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Nyanners - POMFPOMFPOMF =3

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Tarrasky
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mekki
O3O
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

MkGuh wrote:

O3O
=3
jigglypuff
amazing song
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

_rat wrote:

amazing song
=3
Seijiro
Now that I noticed, just place some sort of warning on your description since this song (as well as lyrics in SB) aren't really suitable for all ages x)
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

MrSergio wrote:

Now that I noticed, just place some sort of warning on your description since this song (as well as lyrics in SB) aren't really suitable for all ages x)
okay done, thanks =3
Weber
hi

Normal

00:11:579 (3) - This slider should absolutely start on the red tick 1/2 of a beat before.
00:22:126 (2) - Move this to the white space and make it shorter: http://puu.sh/mPreV/e1e2746243.jpg
02:01:032 (1,1) - Put a hitcircle between these.


Hard

00:58:220 (4) - Blanket better at x:344, y:108
01:01:970 (5) - Move to x:400, y:224
01:04:782 (4) - This repeat is technically incorrect, since the total note pattern has 5 hits and the song clearly has 4. I would recommend just changing it to one stack without the slider/repeat.
01:12:282 (4) - ^
02:01:032 (3) - I'm 500% sure this slider isn't rankable. Good slider though :3c

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Tatsumaki wrote:

hi hi ^^

Hard

00:58:220 (4) - Blanket better at x:344, y:108 fix
01:01:970 (5) - Move to x:400, y:224 hm i dont like much, I prefer 1,10x distance
01:04:782 (4) - This repeat is technically incorrect, since the total note pattern has 5 hits and the song clearly has 4. I would recommend just changing it to one stack without the slider/repeat.
01:12:282 (4) - ^
02:01:032 (3) - I'm 500% sure this slider isn't rankable. Good slider though :3c i think is rankeable =3

Good luck. ty <3
Pulse
[super moe generic loli =3]

00:29:626 (3,4) - Prefiro um slider no lugar dos singles.
00:35:603 - Single?
00:36:892 (3) - Aqui eu prefiro dois singles.
00:40:759 - Talvez você possa pôr um single aqui também, vez que entre o 00:39:939 (1) e o 00:40:876 (2), ficou um "vazio" que quebrou parte do ritmo que o mapa estava tendo.
00:58:689 (1) - Tente isso: http://puu.sh/mPxML/b0197f2a49.jpg
01:04:782 (4) - Esse reverse não ficou bom, tira ele e aumenta a duração do slider. O mesmo acontece em 01:12:282 (4).
01:13:689 (1) - Volume 40% e adiciona Finish. Faça o mesmo em 01:14:626 (1), e coloque singles em 01:14:157 e 01:15:095.
02:01:032 (3) - Belo slider.

Desculpa por não ser muito, boa sorte <3
Mekki
eu quero mod na minha diff :<
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Tespia wrote:

[super moe generic loli =3]

00:29:626 (3,4) - Prefiro um slider no lugar dos singles.
00:35:603 - Single?
00:36:892 (3) - Aqui eu prefiro dois singles.
00:40:759 - Talvez você possa pôr um single aqui também, vez que entre o 00:39:939 (1) e o 00:40:876 (2), ficou um "vazio" que quebrou parte do ritmo que o mapa estava tendo.
00:58:689 (1) - Tente isso: http://puu.sh/mPxML/b0197f2a49.jpg
01:04:782 (4) - Esse reverse não ficou bom, tira ele e aumenta a duração do slider. O mesmo acontece em 01:12:282 (4).
01:13:689 (1) - Volume 40% e adiciona Finish. Faça o mesmo em 01:14:626 (1), e coloque singles em 01:14:157 e 01:15:095.
02:01:032 (3) - Belo slider.

Desculpa por não ser muito, boa sorte <3
mt obg pelo mod, gostei bastante de umas dicas (eu sou bem fresco em aceitar dicas mas das suas teve umas q eu curti bastante ^^)
Pulse

MkGuh wrote:

eu quero mod na minha diff :<
me dê alguns minutos <3

edit:

[guh normal >w<]

00:30:564 (1) - Achei bem weird esse começo de kiai. Tente reduzir o spinner levando ele até 00:31:970 (1), e ai coloque singles em 00:32:439 e 00:32:907.
00:39:001 (2,3) - Que tal o single antes do slider?
00:39:939 (1,2,3,4) - Eu achei mal encaixado as notas, tanto no vocal quanto no ritmo. Tente algo assim: http://puu.sh/mPA8L/3534ae337f.jpg
00:53:064 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/mPAmI/af26193ccb.jpg
01:17:907 - Coloca uma nota aqui >:(
Spayyce
m4m as requested! <3

[Normal]

00:17:439 (1,2) - Why not make these two sliders symmetrical, I believe it would improve flow and readability for the newer players.

00:23:064 (3) - Aesthetically, this would look better if moved to these co-ords (X:80 Y:144)

00:36:189 (1) - Finish on the downbeat?

01:21:189 (1) - ^

02:01:032 (1) - I believe this a good opportunity to make a slider that fits the change in the music, I made a slider that feels better with the music.


In the image, I made the first red anchor on point with blue tick just after the middle white anchor

The second red anchor is to your discretion.

[Hard]

00:52:595 (5,6,1) - Possible difficulty is readability, especially given the star rating.

01:08:064 (1) - I think Ctrl+G would make this part easier to read and more fun in terms of variation.

01:13:689 (1,1,1) - Why antijumps on the hard? The normal diff is harder at this part. x.x

01:57:751 (5,6) - Make note 6 curve more to accommodate. This looks better, do you think?


02:01:032 (3) - I'm not sure on the rankability due to the severely unclear patch it is taking, it also walks on boundries of slider speed manipulation, I would definitely revise this slider.

hentai map. hentai mapper. hentai lyrics. <3
Spayyce
also! forgot to add that the normal difficulty is really ambigious in terms of the fact it's a guest difficulty.
Mekki
Tespia

Tespia wrote:

MkGuh wrote:

eu quero mod na minha diff :<
me dê alguns minutos <3 lindo rs

edit:

[guh normal >w<]

00:30:564 (1) - Achei bem weird esse começo de kiai. Tente reduzir o spinner levando ele até 00:31:970 (1), e ai coloque singles em 00:32:439 e 00:32:907. Ficaria bem estranho, o que eu fiz já está bom. Até porque do seu jeito, n teria espaço suficiente para o spin.
00:39:001 (2,3) - Que tal o single antes do slider? Mas ai o final do slider n seria clicável.
00:39:939 (1,2,3,4) - Eu achei mal encaixado as notas, tanto no vocal quanto no ritmo. Tente algo assim: http://puu.sh/mPA8L/3534ae337f.jpg Oki
00:53:064 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/mPAmI/af26193ccb.jpg Como o mapa n tem um easy, acho que ficaria muito pesado.
01:17:907 - Coloca uma nota aqui >:( N ia ter espaço suficiente de recovery dps do spin!!!!!

Space

[ Space ] wrote:

m4m as requested! <3

[Normal]

00:17:439 (1,2) - Why not make these two sliders symmetrical, I believe it would improve flow and readability for the newer players. ?? it's fine as it is, flow and readability are completely nice.

00:23:064 (3) - Aesthetically, this would look better if moved to these co-ords (X:80 Y:144) ok

00:36:189 (1) - Finish on the downbeat? Nah.

01:21:189 (1) - ^ ^

02:01:032 (1) - I believe this a good opportunity to make a slider that fits the change in the music, I made a slider that feels better with the music. Ye, sure fixed.

[box=Slider]

In the image, I made the first red anchor on point with blue tick just after the middle white anchor

The second red anchor is to your discretion.

Onii-chan >////<
osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:Nyanners
Creator:Tarrasky
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332,104,103220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,156,103689,6,0,P|176:160|144:152,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,104157,2,0,P|83:99|53:103,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,156,104626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,272,105095,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,264,105564,6,0,L|328:300,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,106501,2,0,L|292:168,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,116,107439,6,0,P|164:64|184:0,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,55,108376,2,0,P|316:107|296:171,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,109079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,109314,6,0,L|212:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,376,110251,2,0,L|352:312,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,304,110720,2,0,L|404:236,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,184,111189,5,4,0:0:0:0:
376,68,111657,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,112126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,68,112595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,184,113064,6,0,P|104:216|112:240,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,296,113532,2,0,P|120:324|148:344,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,114001,2,0,L|392:312,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,114939,6,0,P|432:208|460:140,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,44,115876,2,0,P|456:28|380:52,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,116579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,108,116814,6,0,P|222:123|165:106,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,117751,2,0,P|68:232|52:264,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,300,118220,2,0,P|24:344|40:376,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,380,118689,6,0,P|200:360|232:360,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,368,119626,2,0,P|324:304|328:236,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,120329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,144,120564,2,0,P|392:112|380:88,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,44,121032,6,0,B|252:72|188:32|188:32|144:56|144:56|68:56,1,270,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,122556,12,4,126306,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

[ Space ] wrote:

m4m as requested! <3

[Hard]

00:52:595 (5,6,1) - Possible difficulty is readability, especially given the star rating. ok fix

01:08:064 (1) - I think Ctrl+G would make this part easier to read and more fun in terms of variation. hm no thanks :/

01:13:689 (1,1,1) - Why antijumps on the hard? The normal diff is harder at this part. x.x its 2/1 timing of each circle, not is exactly a antijump, is more for a stack or something, and in hard can put antijump

01:57:751 (5,6) - Make note 6 curve more to accommodate. This looks better, do you think? fix


02:01:032 (3) - I'm not sure on the rankability due to the severely unclear patch it is taking, it also walks on boundries of slider speed manipulation, I would definitely revise this slider. fix

hentai map. hentai mapper. hentai lyrics. <3 >w<
thanks space ^^
Blackweb
01:04:782 (4) - slider could be changed
01:12:282 (4) - there too
00:42:751 (3) - there too
00:41:696 (3) - not needed but if you choose to keep it it's fine
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Blackweb wrote:

01:04:782 (4) - slider could be changed
01:12:282 (4) - there too
00:42:751 (3) - there too
00:41:696 (3) - not needed but if you choose to keep it it's fine
all fix in chat, thanks <3
Okoratu
pls imouto.png is clearly questionable
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Okoratu wrote:

pls imouto.png is clearly questionable
remove imoutos and lolis with is questionable and bad quality ;w;
Slayed_old_1
pls stop smelling my pantsu

general

seems like hitsounds are too loud. reduce the volume to 45% in the whole song will work much better imo

there are also two osb files in my folder, probably u should delete one

ive found a better mp3 for u: lolilink. if u are going to use it, move offset and othe lines by +52


harD::::D:D::D:

00:07:126 (3,4) - actually u didnt use this pattern anywhere in the song, its not a problem, but looks strange compare to other flow. 00:08:064 - why do u miss this sound? its pretty strong actually and must be mapped

00:13:220 (8) - actually flow here should go left, not right with this curves, otherwise it looks strange

00:15:798 (6) - nc here maybe to avoid (11) combo?

00:33:610 (4,3) - i think this stuff should be stacked. also i really dont like all these overlaps u have here 00:32:907 (2,3,1,2) -

01:01:501 (4,5) - maybe put this circle under the slider so it will fit your previous pattern?

01:26:814 (1) - this should be a triplet acording to the vocal, but u can keep your way too, just a suggestion

01:57:751 (5,6) - actually breaks the flow ((6) slider)

02:02:321 - i think note here is needed since there is pretty strong sound

normal

00:03:845 (3,4) - since this is the easiest diff in ur set , stacking notes like this isnt a good idea - it can be hard to play for the new players. better unstack 00:05:017 (5,6) - same (and etc)

00:11:345 (2) - move to x=360 y=233 for a better flow (dont forget to move (3) slider too, if ull do it)

00:21:189 (1) - flow here should go like this loliporn here dont open

01:00:564 (1,2) - move these 2 sliders (by uding DS and moving 1st slider) to x=310 y=313 for a better flow

01:24:470 (3,3) - i think u can correct this overlap

02:02:321 - same suggestions about this note as in hard

thats all i think, gl!
Mekki

Slayed wrote:

pls stop smelling my pantsu

normal

00:03:845 (3,4) - since this is the easiest diff in ur set , stacking notes like this isnt a good idea - it can be hard to play for the new players. better unstack 00:05:017 (5,6) - same (and etc) They are fine imo, since this is a Normal diff after all, but if someone else complain, i might chnage my mind.

00:11:345 (2) - move to x=360 y=233 for a better flow (dont forget to move (3) slider too, if ull do it) It already seems fine, it fits the map.

00:21:189 (1) - flow here should go like this loliporn here dont open This is intentional, tbh, i think it flows nice like that.

01:00:564 (1,2) - move these 2 sliders (by uding DS and moving 1st slider) to x=310 y=313 for a better flow Same.

01:24:470 (3,3) - i think u can correct this overlap Which one? o.o

02:02:321 - same suggestions about this note as in hard It should fit for a hard, but imo, it would be too harsh for a Normal;

thats all i think, gl! Sorry for don't fix anything, i feel bad for that, but wel... ty for modding anyways.
Topic Starter
Tarrasky
Thanks for mod Slayed ^^, apply some fix
about the hitsounds i think is ok in 60%
in my pc have just one obs, maybe is bug .w.
where you find this mp3? I think my mp3 is good, i pick in official video description lol
dylansantosh
Are you taking gd's? possibly an easy?
Kuki
rip 18+ lyrics
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