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Dropping some suggestions on the go ingame
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16:02 [ Supreme ]: sso?
16:02 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:02 MrSergio: too many repeats on those 2 sliders
16:03 [ Supreme ]: yeh i ccnat get the stream right
16:03 [ Supreme ]:
16:03 [ Supreme ]: the repeater is the problem
16:03 MrSergio: Also, using angled sliders on such genre kinda doesn't feel right, maybe cause I prefer "curvy" sliders... dunno
16:04 [ Supreme ]: hmm
16:04 MrSergio: 00:41:782 (9) - Ugh
16:04 MrSergio: at least make it into 2 sldiers and add a circle at the end
16:04 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:04 [ Supreme ]: oh hmm
16:04 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/HaCpgam5.
16:04 MrSergio: ops
16:04 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/HaCpgam5\
16:05 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - Don't waste this beat
16:05 MrSergio: it is part of 00:46:900 (4,5,6) -
16:05 MrSergio: 00:47:958 (1) - Circles work a lot better here
16:05 [ Supreme ]: hmm how can i fix thata
16:05 MrSergio: also, notice that you started a slider on the red tick which is usually weak in emphasis
16:05 MrSergio: which one?
16:06 MrSergio: 00:46:370 (3) - ?
16:06 MrSergio: Delete that, add a repeat on 00:46:017 (2) - and add a circle somewhere else after it
16:07 MrSergio: 00:47:958 (1,2) - Do a Ctrl + G and re-arrange them
16:07 [ Supreme ]: 1yes
16:07 [ Supreme ]: 00:46:370 (3) -
16:07 MrSergio: 00:51:400 (3) - This one is overdone
16:07 MrSergio: 00:50:782 (14,15,1) - is fine, while that ^ is a bit too much
16:07 MrSergio: 00:58:194 (1) - Ugh part 2
16:08 MrSergio: First of all, do not make the stream start on a blue tick, NEVER
16:08 MrSergio: I mean 00:58:194 (1) -
16:08 MrSergio: ops
16:08 MrSergio: 00:58:987 (2) -
16:08 [ Supreme ]: aah
16:08 [ Supreme ]: blue ticckc
16:09 MrSergio: ok, I have a substitution for that one too
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:017 - Add a 1/2 slider
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - Start a 1/4 repeat slider with 2 repeats on it
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:723 - copy the previous 1/4 repeat slider
16:09 MrSergio: 00:59:076 - start circles
16:10 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/yaRKGuHv
16:10 [ Supreme ]: daman
16:10 [ Supreme ]: damn i dont undersstand so many info
16:10 MrSergio: lol
16:10 MrSergio: read them later once again, since I have other things to do I tend to go too fast, sorry
16:10 [ Supreme ]: wait i ggot it i gguedss
16:10 [ Supreme ]: np
16:10 [ Supreme ]: andi dont wanna fk up you schedual xD
16:10 MrSergio: the starting point of the screen is 00:58:017 -
16:11 MrSergio: so from there on place those objects and it should feel natural
16:11 MrSergio: also, the repeat sliders should be consistent with the other one I told you above
16:11 MrSergio: ones*
16:11 MrSergio: 01:05:429 (1) - Random NC x)
16:11 MrSergio: 01:10:370 (8) - The only slider having a different shape into this combo lol
16:12 [ Supreme ]: so like that ?
16:12 [ Supreme ]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434401
16:12 MrSergio: I guess that's the general gist of it
16:12 MrSergio: It's a bit hard to see, but I guess you placed the first repeat sldier too early
16:12 MrSergio: 00:58:017 - 00:58:194 - Slider
16:12 MrSergio: I mean, 1/2 slider
16:13 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - here starts the repeat slider thingy
16:13 [ Supreme ]: it's on the white tick
16:13 MrSergio: yeah, just to make sure, since I can't really see the ticks on that screeen >~<
16:13 MrSergio: 16 should be a 1/2 slider
16:14 [ Supreme ]: 1/2 slider like that?
16:14 [ Supreme ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434413
16:14 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/wAfbQFev
16:14 MrSergio: yep
16:14 [ Supreme ]: got it now
16:14 [ Supreme ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434420
16:14 [ Supreme ]: thiss iss whaat u ment right?
16:15 MrSergio: make that part start 1/1 later x)
16:15 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - is where your 16 should start
16:16 [ Supreme ]: but how
16:16 MrSergio: last thing I have to say is... try to avoid placing sliders on red ticks xD
16:16 [ Supreme ]: i mean huh
16:16 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:16 [ Supreme ]: yes will make a note of thata
16:17 MrSergio: anyway, where you start the repeats is not really a poblem
16:17 MrSergio: at least...
16:17 MrSergio: well, let me try it
16:17 MrSergio: yeah, seems fine either way
16:17 MrSergio: keep it like that
16:17 [ Supreme ]: sure
16:18 [ Supreme ]: aaah cool
16:18 [ Supreme ]: 00:46:370 (3) -
16:18 [ Supreme ]: pretty mucch a problem herre
16:18 [ Supreme ]: i have no idea what's wrongg xD
16:22 MrSergio: oh, that
16:22 MrSergio: delete it x)
16:22 MrSergio: Then add a repeat on 00:46:017 (2) -
16:22 [ Supreme ]: lol
16:22 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:22 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - and place a circle here
16:22 [ Supreme ]: aaah ty
16:22 MrSergio: this way you keep 00:46:547 - and 00:46:900 (4,5,6) - consistent
16:22 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - since this is part of the same rhythm
16:23 MrSergio: of 00:46:900 (4,5,6) - I mean
16:23 [ Supreme ]: ty again senpai, aalways so helpfull
16:23 MrSergio: np
16:44 [ Supreme ]: for some reasosn i cacnt move sliders anymorte
16:44 [ Supreme ]: any clue?
16:44 [ Supreme ]: or notes
16:44 [ Supreme ]: nvm found it
16:44 [ Supreme ]: locck notes
16:44 MrSergio: L
16:44 MrSergio:
16:02 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:02 MrSergio: too many repeats on those 2 sliders
16:03 [ Supreme ]: yeh i ccnat get the stream right
16:03 [ Supreme ]:
16:03 [ Supreme ]: the repeater is the problem
16:03 MrSergio: Also, using angled sliders on such genre kinda doesn't feel right, maybe cause I prefer "curvy" sliders... dunno
16:04 [ Supreme ]: hmm
16:04 MrSergio: 00:41:782 (9) - Ugh
16:04 MrSergio: at least make it into 2 sldiers and add a circle at the end
16:04 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:04 [ Supreme ]: oh hmm
16:04 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/HaCpgam5.
16:04 MrSergio: ops
16:04 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/HaCpgam5\
16:05 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - Don't waste this beat
16:05 MrSergio: it is part of 00:46:900 (4,5,6) -
16:05 MrSergio: 00:47:958 (1) - Circles work a lot better here
16:05 [ Supreme ]: hmm how can i fix thata
16:05 MrSergio: also, notice that you started a slider on the red tick which is usually weak in emphasis
16:05 MrSergio: which one?
16:06 MrSergio: 00:46:370 (3) - ?
16:06 MrSergio: Delete that, add a repeat on 00:46:017 (2) - and add a circle somewhere else after it
16:07 MrSergio: 00:47:958 (1,2) - Do a Ctrl + G and re-arrange them
16:07 [ Supreme ]: 1yes
16:07 [ Supreme ]: 00:46:370 (3) -
16:07 MrSergio: 00:51:400 (3) - This one is overdone
16:07 MrSergio: 00:50:782 (14,15,1) - is fine, while that ^ is a bit too much
16:07 MrSergio: 00:58:194 (1) - Ugh part 2
16:08 MrSergio: First of all, do not make the stream start on a blue tick, NEVER
16:08 MrSergio: I mean 00:58:194 (1) -
16:08 MrSergio: ops
16:08 MrSergio: 00:58:987 (2) -
16:08 [ Supreme ]: aah
16:08 [ Supreme ]: blue ticckc
16:09 MrSergio: ok, I have a substitution for that one too
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:017 - Add a 1/2 slider
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - Start a 1/4 repeat slider with 2 repeats on it
16:09 MrSergio: 00:58:723 - copy the previous 1/4 repeat slider
16:09 MrSergio: 00:59:076 - start circles
16:10 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/yaRKGuHv
16:10 [ Supreme ]: daman
16:10 [ Supreme ]: damn i dont undersstand so many info
16:10 MrSergio: lol
16:10 MrSergio: read them later once again, since I have other things to do I tend to go too fast, sorry
16:10 [ Supreme ]: wait i ggot it i gguedss
16:10 [ Supreme ]: np
16:10 [ Supreme ]: andi dont wanna fk up you schedual xD
16:10 MrSergio: the starting point of the screen is 00:58:017 -
16:11 MrSergio: so from there on place those objects and it should feel natural
16:11 MrSergio: also, the repeat sliders should be consistent with the other one I told you above
16:11 MrSergio: ones*
16:11 MrSergio: 01:05:429 (1) - Random NC x)
16:11 MrSergio: 01:10:370 (8) - The only slider having a different shape into this combo lol
16:12 [ Supreme ]: so like that ?
16:12 [ Supreme ]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434401
16:12 MrSergio: I guess that's the general gist of it
16:12 MrSergio: It's a bit hard to see, but I guess you placed the first repeat sldier too early
16:12 MrSergio: 00:58:017 - 00:58:194 - Slider
16:12 MrSergio: I mean, 1/2 slider
16:13 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - here starts the repeat slider thingy
16:13 [ Supreme ]: it's on the white tick
16:13 MrSergio: yeah, just to make sure, since I can't really see the ticks on that screeen >~<
16:13 MrSergio: 16 should be a 1/2 slider
16:14 [ Supreme ]: 1/2 slider like that?
16:14 [ Supreme ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434413
16:14 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/wAfbQFev
16:14 MrSergio: yep
16:14 [ Supreme ]: got it now
16:14 [ Supreme ]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4434420
16:14 [ Supreme ]: thiss iss whaat u ment right?
16:15 MrSergio: make that part start 1/1 later x)
16:15 MrSergio: 00:58:370 - is where your 16 should start
16:16 [ Supreme ]: but how
16:16 MrSergio: last thing I have to say is... try to avoid placing sliders on red ticks xD
16:16 [ Supreme ]: i mean huh
16:16 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:16 [ Supreme ]: yes will make a note of thata
16:17 MrSergio: anyway, where you start the repeats is not really a poblem
16:17 MrSergio: at least...
16:17 MrSergio: well, let me try it
16:17 MrSergio: yeah, seems fine either way
16:17 MrSergio: keep it like that
16:17 [ Supreme ]: sure
16:18 [ Supreme ]: aaah cool
16:18 [ Supreme ]: 00:46:370 (3) -
16:18 [ Supreme ]: pretty mucch a problem herre
16:18 [ Supreme ]: i have no idea what's wrongg xD
16:22 MrSergio: oh, that
16:22 MrSergio: delete it x)
16:22 MrSergio: Then add a repeat on 00:46:017 (2) -
16:22 [ Supreme ]: lol
16:22 [ Supreme ]: xD
16:22 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - and place a circle here
16:22 [ Supreme ]: aaah ty
16:22 MrSergio: this way you keep 00:46:547 - and 00:46:900 (4,5,6) - consistent
16:22 MrSergio: 00:46:547 - since this is part of the same rhythm
16:23 MrSergio: of 00:46:900 (4,5,6) - I mean
16:23 [ Supreme ]: ty again senpai, aalways so helpfull
16:23 MrSergio: np
16:44 [ Supreme ]: for some reasosn i cacnt move sliders anymorte
16:44 [ Supreme ]: any clue?
16:44 [ Supreme ]: or notes
16:44 [ Supreme ]: nvm found it
16:44 [ Supreme ]: locck notes
16:44 MrSergio: L
16:44 MrSergio:
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2016-01-31 11:50 [ Supreme ]: hey
2016-01-31 11:50 [ Supreme ]: could u tesst my maap?
2016-01-31 11:50 xLolicore-: yo
2016-01-31 11:50 xLolicore-: yeah i can
2016-01-31 11:50 [ Supreme ]: yay
2016-01-31 11:50 [ Supreme ]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/891771 THE ORAL CIGARETTES - AEUI [Insane]]
2016-01-31 11:52 xLolicore-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/891771 THE ORAL CIGARETTES - AEUI]
2016-01-31 11:54 [ Supreme ]: lol
2016-01-31 11:54 [ Supreme ]: rip fcc
2016-01-31 11:54 xLolicore-: ye :P
2016-01-31 11:55 [ Supreme ]: anyway
2016-01-31 11:55 [ Supreme ]: any gogod?
2016-01-31 11:55 xLolicore-: 00:08:606 (5) - this one looks weird
2016-01-31 11:55 xLolicore-: 00:09:311 (6) - this too
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: 00:10:017 (9,10,11) - and these
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: maybe should go with curved sliders
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: i feel angled sliders look weird in a genre like this
2016-01-31 11:56 [ Supreme ]: aaah oki
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: 00:14:253 (9) - this too
2016-01-31 11:56 [ Supreme ]: thnk you
2016-01-31 11:56 [ Supreme ]: so just curved
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: yeah
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: and the streams are too straight
2016-01-31 11:56 xLolicore-: gotta need some variety XD
2016-01-31 11:57 [ Supreme ]: ah thank you for the tips
2016-01-31 11:57 xLolicore-: alright i'll put this up on your beatmap thread
Small metadata correction, title of the song is actually "A-E-U-I"
Really happy to see more Oral Cigs getting mapped
Really happy to see more Oral Cigs getting mapped
Topic Starter
yeh they're one of my favorite bands..StoryTime wrote:
Small metadata correction, title of the song is actually "A-E-U-I"
Really happy to see more Oral Cigs getting mapped
I will change the title
Ty for letting gme know
Just some things i saw:
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00:11:429 (1) - Even tho the sliders like this are easy to pull off i just think it feels abit odd since its different than the other girls
same with this one 00:39:664 (1) -
01:26:253 (2) - I think that you should put the slider here instead of here 01:26:429 (3) - so it can fit the sing more
Im not sure if its ment to be like this but here 01:41:076 (11) - and here 01:41:782 (14) - the sliders are a little longer than the others and they don't end on a tick
same with this one 00:39:664 (1) -
01:26:253 (2) - I think that you should put the slider here instead of here 01:26:429 (3) - so it can fit the sing more
Im not sure if its ment to be like this but here 01:41:076 (11) - and here 01:41:782 (14) - the sliders are a little longer than the others and they don't end on a tick
Insane
I'm assuming you haven't finished mapping yet because right now the map kind of ends in a weird spot.
Also, there no whistles finishes or claps from what I heard.
I think some of your combos are too long.
00:17:076 (1) - Personally don't think this slider looks nice compared to the rest of the sliders.[
00:22:723 (5) - Is this supposed to be a little off from the rest of the stream?
00:25:282 (7,8,9,10) - Don't really like how this looks aesthetically.
00:39:664 (7) - New combo perhaps?
00:55:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - This plays fine but looks kinda weird? I don't know. There are many others jumps like this in the map.
01:13:017 (9) - I feel like the curve for this is too sharp.
01:18:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too long imo.
01:42:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of weird distance spacing. Especially that slider at the end.
02:53:425 (15) - Very long stream lol
03:02:954 (19) - As I said, weird place to end the song but I'm pretty sure you're just not finished with the map haha
Also, there no whistles finishes or claps from what I heard.
I think some of your combos are too long.
00:17:076 (1) - Personally don't think this slider looks nice compared to the rest of the sliders.[
00:22:723 (5) - Is this supposed to be a little off from the rest of the stream?
00:25:282 (7,8,9,10) - Don't really like how this looks aesthetically.
00:39:664 (7) - New combo perhaps?
00:55:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - This plays fine but looks kinda weird? I don't know. There are many others jumps like this in the map.
01:13:017 (9) - I feel like the curve for this is too sharp.
01:18:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too long imo.
01:42:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of weird distance spacing. Especially that slider at the end.
02:53:425 (15) - Very long stream lol
03:02:954 (19) - As I said, weird place to end the song but I'm pretty sure you're just not finished with the map haha
If you don't mind, if you could mod at least one difficulty for this, I'd really appreciate it!
Topic Starter
Shiguma wrote:
InsaneI'm assuming you haven't finished mapping yet because right now the map kind of ends in a weird spot.
Also, there no whistles finishes or claps from what I heard.
I think some of your combos are too long.
00:17:076 (1) - Personally don't think this slider looks nice compared to the rest of the sliders.[
00:22:723 (5) - Is this supposed to be a little off from the rest of the stream?
00:25:282 (7,8,9,10) - Don't really like how this looks aesthetically.
00:39:664 (7) - New combo perhaps?
00:55:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - This plays fine but looks kinda weird? I don't know. There are many others jumps like this in the map.
01:13:017 (9) - I feel like the curve for this is too sharp.
01:18:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too long imo.
01:42:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of weird distance spacing. Especially that slider at the end.
02:53:425 (15) - Very long stream lol
03:02:954 (19) - As I said, weird place to end the song but I'm pretty sure you're just not finished with the map haha
If you don't mind, if you could mod at least one difficulty for this, I'd really appreciate it!
Thank you for the mod, i will apply these changes, and i wwill mod your map today ... thnk you very much
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