I think you should move your KIA mod from 01:04:715 to 01:04:382

well,I don't see here any serious mistakes actually,just some advices:

Easy:
00:32:715 - this will be better if you move that circle 5 grids left
01:28:215 - I think that slider sounds better when it starts from - 01:28:049

Normal:
00:22:382 - I think this circle doesn't look good here. Try to move it somewhere higher for symmetry
00:47:882 - there is not any rhythm at this moment,so change this slider.

Insane:
00:20:215 - 2 grids right

So,that is all,I think!
Star!

Insane

--the overall spacing of this song i don't really like. it's probably just me being unable to predict the song.

00:26:372(1,2,3,4) - at first, i failed to hit the notes at the right time, but the 2nd time was ok. I guess the spacing is ok, but I'm just pointing out, in case you may want to change it or not
01:42:049(1,2,3,4) - these four notes fit on the 1/4 scale (i think), you don't need the 1/6 (or whatever you were using). It sounds fine if you put playback rate at 50% in my opinion. With the 1/6, the last note comes a little late. It also makes more sense for the player, cuz i was wondering why I was getting 50's on these notes, and then I saw the timing... lol.
01:43:372(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:705(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:47:382(1) - 1 grid right

Hard

00:07:382(2) - this "2" seems a little deformed xD lol, but it doesn't matter
00:47:382(4) - i know it's supposed to be a circle, but it sounds very weird. why not just use what you did in insane? use two 1/1 (in length) sliders

the spacing on this map i really like i lot better than insane.
the only thing weird is the japanese words you're trying to spell out. it worked better with the longer slider lengths with insane.

Normal

DR +2
OD +1 (although i'm really not sure about these things lol. i just based it on how i could beat the song with 40% accuracy o_o)

00:47:382(4) - same as hard. this 3/2 business doesn't really make sense here.

cool map

star~

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

Download: nazuna - A.RU.PI.JI. (daniel32333) [Xeno32's Special].osu

Giorgos wrote:

I think you should move your KIA mod from 01:04:715 to 01:04:382

well,I don't see here any serious mistakes actually,just some advices:

Easy:
00:32:715 - this will be better if you move that circle 5 grids left
01:28:215 - I think that slider sounds better when it starts from - 01:28:049
I want to let the slider start with the lyrics, so unchanged.

Normal:
00:22:382 - I think this circle doesn't look good here. Try to move it somewhere higher for symmetry
00:47:882 - there is not any rhythm at this moment,so change this slider.

Insane:
00:20:215 - 2 grids right

So,that is all,I think!
Star!

Other Fixed.
Thanks for modding!

winber1 wrote:

Insane

--the overall spacing of this song i don't really like. it's probably just me being unable to predict the song.
Hmmm.... I think it's ok... Most of the spacing are constant, except some jumps...
00:26:372(1,2,3,4) - at first, i failed to hit the notes at the right time, but the 2nd time was ok. I guess the spacing is ok, but I'm just pointing out, in case you may want to change it or not
I think it's ok because it follows the lyrics...
01:42:049(1,2,3,4) - these four notes fit on the 1/4 scale (i think), you don't need the 1/6 (or whatever you were using). It sounds fine if you put playback rate at 50% in my opinion. With the 1/6, the last note comes a little late. It also makes more sense for the player, cuz i was wondering why I was getting 50's on these notes, and then I saw the timing... lol.
01:43:372(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:705(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:47:382(1) - 1 grid right

Hard

00:07:382(2) - this "2" seems a little deformed xD lol, but it doesn't matter
00:47:382(4) - i know it's supposed to be a circle, but it sounds very weird. why not just use what you did in insane? use two 1/1 (in length) sliders

the spacing on this map i really like i lot better than insane.
the only thing weird is the japanese words you're trying to spell out. it worked better with the longer slider lengths with insane.
Stacked some notes up... Hope it works better...
Normal

DR +2
OD +1 (although i'm really not sure about these things lol. i just based it on how i could beat the song with 40% accuracy o_o)

00:47:382(4) - same as hard. this 3/2 business doesn't really make sense here.

cool map

star~

Others all fixed except the 1/3 notes in [Insane]...
I think it is meant to be 1/3 beats... And the only problem left is the 3rd stream(01:44:705(1,2,3,4))...Should it be 1/4 beat earlier...?
Temporarily remain unchanged.

Thanks for modding!!

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

Updated.

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

I have updated it.
Another mod again, some places that I hope you can fix:

00:57:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
I really think it's very difficult to get the rhythm here...
Make like ?
And add whistles on 1s instead of 2s...

00:59:882 (4) - 2 grids up (Level 4) ? To align with 00:59:382 (1,3,5,7,8) -

01:14:549 (7,8,9,10,1) -
Finish is on 01:15:133 (8) ... It sounds wierd...
You can add finish on the end of 01:14:549 (7) - ...

01:19:882 (4,5,6,7,1) - Simillar problem... 01:20:465 (5) - remove finish, and add finish on the end of 01:19:882 (4)

01:33:883 (3) - Change a position? Or 1 grid left (Level 4) (Just a suggestion....)

01:41:881 (1) - Add a new note here, and make it like

That's it.

daniel32333 wrote:

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

I have updated it.
Another mod again, some places that I hope you can fix:

00:57:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
I really think it's very difficult to get the rhythm here...
Make like ATTACH[01.JPG]?
And add whistles on 1s instead of 2s...

00:59:882 (4) - 2 grids up (Level 4) ? To align with 00:59:382 (1,3,5,7,8) -

01:14:549 (7,8,9,10,1) -
Finish is on 01:15:133 (8) ... It sounds wierd...
You can add finish on the end of 01:14:549 (7) - ...

01:19:882 (4,5,6,7,1) - Simillar problem... 01:20:465 (5) - remove finish, and add finish on the end of 01:19:882 (4)

01:33:883 (3) - Change a position? Or 1 grid left (Level 4) (Just a suggestion....)

01:41:881 (1) - Add a new note here, and make it like ATTACH[02.JPG]

That's it.

Done.

Download: nazuna - A.RU.PI.JI. (daniel32333) [Xeno32's Special].osu

[Hard]
00:35:049 (4) - isn't stacked well
00:37:715 (4) - ^
00:46:715 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (5) - ^
00:52:049 (2) - ^
01:35:715 (2) - ditance
01:50:215 (1) - ^


[Xeno32's Special]
Overmapped diff...
00:26:382 (1) - don't overlap with slider
00:31:716 (1) - ^
00:36:382 (1) - distance
01:35:716 (1) - don't overlap with slider

[Insane]
00:36:715 (1) - not perfectly stacked
00:37:382 (2) - ^
00:41:382 (2) - ^
00:42:049 (1) - ^
00:46:549 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (6) - ^
00:50:382 (2) - ^
00:50:715 (3) - ^
00:51:049 (4) - ^
00:51:382 (5) - ^

Tip: You can tell if it's stacked perfectly by checking right top corner. If distance is 0,00 then it's fine.
Tip2: Turn off grid snap and distance snap to stack them

Xeno32 wrote:

daniel32333 wrote:

That's it.

Done.

Updated.

nante wrote:

[Hard]
00:35:049 (4) - isn't stacked well
00:37:715 (4) - ^
00:46:715 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (5) - ^
00:52:049 (2) - ^
01:35:715 (2) - ditance
01:50:215 (1) - ^


[Xeno32's Special]
Overmapped diff...
00:26:382 (1) - don't overlap with slider
00:31:716 (1) - ^
00:36:382 (1) - distance
01:35:716 (1) - don't overlap with slider

[Insane]
00:36:715 (1) - not perfectly stacked
00:37:382 (2) - ^
00:41:382 (2) - ^
00:42:049 (1) - ^
00:46:549 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (6) - ^
00:50:382 (2) - ^
00:50:715 (3) - ^
00:51:049 (4) - ^
00:51:382 (5) - ^

Tip: You can tell if it's stacked perfectly by checking right top corner. If distance is 0,00 then it's fine.
Tip2: Turn off grid snap and distance snap to stack them

Thanks for your tips!
Most of them fixed, while some of them I can't make distance 0.00 but 0.01 ...
[Xeno32's Special] not fixed yet, but I can see the problems are fixed in the updated version,
so I think it's ok...

Thank you for modding!

miss_dior wrote:

;)

Thanks for the star

I'm so late @@

Overall
I'd suggest reduce the frequency of normal-whistle hitsound... it's a bit noisy IMO.
(PM me online if you want further suggestions...)

[Normal]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
00:03:715 (1) - whistle at repeat?
00:13:715 (x) - add a note here?
00:24:049 (x) - ^
01:06:882 (x) - add two 1/8 notes from here?
01:48:049 (4) - this is purely opinion: try to make the slider symmetrical to playfield

[Hard]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
00:35:049 (4) - suggestion: delete this and make 00:34:715 (3) repeat?
01:08:382 (x) - the clap rhythm breaks here. Try improvising.
01:09:049 (x) - ^ (There are many other occurrences hereafter, so either 1.fix them, or 2.remove the clap rhythm)
01:34:715 (6,7) - nazi: right one grid

[Xeno's Special]
00:03:382 (1) - feels extraneous for me
00:20:549 (5,6,7) - place finish?
00:35:215 (x) - I expected a note here
00:45:882 (x) - ^
01:00:549 (x) -
01:39:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO...overmapped... (why not use a spinner?)

Uh...I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Plenty unnecessary 1/8ths IMO.

[Insane]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)

Not bad not bad...

========================

Fine-tune the hitsuonds then all should be fine.
Star~

yongtw123 wrote:

I'm so late @@

Overall
I'd suggest reduce the frequency of normal-whistle hitsound... it's a bit noisy IMO.
I thought it's fine... I'll try to improve it...
(PM me online if you want further suggestions...)
I think I will...

[Normal]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Nice suggestion...fixed. I think it worked out good.(For all my 3 diffs)
00:03:715 (1) - whistle at repeat?
Fixed.
00:13:715 (x) - add a note here?
Fixed with slider
00:24:049 (x) - ^
Sorry...I don't think so...
01:06:882 (x) - add two 1/8 notes from here?
Fixed with slider
01:48:049 (4) - this is purely opinion: try to make the slider symmetrical to playfield
Redisigned the last part

[Hard]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Fixed
00:35:049 (4) - suggestion: delete this and make 00:34:715 (3) repeat?
Fixed
01:08:382 (x) - the clap rhythm breaks here. Try improvising.
01:09:049 (x) - ^ (There are many other occurrences hereafter, so either 1.fix them, or 2.remove the clap rhythm)
Changed the clap rhythm...
01:34:715 (6,7) - nazi: right one grid
Fixed

[Xeno's Special]
00:03:382 (1) - feels extraneous for me
00:20:549 (5,6,7) - place finish?
00:35:215 (x) - I expected a note here
00:45:882 (x) - ^
01:00:549 (x) -
01:39:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO...overmapped... (why not use a spinner?)

Uh...I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Plenty unnecessary 1/8ths IMO.

[Insane]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Fixed

Also adjusted some hitsounds.
Not bad not bad...
Thanks
========================

Fine-tune the hitsuonds then all should be fine.
Star~

Thank you very much~

[General]
All of your sliders that have whistle, also has long whistle sound.
Do Double click on slider circle and you can give different sound effects on slider circles
I guess you would know this but just in case =D

[Normal]
00:35:382 (3) - This slider plays kinda bad, and this overlapped with next (2) looks very bad..
why not just seperate this slider? or at least change the shape please
00:43:716 (2) - This slider confused me a bit.
This isn't a big problem, But I thought I'm good enough to play normal..)
01:08:549 (3) - how about seperating this? sounded kinda bad to me.


[Hard]

No Major problems I guess


[Xeno's]
Good diff
00:16:465 (2) - deleting this sounds much better for me, not a problem though.
01:09:798 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:25:882 (1,2,3,4) - I see a good rhythm to make a nice jump.. why not make (1,2) more further?
00:35:215 (7,1) - not a major problem but I think this looks kinda bad.. how about (1) curves more smoothly?
01:09:382 (9) - add 2 circles after this sounds better to me


Nice map ~ star!

yongtw123 wrote:

[Xeno's Special]
00:03:382 (1) - feels extraneous for me
00:20:549 (5,6,7) - place finish?
00:35:215 (x) - I expected a note here
00:45:882 (x) - ^
01:00:549 (x) -
01:39:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO...overmapped... (why not use a spinner?)

Uh...I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Plenty unnecessary 1/8ths IMO.

Go play banned forever, that's overmapped =p

anyway, sorry you feel that way, I like how it is at the moment. Only did your hitsounds suggestion.

haha5957 wrote:

[Xeno's]
Good diff
00:16:465 (2) - deleting this sounds much better for me, not a problem though.
01:09:798 (2) - ^

Thanks for the mod, but I made it like that, so that it plays nicer. =)

Download: nazuna - A.RU.PI.JI. (daniel32333) [Xeno's Special].osu

Hello daniel32333~

[Normal]

WooW 3,24 star?
should be of no more than 3 stars ! either reworked or do Easy 3<

00:23:049 (4) - move here 00:23:215

00:28:382 (3) - ^ 00:28:549

[Hard]

00:06:049 (1) - does not seem to figure x]

[Xeno's Special]

00:24:715 (4,6) - Sliders make the same

01:28:715 (4,6) - ^

star~

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
All of your sliders that have whistle, also has long whistle sound.
Do Double click on slider circle and you can give different sound effects on slider circles
I guess you would know this but just in case =D

I know this, and I have some points that finish sets on one of the slider circles.
I just prefer the whistle sound on some of the sliders...

[Normal]
00:35:382 (3) - This slider plays kinda bad, and this overlapped with next (2) looks very bad..
why not just seperate this slider? or at least change the shape please
Redisigned the sliders...
00:43:716 (2) - This slider confused me a bit.
This isn't a big problem, But I thought I'm good enough to play normal..)
It follows the main melody,so... not a big problem...
01:08:549 (3) - how about seperating this? sounded kinda bad to me.
I think it's ok... But I will think twice about it...

[Hard]

No Major problems I guess


[Xeno's]
Good diff
00:16:465 (2) - deleting this sounds much better for me, not a problem though.
01:09:798 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:25:882 (1,2,3,4) - I see a good rhythm to make a nice jump.. why not make (1,2) more further?
Moved their distances further... I prefer them to have equal distance...
(The rhythm lands on the vocal,so I think it don't have much problem...)
00:35:215 (7,1) - not a major problem but I think this looks kinda bad.. how about (1) curves more smoothly?
Fixed
01:09:382 (9) - add 2 circles after this sounds better to me
Sorry...I prefer the original pattern, which gives player a little moment to rest...

Nice map ~ star!

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello daniel32333~
Hello~
[Normal]

WooW 3,24 star?
should be of no more than 3 stars ! either reworked or do Easy 3<

Now it becomes 3.28....

Some ranked maps (not old maps) have the easiest diffculty that is [Normal] and have over 3 stars...(3.0~3.5)
In my opinion, some songs do not need to have easy diffs...
(1)Not so popular song
(2)Hardcore, Speedcore, Heavy Metal... etc
Anyway, I'll keep it and let MATs/BATs to decide whether it's rankable...
Edit: Now planning to work on [Easy].

00:23:049 (4) - move here 00:23:215
Fixed.
00:28:382 (3) - ^ 00:28:549
Fixed.
[Hard]

00:06:049 (1) - does not seem to figure x]
Adjusted a little...
[Xeno's Special]

00:24:715 (4,6) - Sliders make the same

01:28:715 (4,6) - ^

star~

Both thanks a lot for modding and star!!
Xeno's diff updated.

Star~

Thite wrote:

Star~

Arigatou~~

You must make diff(Easy) not more than 3 stars!

Your Normal is too difficult

ya o/ sorry,I was late.

[Normal]
00:02:049 - add note?
00:03:382 - ^
00:04:715 - ^
01:38:049 - ^
01:38:382 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle start slider,end slider.
01:36:715 (1) - add whistle end slider
01:37:715 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:49:715 (3) - add whistle?

[Xeno's Special]
01:04:382 (1) - Remove finish
01:04:715 (3) - add finish
01:15:382 (1) - ^
01:14:549 (7) - Remove finish
01:20:715 (1) - add finish
01:19:882 (4) - Remove finish

[Insane]
00:58:049 (1,2,3,4) - slider end red line.
01:13:882 (1,2) - ^
:3

ZLOdeuka wrote:

You must make diff(Easy) not more than 3 stars!

Your Normal is too difficult

I think I will...

val0108 wrote:

ya o/ sorry,I was late.
That's ok
[Normal]
00:02:049 - add note?
00:03:382 - ^
00:04:715 - ^
01:38:049 - ^
Actually the notes are based on the electric melody, so I don't want to fill it up...
01:38:382 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle start slider,end slider.
01:36:715 (1) - add whistle end slider
01:37:715 (3) - ^
Fixed.
[Hard]
01:49:715 (3) - add whistle?
Fixed.
[Xeno's Special]
01:04:382 (1) - Remove finish
01:04:715 (3) - add finish
01:15:382 (1) - ^
01:14:549 (7) - Remove finish
01:20:715 (1) - add finish
01:19:882 (4) - Remove finish

[Insane]
00:58:049 (1,2,3,4) - slider end red line.
I'd like it be short and powerful, so I made it 1/4beat...
01:13:882 (1,2) - ^
I like the way it was, so unchanged...But I will take this into account and may change it someday...
I would like to test it more to find out which sounds better...
Edit: Fixed.
:3

Thanks a lot for modding~

你好

[General]
- 你需要一個Easy難度 前面有modder講了0.0
- Normal和Hard你用了很多 whistle 在整條的 slider 上, 我個人不太喜歡, 建議試試看只有slider的各結點加whistle, slider中不要加試試
- Special和Insane我走得很快, 不好意思, 我討厭在180bpm擺16分音符的map

[Normal]
- 因為這個 diff 中有2.5拍的slider, 建議改用 slider tick rate 2
- 個人會用跟你不同的方式來下 whistle, 以 <00:11:382> 算是第一條白線來說, 我會下在第1,5,7白線或第3,7而slider中不會有, 紅線部分跟你一樣, <00:16:382>開始會下在第3,5,7條白線, 接著下 <00:19:382> (1,3,1,3)這些note..
- 副歌的部分, 為什麼這個diff特別在影片有 A.RU.PI.JI 跳出來時用note遮住呢? 覺得其他難度那樣較好看
<00:23:049> 加個note
<00:50:215> 改下一個 circle + 一個2拍的1/2拍repeat slider? 總之覺得目前這樣不太好聽
<00:52:382> 加個note
<00:57:549> (5) 上一格 (Grid level 3)
<01:06:715> 建議先slider, 再circle
<01:29:882> (1,2) 合為slider?
<01:35:215> (1,2) ^
<01:36:715> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 3)
<01:48:049> 總覺得中間的白線要有hitsound..而且應該二拍就停, 轉盤從<01:49:382>開始
<01:52:715> end spinner here

[Hard]
<00:10:049> 建議不重疊
- 聽不太懂主歌下 whistle 的規律..不過不太好聽
<00:30:382> 建議 (2) x:96 y:128 (3) x:160 y:232 - x:216 y:192
<00:36:049> 加大 (1,2) spacing, 應該不會影響到你的設計
<00:44:049> (2) 右移兩格 (Grid level 3), 應該不會影響到你的設計
<00:49:715> 改放circle, 應該不會影響到你的設計
<00:51:215> 加note
<00:57:549> 建議不重疊
- KIAI裡面的whistle也覺得..<01:17:215> (3)這種就很"孤單" ( 前串的8或這串的5都能加 ) <01:22:549>也是..clap+whistle的連三打也覺得..單純用 W-C-W 不好嗎?
- 另外<01:09:215>(6), <01:14:549>(3), <01:19:882>(7), <01:25:215>(7)這些就是很適合作成一拍的 whistle during slider, 而且這是Hard並不會造成太難, 建議至少改<01:25:215>的(7)為 1.5拍的slider, 因為這邊的留白真的有點大
<01:39:215> 加note
<01:46:049> (1,2,3,4) prefer一拍或單純的circle

[Xeno's Special]
<00:43:382> 調整前面的slider結尾點讓spacing一致
<00:51:382> 微調一下 (1) 起點296,260 尾巴306,86 (2) 256,40 (3) 起點199,104
<01:15:382> 上下不一致不好看
<01:19:382> 覺得把 (1) 也重疊在中間能排得比較好看
<01:21:548> (6) 右移一格 (Grid level 4)
<01:40:048> (5) 這格和後面的 (1) Y作標改為和大家一樣

[Insane]
<00:03:549> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 3)
<00:14:049> 三連擊放在14:215, 14:299, 14:382(Slider)
<00:19:382> 跟上面類似, 靠到下一拍
<00:25:382> (8,9) 移到x:408 y:112 能跟(2)對稱
<01:13:882> (1,2) 覺得半拍較好聽
<01:20:382> (1) 左兩格 (2) 左一格 (Grid level 3)
<01:35:215> (1) 覺得半拍好聽
<01:49:882> 加note

star

loveFantasy wrote:

感謝modding~
接下來應該會試著重新設計一下...特別是hitsounds的部分...
並且再加Easy.....

[General]
Title should be A.Ru.Pi.Ji

[Insane]
This feels overmapped (for example 00:11:549 (4,5,6) feels like a double not a triple, 00:16:882 (4,5,6) feels like a double as well) also i suggest you dont use slider whistles they dont fit at all, i highly recommend you use soft sampleset for this map.
00:25:882 (1,2,3,4) - Mean move, this is more a spacing error than a jump.
00:34:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make all stacks consistent or map this in a different way D:
00:35:382 (1,2,1,2) - Sliders ends are supposed to be stacked with the next slider yet they arent getting stacked due to low stack lenincy!!!
00:40:716 (1,2) - ^
00:41:382 (2) - Try to not make this slider touch itself? it looks kind of ugly D:
00:47:382 (5,6) - Once again sliders arent getting stacked due to stack leniency plus covering sliders like this is unrankable
00:51:882 (1,2) - Unrankable, player cant tell which one's the slider
01:04:549 - This timing section is unnecessary.
01:15:882 (7,8,9) - These jumps really feel unintuitive.
01:29:882 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing error, this is just mean play since (1,2) has larger difference in timeline.
01:32:215 (6,7,8) - Spacing error, another mean move.
01:32:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped, there's no instrument going at 1/4 in here.

[Xeno's Special]
00:58:049 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I dont see the 1/4's in the rythm here?
00:59:882 (4,5) - I think it fits more the song if you combine these into a slider
01:00:549 (X) - Add a note?
01:48:132 (1) - Dont really want to mess with your style, but imo this spinner doesnt fit, there's a lot of notes that you can put in here with some triples here and there, at least that's what i'm hearing from the song.

[Hard]
Once again i dont think normal whistles on slider bodies fit at all, in fact i think soft-sampleset is better for this map.
00:47:382 (4,5) - It's unrankable to overlap sliders starts and ends like this.
01:04:632 - Timing section is unnecessary.

[Normal]
That BG is kind of suggestive if you ask me, even if she's hugging a plush toy her face and reaction are suggestive.
This difficulty is not easy enough to be considered for the easiest diff of the mapset
Once again, i dont think the whistle slider sounds fit the song at all, also i still recommend soft sampleset.
Slider speed kind of fast for the easiest diff of the mapset (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:23:215 (4) - Could you try to make this slider look more symmetric? like http://puu.sh/1fgT
00:28:049 (2,3) - 1.5 beat spacing is quite confusing for newbies (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:43:716 (2) - Newbies wont be able to see the other repeats on short sliders (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:49:049 (2) - ^
00:54:049 (1,2) - ^
00:57:549 (5,1) - Once again 1.5 beat spacing is confusing (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:14:549 (3,1) - ^
01:29:882 (1,2) - ^
01:31:382 (1) - Spinner is too short for the easiest diff (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:33:549 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 stream too long for newbies (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:35:215 (1,2) - You probably know what im going to say here.

That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap~

Fixed a lot of things in [Normal],[Hard] and [Insane].
But hitsounds not modified yet...(I need some suggestions...)
And I am going to add an [Easy] diff.
Now still WIP...

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]
- 你需要一個Easy難度 前面有modder講了0.0
- Normal和Hard你用了很多 whistle 在整條的 slider 上, 我個人不太喜歡, 建議試試看只有slider的各結點加whistle, slider中不要加試試
- Special和Insane我走得很快, 不好意思, 我討厭在180bpm擺16分音符的map

[Normal]
- 因為這個 diff 中有2.5拍的slider, 建議改用 slider tick rate 2
Ok
- 個人會用跟你不同的方式來下 whistle, 以 <00:11:382> 算是第一條白線來說, 我會下在第1,5,7白線或第3,7而slider中不會有, 紅線部分跟你一樣, <00:16:382>開始會下在第3,5,7條白線, 接著下 <00:19:382> (1,3,1,3)這些note..
- 副歌的部分, 為什麼這個diff特別在影片有 A.RU.PI.JI 跳出來時用note遮住呢? 覺得其他難度那樣較好看
本來是打算讓玩家能夠"點擊影片跳出來的地方"，但經過這樣一題效果不太好...
稍微修了幾個音符的配置
<00:23:049> 加個note
Ok
<00:50:215> 改下一個 circle + 一個2拍的1/2拍repeat slider? 總之覺得目前這樣不太好聽
修了一下這一段的配置
<00:52:382> 加個note
Ok
<00:57:549> (5) 上一格 (Grid level 3)
已修正
<01:06:715> 建議先slider, 再circle
Ok
<01:29:882> (1,2) 合為slider?
<01:35:215> (1,2) ^
抱歉我覺得Circle較好...
<01:36:715> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 3)
已修正
<01:48:049> 總覺得中間的白線要有hitsound..而且應該二拍就停, 轉盤從<01:49:382>開始
覺得原來的配置較好...
<01:52:715> end spinner here
已修正

[Hard]
<00:10:049> 建議不重疊
已修正
- 聽不太懂主歌下 whistle 的規律..不過不太好聽
<00:30:382> 建議 (2) x:96 y:128 (3) x:160 y:232 - x:216 y:192
已修正
<00:36:049> 加大 (1,2) spacing, 應該不會影響到你的設計
已修正
<00:44:049> (2) 右移兩格 (Grid level 3), 應該不會影響到你的設計
已修正
<00:49:715> 改放circle, 應該不會影響到你的設計
Spacing0.32X 應不會有太大問題,有new combo...已修正
<00:51:215> 加note
抱歉我覺得還是不加的好...加的話jump會太難
<00:57:549> 建議不重疊
已修正
- KIAI裡面的whistle也覺得..<01:17:215> (3)這種就很"孤單" ( 前串的8或這串的5都能加 ) <01:22:549>也是..clap+whistle的連三打也覺得..單純用 W-C-W 不好嗎?
- 另外<01:09:215>(6), <01:14:549>(3), <01:19:882>(7), <01:25:215>(7)這些就是很適合作成一拍的 whistle during slider, 而且這是Hard並不會造成太難, 建議至少改<01:25:215>的(7)為 1.5拍的slider, 因為這邊的留白真的有點大
只改了<01:25:215>(7),其他地方還是覺得用circle較好
<01:39:215> 加note
已修正
<01:46:049> (1,2,3,4) prefer一拍或單純的circle
修改成1拍slider

[Xeno's Special]
<00:43:382> 調整前面的slider結尾點讓spacing一致
<00:51:382> 微調一下 (1) 起點296,260 尾巴306,86 (2) 256,40 (3) 起點199,104
<01:15:382> 上下不一致不好看
<01:19:382> 覺得把 (1) 也重疊在中間能排得比較好看
<01:21:548> (6) 右移一格 (Grid level 4)
<01:40:048> (5) 這格和後面的 (1) Y作標改為和大家一樣

[Insane]
<00:03:549> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 3)
<00:14:049> 三連擊放在14:215, 14:299, 14:382(Slider)
<00:19:382> 跟上面類似, 靠到下一拍
<00:25:382> (8,9) 移到x:408 y:112 能跟(2)對稱
<01:13:882> (1,2) 覺得半拍較好聽
<01:20:382> (1) 左兩格 (2) 左一格 (Grid level 3)
已修正
<01:35:215> (1) 覺得半拍好聽
這邊覺得用短促的16分音較好...
<01:49:882> 加note
已修正
star

Thanks a million for modding~ Your modding is detailed~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Title should be A.Ru.Pi.Ji

[Insane]
This feels overmapped (for example 00:11:549 (4,5,6) feels like a double not a triple, 00:16:882 (4,5,6) feels like a double as well) also i suggest you dont use slider whistles they dont fit at all, i highly recommend you use soft sampleset for this map.
00:25:882 (1,2,3,4) - Mean move, this is more a spacing error than a jump.
I want to keep it now...I'll consider how to remap it...
00:34:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make all stacks consistent or map this in a different way D:
Stacked in a different way
00:35:382 (1,2,1,2) - Sliders ends are supposed to be stacked with the next slider yet they arent getting stacked due to low stack lenincy!!!
00:40:716 (1,2) - ^
Fixed by turning up the stack lenincy...
00:41:382 (2) - Try to not make this slider touch itself? it looks kind of ugly D:
00:47:382 (5,6) - Once again sliders arent getting stacked due to stack leniency plus covering sliders like this is unrankable
00:51:882 (1,2) - Unrankable, player cant tell which one's the slider
Fixed.
01:04:549 - This timing section is unnecessary.
Moved(It's necessary now...)
01:15:882 (7,8,9) - These jumps really feel unintuitive.
Fixed.
01:29:882 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing error, this is just mean play since (1,2) has larger difference in timeline.
I want to keep it now...I'll consider how to remap it...
01:32:215 (6,7,8) - Spacing error, another mean move.
I think this is ok... this is the 4th time of the same melody and rhythm...
01:32:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped, there's no instrument going at 1/4 in here.
Remapped.

[Xeno's Special]
00:58:049 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I dont see the 1/4's in the rythm here?
00:59:882 (4,5) - I think it fits more the song if you combine these into a slider
01:00:549 (X) - Add a note?
01:48:132 (1) - Dont really want to mess with your style, but imo this spinner doesnt fit, there's a lot of notes that you can put in here with some triples here and there, at least that's what i'm hearing from the song.

[Hard]
Once again i dont think normal whistles on slider bodies fit at all, in fact i think soft-sampleset is better for this map.
00:47:382 (4,5) - It's unrankable to overlap sliders starts and ends like this.
Fixed.
01:04:632 - Timing section is unnecessary.
Moved,Now it's necessary...

[Normal]
That BG is kind of suggestive if you ask me, even if she's hugging a plush toy her face and reaction are suggestive.
..........................................orz
This difficulty is not easy enough to be considered for the easiest diff of the mapset
Going to make an [Easy] diff.
Once again, i dont think the whistle slider sounds fit the song at all, also i still recommend soft sampleset.
Slider speed kind of fast for the easiest diff of the mapset (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:23:215 (4) - Could you try to make this slider look more symmetric? like http://puu.sh/1fgT
This slider is being redesigned.
00:28:049 (2,3) - 1.5 beat spacing is quite confusing for newbies (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:43:716 (2) - Newbies wont be able to see the other repeats on short sliders (ignore if you make an easier diff)
00:49:049 (2) - ^
00:54:049 (1,2) - ^
00:57:549 (5,1) - Once again 1.5 beat spacing is confusing (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:14:549 (3,1) - ^
01:29:882 (1,2) - ^
01:31:382 (1) - Spinner is too short for the easiest diff (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:33:549 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 stream too long for newbies (ignore if you make an easier diff)
01:35:215 (1,2) - You probably know what im going to say here.

That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap~

Your modding mentioned many things that I ignored. Thank you.

Also reworking my map.

Here it what I have sofar

Finished.

Update 2

Download: nazuna - A.RU.PI.JI. (daniel32333) [Xeno's Special].osu

Xeno wrote:

Also reworking my map.

Here it what I have sofar

Finished.

Update 2

Updated.

By the way...
Due to a new diff [Easy] added, I also added a new BG.
And I changed the BG of your map.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Title should be A.Ru.Pi.Ji

About the title...
I tried viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
But even if I deleted the map and redownload, the Web menu is still greyed out.
(I think there is a bug recognizing dot marks in osu!...)
Must I change this...?

Edit: FIXED.

HI-.- mod time~
just suggestions

[Hard]
00:42:049(3)-这个silder你可以向下弯比较好看？~

Orz 没什么问题 no kds

/me shoot starr

BakaHuang wrote:

HI-.- mod time~
just suggestions

[Hard]
00:42:049(3)-这个silder你可以向下弯比较好看？~

SPOILER

[attachment=0:bf936]655.jpg[/attachment:bf936]

其實這是文字捏它的其中一部分...所以會往上彎...

Orz 没什么问题 no kds

/me shoot starr

感謝modding

こんにちは～

[Easy]
00:29:382 (1) extend 00:32:049?
01:07:382 (6) new combo
01:12:716 (6) ^
01:46:049 (4) ^

[Normal]
hmm fine to me

[Hard]
01:27:215 (5) too protrude. please adjust
01:42:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) hmm I'm not sure. these 1/6 rhythm really fit??

[Xeno's special]
00:21:715 (4) new combo?
01:21:548 (9) move 1 grid down?

[Insane]
01:04:382 (8) new combo?
I'm anxious 1/6 rhythm(01:42:049~) too...

star~

Sorry for my really late response

banvi wrote:

こんにちは～

[Easy]
00:29:382 (1) extend 00:32:049?
Although some people will think the next notes are too soon after the spinner...
Fixed, anyway.
01:07:382 (6) new combo
01:12:716 (6) ^
01:46:049 (4) ^
All fixed.

[Normal]
hmm fine to me

[Hard]
01:27:215 (5) too protrude. please adjust
Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:bb2fd]2f14a736168c39d9b718be10cc3c5b5b.png[/attachment:bb2fd]

01:42:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) hmm I'm not sure. these 1/6 rhythm really fit??
It goes with the vocals... I think 1/6 rhythm fits the vocals

[Xeno's special]
00:21:715 (4) new combo?
01:21:548 (9) move 1 grid down?

[Insane]
01:04:382 (8) new combo?
Fixed
I'm anxious 1/6 rhythm(01:42:049~) too...

star~

Arigatou~

star!
&
[Insane]
Slider is Irregular in size
I would suggest...
00:05:965 Inherited Points [BPMx0.75]
00:07:049 Add Timing Section [BPMx1.0]

sorry my poor English...

pekos wrote:

star!
&
[Insane]
Slider is Irregular in size
I would suggest...
00:05:965 Inherited Points [BPMx0.75]
00:07:049 Add Timing Section [BPMx1.0]

sorry my poor English...

rimokonkunn2 wrote:

:)

Thanks for stars
Sorry not having time updating the map...

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