OzzyOzrock wrote:

After some baby fixes... patterns are very nice and spread is fine and even throughout difficult spots of the map.

Qualified!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:51:914 (42) - you may delete this note not only for a better spread with Futsuu but also for a nice 4/1 rest moment, seeing that there is none from 00:28:514 to 01:04:514 -
2. 01:42:614 (41,42) - although 1/2 notes may be acceptable for Kantan, owing to the high song bpm, these notes are in fact quite hard. One possible solution is to move 01:42:764 (42) - to 01:42:314 - and change to d to cohere with the way you mapped at 01:44:714 (45,46) -
3. 01:43:814 (43,44) and 01:47:414 (50,51) - same as ^
4. 01:45:914 (48) - this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is a way too consecutive from 01:32:114 to 02:02:114 -
5. 01:48:014 - adding k here would be good if you agree with my opinion above.

• [Stein's Futsuu]

1. 01:16:214 (54,55,56) - 1/2 K K D at 200bpm seems to be a bit demanding for Futsuu. 01:16:214 (54,55) - could be k so that the stressed sound at 01:16:514 (56) - could be more appropriately emphasized like you did at 01:15:014 (49,50,51) -
2. 02:16:814 (36,37) - this pattern sounds a bit weird as it does not represent the music well. I think 02:17:114 (37) - could just be deleted for a nice 2/1 break.

• [Inner Oni]

1. 02:23:714 (11) - the big note here sounds rather strange as the strong sound appears at 02:23:864 - . The best would be to change 02:23:714 (11) - to d, add D at 02:23:864 - and start the spinner at 02:24:014 -

1. SV could be 1.40
2. 00:37:514 (17) - This note could be moved to 00:37:814 - , like 00:33:014 -.
3. Added to Nardo's suggestion for 00:51:914 (42) - , 00:53:114 (44) - can be deleted too, to emphasize better the big notes.
4. 01:59:114 (6,7) - There seems to be a sudden layer change here, from bass to the synth, feeling a bit awkward. I'd suggest move 01:59:414 (7) - to 01:59:714 - , 02:01:214 (11) - to 02:00:914 - , and remove 02:00:614 (10) - , this would keep following the bass while focusing a bit on the synth too (resulting rhythm would be dkd d dkd).
   
5. How about adding notes in 02:21:764 - and 02:22:964 - (while moving 02:22:814 (8) - to 02:22:514 - ). This part is relatively quite compared with the song.

1. 00:01:364 (2,4) - I'd suggest to remove notes like this to keep a bit simple the map, considering Muzukashii has a very similar rhythm.
2. 01:26:714 (22,23) - Remove this notes and add a note in 01:27:014 - , it'd fit better the instrument you're following.
3. 01:27:614 (26,29) - Shouldn't these notes be removed to be consistent with 01:22:514 (9,10,11,12) - ?
4. 01:30:914 (36) - Move this to 01:30:614 - , to follow better the song.

1. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - This section could be a bit different, right now it looks too similar to the next kiai (if not the same), which isn't a bad thing, but I feel it makes the kiai have less emphasis as we're already spoiling it here. There are three ways to change this: making it less dense, making it more don heavy, or following the bass.

1. 01:50:114 (412) - There's a missing slidertick. Extend this by 1/16. Also, check your other sliders.
2. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Same as Muzukashii

1. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Here the density is lower than the kiai! This is what you should've done in Muzukashii and Oni.

_Gezo_ wrote:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/599g0nvdatbk1ex/Steins-20160611-053426.txt?dl=0 IRC log
(you can finally kd, do it on the main post please)


EDIT: changed HP a bit. looks fine.

Nanatsu wrote:

Hmmmmm should i check nardo's mod too? o____o

i'd like to do but i'm not sureee..... if it will be problem to get re-qualified...

_Gezo_ wrote:

weee \:D/

tg steins

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello Nanatsu and Steins, I think there exist some issues that deserve your reconsideration regarding this set.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:51:914 (42) - you may delete this note not only for a better spread with Futsuu but also for a nice 4/1 rest moment, seeing that there is none from 00:28:514 to 01:04:514 -
   
   uhhmmm.... it was for consistency of 00:51:914 (42,44) - those part you know. probably you can check it from other diffs.
   
   so i want to keep for now, but call me again if you think it's really strange.
   
   EDIT : Changed from Dake's mod.
   
   
2. 01:42:614 (41,42) - although 1/2 notes may be acceptable for Kantan, owing to the high song bpm, these notes are in fact quite hard. One possible solution is to move 01:42:764 (42) - to 01:42:314 - and change to d to cohere with the way you mapped at 01:44:714 (45,46) -
3. 01:43:814 (43,44) and 01:47:414 (50,51) - same as ^
   
   Yep, That's Right! All done. Thanks a lot!
   
   
4. 01:45:914 (48) - this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is a way too consecutive from 01:32:114 to 02:02:114 -
   
   Oh, To avoid repetitive, that would be fine then.
   
   
5. 01:48:014 - adding k here would be good if you agree with my opinion above.
   
   I prefer d, i'm usually using k for higher main rhythm of gott like 01:42:614 (42,44,46,48,50) - etc..

• [Stein's Futsuu]

1. 01:16:214 (54,55,56) - 1/2 K K D at 200bpm seems to be a bit demanding for Futsuu. 01:16:214 (54,55) - could be k so that the stressed sound at 01:16:514 (56) - could be more appropriately emphasized like you did at 01:15:014 (49,50,51) -
2. 02:16:814 (36,37) - this pattern sounds a bit weird as it does not represent the music well. I think 02:17:114 (37) - could just be deleted for a nice 2/1 break.

• [Inner Oni]

1. 02:23:714 (11) - the big note here sounds rather strange as the strong sound appears at 02:23:864 - . The best would be to change 02:23:714 (11) - to d, add D at 02:23:864 - and start the spinner at 02:24:014 -
   
   hmm then i'll put k on 02:23:639 - too to make stream lol

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi Nanatsu and Steins. Added to the issues addressed above, I want to point out a few more things after a quick look.

[General]
00:22:514 - 00:30:914 - This part feels a bit crowded with notes. The song may have a lot of beats here, but still has a calm atmosphere. In Inner Oni, this isn't much of a problem as other sections are denser than this; but in the difficulites below, that difference isn't that clear. It'd be appreciated to have this section reduced a bit in density in Futsuu-Oni.
Suggestions:
Futsuu: Move 00:26:114 (10) - 1 beat forwards, and remove 00:27:014 (12) - . Keep a similar rhythm for next parts. It should be like this:

Muzukashii: Remove 00:24:539 (11,12) - , 00:26:939 (21,22) - , 00:29:339 (31,32) - , 00:31:814 (41) -

OK. But i'm not going to delete 00:31:814 (41) - because i don't think it's necessary to delete

also, it's clear to hear the impact sound.

Oni: Remove notes like 00:23:714 (13) - , 00:23:939 (15) - , 00:24:614 (21) - , 00:24:839 (23) -, etc.

I reaaaaaally don't think the 3-plots on this diff is problem....

the main rhythm itself requires it and the pattern also not much hard compared other parts. still, i deleted some notes.

02:23:864 - For this beat, a big note is much more appreciated and would give a better ending feeling than the spinner.

I tried re-arrange but i'mt not sure hue, probably need re-check.

[ Kantan]

1. SV could be 1.40
   
   OK.
   
   
2. 00:37:514 (17) - This note could be moved to 00:37:814 - , like 00:33:014 -.
   
   hmmm i'm following main rhythm like 00:36:914 (16,17,18,19,20) - them.
   
   For consistency, No.
   
   
3. Added to Nardo's suggestion for 00:51:914 (42) - , 00:53:114 (44) - can be deleted too, to emphasize better the big notes.
   
   LOL many ppl are trying to point out here. OK, Done.\
   
   
4. 01:59:114 (6,7) - There seems to be a sudden layer change here, from bass to the synth, feeling a bit awkward. I'd suggest move 01:59:414 (7) - to 01:59:714 - , 02:01:214 (11) - to 02:00:914 - , and remove 02:00:614 (10) - , this would keep following the bass while focusing a bit on the synth too (resulting rhythm would be dkd d dkd).
   
   
   That was good, OK!
   
   
5. How about adding notes in 02:21:764 - and 02:22:964 - (while moving 02:22:814 (8) - to 02:22:514 - ). This part is relatively quite compared with the song.
   
   Quite Good, Applied. but probably i need your re-check about dk / big things? up to you tho.

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:01:364 (2,4) - I'd suggest to remove notes like this to keep a bit simple the map, considering Muzukashii has a very similar rhythm.
2. 01:26:714 (22,23) - Remove this notes and add a note in 01:27:014 - , it'd fit better the instrument you're following.
3. 01:27:614 (26,29) - Shouldn't these notes be removed to be consistent with 01:22:514 (9,10,11,12) - ?
4. 01:30:914 (36) - Move this to 01:30:614 - , to follow better the song.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - This section could be a bit different, right now it looks too similar to the next kiai (if not the same), which isn't a bad thing, but I feel it makes the kiai have less emphasis as we're already spoiling it here. There are three ways to change this: making it less dense, making it more don heavy, or following the bass.
   
   
   Re-arranged.

[ Oni]

1. 01:50:114 (412) - There's a missing slidertick. Extend this by 1/16. Also, check your other sliders.
   
   OK... But i can't find what was changed by this way lol..
   
   
2. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Same as Muzukashii
   
   
   Re-arranged.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Here the density is lower than the kiai! This is what you should've done in Muzukashii and Oni.
   
   
   02:00:914 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - W-What...? lol....

That'd be all.

Steins wrote:

applied all mods

http://puu.sh/ptETK/5847f04372.osu

• [Kantan]

1. 00:58:514 (6) - Due to the base SV change to 1.4, this slider should be resnapped.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:56:114 (5) - consider deleting this note for an essential 2/1 break ? Currently there is none from 00:29:714 to 01:11:564 -
2. 01:31:664 (63,64) - similar to ^ , these notes should be removed to provide a rest moment right before the dense kiai. This is quite important since you can hardly find any 2/1 rest from 01:12:164 - til the end of the map.
3. 01:31:214 (61,62) - change these two notes to k if you apply ^ for a smoother flow.
4. 01:50:114 (163) - refer to Oni
5. 01:58:364 (12) - as Dake mentioned, this note could be deleted as well to further lower the note density, following the break at 01:55:964 -
6. 02:00:764 (23) - same as ^
7. 02:02:114 (1) - consider ending this spinner at 02:02:714 - for one more 2/1 break ? This could allow intermediate players to finish the spinner earlier and get prepared for the next kiai.

• [Oni]

1. 01:50:114 (412) - I guess you need to alter the slider in this way for the missing tick:

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

• [Kantan]

1. 00:58:514 (6) - Due to the base SV change to 1.4, this slider should be resnapped.
   
   Oh Yeah, Done!

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:56:114 (5) - consider deleting this note for an essential 2/1 break ? Currently there is none from 00:29:714 to 01:11:564 -
   
   hmmm this is for consistency, i used note here for other diffs too
   
   
2. 01:31:664 (63,64) - similar to ^ , these notes should be removed to provide a rest moment right before the dense kiai. This is quite important since you can hardly find any 2/1 rest from 01:12:164 - til the end of the map.
3. 01:31:214 (61,62) - change these two notes to k if you apply ^ for a smoother flow.
   
   Re-arranged!
   
   
4. 01:50:114 (163) - refer to Oni
   
   Done!
   
   
5. 01:58:364 (12) - as Dake mentioned, this note could be deleted as well to further lower the note density, following the break at 01:55:964 -
6. 02:00:764 (23) - same as ^
   
   All Done!
   
   
7. 02:02:114 (1) - consider ending this spinner at 02:02:714 - for one more 2/1 break ? This could allow intermediate players to finish the spinner earlier and get prepared for the next kiai.
   
   aww... maybe not necessarily right? i don't think it's worth issue to change....
   and it's still less length than oni / inner oni diffs too

• [Oni]

1. 01:50:114 (412) - I guess you need to alter the slider in this way for the missing tick:
   
   Done! <3

Surono wrote:

new footshoe mapper, rip Property.

edit:
01:00:914 - ~ 01:10:514 - pls.,

Nanatsu wrote:

Surono wrote:

new footshoe mapper, rip Property.

edit:
01:00:914 - ~ 01:10:514 - pls.,

Should i make like this? LOOOOOOOOOOOL

Surono wrote:

new footshoe mapper, rip Property.

• 01:37:514 (31,32) - Why are these big notes?

• 01:23:414 - , 01:28:214 - You could add notes in these spots, the rhythm feels a bit incomplete here.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Rechecking.

[ Kantan]

• 01:37:514 (31,32) - Why are these big notes?

[ Futsuu]

• 01:23:414 - , 01:28:214 - You could add notes in these spots, the rhythm feels a bit incomplete here.

_Gezo_ wrote:

Rechecked the mappu, qualifiederino