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Derekku
02:57:611 (7,1) - The map has a high drain, so a player could easily die here in this silence. I really suggest adding a break between these notes.
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner).

00:09:575 - Offset feels late. Try -10, which brings you to 9,575 (resnap if needed).
00:29:091 - Move this uninherited section to 26,939 and resnap the spinner. Actually, the offset feels a bit late, so try 26,929 instead.
02:57:611 - Change this green/inherited section to a red/uninherited one with 3/4 time signature (at 177,601ms).
02:59:191 - Why are you using an uninherited section here? Remove it and do this instead: Place a 223bpm uninherited 3/4 time section at 178,370ms. Then, place an inherited 0.5x section after it.
03:10:390 - Remove this uninherited section.
03:10:524 - Like the other sections, feels late. I did a -30, so that's 190,494ms.
04:22:496 - This should be an inherited/green section to end kiai. The bpm is correct without using an incorrect uninherited section. However, make sure that the spinner ends on the red tick (resnap it).

Summary: Your uninherited sections should be at: 9,575ms, 26,929ms, 177,601ms, 178,370ms, and 190,494ms. You'll need to adjust your green inherited sections as well, and make sure everything is resnapped properly. I'm not 100% sure of the timing, but it should be much better than your current late offsets. Let me know when you've made changes and I'll recheck for a bubble.
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KanaRin
02:57:611 (7,1) - The map has a high drain, so a player could easily die here in this silence. I really suggest adding a break between these notes.
03:10:343 - Expected a note here after the spinner (or maybe just extend the spinner). All fixed here, also
I Fixed the original late timing to the one a bit later than yours as I think that your timing is a bit early. Also, I changed some of your timing points to those which sound better. Anyway, the timing should look fine now, please check ^^
ise77777
star :)
Derekku
Some timing/resnap fixes in irc; great job!

Bubble #1!
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KanaRin

Derekku wrote:

Some timing/resnap fixes in irc; great job!

Bubble #1!
I love you>w<
NatsumeRin
ok.
K o h a k u
I want to play this song on APP right now!

star :)
Mafiamaster
Interesting...

Bubble #2!!!!
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KanaRin

Mafiamaster wrote:

Interesting...

Bubble #2!!!!
Thank you >w< Mafia~♪
Andrea
[Yume]

04:19:917 (1,2,3) - They are too close from 04:19:378 (6), move them away please.

Fix and I'll approve.
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KanaRin

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Yume]

04:19:917 (1,2,3) - They are too close from 04:19:378 (6), move them away please.

Fix and I'll approve.
fixed
Thank you>w<
Andrea
Looks good now!

Approved~
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KanaRin

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good now!

Approved~
Oh yeah>w<
Thank you>w<
eveless
i only see two mappers.
who copy happy30 and clare

anyway , congrats
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KanaRin

eveless wrote:

i only see two mappers.
who copy happy30 and clare

anyway , congrats
嘛 =w= 別說copy嘛~~
學一下別人的風格都是好的(?)

Thank you>w<
kodomonoyume
:) congrats
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KanaRin

kodomonoyume wrote:

:) congrats
>w<thz!
-maJu
finally, congrats Kana~ :D
Kureno 59
Congrats :)
Shigure Asa fan
根本頗難
sospk0011
이 정도로 많이 어려우면 난 못 깨지
sospk0011
Yume is an Insane Difficulty.
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