Hiya yo bananas, from my queue!! I got lots of time on my hands so this round went quicker than I expected. I haven't recieved your M4M mod yet though. Anyways, let's get going!
Looks completely fine to me. However, the tags don't need to be capitalized though, if anything, every map I've seen up until now have it all in lowercase.
00:00:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please choose one kind of pattern or another, it's not very consistent here
00:26:479 - this feels too empty, consider adding a note here, preferably a don
00:28:979 - ^
00:58:770 (225,226) - change either to kat, I would personally prefer to change 226
01:20:020 (335) - (very optional) maybe consider changing it to a don. It's fine as it is, but I think a don fits better there.
I'm not gonna argue too much but for a 3-star Oni with only 144 BPM, the timing for OD6 is a little too strict to play with. That's just my thoughts, anyway. HP is fine as it is, the less notes, the more HP Drain you should give it.
00:13:562 (26,27) - Ctrl + G, these don't fit the singer's voice
00:18:562 (36,37) - ^ or change both to kats
00:23:562 (49,50) - change 50 to don or change both to dons to accompany the faint bell(?) sound in the background
01:22:520 (255) - consider changing this to a don as they accompany the background music more.
OD4 might suit this map better due to its low BPM and SR. HP can stay as it is or if you like, you can bump it up a notch and make it 6.
I feel like 100% volume is a little bit too loud. I personally never use anything above 70% volume. If you still want to emphasize the last bit, maybe soften the whole map by 10-20% would work out much better.
I can't really find anywhere to cut off the Kiai Time here but I think having Kiai going on for half a song certainly is too much but if you are fine with that then I have no objections.
Wellp, that's all the mods I have for you right now. I know I didn't give you all that much but a long list doesn't necessarily mean it's good stuff right? Besides, you sould be feeling good that you aren't getting too much. That just means you're doing pretty decent with your map. I like the last bits of the map A LOT. Good luck with with the ranking process!
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Looks completely fine to me. However, the tags don't need to be capitalized though, if anything, every map I've seen up until now have it all in lowercase.
Banana's Oni
00:00:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please choose one kind of pattern or another, it's not very consistent here
00:26:479 - this feels too empty, consider adding a note here, preferably a don
00:28:979 - ^
00:58:770 (225,226) - change either to kat, I would personally prefer to change 226
01:20:020 (335) - (very optional) maybe consider changing it to a don. It's fine as it is, but I think a don fits better there.
I'm not gonna argue too much but for a 3-star Oni with only 144 BPM, the timing for OD6 is a little too strict to play with. That's just my thoughts, anyway. HP is fine as it is, the less notes, the more HP Drain you should give it.
Banana's Muzukashii
00:13:562 (26,27) - Ctrl + G, these don't fit the singer's voice
00:18:562 (36,37) - ^ or change both to kats
00:23:562 (49,50) - change 50 to don or change both to dons to accompany the faint bell(?) sound in the background
01:22:520 (255) - consider changing this to a don as they accompany the background music more.
OD4 might suit this map better due to its low BPM and SR. HP can stay as it is or if you like, you can bump it up a notch and make it 6.
General
I feel like 100% volume is a little bit too loud. I personally never use anything above 70% volume. If you still want to emphasize the last bit, maybe soften the whole map by 10-20% would work out much better.
I can't really find anywhere to cut off the Kiai Time here but I think having Kiai going on for half a song certainly is too much but if you are fine with that then I have no objections.
Wellp, that's all the mods I have for you right now. I know I didn't give you all that much but a long list doesn't necessarily mean it's good stuff right? Besides, you sould be feeling good that you aren't getting too much. That just means you're doing pretty decent with your map. I like the last bits of the map A LOT. Good luck with with the ranking process!
Hinazuki <3
