1) - place it a bit farther
00:30:353 (8),(9) - fix this

HARD

00:03:244 - that slider should start on white beat and finnish on white beat
00:05:142 - make it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469426
00:06:045 - hm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469454 try make it something like that
00:07:672 - 00:12:732 - move all notes one to the right
00:13:094 - move a bit in right side, and (2) a bit in up http://puu.sh/mVZP7/6875130f88.PNG
00:44:539 - all these four circles (1) - (4) move a bit up, and (4) a bit down, so that spacing was the same between the circles
00:50:322 - (1) - a bit down, (4) - up, (1) - right, (2) - right
00:50:322 - make here the same spacing between all the circles to 00:51:226
Topic Starter
Blackweb

[ Nimfagryuf ] wrote:

Good luck with that map :3
INSANE

00:05:142 (5) and (1) - place it a bit farther
00:30:353 (8),(9) - fix this

HARD

00:03:244 - that slider should start on white beat and finnish on white beat
00:05:142 - make it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469426
00:06:045 - hm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4469454 try make it something like that
00:07:672 - 00:12:732 - move all notes one to the right
00:13:094 - move a bit in right side, and (2) a bit in up http://puu.sh/mVZP7/6875130f88.PNG
00:44:539 - all these four circles (1) - (4) move a bit up, and (4) a bit down, so that spacing was the same between the circles
00:50:322 - (1) - a bit down, (4) - up, (1) - right, (2) - right
00:50:322 - make here the same spacing between all the circles to 00:51:226
all fixed thanks
RVMathew
Hi there. This is a m4m request.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General
1) You need to have a full spread, but you told me the other difficulties will be added soon.

2) You should add hitsounds, but I assume you will do that later.

Hard
1) 00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Somehow I feel that the star feels a little off in terms of spacing between each of the notes. I think you can refine it by using ctrl+shift+d as a guide to create a star polygon. If you did this already then you can ignore this point.

2) 00:04:238 (2) - I think you can split this slider into 2 notes. The reason why I mention this is because 00:04:419 is a strong beat, and it feels a lot better to play if you make that a clickable note. The advantage is that you can make a small jump if you want to.

3) 00:05:052 (4,5,6) - These are off by 1/4 (they are starting too early on the blue tick) . Shift them 1/4 to the right, so the first note starts on the red tick, the 2nd note starts on the white tick and the third note starts on the white tick.

Applies to:
00:06:136 (1,2,3) - Shift them 1/4 to the right.
00:06:859 (4) - Shift to 00:06:949
00:07:220 (5) - Shift to 00:07:310
00:07:581 (1) - Shift to 00:07:672

I assume you may have done an offset change earlier and forgot to shift some of the notes.

4) 00:17:431 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/4 as you can hear a strong beat at 00:18:154

5) 00:22:762 to 00:25:925. While I do like the idea of changing the hitsound volume to reflect the build up of the music, I feel that the volume changes are a bit too loud. I think with each timing point you should make the volume change between 5-7% instead of 10%.

6) 00:26:106 Onwards, I would increase the distance snap to around 1.2x, because when I played it, the current one is fine, but there are instances where the notes touch each other, and at times that does not look good. By raising it to 1.2x, you can spread the notes out a little bit more. Also, turn off grid snap when using distance snap; it makes sure you get much closer to 1.2x.

Overall I like the difficulty, but you can do some small changes to make the aesthetics a lot better

Insane
The rhythm is pretty nice. :)

1) 00:22:762 to 00:25:925. While I do like the idea of changing the hitsound volume to reflect the build up of the music, I feel that the volume changes are a bit too loud. I think with each timing point you should make the volume change between 5-7% instead of 10%.

2) Your new combos are pretty inconsistent at some places. I would make a new combo every 4 beats.

3) 00:26:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can make this curve look a lot better. However this is a small thing so if you do not want to do it, that is fine.

4) 00:42:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that the star pattern is off. You can refine it using ctrl+shift+d as a guide.

Final thoughts
So far you are going in the right direction. I was anal with some things but that may make a huge difference.

Good luck and contact me again when the rest of the difficulties are done.


P.S I recommend replying to each point made by the modder, even if you changed it or not. The reason is that some modders use these as feedback so they can improve their modding skills. It also helps you.
Topic Starter
Blackweb

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. This is a m4m request.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General
1) You need to have a full spread, but you told me the other difficulties will be added soon.

2) You should add hitsounds, but I assume you will do that later.

Hard
1) 00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Somehow I feel that the star feels a little off in terms of spacing between each of the notes. I think you can refine it by using ctrl+shift+d as a guide to create a star polygon. If you did this already then you can ignore this point.

2) 00:04:238 (2) - I think you can split this slider into 2 notes. The reason why I mention this is because 00:04:419 is a strong beat, and it feels a lot better to play if you make that a clickable note. The advantage is that you can make a small jump if you want to.

3) 00:05:052 (4,5,6) - These are off by 1/4 (they are starting too early on the blue tick) . Shift them 1/4 to the right, so the first note starts on the red tick, the 2nd note starts on the white tick and the third note starts on the white tick.

Applies to:
00:06:136 (1,2,3) - Shift them 1/4 to the right.
00:06:859 (4) - Shift to 00:06:949
00:07:220 (5) - Shift to 00:07:310
00:07:581 (1) - Shift to 00:07:672

I assume you may have done an offset change earlier and forgot to shift some of the notes.

4) 00:17:431 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/4 as you can hear a strong beat at 00:18:154

5) 00:22:762 to 00:25:925. While I do like the idea of changing the hitsound volume to reflect the build up of the music, I feel that the volume changes are a bit too loud. I think with each timing point you should make the volume change between 5-7% instead of 10%.

6) 00:26:106 Onwards, I would increase the distance snap to around 1.2x, because when I played it, the current one is fine, but there are instances where the notes touch each other, and at times that does not look good. By raising it to 1.2x, you can spread the notes out a little bit more. Also, turn off grid snap when using distance snap; it makes sure you get much closer to 1.2x.

Overall I like the difficulty, but you can do some small changes to make the aesthetics a lot better

Insane
The rhythm is pretty nice. :)

1) 00:22:762 to 00:25:925. While I do like the idea of changing the hitsound volume to reflect the build up of the music, I feel that the volume changes are a bit too loud. I think with each timing point you should make the volume change between 5-7% instead of 10%.

2) Your new combos are pretty inconsistent at some places. I would make a new combo every 4 beats.

3) 00:26:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can make this curve look a lot better. However this is a small thing so if you do not want to do it, that is fine.

4) 00:42:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that the star pattern is off. You can refine it using ctrl+shift+d as a guide.

Final thoughts
So far you are going in the right direction. I was anal with some things but that may make a huge difference.

Good luck and contact me again when the rest of the difficulties are done.


P.S I recommend replying to each point made by the modder, even if you changed it or not. The reason is that some modders use these as feedback so they can improve their modding skills. It also helps you.
thanks a ton for this mod, i had no idea that some points were off in the hard diff. also, some of the star patterns you mentioned werent star patterns, but i changed them to be better anyways. i will add hitsounds and more diffs (thats why its in the wip section) curve on the stream was fixed thanks, i feel that some of the combos are fine but fixed a couple. hitsound volume i changed, thanks. fixed distance snap in hard diff in most areas mentioned. fixed slider you mentioned in hard diff, thanks. fixed star, and slider and timing on hard diff too. thanks a ton for this! :D
Poi Panda
Hi, m4m request :D

General
  1. You need an easy/normal difficulty to go for rank if that's what you're planning on.
  2. Make sure the tags are consistent over all difficulties.
  3. Lots of combo issues, try and start combos every 1 or 2 downbeats (big white ticks).

Hard
  1. 00:05:052 (5,6,7) - This is not timed correctly. You should have a note at 00:05:142, then another at 00:05:322, then start the slider at 00:05:503 and end at 00:05:684, then place another note at 00:05:865 and I think that should work.
  2. 00:09:119 (2,1) - This doesn't flow well, I'd move it so the end of the slider is facing the other way (more towards the 1)
  3. 00:10:204 (2) - Unsnapped note.
  4. 00:10:565 (3) - ^
  5. 00:15:985 (3,4,5,6,7) - Incorrectly mapped, I think it's the position of the 6.
  6. 00:31:166 (2) - Make this end at 00:31:347 and place a note at 00:31:527.
  7. 00:34:419 (3) - Make this end at 00:34:600 and place a note 00:34:780.
    I would consider slightly raising the CS (to 3.5-4 or something), but that is personal preference

Insane
  1. 00:03:877 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:03:876 (1,2,3) - I don't think this flows well under the end of the slider, possibly personal preference.
  3. 00:16:527 (1,2) - I can't hear anything that these are mapped to, but I may be mishearing.
  4. 00:17:430 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
  5. 00:26:467 (2,3,4) - I don't think this flows well under the end of the slider, possibly personal preference.
  6. 00:51:406 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
    I'd consider raising the OD to 7.5-8 and maybe the AR slightly, but this is your choice.

Sorry if I missed anything! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Blackweb

PoisonPanda wrote:

Hi, m4m request :D

General
  1. You need an easy/normal difficulty to go for rank if that's what you're planning on.
  2. Make sure the tags are consistent over all difficulties.
  3. Lots of combo issues, try and start combos every 1 or 2 downbeats (big white ticks).

Hard
  1. 00:05:052 (5,6,7) - This is not timed correctly. You should have a note at 00:05:142, then another at 00:05:322, then start the slider at 00:05:503 and end at 00:05:684, then place another note at 00:05:865 and I think that should work.
  2. 00:09:119 (2,1) - This doesn't flow well, I'd move it so the end of the slider is facing the other way (more towards the 1)
  3. 00:10:204 (2) - Unsnapped note.
  4. 00:10:565 (3) - ^
  5. 00:15:985 (3,4,5,6,7) - Incorrectly mapped, I think it's the position of the 6.
  6. 00:31:166 (2) - Make this end at 00:31:347 and place a note at 00:31:527.
  7. 00:34:419 (3) - Make this end at 00:34:600 and place a note 00:34:780.
    I would consider slightly raising the CS (to 3.5-4 or something), but that is personal preference

Insane
  1. 00:03:877 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:03:876 (1,2,3) - I don't think this flows well under the end of the slider, possibly personal preference.
  3. 00:16:527 (1,2) - I can't hear anything that these are mapped to, but I may be mishearing.
  4. 00:17:430 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
  5. 00:26:467 (2,3,4) - I don't think this flows well under the end of the slider, possibly personal preference.
  6. 00:51:406 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
    I'd consider raising the OD to 7.5-8 and maybe the AR slightly, but this is your choice.

Sorry if I missed anything! Good luck!
thanks sooo much! all fixed :D
Rieri
Hello, m4m request from #modreqs.

  • General
  1. I hope you're making an Easy and a Normal diff. ;)
  2. I do recommend adding hitsounds as they will make your map better :)
  • Hard
  1. CS doesn't have to be that big, I usually like 4 on hard+ maps but it's your choice.
  2. Increase OD by 1.
  3. 00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing on this looks a little big for a hard to me, maybe decrease just a little bit?
  4. 00:04:238 (2,3) - The spacing on this is different from 00:00:985 (2,3). You should make it so they are the same.
  5. 00:16:347 (6) - NC
  6. 00:22:401 - From here to 00:24:931 all the inherited points you used are all 1/4 beat away from the notes. Intentional?
  7. 00:28:274 (2) - NC here instead of 00:27:913 (1). Change the rest too.
  8. 00:35:684 - From here it should be a triple if you listen closely.
  9. 00:36:768 (2) - here too
  10. 00:38:756 (1,2) - This should be a slider only from 00:38:756 to 00:38:937 as there is no supportive beat on 00:38:937. Start a new slider from 00:39:118.
  11. 00:40:292 (4) - there is no beat here
  12. 00:42:280 - missing beat
  13. 00:43:365 - ^
  14. 00:48:786 - ^
  15. 00:49:871 -^
  • Insane
  1. 00:01:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, it doesn't feel like the jump should be this big and uneven. Make it into a good star shape and just make the distance a little farther than the hard diff.
  2. 00:04:780 (6,7,8,9,1) - doesn't look that great, try to make that more even.
  3. 00:36:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - mostly flow problems, try rotating this about 40~50 degrees.
  4. 00:37:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, doesn't suit me, maybe flip it horizontally.
  5. 00:38:937 (1,2,3) - This gets too hard imo, just stack them please.
  6. 00:45:623 (1,2,3) - I don't get these sliders, and the overlap is ugly.
  7. 00:51:407 (2) - ctrl-g for better flow

    There may be missing beats I've missed while modding insane diff, I'm really tired and it's 1 in the morning here. Make sure you check them.
Good luck with this diff, shooting 2 stars~
Topic Starter
Blackweb

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello, m4m request from #modreqs.

  • General
  1. I hope you're making an Easy and a Normal diff. ;)
  2. I do recommend adding hitsounds as they will make your map better :)
  • Hard
  1. CS doesn't have to be that big, I usually like 4 on hard+ maps but it's your choice.
  2. Increase OD by 1.
  3. 00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing on this looks a little big for a hard to me, maybe decrease just a little bit?
  4. 00:04:238 (2,3) - The spacing on this is different from 00:00:985 (2,3). You should make it so they are the same.
  5. 00:16:347 (6) - NC
  6. 00:22:401 - From here to 00:24:931 all the inherited points you used are all 1/4 beat away from the notes. Intentional?
  7. 00:28:274 (2) - NC here instead of 00:27:913 (1). Change the rest too.
  8. 00:35:684 - From here it should be a triple if you listen closely.
  9. 00:36:768 (2) - here too
  10. 00:38:756 (1,2) - This should be a slider only from 00:38:756 to 00:38:937 as there is no supportive beat on 00:38:937. Start a new slider from 00:39:118.
  11. 00:40:292 (4) - there is no beat here
  12. 00:42:280 - missing beat
  13. 00:43:365 - ^
  14. 00:48:786 - ^
  15. 00:49:871 -^
  • Insane
  1. 00:01:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, it doesn't feel like the jump should be this big and uneven. Make it into a good star shape and just make the distance a little farther than the hard diff.
  2. 00:04:780 (6,7,8,9,1) - doesn't look that great, try to make that more even.
  3. 00:36:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - mostly flow problems, try rotating this about 40~50 degrees.
  4. 00:37:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, doesn't suit me, maybe flip it horizontally.
  5. 00:38:937 (1,2,3) - This gets too hard imo, just stack them please.
  6. 00:45:623 (1,2,3) - I don't get these sliders, and the overlap is ugly.
  7. 00:51:407 (2) - ctrl-g for better flow

    There may be missing beats I've missed while modding insane diff, I'm really tired and it's 1 in the morning here. Make sure you check them.
Good luck with this diff, shooting 2 stars~
thx for the mod! all fixed. im working on an easy diff rn too and a normal diff will happen, altho maybe not an extra
Duskyui
omg yes, osu needs more Isaac! ^^

Hard:
Lower the speed on the sliders up to 00:12:733, to emphasize on how the song transists after that part. Maybe to 0,75x or something
00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it look better, the distance between 4 and 5 is better than the rest of the distances in the star, so that should be worked on imo
00:20:142 (1,2) - Move those a bit down
00:26:015 - Volume feels too low, especially after it gradually increased, I suggest setting it to ~65%
00:42:009 (1) - Move it a liiiiittle bit to the right
00:43:816 (2) - Make it curve the other way
00:48:696 (7,8,1) - Make this gradually change direction. Like:
00:51:407 (3,4) - Would flow a bit better if it were something ala this:

Insane:
Should be around OD 8, or atleast 7,5, for this difficulty
00:04:780 (6,7,1) - Don't hear anything that justifies a stream here. Drop notes 7 and 9, 8 can stay.
00:07:580 (2) - Mapped over nothing too, erase
00:30:172 (2) - ^
00:26:105 (1) - Suggest increasing slider speed from that point up to 00:45:623 (1)
00:46:708 (2) - Should end at white tick
00:49:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fine tune this one, same as the star from Hard.

Hope this mod is of any help, would love to see this become ranked one day. Good luck with the map! :D
Topic Starter
Blackweb

Duskyui wrote:

omg yes, osu needs more Isaac! ^^

Hard:
Lower the speed on the sliders up to 00:12:733, to emphasize on how the song transists after that part. Maybe to 0,75x or something
00:01:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it look better, the distance between 4 and 5 is better than the rest of the distances in the star, so that should be worked on imo
00:20:142 (1,2) - Move those a bit down
00:26:015 - Volume feels too low, especially after it gradually increased, I suggest setting it to ~65%
00:42:009 (1) - Move it a liiiiittle bit to the right
00:43:816 (2) - Make it curve the other way
00:48:696 (7,8,1) - Make this gradually change direction. Like:
00:51:407 (3,4) - Would flow a bit better if it were something ala this:

Insane:
Should be around OD 8, or atleast 7,5, for this difficulty
00:04:780 (6,7,1) - Don't hear anything that justifies a stream here. Drop notes 7 and 9, 8 can stay.
00:07:580 (2) - Mapped over nothing too, erase
00:30:172 (2) - ^
00:26:105 (1) - Suggest increasing slider speed from that point up to 00:45:623 (1)
00:46:708 (2) - Should end at white tick
00:49:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fine tune this one, same as the star from Hard.

Hope this mod is of any help, would love to see this become ranked one day. Good luck with the map! :D
fixed most of this, thanks for the mod! :D
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