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shadow_neko wrote:
Hi! M4M from my modding queue
GENERAL
-flow isnt very ideal at times but besides that its quite well done
-check aimod (ctrl+shift+a) and snap all unsnapped objects by simply moving them forward and backward again on the timeline :> Fixed lol
-personally im bad at hitsounds but i find that using the bubbly hitsound as a normal hitsound is very overused and rather annoying to the ear like using it as an additional hitsound seems more appropriate but idk find a hitsound expert Nah, it fits. :3
-maybe can add more kiai segments such as at 01:54:158 - 02:21:011 and 00:57:095 - 01:24:158 ^ 2muchkiai4me
HARD
00:16:396 (5) - maybe u can shape this slider such that it wraps around the previous slider end perfectly Maybe fixed. owo
00:17:864 (8) - doesnt flow well from previous tap Do you think so? I guess it's fine.
00:27:725 (3) - ^ ^
00:28:773 (5) - let this be spaced equally between the two adjacent sliders Fixed
00:38:633 (8) - spaced rather closely so ppl might think its 1/2 beat apart from previous tap Fixed
00:56:675 (4) - why not make this a double reverse slider too like the previous 3? ppl might intuitively think its double reverse too because its in the same pattern and combo as the previous 3, causing them to break. actually i wouldnt even reverse this at all fits the song better Aeii just said i shoudn't keep that because a new flow begins lol. So imma keep
01:00:871 (5) - doesnt flow well from prev tap Fixed
01:08:214 (3) - space equally betwwen the two sldiers Fixed
01:28:983 (2) - bad flow from prev slider. like maybe ctrl+h on same position Fixed dat.
01:36:116 (4) - poor flow from prev beat Fixed
01:50:382 (5) - ^ That actually fits.
01:51:433 (6,7) - maybe align these in a straight line to the slider head of slider no. 5 What do you mean? owo
01:51:643 (7,8,9) - can be better placed to flow better It's okay.
02:01:292 (2) - bad flow Fixed
02:29:822 (5) - this helix slider can be better drawn .. HOW2SLIDERART. FIXED.. i guess.
02:43:878 (7) - bad flow from previous beat It's okay.
02:44:088 (8) - ^ It's okay.
02:45:766 (4,5,6) - anti-flow?? ctrl+h would be better ^
02:47:654 (3,4,5) - if youre trying to draw a square can be placed better :/ Fixed
02:50:382 (2) - bad flow. maybe start of slider can be located lower? Fixed?
02:53:318 (1,2,3,4) - i dont her any stream in music to back this up but maybe the vocals might allow it k imma change.
02:56:046 (1) - bad flow Fixed
03:02:130 (6) - ppl might mistaken this for a single reverse slider because the previous one was single reverse. maybe just stream this part Fixed
03:05:696 (2) - distance equally Fixed
03:07:375 (6) - this seems too close to prev slider Fixed
03:18:493 (9) - maybe place this further away to show that its 1 beat apart Fixed
ok that all thanks for modding my map and good luck with yours !
hopefully my mod was of any help :X
Potato-chii wrote:
Hi, from my queue~
[Hard]
Maybe AR 8 since the SV is slow? lol, why do i have AR9. Fixed. owo
00:52:060 (8) - Maybe keep this straight like the previous kick slider. Fixed
02:29:822 (5) – Maybe make it more like this ? Im so bad with sliderart. Fixed as good as i can.
02:47:025 (2) – Maybe you can turn this into a blanket. Naah.
02:54:997 (5) – Fix blanket. Fixed.
02:59:193 (8,1,2) – I think this part looks better like this Fixed
03:02:969 (1) – short sliders don’t look very good when curved. I’d recommend you to always keep them straight or only slightly curved. Also, I can’t see why this kick slider is needed here. Fixed.In my opinion the kickslider fits. c:
02:45:766 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Maybe put it like this instead? Fixed.
And I’d recommend you to use more patterns throughout the map such as blanketing and symmetries.
Also, don’t do too many repeat sliders. Players might find them boring D: I try to fix it as good as i can.. .w.
And check your NC's. NC's are required in every line of the song. Yeah.. ^ ;;
Lol a bit short here. I couldn’t seem to find many problems. Nice map and good luck!
^ Still thank you for the mod. :3And also, is GD open?I know the answer now
Changed that all. :33XxSeonxX wrote:
Hi, from my m4m queue
00:43:878 (5,6,7) - why a triplet? Theres no beat indicating that it need one
01:01:500 - since theres a drum beat here, maybe add a circle?
01:22:690 (1,1) - - change it to http://puu.sh/mMF6e/a038392222.png
01:36:116 (4,5) - the blanket could be better
02:16:396 (1) - the end of the slider doesn't look smooth, turn it a bit to the left
02:40:941 (1,2) - the flow here is quite bad
03:02:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape od the stream is quite odd, maybe smooth it out a bit
the map itself is not bad, but there's a lot of problems with blanketing, I'll advice to recheck all the blankets
good luck
Cheesecake wrote:
Hey, M4M
[Hard]
OD8 is pretty high for Hard, 6 would be better. HP is high as well Fixed. ~
Check your AIMod, two slider ends are unsnapped Fixed. ~
I feel like NC's need some work for example 00:17:444 (6) - this should really be an NC, and then take NC off of 00:18:493 (4) - and add to 00:19:124 (5) - etc etc etc I'm working on it.
00:15:766 (4,5,6) - This is all really cramped right now, and the (6) is too close to 00:16:395 (5) - (having objects TOO close like that without overlapping looks meh) Blankets.. i like those patterns tho. .w.
00:19:333 (3,4) - Again pretty close ^
00:25:627 (2) - Repeat sliders that aren't 1/4 having more than one repeat has been something I've disliked ever since I've started playing since I never feel like they work well in any situation. It would be better if you take off the last repeat and then put two hitcircles in 1/2 Fixed.. i guess.
00:31:292 (1) - ^ Fixed, desu.
00:34:858 (7,8) - I don't like modding blankets but this is pretty noticeable I can't fix it.. breaks Gs..
00:39:053 (1,2) - Overlap not great here Fixed
00:54:158 (1,2,3) - Mh? owo
00:59:612 (3) - The end of this looks pretty sketchy Fixed
01:01:710 (8,1) - Cursor flow isn't ideal here Fixed
01:13:879 (1,3) - All kinds of weird overlap since the bodies and tails overlap but then the tips are only barely touching like Fixed
01:37:794 (6,1,2) - Strange flow, try and consider the cursor and where its moving and how it feels on your hand Fixed as gud as i can
01:54:577 - Could put kiai here oki.
02:15:137 (5) - Try not to overdo sliders like this Okay, fixed.
02:16:396 (1) - Woah so many points Not so many anymore.
02:21:431 (1) - ^^ ^!
02:29:822 (5) - Unrankable I think If i trust the people on #modhelp, it is.
02:34:857 (8,1,2,3) - These very small overlaps trigger me for some reason Snapped objects, gud objects.
03:16:815 (8) - Just doesn't fit the song, should be seperate sliders kk, fixed. :33
There's more things I can point out, but you'll come to realise them yourself in your own time so it's fine.
Okay, thanks for the mod. :33
Good luck!
Thank you for the mod. ~Namki wrote:
[General]
BG doesn't match the song. Welp.. it would match if i have the video. But i can't add because if i download it it's 42mb big. And idfk how to make it smaller.
Fill the tags. With what now is the question. ._.
Uncheck Widecreen Support in Design tab in Song Setup. Fixed
Combo1 and Combo3 are very similar. Fixed
[Hard]
00:23:529 (3) - upbeat sliders, it's unrankable. You need to highlight it, cuz it's strong. And don't trust the #modhelp channel, trust osu site and QATs - BNs Second part k, fixed
There's a lot of upbeat sliders, fix it.
Place NC every second big white tick. It'll be better. I'll fixed some of them so they fit.
00:34:858 (1,2,3) - spacing. Fixed
01:19:543 (4,5) - ^. Fixed.
Don't change the spacing.
02:02:130 (4,6) - overlap, looks really ugly. Nah not really. .-.
Rewatch your diff and fix those issues.
Best of luck~
Fixed that all, thank you.wajinshu wrote:
[General]
Change BG please k.. but what fits a britney spears song.. -thinks- imma change it later because of so many requests.
[Hard]
Ar8 = Ar 7.5 or 7
00:25:627 (2,3) - bad flow
00:25:207 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:627 (2) - NC
00:31:920 (1,2) - slider focus on vocal
00:34:858 (3) - remove repeat and put 00:35:486 - 3 circle
00:36:536 (1) - Remove repeat and put 2 circle on white and red tick
00:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or 00:38:634 (7) - ehm fix please
00:53:109 - missing circle?
01:06:326 (1) - put 1/4 and next 1/4 too
01:17:026 (6) - Not nice remove 1 repeat and put circle
01:26:886 (1,2) - blanket please
01:28:354 (1,2) - ^
01:28:354 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:44:087 (7,1) - ^
02:47:025 (2,6) - overlap
02:50:800 (3,4) - Blanket
GL~
[General]
AudioFilename: Britney Spears - Toxic.mp3
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PreviewTime: 158099
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
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Title:Toxic
TitleUnicode:Toxic
Artist:Britney Spears
ArtistUnicode:Britney Spears
Creator:CookieKivi
Version:Mondo's Normal
Source:
Tags:In the Zone electropop poison Cathy Dennis Christian Karlsson Henrik Jonback Pontus Winnberg
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amg.. thank you! >w<MondoKuma wrote:
Im doing a Normal Guest difficulty Expect it next soon! Love this song!
Kagetsu wrote:
from #modreqs
the points i'm going to talk about are all suggestions... so feel free to deny it xd
[Potachii's Insane]fixed
- i'm not going to point all the blankets... because that's a bad modding imo, but there are tons of blankets that could be improved I'll try fix them all :3
- 00:29:612 (1,2) - stacking this 2 doesn't make much sense, because voice starts in 00:29:822 - , so would be better if u could make a jump here fixed
- 00:29:822 (2) - this follows rhythm in a better way imo fixed
- 00:28:773 (4) - ctrl + g maybe... because angles are too straight (see in image) fixed, also if u do this u can make a blanket with 00:27:934 (2,4) I don't get it... sorry T^T -
- 00:31:500 (2) - i would like to put more emphasis in this note fixed
- 00:31:920 (3,4) - flow between those 2 isn't the best... because you have to do a weird cursor movement... also these jump doesn't make much sense, because there is nothing to emphasise... what about changing that part into this rhythm? hm... I think I've changed it previously... oh well
- 00:37:584 (1) - kickslider here doesn't fit well... i would delete it an replace with a circle fixed
- 00:44:717 (3,4) - again... stacking doesn't feel good... its better to make a jump fixed
- 00:54:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - why is the spacing increasing? ... music is pretty constant here, so those kind of jumps are kinda out of place. something like this fits better imo fixed
- 00:57:200 (15) - move this to 00:57:095 - feels much better tbh xd fixed
- 00:57:305 - you could add a note here fixed
- 01:02:130 - why increase SV here? "to" and "xic" sounds like the same, so would be better if u could just keep the same SV fixed
- 01:02:549 - fits much better tbh fixed
- 01:04:228 - compare this part with 00:57:514 - this... it's the same background music but it's mapped so different... you should make it consistent fixed
- 01:06:326 - why sv change here... make it consistent with 00:59:612 (7) - made SV changes to 00:59:612 (7)
- 01:08:843 - doesn't really need a SV here... the music is still being the same as previous xd fixed
- 01:08:843 (1) - short this slider to red tick and add repetitive arrow i dun get it...
- 01:12:619 - you should do this beat clickable... because guitar fixed
- 01:24:368 - ^ fixed
- 01:24:577 (5,6) - delete this notes xd fixed
- 01:51:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make it consistent with 00:54:158 - (i mean... use the same objects. sliders with repetitive arrow doesn't fit well) fixed
- 01:54:577 - this kiai is exactly the same as previous XD it's just rotated a bit... you should at least make new patterns... otherwise just take a look to the previous suggestions changed some stuff
- 02:18:074 - make it clickable
gl and sry about my english xd Thx~