Zhuriel wrote:

hi there, from my queue. you were request #18 with a priority of 24, this is mod #7.

i assume this is some sort of "best of 2015" mix by the title but i've never heard any of these songs, probably because i'm not into this kind of music in general. makes a pretty fun map though

1. 00:12:866 (4) - how about splitting these into 2 circles and a repeat slider, both for emphasis on the downbeat and to make the repeat slider the same length as 00:11:225 (1) - it doesn't work well with circles, and plays strange for me
2. 00:22:592 (9) - related, make this start on the downbeat for consistency and to make the downbeat clickable mentioned before, i'm not agree here, end of slider add unpleasant sound.
   
3. 00:59:858 (8,1) - this stream jump seems a bit excessive, it's the same spacing as the sliders after but slider spacing works a lot differently it's okay, tested with different players
   
4. 01:18:725 - i'd make this clickable, feels too weak as a slider end since it's the downbeat on the last note of the section so really important in this case i need to change slider into something (nope) or cut it to the half and it makes slider sound awful. Can't accept this recommendation
5. 03:59:037 (8) - this slider goes off the playfield it's not, check careful, not in editor.
6. 04:47:787 (3,4) - this looks inconsistent with the rest of the section, on other such patterns you place objects in a straight line continuing the slider changes in music, changes in patterns
   
7. 05:29:037 (2) - this is a triplet (2/3 snap) rhythm, similar at 05:36:537 (2,3) - 05:44:037 (2,3) - ahem, if you follow vocals then yes, but i don't follow it here
8. 05:30:912 (3,4) - i found these a bit annoying to read as some of them the slider almost completely covers the circle. maybe try spacing them a bit? tried, looks ugly
   
9. 06:47:787 (10) - sliderend off the playfield same as before
10. 07:07:944 (2) - 07:09:819 (2) - 07:11:694 (2) - not a big fan of these sliders where the return arrow points in a weird direction because of the tiny twist just before. if you used them consistently i wouldn't mind as much but it's just a few of them showing up in one part which makes it seem out of place did you mod without sound? it follows music
11. 08:50:600 (1,2,3,4) - these come a bit out of nowhere, based on the rest of the map (stuff like 08:10:756 (3,4) - for example) it looks like a much slower rhythm and it's the only rhythm of it's kind. try to find a way to make this easier to read same, listen to the music carefully

Sieg wrote:

actually I don't have any complains knowing your style, poke me when you'll decide that you want to push this

1. 00:51:537 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try increasing a bit the spacing in this pattern for consistency with the previous pattern in 00:49:662 - because the music is in a similar pitch and it plays weird having different spacing imo.
2. 01:02:201 (x) - A note is really necessary here to cover the vocals properly. It feels empty without it.
3. 01:05:951 (1,2,3,1) - This 1/4 compressed plays weird because is inconsistent with the other patterns in the kiai and it doesn't make much sense. I recommend you to make this consistent, using a pattern like this one
4. 01:15:209 (1) - It feels empty if you don't cover the instrumental properly (that appears in 1/8). So, I recommend you to reduce this slider length by 1/8 and add 2 repetitions in the slider. You used a similar pattern in 01:07:709 (2) - and it sounds much better.
5. 01:33:256 (3) - Hmm.. If I follow your logic, this slider should end in 01:33:490 - because you're following vocals in this section.
6. 01:42:748 (5) - Can I suggest you to remove this note here? Basically because the stop in vocals is really notable and this note is not representing that.
7. 01:46:381 (1) - Extend this slider till 01:46:732 - (?). It'll follow vocals properly if you ask me.
8. 01:47:084 (1) - 01:50:834 (1) - 01:54:584 (1) - 01:58:334 (1) - Would be better if you follow vocals closely. You have different ways to follow that properly, I'll leave some examples and you could follow whatever you want, but would be better if you fix that.
   
   Example 1

   
   Example 2

   
   Example 3

   
   Well, and similar rhythms are acceptable here too.
9. 02:35:951 (x) - I think a note works fine here, it feels so empty without anything even if you're focusing only in vocals in this section. Give it a try.
10. 03:14:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think a little jumpy pattern can be a good idea here due to emphasize some phrases in vocals. My idea is this but you should do some changes avoiding overlaps. If you think you have to make a lot of changes and it is not really necessary feel free to reject that, but I liked how it plays.
11. 03:40:639 (x) - I would add something here c:. Maybe ctrl+G in 03:40:287 (5) and add an additional repetition.
12. 04:23:295 (2,3) - Would be better if you keep the consistency in this pattern. I would increase a bit the spacing between these objects for consistecy with 04:15:795 (2,3).
13. 05:57:865 (1,2) - Due to the sound of the music, I think a kick slider fits better than 2 notes. Meh.. I don't know how to explain it properly, just check it out by yourself and I think you'll understand my point hehe.
14. 06:07:592 - 06:08:529 - 06:09:467 - If I were you I'd add notes in all these points. They'll follow the instrumental perfectly, in addition of that it gives a good effect when you start the new pattern in 06:11:225 -.
15. 06:15:678 (1,2) - This stack flows bad, I can understand the rest in the mapbut not this one because it's not following the music at all, so I highly recommend you to remove this stack.
16. 07:11:693 (2) - *nazi time* This slider is a bit different comparing with the others, it doesn't give the proper effect like the others give. Yeah.. you just need to curve a bit more the slider end xD like this image.
17. 07:26:225 (3) - I don't want to be extremely nazi with you, but come on Aleks, you can make this slider much nicer c: *runs*
18. 09:31:615 (3,4,5) - Increase the spacing between (3,4), it'll follow the music in a good way. I think would be good if you stack (4,5) too.
19. 10:14:289 (4) - This 3/4 sounds bad :/. I think the best option here is making that in 1/2 and reducing the volume at the slider end.

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Sieg wrote:

actually I don't have any complains knowing your style, poke me when you'll decide that you want to push this

Let me check that before something happens! Hi Owleks c: Hi mancus /o/

[Marathon]

New Combos

applied all expect last line, added nc instead of removing :P

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1. 01:33:256 (3) - Hmm.. If I follow your logic, this slider should end in 01:33:490 - because you're following vocals in this section. sounds too empty if i make it shorter
2. 02:35:951 (x) - I think a note works fine here, it feels so empty without anything even if you're focusing only in vocals in this section. Give it a try. used slider here
3. 03:14:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think a little jumpy pattern can be a good idea here due to emphasize some phrases in vocals. My idea is this but you should do some changes avoiding overlaps. If you think you have to make a lot of changes and it is not really necessary feel free to reject that, but I liked how it plays. then i reject, cuz want to save it as is
4. 03:40:639 (x) - I would add something here c:. Maybe ctrl+G in 03:40:287 (5) and add an additional repetition. looks good, hope i will not get so much have for 2 repetitions :S
5. 06:07:592 - 06:08:529 - 06:09:467 - If I were you I'd add notes in all these points. They'll follow the instrumental perfectly, in addition of that it gives a good effect when you start the new pattern in 06:11:225 -. added, but not sure, sounds 50/50 for me
6. 07:11:693 (2) - *nazi time* This slider is a bit different comparing with the others, it doesn't give the proper effect like the others give. Yeah.. you just need to curve a bit more the slider end xD like this image. never liked it, fixed in another way~

That's all.. I didn't want to be really nitpicky with you because the map in general is nice c:
Glad to see you again mapping for this "project".
I hope this can help you and see you around man!
Best of luck! *Shooting Stars*

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  тебе точно надо widescreen support?
  00:59:154 - меня беспокоит вот это место! я как бы не могу понять : почему там пусто и никак не могу определиться ,вроде там есть ритм для того что бы поставить круг ,да и переход от 00:58:920 (8,1) - одного стрима к 00:59:272 (2,3) - другому не очень комфортно для игроком,так что предлагаю ноту поставить! если нет лол о.о то хотя бы 00:59:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - отодвинь так этот стрим что бы не сливался с первым!
  01:05:014 (6) - предлагаю сдвинуть более ближе к 01:04:662 (5) - этому слайдеру,так как переход довольно резок! x:292 y:108
  01:07:709 (1) - ctrl-g может быть,что бы сразу к слайдеру был повёрнут!
  02:20:951 (9,1) - выдвинь их немного в перёд! > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6300281
  07:48:256 (7) - предлагаю убрать один реверс и 07:48:725 (1) - увеличить немного слайдер > http://puu.sh/rFr8r/de47fc4e83.png звучит немного лучше
  07:50:131 (5,1) - ^ 07:52:006 (5,1) - 07:53:880 (5,1) - 07:55:755 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - не знаю,но там никак не ложится этот удар!
  10:17:085 (5) - мб в место обычного драмфиниша попробуешь вот этот - finish ?

Gordon123 wrote:

привет!
[Marathon]

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  тебе точно надо widescreen support? не влияет
  00:59:154 - меня беспокоит вот это место! я как бы не могу понять : почему там пусто и никак не могу определиться ,вроде там есть ритм для того что бы поставить круг ,да и переход от 00:58:920 (8,1) - одного стрима к 00:59:272 (2,3) - другому не очень комфортно для игроком,так что предлагаю ноту поставить! если нет лол о.о то хотя бы 00:59:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - отодвинь так этот стрим что бы не сливался с первым! ничего не понял, там 1/4 стрим идёт
  01:05:014 (6) - предлагаю сдвинуть более ближе к 01:04:662 (5) - этому слайдеру,так как переход довольно резок! x:292 y:108 не, не надо, так нормально
  01:07:709 (1) - ctrl-g может быть,что бы сразу к слайдеру был повёрнут! будет повернут к следующему, но неудобно расположен по отношению к предыдущему, надо будет перепрыгивать реверс
  02:20:951 (9,1) - выдвинь их немного в перёд! > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6300281 не знаю зачем
  07:48:256 (7) - предлагаю убрать один реверс и 07:48:725 (1) - увеличить немного слайдер > http://puu.sh/rFr8r/de47fc4e83.png звучит немного лучше но на синем тике есть звук, который я тогда упущу
  07:50:131 (5,1) - ^ 07:52:006 (5,1) - 07:53:880 (5,1) - 07:55:755 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - не знаю,но там никак не ложится этот удар! не согласен
  10:17:085 (5) - мб в место обычного драмфиниша попробуешь вот этот - finish? ну не знаю, что-то глуховато, да и ради одного места всё равно

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Good Luck

Aleks719 wrote:

Gordon123 wrote:

привет!
[Marathon]
[list]
тебе точно надо widescreen support? не влияет
00:59:154 - меня беспокоит вот это место! я как бы не могу понять : почему там пусто и никак не могу определиться ,вроде там есть ритм для того что бы поставить круг ,да и переход от 00:58:920 (8,1) - одного стрима к 00:59:272 (2,3) - другому не очень комфортно для игроком,так что предлагаю ноту поставить! если нет лол о.о то хотя бы 00:59:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - отодвинь так этот стрим что бы не сливался с первым! ничего не понял, там 1/4 стрим идёт

00:59:154 (2) - я говорил про то что надо добавить круг,так как там его не было! а сейчас он есть ._. (совпадение?не думаю! )

Sieg wrote:

#2
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IamKwaN wrote:

Why 2015 In 10 Minutes instead of 2015 in 10 Minutes? Source please.

IamKwaN wrote:

Probably we should disqualify your map because what you are using is not official.

According to this and this, title should be 2015 in 10 Minutes.

IamKwaN wrote:

According to the facebook link, "2015 in 10 Minutes is FINALLY here!!"

MkGuh wrote:

Does that even matter? I mean, it is just a capitalization question, no one sees/care about that and also doesn't change nothing while searching the map. Honestly, this one being right/wrong I don't see a reason to disqualify just because of that. The important things about the title is there, this is what should matter.

Aleks719 wrote:

i've send a tweet to them, let's see what they reply.

IamKwaN wrote:

Sorry, I guess I have to disqualify this until a response from the mapper or confirmation from the artist is heard.

Please let me know if you want to change the title or wait for artist's confirmation, sorry for any convenience.