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FelipeLink

Loctav wrote:

I ran a text comparison of both versions of this map, and while you claim to be "inspired" by it, I figured that you literally just took the .osu file from the original, rearranged a few things here and there (hey, lets move this note from 4 to 3! https://puu.sh/scA5V/51f6117050.png) or added a few weirdly named hitsounds (https://puu.sh/scAw8/003fe08374.png).

I don't call that inspired. I call that plagiarism. Maybe you should map something entirely on your own before you start getting stuff qualified. Thank you very much.

EDIT: oh well, kudos to you, you made the very inspired choice to raise the HP from 8 to 9. Well if that isn't creative, eh?

EDIT2: the silver lining here is, well, that Spy's original is maybe not that bad at all, given that majority of it still gets qualified nowadays, especially by people who may or may not have been very unfair towards Spy and his map back then.
So, you're DQ'ing my map for ''plagiarism'' and its not ''my stuff'', right.. i guess you're reffering about this rule ''Do not steal others' beatmaps, presenting them as if they're mapped by you. Do not also upload or use other people's work without their explicit permission (including, but not limited to skins and guest difficulties).''

First of all, i did use Spy map as a base, but i did respect this rule, i asked for permission and i have ScreenShots to prove that.(Those SS are already on this Thread btw)





Spy Clearly gives his permission, and already Know about this map a long time ago.

And if you even look the entirely map not ScreenShots, you will see that minor parts are similar.

I dont see any rule saying that i cant have similar sections to other map.

Loctav, i want you to reconsider my map and not just DQ without even trying to talk with me(you have a lot of ways to talk with me, osu!,discord,etc).

Well i dont see why my map is DQ, so please reconsider.
Daikyi
Claiming that "some minor parts are identical" is highly disrespectful, when people who're examining the map are finding major portions that are copied note for note over. In generic jumpstream, there's 72 ways to pattern a measure such that no jacks happen. the fact that there's so much overlap suggests that regardless of getting permission from the original mapper, have plagarized pretty badly.

If someone can take a screenshot and point out a run of like nearly 50 identically stepped notes in a file, that's not minor at all.

In addition, when you asked for "permission" all you specified was if you could use it as a "base" and for "hitsounding". it seems like your definition of "using as a base" is "copy pasting sections that you don't know how to map properly"

2c

edit: also in the opening:

why credit only for hitsounds, and not the majority of the file unless you're trying to skirt around the issue?
SpectorDG
anyway BG name is Over the Time or Space the Over ? :D
Akasha-
Okay, so on the stuff getting more serious, I was asking Spy if he does allow you use his map as base so this is our replies

Chat log
Kuo Kyoka 11:48:48 SA
hnm hey Spy, since FelipeLink keep saying you let him use your map as reference and it's almost same to your pattern but change some column, in the first place, did you allowed him to do that? was curious
Spy 11:49:21 SA
??
Spy 11:49:29 SA
Well
Spy 11:49:46 SA
I saw PM he post
Spy 11:49:59 SA
And I still own same contents here
Spy 11:50:14 SA
So I won't say something like, "I didn't say that"
Spy 11:50:17 SA
Or what.
Spy 11:50:22 SA
But I'm sure
Spy 11:50:31 SA
When he sent PM to me
Spy 11:50:53 SA
I only respond to "take mp3 and hitsounds"
Kuo Kyoka 11:51:02 SA
oh
Spy 11:51:04 SA
So I answered "feel free to use it"
Kuo Kyoka 11:51:31 SA
so it's not about pattern?
Spy 11:51:31 SA
About he said that he took my map as base or reference
Spy 11:51:36 SA
Yea.
Spy 11:51:38 SA
But
Spy 11:52:05 SA
It is always common in mapping, there is none of copyright in my map lmao
Spy 11:52:28 SA
So even if get copied, or get same patterns in other maps
Spy 11:52:38 SA
It actually no surprised imo
Spy 11:52:41 SA
But
Spy 11:53:00 SA
I just wondering what he mean about "take my map as base"
Spy 11:53:11 SA
What is base? It has many definitions
Spy 11:53:43 SA
We can refer a map for doing same following way
Kuo Kyoka 11:53:44 SA
hmm i guess both of you are misunderstanding or not understanding what is it mean at the first place
Kuo Kyoka 11:53:50 SA
yes
Spy 11:54:10 SA
It could be same following way but different patterns
Kuo Kyoka 11:54:11 SA
for me i thought it would be for reference
Spy 11:54:22 SA
Maybe language barrier
Kuo Kyoka 11:54:41 SA
like snap or something like that, but the whole map with your pattern but rearrange with his own ideas and so on ...
Spy 11:54:43 SA
But I seriously never respond about the taking map as base or reference
Kuo Kyoka 11:54:54 SA
i suppose so
Spy 11:54:58 SA
And he once asked me to check
Spy 11:55:08 SA
I have no time so only quick check
Spy 11:55:17 SA
It actually not bad and better so much
Spy 11:55:32 SA
But I told him some parts can be changed for better.
Spy 11:55:37 SA
That is
Spy 11:55:58 SA
But I'm not sure if he really did or not
Spy 11:56:22 SA
Because it was long time ago, I don't really remember how the map is at the time
Kuo Kyoka 11:56:30 SA
and you dont know his pattern was follow your map?
Kuo Kyoka 11:56:33 SA
i see
Kuo Kyoka 11:56:37 SA
i guess so
Spy 11:56:39 SA
I don't know at the first time
Spy 11:56:50 SA
Until get qualified, and people told me that
Spy 11:57:05 SA
But I still haven't check it due to I'm busy for my exams
Spy 11:57:08 SA
So
Spy 11:57:13 SA
Give a conclusion
Spy 11:57:34 SA
Copy is ok, referring is ok, everything is ok
Spy 11:57:43 SA
You can do it this time due to I mapped this
Spy 11:57:50 SA
But how about next time?
Kuo Kyoka 11:58:05 SA
yup
Spy 11:58:15 SA
A good mapper should has independent opinions on mapping ideas
Spy 11:58:26 SA
We know sometimes may have no idea how to do it
Spy 11:58:37 SA
It is ok if refer other maps
Kuo Kyoka 11:58:39 SA
well kind of not comfort me when he keep posting "spy let me use his map etc." everytime
Spy 11:58:51 SA
Like I did it in my earlier maps when I just started to mapping
Spy 11:59:04 SA
Well
Spy 11:59:18 SA
He may misunderstood
Spy 11:59:27 SA
Or maybe I didn't say it clearly
Spy 12:00:17 CH
I don't mind if he keep those patterns
Spy 12:00:18 CH
But
Spy 12:00:33 CH
How people think about him and his maps may be another things
Kuo Kyoka 12:00:59 CH
but hmm, i already aid it on thread that every mappers has their own ideas and opinion on they ways to mapping or doing they own things so ... i kinda dont like someone just directly use someone else ideas and fix to his own map
Spy 12:01:14 CH

Kuo Kyoka 12:01:14 CH
well thats the case
Spy 12:01:19 CH
I don't like to
Spy 12:01:21 CH
Too
Spy 12:01:38 CH
When I saw someone took my SV change in same song
Spy 12:01:41 CH
I actually mad
Spy 12:01:50 CH
But I have nothing could do for this and
Spy 12:01:57 CH
Change other view is
Spy 12:02:13 CH
Maybe my works are good so they took it
Kuo Kyoka 12:02:16 CH
i guess both of you havent explain better so happen misunderstanding
Kuo Kyoka 12:02:27 CH
lmao gg
Kuo Kyoka 12:02:33 CH

Kuo Kyoka 12:02:48 CH
that hana map?
Spy 12:03:28 CH
But anyway I think, it will be better to think about how to map in better instead of keeping my patterns may be a lesson here I think
Kuo Kyoka 12:03:34 CH
i dont like people stealing sv or pattern things and put that to their own maps and say its by them so i can understand that
Spy 12:03:36 CH
Yea but anyway I don't care anymore
Kuo Kyoka 12:03:49 CH
ah okay
Spy 12:03:55 CH
From now I'm taking everything easily
Spy 12:03:57 CH
So
Spy 12:04:09 CH
Leave these to the community and staffs
Kuo Kyoka 12:04:25 CH
hmm if that is your wish then ok
Spy 12:04:50 CH
I just hope none of them to disturb me for meme or any drama related to my maps
Spy 12:05:00 CH
Including case like this
Kuo Kyoka 12:05:27 CH
i just cant stand when someone use same patterns with other map for more than 10 times conflict, in the meantime it got 50+, feel like your map but just more jacks and double 1/4 burst changed etc.
Kuo Kyoka 12:05:39 CH
just leave that
Kuo Kyoka 12:05:47 CH
don't reply it back
Kuo Kyoka 12:06:06 CH
you own the things so ...
Spy 12:06:16 CH
Well
Spy 12:06:57 CH
I don't want to break his works by this case
Spy 12:07:07 CH
But I'm actually a bit innocent
Spy 12:07:30 CH
I just feel like
Spy 12:07:50 CH
"Spy said he agreed but now he said no, he is a liar"
Spy 12:07:53 CH
But I'm not
Spy 12:08:42 CH
I just hope everything will be fine and not to mention me anymore
Spy 12:09:16 CH
Since it get dq'd
Kuo Kyoka 12:09:19 CH
if this one explained well i guess you're fine to do that
Spy 12:10:01 CH
There is no case that requalified directly without any changes if not staff's mistakes
Spy 12:10:53 CH
So i think try to change those parts that get mentioned will be faster than arguing "Spy said what"
Spy 12:11:06 CH
Anyway I guess that's all
Spy 12:12:00 CH
I hope the map will be fine then. And feel sorry for mapper. Also I'm tired getting bothered from Brazilian sending trash meme to me in my PM or Facebook.
Spy 12:12:09 CH
*of
Kuo Kyoka 12:13:18 CH
i read the dq stuffs, argee with Loctav about this.
like hey, its your map, not other's map, your map your ideas, if you think people let you use their patterns then you should do that as reference, reference only, and it still feel like your map but remapped a bit .
on thread feel like he just avoiding he fact that he use your patterns, and say jack from me so this is my map imo
Kuo Kyoka 12:13:34 CH
ok good
Spy 12:13:49 CH

Kuo Kyoka 12:14:17 CH
in anycase, its his work, better make it with his own ways, dont get limited by someone else, thats all
Spy 12:14:28 CH
I don't really care how mapper's think. Since I'm retired and not QAT. I'm just a mapper that rank maps sometimes
Kuo Kyoka 12:14:42 CH
no, you are noob
Kuo Kyoka 12:14:47 CH

Spy 12:14:47 CH
I actually agree
Spy 12:14:58 CH
With Loctav
Spy 12:15:01 CH
But
Spy 12:15:03 CH

Spy 12:15:14 CH
Dude I'm so tired of arguing this or that
Spy 12:15:23 CH
Can we not to talk about this anymore
Spy 12:15:25 CH

Kuo Kyoka 12:15:42 CH
ok so just igrone that brazil meme on facebook or your pm then, you dont have to reply things you dont want to do so ..
Kuo Kyoka 12:15:52 CH
a ok
Spy 12:15:59 CH
I actually ignored
Kuo Kyoka 12:16:36 CH
and hey, can i post this to thread? if this explained well and they understand it, i hope the things are more better
Spy 12:16:51 CH

Spy 12:17:06 CH
It's up to you, just don't bother me for this again
Kuo Kyoka 12:17:16 CH
ok
Kuo Kyoka 12:17:26 CH
i will bother you other thigs then haha
Spy 12:17:37 CH

Kuo Kyoka 12:18:05 CH
also thanks, i guess this explain, i dont want to say more in thread about pattern things
Kuo Kyoka 12:18:32 CH

Spy 12:18:56 CH
Hope it will be helpful then
Kuo Kyoka 12:19:09 CH
okay


IMG / So that you won't think I made it by my self
The uptop messages can't sync to my PC so I can't srceenshot it








I hope this one explain well and cooldown this situlation.
Atrue
And I would say, usually no one will ask for using the diffs themselves to mod it into their own, since plagiarism is a severe problem. So maybe there is, in a way, some misunderstanding between you and the original mapper. Since usually the punishment will be much more severe than only a disqualification, and you already see the real attitude of the original mapper, just make a map on your own. And never do this anymore.
roko100789
You guys already proved your point a long time ago, why don't you just suggest him ideas for new patterns? The music is repetitive, and Felipe has changed a lot of things on the map already, if he didn't change those patterns, he literally didn't find a way to do so (you see, he asked the modders if there was any problem with both of the maps being that close on some parts). Attacking him like this is just going to make things worse; he has already had his lesson, so you could stop now and help him.

Also Loctav, considering this is a rhythm game, you shouldn't judge a map by just looking at it on the notepad, neither should you a mapper's intentions nor anything like that before looking at the rest of the thread, this is pretty unprofessional, and honestly, I never expected that from you.
spoonguy
EDIT: apparently the first part of this post is not needed anymore
I'll be keeping the rest though

Also another thing I'd like to say is that Juan, Protastic and Niv were not related to the original Space Time, so it's a bit unfair to make that last comment.


@Daikyi: Half of your post is "Good point!!"
But the other half just sounds like you're trying to argue that Link was intentionally stealing a map for the sake of ranking it in his name.
There's no need to discuss or make points about motives or how good or bad a person is here. That'll only lead to destroying Link's reputation as a person, not a mapper.
Of course, if you do believe Felipe deserves that happening to him, we can beautifully, coolly and calmly argue about that later.
Ayachi-
There will be no problems if you just map everything by yourself at the start from scratch
lenpai
Such a song with repetivity if redone from scratch with the intentions of being a fairly difficult map will always end up with a seemingly plagiarized result (consider the modding phase).

Going denser is absurd. The simplicity of the song doesnt give way to utilize a different layering.

The only way is to go less dense with the issue at hand.

Any contradictions with reason are greatly appreciated.
snoverpk_old
Akasha-


Simply you can done these pattern, or neat with it with your double-jump jack pattern you did it on chorus. It's not that hard for you to think of new pattern I believe
Even it's a repetitive hardcore song, but there are a plenty of patterns that could be fit in your map, your style, your ways, no need to be strict from other maps anyway
Try to map with your own, independence and think a pattern that could comfortable while playing and good to you. Good luck!
deadbill
well, why u no make it as a collab instead of claiming it as your own diff? gotta be an easy solution imho *grabs popcorn*
Topic Starter
FelipeLink
Okay, so to end this ''drama'' or something, i'm doing a hard work on my space time.

When i finish everything that i need to, i will update the map!

@Feerum

I appreciate your mod, as you said i changed the PR of every piano section, looked about those anchors, changed too.
spoonguy
Felipe wanted me to post this.
We discussed a few things in IRC, I pointed out stuff and gave some ideas.
EDIT: oh yeah no kds man
don't forget to nOT give me kds
oof
2016-11-11 19:48 FelipeLink: a detalhe
2016-11-11 19:48 FelipeLink: o finalzinho eu ainda vou modificar pra n ficar ''parecido com o spy''
2016-11-11 19:48 FelipeLink: ainda n mudei isso
2016-11-11 19:49 spoonguy: é eu percebi que tava meio parecido ainda
2016-11-11 19:53 FelipeLink: e.e
2016-11-11 19:53 FelipeLink: eu vou ajeitar o final junto com o snoop
2016-11-11 19:53 FelipeLink: quando ele chegar as 22h
2016-11-11 19:53 FelipeLink: mas aí oq tu acha q da pra moddar na minah space time?
2016-11-11 19:53 FelipeLink: algo desconfortavel?
2016-11-11 19:55 spoonguy: desconfortável eu não manjo muito
2016-11-11 19:55 spoonguy: mas algo que me incomoda é que tanto você quanto o spy não colocaram o burst nessa parte aqui
2016-11-11 19:55 spoonguy: 00:18:377 -
2016-11-11 19:55 spoonguy: igual vocês fizeram quando o mesmo som veio nas outras partes da música
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: 01:24:035 -
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: tipo aqui
2016-11-11 19:56 FelipeLink: vc diz 1/8?
2016-11-11 19:56 FelipeLink: 00:18:420 - aq?
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: sim
2016-11-11 19:56 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 19:56 FelipeLink: vou botar
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: não, não aí
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: é depois
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: 00:18:677 -
2016-11-11 19:56 FelipeLink: ah é
2016-11-11 19:56 spoonguy: se for seguir a outra é aqui
2016-11-11 19:57 spoonguy: 00:18:977 -
2016-11-11 19:57 spoonguy: deveria ter uma nota aqui também
2016-11-11 19:58 FelipeLink: me manda uma print de como ficou essa section com o 1/8
2016-11-11 19:58 FelipeLink: acho q eu buguei e.e
2016-11-11 19:59 spoonguy: aliás não
2016-11-11 19:59 spoonguy: 00:18:763 -
2016-11-11 19:59 spoonguy: acho que é aqui
2016-11-11 19:59 FelipeLink: ah ta blz
2016-11-11 19:59 FelipeLink: sim, sim
2016-11-11 20:00 FelipeLink: tbm acho
2016-11-11 20:01 FelipeLink: ta blz, addei
2016-11-11 20:05 spoonguy: 02:08:949 - essa parte aqui ainda parece um pouco em algumas seções
2016-11-11 20:05 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:05 spoonguy: tenta só lembrar o padrão de onde vem jump e remapear a seção de novo
2016-11-11 20:05 spoonguy: não usa nada de referência
2016-11-11 20:05 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:06 spoonguy: e onde vem minijack também
2016-11-11 20:06 spoonguy: só lembra de que padrão você usou pra isso e faz tudo de novo
2016-11-11 20:06 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-11 20:08 spoonguy: caralho tá foda hoje
2016-11-11 20:08 spoonguy: só me deixem ir 5 minutos sem me interromper em algo
2016-11-11 20:08 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-11 20:08 FelipeLink: rip familia
2016-11-11 20:12 spoonguy: "não, tem a marca dessa toalha sim, deixa eu pegar ela pra você ver"
2016-11-11 20:12 spoonguy: CARALHO
2016-11-11 20:12 spoonguy: porque não pegou a marca da toalha desde o início
2016-11-11 20:13 FelipeLink: EOQUE
2016-11-11 20:13 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-11 20:13 spoonguy: tipo, caramba
2016-11-11 20:14 spoonguy: porque eu gastei 6 minutos procurando pela marca
2016-11-11 20:14 FelipeLink: kek
2016-11-11 20:14 FelipeLink: é pq vc como neto
2016-11-11 20:14 FelipeLink: tem q fazer tudo
2016-11-11 20:14 FelipeLink: :v
2016-11-11 20:19 spoonguy: 00:30:035 -
2016-11-11 20:19 spoonguy: achei desnecessário isso aqui
2016-11-11 20:19 spoonguy: quebra um pouco a consistência aqui e usa single notes ao invés de jumps
2016-11-11 20:20 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:20 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:20 FelipeLink: minijack de single?
2016-11-11 20:21 spoonguy: sim
2016-11-11 20:22 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:22 spoonguy: ae estou liberado
2016-11-11 20:23 FelipeLink: nice
2016-11-11 20:23 spoonguy: hm, uma coisa que eu ainda me incomodo um pouco é que você ainda está imitando alguns "padrões" que tem no mapa do spy
2016-11-11 20:23 spoonguy: 00:51:977 -
2016-11-11 20:23 spoonguy: na ultima vez que você teve esses três kicks
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: você mapeou eles como minijacks
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: (como o spy)
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: mas aqui você usou uma jumptrill no lugar de minijacks
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: (como o spy)
2016-11-11 20:24 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: é uma boa tu quebrar um pouco a lógica que você usou no mapa antigo quando estiver remapeando
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: e só mapear normalmente
2016-11-11 20:24 FelipeLink: right, vou fazer minijack
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: usando os seus conceitos de consistência e etc
2016-11-11 20:24 FelipeLink: sim, sim
2016-11-11 20:24 spoonguy: lembra de repetir isso nas próximas vezes que isso acontecer na música
2016-11-11 20:25 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:25 spoonguy: tipo, quando você for fazer a space de novo, só compara com o mapa do spy depois que você tiver terminado
2016-11-11 20:25 spoonguy: e tenta quebrar a relação do mapa atual com o passado o máximo possível
2016-11-11 20:25 FelipeLink: certo
2016-11-11 20:25 spoonguy: as vezes você tá tentando ser original mas ainda tá sendo influenciado por estar olhando a sua versão antiga e a do spy
2016-11-11 20:26 FelipeLink: hm, saquei
2016-11-11 20:33 spoonguy: hm eu realmente não tenho muito o que falar das patterns
2016-11-11 20:34 spoonguy: mas já que estamos falando de quebrar a conexão com o passado mesmo
2016-11-11 20:34 spoonguy: 01:03:120 - que tal ir diminuindo a velocidade aos poucos aqui até a parte das lns?
2016-11-11 20:34 spoonguy: a velocidade final não precisa ser algo do tipo 0.5x claro
2016-11-11 20:34 FelipeLink: 'tipo como?
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: hm embora você teria que aumentar a velocidade aqui de novo pra encaixar na atmosfera 01:03:120 -
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: ou não
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: tem pessoas que não fariam isso
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: eeeeeeeeee
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: eu digo tipo
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: você colocar um sv por measure
2016-11-11 20:35 spoonguy: fazendo a velocidade cair aos poucos até ao redor de 0.75x
2016-11-11 20:36 spoonguy: e a parte das lns seria um slowjam
2016-11-11 20:36 FelipeLink: LUL
2016-11-11 20:36 spoonguy: seria um toque a mais que o spy nem você deram
2016-11-11 20:36 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:36 FelipeLink: pode ser i guess
2016-11-11 20:36 FelipeLink: por measure line tu diz a cada 1/4 ?
2016-11-11 20:37 spoonguy: measure são 4 beats amigo
2016-11-11 20:37 spoonguy: é uma mudança beeeeem lenta
2016-11-11 20:37 FelipeLink: ah
2016-11-11 20:37 spoonguy: aí você tem que meio que contar quantas beats tem até lá e fazer seus cálculos
2016-11-11 20:37 FelipeLink: saquei
2016-11-11 20:37 FelipeLink: n sabia o nome dela
2016-11-11 20:37 spoonguy: treinamento pra fuvest
2016-11-11 20:37 FelipeLink: LMFAO
2016-11-11 20:38 FelipeLink: Mas aonde eu começaria a desacelerar?
2016-11-11 20:38 FelipeLink: 01:03:120 - a partir daqui?
2016-11-11 20:38 FelipeLink: 01:25:063 - aqui voltaria a 1.0
2016-11-11 20:38 FelipeLink: ?
2016-11-11 20:38 spoonguy: a parte das lns seria um slowjam moço
2016-11-11 20:38 spoonguy: não faz muito sentido voltar pra 1.o eahueah
2016-11-11 20:39 FelipeLink: aa tu diz as lns do piano tbm
2016-11-11 20:39 spoonguy: mas sim pro primeiro
2016-11-11 20:39 spoonguy: claro, a atmosfera dá um tom ainda mais lerdo ali
2016-11-11 20:39 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:39 FelipeLink: kek
2016-11-11 20:39 spoonguy: seria tipo um cockblock se você diminuisse a velocidade aos poucos e só voltasse ao normal ali
2016-11-11 20:40 FelipeLink: 02:07:577 - aqui volta o 1.0 entom?
2016-11-11 20:40 spoonguy: que nada amigo, aí você vai fazer a transição da velocidade atual pra 1.0
2016-11-11 20:40 spoonguy: daí até 02:08:949 - aqui vai ser a transição pra 1.0
2016-11-11 20:41 spoonguy: ou pra uma velocidade um pouco menor pra ter uma mudança mais brusca no começo dessa seção
2016-11-11 20:41 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:41 spoonguy: tipo ir até 0.9 um 1/8 antes daqui 02:08:949 -
2016-11-11 20:41 spoonguy: aí você tem que ir testando amigo
2016-11-11 20:41 spoonguy: aí quando chegar aí você muda pra 1.0
2016-11-11 20:42 FelipeLink: oks, anotado, vou trabalhar
2016-11-11 20:42 spoonguy: se você quiser dá pra você trabalhar a música inteira em svs atmosféricos
2016-11-11 20:43 spoonguy: não precisa ser aquele cu que muda de um segundo pra outro de 1.0 pra 0.5 claro hua
2016-11-11 20:43 spoonguy: to falando de diferenças de velocidade bem mínimas mesmo
2016-11-11 20:43 spoonguy: quem sabe você consiga reviver o ftb assim
2016-11-11 20:43 FelipeLink: lmfao
2016-11-11 20:43 spoonguy: mas sério, qualquer detalhe a mais ou ideia nova que você tenha de expressar alguma parte dessa música já vai dar bom
2016-11-11 20:43 FelipeLink: tem 49 measures até aqui 02:08:949 - começando no 01:03:120 -
2016-11-11 20:44 spoonguy: lol 49
2016-11-11 20:45 spoonguy: isso é sinal que o autor fez alguma bosta na parte do piano
2016-11-11 20:45 spoonguy: talvez seja relacionado às lns estarem desync
2016-11-11 20:45 spoonguy: (ou que você contou errado
2016-11-11 20:45 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-11 20:45 FelipeLink: sim
2016-11-11 20:46 FelipeLink: vou diminuindo 0.01 por measure line?
2016-11-11 20:46 FelipeLink: dai quando chegar no 2:07 subo 0.10 a cada 1/1 ?
2016-11-11 20:47 spoonguy: é, são 49 mesmo
2016-11-11 20:47 FelipeLink: :C
2016-11-11 20:47 spoonguy: hm daria certo fazer isso
2016-11-11 20:48 spoonguy: a velocidade final seria ao redor de 0.88
2016-11-11 20:48 spoonguy: eu acho que isso não é notável o suficiente na verdade
2016-11-11 20:48 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-11 20:48 spoonguy: se você fizer 0.02 seria 0.76
2016-11-11 20:48 spoonguy: no final
2016-11-11 20:48 FelipeLink: mas e pra subir
2016-11-11 20:48 FelipeLink: n seria mto brusco?
2016-11-11 20:49 spoonguy: é pra isso que servem testes garoto xd
2016-11-11 20:49 spoonguy: vamos ver
2016-11-11 20:49 FelipeLink: ashusahu
2016-11-11 20:49 spoonguy: 02:06:206 - muda pra 0.76 aqui
2016-11-11 20:49 spoonguy: e vamos ver o que fazer pra aumentar a velocidade lá
2016-11-11 20:50 FelipeLink: 47 measure aí né?
2016-11-11 20:50 FelipeLink: vou usar o tool do agka
2016-11-11 20:50 spoonguy: não calma
2016-11-11 20:50 spoonguy: não precisa
2016-11-11 20:50 spoonguy: 02:07:577 -
2016-11-11 20:50 spoonguy: aqui que começa a ir mais rápido
2016-11-11 20:50 spoonguy: são 4 beats
2016-11-11 20:51 spoonguy: de 0.76 pra 1.0 dá pra você aumentar 0.03 por cada 1/2
2016-11-11 20:51 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:51 FelipeLink: blz
2016-11-11 20:53 spoonguy: ficou brusco?
2016-11-11 20:53 FelipeLink: hm mais ou menos
2016-11-11 20:53 FelipeLink: acho q ta ok
2016-11-11 20:54 spoonguy: então a parte que acelera tá pronta já
2016-11-11 20:54 spoonguy: só falta a parte que fica mais devagar aos poucos
2016-11-11 20:55 spoonguy: e por consistência, você teria que fazer um slowjam aqui também
2016-11-11 20:55 FelipeLink: a que desacelera da pra usar a tool do agka, o snoop foi pegar o link pra mim
2016-11-11 20:55 spoonguy: 03:58:663 -
2016-11-11 20:55 spoonguy: com a mesma velocidade claro, mas você não precisa mudar bruscamente
2016-11-11 20:55 spoonguy: você pode mudar aos poucos pra 0.76 e só chegar nessa velocidade aqui 04:00:035 -
2016-11-11 20:56 spoonguy: ou um pouco antes
2016-11-11 20:56 spoonguy: acho que ficaria melhor um pouco antes
2016-11-11 20:56 spoonguy: dividir em partes iguais do começo da parte lenta até aqui 03:59:692 -
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: bom, 24 é um número bom pra trabalhar
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: só dividir por 6
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: seria 0.04 por 1/2
2016-11-11 20:57 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: bom enfim
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: eu dei as ideias aí
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: se vire no resto amigo
2016-11-11 20:57 spoonguy: quanto mais você inovar enquanto remapear melhor
2016-11-11 20:58 spoonguy: só não inove demais
2016-11-11 20:58 spoonguy: space time não é música pra essas coisas xd
2016-11-11 20:58 FelipeLink: beleuzas

spoonguy is worthless and dumb
Wh1teh

spoonguy wrote:

"Very touching, I cry every time"

Apparently Felipe is about to just do it anyway.
But don't ever use that argument again, alright?
EDIT: removed the meme. His argument was, if Felipe made the chart 100% himself, he wouldn't be accused of plagiarism. If you think plagiarism should be allowed, I will kindly ask you to go fuck yourself.
Soul Evans
^^ I love this man

@felipe, i'm interested in modding this map, would you kindly update the map and before you qualify you let me take a look at it? thanks
Guilhermeziat
Hi, here's a mod for your map as you requested :)
There wasn't much to point out, but the map surely improved a whole lot since the first version, good job!

Plagiarism
00:08:092 (8092|0,8092|1,8177|1,8177|2,8263|3,8263|2) - This pattern right off the bat doesn't seem too friendly. I also have no idea if you're trying to keep some sort of consistency with the kicks on the first column from there on, it seems like you do but then it gets messed up? I don't know. My suggestion would be change the last jump to a 14 instead of 34, so the pattern isn't so aggressive. I'd also suggest you to try keeping the consistency with the kicks better on one of the columns (doesn't need to be coluimn 1) but I guess you're already layering them with the jumps, so up to you.

00:29:349 (29349|0,29435|1,29520|0,29606|1,29692|0,29777|1,29863|0,29949|1) - Seems a bit inconsistent compared to the rest of the patterning. Huge left hand trill all of a sudden, adds a bit of a spike, would be good if you smoothened that out, maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6545993 (anchor on column 2 stays, but In my opinion that's a lot better than a big trill all of a sudden) This one does make me feel a bit uncomfortable, so please change it, doesn't need to be the way I showed on the screenshot, just make the patterning more fluid there.

00:30:035 (30035|2,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|1,30206|0) - Again with this kind of jumpjack. This one is fine, since I told you to change what comes before, but just letting you know that putting this right after the huge trill was a dick move (^:

00:51:977 (51977|2,51977|3,52063|1,52063|2,52149|0,52149|1) - Ok so, I'm going to ask you to pay attention to the synth sounds and see if you agree with me that making those jumps 34 12 and 14 (or 34 12 23, whatever floats your boat) makes a ton more sense than that. Second synth note goes an octave higher than the first one, I think it's only fair that you don't provoke a jack in between them.

02:08:092 (128092|0,128092|1,128177|3,128177|2,128263|1,128263|0,128349|2,128349|3) - This doesn't feel like it should be layered that hard, but I can't think of another way to map it. I do think only the jump at the 1/1 part pointed out deserves to be a jump, the rest doesn' t.

Everything on the drops and in between is perfectly fine.

05:27:206 - Listen to the hi-hats here. Don't you think a mini-jack for them would go just fine? I think it's a good idea in my opinion, given you put them at the right place.. I could help you on that later if you want to. They happen in other times too:
05:28:663 -
05:29:863 - Here, they don't form a minijack, but I think that just making them consistent on the same column is already enough to produce a really fun pattern to play
05:31:235 -
05:32:692 -

And it goes on until the last burst. I think you'll be able to tell the rest of the times they happen, since they're so out there compared to the rest of the instruments.

05:37:235 (337235|3,337235|2,337320|1,337320|2,337406|0,337406|1) - Again with this pattern. Just mirror it if you want, so at least this one will go the other way or something. The pattern is fine here since it's already at the end of the song and you don't need to worry about it being the beggining (^: but that's been repeated for like the 5th or 6th time throughout the song.


Good luck with your map.
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your map as you requested :)
There wasn't much to point out, but the map surely improved a whole lot since the first version, good job!

Plagiarism
00:08:092 (8092|0,8092|1,8177|1,8177|2,8263|3,8263|2) - This pattern right off the bat doesn't seem too friendly. I also have no idea if you're trying to keep some sort of consistency with the kicks on the first column from there on, it seems like you do but then it gets messed up? I don't know. My suggestion would be change the last jump to a 14 instead of 34, so the pattern isn't so aggressive. I'd also suggest you to try keeping the consistency with the kicks better on one of the columns (doesn't need to be coluimn 1) but I guess you're already layering them with the jumps, so up to you. Right, changed, yeah i'll try to stick to one column for consistency.

00:29:349 (29349|0,29435|1,29520|0,29606|1,29692|0,29777|1,29863|0,29949|1) - Seems a bit inconsistent compared to the rest of the patterning. Huge left hand trill all of a sudden, adds a bit of a spike, would be good if you smoothened that out, maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6545993 (anchor on column 2 stays, but In my opinion that's a lot better than a big trill all of a sudden) This one does make me feel a bit uncomfortable, so please change it, doesn't need to be the way I showed on the screenshot, just make the patterning more fluid there.
O, right i agree with you, after adding some hands i guess i did some ohtrills @.@, well changed to something more smooth


00:30:035 (30035|2,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|1,30206|0) - Again with this kind of jumpjack. This one is fine, since I told you to change what comes before, but just letting you know that putting this right after the huge trill was a dick move (^:
(^:, well i guess its fine now because no more trill

00:51:977 (51977|2,51977|3,52063|1,52063|2,52149|0,52149|1) - Ok so, I'm going to ask you to pay attention to the synth sounds and see if you agree with me that making those jumps 34 12 and 14 (or 34 12 23, whatever floats your boat) makes a ton more sense than that. Second synth note goes an octave higher than the first one, I think it's only fair that you don't provoke a jack in between them.
oki, changed

02:08:092 (128092|0,128092|1,128177|3,128177|2,128263|1,128263|0,128349|2,128349|3) - This doesn't feel like it should be layered that hard, but I can't think of another way to map it. I do think only the jump at the 1/1 part pointed out deserves to be a jump, the rest doesn' t.
Oki, changed to single notes, jump only on the 1/1 now o/


Everything on the drops and in between is perfectly fine.

05:27:206 - Listen to the hi-hats here. Don't you think a mini-jack for them would go just fine? I think it's a good idea in my opinion, given you put them at the right place.. I could help you on that later if you want to. They happen in other times too:
05:28:663 -
05:29:863 - Here, they don't form a minijack, but I think that just making them consistent on the same column is already enough to produce a really fun pattern to play
05:31:235 -
05:32:692 -

And it goes on until the last burst. I think you'll be able to tell the rest of the times they happen, since they're so out there compared to the rest of the instruments.
i'll talk to you on private about this, maybe i'll apply

05:37:235 (337235|3,337235|2,337320|1,337320|2,337406|0,337406|1) - Again with this pattern. Just mirror it if you want, so at least this one will go the other way or something. The pattern is fine here since it's already at the end of the song and you don't need to worry about it being the beggining (^: but that's been repeated for like the 5th or 6th time throughout the song.
Oki, mirrored and changed a few notes here and the for jack avoidance


Good luck with your map.
Thanks for the Guil, really appreciate.
shadowsnoop
Okay, checked every single note looking for possible conflicted placements between spy and felipe´s map.

Note: Voice chat was used.

FML

2016-11-11 17:38 shadowsnoop: 00:47:606 (47606|2,47692|3,47692|1,47692|0,47777|2,47863|0,47863|1) -
2016-11-11 17:41 shadowsnoop: 01:23:520 (83520|0,83520|2) -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 -
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2016-11-11 17:53 FelipeLink: oks
2016-11-11 17:53 shadowsnoop: 02:54:892 (174892|3,174977|2,175063|1,175149|0) -
2016-11-11 17:54 FelipeLink: k
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2016-11-11 17:59 shadowsnoop: 03:06:549 (186549|0,186635|1,186720|2,186806|3,186892|2,186977|1) -
2016-11-11 18:00 shadowsnoop: 03:07:492 (187492|3,187577|2,187663|3,187749|1,187835|2,187920|3,188006|2,188092|1,188177|3) -
2016-11-11 18:01 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:01 shadowsnoop: 03:15:463 (195463|2,195549|3,195635|1,195720|3,195806|2) -
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2016-11-11 18:04 shadowsnoop: 03:20:863 (200863|0,200949|3,200949|2,201035|1,201120|0) -
2016-11-11 18:05 FelipeLink: 02:42:206 (162206|1,162206|0,162292|2,162377|1,162463|2) - xksxkksx, changed
2016-11-11 18:06 shadowsnoop: 03:22:149 (202149|2,202235|1,202320|0,202406|2) -
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2016-11-11 18:11 shadowsnoop: 03:30:720 (210720|3,210806|1,210892|0,210977|1,211063|3,211149|2,211235|1) -
2016-11-11 18:12 FelipeLink: aight
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2016-11-11 18:27 shadowsnoop: 00:24:892 (24892|0) - >2
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2016-11-11 18:34 FelipeLink: ay
2016-11-11 18:34 shadowsnoop: 00:53:349 (53349|0,53435|1,53520|2,53520|3,53606|0,53692|2,53777|1,53863|2,53863|0,53863|3) -
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2016-11-11 18:41 shadowsnoop: 01:25:063 - +1
2016-11-11 18:42 FelipeLink: k
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2016-11-12 19:53 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-12 19:53 shadowsnoop: 04:37:063 (277063|0,277149|1,277235|3,277406|3,277577|3,277663|1,277749|3,277835|1,277920|3) -
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2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: parecido
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: 05:11:606 (311606|0,311692|3,311692|2,311777|0,311777|1,311863|3,311949|2,312035|0,312035|1) -
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2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: ?
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: oops
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2016-11-12 20:10 FelipeLink: JOOOOOOOOOOOOJ
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2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:30:035 (330035|3,330120|2,330206|1,330206|0,330292|3,330377|1,330549|0,330549|2) -
2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:32:435 (332435|2,332606|3,332606|1,332777|0,332863|1,332949|3,332949|2,333035|0,333120|2,333292|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:34:320 (334320|3,334320|2,334406|0,334492|1,334577|0,334663|2,334663|3,334749|1,334835|0,334920|2,335006|3,335006|1,335177|2,335349|2,335349|3,335520|0,335606|2,335692|1,335692|3,335777|0,335949|1,336035|2,336035|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:37:492 (337492|2,337577|0,337663|1,337749|3,337920|2,338092|3,338263|2,338349|1,338435|3,338520|2,338606|1,338777|3) -
2016-11-12 20:13 FelipeLink: ;w;[
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:39:635 (339635|2,339720|1,339806|3,339892|0,339977|2,340063|1) -
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:40:320 (340320|2,340406|1,340492|3,340663|2,340835|3,341006|2,341092|1,341177|3,341263|0,341520|3) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:50:606 (350606|1,350692|2,350777|0,350863|1,350949|3,351035|2,351120|0,351120|1,351292|1,351377|3,351463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:52:149 (352149|0,352235|1,352320|2,352492|0) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: 05:53:006 (353006|1,353177|0,353349|1,353435|2,353520|0,353606|1,353692|3,353863|0,354035|2,354120|3,354206|0,354206|1) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: E-E
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: e-e
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: holly fucking shit 05:54:377 (354377|3,354549|0,354720|1,354806|3,354892|0,354977|1,355063|2,355235|0,355406|2,355577|0,355749|1,355920|0,356092|1,356177|2,356263|0,356349|1,356435|3,356520|2,356606|1,356606|0,356692|3,356777|2,356863|1,356949|2) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: 05:58:149 (358149|2,358235|1,358320|0,358320|2,358492|1,358577|2,358663|0,358749|2,358835|1,359006|3) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: bem parecido 05:59:092 (359092|2,359177|0,359177|1,359263|0,359263|1,359349|2,359349|3,359435|1,359520|2,359606|3,359692|0,359692|1,359863|3,360035|1,360035|0) -
2016-11-12 20:17 shadowsnoop: smh again 06:00:720 (360720|0,360892|2,361063|0,361235|1,361406|0,361577|1,361663|2,361749|0,361835|1,361920|3,362006|2,362092|1,362092|0,362177|3,362263|1,362349|2,362435|0,362435|1,362606|3,362777|0,362949|1,363035|3,363120|0,363292|1,363463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:03:635 (363635|2,363806|0,363977|1,364149|0,364320|1,364406|2,364492|0,364577|1,364663|3,364749|2,364835|0,364835|1,364920|3,365006|1,365177|0,365177|1,365349|3) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: I just want to buttfuck you right now
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:09:463 (369463|1,369549|2,369635|0,369720|1,369806|0,369892|2,369977|0,370063|1,370149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: jej
2016-11-12 21:00 shadowsnoop: 05:59:349 -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:035 (35|2,206|1,292|3,377|1) -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:977 (977|3,1063|1,1149|2,1235|3,1406|0) -
2016-11-12 21:04 shadowsnoop: 00:08:263 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:692 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:777 -

Gave some suggestions, added some hands, checked notes consistency, changed some patterns... map´s looking fine!
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

shadowsnoop wrote:

Okay, checked every single note looking for possible conflicted placements between spy and felipe´s map.

Note: Voice chat was used.

FML

2016-11-11 17:38 shadowsnoop: 00:47:606 (47606|2,47692|3,47692|1,47692|0,47777|2,47863|0,47863|1) -
2016-11-11 17:41 shadowsnoop: 01:23:520 (83520|0,83520|2) -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 (80692|0,80777|2) -
2016-11-11 17:44 shadowsnoop: 02:41:863 -
2016-11-11 17:47 shadowsnoop: 03:45:377 -
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2016-11-11 17:52 shadowsnoop: 02:53:006 (173006|2,173006|3,173092|1,173177|0,173177|3) -
2016-11-11 17:53 FelipeLink: oks
2016-11-11 17:53 shadowsnoop: 02:54:892 (174892|3,174977|2,175063|1,175149|0) -
2016-11-11 17:54 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 17:54 shadowsnoop: 02:55:920 (175920|0,176006|1,176092|3,176177|2,176263|1,176349|2) -
2016-11-11 17:56 shadowsnoop: 02:58:149 (178149|1,178235|2,178320|1,178320|3,178406|0) -
2016-11-11 17:59 shadowsnoop: 03:06:549 (186549|0,186635|1,186720|2,186806|3,186892|2,186977|1) -
2016-11-11 18:00 shadowsnoop: 03:07:492 (187492|3,187577|2,187663|3,187749|1,187835|2,187920|3,188006|2,188092|1,188177|3) -
2016-11-11 18:01 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:01 shadowsnoop: 03:15:463 (195463|2,195549|3,195635|1,195720|3,195806|2) -
2016-11-11 18:02 shadowsnoop: 03:16:920 (196920|2,197006|1,197092|0,197177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:04 shadowsnoop: 03:20:863 (200863|0,200949|3,200949|2,201035|1,201120|0) -
2016-11-11 18:05 FelipeLink: 02:42:206 (162206|1,162206|0,162292|2,162377|1,162463|2) - xksxkksx, changed
2016-11-11 18:06 shadowsnoop: 03:22:149 (202149|2,202235|1,202320|0,202406|2) -
2016-11-11 18:07 shadowsnoop: 03:23:520 (203520|1,203606|3,203692|1,203692|2,203777|0,203863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:09 shadowsnoop: 03:27:720 (207720|2,207806|0,207806|1,207892|3,207977|1,208063|2) -
2016-11-11 18:10 shadowsnoop: 03:28:577 (208577|3,208663|2,208663|0,208749|1,208835|3,208835|0,208920|1,208920|2,209006|3,209092|2,209177|0,209177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:11 shadowsnoop: 03:30:720 (210720|3,210806|1,210892|0,210977|1,211063|3,211149|2,211235|1) -
2016-11-11 18:12 FelipeLink: aight
2016-11-11 18:26 shadowsnoop: 00:19:235 (19235|1,19235|3,19406|0,19492|1,19577|2) -
2016-11-11 18:27 shadowsnoop: 00:24:892 (24892|0) - >2
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:42:035 (42035|0,42120|1,42206|2,42720|3,42806|2,42892|1) -
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:43:063 (43063|2,43235|2,43235|3,43320|1,43406|0,43577|1,43577|3) -
2016-11-11 18:32 shadowsnoop: 00:43:920 (43920|2,43920|3,44006|0,44092|1,44177|2,44263|0,44263|1,44435|3,44606|0,44777|1,44863|0,44949|3,44949|2,45035|0,45206|1,45292|3,45292|2,45549|3,45635|2,45635|0) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:48:549 (48549|0,48635|1,48720|3,48720|2,48892|3) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:50:777 (50777|0,50863|1,50949|2,51035|1,51120|2,51120|3) -
2016-11-11 18:34 FelipeLink: ay
2016-11-11 18:34 shadowsnoop: 00:53:349 (53349|0,53435|1,53520|2,53520|3,53606|0,53692|2,53777|1,53863|2,53863|0,53863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:35 shadowsnoop: 00:54:035 (54035|1,54120|2,54206|0,54206|1,54292|3,54377|2,54463|3,54549|0,54549|2) -
2016-11-11 18:40 shadowsnoop: 00:56:263 (56263|1,56263|0,56349|3,56435|1,56520|2,56606|3) -
2016-11-11 18:41 shadowsnoop: 01:25:063 - +1
2016-11-11 18:42 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:43 shadowsnoop: 02:07:749 (127749|1,127749|3,127920|0,127920|2,128092|3,128092|2,128177|0,128177|1,128263|3,128263|2,128349|0,128349|1,128435|3,128477|2,128520|1,128606|3,128606|0,128777|0,128863|0,128949|1,128949|2,128949|3,129035|0) -
2016-11-11 18:46 shadowsnoop: 02:30:892 (150892|3,150892|0,151063|2,151063|1,151235|3,151235|1,151235|0,151406|0,151406|2,151577|3,151577|2,151920|3,151920|0,152263|2,152263|0,152606|1,152606|0,152949|3,152949|0,153292|2,153292|0,153635|2,153635|1,153635|0,153806|1,153806|3,153977|2,153977|0,154149|0,154149|3,154320|2,154320|3,154663|3,154663|0,155006|2,155006|0,155349|1,155349|0,155692|3,155692|0,156035|2,156035|0,156377|1,156377|0,156549|3,156549|2,156720|1,156720|2,156720|... (message truncated)
2016-11-12 19:42 shadowsnoop: 03:37:063 (217063|2,217235|3,217320|0,217406|3,217749|2,217835|1,217920|0) -
2016-11-12 19:42 shadowsnoop: 03:38:949 (218949|1,219035|0,219120|3,219120|2,219206|1,219292|0,219463|3,219549|2) -
2016-11-12 19:43 shadowsnoop: 03:41:349 (221349|0,221435|1,221520|2,221520|3,221692|1,221863|3,221949|2,222035|0) -
2016-11-12 19:43 shadowsnoop: 03:43:235 (223235|0,223235|2,223320|1,223406|3,223577|1,223663|3,223749|1,223920|3) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:44:092 (224092|0,224177|1,224263|2,224435|3,224520|2,224606|1,224606|0,224692|2,224777|1) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:44:949 (224949|3,224949|0,225035|1,225120|3,225292|2,225292|1,225463|3,225549|1,225635|0) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:46:320 (226320|1,226320|0,226406|3,226492|0,226577|2,226663|0) -
2016-11-12 19:45 shadowsnoop: 03:47:177 (227177|3,227263|2,227349|0,227349|1,227435|3) -
2016-11-12 19:45 shadowsnoop: 03:49:577 (229577|0,229663|2,229749|3,229749|1,229920|2,230006|0,230092|3) -
2016-11-12 19:46 shadowsnoop: 03:52:749 (232749|0,232835|3,232835|1,232920|2,233006|0,233092|1,233177|0,233177|3) -
2016-11-12 19:48 shadowsnoop: 04:21:549 (261549|2,261635|0,261635|3,261720|1,261806|2,261892|2,261977|0,261977|3,262063|1,262149|2,262235|0,262320|1,262320|3,262406|2,262492|1,262577|0,262663|2,262663|3,262749|1,262835|0,262920|2,263006|1,263006|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:206 (264206|2,264292|1,264377|0,264377|3,264463|1,264549|2) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:806 (264806|0,264892|1,264977|2,265063|1,265063|3,265149|2,265235|0,265320|2,265406|1,265406|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:25:492 (265492|0,265577|2,265663|1,265749|3,265749|0,265835|2) -
2016-11-12 19:50 shadowsnoop: 04:27:463 (267463|3,267463|0,267549|2,267635|1,267720|2,267806|3,267806|1,267892|0) -
2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:27:977 (267977|2,268063|1,268149|3,268149|0,268235|2,268320|1,268406|2,268492|1,268492|3,268577|0,268663|1,268749|2,268835|0,268835|3,268920|2) -
2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:31:577 (271577|0,271663|2,271749|1,271835|3,271920|0,271920|1,272006|2) -
2016-11-12 19:53 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-12 19:53 shadowsnoop: 04:37:063 (277063|0,277149|1,277235|3,277406|3,277577|3,277663|1,277749|3,277835|1,277920|3) -
2016-11-12 19:55 shadowsnoop: 04:42:720 (282720|2,282892|3,282892|0,282977|2,283235|1,283235|2,283320|3,283406|1,283492|3,283577|0) -
2016-11-12 19:57 shadowsnoop: 04:49:749 (289749|3,289835|0,289920|2,290006|1,290092|0,290092|3,290177|2,290263|0,290349|1,290435|3) -
2016-11-12 19:58 shadowsnoop: 04:55:406 (295406|3,295492|2,295577|0,295577|1,295663|3,295749|1,295835|2,295920|1,295920|0) -
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: parecido
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: 05:11:606 (311606|0,311692|3,311692|2,311777|0,311777|1,311863|3,311949|2,312035|0,312035|1) -
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: 05:12:377 (312377|3,314692|1,314777|2,314777|3,314863|0,314949|2,315035|1,315120|0) -
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: ?
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: oops
2016-11-12 20:06 shadowsnoop: 05:13:577 (313577|3,313663|1,313749|0,313835|1,313920|3,314006|2,314092|1) -
2016-11-12 20:08 shadowsnoop: 05:16:406 (316406|3,316492|2,316577|3,316663|2,316749|1,316835|2) -
2016-11-12 20:09 shadowsnoop: 05:20:435 (320435|3,320520|1,320606|0,320692|1,320777|3,320863|2,320949|3,320949|1) -
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: 05:26:606 (326606|0,326777|3,326777|2,326949|2,327120|1,327120|3,327292|0,327377|1,327463|2,327463|3,327549|1,327635|2,327806|1,327806|3,328149|2,328149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:10 FelipeLink: JOOOOOOOOOOOOJ
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: fuck yourself please 05:28:749 (328749|3,328835|0,328835|1,328920|2,329006|3,329092|1,329177|2,329177|0,329263|1,329349|3,329435|2,329520|1,329520|0,329692|1,329863|0,329863|2) -
2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:30:035 (330035|3,330120|2,330206|1,330206|0,330292|3,330377|1,330549|0,330549|2) -
2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:32:435 (332435|2,332606|3,332606|1,332777|0,332863|1,332949|3,332949|2,333035|0,333120|2,333292|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:34:320 (334320|3,334320|2,334406|0,334492|1,334577|0,334663|2,334663|3,334749|1,334835|0,334920|2,335006|3,335006|1,335177|2,335349|2,335349|3,335520|0,335606|2,335692|1,335692|3,335777|0,335949|1,336035|2,336035|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:37:492 (337492|2,337577|0,337663|1,337749|3,337920|2,338092|3,338263|2,338349|1,338435|3,338520|2,338606|1,338777|3) -
2016-11-12 20:13 FelipeLink: ;w;[
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:39:635 (339635|2,339720|1,339806|3,339892|0,339977|2,340063|1) -
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:40:320 (340320|2,340406|1,340492|3,340663|2,340835|3,341006|2,341092|1,341177|3,341263|0,341520|3) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:50:606 (350606|1,350692|2,350777|0,350863|1,350949|3,351035|2,351120|0,351120|1,351292|1,351377|3,351463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:52:149 (352149|0,352235|1,352320|2,352492|0) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: 05:53:006 (353006|1,353177|0,353349|1,353435|2,353520|0,353606|1,353692|3,353863|0,354035|2,354120|3,354206|0,354206|1) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: E-E
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: e-e
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: holly fucking shit 05:54:377 (354377|3,354549|0,354720|1,354806|3,354892|0,354977|1,355063|2,355235|0,355406|2,355577|0,355749|1,355920|0,356092|1,356177|2,356263|0,356349|1,356435|3,356520|2,356606|1,356606|0,356692|3,356777|2,356863|1,356949|2) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: 05:58:149 (358149|2,358235|1,358320|0,358320|2,358492|1,358577|2,358663|0,358749|2,358835|1,359006|3) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: bem parecido 05:59:092 (359092|2,359177|0,359177|1,359263|0,359263|1,359349|2,359349|3,359435|1,359520|2,359606|3,359692|0,359692|1,359863|3,360035|1,360035|0) -
2016-11-12 20:17 shadowsnoop: smh again 06:00:720 (360720|0,360892|2,361063|0,361235|1,361406|0,361577|1,361663|2,361749|0,361835|1,361920|3,362006|2,362092|1,362092|0,362177|3,362263|1,362349|2,362435|0,362435|1,362606|3,362777|0,362949|1,363035|3,363120|0,363292|1,363463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:03:635 (363635|2,363806|0,363977|1,364149|0,364320|1,364406|2,364492|0,364577|1,364663|3,364749|2,364835|0,364835|1,364920|3,365006|1,365177|0,365177|1,365349|3) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: I just want to buttfuck you right now
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:09:463 (369463|1,369549|2,369635|0,369720|1,369806|0,369892|2,369977|0,370063|1,370149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: jej
2016-11-12 21:00 shadowsnoop: 05:59:349 -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:035 (35|2,206|1,292|3,377|1) -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:977 (977|3,1063|1,1149|2,1235|3,1406|0) -
2016-11-12 21:04 shadowsnoop: 00:08:263 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:692 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:777 -

Gave some suggestions, added some hands, checked notes consistency, changed some patterns... map´s looking fine!

<3, i dont have words to say how much work you do for me ><

those lovely hours in the voice chat, so gud.

Implying that we dont make voice chat everyday for like 6h+
snoverpk_old
irc
2016-11-14 00:52 FelipeLink: hey nosver
2016-11-14 00:52 snoverpk: hi fepilekiln
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: hmm, can i ask you a favor
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: actually 2 favors
2016-11-14 00:53 snoverpk: maybe(?)
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: 1- mutual me u fucker
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: )":
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: what's the second favor
2016-11-14 00:54 can i ask for a mod on my space time? i kinda need more 2 mods to get a bn check again *sigh*
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: i remapped everything
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: so its a new map
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: ok but i'll only do an irc mod
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: and it won't be long because my back hurts and i want to go to bed
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: no problem
2016-11-14 00:55 FelipeLink: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
2016-11-14 00:55 snoverpk: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]] <osu!mania> +DoubleTime |4K|
2016-11-14 00:57 snoverpk: ok i see problems with this map
2016-11-14 00:57 FelipeLink: hm, right
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:26:949 (26949|1,27035|0,27120|1,27206|0,27292|1) - this pattern doesn't look polished
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:37:406 (37406|0) - move to 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:38:092 (38092|3,38092|1,38177|0,38263|1,38263|3) - i don't recommend this pattern
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: also long uncomfortable anchor on 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:45:120 (45120|1) - could probably move this to 3 to avoid the trill
2016-11-14 00:59 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:54:635 (54635|0) - move to 3 also i think this is unsnapped
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: or not
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:56:949 - this entire pattern starting from here is kinda weird
2016-11-14 01:01 snoverpk: 00:58:320 - this anchor is really long and i don't recommend it
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: anchor? where
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: on 3
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: true
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: 01:23:949 (83949|0,84035|1,84035|2) - this would probably feel smoother if it was 3[12] but you would have to change the pattern before it to be a bit less trilly
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: not a necessary change though
2016-11-14 01:03 snoverpk: 01:24:206 (84206|1,84292|2,84377|1,84377|3) - alternatively you can change this to 12[34]
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: 02:11:520 (131520|3,131606|3) - are these jacks really necessary in this part
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: i think this entire part is a bit too dense considering the music isn't really that intense
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: yep
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: its necessary for consistency
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: this section will do jack, no, jack, no, jack, no, etc
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: that's what i mean
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: and in the ''kiai'' its jack every ''sound''
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: i don't think that's necessary
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that part is too dense in general though
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: considering the music
2016-11-14 01:06 FelipeLink: no ghost in that section tho
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that doesn't mean it's not too dense
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: i think it's too dense when you compare it to the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: it's a lot calmer than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: i'm too lazy to mod the rest
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: well, its not denser than kiai tho
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also i don't like how the bursts are just rolls
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also yes it's not denser than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: hm, well
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: but it's as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: you should make it less dense
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: ._., i dont think so
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: i changed everything except that
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: and the rolls is shoegazer suggestion
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: well that's just because i don't like rolls i would prefer better speed patterns
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: but still the part before kiai shouldn't be as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: man if i remove notes
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: it will be like spy
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: and they will fucking say
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: ''YOU COPIED, CTRL+V, CTRL+H''
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: thats why i cant
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: can you post the log in the thread pls?
2016-11-14 01:11 snoverpk: ok
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

snoverpk wrote:

irc
2016-11-14 00:52 FelipeLink: hey nosver
2016-11-14 00:52 snoverpk: hi fepilekiln
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: hmm, can i ask you a favor
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: actually 2 favors
2016-11-14 00:53 snoverpk: maybe(?)
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: 1- mutual me u fucker
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: )":
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: what's the second favor
2016-11-14 00:54 can i ask for a mod on my space time? i kinda need more 2 mods to get a bn check again *sigh*
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: i remapped everything
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: so its a new map
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: ok but i'll only do an irc mod
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: and it won't be long because my back hurts and i want to go to bed
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: no problem
2016-11-14 00:55 FelipeLink: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
2016-11-14 00:55 snoverpk: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]] <osu!mania> +DoubleTime |4K|
2016-11-14 00:57 snoverpk: ok i see problems with this map
2016-11-14 00:57 FelipeLink: hm, right
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:26:949 (26949|1,27035|0,27120|1,27206|0,27292|1) - this pattern doesn't look polished
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:37:406 (37406|0) - move to 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:38:092 (38092|3,38092|1,38177|0,38263|1,38263|3) - i don't recommend this pattern
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: also long uncomfortable anchor on 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:45:120 (45120|1) - could probably move this to 3 to avoid the trill
2016-11-14 00:59 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:54:635 (54635|0) - move to 3 also i think this is unsnapped
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: or not
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:56:949 - this entire pattern starting from here is kinda weird
2016-11-14 01:01 snoverpk: 00:58:320 - this anchor is really long and i don't recommend it
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: anchor? where
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: on 3
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: true
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: 01:23:949 (83949|0,84035|1,84035|2) - this would probably feel smoother if it was 3[12] but you would have to change the pattern before it to be a bit less trilly
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: not a necessary change though
2016-11-14 01:03 snoverpk: 01:24:206 (84206|1,84292|2,84377|1,84377|3) - alternatively you can change this to 12[34]
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: 02:11:520 (131520|3,131606|3) - are these jacks really necessary in this part
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: i think this entire part is a bit too dense considering the music isn't really that intense
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: yep
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: its necessary for consistency
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: this section will do jack, no, jack, no, jack, no, etc
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: that's what i mean
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: and in the ''kiai'' its jack every ''sound''
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: i don't think that's necessary
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that part is too dense in general though
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: considering the music
2016-11-14 01:06 FelipeLink: no ghost in that section tho
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that doesn't mean it's not too dense
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: i think it's too dense when you compare it to the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: it's a lot calmer than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: i'm too lazy to mod the rest
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: well, its not denser than kiai tho
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also i don't like how the bursts are just rolls
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also yes it's not denser than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: hm, well
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: but it's as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: you should make it less dense
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: ._., i dont think so
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: i changed everything except that
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: and the rolls is shoegazer suggestion
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: well that's just because i don't like rolls i would prefer better speed patterns
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: but still the part before kiai shouldn't be as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: man if i remove notes
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: it will be like spy
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: and they will fucking say
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: ''YOU COPIED, CTRL+V, CTRL+H''
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: thats why i cant
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: can you post the log in the thread pls?
2016-11-14 01:11 snoverpk: ok
Thanks snover, o/
~ will update the map when BSS system stop giving me a error~
KcHecKa
When senpai rejects you :x :(
Guilhermeziat

FelipeLink wrote:

Thanks for the Guil, really appreciate.
You're welcome, modLink.
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

KcHecKa wrote:

When senpai rejects you :x :(
):::

Guilhermeziat wrote:

FelipeLink wrote:

Thanks for the Guil, really appreciate.
You're welcome, modLink.
LMFAO i didnt saw that, jejejej.
Soul Evans
IRC with guil 2.0

BR time
2016-11-18 13:26 Soul Evans: Okay let me testplay
2016-11-18 13:26 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 13:34 Soul Evans: cold hands
2016-11-18 13:34 FelipeLink: np
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: 02:59:349 -
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: You have a stacked note here
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: LOL
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: 02:06:206 - why are there two timing points stacked here
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: blame agka program
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: :100:
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: Disable custom colours
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: from your beatmaps options
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: since it's for standard and i think it's useless
2016-11-18 13:37 FelipeLink: right, disabled
2016-11-18 13:38 Soul Evans: okay umm
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: It's probably prefference to me but wouldn't it be better if the bursts such as 00:38:435 -
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: have jumptrills first before the trills?
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: (idk what they're called)
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: basically ctrl+g them i think
2016-11-18 13:40 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: thing is
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: i don't really get ready for the dense rolls because i was expecting jumptrills at first
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: well
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: if i ctrl+g
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: the transition will be worse
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: no jokee
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: all bursts
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: are different jumptrill(4 1/1) then the normal one(12/34)
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: i see
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: 01:00:377 - this pattern on the other hand
2016-11-18 13:43 Soul Evans: uuh i think it's best if you changed it to something else (optional)
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: i know that double trill are the hardest jumptrill haha
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: its just for variation, cant change
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: 01:49:749 (109749|3,109920|1) -
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: This on the other hand is uncomfy to hit
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: atleast move 01:49:920 (109920|1) - to 1
2016-11-18 13:45 Soul Evans: 01:59:520 (119520|0) - same here
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: about that, i cant, its PR oriented
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: feerum suggested to do the pr
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: so i did
2016-11-18 13:46 Soul Evans: would you sacrifice playability for PR?
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:49:920 (109920|1) - if i change to 1
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) - <- rip pr
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: no, i made a section without PR because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: but i think this is p playable i mean, its just single notes+lns
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) - <- no pr oriented because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: 02:23:863 - why does this don't have a mini jack
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: oops
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: wrong timing
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: like the rest?
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 04:20:606 -
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:26:606 - same here
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: this section is jack, no jack, jack, no jack
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: oooh i was gonna ask that
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: =p
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:30:892 - i think these have a little bit more sound to it
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: you can make those triples instead
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: ofcourse
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: hm ok, i agree
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: when it's not touching LNs
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: yd
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: 02:51:977 - if this has 3 note ladder
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: 02:51:720 - then add a note here
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: for consistency
2016-11-18 13:50 FelipeLink: ye*
2016-11-18 13:52 FelipeLink: right ok, i did some changes
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: 03:23:177 - How about you make this section like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595769
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: for consistency's sake
2016-11-18 13:53 Soul Evans: 03:25:149 - Same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595774
2016-11-18 13:53 FelipeLink: sec
2016-11-18 13:55 FelipeLink: ok changed both
2016-11-18 13:57 Soul Evans: 03:25:577 - why does this have double jacks when most of what i've seen are 1 jack
2016-11-18 13:58 Soul Evans: 03:03:635 - forgot to mention this too
2016-11-18 13:59 FelipeLink: its happen sometimes
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: 00:30:035 (30035|0,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|3,30206|1) -
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: same sound
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: but on a soft section
2016-11-18 14:00 Soul Evans: hmm i see
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: 03:36:035 -
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: it's kinda off putting for me to play that
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: since it's just 4 rolls
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: can't you change it like the other bursts?
2016-11-18 14:02 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: 03:37:063 - for this type of sound
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: in the earlier sections before it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: you used 3 note chords for it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: so i suggest making it for this sections too
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: uh yeah
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: now ofcourse you can still keep 3 note chords for 03:38:092 -
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: no need to change those
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: yeah like.. i kinda just want to keep those hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: and those hands are for the change in the pitch/density of the sound
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: i think its fine if i dont put hands on this section because its pretty soft
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: if i add more hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: it will lose his impact
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: alrighty
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: 03:40:835 - missing 3 note chord for the same sound
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: 03:46:320 - i think here too
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: i know they're soft but something about it staying as hands feels off though
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: eh!?
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: idk
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: Oh and i forgot to mention
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: 02:07:577 -
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: please for the love of eze raise the slowjam in this
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: this should be more faster especially with all the notes before it
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 14:08 Soul Evans: 04:20:606 - okay this defenitley sounds off
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: the hard drum should have 3 note chords because the rest of the hands
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: that blends in with this feels unatural to his
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: hit*
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: or atleast start here 04:31:577 -
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: hm i do agree
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: but i undermapped for playability
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: like hand = minijack
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: meh i think it's alright
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: it's good to keep this more stamina oriented
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: for like uuh people not to famr
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: farm*
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: and people that can handle Icy JS files
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: i made this map the most confortable imo
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: will get a pass for this
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: this is not a pp map
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: its a hp9 for a reason
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: man people are too strong for hp9 nowadays
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: its 4,8 its not that hard o:
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: Theres nothing in this map that could kill a farmer
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: if it's the minijacks he'll raise hp again
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: from the rest of the streams
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: and bursts are pretty much spam
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:520 (293520|1) - i don't think this pattern is suitable
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: it's doesn't play like a jack imo
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:435 (293435|1) - move to 1
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: its the same sound i already linked <_>
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: changed
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: 05:03:806 - ok so remember what i said about this earlier?
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: same thing i said lol
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: 06:09:720 - this last section is kinda meh, and there are strong notes that doesn't suit it to be just 1 notes like what spy did
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595884
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: suggestion
2016-11-18 14:19 FelipeLink: ok changed to something similar

Take three stars from me because why not
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

Soul Evans wrote:

IRC with guil 2.0

BR time
2016-11-18 13:26 Soul Evans: Okay let me testplay
2016-11-18 13:26 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 13:34 Soul Evans: cold hands
2016-11-18 13:34 FelipeLink: np
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: 02:59:349 -
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: You have a stacked note here
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: LOL
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: 02:06:206 - why are there two timing points stacked here
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: blame agka program
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: :100:
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: Disable custom colours
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: from your beatmaps options
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: since it's for standard and i think it's useless
2016-11-18 13:37 FelipeLink: right, disabled
2016-11-18 13:38 Soul Evans: okay umm
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: It's probably prefference to me but wouldn't it be better if the bursts such as 00:38:435 -
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: have jumptrills first before the trills?
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: (idk what they're called)
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: basically ctrl+g them i think
2016-11-18 13:40 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: thing is
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: i don't really get ready for the dense rolls because i was expecting jumptrills at first
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: well
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: if i ctrl+g
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: the transition will be worse
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: no jokee
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: all bursts
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: are different jumptrill(4 1/1) then the normal one(12/34)
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: i see
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: 01:00:377 - this pattern on the other hand
2016-11-18 13:43 Soul Evans: uuh i think it's best if you changed it to something else (optional)
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: i know that double trill are the hardest jumptrill haha
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: its just for variation, cant change
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: 01:49:749 (109749|3,109920|1) -
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: This on the other hand is uncomfy to hit
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: atleast move 01:49:920 (109920|1) - to 1
2016-11-18 13:45 Soul Evans: 01:59:520 (119520|0) - same here
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: about that, i cant, its PR oriented
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: feerum suggested to do the pr
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: so i did
2016-11-18 13:46 Soul Evans: would you sacrifice playability for PR?
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:49:920 (109920|1) - if i change to 1
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) - <- rip pr
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: no, i made a section without PR because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: but i think this is p playable i mean, its just single notes+lns
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) - <- no pr oriented because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: 02:23:863 - why does this don't have a mini jack
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: oops
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: wrong timing
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: like the rest?
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 04:20:606 -
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:26:606 - same here
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: this section is jack, no jack, jack, no jack
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: oooh i was gonna ask that
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: =p
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:30:892 - i think these have a little bit more sound to it
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: you can make those triples instead
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: ofcourse
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: hm ok, i agree
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: when it's not touching LNs
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: yd
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: 02:51:977 - if this has 3 note ladder
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: 02:51:720 - then add a note here
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: for consistency
2016-11-18 13:50 FelipeLink: ye*
2016-11-18 13:52 FelipeLink: right ok, i did some changes
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: 03:23:177 - How about you make this section like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595769
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: for consistency's sake
2016-11-18 13:53 Soul Evans: 03:25:149 - Same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595774
2016-11-18 13:53 FelipeLink: sec
2016-11-18 13:55 FelipeLink: ok changed both
2016-11-18 13:57 Soul Evans: 03:25:577 - why does this have double jacks when most of what i've seen are 1 jack
2016-11-18 13:58 Soul Evans: 03:03:635 - forgot to mention this too
2016-11-18 13:59 FelipeLink: its happen sometimes
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: 00:30:035 (30035|0,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|3,30206|1) -
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: same sound
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: but on a soft section
2016-11-18 14:00 Soul Evans: hmm i see
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: 03:36:035 -
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: it's kinda off putting for me to play that
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: since it's just 4 rolls
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: can't you change it like the other bursts?
2016-11-18 14:02 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: 03:37:063 - for this type of sound
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: in the earlier sections before it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: you used 3 note chords for it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: so i suggest making it for this sections too
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: uh yeah
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: now ofcourse you can still keep 3 note chords for 03:38:092 -
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: no need to change those
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: yeah like.. i kinda just want to keep those hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: and those hands are for the change in the pitch/density of the sound
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: i think its fine if i dont put hands on this section because its pretty soft
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: if i add more hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: it will lose his impact
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: alrighty
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: 03:40:835 - missing 3 note chord for the same sound
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: 03:46:320 - i think here too
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: i know they're soft but something about it staying as hands feels off though
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: eh!?
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: idk
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: Oh and i forgot to mention
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: 02:07:577 -
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: please for the love of eze raise the slowjam in this
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: this should be more faster especially with all the notes before it
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 14:08 Soul Evans: 04:20:606 - okay this defenitley sounds off
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: the hard drum should have 3 note chords because the rest of the hands
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: that blends in with this feels unatural to his
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: hit*
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: or atleast start here 04:31:577 -
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: hm i do agree
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: but i undermapped for playability
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: like hand = minijack
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: meh i think it's alright
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: it's good to keep this more stamina oriented
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: for like uuh people not to famr
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: farm*
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: and people that can handle Icy JS files
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: i made this map the most confortable imo
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: will get a pass for this
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: this is not a pp map
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: its a hp9 for a reason
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: man people are too strong for hp9 nowadays
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: its 4,8 its not that hard o:
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: Theres nothing in this map that could kill a farmer
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: if it's the minijacks he'll raise hp again
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: from the rest of the streams
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: and bursts are pretty much spam
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:520 (293520|1) - i don't think this pattern is suitable
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: it's doesn't play like a jack imo
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:435 (293435|1) - move to 1
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: its the same sound i already linked <_>
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: changed
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: 05:03:806 - ok so remember what i said about this earlier?
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: same thing i said lol
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: 06:09:720 - this last section is kinda meh, and there are strong notes that doesn't suit it to be just 1 notes like what spy did
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595884
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: suggestion
2016-11-18 14:19 FelipeLink: ok changed to something similar

Take three stars from me because why not
Thanks for the mod ><, and ayyy stars : 3

Nivrad00
Kudos to felipe for reworking so much of this map. Recheck time ;n;
Mod
00:55:749 - I think this should be a single and 00:56:092 - should be a double
01:23:692 - add finish
02:03:549 (123549|0,124920|1,126292|2) - shouldn't these three LNs be on the second, third, and fourth lane respectively? they're the only ones that break the 1-2-3, 2-3-4 pattern ;n;
02:08:092 (128092|1,128092|0,128177|3,128177|2,128349|2,128349|3) - I think I saw someone else give this suggestion, but I think it would emphasize the beat nicely if you made these singles and left this 02:08:263 (128263|1,128263|0) - a double
02:30:892 - spy's map also uses a 1st-lane stack to represent the snare in this section, including after 02:41:863 - . I suggest you try something else. Maybe you could switch the stack to a different lane every two measures or something? also the effect is a bit dampened because beats like 02:31:577 -, 02:34:320 -, etc have the LN release instead of a note
04:20:606 - same here
02:41:349 - missing normal note?
03:11:949 - unnecessary kick
03:33:892 - same
04:41:692 (281692|3) - this LN should start at 04:41:863 - for consistency with the beginning of the first kiai (02:52:149 (172149|3) - ). Also I notice spy's map has the same inconsistency, so I imagine this wasn't on purpose
05:20:949 - shouldn't the hitsound pattern here be
k k s k k k s k
instead of
k k s k k s k k
?
ANCHOR HUNTING TIME:
00:47:520 (47520|3,47692|3,47863|3,48035|3,48206|3,48377|3,48549|3,48720|3,48892|3,49063|3,49235|3,49406|3,49577|3,49749|3,49920|3,50092|3,50263|3,50435|3,50606|3,50777|3,50949|3,51120|3,51292|3,51463|3) - 24-note anchor o-o
I know it's because you're repeating this section:
00:49:235 (49235|0,49235|3,49320|1,49406|3,49406|2,49492|1,49577|3,49577|0,49663|1,49749|3,49749|0,49749|2) -
but you should probably choose a different repeating pattern so that it doesn't make this crazy anchor
03:23:863 (203863|3,204035|3,204206|3,204377|3,204549|3,204720|3,204892|3,205063|3,205235|3,205406|3,205577|3,205749|3,205920|3) - 13-note anchor
05:13:063 (313063|3,313235|3,313406|3,313577|3,313749|3,313920|3,314092|3,314263|3,314435|3,314606|3,314777|3) - 11-note anchor
interestingly, all of these anchors are on the same lane o-o
Awaiting your response
Topic Starter
FelipeLink
:o

Nivrad00 wrote:

Kudos to felipe for reworking so much of this map. Recheck time ;n;
Mod
00:55:749 - I think this should be a single and 00:56:092 - should be a double Yeah i agree, right, changed
01:23:692 - add finish Added
02:03:549 (123549|0,124920|1,126292|2) - shouldn't these three LNs be on the second, third, and fourth lane respectively? they're the only ones that break the 1-2-3, 2-3-4 pattern ;n; oo, yeah, changed ><
02:08:092 (128092|1,128092|0,128177|3,128177|2,128349|2,128349|3) - I think I saw someone else give this suggestion, but I think it would emphasize the beat nicely if you made these singles and left this 02:08:263 (128263|1,128263|0) - a double was waiting for a BN opnion, well changed!
02:30:892 - spy's map also uses a 1st-lane stack to represent the snare in this section, including after 02:41:863 - . I suggest you try something else. Maybe you could switch the stack to a different lane every two measures or something? also the effect is a bit dampened because beats like 02:31:577 -, 02:34:320 -, etc have the LN release instead of a note uh, i did something else, its change every 2 1/1 now, still the minijacks are still on the column 3 and its justificable
04:20:606 - same here ^
02:41:349 - missing normal note? o yeah, a missing note >_>, fixed, thanks
03:11:949 - unnecessary kick right, removed
03:33:892 - same ^
04:41:692 (281692|3) - this LN should start at 04:41:863 - for consistency with the beginning of the first kiai (02:52:149 (172149|3) - ). Also I notice spy's map has the same inconsistency, so I imagine this wasn't on purpose o-o, changed
05:20:949 - shouldn't the hitsound pattern here be
k k s k k k s k
instead of
k k s k k s k k
? yeah, didnt saw that, fixed
ANCHOR HUNTING TIME:
00:47:520 (47520|3,47692|3,47863|3,48035|3,48206|3,48377|3,48549|3,48720|3,48892|3,49063|3,49235|3,49406|3,49577|3,49749|3,49920|3,50092|3,50263|3,50435|3,50606|3,50777|3,50949|3,51120|3,51292|3,51463|3) - 24-note anchor o-o
I know it's because you're repeating this section:
00:49:235 (49235|0,49235|3,49320|1,49406|3,49406|2,49492|1,49577|3,49577|0,49663|1,49749|3,49749|0,49749|2) -
but you should probably choose a different repeating pattern so that it doesn't make this crazy anchor oki, changed to something+ some reppaterns here and there to not getting too many stacked notes
03:23:863 (203863|3,204035|3,204206|3,204377|3,204549|3,204720|3,204892|3,205063|3,205235|3,205406|3,205577|3,205749|3,205920|3) - 13-note anchor
05:13:063 (313063|3,313235|3,313406|3,313577|3,313749|3,313920|3,314092|3,314263|3,314435|3,314606|3,314777|3) - 11-note anchor
interestingly, all of these anchors are on the same lane o-o
About those 2, i changed some jumps to break the anchor a little so its not that big, there still some anchors because its pretty dense+jacks, but its smaller now
Awaiting your response
well its my precious space time thats why i put so much effort on it >w<

And thanks for the recheck o//
Nivrad00
It looks great 8-)
Protastic101
oki
2016-11-26 13:18 Protastic101: ay lmao
2016-11-26 13:18 FelipeLink: ayy
2016-11-26 13:18 Protastic101: Sorry to bother you so soon, but are you free right now for a quick check?
2016-11-26 13:18 FelipeLink: o:
2016-11-26 13:18 Protastic101: I just started going through hitsounds on space time
2016-11-26 13:18 FelipeLink: i'm free anytime
2016-11-26 13:18 FelipeLink: \o/
2016-11-26 13:18 Protastic101: whew
2016-11-26 13:18 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-26 13:18 Protastic101: 02:08:777 (128777|0,128863|0) - ok, need snares here
2016-11-26 13:19 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-26 13:21 Protastic101: 02:52:663 (172663|0,172749|0) - snare too?
2016-11-26 13:21 FelipeLink: yeah, adedd
2016-11-26 13:21 FelipeLink: added*
2016-11-26 13:22 Protastic101: added is a dumb word cause all the keys are on the left hand :<
2016-11-26 13:24 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-26 13:24 Protastic101: 04:42:377 (282377|0,282463|0) - snare
2016-11-26 13:24 Protastic101: Seriously though, added is like the epitome of horrible hand balance
2016-11-26 13:24 FelipeLink: i'll remember that
2016-11-26 13:24 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-26 13:24 FelipeLink: applied
2016-11-26 13:24 FelipeLink: (^:
2016-11-26 13:25 Protastic101: :^)
2016-11-26 13:25 Protastic101: 05:24:035 (324035|0,324720|1) - snares?
2016-11-26 13:25 Protastic101: 05:31:920 (331920|2) - missing kick
2016-11-26 13:26 FelipeLink: owo, fixed
2016-11-26 13:26 Protastic101: k, hitsounds are gud fam
2016-11-26 13:28 FelipeLink: <3
2016-11-26 13:28 Protastic101: And I still fail at the bursts :^D
2016-11-26 13:28 FelipeLink: rip ;-;
2016-11-26 13:28 FelipeLink: this map is a little underrated prob
2016-11-26 13:28 FelipeLink: :s
2016-11-26 13:28 Protastic101: Ah well, can't help it lol
2016-11-26 13:29 Protastic101: 00:06:549 (6549|1,6635|0,6720|1) - imo, it'd look nicer to use a more straightforward roll, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664507 but that's just my opinion anyways
2016-11-26 13:30 Protastic101: 00:08:092 (8092|1,8092|0,8177|1,8177|2,8263|0,8263|3) - as for this, I'd try to jack the first two doubles like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664513 to represent the kicks vs snare
2016-11-26 13:31 FelipeLink: the first one oki changed
2016-11-26 13:31 FelipeLink: about the other one, spy used like that so prob its better not to do like that xD
2016-11-26 13:31 Protastic101: Ah ok XD
2016-11-26 13:32 Protastic101: In that case, why not just try a mini jumptrill? I know that the map is jack heavy, but that's for the synths during the kiai. If it's for the kicks, why not differentiate it by using a different pattern?
2016-11-26 13:33 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-26 13:33 FelipeLink: might be a good idea, oki
2016-11-26 13:33 Protastic101: yay. I'll point out other examples like it as we go then
2016-11-26 13:33 FelipeLink: aight
2016-11-26 13:33 Protastic101: 00:19:063 (19063|3,19149|3) - Oh, I also forgot to point out that you should add snares here too
2016-11-26 13:33 Protastic101: or did I already do that?
2016-11-26 13:34 FelipeLink: nope, applied now
2016-11-26 13:34 FelipeLink: =p
2016-11-26 13:34 Protastic101: 00:24:377 (24377|2,24549|2,24720|2) - rather than have a 3 note stack here, I'd consider moving 00:24:549 (24549|2) - to 1 and 00:24:635 (24635|0) - to 2 to make a left -> right roll
2016-11-26 13:35 Protastic101: 00:30:206 (30206|1) - move this to 1 to create a mini jumptrill with 00:30:035 (30035|0,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|1,30206|3) - for the drum
2016-11-26 13:36 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-26 13:36 Protastic101: 00:52:149 (52149|3,52235|1,52320|3) - ok, in order, move to 2, 4, 2
2016-11-26 13:37 Protastic101: Again to create that jumptrill for the kick
2016-11-26 13:38 FelipeLink: right, changed
2016-11-26 13:38 Protastic101: 00:59:349 (59349|2,59435|1,59520|2) - just my opinion, but I think it'd look nicer if you control H'd
2016-11-26 13:38 Protastic101: No real reason behind it, just my preference lol
2016-11-26 13:39 Protastic101: 00:59:263 (59263|0,59349|2,59435|1) - well, it also connects this to be a roll, but that's all the reason I have lol
2016-11-26 13:39 FelipeLink: hm ok, no problem
2016-11-26 13:39 FelipeLink: changed
2016-11-26 13:43 FelipeLink: 04:41:863 (281863|3) - err i found a error btw, fixed dont need to point out :x
2016-11-26 13:43 Protastic101: 03:03:635 (183635|2,183635|3,183720|3,183720|0,183806|0,183806|1,183892|3) - since these are kicks, make them a minijumptrill? Maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664657
2016-11-26 13:43 Protastic101: 04:41:863 (281863|3) - wait, what's the error here?
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: open kiai mod
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: haha
2016-11-26 13:44 Protastic101: ACTION oblivious
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: ai*
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: ai mod*sdjcvijsd
2016-11-26 13:44 Protastic101: AYYYYY LMAO
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: kek
2016-11-26 13:44 Protastic101: #MeBeing10/10BNritethere
2016-11-26 13:44 FelipeLink: LMFAO
2016-11-26 13:45 Protastic101: At least I'm not like Juan which qualified a map with an overlapping object and got it DQed just 3 hours later :^D
2016-11-26 13:45 Protastic101: jkjk
2016-11-26 13:45 Protastic101: ACTION inb4 shot by juan
2016-11-26 13:45 FelipeLink: LOOOOOOOOOOOL
2016-11-26 13:45 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-26 13:45 Protastic101: I'd say the newer BNs this round are pretty hardworking but very dysfunctional XD
2016-11-26 13:46 FelipeLink: its happen bois, everyone commit errors :v
2016-11-26 13:46 FelipeLink: about the minitrill, i changed
2016-11-26 13:46 Protastic101: 03:25:577 (205577|3,205577|2,205663|0,205663|2,205749|3,205749|0) - mini jumptrill for the kick? maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664683
2016-11-26 13:46 Protastic101: cool
2016-11-26 13:47 Protastic101: 03:47:520 (227520|0,227520|1,227606|2,227606|3,227692|0,227692|3) - same for these
2016-11-26 13:47 FelipeLink: oki
2016-11-26 13:47 Protastic101: 03:47:692 (227692|3) - you could probably just move this to 2 and move 03:47:777 (227777|1) - to 3
2016-11-26 13:48 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-26 13:49 Protastic101: 04:53:349 (293349|2,293349|3,293435|2,293435|0,293520|0,293520|1) - same for this, maybe a [23]-[14]-[23] jumptrill would be nice
2016-11-26 13:49 Protastic101: 04:53:263 (293263|1) - you'd have to move this to 4 to avoid creating an accidental jack there
2016-11-26 13:50 Protastic101: 05:15:292 (315292|3,315292|2,315377|0,315377|2,315463|3,315463|0) - same goes for this
2016-11-26 13:50 Protastic101: [34][12][34] is probs best
2016-11-26 13:51 FelipeLink: oki
2016-11-26 13:51 Protastic101: Woo, ok, update and I'll check the changes and stuff
2016-11-26 13:54 FelipeLink: updated
2016-11-26 14:00 Protastic101: 05:37:406 (337406|3) - Oh, since this is a kick, shouldn't this be at 2?
2016-11-26 14:01 FelipeLink: ohh
2016-11-26 14:01 FelipeLink: ye
2016-11-26 14:01 FelipeLink: fixed
2016-11-26 14:02 Protastic101: 05:59:177 (359177|1,359177|0,359263|2,359263|3,359349|3,359349|0) - same goes for snares, jump trillt hen?
2016-11-26 14:02 Protastic101: them*
2016-11-26 14:02 FelipeLink: aight
2016-11-26 14:02 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664820 I'd consider something like this
2016-11-26 14:02 Protastic101: or however you choose to make it
2016-11-26 14:03 Protastic101: Ok, update that, I'll check those two changes and then bubble
2016-11-26 14:03 FelipeLink: i made something similar ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6664825
2016-11-26 14:03 Protastic101: That works
2016-11-26 14:03 FelipeLink: updated
2016-11-26 14:04 Protastic101: Ok, nice, I'll bubble now
Just rechecked the hitsounds and changed a few notes to be mini jumptrills.
juankristal
I hope I dont die after this

ayyy
16:02 FelipeLink: check muh map
16:02 FelipeLink: poke
16:02 FelipeLink: pokoek
16:02 FelipeLink: cmkcm
16:02 FelipeLink: s
16:02 FelipeLink: e
16:02 FelipeLink: a
16:02 FelipeLink: s
16:03 juankristal: http://puu.sh/tceN7/9cfab822db.png
16:03 juankristal: :thinking:
16:03 FelipeLink: kappa
16:03 FelipeLink: i just want to rank sbace
16:03 FelipeLink: then i can quit in peace
16:03 juankristal: then I wont rank it so you wont quit
16:04 juankristal: AHAEURHAEURHAEURHEAHRTUAEHRUERHUAERHUEARHFUAERHUEA
16:04 FelipeLink: ):::::::::
16:04 juankristal: hahaha you are here foreverhaha
16:04 juankristal: ahaha
16:04 juankristal: ahsd
16:04 juankristal: ahfashfasñf
16:04 juankristal: a
16:04 juankristal: ha
16:04 juankristal: a
16:04 FelipeLink: ;wwwwww;
16:04 FelipeLink: u got me
16:05 FelipeLink: i just kinda had some hm problems
16:05 FelipeLink: with a close friend
16:05 FelipeLink: and i just quitted 90% of my mania servers
16:05 FelipeLink: things like that
16:06 juankristal: thats sad mango
16:06 juankristal: :/
16:07 juankristal: tbh I am super tired
16:07 juankristal: but lets see
16:13 FelipeLink: if you're tired we can do this other day
16:13 FelipeLink: i dont mind
16:14 juankristal: it feels so weird compared to the other one
16:14 FelipeLink: lmfao
16:14 FelipeLink: i added some new layers
16:15 FelipeLink: i could add hands(triple chord) in the kiai section
16:15 FelipeLink: but some people would cry
16:15 FelipeLink: :C
16:16 juankristal: I am mostly concerned about the fact that it might still be similar to spy's
16:16 juankristal: but idk
16:16 FelipeLink: ehh
16:16 FelipeLink: dont worry
16:16 FelipeLink: me and snoop
16:16 FelipeLink: checked my map vs spy map
16:16 FelipeLink: note per note
16:17 FelipeLink: if you open in the .osu obviously it will be similar, because my map use more layers then spy tho
16:18 FelipeLink: tried t ochange everything that was similar
16:18 FelipeLink: created some idea(applied some like the sv one)
16:18 FelipeLink: removed dat ln section that i hated so much >:
16:18 FelipeLink: i love lns, but that section was so weird ;w;
16:23 juankristal: 03:07:749 (187749|1) - move to 3
16:23 FelipeLink: right
16:23 FelipeLink: 05:38:777 (338777|0,338777|3,338777|2,338949|2,339035|1,339120|0,339120|2,339292|3,339292|1,339463|0,339463|2,339635|0) -
16:23 FelipeLink: i ctrl+h this
16:23 FelipeLink: forgot to change the LN to the right side
16:24 juankristal: 03:20:092 (200092|0,200177|0) - that probably should be on right hand
16:24 juankristal: although, pitch kinda works
16:24 juankristal: its either making that right hand or this 03:21:463 (201463|1,201549|1) - right hand
16:24 juankristal: your choice
16:24 juankristal: not both
16:24 juankristal: the first one would make it more consistent, the second one more pitched
16:24 FelipeLink: right
16:25 juankristal: 03:20:092 (200092|0,200177|0) - 03:21:463 (201463|1,201549|1) -
16:25 juankristal: same
16:26 FelipeLink: fixed the second one
16:26 FelipeLink: for the pitch
16:26 FelipeLink: etc
16:27 juankristal: I think 04:21:806 (261806|2,261892|2) - that one isnt audible enough to make it jack
16:27 juankristal: the following ones tho, are fine
16:27 FelipeLink: aight
16:27 FelipeLink: fixed
16:28 juankristal: I think 04:43:406 (283406|1,283492|2,283492|3,283577|0,283577|1,283663|3) - ctrl+h works better for balance
16:28 FelipeLink: k
16:29 juankristal: 04:46:149 (286149|1,286235|2,286235|3,286320|1,286320|0,286406|3) - same
16:29 FelipeLink: aight
16:29 juankristal: also that 04:46:492 (286492|2) - jack is probably better at column 4
16:30 juankristal: 04:51:977 (291977|1) - same move to 4
16:30 juankristal: or actually
16:30 juankristal: 04:52:063 (292063|1,292149|2) - just ctrl+h that
16:30 juankristal: 04:58:920 (298920|2,299006|1) - same ctrl+h
16:31 FelipeLink: oki
16:31 juankristal: you dont seem very happy tbh
16:31 FelipeLink: ehhh
16:32 FelipeLink: nah
16:32 FelipeLink: just kinda bad with myself
16:33 FelipeLink: im not gonna scream this time or something, but well :v
16:35 juankristal: sad
16:37 juankristal: 03:19:149 (199149|3,199235|2,199320|3) - ctrl+h and move
16:37 FelipeLink: done
16:38 juankristal: its funny because I can atm destroy your chart
16:38 juankristal: because you will just answer done
16:38 FelipeLink: LUL
16:38 FelipeLink: nah
16:38 FelipeLink: i check everything pls
16:38 juankristal: pls
16:38 FelipeLink: (^:
16:39 juankristal: I really hope I dont get nuked for doing this
Aurele
rip juankristal
Riari

Gabe wrote:

rip juankristal
JuanW
IamKwaN
Source should be beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem, given it's a remix of the song originally from it.
http://www.konami.jp/bemani/bm2dx/bm2dx ... etime.html

Unicode Artist could be 天音, anyways it's up to you as the composer uses both expressions.
http://tribullets.info/index.cgi?no=40
https://soundcloud.com/ama_loli/amane-space-time-amane
Arzenvald

Riari wrote:

Gabe wrote:

rip juankristal
JuanW
boi
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

IamKwaN wrote:

Source should be beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem, given it's a remix of the song originally from it.
http://www.konami.jp/bemani/bm2dx/bm2dx ... etime.html

Unicode Artist could be 天音, anyways it's up to you as the composer uses both expressions.
http://tribullets.info/index.cgi?no=40
https://soundcloud.com/ama_loli/amane-space-time-amane
okay no problem, added the source and changed the artist ^_^
IamKwaN
so we are back
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

IamKwaN wrote:

so we are back

O/// yay!

<3
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