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- Metadata: Are you sure you shouldn't add to source ''Pump It Up 2015 Prime'' ? or i'm not sure where i heard that it's from BMS, but i know it has some sort of a source to it so maybe add that.
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Not done yet so i have no say for now.
- Timing: Okay
- Other: I want to ask, why is it that your diff names are presented like that when expew is the only person who's GD has a BMS diff name scheming? i kinda fancy Beginner, Normal, Hyper, Another, expew's Another, and Black another etc, (of course with my diff name being White another) ?
[Easy] - 00:00:111 - I want to advise, that maybe you could make these notes, as little as they are, follow pitch from heaviest being on the right to lowest on the left?
- 00:43:875 - How about you make these not be jacks at all? consider this, if they are not part of the chain (well technically they are but it's the only jacks that are triple after the mini jack section under it.) then i suggest you make them a separate type of pattern, i mean it could work in it's own way if you think about it.
- 00:56:228 - I don't get why this is the only one without a note in it, i mean it doesn't feel off nor silent to have one.
- 00:59:405 (59405|3,59758|5,60110|3,60463|5,60816|1,61169|3,61522|1,61875|3) - I think these are pretty close to each other, i'd even regard the pattern itself as off from the pattern scheme you're aiming for, so i'd advise you to space it a little, and try not to over work the middle lane like that, thumbs are pretty hard to control when you're a beginner player.
- 01:06:463 (66463|3,66816|1,67169|5,67522|3) - I'm not sure what this is but it doesn't seem like it's following any type of consistency in patterning you shown so far, nor am i looking at anything you're trying to do with it in particular, maybe give it a ladder effect or like, one of the regular streams you did like in the sections below it.
- 01:27:640 (87640|6) - I appreciate the fact you were kind of following pitch like earlier in this section, so i'd ask you might want to consider doing it with this note too, so maybe you could move it to 4, that way it could be representing pitch a bit more better, also i wasn't really sure why the main beat was off to 01:27:993 - but i guess that's nothing we could do about it.
- 01:31:963 - These LNs, felt kinda off in a way, you up until now, followed a strict scheme of consistent/clean patterning while this felt random, like i can't see a purpose behind what you did here, so i might suggest doing something like this (This is just a really zoomed out preview but it looks alot cleaner): http://puu.sh/uEwG1/d8324aaf3d.png
- 01:51:640 (111640|1) - Hmmm, i'm not sure but it would be more comfortable if it was on 2, it would be a bit better if it was close to the LN on the same finger for the right hand.
- 01:57:287 (117287|5,120110|6) - I wonder if CTRL+G for this would work, i'm assuming it would have better flow in that direction.
- 02:09:287 (129287|2) - Here : 02:05:052 (125052|1,125758|4,126463|1,127169|5,127875|2,128581|5) - You switched every three notes, so having this be a 4-note trill would be weird, i suggest moving that note somewhere to not break the form you followed here.
- 02:15:640 (135640|2,136169|2,136522|2) - These, feel off, i don't really enjoy a jack like that, it's not really a jack but for inexperienced players it might as well will be, it would come off to me as a bit ''messy'' in that terms, so i suggest the following, how about you make notes like this 02:15:640 (135640|2) - separate and let the mini jack thingy alone? i could imagine it working after trying it in the editor, it just seemed a bit more natural to me.
- 02:24:110 (144110|3,144640|3,144993|3,145522|3) - I kinda just don't understand this, like i can see you are trying to emphasize the middle lane especially since you used up the rest for the section earlier but, is this really the best way of doing it? couldn't you think of something more natural for it?
- 02:27:287 (147287|2,147640|5,147993|2) - This makes it seem to me like it's a 3-note trill only, while it's picking up from 02:26:934 (146934|5) - but it confuses it with the chord placement for 02:26:934 (146934|1) - so i suggest moving it to 1 may be the best course here.
- 02:37:522 (157522|3) - Would it work if you moved it to the middle lane? or so long you don't make that note meet with 02:36:816 (156816|1) - because it is a bit complex doing it for a noobish player.
- 02:32:581 (152581|1) - Also, it would feel a bit more consistent with 02:33:287 (153287|2,153993|1) - If you moved this note to 2, it would avoid an uncomfy encounter with how you ended the last trill before the LN.
- 02:35:052 (155052|5) - Oh and about this, hmm, it doesn't seem that harmless but you could move it to the 5th column, just a suggestion.
- 03:34:699 - Now i'd understand the earlier section you had quite the say about making the notes go from left to right, but i wouldn't suggest making it too repetitive for the second chorus, i'd ask maybe give it more variation in pattern scheme by doing the same but reversing it? that way whether you're left or right hand dominant you'd have a fair shot at either choruses (or how you read them, even).
- 03:40:346 - Well you did sorta make it go right to left as i wanted to suggest, but that wasn't the same type of scheming you did earlier, so i'm not sure
- 04:05:758 (245758|0,246463|2,247169|4,247875|6) - Shouldn't this be different from the 1 3 5 7 patterning you did right below it? it follows a different kind of pitch to some degree for the same sound, so for the sake of more variation you'd might want to change it.
[Normal] - 00:02:405 (2405|4) - Moving this note to 5 feels a lot smoother, imo, while i'd suggest moving
- 00:02:934 (2934|6) - To 7 as a better opener for 00:03:287 (3287|0,3463|2) - So i'd just use that.
- 00:04:875 (4875|3) - What's your opinion about moving this to 6? would it work better than the middle column? you should do that considering you haven't used the 6th column for a while (8 seconds)
- 00:09:993 (9993|1,10346|0,10522|3,10875|4) - This pattern seems awkward as a whole, like you basically used that type of pattern for the left hand only, and it's not even suiting anything you did for basically the same thing, but mapped the way i couldn't get what you're trying to capture here, maybe you should make anything similar to this consistent so changing it would be optimal.
- 01:04:169 (64169|5,64346|3,64875|5,65052|3) - Would it be a good idea for this type of trill to repeat? i'm not sure about it on my end, maybe try to break it at the end of the new stream so it wouldn't be err, like that. (It's just how i feel about it though)
- 01:04:169 (64169|5,64346|3,64875|5,65052|3) - This, while it's generally fine, i can't see any reason it should be mapped that way, i can't see any pattern like this, and i notice you use a lot of consistency for patterning stuff so having these wouldn't be good for the structure, like, if you want to have variety that's fine, but i'd think you either need it to be optimal and something that flows pretty nicely and also using it frequently, you can have variation but to a degree that it follows your set of rules, not just random ones like this lol, somehow the way you want to use the consistent scheme you but a note in it and somehow it doesn't seem consistent in the beginning anymore, so i'd take note for that.
- 01:03:816 (63816|5,64169|5,64522|5,64875|5,65228|6,65581|6,65934|6,66287|6) - Having these anchors right next to each other (especially since it's on the ring finger) makes it very difficult to do compared to the rest, which seemed like a spike to me rather than something consistent, how about you follow the steps you made in the older sections? where you used 1-2-1-2 style for the patterns, think that would be a better approach to it.
- 01:07:346 (67346|1,67699|1,67875|0,67875|3,68052|2) - Are you trying to draw the christian cross in the editor? lmao, jokes aside, this might be a bit hard to do on one hand, so i would suggest 01:08:052 (68052|4,68228|2) - CTRL+H this pattern to break it.
- 01:36:110 (96110|3) - Would it be better if you moved this to the middle lane? i'm sure the player would be able to find it less troublesome to hit the LN next to it like that.
- 01:35:581 - to 01:50:581 - You have ignored the 6th column for 15 seconds, that's kinda a long period of time, maybe move something to it in the middle.
- 01:50:934 - Maybe add a note to 3? i'm not sure what you did in the section earlier but you added notes to the ends of the LNs, and that's a good idea considering it would be better for the player to release the LNs.
- 01:52:346 (112346|4) - Maybe you could move this to 3 along side 01:52:699 (112699|2) - to 4, i'm sure it would be a better way to release the ending LN if it were from the middle lane, like all the other ways you did it, so makes it better and consistent at the same time.
- 01:54:110 (114110|2,114816|0,115169|2,115522|4) - Can't really say i'm fond of this, while it is clean true, but i'd feel it doesn't match the pattern scheme you initially went for, i'd suggest moving 01:55:169 (115169|4) - to 5, and move 01:55:522 (115522|6) - to 7 while 01:55:875 (115875|2) - to 3.
- 02:02:934 (122934|6,122934|0) - Think it would be a bit better to move it to [2-6] as it's taking a bit of space, usually where the player would find it tricky to keep holding on the LN in his thumb w/ the 1-7 chord.
- 02:03:640 (123640|4,123993|2) - Would these work on 2-6 as well? seems to fit for me, and i would have it more than what you already placed.
- 02:04:346 (124346|5,125581|5) - If you're gonna have these two on top of each other that's fine, but don't do all that and have an LN right next to it here 02:06:463 (126463|6) - that just feels cruel, if i were you, i'd move it to the middle lane for a better way for a pitch-to-LN changer (just plays out nicely)
- 02:37:699 (157699|3,157875|3) - Whoever is a beginner wouldn't be able to play this, it's like having a very hard burst for someone who is capable of FC'ing the diff, just doesn't make sense having a difficulty spike like that, i'd suggest moving it to an index finger.
- 03:43:699 (223699|5,223875|4,224052|2,224228|4,224405|1,224581|2,224758|4,224934|2) - This kinda plays weirdly to me, i can't really see it being comfy just awkward in a way.
- 03:58:522 (238522|5,239405|6) - Same thing i said about it before, it's also for the rest of the LNs that are like this, i think it's just too hard for the player to do it with one hand.
[Hard] - 00:08:934 (8934|0,9110|5) - I think these notes are a bit too spaced out, so closing them a bit would be better.
- 00:22:699 (22699|4,22699|0,22699|1) - Why does this get to be a 3 note chord, i mean, i'd understand the fact it's meant to be an opener for the chord stream but, it's the same exact sound, i may suggest just reducing it to 2 and use a different pattern for it, maybe a bracket chord as an opener for the chord stream.
- 00:33:816 (33816|2) - Hmmm, i'm having doubts about it being there, maybe you'd be willing to move it to 6? i'd think it would be not that weird to hit.
- 00:33:993 - Like, i appreciate the fact you're trying to keep consistent with this but dear lord it's too repetitive and dull, i'd think reversing every certain amount of time would be better as to not make it like that, you used so far different consistent pattern schemes for the other diffs except this one.
- 00:56:405 (56405|2) - Seems a bit bland for me to have a small ladder like that, so i'd move that to 6.
- 01:17:758 - Ehh, not really fond of the way you patterned it, i could suggest something but tired rip.
- 02:15:287 (135287|3,135463|2,135640|4,135640|1,135816|2,135993|3,136169|4) - This could be changed to make it a bit more not as bland, try rearranging it.
- 02:51:640 (171640|0,171816|1,171993|0,171993|2) - This kinda seems a bit weird to me for this diff, i don't see this anyway nor do i think that's good to do on 1 hand, reminds me of a 4k pattern lol.
- 02:52:169 (172169|4,172258|3) - Would reversing this work?
- 03:11:316 (191316|4,191581|4) - When these meet, it makes it pretty hard for the player to roll this smoothly (talking about it from a noob perspective)
- 03:27:287 (207287|3,209228|3) - Bleh, not really fond of these two on top of each other like that, nor do i deem it consistent.
- 03:34:699 (214699|0,215052|0,215405|0,215758|0,216110|0,216463|0,216816|0,217169|0,217522|0,217875|0,218228|0,218581|0,218934|0,219287|0,219640|0,219993|0,220346|0,220699|0,221052|0,221405|0,221758|0,222110|0,222463|0,222816|0,223169|0,223522|0,223875|0,224228|0,224581|0,224934|0,225287|0,225640|0,226169|0) - Your column one is pretty staked to be fair, maybe try breaking it.
[Insane] - 00:21:463 (21463|5,21552|4,21640|3,21728|2,21816|1) - Think this could be represented in a different way, maybe a trill based thingy? i am not sure. Perhaps : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7542814
- 00:22:699 (22699|5,22963|5) - Hmm, kinda annoying for these to face each other, it would hinder the intro for the streams it seems.
- 00:32:758 (32758|3,32934|1,32934|5,33022|3) - You could do better than that man, lmao, i just keep imagining you're trying to hide secret christ messages ahue.
- 00:44:228 (44228|0,44316|2) - Wonder if it would suit it better to CTRL+G?
- 00:52:258 (52258|5) - Please consider moving that to 5, it seems rather obvious my intentions on why.
- 01:12:905 (72905|3,73081|3,73258|3,73434|3) - Dude that's hella cruel, like i think you might just be able to use chord jumptrills instead of...this.
- 02:16:610 (136610|4,136699|6,136787|4,136875|2,136963|4,137052|6) - You know, you had a pretty good pattern over 02:19:346 - so why don't you try and use something similar?
- 02:30:022 (150022|2,150110|3,150110|5,150199|1) - In my opinion, this seems rather nasty, you could probably rearrange that to something else more consistent with your pattern scheme.
- 02:44:581 (164581|5,164581|0,164758|6,164758|4,164846|2,164934|0,164934|5,165022|2,165110|4,165110|6,165199|2,165287|1,165287|0) - Not gonna lie, this patterns seems really off, i don't like it, nor do i think it flows or any of the sort, i would rather you have choose something more spread out rather than be placed like that.
- 02:54:728 - The LN stream should start here, it's what i'm hearing.
- 03:32:316 (212316|4,212493|4,212669|4,212846|4) - What exactly does this anchor represent? like, are you sure you want to keep it like that?
- 03:32:934 (212934|3,214787|3) - Not really a good way to start the chorus in my opinion lol.
- 03:43:699 (223699|5) - Maybe you could move this to 6 for a better flow in patterns
- 03:54:110 (234110|1) - For starters, this creates and anchor rather than a jumptrill, and secondly, if you moved it to 4 not only would it avoid the anchor but also follow the LN stream.
[Pew's Another] - 00:24:110 (24110|0,24199|1,24287|3,24375|2,24463|1,24552|0,24640|2,24728|3,24816|1) - This is a bit left hand biased, try balancing it.
- 00:25:346 (25346|4,25434|3,25522|4) - I kinda don't see any trills in the streams that are like this, maybe rearrange it for consistency of your patterns
- 00:40:699 (40699|2,40875|2,41052|2) - I am not really sure if this is consistent, if there isn't a specific reason why it's there maybe break the anchor for a better flow on streams.
- 00:42:110 (42110|2,42287|2,42463|2) - Same thing basically, but now that you mention it, if it's gonna be like this then why is it so repetitive on the left hand? for the sake of balance i'd suggest making it for bother sides, or atleast make the second one on the right if possible.
- 00:45:022 (45022|2,45199|2,45287|1) - You sure it's suppose to be played like that? it seems fine but i think it could be improved, i'll let you decide on how you'd do it though, lol.
- 00:45:022 (45022|2,45199|2,45287|1) - Can't really see how this is consistent, i haven't seen you do that for the rest of the mini LNs so it would be wise to avoid that sort of thing.
- 00:58:346 (58346|4) - I really suggest either you move this to column 5, or use mini jacks more frequently to be consistent.
- 01:01:169 (61169|3) - Oh wait you actually did, but on what level did you follow it? and is it for a specific sound?
- 01:06:816 - I think this should be part of the anchor stream, it's most likely on familiar ground with the rest.
- 01:24:816 (84816|0) - Can't really hear any sort of special sound for there to be a note here, it's too low i think LN would be enough.
- 02:35:316 (155316|2,155493|2,155669|2,155846|2) - Personal opinion but i think this is quite inconsistent, and a bit heavy, you should really start either go big or go home on these patterns lol.
- 02:47:846 (167846|1,167934|2) - Maybe CTRL+G for better flow in the stream+LN stream.
- 03:35:052 - This is too heavy on the right side, i'm not sure if you're able to balance it well but i can trust a great mapper like you lol.
- 03:51:110 (231110|3,231199|1,231287|3,231287|2,231287|0,231375|4,231375|1) - Maybe not a good way to start the LN stream, i kinda liked the other ways you did it so maybe for this too.
[Extra] - 00:30:993 (30993|5,31081|3,31169|5,31258|4) - This trill pattern here seems somewhat off compared to the streams for the section, i'd keep it consistent and move 00:30:993 (30993|5,31081|3) - first note to 4, second note to 3, looks a lot neater to start off the set of stream next to it.
- 00:54:287 (54287|4,54463|4) - These accounting each other seems a bit off from the way you did the streams, i can say it's off for this section, so i'll suggest moving 00:54:463 (54463|4) - to 6 so it would be more consistent/cleaner for this section.
- 00:55:081 (55081|1,55169|3,55169|2,55258|1) - This is a bit off, like, you can tell that you're doing a set of streams like 00:55:522 - 00:55:875 - But the pattern itself makes it off with that single note to kick off the stream, i would suggest moving 00:55:081 (55081|1) - to 1 so it won't be the odd ball for them.
- 01:17:581 (77581|3,77581|5,77581|4,77669|2,77669|6,77669|1,77758|4,77758|3) - This is kinda ass to hit when facing the 1/6 streams up ahead, this would mess the player up a bit, how about 01:17:581 (77581|4,77669|6) - doing CTRL+G for this? and moving 01:17:758 (77758|4) - to 7? i'd kinda see that working better as an opener to meet the 1/6.
- 01:49:522 (109522|5,109699|1,110228|5) - I really love how you followed pitch, but this one was odd to me, i mean, not to account for that you landed the same final LN at the same column like 01:51:110 (111110|5) - ahead, so i'd suggest for the fact it wont end up at the same column and to better account pitch you CTRL+H the ones i highlighted.
- 01:54:110 (114110|2,114905|2) - I'm not sure but it seems off to me in a way, also pretty inconsistent/not clean for the most part, how about you 01:54:905 (114905|2,114993|5) - CTRL+G for this? think it would be neater.
- 02:12:022 (132022|1,132110|2,132375|1) - Hmm, something feels off about it, maybe you could reverse 02:12:022 (132022|1,132110|2) - and move 02:12:375 (132375|1) - to 1, think that flows a bit better.
- 02:31:169 (151169|1,151169|0,151346|2,151346|3,151522|0,151522|2,151522|1,151699|2,151699|1,151963|1,151963|0,152052|2,152052|3) - Are you sure these chord LNs that are heavy on the left intentional? it seems to me that it's a bit biased, so i am not sure about it. One thing i could recommend is balancing them out, but that would be difficult for the structure, how about you make the LN chords have a 1-2-1-2 for each hands? that could be an option too.
- 02:45:199 (165199|1,165287|3) - Hmmm, can't say that i'm fond of the pattern in question, i can see it work to not be hand bias and consistent kinda? / flows better if you reversed the pattern i highlighted.
- 02:50:405 (170405|1,170493|2,170581|0,170669|2,170758|1) - This is a bit rough to play, i would consider it a spike of some sorts, i'd recommend not making the LN that rigid, so a change in it would probably be the best.
- 02:57:552 (177552|2) - Perhaps move this to 4 and 02:57:640 (177640|3) - to 2, it would utilize the LN stream in a better way i believe.
- 03:02:934 (182934|6,183552|5) - These being next to each other when i played it felt weird, like, you need to make the player feel a specific thing, or a specific things in that matter, so having something like that removes that feeling to me, at some parts it feels random.
- 03:03:375 (183375|2,183463|1,183552|0,183640|1,183728|2,183816|1,183905|2) - This is a very weird way to use as a pattern, if you're gonna make a chain pattern for the section ahead, don't make it along side ones before it, or it wont feel like it's own thing (if that makes any sense to you).
- 03:04:699 (184699|2,184787|0,184875|1,184963|2) - This felt a bit silly to hit haha, you could probably move the Longer note to 1 and 03:04:787 (184787|0) - to 2 03:04:875 (184875|1) - while this to 4 for a better play off (?) or you could change it to your discretion.
- 03:11:463 (191463|2,191522|1) - This would probably give a better pattern flow if this was reversed, 255 streams+LN streams are a bit hard to do so it's best to avoid these ladder pattern that's as dense as that.
- 03:18:552 (198552|2,198640|4,198640|0,198728|2) - Can't really say i like this pattern, seems out of place/not clean, i'd advise a rearrange of this.
- 03:20:758 (200758|0,200934|0,201022|1,201199|1) - I'm not too sure why this is left as is, but making it as comfy would be ideal since it's an LN map.
- 03:48:463 - Ok, so the LNs you used thus far, was pretty good, so changing it to something more complex for the same sound/pitch seems off, especially since these are harder than the other ones which doesn't seem that balanced in difficulty to me, perhaps you could find a different approach, or not make the inverse dedicated to one hand only.
- 03:49:346 (229346|0,229346|1,229522|0,229610|1,229699|0) - Think this is pretty weird to play, but it's a personal opinion, lol.
- 03:56:287 (236287|2,236346|3) - Hmmm, would it work if you reversed this? i mean it feels a bit rigid to hit, i can see it being better if you made the LNs
- 03:56:228 (236228|6,236316|4,236405|5,236493|4) - Here change for a bit, so that snapping wont play out too weirdly, and maybe you'd change the way the LN/stream burst is done.
- 04:25:169 - Would it work if you raised the SV here to 0.75? slow down 200's kinda ticks people off, 0.5 for the ending LN is a bit overkill, player needs to leave the map satisfied, not when he messes up the LNs right at the end and then be pissed off that his last performance on the whole map was a silly slowjam ( <-- how i perceive it ).