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miau~
I think you don't Lead-in in this map ^^
Don't abuse of kiai fountains, this willl make your map unrankable T.T try to use no more that 2 fountains per kiai time
You have two .osb files in your folder, delete the one you're not using ^^
Hard
00:11:279 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing (look at time-line) 2 must be near to 3
00:19:319 (1,2,3) - looks kinda ugly in-game D: i'm not saying to change, just try to fix it ><
00:20:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:599 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:279 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
00:41:159 (4,1) - 4 new combo, 1 remove new combo
00:51:959 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
I wont point more new combos >< just try to keep the same pattern for new combo in all the map, following the rhythm of the song ^^
01:28:439 (6) - stack under previous 4 to keep spacing consistent
01:30:119 (6) - hard to see under the hits-explosions
Normal
set preview point
decrease HP drain 2 ticks
same thing as hard about new combo pattern ^^
Lovely map~ ~(**)~
Star!~
I think you don't Lead-in in this map ^^
Don't abuse of kiai fountains, this willl make your map unrankable T.T try to use no more that 2 fountains per kiai time
You have two .osb files in your folder, delete the one you're not using ^^
Hard
00:11:279 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing (look at time-line) 2 must be near to 3
00:19:319 (1,2,3) - looks kinda ugly in-game D: i'm not saying to change, just try to fix it ><
00:20:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:599 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:279 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
00:41:159 (4,1) - 4 new combo, 1 remove new combo
00:51:959 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
I wont point more new combos >< just try to keep the same pattern for new combo in all the map, following the rhythm of the song ^^
01:28:439 (6) - stack under previous 4 to keep spacing consistent
01:30:119 (6) - hard to see under the hits-explosions
Normal
set preview point
decrease HP drain 2 ticks
same thing as hard about new combo pattern ^^
Lovely map~ ~(**)~
Star!~
Lunah_old
General
OFFSET : 2.275
Audio Lead-in in Normal is 993 and in Hard is 493 (Open difficulties files (.osu) with bloc note or word pad, and make them equal manually [http://puu.sh/JT6] (Make this with editor closed)
Normal
-1 or 2 Approach rate
-1 Overall difficulty (?)
Set Preview Time
01:00:835 (3) - 1 Grid right (?)
Hard
1- Approach rate (?)
00:03:959 (1) - move this under 00:03:599 (1) - and make 00:03:959 (1,2,3,4,5) like 00:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://puu.sh/JTb)
00:17:399 (3) - Am i wrong or this beat is unsnapped on the grid ? btw 1 grid down
01:14:519 (5,6) - Did you made this spacing on purpose?
02:11:879 (4) - Spacing, (2 grid to right)
Very Very nice, goodluck on ranking
OFFSET : 2.275
Audio Lead-in in Normal is 993 and in Hard is 493 (Open difficulties files (.osu) with bloc note or word pad, and make them equal manually [http://puu.sh/JT6] (Make this with editor closed)
Normal
-1 or 2 Approach rate
-1 Overall difficulty (?)
Set Preview Time
01:00:835 (3) - 1 Grid right (?)
Hard
1- Approach rate (?)
00:03:959 (1) - move this under 00:03:599 (1) - and make 00:03:959 (1,2,3,4,5) like 00:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://puu.sh/JTb)
00:17:399 (3) - Am i wrong or this beat is unsnapped on the grid ? btw 1 grid down
01:14:519 (5,6) - Did you made this spacing on purpose?
02:11:879 (4) - Spacing, (2 grid to right)
Very Very nice, goodluck on ranking
Topic Starter
Thanks Liss & Lunah ~
Fixed all <3
Fixed all <3
Lunah wrote:
General
OFFSET : 2.275
Audio Lead-in in Normal is 993 and in Hard is 493 (Open difficulties files (.osu) with bloc note or word pad, and make them equal manually [http://puu.sh/JT6] (Make this with editor closed) Fixed. Thanks!
Normal
-1 or 2 Approach rate Done.
-1 Overall difficulty (?) Done.
Set Preview Time Done.
01:00:835 (3) - 1 Grid right (?) No.
Hard
1- Approach rate (?) No.
00:03:959 (1) - move this under 00:03:599 (1) - and make 00:03:959 (1,2,3,4,5) like 00:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://puu.sh/JTb) No thanks.
00:17:399 (3) - Am i wrong or this beat is unsnapped on the grid ? btw 1 grid down Fixed.
01:14:519 (5,6) - Did you made this spacing on purpose? Yup~
02:11:879 (4) - Spacing, (2 grid to right) :D
Very Very nice, goodluck on ranking
Topic Starter
jiantz wrote:
no audio for this beatmap
please full submit
do it >.>Kiiwa wrote:
jiantz wrote:
no audio for this beatmap
please full submit
Topic Starter
K.
I need to re-do the last mods
bakaliz you must have messed up my maps
I need to re-do the last mods
bakaliz you must have messed up my maps
oh really? D: Just wait, I have the diffs here.
sorry about that<3
Download: Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (toejamms) [Hard].osu
Download: Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (toejamms) [Normal].osu
sorry about that<3
Download: Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (toejamms) [Hard].osu
Download: Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (toejamms) [Normal].osu
Offset: 2265
Hard
00:08:035 (6) - reverse arrow is invisible
EDIT: remember to re-snap all inherited timing section, by selecting all in timing set up panel, and put -15 (the offset change) here http://puu.sh/1zgf, then click move and ok
Hard
00:08:035 (6) - reverse arrow is invisible
EDIT: remember to re-snap all inherited timing section, by selecting all in timing set up panel, and put -15 (the offset change) here http://puu.sh/1zgf, then click move and ok
All good now ^^
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
-It would be nice if you could find a better background than the one you currently have(something that doesn't leave so much empty space on the screen and has a better 4:3 ratio)
-Another difficulty would be good for the overall spread (and I strongly recommend it) but if you are only going to have 2 difficulties you need to fully map them both..
-At the moment you are using kiai time too much, it is ok to have a fountain in the chorus if it fits but try and cut yours down some more
-Are you sure 'Maboss' is not meant to be spelt 'Maboos'? Everything on google says it is (Also you don't need the ( ) in the artist)
Normal:
-If you are keeping this as the easiest diffciulty do at least AR -1 (and probably HP Drain -1 too)
-Resnap all of your notes (check AIMod)
01:01:559 (1) - don't have kiai on any of the spinners like this, it doesn't fit well enough
01:17:159 (1) - try to avoid long repeating sliders on beginner difficulties
01:36:839 (4,1,2) - I would move stuff like this down so it doesn't go through the HP bar
02:03:239 (1) - same slider comment as before
Hard:
00:09:225 (3,4) - stack these correctly?
00:32:505 (2,3,4) - odd spacing
01:01:545 - again don't have kiai at places like this
The maps aren't too bad but I suggest you get a few more mods before calling me back for a rebubble~
-Another difficulty would be good for the overall spread (and I strongly recommend it) but if you are only going to have 2 difficulties you need to fully map them both..
-At the moment you are using kiai time too much, it is ok to have a fountain in the chorus if it fits but try and cut yours down some more
-Are you sure 'Maboss' is not meant to be spelt 'Maboos'? Everything on google says it is (Also you don't need the ( ) in the artist)
Normal:
-If you are keeping this as the easiest diffciulty do at least AR -1 (and probably HP Drain -1 too)
-Resnap all of your notes (check AIMod)
01:01:559 (1) - don't have kiai on any of the spinners like this, it doesn't fit well enough
01:17:159 (1) - try to avoid long repeating sliders on beginner difficulties
01:36:839 (4,1,2) - I would move stuff like this down so it doesn't go through the HP bar
02:03:239 (1) - same slider comment as before
Hard:
00:09:225 (3,4) - stack these correctly?
00:32:505 (2,3,4) - odd spacing
01:01:545 - again don't have kiai at places like this
The maps aren't too bad but I suggest you get a few more mods before calling me back for a rebubble~
Topic Starter
Thank you.
Re-mapped Normal diff, it now finishes at the same point as Hard.
Added an Easy.
Moved back to Pending lol
Re-mapped Normal diff, it now finishes at the same point as Hard.
Added an Easy.
Moved back to Pending lol
good map o.o
moe Kiiwa!
moe Kiiwa!
~
[General]
-Try this BG
-Delete this Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (Kiiwa).osb and full submit
-Set again preview time in Hard, or do it again in all diff. (can be fixed opening Han Una ft. Maboos - Mannequin (Kiiwa) [Hard].osu directly).
-Is really necessary cut kiai here 00:29:145? try to keep it and finish it here 00:32:985 (on your fountain). Same here 01:15:225, here 02:01:305 and here 02:47:385.
[Easy]
-00:14:745 (1) - finish
-00:20:505 (2) - finish at end
-00:22:425 (1) - clap at end
-00:25:305 (1) - finish at start
-00:40:185 clap
-00:46:425 (1) - change this for a slider more short, with two repetition and finish in each one.
-01:17:145 (1) - -^
-01:01:785 (1) - improve the shape of this with grid level 4
-01:06:585 (3) - finish at end
-01:22:425 clap
-01:25:785 clap
-01:56:985 clap
-01:57:465 finish
-02:04:665 clap
-If you are not going to map after 02:05:145, delete timing points
Nice hard o/
[General]
-Try this BG
-Delete this Han Una (ft. Maboss) - Mannequin (Kiiwa).osb and full submit
-Set again preview time in Hard, or do it again in all diff. (can be fixed opening Han Una ft. Maboos - Mannequin (Kiiwa) [Hard].osu directly).
-Is really necessary cut kiai here 00:29:145? try to keep it and finish it here 00:32:985 (on your fountain). Same here 01:15:225, here 02:01:305 and here 02:47:385.
[Easy]
-00:14:745 (1) - finish
-00:20:505 (2) - finish at end
-00:22:425 (1) - clap at end
-00:25:305 (1) - finish at start
-00:40:185 clap
-00:46:425 (1) - change this for a slider more short, with two repetition and finish in each one.
-01:17:145 (1) - -^
-01:01:785 (1) - improve the shape of this with grid level 4
-01:06:585 (3) - finish at end
-01:22:425 clap
-01:25:785 clap
-01:56:985 clap
-01:57:465 finish
-02:04:665 clap
-If you are not going to map after 02:05:145, delete timing points
Nice hard o/
Timing sounds good to me
i prefer +7ms
i prefer +7ms
Hey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Easy
I hope that helped you~
Starred~
Kenezz's Bakamod
Easy
- 00:14:750 (1) - Add Finish?
- 00:17:629 (x)- Align up this Inherited Timing Section.. uhm many inherited timing section no are align up correctly, check them one per one~
- 00:30:110 (1) - Finish at the end?
- 00:33:950 (1) - Whistle?
- 00:36:830 (3) - ^
- 00:37:790 (1) - ^ at the end~
- 00:39:710 (2) - ^ ^
- Same suggestion about the Inherited Timing Section~
- 00:25:310 (1) - Add Finish at the start?
- 01:00:590 (x) - Delete this Rhythmical Break~
- 01:46:670 (x) - Sames as above, is unnecesary >_>
- 02:33:710 (x) - ^
- Same sugestion about the inherited blablabla sections xD!
- 00:31:070 (1,3,5,2) - Add Finish? same as normal...
- 01:01:790 (3,4,5,6) - ^ at the start of the sliders~
- 01:17:150 (2,4,6,8) - ^
- 01:47:630 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- 02:03:230 (1,3,5,7) - ^
- 02:08:750 (1) - Finish at the end~
- 02:12:830 (3) - ^
- 02:16:670 (5) - ^
- 02:33:950 (1,3,5) - Same as 00:31:070 (1,3,5,2) xD!
- 02:39:470 (1) - Finish at the end~
- 02:47:390 (6) - Finish?
- 02:49:310 (2,4,6,8) - ^
I hope that helped you~
Starred~
Topic Starter
Thanks~
Fixed all.
Somehow all my Finishes disappeared~:o
Fixed all.
Somehow all my Finishes disappeared~:o
Sorry for the delay, as requested by Lissette/Lizbeth (sorry, forgot who exactly was >_>') here's my mod post:
General:
Your audio lead-in in Hard is not the same as your other difficulties. You should fix this cause some MATS/BATS are too picky with this, and they may end up popping your bubble because of this ;D
The same goes for your third combo colour in Hard, it's not the same as your other difficulties.
It would have been nice that your bg had a 4:3 ratio, like the one Astom provided you. Anyways, if you did change, then you have to do a full submit, cause the server still has the 1000x500 bg.
And it would also have been nice too if all 3 difficulties had the same break periods, and ends at the same spot too... But it's your decision.
Also there's a little bit too much overuse of kiai imo, you should really try to reduce it.
Hard:
00:40:190 (1) - Move away from the next little stream, this is easily confused with a continuous stream.
02:20:270 (3) - Move closer to 02:20:030 (2) -
Normal:
01:56:990 (5) - Reverse arrow hidden by a combo burst, so move any of the two things away.
General:
Your audio lead-in in Hard is not the same as your other difficulties. You should fix this cause some MATS/BATS are too picky with this, and they may end up popping your bubble because of this ;D
The same goes for your third combo colour in Hard, it's not the same as your other difficulties.
It would have been nice that your bg had a 4:3 ratio, like the one Astom provided you. Anyways, if you did change, then you have to do a full submit, cause the server still has the 1000x500 bg.
And it would also have been nice too if all 3 difficulties had the same break periods, and ends at the same spot too... But it's your decision.
Also there's a little bit too much overuse of kiai imo, you should really try to reduce it.
Hard:
00:40:190 (1) - Move away from the next little stream, this is easily confused with a continuous stream.
02:20:270 (3) - Move closer to 02:20:030 (2) -
Normal:
01:56:990 (5) - Reverse arrow hidden by a combo burst, so move any of the two things away.
Hi moe kiiwa~~<3 :*
Hard
00:40:190 (1) - I suggest to remove new combo here and add it at 00:41:150, and remove here 00:41:390
00:41:150 - and you could arrenge this circle to be part of the circular pattern there
02:20:030 (2) - replace by single circle~?
Normal
00:44:750 (1) - remove circle~?
01:51:710 (3) - replace by a single circle, I think fits better
btw.. why not use BG Astom gave you?
Liz out~~<3
Hard
00:40:190 (1) - I suggest to remove new combo here and add it at 00:41:150, and remove here 00:41:390
00:41:150 - and you could arrenge this circle to be part of the circular pattern there
02:20:030 (2) - replace by single circle~?
Normal
00:44:750 (1) - remove circle~?
01:51:710 (3) - replace by a single circle, I think fits better
btw.. why not use BG Astom gave you?
Liz out~~<3
quick irc modding, and here you go~<3
Bubbled~
good luck =D
Bubbled~
good luck =D
huh... one thing...
[Hard]:
•01:18:110 (6) - Add new combo, and then 01:18:830 (1) - Remove this new combo, I think these two notes with NC is unnecessary :/
•02:50:270 (6) - The same as the first point.
PS:This is just a suggestion, so... You can ignore this if you want to
[Hard]:
•01:18:110 (6) - Add new combo, and then 01:18:830 (1) - Remove this new combo, I think these two notes with NC is unnecessary :/
•02:50:270 (6) - The same as the first point.
PS:This is just a suggestion, so... You can ignore this if you want to
After having a look through, it looks like a fairly solid map. the spread is a little off, but the Hard feels like a hard, normal feels like a normal (abeit a bit harder), and easy feels like an easy (and is a bit boring to be honest), but for a first map it's quite nice.
Nothing really bothered me too much, but a couple of little things:
1. the tickrate for Hard is 0.5, while the tickrate for the other difficulties are 1. perhaps you could change the tickrate for that to 1 as well? It would work better I think
2. Also on hard, lower the AR by one notch? (to AR7. I think that works better but it's your call)
That's about it. There are no tags but as far as I can think there isn't really anything too worthwhile putting in there, unless you have some ideas. If you do anything with these, gimme a call and I'll rank!
Nothing really bothered me too much, but a couple of little things:
1. the tickrate for Hard is 0.5, while the tickrate for the other difficulties are 1. perhaps you could change the tickrate for that to 1 as well? It would work better I think
2. Also on hard, lower the AR by one notch? (to AR7. I think that works better but it's your call)
That's about it. There are no tags but as far as I can think there isn't really anything too worthwhile putting in there, unless you have some ideas. If you do anything with these, gimme a call and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Both changed, thanks!Doomsday wrote:
After having a look through, it looks like a fairly solid map. the spread is a little off, but the Hard feels like a hard, normal feels like a normal (abeit a bit harder), and easy feels like an easy (and is a bit boring to be honest), but for a first map it's quite nice.
Nothing really bothered me too much, but a couple of little things:
1. the tickrate for Hard is 0.5, while the tickrate for the other difficulties are 1. perhaps you could change the tickrate for that to 1 as well? It would work better I think
2. Also on hard, lower the AR by one notch? (to AR7. I think that works better but it's your call)
That's about it. There are no tags but as far as I can think there isn't really anything too worthwhile putting in there, unless you have some ideas. If you do anything with these, gimme a call and I'll rank!
Righty'o. Ranked!
Congratz Kiiwa ~
Ahooy~~
Tooooooo Shoooooooort~~~~~~~~~~~
Ahooy~~
Tooooooo Shoooooooort~~~~~~~~~~~
Congratz kiiwa-chi =D
ilu<3
ilu<3
EDITED~Kenezz wrote:
Congratz Kiiwa ~
Ahooy~~
Tooooooo Shoooooooort~~~~~~~~~~~
Anyway, congratz Bakawa!!
gratz on the rank broAwsum map 