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Asriel - Kegare Naki Yume
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THZ!!!NatsumeRin wrote:
part of hitsounds.
[attachment=0:f7519]Asriel - Kegare Naki Yume (KanaRin) [stress].osu[/attachment:f7519]
hentai Rin
0:40:929 (4,5) stack the sliders properly
1:16:041 (2) left 1 grid
1:20:750 (1) up 1 grid
2:04:875 (1,2) up 1 grid
2:57:812 remove break
4:19:943 (1,2,3) stack properly
You're not goin' to map the last part so need need to inherit red line, but up to you lol
0:40:929 (4,5) stack the sliders properly
1:16:041 (2) left 1 grid
1:20:750 (1) up 1 grid
2:04:875 (1,2) up 1 grid
2:57:812 remove break
4:19:943 (1,2,3) stack properly
You're not goin' to map the last part so need need to inherit red line, but up to you lol
Topic Starter
Thanks your mod!wmfchris wrote:
0:40:929 (4,5) stack the sliders properly Fixed
1:16:041 (2) left 1 grid Fixed
1:20:750 (1) up 1 grid Fixed
2:04:875 (1,2) up 1 grid Fixed
2:57:812 remove break Fixed
4:19:943 (1,2,3) stack properly Fixed
Bakachris.
世界錯了嗎?世界錯了嗎???
Awesome map and song.
Just few suggestions.
Despite it's really hard,the most patterns are clearly readable and makes sense.
I will list those,what I don't really like,consider changing them:
01:37:835 (6,7) - These 2 circles were sooo unexpected.That's the main problem,I just don't feel them,moreover they're so far,that it makes them almost unbeatable.Well,just how I feel,but I'd changed them to something else or reduced distance at least.
02:59:158 (x) - If you are're using slowdown sliders,maybe lower the distance as well?
03:55:727 (x) - However,you're using 0.5x section in so unexpected place..
And all these slowdown sliders in the end make not much sense to me..
04:13:485 (3) - Fix spacing,it's too close.
04:21:422 (1) - Shouldn't it start with lyrics? 04:21:557?
And the last and probably the main suggestion - lower HP Drain a bit,it's really hard and long map,but few mistakes can kill a player.It'd be a pity.
Star~
Just few suggestions.
Despite it's really hard,the most patterns are clearly readable and makes sense.
I will list those,what I don't really like,consider changing them:
01:37:835 (6,7) - These 2 circles were sooo unexpected.That's the main problem,I just don't feel them,moreover they're so far,that it makes them almost unbeatable.Well,just how I feel,but I'd changed them to something else or reduced distance at least.
02:59:158 (x) - If you are're using slowdown sliders,maybe lower the distance as well?
03:55:727 (x) - However,you're using 0.5x section in so unexpected place..
And all these slowdown sliders in the end make not much sense to me..
04:13:485 (3) - Fix spacing,it's too close.
04:21:422 (1) - Shouldn't it start with lyrics? 04:21:557?
And the last and probably the main suggestion - lower HP Drain a bit,it's really hard and long map,but few mistakes can kill a player.It'd be a pity.
Star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod!IceBeam wrote:
01:37:835 (6,7) - These 2 circles were sooo unexpected.That's the main problem,I just don't feel them,moreover they're so far,that it makes them almost unbeatable.Well,just how I feel,but I'd changed them to something else or reduced distance at least.
Fixed
02:59:158 (x) - If you are're using slowdown sliders,maybe lower the distance as well? Fixed
03:55:727 (x) - However,you're using 0.5x section in so unexpected place..
And all these slowdown sliders in the end make not much sense to me.. I will try to think that how to change it as well
04:13:485 (3) - Fix spacing,it's too close. Fixed
04:21:422 (1) - Shouldn't it start with lyrics? 04:21:557? Fixed
Star~
hi 
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Yume
02:16:983 (1,2) - 在小节开头的这个repeat slider有点别扭（有可能是因为后面接了红线开始的slider），建议换成普通slider，后面可以补circle
02:30:705 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议叠(高bpm高ar还跳打得我羞涩啊)，考虑到你前边一直用slider感觉这里排成线性的打起来顺一点._.
02:57:880 - breaktime？
02:59:225 - 从这里开始的节奏我建议你重新做一下- - 感觉和音乐联系不大 （一拍一个音不说还放了几个重音开始的三连._.）
03:49:539 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉从这张图整体这种slider风格看不适合这么叠._.
03:55:727 - 这里开始0.5x感觉没必要，留着也没事但是04:00:032这里回到1.0x感觉有点突然了，如果想用0.5就一直用到04:04:337
04:03:799 (3) - 这个地方slider加速显得有点突然，而且还是个repeat slider打起来很僵硬，干脆换成3个1.0x距离下的circle
04:11:467 (5,1) - 不喜欢这里放这样的节奏，而且白线结束的slider尾巴后面在加一个红线上的circle打起来也别扭
04:19:943 (1,2,3) - 要不就在位置上分开要不就把note都连在一起 (1,2加一个note)
总体不错 star
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Yume
02:16:983 (1,2) - 在小节开头的这个repeat slider有点别扭（有可能是因为后面接了红线开始的slider），建议换成普通slider，后面可以补circle
02:30:705 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议叠(高bpm高ar还跳打得我羞涩啊)，考虑到你前边一直用slider感觉这里排成线性的打起来顺一点._.
02:57:880 - breaktime？
02:59:225 - 从这里开始的节奏我建议你重新做一下- - 感觉和音乐联系不大 （一拍一个音不说还放了几个重音开始的三连._.）
03:49:539 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉从这张图整体这种slider风格看不适合这么叠._.
03:55:727 - 这里开始0.5x感觉没必要，留着也没事但是04:00:032这里回到1.0x感觉有点突然了，如果想用0.5就一直用到04:04:337
04:03:799 (3) - 这个地方slider加速显得有点突然，而且还是个repeat slider打起来很僵硬，干脆换成3个1.0x距离下的circle
04:11:467 (5,1) - 不喜欢这里放这样的节奏，而且白线结束的slider尾巴后面在加一个红线上的circle打起来也别扭
04:19:943 (1,2,3) - 要不就在位置上分开要不就把note都连在一起 (1,2加一个note)
总体不错 star
Topic Starter
後part我叫Clare改一下,Sandpig wrote:
hi
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Yume
02:16:983 (1,2) - 在小节开头的这个repeat slider有点别扭（有可能是因为后面接了红线开始的slider），建议换成普通slider，后面可以补circle Fixed
02:30:705 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议叠(高bpm高ar还跳打得我羞涩啊)，考虑到你前边一直用slider感觉这里排成线性的打起来顺一点._. Fixed
02:57:880 - breaktime？ orz..一個叫我取消一個叫我加是怎麼會事囧
02:59:225 - 从这里开始的节奏我建议你重新做一下- - 感觉和音乐联系不大 （一拍一个音不说还放了几个重音开始的三连._.）
03:49:539 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉从这张图整体这种slider风格看不适合这么叠._.
03:55:727 - 这里开始0.5x感觉没必要，留着也没事但是04:00:032这里回到1.0x感觉有点突然了，如果想用0.5就一直用到04:04:337
04:03:799 (3) - 这个地方slider加速显得有点突然，而且还是个repeat slider打起来很僵硬，干脆换成3个1.0x距离下的circle
04:11:467 (5,1) - 不喜欢这里放这样的节奏，而且白线结束的slider尾巴后面在加一个红线上的circle打起来也别扭
04:19:943 (1,2,3) - 要不就在位置上分开要不就把note都连在一起 (1,2加一个note)
总体不错 star
thanks for mod.
a help
Such an awesome map eh !
[Yume]
03:52:499 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right
04:07:566 (10) - Delete this circle and add one at 04:07:700 (stacked on (10)) ? (like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42139 )
04:21:557 (1) - Add a finish here ?
~Starz'd !
[Yume]
03:52:499 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right
04:07:566 (10) - Delete this circle and add one at 04:07:700 (stacked on (10)) ? (like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42139 )
04:21:557 (1) - Add a finish here ?
~Starz'd !
Topic Starter
All fixed.Fight69 wrote:
Such an awesome map eh !
[Yume]
03:52:499 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right
04:07:566 (10) - Delete this circle and add one at 04:07:700 (stacked on (10)) ? (like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42139 )
04:21:557 (1) - Add a finish here ?
~Starz'd !
Thanks for mod>w<
star.
(^_-)-★
[Yume]
02:59:225 (1) - 03:09:046 (1) - 1/4 beat off :/
Edit: O_O
Download: Asriel - Kegare Naki Yume (KanaRin) [Yume].osu
02:59:225 (1) - 03:09:046 (1) - 1/4 beat off :/
Edit: O_O
Download: Asriel - Kegare Naki Yume (KanaRin) [Yume].osu
Topic Starter
Fixedminyeob wrote:
[Yume]
02:59:225 (1) - 03:09:046 (1) - 1/4 beat off :/
11eyes!! star~☆
Topic Starter
Yeah, fixed the timing *_*minyeob wrote:
[Yume]
02:59:225 (1) - 03:09:046 (1) - 1/4 beat off :/
Edit: O_O
star~ 
嘎嘎。Star~★~=ω=
02:57:611 (7,1) - The map has a high drain, so a player could easily die here in this silence. I really suggest adding a break between these notes.
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner).
00:09:575 - Offset feels late. Try -10, which brings you to 9,575 (resnap if needed).
00:29:091 - Move this uninherited section to 26,939 and resnap the spinner. Actually, the offset feels a bit late, so try 26,929 instead.
02:57:611 - Change this green/inherited section to a red/uninherited one with 3/4 time signature (at 177,601ms).
02:59:191 - Why are you using an uninherited section here? Remove it and do this instead: Place a 223bpm uninherited 3/4 time section at 178,370ms. Then, place an inherited 0.5x section after it.
03:10:390 - Remove this uninherited section.
03:10:524 - Like the other sections, feels late. I did a -30, so that's 190,494ms.
04:22:496 - This should be an inherited/green section to end kiai. The bpm is correct without using an incorrect uninherited section. However, make sure that the spinner ends on the red tick (resnap it).
Summary: Your uninherited sections should be at: 9,575ms, 26,929ms, 177,601ms, 178,370ms, and 190,494ms. You'll need to adjust your green inherited sections as well, and make sure everything is resnapped properly. I'm not 100% sure of the timing, but it should be much better than your current late offsets. Let me know when you've made changes and I'll recheck for a bubble.
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner).
00:09:575 - Offset feels late. Try -10, which brings you to 9,575 (resnap if needed).
00:29:091 - Move this uninherited section to 26,939 and resnap the spinner. Actually, the offset feels a bit late, so try 26,929 instead.
02:57:611 - Change this green/inherited section to a red/uninherited one with 3/4 time signature (at 177,601ms).
02:59:191 - Why are you using an uninherited section here? Remove it and do this instead: Place a 223bpm uninherited 3/4 time section at 178,370ms. Then, place an inherited 0.5x section after it.
03:10:390 - Remove this uninherited section.
03:10:524 - Like the other sections, feels late. I did a -30, so that's 190,494ms.
04:22:496 - This should be an inherited/green section to end kiai. The bpm is correct without using an incorrect uninherited section. However, make sure that the spinner ends on the red tick (resnap it).
Summary: Your uninherited sections should be at: 9,575ms, 26,929ms, 177,601ms, 178,370ms, and 190,494ms. You'll need to adjust your green inherited sections as well, and make sure everything is resnapped properly. I'm not 100% sure of the timing, but it should be much better than your current late offsets. Let me know when you've made changes and I'll recheck for a bubble.
Topic Starter
02:57:611 (7,1) - The map has a high drain, so a player could easily die here in this silence. I really suggest adding a break between these notes.
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner). All fixed here, also
I Fixed the original late timing to the one a bit later than yours as I think that your timing is a bit early. Also, I changed some of your timing points to those which sound better. Anyway, the timing should look fine now, please check ^^
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner). All fixed here, also
I Fixed the original late timing to the one a bit later than yours as I think that your timing is a bit early. Also, I changed some of your timing points to those which sound better. Anyway, the timing should look fine now, please check ^^
Some timing/resnap fixes in irc; great job!
Bubble #1!
Bubble #1!
Topic Starter
I love you>w<Derekku wrote:
Some timing/resnap fixes in irc; great job!
Bubble #1!
ok.
I want to play this song on APP right now!
star
star
Interesting...
Bubble #2!!!!
Bubble #2!!!!
Topic Starter
Thank you >w< Mafia~♪Mafiamaster wrote:
Interesting...
Bubble #2!!!!
[Yume]
04:19:917 (1,2,3) - They are too close from 04:19:378 (6), move them away please.
Fix and I'll approve.
04:19:917 (1,2,3) - They are too close from 04:19:378 (6), move them away please.
Fix and I'll approve.
Topic Starter
fixedosuplayer111 wrote:
[Yume]
04:19:917 (1,2,3) - They are too close from 04:19:378 (6), move them away please.
Fix and I'll approve.
Thank you>w<