Tenshi-nyan wrote:

o hi~

Insane
Grid level 4:
00:37:382 (2) - 1 grid down
00:38:049 (1) - put this on top of 00:38:715 (2) ? or maybe somewhere else, I don't like it's current position
Fixed.
00:46:049 (1) - make this slider curve around 00:45:883 (7) ?
Sligtly modified the slider.
01:32:549 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - make it look like this?

SPOILER

I want to keep the positon of "8"...
Others fixed...
Level 3:
01:37:049 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up for each
Fixed.

Hard
00:20:549 (1,2,3) - remove the claps
I want to remain the claps...
Actually, there are claps here in all of three diffs...
00:38:049 (1) - same as in insane
00:50:549 (2) - 1 grid down? (Lv. 3)
00:56:716 (3,4,5,6) - curve these better
01:27:215 (5) - flip vertically?
Fixed.

Normal
fine...

Have this star.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I don't mean to be pushy but you forgot my Kudosu :3

IceBeam wrote:

I can see 4 different BGs in the song folder,but there're only 3 difficulties.
If "hirude.JPG" isn't used - please delete it and full re-submit.
Fixed.
(I planned to make 4 diffs before, so I prepared 4 BGs of different characters...
But it comes out to be 3 diffs...)

[Normal]
00:11:382 (1) - Finish?
00:16:715 (1) - ^
00:39:382 (2,3) - Doesn't look nice to me,I wonder if you could map something instead,cause (2) is literally mixed with (3).
01:04:715 - Finish?
01:10:049 - ^
01:15:382 - ^
01:20:715 - ^
All Fixed.

[Hard]
00:03:382 - I think you need a note here to keep the rhytm on.
I let the notes correspond to the melody of the electric BGM, so I think the original pattern is ok...
00:11:382 (2) - Finish?
00:16:715 (1) - ^
Fixed.
00:38:049 (1) - Kinda cruel jump for "Hard".
Moved some notes to the center, hope it feels better for" Hard"...
01:04:715 - Finish?
01:10:049 - ^
01:12:799 (2) - I'd like you to remove 1/4 notes from all such moments during all the map.Cause I really want you to keep "Hard" as an average difficulty.
01:15:382 - Finish.
01:20:715 - ^
Fixed.

[Insane]
00:11:382 (1) - Finish?
00:16:715 (1) - ^
Fixed.
00:21:715 (4) - As I remeber you pointed out such notes in new combo in previous difficulties,
Actually, I didn't....
add NC here as well?
Wanting to keep the pattern...so I didn't...
00:46:549 (2,3) - Stack under slider please.
Tried, But I can't make "Prev: 0.00x"... (0.02x For now...)
01:04:715 - Finish?
01:10:049 - ^
01:15:382 - ^
01:20:715 - ^
Fixed.
Good job,keep on.
Thank you~
Star~

H-boy wrote:

Normal

总体声音略大了些？
將部分音量下降1格...

00:01:715(2) - remove whistle
00:02:382(3) - remove whistle at the beginning and end
00:11:049(3) - maybe remove whistle
00:28:382(3) - make more smooth
00:47:382(5) - nothing sync,I suggest to follow the rhythm in the vocal
Fixed.

Hard

00:01:049(1) - whistle
00:01:382(2) - cut 1 repeating off(end at 00:01:715)
00:01:549(1) - remove whistle
00:02:049(x) - circle
00:03:382(x) - ^

Fixed.
Actually, different modders have different opinions here....

Edit: Now changed some patterns back.
I want the notes to follow the melody of the electric sounds...
00:47:382(2) - nothing sync,I suggest to follow the rhythm in the vocal
Fixed.

Insane

fine

Wiinter wrote:

Weird.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51651 >_<
Anyways, hi >w<
Maybe the system have a little bug about dots?
In fact, I've never used osu!direct before...

Normal
00:33:049 (1) - remove new combo? Also, I think this spacing looks better http://puu.sh/MXE.
00:38:382 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:049 (1) - start this new combo here 00:50:216 (2)
Fixed, rearranged some combos.

Hard
01:51:549 (1) - remove new combo?
Fixed.

Insane
00:21:715 (4) - baaad spacing ;.;
Arranged the 4 notes into a right angle triangle pattern.
01:32:715 (9) - new combo
Fixed.
That's all :3 Star'd.

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Normal]

Looks fine to me.

[Hard]

00:00:049 to 00:05:715 - It's not wrong, but the soft hitsound makes weird. I don't know, but just sound a bit awkward.
I think soft hitsounds are ok...
I changed the pattern ,following the main melody.

[Insane]

AR -1 (Looks better. Fits more w/ the song)
Fixed.
OD -1 (If you want, it's not a big deal)
I don't want to change for now...
Actually:
Maximum score for OD8: 7,446,820
Maximum score for OD7: 5,983,932 ...

A little overmapped, but nothing non-sense.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Good job and good luck. For me, just details before get ranked.

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
stack all sliders properly
Slightly adjusted some sliders' position with grid level 4
00:12:882 (1~4) - try right 1 grid?
Left1+ down1 instead...
(To make it symmetric with 00:12:549 (9))
00:45:382 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - (4,5) up 1 grid, (6,7...) right 1 grid
Fixed.
00:51:382 (5) - use single note to extend to 1/1 slider?
Unchanged... (Actually I don't quite understand...)
00:57:215 (5,6,7) - right 1 grid

[Hard]
00:02:715 (2,3) - left 1 grid
Fixed.
00:39:549 (1,2) - bad stacking
Sorry I want to keep this... And the spacing is not wrong...
00:45:882 (6) - left 1 grid
Fixed.

[Normal]
No big problems

try to check your spacings, star~

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

From 32:715 to 53:715 in [Hard] and [Insane],
I arranged the note to make the patterns look like japanese characters of "A RU PI JI "(あ る ぴ じ).
While modding this section, please make suggestions based on keeping this pattern.

lennox989 wrote:

Hey~

[Normal]

00:04:715 (x) - add note?
00:06:049 (1) - Remove new combo
00:07:382 (7) - Add new combo
00:08:715 (1) - Remove new combo
00:15:382 (2) - It doesn't follow rhythm/lyrics what ever Fixed, changed the pattern and rhythm.
00:50:216 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:382 (1) - ^
01:13:882 (1) - ^
01:38:382 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:19:382 (1) - Remove new combo
00:23:215 (5) - Make a quiet end? To keep the same pattern with other simmilar patterns, unchanged...
00:38:049 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:382 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:11:716 (6) - Add new combo
00:23:215 (5) - Make a quiet end? To keep the same pattern with other simmilar patterns, unchanged...
00:38:049 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:382 (1) - ^
00:42:049 (1) - ^
00:43:715 (1) - ^
00:48:716 (1) - ^


Nice song!

Star~

MoonShade wrote:

This map is very good, so watch out for some nazi modding here

Normal
00:46:049 (1) - Slider looks weird, maybe make it more like this?

SPOILER

[attachment=2:56600]screenshot142.jpg[/attachment:56600]

00:50:216 (1) - ^, make the slider more round?
01:31:049 (4) - nazi, move one grid left + up to have (2,3,4) in a perfect line

Hard
00:17:549 (6) - slider looks kind of ugly
00:35:049 (4,1) - overlapping
I think this overlapping is ok...Unchanged...
00:36:715 (3) - make this slider more round
00:47:382 (4) - try to make this slider more like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:56600]screenshot143.jpg[/attachment:56600]

01:13:216 (3) - spacing: too much distance to the previous circle
01:19:215 (5) - nazi, move 2 grids left, 1 grid down to have (2,3,4,5) in a perfect line. If you do this, you may also want to fix the following:

SPOILER

01:19:549 (6) - move 4 grids left
01:19:882 (7) - ^

01:24:548 (5) - ^

Insane
00:01:049 (2) - copy+paste (1) here and rotate it 90° clockwise
00:12:215 (8) - again, copy paste and flip the previous slider would look better
00:35:049 (6,7,1) - overlapping
I think this overlapping is ok...Unchanged...
00:47:382 (5,6) - try to make the sliders like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:56600]screenshot144.jpg[/attachment:56600]

Edit:

From 32:715 to 53:715 in [Hard] and [Insane],
I arranged the note to make the patterns look like japanese characters of "A RU PI JI "(あ る ぴ じ).
While modding this section, please make suggestions based on keeping this pattern.

Sry I didn't saw your comment on this in the first place. Then I think, I don't like this pattern cause I don't like very unsymmetrical sliders ._.

As said, a really nice map. Star :3

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Warning to other modders that there is major ecchi in the beatmap.....
This one is not so serious compared to some other ranked maps........ (I think...)
*snicker snicker*

By Mod Request:

[General]
Make sure the timing sections are a blue tick before the note you are trying to change.
Do not do this for kiai time. But if you have to change the note and make it kiai time, you have to add another timing section....
Fixed. Avoided the green lines right on the notes.
Star!!

Xeno32 wrote:

I like this :>

I cant find serious problems.

Thank you

PS.

Can I make you an guest diff?

320,120,7382,2,0,B|376:40|480:72|488:152|408:184|328:264|328:264|472:264,1,480

senaya wrote:

Cute stuff
I have only suggestions.

[Nromal]
All good.

[Hard]
00:24:049 - add circle here?
01:28:049 - and here?
Sorry, I prefer the original pattern...
01:44:715 (1,2,3,4) - try moving this to 01:44:632 and play a few times. maybe it fits with the "anata ga" better.

[Insane]
01:44:715 (1,2,3,4) - same as in hard. try moving it to 01:44:632 and play several times to feel it. if not - fuk et XD
00:07:382 (2) - you can make it look better (in Hard too). maybe like this http://puu.sh/PO4 ? Here's the code:

320,120,7382,2,0,B|376:40|480:72|488:152|408:184|328:264|328:264|472:264,1,480

Fixed. [Hard] also fixed.
[Xeno32's special]
01:44:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, move to 01:44:632 ? I play it in 25% and I still feel like it should be there. You're the one to decide through.

Good luck

Giorgos wrote:

I think you should move your KIA mod from 01:04:715 to 01:04:382

well,I don't see here any serious mistakes actually,just some advices:

Easy:
00:32:715 - this will be better if you move that circle 5 grids left
01:28:215 - I think that slider sounds better when it starts from - 01:28:049
I want to let the slider start with the lyrics, so unchanged.

Normal:
00:22:382 - I think this circle doesn't look good here. Try to move it somewhere higher for symmetry
00:47:882 - there is not any rhythm at this moment,so change this slider.

Insane:
00:20:215 - 2 grids right

So,that is all,I think!
Star!

winber1 wrote:

Insane

--the overall spacing of this song i don't really like. it's probably just me being unable to predict the song.
Hmmm.... I think it's ok... Most of the spacing are constant, except some jumps...
00:26:372(1,2,3,4) - at first, i failed to hit the notes at the right time, but the 2nd time was ok. I guess the spacing is ok, but I'm just pointing out, in case you may want to change it or not
I think it's ok because it follows the lyrics...
01:42:049(1,2,3,4) - these four notes fit on the 1/4 scale (i think), you don't need the 1/6 (or whatever you were using). It sounds fine if you put playback rate at 50% in my opinion. With the 1/6, the last note comes a little late. It also makes more sense for the player, cuz i was wondering why I was getting 50's on these notes, and then I saw the timing... lol.
01:43:372(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:705(1,2,3,4) - ^
01:47:382(1) - 1 grid right

Hard

00:07:382(2) - this "2" seems a little deformed xD lol, but it doesn't matter
00:47:382(4) - i know it's supposed to be a circle, but it sounds very weird. why not just use what you did in insane? use two 1/1 (in length) sliders

the spacing on this map i really like i lot better than insane.
the only thing weird is the japanese words you're trying to spell out. it worked better with the longer slider lengths with insane.
Stacked some notes up... Hope it works better...
Normal

DR +2
OD +1 (although i'm really not sure about these things lol. i just based it on how i could beat the song with 40% accuracy o_o)

00:47:382(4) - same as hard. this 3/2 business doesn't really make sense here.

cool map

star~

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

daniel32333 wrote:

Xeno32 wrote:

Fixed lots of unsnapped objects.
Increased Slider Tick
01:14:549 (7) - small adjustments on mini stream.

:>

I have updated it.
Another mod again, some places that I hope you can fix:

00:57:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
I really think it's very difficult to get the rhythm here...
Make like ATTACH[01.JPG]?
And add whistles on 1s instead of 2s...

00:59:882 (4) - 2 grids up (Level 4) ? To align with 00:59:382 (1,3,5,7,8) -

01:14:549 (7,8,9,10,1) -
Finish is on 01:15:133 (8) ... It sounds wierd...
You can add finish on the end of 01:14:549 (7) - ...

01:19:882 (4,5,6,7,1) - Simillar problem... 01:20:465 (5) - remove finish, and add finish on the end of 01:19:882 (4)

01:33:883 (3) - Change a position? Or 1 grid left (Level 4) (Just a suggestion....)

01:41:881 (1) - Add a new note here, and make it like ATTACH[02.JPG]

That's it.

Xeno32 wrote:

daniel32333 wrote:

That's it.

Done.

nante wrote:

[Hard]
00:35:049 (4) - isn't stacked well
00:37:715 (4) - ^
00:46:715 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (5) - ^
00:52:049 (2) - ^
01:35:715 (2) - ditance
01:50:215 (1) - ^


[Xeno32's Special]
Overmapped diff...
00:26:382 (1) - don't overlap with slider
00:31:716 (1) - ^
00:36:382 (1) - distance
01:35:716 (1) - don't overlap with slider

[Insane]
00:36:715 (1) - not perfectly stacked
00:37:382 (2) - ^
00:41:382 (2) - ^
00:42:049 (1) - ^
00:46:549 (2) - ^
00:48:049 (6) - ^
00:50:382 (2) - ^
00:50:715 (3) - ^
00:51:049 (4) - ^
00:51:382 (5) - ^

Tip: You can tell if it's stacked perfectly by checking right top corner. If distance is 0,00 then it's fine.
Tip2: Turn off grid snap and distance snap to stack them

miss_dior wrote:

;)

yongtw123 wrote:

I'm so late @@

Overall
I'd suggest reduce the frequency of normal-whistle hitsound... it's a bit noisy IMO.
I thought it's fine... I'll try to improve it...
(PM me online if you want further suggestions...)
I think I will...

[Normal]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Nice suggestion...fixed. I think it worked out good.(For all my 3 diffs)
00:03:715 (1) - whistle at repeat?
Fixed.
00:13:715 (x) - add a note here?
Fixed with slider
00:24:049 (x) - ^
Sorry...I don't think so...
01:06:882 (x) - add two 1/8 notes from here?
Fixed with slider
01:48:049 (4) - this is purely opinion: try to make the slider symmetrical to playfield
Redisigned the last part

[Hard]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Fixed
00:35:049 (4) - suggestion: delete this and make 00:34:715 (3) repeat?
Fixed
01:08:382 (x) - the clap rhythm breaks here. Try improvising.
01:09:049 (x) - ^ (There are many other occurrences hereafter, so either 1.fix them, or 2.remove the clap rhythm)
Changed the clap rhythm...
01:34:715 (6,7) - nazi: right one grid
Fixed

[Xeno's Special]
00:03:382 (1) - feels extraneous for me
00:20:549 (5,6,7) - place finish?
00:35:215 (x) - I expected a note here
00:45:882 (x) - ^
01:00:549 (x) -
01:39:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO...overmapped... (why not use a spinner?)

Uh...I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Plenty unnecessary 1/8ths IMO.

[Insane]
00:00:716 (1) - normal-finish at beginning? (and make it loud)
Fixed

Also adjusted some hitsounds.
Not bad not bad...
Thanks
========================

Fine-tune the hitsuonds then all should be fine.
Star~

yongtw123 wrote:

[Xeno's Special]
00:03:382 (1) - feels extraneous for me
00:20:549 (5,6,7) - place finish?
00:35:215 (x) - I expected a note here
00:45:882 (x) - ^
01:00:549 (x) -
01:39:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - IMO...overmapped... (why not use a spinner?)

Uh...I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Plenty unnecessary 1/8ths IMO.

haha5957 wrote:

[Xeno's]
Good diff
00:16:465 (2) - deleting this sounds much better for me, not a problem though.
01:09:798 (2) - ^

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
All of your sliders that have whistle, also has long whistle sound.
Do Double click on slider circle and you can give different sound effects on slider circles
I guess you would know this but just in case =D

I know this, and I have some points that finish sets on one of the slider circles.
I just prefer the whistle sound on some of the sliders...

[Normal]
00:35:382 (3) - This slider plays kinda bad, and this overlapped with next (2) looks very bad..
why not just seperate this slider? or at least change the shape please
Redisigned the sliders...
00:43:716 (2) - This slider confused me a bit.
This isn't a big problem, But I thought I'm good enough to play normal..)
It follows the main melody,so... not a big problem...
01:08:549 (3) - how about seperating this? sounded kinda bad to me.
I think it's ok... But I will think twice about it...

[Hard]

No Major problems I guess


[Xeno's]
Good diff
00:16:465 (2) - deleting this sounds much better for me, not a problem though.
01:09:798 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:25:882 (1,2,3,4) - I see a good rhythm to make a nice jump.. why not make (1,2) more further?
Moved their distances further... I prefer them to have equal distance...
(The rhythm lands on the vocal,so I think it don't have much problem...)
00:35:215 (7,1) - not a major problem but I think this looks kinda bad.. how about (1) curves more smoothly?
Fixed
01:09:382 (9) - add 2 circles after this sounds better to me
Sorry...I prefer the original pattern, which gives player a little moment to rest...

Nice map ~ star!

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello daniel32333~
Hello~
[Normal]

WooW 3,24 star?
should be of no more than 3 stars ! either reworked or do Easy 3<

Now it becomes 3.28....

Some ranked maps (not old maps) have the easiest diffculty that is [Normal] and have over 3 stars...(3.0~3.5)
In my opinion, some songs do not need to have easy diffs...
(1)Not so popular song
(2)Hardcore, Speedcore, Heavy Metal... etc
Anyway, I'll keep it and let MATs/BATs to decide whether it's rankable...
Edit: Now planning to work on [Easy].

00:23:049 (4) - move here 00:23:215
Fixed.
00:28:382 (3) - ^ 00:28:549
Fixed.
[Hard]

00:06:049 (1) - does not seem to figure x]
Adjusted a little...
[Xeno's Special]

00:24:715 (4,6) - Sliders make the same

01:28:715 (4,6) - ^

star~