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19:22 Aeii: ok
19:22 Aeii: so the map is good in terms of rythym
19:22 Aeii: and prety good overall uctually
19:23 Aeii: you just need to pay more attention to asthertics
19:24 Aeii: for exapmple, 00:15:696 (4,5) - you could blanket these
19:24 Aeii: and they would look a lot better
19:24 Aeii: same goes for 00:15:696 (4,5,6) -
19:24 Aeii: and 00:20:101 (5,6) -
19:26 CookieKivi: Okay. o:
19:26 Aeii: (sorry if this is picky but the map is good overall so i have to be
19:26 Aeii: again, you could blaket these properly 00:17:794 (8,1) -
19:27 Aeii: or you could do a really cool thing and blanket the stream with the approach circle 00:24:297 (5,6,7,8,9,1) -
19:27 Aeii: that would be +50 aeii points
19:28 CookieKivi: Umm, that sounds really meh but uhm, what do you exactly mean with blankets? So could you give me an example for that. o:
19:28 Aeii: t/208596
19:28 Aeii: blanket make the map look *a lot* cleaner
19:28 Aeii: they bassically mean your shit doesnt look like it was mapped by some newbie
19:29 CookieKivi: Ah, okay. o:
19:29 CookieKivi: I'll try my best to edit it like that. ~
19:29 Aeii: this slider looks really ugly ;-; 00:30:171 (8) -
19:29 Aeii: make it more curved after the two red nodes
19:30 Aeii: becuase it looks like a 2008 alider right now
19:30 Aeii: again, slight blanket error 00:32:268 (3,4) -
19:31 Aeii: 00:34:786 (7,8) - read up
19:31 CookieKivi: Is the slider okay like that? [http://puu.sh/mFCoa.jpg ~]
19:31 Aeii: 00:36:044 (9,1) - ^
19:32 Aeii: yes, that looks *a lot* better
19:32 Aeii: you could make this stream more curved/even 00:37:723 (3,4,5,6,7) -
19:32 Aeii: right now it stars as a wave and ends in a curve
19:33 Aeii: don't do that unless you have long streams
19:34 Aeii: i reccomend adding a new slider here
19:34 Aeii: at the green line
19:34 Aeii: the music completely changes but its all one slider
19:35 Aeii: i mean here 00:57:022 -
19:35 Aeii: and make it a new combo
19:36 Aeii: this slider would look *a lot* better if it was just a simple curve 01:06:252 (9) -
19:36 Aeii: usually, you want to stick to simple sliders as much as possible
19:36 Aeii: unless you are 100% certain they flow well and fit in with the music
19:36 Aeii: and even then most of the times a simple curve/stright slider is better
19:38 Aeii: these 01:09:189 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - , have inconsitent spacing for soem reason
19:38 Aeii: some*
19:38 Aeii: you missed an important beat here, 01:10:867
19:39 Aeii: 01:10:867 - *
19:39 Aeii: mabye map a circle at the end of the slider? that would work i think
19:40 CookieKivi: kk.. edited that all.
19:41 CookieKivi: ~ Another question.
19:41 Aeii: go ahead >3
19:41 CookieKivi: Do you like the custom hitsounds? '^'
19:42 CookieKivi: And.. do they fit in your opinion?
19:42 Aeii: there certainlty wierd ;-;
19:42 Aeii: but they do fit
19:42 Aeii: but i keep thinking i got a pm becuase of them
19:43 Aeii: but if you think it works, it propably works
19:43 CookieKivi: They should work yeah.
19:43 CookieKivi: So.. thank you really for the mod.
19:43 CookieKivi: ;;
19:22 Aeii: so the map is good in terms of rythym
19:22 Aeii: and prety good overall uctually
19:23 Aeii: you just need to pay more attention to asthertics
19:24 Aeii: for exapmple, 00:15:696 (4,5) - you could blanket these
19:24 Aeii: and they would look a lot better
19:24 Aeii: same goes for 00:15:696 (4,5,6) -
19:24 Aeii: and 00:20:101 (5,6) -
19:26 CookieKivi: Okay. o:
19:26 Aeii: (sorry if this is picky but the map is good overall so i have to be
19:26 Aeii: again, you could blaket these properly 00:17:794 (8,1) -
19:27 Aeii: or you could do a really cool thing and blanket the stream with the approach circle 00:24:297 (5,6,7,8,9,1) -
19:27 Aeii: that would be +50 aeii points
19:28 CookieKivi: Umm, that sounds really meh but uhm, what do you exactly mean with blankets? So could you give me an example for that. o:
19:28 Aeii: t/208596
19:28 Aeii: blanket make the map look *a lot* cleaner
19:28 Aeii: they bassically mean your shit doesnt look like it was mapped by some newbie
19:29 CookieKivi: Ah, okay. o:
19:29 CookieKivi: I'll try my best to edit it like that. ~
19:29 Aeii: this slider looks really ugly ;-; 00:30:171 (8) -
19:29 Aeii: make it more curved after the two red nodes
19:30 Aeii: becuase it looks like a 2008 alider right now
19:30 Aeii: again, slight blanket error 00:32:268 (3,4) -
19:31 Aeii: 00:34:786 (7,8) - read up
19:31 CookieKivi: Is the slider okay like that? [http://puu.sh/mFCoa.jpg ~]
19:31 Aeii: 00:36:044 (9,1) - ^
19:32 Aeii: yes, that looks *a lot* better
19:32 Aeii: you could make this stream more curved/even 00:37:723 (3,4,5,6,7) -
19:32 Aeii: right now it stars as a wave and ends in a curve
19:33 Aeii: don't do that unless you have long streams
19:34 Aeii: i reccomend adding a new slider here
19:34 Aeii: at the green line
19:34 Aeii: the music completely changes but its all one slider
19:35 Aeii: i mean here 00:57:022 -
19:35 Aeii: and make it a new combo
19:36 Aeii: this slider would look *a lot* better if it was just a simple curve 01:06:252 (9) -
19:36 Aeii: usually, you want to stick to simple sliders as much as possible
19:36 Aeii: unless you are 100% certain they flow well and fit in with the music
19:36 Aeii: and even then most of the times a simple curve/stright slider is better
19:38 Aeii: these 01:09:189 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - , have inconsitent spacing for soem reason
19:38 Aeii: some*
19:38 Aeii: you missed an important beat here, 01:10:867
19:39 Aeii: 01:10:867 - *
19:39 Aeii: mabye map a circle at the end of the slider? that would work i think
19:40 CookieKivi: kk.. edited that all.
19:41 CookieKivi: ~ Another question.
19:41 Aeii: go ahead >3
19:41 CookieKivi: Do you like the custom hitsounds? '^'
19:42 CookieKivi: And.. do they fit in your opinion?
19:42 Aeii: there certainlty wierd ;-;
19:42 Aeii: but they do fit
19:42 Aeii: but i keep thinking i got a pm becuase of them
19:43 Aeii: but if you think it works, it propably works
19:43 CookieKivi: They should work yeah.
19:43 CookieKivi: So.. thank you really for the mod.
19:43 CookieKivi: ;;
Hi! M4M from my modding queue 
GENERAL
-flow isnt very ideal at times but besides that its quite well done
-check aimod (ctrl+shift+a) and snap all unsnapped objects by simply moving them forward and backward again on the timeline :>
-personally im bad at hitsounds but i find that using the bubbly hitsound as a normal hitsound is very overused and rather annoying to the ear like using it as an additional hitsound seems more appropriate but idk find a hitsound expert
-maybe can add more kiai segments such as at 01:54:158 - 02:21:011 and 00:57:095 - 01:24:158
HARD
00:16:396 (5) - maybe u can shape this slider such that it wraps around the previous slider end perfectly
00:17:864 (8) - doesnt flow well from previous tap
00:27:725 (3) - ^
00:28:773 (5) - let this be spaced equally between the two adjacent sliders
00:38:633 (8) - spaced rather closely so ppl might think its 1/2 beat apart from previous tap
00:56:675 (4) - why not make this a double reverse slider too like the previous 3? ppl might intuitively think its double reverse too because its in the same pattern and combo as the previous 3, causing them to break. actually i wouldnt even reverse this at all fits the song better
01:00:871 (5) - doesnt flow well from prev tap
01:08:214 (3) - space equally betwwen the two sldiers
01:28:983 (2) - bad flow from prev slider. like maybe ctrl+h on same position
01:36:116 (4) - poor flow from prev beat
01:50:382 (5) - ^
01:51:433 (6,7) - maybe align these in a straight line to the slider head of slider no. 5
01:51:643 (7,8,9) - can be better placed to flow better
02:01:292 (2) - bad flow
02:29:822 (5) - this helix slider can be better drawn
02:43:878 (7) - bad flow from previous beat
02:44:088 (8) - ^
02:45:766 (4,5,6) - anti-flow?? ctrl+h would be better
02:47:654 (3,4,5) - if youre trying to draw a square can be placed better :/
02:50:382 (2) - bad flow. maybe start of slider can be located lower?
02:53:318 (1,2,3,4) - i dont her any stream in music to back this up but maybe the vocals might allow it
02:56:046 (1) - bad flow
03:02:130 (6) - ppl might mistaken this for a single reverse slider because the previous one was single reverse. maybe just stream this part
03:05:696 (2) - distance equally
03:07:375 (6) - this seems too close to prev slider
03:18:493 (9) - maybe place this further away to show that its 1 beat apart
ok that all thanks for modding my map and good luck with yours !
hopefully my mod was of any help :X
GENERAL
-flow isnt very ideal at times but besides that its quite well done
-check aimod (ctrl+shift+a) and snap all unsnapped objects by simply moving them forward and backward again on the timeline :>
-personally im bad at hitsounds but i find that using the bubbly hitsound as a normal hitsound is very overused and rather annoying to the ear like using it as an additional hitsound seems more appropriate but idk find a hitsound expert
-maybe can add more kiai segments such as at 01:54:158 - 02:21:011 and 00:57:095 - 01:24:158
HARD
00:16:396 (5) - maybe u can shape this slider such that it wraps around the previous slider end perfectly
00:17:864 (8) - doesnt flow well from previous tap
00:27:725 (3) - ^
00:28:773 (5) - let this be spaced equally between the two adjacent sliders
00:38:633 (8) - spaced rather closely so ppl might think its 1/2 beat apart from previous tap
00:56:675 (4) - why not make this a double reverse slider too like the previous 3? ppl might intuitively think its double reverse too because its in the same pattern and combo as the previous 3, causing them to break. actually i wouldnt even reverse this at all fits the song better
01:00:871 (5) - doesnt flow well from prev tap
01:08:214 (3) - space equally betwwen the two sldiers
01:28:983 (2) - bad flow from prev slider. like maybe ctrl+h on same position
01:36:116 (4) - poor flow from prev beat
01:50:382 (5) - ^
01:51:433 (6,7) - maybe align these in a straight line to the slider head of slider no. 5
01:51:643 (7,8,9) - can be better placed to flow better
02:01:292 (2) - bad flow
02:29:822 (5) - this helix slider can be better drawn
02:43:878 (7) - bad flow from previous beat
02:44:088 (8) - ^
02:45:766 (4,5,6) - anti-flow?? ctrl+h would be better
02:47:654 (3,4,5) - if youre trying to draw a square can be placed better :/
02:50:382 (2) - bad flow. maybe start of slider can be located lower?
02:53:318 (1,2,3,4) - i dont her any stream in music to back this up but maybe the vocals might allow it
02:56:046 (1) - bad flow
03:02:130 (6) - ppl might mistaken this for a single reverse slider because the previous one was single reverse. maybe just stream this part
03:05:696 (2) - distance equally
03:07:375 (6) - this seems too close to prev slider
03:18:493 (9) - maybe place this further away to show that its 1 beat apart
ok that all
thanks for modding my map and good luck with yours !hopefully my mod was of any help :X
Topic Starter
shadow_neko wrote:
Hi! M4M from my modding queue
GENERAL
-flow isnt very ideal at times but besides that its quite well done
-check aimod (ctrl+shift+a) and snap all unsnapped objects by simply moving them forward and backward again on the timeline :> Fixed lol
-personally im bad at hitsounds but i find that using the bubbly hitsound as a normal hitsound is very overused and rather annoying to the ear like using it as an additional hitsound seems more appropriate but idk find a hitsound expert
-maybe can add more kiai segments such as at 01:54:158 - 02:21:011 and 00:57:095 - 01:24:158 ^ 2muchkiai4me
HARD
00:16:396 (5) - maybe u can shape this slider such that it wraps around the previous slider end perfectly Maybe fixed. owo
00:17:864 (8) - doesnt flow well from previous tap Do you think so? I guess it's fine.
00:27:725 (3) - ^ ^
00:28:773 (5) - let this be spaced equally between the two adjacent sliders Fixed
00:38:633 (8) - spaced rather closely so ppl might think its 1/2 beat apart from previous tap Fixed
00:56:675 (4) - why not make this a double reverse slider too like the previous 3? ppl might intuitively think its double reverse too because its in the same pattern and combo as the previous 3, causing them to break. actually i wouldnt even reverse this at all fits the song better Aeii just said i shoudn't keep that because a new flow begins lol. So imma keep
01:00:871 (5) - doesnt flow well from prev tap Fixed
01:08:214 (3) - space equally betwwen the two sldiers Fixed
01:28:983 (2) - bad flow from prev slider. like maybe ctrl+h on same position Fixed dat.
01:36:116 (4) - poor flow from prev beat Fixed
01:50:382 (5) - ^ That actually fits.
01:51:433 (6,7) - maybe align these in a straight line to the slider head of slider no. 5 What do you mean? owo
01:51:643 (7,8,9) - can be better placed to flow better It's okay.
02:01:292 (2) - bad flow Fixed
02:29:822 (5) - this helix slider can be better drawn .. HOW2SLIDERART. FIXED.. i guess.
02:43:878 (7) - bad flow from previous beat It's okay.
02:44:088 (8) - ^ It's okay.
02:45:766 (4,5,6) - anti-flow?? ctrl+h would be better ^
02:47:654 (3,4,5) - if youre trying to draw a square can be placed better :/ Fixed
02:50:382 (2) - bad flow. maybe start of slider can be located lower? Fixed?
02:53:318 (1,2,3,4) - i dont her any stream in music to back this up but maybe the vocals might allow it k imma change.
02:56:046 (1) - bad flow Fixed
03:02:130 (6) - ppl might mistaken this for a single reverse slider because the previous one was single reverse. maybe just stream this part Fixed
03:05:696 (2) - distance equally Fixed
03:07:375 (6) - this seems too close to prev slider Fixed
03:18:493 (9) - maybe place this further away to show that its 1 beat apart Fixed
ok that all
hopefully my mod was of any help :X
Hi, from my queue~
[Hard]
Maybe AR 8 since the SV is slow?
00:52:060 (8) - Maybe keep this straight like the previous kick slider.
02:29:822 (5) – Maybe make it more like this ?
02:47:025 (2) – Maybe you can turn this into a blanket.
02:54:997 (5) – Fix blanket.
02:59:193 (8,1,2) – I think this part looks better like this
03:02:969 (1) – short sliders don’t look very good when curved. I’d recommend you to always keep them straight or only slightly curved. Also, I can’t see why this kick slider is needed here.
02:45:766 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Maybe put it like this instead?
And I’d recommend you to use more patterns throughout the map such as blanketing and symmetries.
Also, don’t do too many repeat sliders. Players might find them boring D:
And check your NC's. NC's are required in every line of the song.
Lol a bit short here. I couldn’t seem to find many problems. Nice map and good luck!
And also, is GD open? I know the answer now
[Hard]
Maybe AR 8 since the SV is slow?
00:52:060 (8) - Maybe keep this straight like the previous kick slider.
02:29:822 (5) – Maybe make it more like this ?
02:47:025 (2) – Maybe you can turn this into a blanket.
02:54:997 (5) – Fix blanket.
02:59:193 (8,1,2) – I think this part looks better like this
03:02:969 (1) – short sliders don’t look very good when curved. I’d recommend you to always keep them straight or only slightly curved. Also, I can’t see why this kick slider is needed here.
02:45:766 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Maybe put it like this instead?
And I’d recommend you to use more patterns throughout the map such as blanketing and symmetries.
Also, don’t do too many repeat sliders. Players might find them boring D:
And check your NC's. NC's are required in every line of the song.
Lol a bit short here. I couldn’t seem to find many problems. Nice map and good luck!
Hi, from my m4m queue
00:43:878 (5,6,7) - why a triplet? Theres no beat indicating that it need one
01:01:500 - since theres a drum beat here, maybe add a circle?
01:22:690 (1,1) - - change it to http://puu.sh/mMF6e/a038392222.png
01:36:116 (4,5) - the blanket could be better
02:16:396 (1) - the end of the slider doesn't look smooth, turn it a bit to the left
02:40:941 (1,2) - the flow here is quite bad
03:02:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape od the stream is quite odd, maybe smooth it out a bit
the map itself is not bad, but there's a lot of problems with blanketing, I'll advice to recheck all the blankets
good luck
00:43:878 (5,6,7) - why a triplet? Theres no beat indicating that it need one
01:01:500 - since theres a drum beat here, maybe add a circle?
01:22:690 (1,1) - - change it to http://puu.sh/mMF6e/a038392222.png
01:36:116 (4,5) - the blanket could be better
02:16:396 (1) - the end of the slider doesn't look smooth, turn it a bit to the left
02:40:941 (1,2) - the flow here is quite bad
03:02:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape od the stream is quite odd, maybe smooth it out a bit
the map itself is not bad, but there's a lot of problems with blanketing, I'll advice to recheck all the blankets
good luck
Topic Starter
Potato-chii wrote:
Hi, from my queue~
[Hard]
Maybe AR 8 since the SV is slow? lol, why do i have AR9. Fixed. owo
00:52:060 (8) - Maybe keep this straight like the previous kick slider. Fixed
02:29:822 (5) – Maybe make it more like this ? Im so bad with sliderart. Fixed as good as i can.
02:47:025 (2) – Maybe you can turn this into a blanket. Naah.
02:54:997 (5) – Fix blanket. Fixed.
02:59:193 (8,1,2) – I think this part looks better like this Fixed
03:02:969 (1) – short sliders don’t look very good when curved. I’d recommend you to always keep them straight or only slightly curved. Also, I can’t see why this kick slider is needed here. Fixed.In my opinion the kickslider fits. c:
02:45:766 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Maybe put it like this instead? Fixed.
And I’d recommend you to use more patterns throughout the map such as blanketing and symmetries.
Also, don’t do too many repeat sliders. Players might find them boring D: I try to fix it as good as i can.. .w.
And check your NC's. NC's are required in every line of the song. Yeah.. ^ ;;
Lol a bit short here. I couldn’t seem to find many problems. Nice map and good luck!
^ Still thank you for the mod. :3And also, is GD open?I know the answer now
Topic Starter
Changed that all. :33XxSeonxX wrote:
Hi, from my m4m queue
00:43:878 (5,6,7) - why a triplet? Theres no beat indicating that it need one
01:01:500 - since theres a drum beat here, maybe add a circle?
01:22:690 (1,1) - - change it to http://puu.sh/mMF6e/a038392222.png
01:36:116 (4,5) - the blanket could be better
02:16:396 (1) - the end of the slider doesn't look smooth, turn it a bit to the left
02:40:941 (1,2) - the flow here is quite bad
03:02:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape od the stream is quite odd, maybe smooth it out a bit
the map itself is not bad, but there's a lot of problems with blanketing, I'll advice to recheck all the blankets
good luck
Thank you. ~
Hey, M4M
[Hard]
OD8 is pretty high for Hard, 6 would be better. HP is high as well
Check your AIMod, two slider ends are unsnapped
I feel like NC's need some work for example 00:17:444 (6) - this should really be an NC, and then take NC off of 00:18:493 (4) - and add to 00:19:124 (5) - etc etc etc
00:15:766 (4,5,6) - This is all really cramped right now, and the (6) is too close to 00:16:395 (5) - (having objects TOO close like that without overlapping looks meh)
00:19:333 (3,4) - Again pretty close
00:25:627 (2) - Repeat sliders that aren't 1/4 having more than one repeat has been something I've disliked ever since I've started playing since I never feel like they work well in any situation. It would be better if you take off the last repeat and then put two hitcircles in 1/2
00:31:292 (1) - ^
00:34:858 (7,8) - I don't like modding blankets but this is pretty noticeable
00:39:053 (1,2) - Overlap not great here
00:54:158 (1,2,3) -
00:59:612 (3) - The end of this looks pretty sketchy
01:01:710 (8,1) - Cursor flow isn't ideal here
01:13:879 (1,3) - All kinds of weird overlap since the bodies and tails overlap but then the tips are only barely touching like
01:37:794 (6,1,2) - Strange flow, try and consider the cursor and where its moving and how it feels on your hand
01:54:577 - Could put kiai here
02:15:137 (5) - Try not to overdo sliders like this
02:16:396 (1) - Woah so many points
02:21:431 (1) - ^^
02:29:822 (5) - Unrankable I think
02:34:857 (8,1,2,3) - These very small overlaps trigger me for some reason
03:16:815 (8) - Just doesn't fit the song, should be seperate sliders
There's more things I can point out, but you'll come to realise them yourself in your own time so it's fine.
Good luck!
[Hard]
OD8 is pretty high for Hard, 6 would be better. HP is high as well
Check your AIMod, two slider ends are unsnapped
I feel like NC's need some work for example 00:17:444 (6) - this should really be an NC, and then take NC off of 00:18:493 (4) - and add to 00:19:124 (5) - etc etc etc
00:15:766 (4,5,6) - This is all really cramped right now, and the (6) is too close to 00:16:395 (5) - (having objects TOO close like that without overlapping looks meh)
00:19:333 (3,4) - Again pretty close
00:25:627 (2) - Repeat sliders that aren't 1/4 having more than one repeat has been something I've disliked ever since I've started playing since I never feel like they work well in any situation. It would be better if you take off the last repeat and then put two hitcircles in 1/2
00:31:292 (1) - ^
00:34:858 (7,8) - I don't like modding blankets but this is pretty noticeable
00:39:053 (1,2) - Overlap not great here
00:54:158 (1,2,3) -
00:59:612 (3) - The end of this looks pretty sketchy
01:01:710 (8,1) - Cursor flow isn't ideal here
01:13:879 (1,3) - All kinds of weird overlap since the bodies and tails overlap but then the tips are only barely touching like
01:37:794 (6,1,2) - Strange flow, try and consider the cursor and where its moving and how it feels on your hand
01:54:577 - Could put kiai here
02:15:137 (5) - Try not to overdo sliders like this
02:16:396 (1) - Woah so many points
02:21:431 (1) - ^^
02:29:822 (5) - Unrankable I think
02:34:857 (8,1,2,3) - These very small overlaps trigger me for some reason
03:16:815 (8) - Just doesn't fit the song, should be seperate sliders
There's more things I can point out, but you'll come to realise them yourself in your own time so it's fine.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Cheesecake wrote:
Hey, M4M
[Hard]
OD8 is pretty high for Hard, 6 would be better. HP is high as well Fixed. ~
Check your AIMod, two slider ends are unsnapped Fixed. ~
I feel like NC's need some work for example 00:17:444 (6) - this should really be an NC, and then take NC off of 00:18:493 (4) - and add to 00:19:124 (5) - etc etc etc I'm working on it.
00:15:766 (4,5,6) - This is all really cramped right now, and the (6) is too close to 00:16:395 (5) - (having objects TOO close like that without overlapping looks meh) Blankets.. i like those patterns tho. .w.
00:19:333 (3,4) - Again pretty close ^
00:25:627 (2) - Repeat sliders that aren't 1/4 having more than one repeat has been something I've disliked ever since I've started playing since I never feel like they work well in any situation. It would be better if you take off the last repeat and then put two hitcircles in 1/2 Fixed.. i guess.
00:31:292 (1) - ^ Fixed, desu.
00:34:858 (7,8) - I don't like modding blankets but this is pretty noticeable I can't fix it.. breaks Gs..
00:39:053 (1,2) - Overlap not great here Fixed
00:54:158 (1,2,3) -
00:59:612 (3) - The end of this looks pretty sketchy Fixed
01:01:710 (8,1) - Cursor flow isn't ideal here Fixed
01:13:879 (1,3) - All kinds of weird overlap since the bodies and tails overlap but then the tips are only barely touching like Fixed
01:37:794 (6,1,2) - Strange flow, try and consider the cursor and where its moving and how it feels on your hand Fixed as gud as i can
01:54:577 - Could put kiai here oki.
02:15:137 (5) - Try not to overdo sliders like this Okay, fixed.
02:16:396 (1) - Woah so many points Not so many anymore.
02:21:431 (1) - ^^ ^!
02:29:822 (5) - Unrankable I think If i trust the people on #modhelp, it is.
02:34:857 (8,1,2,3) - These very small overlaps trigger me for some reason Snapped objects, gud objects.
03:16:815 (8) - Just doesn't fit the song, should be seperate sliders kk, fixed. :33
There's more things I can point out, but you'll come to realise them yourself in your own time so it's fine.
Okay, thanks for the mod. :33
Good luck!
[General]
BG doesn't match the song.
Fill the tags.
Uncheck Widecreen Support in Design tab in Song Setup.
Combo1 and Combo3 are very similar.
[Hard]
00:23:529 (3) - upbeat sliders, it's unrankable. You need to highlight it, cuz it's strong. And don't trust the #modhelp channel, trust osu site and QATs - BNs Second part
There's a lot of upbeat sliders, fix it.
Place NC every second big white tick. It'll be better.
00:34:858 (1,2,3) - spacing.
01:19:543 (4,5) - ^.
Don't change the spacing.
02:02:130 (4,6) - overlap, looks really ugly.
Rewatch your diff and fix those issues.
Best of luck~
BG doesn't match the song.
Fill the tags.
Uncheck Widecreen Support in Design tab in Song Setup.
Combo1 and Combo3 are very similar.
[Hard]
00:23:529 (3) - upbeat sliders, it's unrankable. You need to highlight it, cuz it's strong. And don't trust the #modhelp channel, trust osu site and QATs - BNs Second part
There's a lot of upbeat sliders, fix it.
Place NC every second big white tick. It'll be better.
00:34:858 (1,2,3) - spacing.
01:19:543 (4,5) - ^.
Don't change the spacing.
02:02:130 (4,6) - overlap, looks really ugly.
Rewatch your diff and fix those issues.
Best of luck~
Topic Starter
Thank you for the mod. ~Namki wrote:
[General]
BG doesn't match the song. Welp.. it would match if i have the video. But i can't add because if i download it it's 42mb big. And idfk how to make it smaller.
Fill the tags. With what now is the question. ._.
Uncheck Widecreen Support in Design tab in Song Setup. Fixed
Combo1 and Combo3 are very similar. Fixed
[Hard]
00:23:529 (3) - upbeat sliders, it's unrankable. You need to highlight it, cuz it's strong. And don't trust the #modhelp channel, trust osu site and QATs - BNs Second part k, fixed
There's a lot of upbeat sliders, fix it.
Place NC every second big white tick. It'll be better. I'll fixed some of them so they fit.
00:34:858 (1,2,3) - spacing. Fixed
01:19:543 (4,5) - ^. Fixed.
Don't change the spacing.
02:02:130 (4,6) - overlap, looks really ugly. Nah not really. .-.
Rewatch your diff and fix those issues.
Best of luck~
[General]
Change BG please
[Hard]
Ar8 = Ar 7.5 or 7
00:25:627 (2,3) - bad flow
00:25:207 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:627 (2) - NC
00:31:920 (1,2) - slider focus on vocal
00:34:858 (3) - remove repeat and put 00:35:486 - 3 circle
00:36:536 (1) - Remove repeat and put 2 circle on white and red tick
00:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or 00:38:634 (7) - ehm fix please
00:53:109 - missing circle?
01:06:326 (1) - put 1/4 and next 1/4 too
01:17:026 (6) - Not nice remove 1 repeat and put circle
01:26:886 (1,2) - blanket please
01:28:354 (1,2) - ^
01:28:354 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:44:087 (7,1) - ^
02:47:025 (2,6) - overlap
02:50:800 (3,4) - Blanket
GL~
Change BG please
[Hard]
Ar8 = Ar 7.5 or 7
00:25:627 (2,3) - bad flow
00:25:207 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:627 (2) - NC
00:31:920 (1,2) - slider focus on vocal
00:34:858 (3) - remove repeat and put 00:35:486 - 3 circle
00:36:536 (1) - Remove repeat and put 2 circle on white and red tick
00:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or 00:38:634 (7) - ehm fix please
00:53:109 - missing circle?
01:06:326 (1) - put 1/4 and next 1/4 too
01:17:026 (6) - Not nice remove 1 repeat and put circle
01:26:886 (1,2) - blanket please
01:28:354 (1,2) - ^
01:28:354 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:44:087 (7,1) - ^
02:47:025 (2,6) - overlap
02:50:800 (3,4) - Blanket
GL~
Topic Starter
Fixed that all, thank you.wajinshu wrote:
[General]
Change BG please k.. but what fits a britney spears song.. -thinks- imma change it later because of so many requests.
[Hard]
Ar8 = Ar 7.5 or 7
00:25:627 (2,3) - bad flow
00:25:207 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:627 (2) - NC
00:31:920 (1,2) - slider focus on vocal
00:34:858 (3) - remove repeat and put 00:35:486 - 3 circle
00:36:536 (1) - Remove repeat and put 2 circle on white and red tick
00:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or 00:38:634 (7) - ehm fix please
00:53:109 - missing circle?
01:06:326 (1) - put 1/4 and next 1/4 too
01:17:026 (6) - Not nice remove 1 repeat and put circle
01:26:886 (1,2) - blanket please
01:28:354 (1,2) - ^
01:28:354 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:44:087 (7,1) - ^
02:47:025 (2,6) - overlap
02:50:800 (3,4) - Blanket
GL~
[General]
AudioFilename: Britney Spears - Toxic.mp3
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
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Title:Toxic
TitleUnicode:Toxic
Artist:Britney Spears
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Creator:CookieKivi
Version:Mondo's Normal
Source:
Tags:In the Zone electropop poison Cathy Dennis Christian Karlsson Henrik Jonback Pontus Winnberg
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[Difficulty]
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Name It Mondo's Normal and that's it! Hope you like it!
Topic Starter
amg.. thank you! >w<MondoKuma wrote:
Im doing a Normal Guest difficulty Expect it next soon! Love this song!
I'm so fckn glad you did. ;w;
from #modreqs
the points i'm going to talk about are all suggestions... so feel free to deny it xd
[Potachii's Insane]
the points i'm going to talk about are all suggestions... so feel free to deny it xd
[Potachii's Insane]
- i'm not going to point all the blankets... because that's a bad modding imo, but there are tons of blankets that could be improved
- 00:29:612 (1,2) - stacking this 2 doesn't make much sense, because voice starts in 00:29:822 - , so would be better if u could make a jump here
- 00:29:822 (2) - this follows rhythm in a better way imo
- 00:28:773 (4) - ctrl + g maybe... because angles are too straight (see in image), also if u do this u can make a blanket with 00:27:934 (2,4) -
- 00:31:500 (2) - i would like to put more emphasis in this note
- 00:31:920 (3,4) - flow between those 2 isn't the best... because you have to do a weird cursor movement... also these jump doesn't make much sense, because there is nothing to emphasise... what about changing that part into this rhythm?
- 00:37:584 (1) - kickslider here doesn't fit well... i would delete it an replace with a circle
- 00:44:717 (3,4) - again... stacking doesn't feel good... its better to make a jump
- 00:54:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - why is the spacing increasing? ... music is pretty constant here, so those kind of jumps are kinda out of place. something like this fits better imo
- 00:57:200 (15) - move this to 00:57:095 - feels much better tbh xd
- 00:57:305 - you could add a note here
- 01:02:130 - why increase SV here? "to" and "xic" sounds like the same, so would be better if u could just keep the same SV
- 01:02:549 -
fits much better tbh
- 01:04:228 - compare this part with 00:57:514 - this... it's the same background music but it's mapped so different... you should make it consistent
- 01:06:326 - why sv change here... make it consistent with 00:59:612 (7) -
- 01:08:843 - doesn't really need a SV here... the music is still being the same as previous xd
- 01:08:843 (1) - short this slider to red tick and add repetitive arrow
- 01:12:619 - you should do this beat clickable... because guitar
- 01:24:368 - ^
- 01:24:577 (5,6) - delete this notes xd
- 01:51:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make it consistent with 00:54:158 - (i mean... use the same objects. sliders with repetitive arrow doesn't fit well)
- 01:54:577 - this kiai is exactly the same as previous XD it's just rotated a bit... you should at least make new patterns... otherwise just take a look to the previous suggestions
- 02:18:074 - make it clickable
Btw I'm usually busy so you have 100% permission to make changed to my difficulty
Kagetsu wrote:
from #modreqs
the points i'm going to talk about are all suggestions... so feel free to deny it xd
[Potachii's Insane]fixed
- i'm not going to point all the blankets... because that's a bad modding imo, but there are tons of blankets that could be improved I'll try fix them all :3
- 00:29:612 (1,2) - stacking this 2 doesn't make much sense, because voice starts in 00:29:822 - , so would be better if u could make a jump here fixed
- 00:29:822 (2) - this follows rhythm in a better way imo
fixed
- 00:28:773 (4) - ctrl + g maybe... because angles are too straight (see in image) fixed, also if u do this u can make a blanket with 00:27:934 (2,4) I don't get it... sorry T^T -
- 00:31:500 (2) - i would like to put more emphasis in this note fixed
- 00:31:920 (3,4) - flow between those 2 isn't the best... because you have to do a weird cursor movement... also these jump doesn't make much sense, because there is nothing to emphasise... what about changing that part into this rhythm?
hm... I think I've changed it previously... oh well
- 00:37:584 (1) - kickslider here doesn't fit well... i would delete it an replace with a circle fixed
- 00:44:717 (3,4) - again... stacking doesn't feel good... its better to make a jump fixed
- 00:54:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - why is the spacing increasing? ... music is pretty constant here, so those kind of jumps are kinda out of place. something like this fits better imo fixed
- 00:57:200 (15) - move this to 00:57:095 - feels much better tbh xd fixed
- 00:57:305 - you could add a note here fixed
- 01:02:130 - why increase SV here? "to" and "xic" sounds like the same, so would be better if u could just keep the same SV fixed
- 01:02:549 -
- 01:04:228 - compare this part with 00:57:514 - this... it's the same background music but it's mapped so different... you should make it consistent fixed
- 01:06:326 - why sv change here... make it consistent with 00:59:612 (7) - made SV changes to 00:59:612 (7)
- 01:08:843 - doesn't really need a SV here... the music is still being the same as previous xd fixed
- 01:08:843 (1) - short this slider to red tick and add repetitive arrow i dun get it...
- 01:12:619 - you should do this beat clickable... because guitar fixed
- 01:24:368 - ^ fixed
- 01:24:577 (5,6) - delete this notes xd fixed
- 01:51:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make it consistent with 00:54:158 - (i mean... use the same objects. sliders with repetitive arrow doesn't fit well) fixed
- 01:54:577 - this kiai is exactly the same as previous XD it's just rotated a bit... you should at least make new patterns... otherwise just take a look to the previous suggestions changed some stuff
- 02:18:074 - make it clickable
gl and sry about my english xd Thx~
Hi from my queue o/
[General]
[Hard]
[General]
- AiMod mentions a confilct of tags between diffs.
- Your 'normal-hitfinish2' hitsound has about 6ms of silence before the actual sound starts. I'd recommend removing that slience.
- from what i can tell, the other image in your songs folder is completely unused (old bg i think?) i think you need to delete it. (if its being used then dw ofc)
- 00:36:955 (6,2) - i think its better if these are stacked.
- 01:07:584 (3,4,5) - make perfect triangle?
- 02:03:808 (2,3,4,5) - maybe a touch extra distance? them being this close looks a lil bad imo.
- 03:01:710 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 02:14:717 (3) - NC here instead of the one after?
[Hard]
- 00:15:556 (3) - NC here pls
- 01:54:577 (3) - ^
- 02:20:591 (5) - ^
- 00:22:060 (3) - have this curve the other way?
- 00:45:346 (3,1) - this instead?
- 00:56:675 (4,1) - try this rhythm?
Thats all from me! Nice mapset dude! And thank you for modding my map
Gl!
Topic Starter
^ Fixed dat all! Thanks nuclea. :3
Melancholy Haze
Hello. As requested (M4M). Before I start, you should make your background image sharper and resize it to 1366x768 or find another image that would fit with the topic of the song. I also highly recommend to all of you to read this. It will help you.
Normal:
- 00:15:137 (1,2) - This could be a really great blanket if you will redesign a slider a bit.
- 00:20:591 (3,4) - ^
- 00:22:270 (1,1) - ^
- I'm not going to write every single slider and point that could be perfectly blanketed. I guess you are smart enough to figure out which ones you can fix.
- 00:34:018 (3,5) - Get rid of this overlap. It doesn't look nice and also it's pretty confusing even for me.
- 00:40:731 (3,1) - Swap new combos.
- 00:47:864 (2,5) - Another overlap that doesn't suit here. Move a slider 5 down and make it straight.
- The part after this unmapped. Why? You mapped the exact part before so why didn't you map this part as well?
- 01:02:969 (1) - Keep the consistency with previous combos and remove this new combo.
- 01:05:906 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:07:584 (3) - Add new combo.
- 01:08:843 (5) - Replace this slider with two circles. Slidershouldn't end on an downbeat. When you will do that, put a new combo on a second circle.
- 01:28:983 (5) - Same case ^ (except no changing new combos)
- 01:37:794 (4) - New combo.
- 01:39:472 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:03:389 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:04:647 (3) - New combo.
- 02:43:668 (3,1,2) - This pattern is pretty weird. Not only that the last note isn't blanketed by a slider, they are even stacked together (first and last).
- 02:49:542 (1) - Replace with two circles. (Another slider that ends on a downbeat).
- The last sliders...You're missing an important beats in the song (downbeats) and they aren't mapped. Consider remapping this part to make it more enjoyable and playable.
Hard:
- What's with that weird hitsounds? It doesn't actually fit into the song imo.
- 00:24:368 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is suitable for an Insane difficulty. Not for Hard.
- 00:43:458 (5,6) - Why different spacing here?
- 01:34:857 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same goes here as in the first one.
- 01:44:297 (6) - Why a blank part afterwards? It's not so different from other parts, so I don't see a problem with mapping it.
- 01:48:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - *sigh*
- 02:29:822 (2) - Redesign this slider a bit. It's quite confusing.
- Well...I went through this difficulty. You have a lot of inconsistent combos and repeating patterns. Players will be bored if they will play the same thing all over again. About combos, make every new combo on a downbeat and you'll be fine. Play also with the sliders, because they look kinda terrible in some parts.
Insane:
- And I thought that in this difficulty will be consistent combos. I was wrong. This is even worse. Combos are starting basically randomly...
- 00:22:899 (1) - Curve this slider a little.
- 00:43:249 (3,4) - Blanket.
- 00:51:955 - Unmapped but important part.
- 01:08:004 (3,4) - This is really hard to play, especially for players it might be a little surprising because you've mapped this part on vocal and now you've mapped this part on a beat and again on vocals. Concetrate on one specific part.
- Second kiai is basically copied from the previous one. With the same mistakes and such. Lazy mapper spotted.
- 02:26:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What is this? I know it should be an Insane difficulty but this doesn't fit into a music. It's a slow part so why you had to add jumps like this. Better to make some sliderart (or normal sliders) in this part instead of these jumps.
- 02:33:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
- 02:43:773 (6) - Overmapped.
- Ugh, even the third kiai is copied.
To sum it up. There are some overmapped parts in every difficulty and also, you are keep using the same patterns over and over again, which makes player feel bored. You're halfway through, so don't give up. Good luck.
Normal:
- 00:15:137 (1,2) - This could be a really great blanket if you will redesign a slider a bit.
- 00:20:591 (3,4) - ^
- 00:22:270 (1,1) - ^
- I'm not going to write every single slider and point that could be perfectly blanketed. I guess you are smart enough to figure out which ones you can fix.
- 00:34:018 (3,5) - Get rid of this overlap. It doesn't look nice and also it's pretty confusing even for me.
- 00:40:731 (3,1) - Swap new combos.
- 00:47:864 (2,5) - Another overlap that doesn't suit here. Move a slider 5 down and make it straight.
- The part after this unmapped. Why? You mapped the exact part before so why didn't you map this part as well?
- 01:02:969 (1) - Keep the consistency with previous combos and remove this new combo.
- 01:05:906 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:07:584 (3) - Add new combo.
- 01:08:843 (5) - Replace this slider with two circles. Slidershouldn't end on an downbeat. When you will do that, put a new combo on a second circle.
- 01:28:983 (5) - Same case ^ (except no changing new combos)
- 01:37:794 (4) - New combo.
- 01:39:472 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:03:389 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:04:647 (3) - New combo.
- 02:43:668 (3,1,2) - This pattern is pretty weird. Not only that the last note isn't blanketed by a slider, they are even stacked together (first and last).
- 02:49:542 (1) - Replace with two circles. (Another slider that ends on a downbeat).
- The last sliders...You're missing an important beats in the song (downbeats) and they aren't mapped. Consider remapping this part to make it more enjoyable and playable.
Hard:
- What's with that weird hitsounds? It doesn't actually fit into the song imo.
- 00:24:368 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is suitable for an Insane difficulty. Not for Hard.
- 00:43:458 (5,6) - Why different spacing here?
- 01:34:857 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same goes here as in the first one.
- 01:44:297 (6) - Why a blank part afterwards? It's not so different from other parts, so I don't see a problem with mapping it.
- 01:48:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - *sigh*
- 02:29:822 (2) - Redesign this slider a bit. It's quite confusing.
- Well...I went through this difficulty. You have a lot of inconsistent combos and repeating patterns. Players will be bored if they will play the same thing all over again. About combos, make every new combo on a downbeat and you'll be fine. Play also with the sliders, because they look kinda terrible in some parts.
Insane:
- And I thought that in this difficulty will be consistent combos. I was wrong. This is even worse. Combos are starting basically randomly...
- 00:22:899 (1) - Curve this slider a little.
- 00:43:249 (3,4) - Blanket.
- 00:51:955 - Unmapped but important part.
- 01:08:004 (3,4) - This is really hard to play, especially for players it might be a little surprising because you've mapped this part on vocal and now you've mapped this part on a beat and again on vocals. Concetrate on one specific part.
- Second kiai is basically copied from the previous one. With the same mistakes and such. Lazy mapper spotted.
- 02:26:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What is this? I know it should be an Insane difficulty but this doesn't fit into a music. It's a slow part so why you had to add jumps like this. Better to make some sliderart (or normal sliders) in this part instead of these jumps.
- 02:33:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
- 02:43:773 (6) - Overmapped.
- Ugh, even the third kiai is copied.
To sum it up. There are some overmapped parts in every difficulty and also, you are keep using the same patterns over and over again, which makes player feel bored. You're halfway through, so don't give up. Good luck.