Hi~ from my queue.
[Skystar's Hime]
That's all from me, :3
[Skystar's Hime]
- 00:14:804 (2,3,4) - Felt a bit small in spacing, How about making it a bit more high-spaced for emphasizing? It felt a bit left behind with 00:12:804 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , you did a pretty large spacing here for the increase.
- 00:22:887 (3,4) - I can't find the reason why's this spaced highly even though it's only drums at 00:22:970 (4) - , there's no increase in sound like 00:16:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - but it's spaced much higher than it should be.
- 00:31:470 (3,4) - The stacks are a bit tricky imo, as you know it would be a bit unclear in the back of the slider tail. I would recommend placing it at another place so it isn't stacked with 00:30:970 (2) - and it will be much more clear.
- 00:33:637 (2) - You put drums away and made the spacing lower than the others at 00:26:970 (2) - 00:28:304 (2) - 00:29:637 (2) - 00:32:304 (2) - but why not 00:33:637 (2) - ?
- 00:37:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda disagree with these stacks, some people would expect that it's some streams like 00:15:554 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - or 00:12:804 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - since they're clearly an increase, or something like 01:21:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . You made 01:21:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but why not 00:37:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - with a more relaxing movement?
- 01:34:304 (1) - NC here? for a better design, since it's the corner and there's an increase in vocal too.
- 01:44:304 (1,2) - This sounded the same, how about CTRL+G-ing 01:44:304 (1) - to make it similar to 01:44:637 (2) - ? And it would make the movement more friendly too, a smaller jumps at a calm part.
- 02:19:304 (1,2,1,2) - I don't think that 02:19:637 (1,2) - represents anything, since the music seems to increase itself. Making a different type of slider.
That's all from me, :3