Tatsumaki wrote:

Hi

Easy and Normal are fine.

Hard

00:22:400 (4) - Try moving this slider over here: http://puu.sh/mOsOy/dd6ec3d911.jpg
00:38:543 (7) - Little too close to the (5), move to: x:368, y:212
00:57:557 (3) - Unsnapped note, please fix.
01:27:979 (4) - This could probably align up better with (5) like this: http://puu.sh/mOta9/8e4c9f96f4.jpg
01:28:825 (1) - Move to x:416, y:236

Light Insane

00:22:000 (4,5) - Same spacing problem as [Insane] below.
00:54:811 (3,4) - ^

Insane

00:22:000 (4,5) - This could be spaced a little better when compared to 00:21:600 (3,4) -
00:53:121 (7) - Move to x:312, y:316 for symmetry

Good luck.

-[H13]- wrote:

Won't miss the 2 kds chance ;3
Nice map, great song ;o

General

Offset 0 doesn't sound right for me. Around -18 sounded better, idk, it might be just me... I forgot about that...

Easy

00:55:022 (3,4) - Those slider shapes look kinda weird imo (100% opinion)
01:01:783 (4,5) - This would be better if a blanket.
01:13:614 (1,2) - Not well blanketed. A perfect blanket would probably be: http://prnt.sc/abisaf
01:20:374 (1,2) - Same goes for here. A perfect blanket would probably be: http://prnt.sc/abiszc
01:27:135 (4) - The way this slider's end is stacked onto the previous slider's start is kinda weird (opinion, again)

Normal

00:42:346 (4,1) - Would look neat if slider 4's start was blanketed by slider 1.
00:48:261 (5) - Weird shape. (opinion)
00:48:261 (5) - Fix blanket. Yeah, I'm a blanket maniac if you haven't noticed already ;-;

Hard

00:01:600 (2,3) - The way slider 3's end is stacked onto slider 2's start is kinda weird (opinion)
00:47:416 (3,5,6) - Meh, kinda a weird and hard-to-read-for-players-who-normally-play-Hard overlap.
00:56:501 (6,1) - Fix blanket.
00:57:557 (3,4) - ^^, even though you may not have intended to have it as a blanket, but it'll look more neat
01:00:938 (3,4) - ^^
01:01:571 (4,5) - I use this trick too as well. Though I think it's hard to read by players who normally play Hard maps.
01:00:938 (3,4,5,6) - And generally, this overlap is generally hard to read.

Light Insane

I think CS 4.2 is too much for LIGHT insane (imo)
00:58:191 (4,5) - If you're gonna use this, just move circle 4 to x:203 y:130.

Insane

Perhaps hp could be 6.5 or 7 ;o though that's completely optional
00:12:400 (6,1) - Fix blanket.
00:37:064 - Needs something placed there.
00:38:754 - ^^ Also cause it starts from a 1/4 that isn't 1/2 or 1/1, so it'll be hard to read as well.
00:40:445 and 00:40:550 - Just make the stream longer by adding two circles to the time given.
00:42:135 - Needs something placed there.
01:04:952 (4,5) - Would look prettier if a blanket
01:08:543 (5,6) - ^^
01:22:698 - Needs something placed there.
01:24:388 - ^^
01:26:078 - ^^
01:27:769 - ^^

Think that's all, good luck with your map!! Hope it gets ranked