1. Futsuu (1,94 stars, 166 notes)
2. Inner Oni (3,62 stars, 538 notes)
3. Kantan (0,75 stars, 67 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2,7 stars, 283 notes)
5. Oni (3,17 stars, 388 notes)

Q____X wrote:

Hi form my queue

Kantan

Good for me

:>

Futsuu

00:36:781 (66) - d

i changed this pattern to k d k
Muzukashii

00:20:224 - maybe k? ok good idea
01:17:425 - ^

ok
Oni

00:19:876 (65,66) - invert i changed to k k
00:47:433 - d
00:49:286 - ^
00:54:844 - ^
00:56:696 - ^
01:17:074 - ^
01:18:927 - ^
01:24:485 - ^ ^ OK

Inner Oni

00:19:761 (99) - k okay

if the mod is not helpful dont give me kudos

Good map ^^

Thanks!

infr4 wrote:

From Queue

warning! : all of suggestion is matched my mapping style

start.

[General]

i'm really suggest that re-map after 00:46:507 all diff. others not important than this

so, i just show what if i'm mapping this.

[Muzukashii]

00:46:507 - changed similarly

[Oni]

00:46:507 - changed spacing also

[Inner Oni]

maybe same as Oni i think it's ok now

but u just spammed all the streams, woh! Is it bad? ;w;

no kudos, i don't want that since i'm mod bad this.

end.

Thanks for a good suggestion

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

[Kantan]
00:40:023 - remove cuz better flow

sure

[Futsuu]
nope

[Muzukashii]
00:31:455 - add d, varies pattern ok

00:38:055 - add d drum moved 00:37:939 - to 00:38:171 - to make dd

[Oni]
*sigh*

.w.

[Inner Oni]
00:23:813 - remove, break ! player need some breath.

ok, why not

I can't deal with this style much. sry I fully understand it and appreciate your effort
btw good map.

Eiuh wrote:

sup, from my queue

before we get in to the individual diffs,

01:12:443 - (optional) end the kiai here? it is hard to ascertain where it ends, but i think 01:16:148 - this place is becoming audibly calmer (more than 1:12:443)

i'm sorry if it's hard to distinguish the colors in my screenshots :/

Kantan

easiest kantan diff i've ever seen wow haha

00:31:687 (23) - (optional) k?d is for consistency with 01:16:148 -
01:12:443 (56,57) - make one of these a K? okok

Futsuu

00:51:602 - 00:57:159 - add something on those? added d 00:51:833 - to make this similar to previous pattern
01:01:328 (111) - K? if you apply it then this 01:08:738 (125) - should be D i'll try this
01:14:064 (134) - not so sure about this being a finisher :/ if you decide to remove the finisher, maybe make it a k? ok
01:21:474 (147,148) - it might make the pattern too hard, but consider making one of those a k hmm okay

Muzukashii

00:05:982 (12) - 00:09:687 (22) - 00:13:392 (32) - (optional) make these k? 00:51:833 - ;00:13:392 - i changed these
00:25:897 - 00:27:750 - 00:29:602 - 00:31:455 - maybe add something on those spaces? ok, it can be tougher
01:01:096 - add something, i'd say k hmm i'll try this
01:05:033 (184) - (optional) k i want to be consistent
01:12:675 - add something, d probably added k
01:13:601 - 01:14:527 - add something on those toookok

Oni

You could consider making some of the ddd/kkk triplets in the first half ddk or kkd(or maybe even something else) if you wish to make this diff a bit harder

00:44:191 (170,171) - kD or dK ok
01:07:117 (274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281) - (optional) change this pattern to something like this? http://puu.sh/mJaF5.jpg ok, seems nice

Inner Oni

00:27:750 (146,147,148) - (optional) ddk? ok i can try it, i'm changing others dkd to ddk for consistency
00:57:622 (333) - k plays better imo right
01:12:675 (437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) - you could try something like this to make that part more fun good idea
01:26:830 01:27:061 (530,531,532) - (optional) kkd? changed to kkkdkkkkd in the end

cool set c:

Ppus wrote:

From My Queue

Kantan00:46:507 (32) - I FINALLY FOUND SOMETHING HERE! add finsh fits with kiai okay
01:01:328 (45) - Add finish here too imao :v okay okay added here and at similar parts

Futsuu01:00:633 (110) - Charge that note to k actually ddd fits to drums, i don't want to make too many 1/2 - especially dkd may seem tricky to beginners

Muzukashiithat diff. it's fine for me

Oni00:30:760 (108,109,110) - Try kdd i don't like of ddd or kkk ok, let's try some kdd kkd
00:46:507 (178) - How to i said in kantan "add finsh fits with kiai" ok
00:57:622 (230) - Charge this note to k also delete finish hmm it's breaking my consistency, also i like this finish here, its emphasising the transition to some special patterns

Inner Oni00:46:507 (258) - Once again add finish ok
00:53:570 (305) - Charge that note to k i prefer kkdkkkd okay it may be
01:04:106 (380) - Delete this and 01:04:338 (381,382) - Ctrl+G this will make this part inconsistent

Good Luck With Rank

Thanks

[R] wrote:

[General]
- Tags "Bleach" move to source okok
- Preview Point would be nice if you placed here 00:45:581 - hmm, i like intro more than chorus.. MUCH more. I'll consider that anyway.
- imo Futsuu can be OD:3 HP:6 okaay

[Oni]
00:18:719 - d , imo no need various here okay
00:19:413 (62,63,64) - kkd hmm it breaks the consistency a bit

00:24:276 - to 00:39:097 - i think break isn't placed correctly, imo every 00:25:897 - note move to 00:24:971 - ok sure

00:41:644 (158,159,160) - kkd the same.. i don't know yet if i want to put more complicated patterns. I'll consider it

00:45:581 - to 00:46:507 - imo this sound too weird , you need a sync pattern from drum to vocal. The try a various like kkkkd d D
okay, kkkdkkd seems ok


nah just that
CMIIW and Good Luck ~

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

Hi From my Queue~

Futsuu

00:08:993 - add d
00:40:255 - Delete
00:49:518 - add d
00:49:749 - add k
01:19:159 - add d
01:19:390 - ^ I want to keep 2/1 gaps

Muzukashii

00:08:761 - add d
00:08:993 - k
00:47:433 - add d ok
00:47:549 - ^
00:47:665 - d okok
00:47:897 - add k
00:48:128 - d
00:49:286(142,143,144) - ddd
00:49:749 - add k
00:50:444 - Delete
00:50:675 - add d
01:06:422 - d ok

Oni

00:03:666 - k
00:05:519 - Delete

Inner Oni

00:02:393 - k
00:02:740 - d
00:02:856 - Delete
00:04:245 - ^
00:05:519(17,18) - ^
00:08:761 - add d
00:08:993 - k
00:09:224(36,37) - Delete
00:13:045 - ^
00:19:992 - add d ok
00:24:161 - Delete
00:24:276 - d
00:31:108 - add d
00:39:213 - Delete
00:42:570 - d

no reply = consistency/spread conflict

Good Luck With Rank~

Thanks

hikikochan wrote:

hi elfie! from my queue

[General]
personal preference, but maybe put the preview point at the beginning of the kiai? the preview point should be attention-catching imo okok

[ Muzukashii]
00:16:634 - add a k - this is leading into the onset of most of the percussion so the lack of a note here kind of detracts from the music's drive hmm i don't like k here, i'm pretty sure it's silent and there's no audible beat
00:22:424 (59) - this should be a D finisher as it's a pretty strong downbeat okok
00:23:350 (60) - move this to 00:23:582 and move 00:23:582 (61) to 00:23:813. these two notes should coincide with the guitar's second phrase, instead of starting in the middle of the guitar break you're right but i also can't stand ignoring hearable drums so i made d k d
00:34:465 (94,95,96,97,98) - make this pattern d d k d k to better match the new direction the vocals take in terms of melody sure
the two measures from 00:46:507 to 00:50:212 - i realize that the music emphasizes the upbeats a lot, but these bars still play pretty awkwardly. try editing as follows:
- add d at 00:47:433
- delete the k at 00:47:665
- move the k at 00:48:128 to 00:47:897
- make the same changes for the corresponding notes in the second measure well i made some changes today after previous modding so
00:57:970 (166,169) - these two notes should be d so that the 5 notes at 00:57:622 (165,166,167,168,169) follow the guitar part i prefer following the drums here

[ Oni]
00:16:634 - put a k here for the same reason as this spot in the muzu ^
00:21:961 (74,75,76) - change these three to d k d. this way the first two follow the pitch direction of the guitar solo and the third note emphasizes the downbeat i like k d D more
00:21:961 to 00:24:276 - this measure needs to be reworked to match the guitar solo. try the following:
- move the d at 00:22:887 (77) to 00:22:655
- move the k at 00:23:350 (79) to 00:22:887
- add a k at 00:23:813
- add a d at 00:24:045 changed a little
00:31:455 - add a k here since this is the end of one phrase and there's more accompaniment to compensate okok
00:35:160 - add a d here and make 00:35:392 (129) a k to match the new direction of the vocals okay good idea
the rest of the diff looks good imo

[ Inner Oni]
this seems like a solid diff overall, i'll just be a bit nitpicky then orz
00:08:761 - add a d here and change 00:08:993 (38) to a k. there should be more notes in this measure since it's the fourth measure of the phrase right
00:17:561 (85,86,87,88,89) - you use d k d k d three times in this section (00:19:413 (96,97,98,99,100) and 00:21:266 (107,108,109,110,111)). try to put a bit of variety in by changing some of them to d d d k d or d k d d d. i'll leave that up to you though okay, changed
00:22:424 - reworking this measure again like i did with the previous two diffs. explanation: even though there's a kick at 00:23:350, it's a lot less important than the guitar solo
- 00:23:234 (120) - move this d to 00:22:771
- 00:23:697 and 00:23:813 - add ds here
00:31:339 - put a k here. similar reasoning as before, this is the fourth measure of the phrase and should have more notes to lead into the start of the next phrase hmm, changed similarly
00:58:549 (338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362) - okay i realize this is an inner oni but this stream is still insanely long compared to everything else you've done so far in the diff. try deleting the two notes at 00:59:591 (347,353). it'll break this up into more manageable streams okay, i made a break. (actually still keeping the longest pattern on map but it's kiai time and an insane diff.. so let it be like this ^^

good luck ranking this c:

Skylish wrote:

Hi~ From my first ever queue.

[General]

>I would say that this beatmap is well modded. Less mod and comment can I make. I think some suggestion is better than modding.

[Inner Oni]

> The notes before 00:15:940 (78) are repetitive and boring. Any variations should be put? I think I can't since i'm following guitar - and it's repetitive. I don't want to make it completely random

> 00:45:812 (260) - change from 'd' to 'k', following the consistency of Oni. The most important is that, you did not use any 'ddkkddk' or 'kkddkkd' for 7X 1/4 beat. Therefore, I would say that the existence of 00:45:581 (258,259,260,261,262,263,264) - is a little bit wierd. okay

[Oni]

> Again, notes pattern are repetitive. The triplets in normal modes are fine, but for the notes in Kiai mode, here is my advice:

> 00:46:507 (183,184,185,186,187,188) - this pattern is good! It can repeat for the second time (00:48:360 (191,192,193,194,195,196) - ). However, there should be more complicated patterns or other patterns in the second time of 'Listen to me, Listen to it'. let it be consistent

> For instance, my changes from 00:53:917 (218) -

changed a little
[Muzukashii]

> 00:40:023 (116) - change from 'k' to 'd', following the pitch of 00:39:792 (115) - and also the consistency of Oni. It's similar to 00:39:560 -

> 00:52:760 (155) - delete this note. It stands out virtually. I changed the pattern so now it sounds better i hope

> 00:52:991 - add 'd'. It should follow the vocal start of 'Li'. okk

> 01:09:433 (217,218,219) - Is this pattern is a notice of the new pattern after Kiai (01:16:380 (243,244,245) - )? I like the latter but do not like the former because I think 01:09:896 (218) - stands out virtually and it is not consistent from 01:01:328 (189) - to 01:14:990 (236) . If I were you, I would shift 01:09:896 (218) - 1/2 beat to the right to match with the vocal start.

> 01:15:222 - add 'd'. It should follow the vocal start of 'Li'. okay

[Futsuu]

> 00:43:728 (84) - shifts 1/2 beat to the right to follow the vocal since your previous structures are following the vocal. okok

[Kantan]

> I can hear nothing going wrong. Fine!

[Conclusion]

> This song is easy to map so that repetitive patterns often occur. This situation is acceptable in Kantan/ Futsuu but not very okay in Muzu and Oni.

> Nice work in Inner Oni, the pattern of 'k' matching with the snare is good.

I hope my mod is helpful~ GL~

Ulqui wrote:

Hi, M4M or NM (idk lol)

General

Is this the short version of the song?
Is this the version used in anime?
please add (Short Ver.) or (TV Size) in respective cases The real title doesn't contain this

Kantan

01:26:367 (66) - might delete it
01:26:367 - add a note here and put a spinner here: 01:27:293 - if you delete that slider (suggestion) okok i like this

Futsuu

01:14:064 (137) - Finisher (like kantan) hmm ok

01:26:367 (160) - same as kantan, if you want to delete it add a note here 01:26:367 - and a spinner here 01:27:293 - i'll try this

Muzukashii

00:46:970 - try to add a note here please
00:48:823 - ^
00:49:749 - ^
00:54:381 - ^
00:56:233 - ^
00:58:086 - ^
00:58:896 - ^ I want to keep difference in density between Oni

01:26:367 (283) - Same as the other diffs, only if you want ok

Oni

Add notes:
00:47:665
00:47:897
00:49:518
00:49:749
00:51:370
00:51:602
00:55:075
00:55:307
01:17:306
01:17:538
01:19:159
01:19:390
01:21:011
01:21:243
01:24:716
01:24:948 to make the diff more "intense" idkidkidk The same, I want to keep it less dense than Inner Oni

01:26:367 (382) - delete if you want (and do the same as the other diffs) ok

Sorry for not modding the inner oni, i think this map don't need an inner diff but...
IT IS YOUR MAP xDD do what you want
I hope this mod will be helpful for ya' :c
byebye

Prophecy wrote:

Many mod already, so only some difficulties.
[]

[Kantan]
00:31:687 (23) - k why? I don't know if it needs emphasis
01:05:033 (48) - k ^
01:14:064 (56) - what is this? no 1/2 please Wha-at ;-; The distance between this and previous note is big enough to catch this rythm.. I didn't suppose it's like I cannot use 1/2 tick at all. And actually 00:44:423 - here i used it and i hear no complain. Let's see what others think about this
01:18:001 (59) - k or D breaks the consistency

[Futsuu]
00:09:919 (14) - add d nah why
00:13:624 - add d for better spread ookay
00:19:876 - add d added k to vary
00:22:887 - adding something here, compare with kantan okk
00:36:318 (66,67,68) - ddk I don't want to repeat this
00:38:171 (71,72,73) - kdd third note needs more emphasis here
01:16:148 (140) - D ok