Well, wow, I'm pretty surprised, how lucky I am! Last GD Request I sent was refused, so you've chosen the perfect moment for asking me about it!
Just let me know when you finish working on a GD, cause you're up in this mapset from now!
And good luck

Cheesecake wrote:

I'll accept your M4M, since I actually quite like this. Maybe I could do an Easy GD? Shouldn't take long

Will edit this tomorrow with my mod since I'm pretty worn out from lots of modding / applying modding

Ok hi I'm a bit late sorry No problem man!

[General]

Change offset to 431 Changed to 430, so thanks for pointing it out
You shouldn't use white as a combo colour It's not white! It's grey

[Normal]

00:00:072 (1,1,1) - I'd just map these normally rather than have big sliders that don't look nice Okay, done
00:50:012 (3,6) - Overlapping only circle borders isn't great Okay, done
01:00:071 (6,1) - Fix this blanket Okay, done
01:02:227 (4,5,6) - So many overlaps in one small space looks cramped Nope, i think it's okay. But if others pay an attention too, I'll change that.
01:06:539 (1,2,3) - Bad flow Will consider it
01:30:251 (2,5) - Bad overlap Okay, done
01:32:946 (2,3,5,6) - There's nothing going on in the gaps between each pair so it's strange having that awkward cursor movement between the two when they're still kinda close together. Nope, it's okay
01:46:419 (6,1,3) - Ugly imo Okay, done
01:50:371 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't look great Nope, it's okay
02:20:551 (5) - Change to the two slider pairs you've done everywhere else, when you have something repeating twice it just never plays well for me Okay, done
02:29:892 (1) - Change to a hitcircle directly on the center, spinner's shouldn't really be used for outro's unless there's a long sustained note that it's mapped to, which there isn't here. And even though you should remove this, you wouldn't want it to end on the blue tick Okay, done

[Hard]

00:03:305 (2) - Same as Normal Okay, done
00:09:054 (1) - Put this underneath the end of 00:06:180 (2) - Okay, done
00:52:527 (2,3) - No need for this spacing increase Okay, done
01:48:934 (8,9,1) - Remove these small overlaps Okay, done
02:10:850 (4,7) - Ew I know, I know. Okay, fixed

Thank you! Such a nice to see a proffesional mod!

Aaaand here's the diff http://puu.sh/mFwtT/d51e78f660.osu

It's a little bit too hard to be an Easy, but it's below 2 stars and is mapped like an Easy so it fits the spread

Cheesecake, you are the best ^^

Small little update http://puu.sh/mMSu1/997551df3f.osu

Thanks, gonna update it in a moment!

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

1. 00:57:915 - 01:20:909 - Imo you can put another kiai here.

[Cheesecake's Easy]

1. I strongly not recommend you to put stacks in Easy.
2. 00:09:052 (1,1) - In Easy you have to leave an empty space at least 4 white ticks after the spinner as a recovery time, what you have right now is pretty much unrankable.
3. 00:23:424 (1) - Tbh I think a whistle sounds a lot better. Same applies to 01:20:909 (1) .
4. 01:19:471 (7,8) - Looks ugly imo.
5. 01:49:651 (1,3) - This kind of stack might look good but not this time, especially with a lower approach rate. There are a few more of this so I won't spam them.
6. In non-kiai parts with vocal you could have just follow the instruments, sound much better imo. Also you emphasized on blankets and symmetry so much that they ruins the flow sometimes.

[Normal]

1. 01:47:315 (2,3) - DS
2. AR6 pls. What you have now makes the objects kinda messy on the screen.
3. 00:34:921 - You could just map sth starting from here and start the spinner at 00:37:795 instead.
4. 00:53:243 (2) - Just curious but what you're trying to follow here? Imo the piano sound isn't that audible.
5. 01:07:795 - If you're trying to capture vocals completely then this beat shouldn't be skipped.
6. 02:09:771 (1) - This slider feels so random lol, 2 1/2 sliders instead of this fit better imo.
7. Overall I think the placements could have been polished a lot more.

I skimmed Hard a bit, tbh I think hard looks much better compared to Normal, good luck~

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~
[Cheesecake's Easy]

1. I strongly not recommend you to put stacks in Easy. Juggled some objects around, it's not perfect 1.0x spacing but I mean with these time gaps it's impossible to have something good at that spacing
2. 00:09:052 (1,1) - In Easy you have to leave an empty space at least 4 white ticks after the spinner as a recovery time, what you have right now is pretty much unrankable. Shortened the spinner and added a hit circle
3. 00:23:424 (1) - Tbh I think a whistle sounds a lot better. Same applies to 01:20:909 (1) . Done
4. 01:19:471 (7,8) - Looks ugly imo. Rip flow
5. 01:49:651 (1,3) - This kind of stack might look good but not this time, especially with a lower approach rate. There are a few more of this so I won't spam them. I'll wait on more opinions, but I raised the AR by 1 since this is technically a light Normal (?)
6. In non-kiai parts with vocal you could have just follow the instruments, sound much better imo. But I'm following the piano Also you emphasized on blankets and symmetry so much that they ruins the flow sometimes. The only thing that didn't flow according to my little internal rules were this 01:37:435 (6) - which I changed

I skimmed Hard a bit, tbh I think hard looks much better compared to Normal, good luck~

Thanks

http://puu.sh/mWadR/2e24807d45.osu

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

1. 00:57:915 - 01:20:909 - Imo you can put another kiai here. Hmm, not sure if I can do that, because as I remember, according to AiMod there could be too much kiai time then.

[Normal]

1. 01:47:315 (2,3) - DS Lel, thanks
2. AR6 pls. What you have now makes the objects kinda messy on the screen. Done
3. 00:34:921 - You could just map sth starting from here and start the spinner at 00:37:795 instead. Hmm, nope
4. 00:53:243 (2) - Just curious but what you're trying to follow here? Imo the piano sound isn't that audible. Changed a little bit
5. 01:07:795 - If you're trying to capture vocals completely then this beat shouldn't be skipped. Will consider it, but for now, nope
6. 02:09:771 (1) - This slider feels so random lol, 2 1/2 sliders instead of this fit better imo. Gonna do that, you're right
7. Overall I think the placements could have been polished a lot more.

I skimmed Hard a bit, tbh I think hard looks much better compared to Normal, good luck~

Thanks then for a mod!
Updated

i am a kind and caring soul and i like english music. so i'll ignore the fact that you missed the deadline o3o.

queue

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[Timing]

BPM really should be 83.50... Change and just multiply the slider velocity by 2.

[cheesecake's Easy]

00:11:208 (1,1) - These really should be further apart. Either stack them or maybe put the first (1) on top of the other (1) and then ctrl+h ctrl+j?

Hitsounding note: the drum sounds should go only on the every 3rd beat. Trust me it'll sound much better. This is only the section before 00:40:669.

01:00:789 (5) - NC
01:12:286 (5) - ^
01:46:777 (5) - ^
01:47:855 (6) - flow from (5) is weird; you should move this down
01:52:525 (5) - new combo
01:58:274 (5) - ^
02:04:022 (5) - ^
02:09:771 (6) - ^
02:15:519 (5) - ^
02:21:268 (6) - ^
02:27:016 (5) - ^

Most of the patterning is polished but there are a few questionable ones. Hopefully they'll be sorted with further modding.

[Normal]

00:06:717 (2,3) - (3) should have the whistle, not (2).
00:57:555 (7) - new combo
00:57:914 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:447 (6,7) - Make (7) blanket the start of (6)
02:01:147 (1,2,3) - (2) flows awkwardly; it should be moved to the left.

[Hard]

00:07:256 (3) - Add whistle to the end?
01:51:268 (4) - Make this face the other direction? (like ctrl+h)
02:09:771 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between (1) and (2) isn't consistent.

---

I actually really like this song. Quite clean mapset too.

If you want an Insane difficulty just forum PM me.

GL,

-SMIC

Wow, thanks! Gonna reply to it tomorrow/today (depends on the timezone)

Hi from my queue


Cool mapset! Good luck on ranking this!

SuperMICrophone wrote:

i am a kind and caring soul and i like english music. so i'll ignore the fact that you missed the deadline o3o.

queue

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[Timing]

BPM really should be 83.50... Change and just multiply the slider velocity by 2. Sorry, I don't see a reason to change that. But if there's a reason, I'll change that for sure.

[Normal]

00:06:717 (2,3) - (3) should have the whistle, not (2). It sounds better, thanks
00:57:555 (7) - new combo Thx for pointg out a NC, I added it at 00:55:040 (1) .
00:57:914 (1) - remove new combo ^
01:51:447 (6,7) - Make (7) blanket the start of (6) Looks much better, fixed
02:01:147 (1,2,3) - (2) flows awkwardly; it should be moved to the left. I wanna a blanket there, but I touched up it a little bit.

[Hard]

00:07:256 (3) - Add whistle to the end? Added
01:51:268 (4) - Make this face the other direction? (like ctrl+h) Good idea bruh
02:09:771 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between (1) and (2) isn't consistent. Changed the whole pattern

---

I actually really like this song. Quite clean mapset too.

If you want an Insane difficulty just forum PM me.

GL,

-SMIC

Thank you for your mod and support! It's really heplful

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue

General

1. There are no tags. Put some and also add 'cheesecake' on your tags. Tags added
2. Just like the previous mod, the bpm really should be 83.50 Oh, so it really needs to be changed. However I tried to change it but I can't deal with multiplying slider velocity, so maybe some help? ;-;
3. 00:57:915 - 01:20:909 - Kiai here. I want dem star fountains on the chorus lol I want dem too, kiai added
4. How about you end the kiai here 02:06:178 - then start the kiai again here 02:06:897 - More star fountains~ Good idea, did as you said
5. Lower Normal and Hard diff's tick rate to 1 Well I'm not sure, tbh I feel the notes on these ticks so for now nope

Normal

1. 00:05:998 - Add circle here and convert 00:06:177 (1,2,3) - to a repeat slider Changed it to follow better the beat and made a flow easier.
2. 00:08:334 - Circle here Nice idea, added
3. 00:14:800 (1) - ctrl+j this It looks much better, changed
4. 00:21:986 (4) - Change this to a 1/2 beat repeat slider. Also make this pattern 00:21:986 (4,5,6) - go down instead to avoid overlap with 00:21:267 (3) Fixed partly in my own way
5. 00:49:830 (2,4) - Please fix this stack Maybe I'm blind, it is fixed? Anyway I fixed it again
6. 01:02:226 (4,5,6) - The overlaps doesn't look very good. It might be confusing as a pattern too. Try to change this pattern Ok ok. Changed
7. 01:02:944 (6,1) - Blanket's off What?
8. 01:07:974 (4,6) - Fix stack Mhm again, but fixed
9. 01:17:674 (5) - Don't block off this circle What do you mean?
10. 01:18:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - All those stacks. It can be very confusing. I suggest you rework this pattern Ok will think about it
11. 01:26:656 (3) - NC maybe? Of course
12. 01:32:405 (1,3) - Fix stack Mhm mhm
13. 01:34:022 (5,1) - This might be confusing considering it's overlapping with half of the slider Sorry I like it, it's for variety. If someone complains it too will change it then
14. 01:43:903 (1,3,4,5) - Fix these stacks I really don't see any problems with them but ok
15. 01:47:854 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
16. 02:20:549 (5,6) - Do like this instead? Ok

Hard

1. 00:04:382 (3) - Move this left a little Curved a slider a little less so the flow is better now
2. 00:44:801 (5) - Too simplified. This should be a whole beat slider with a circle on the white tick after it Changed as you suggested
3. 00:47:675 (4) - ^ I won't change it here cause imo it's good as it is
4. 00:49:292 (1) - ^ ^
5. 01:02:406 (4,5,6) - Change this to circle first then the two sliders Ok changed and fixed
6. 01:14:442 (8,9) - Suggest you blanket this Um, for more variety, nope
7. 01:59:352 (4,5,6) - This pattern is too hard to read for this diff You're right, fixed
8. 02:25:939 (6,7) - Too close Fixed

Cool mapset! Good luck on ranking this!

Thanks! Although I'm not sure about few of your advices the rest was helpful

SuperMICrophone wrote:

[cheesecake's Easy]

00:11:208 (1,1) - These really should be further apart. Either stack them or maybe put the first (1) on top of the other (1) and then ctrl+h ctrl+j? I just stacked it onto the tail of (2)

Hitsounding note: the drum sounds should go only on the every 3rd beat. Trust me it'll sound much better. This is only the section before 00:40:669. Done that I belieeeve

01:00:789 (5) - NC I prefer not to use so many NC's in easy/normal difficulties. I feel like the NC patterns are fine as is
01:12:286 (5) - ^
01:46:777 (5) - ^
01:47:855 (6) - flow from (5) is weird; you should move this down Done and also rotated the slider a bit to conserve 1.0x distance snap
01:52:525 (5) - new combo
01:58:274 (5) - ^
02:04:022 (5) - ^
02:09:771 (6) - ^
02:15:519 (5) - ^
02:21:268 (6) - ^
02:27:016 (5) - ^

Cagrux wrote:

Cheesecake's Easy

1. 00:16:238 (4,1) - Try to avoid doing stacks in Easy. Beginners can really easily get confused Should rename this to Normal and the real Normal to Advanced xd
2. 00:42:465 - Circle here? Or change (2) to a sliders that starts at where it is right now and ends at 00:42:465 - Applies on the following parts too: 00:45:340 -
   00:48:214 - 00:51:088 - 01:31:328 - 01:34:202 - 01:37:076 - Following the piano here while that would be following the drums and I don't want to map to two instruments at the same time on Easy uh I mean Normal
3. 01:49:651 (1,3) - Delete this stack and instead make (3) blanket (1)'s head Yeah that works
4. 01:59:352 (6,7,8) - Change this placement. Put (7) somewhere up and make it curve to the left instead (optional)
5. 02:01:148 (1,3) - The same stack thing a
6. 02:06:897 (1,4) - ^ This one's fine I feel
7. 02:16:956 (7,1) - ^ ^

Thank you both

http://puu.sh/n1LlK/8f1189dca7.osu

hi~! from my modding queue, sorry if the mod isn't that good, if you are not satisfied with it i'll mod some other map of yours, just so that i'm not in debt for m4m

legend: Blue - my own preference, up to you, Red - a mistake or something that i really don't understand




this mapset is really great! don't know why you wanted a mod so much, but i did my best, sorry if it's not good enough.

AlneCraft wrote:

hi~! from my modding queue, sorry if the mod isn't that good, if you are not satisfied with it i'll mod some other map of yours, just so that i'm not in debt for m4m

legend: Blue - my own preference, up to you, Red - a mistake or something that i really don't understand

Normal

1. the 2 slider tick rate is really weird, although the slider tick sound is really silent so it's not much of an issue Ok just needed it to be sure about that. Gonna change it

Hard

1. the 2 slider tick rate, the same as in Normal ^
2. 00:46:058(9) or any 1/4 tick repeating sliders that are followed by a regular slider could be switched with streams, so that it feels more dynamic. but don't change all of them! just some of them. Gonna think about it

this mapset is really great! don't know why you wanted a mod so much, but i did my best, sorry if it's not good enough.

Thank you! Don't worry, you were heplful anyway Gonna mod your mapset as soon as possible

yo

[General]
There's tag inconsistency.

[Easy]
Check AiMod.
00:09:052 (1,1) - between a spinner and an object should be 3/1 in easy, otherwise it's unrankable. I think it's better map this part.
01:05:100 (3,4) - make those two parallel.
02:09:771 (6) - NC.
02:21:268 (6) - same.

[Normal]
00:09:052 (1) - in normal should be 2/1, so make it shorter or delete.
01:47:315 (2,3) - make them parallel and don't stack (3).

[Hard]
Normalize your spacing.
00:14:082 (7,8) - 1.8x here, 00:21:987 (6,7) - 2x here but 01:02:585 (5,6) - 2.3x here.
01:11:568 (6,7) - between these two set 1.8x becuse of 01:11:208 (5,6) - those two spacing.
Else seem fine, just fix spacing.

good luck~

Namki wrote:

[Easy]
Check AiMod. Done
00:09:052 (1,1) - between a spinner and an object should be 3/1 in easy, otherwise it's unrankable. I think it's better map this part. I'll just remove the hitcircle
01:05:100 (3,4) - make those two parallel. Would break visual spacing
02:09:771 (6) - NC. Sure
02:21:268 (6) - same.

Thanks

http://puu.sh/n31uT/c35ca8947a.osu

Thanks all! Updated. Gonna reply to my diffs tomorrow

Can't mod perfect nice song

GL HF for the rank

Namki wrote:

yo

[General]
There's tag inconsistency. Now inconsistency's gone I think

[Normal]
00:09:052 (1) - in normal should be 2/1, so make it shorter or delete. Don't really understand what do you mean by 2/1 . I think it's okay as it is, unless someone else point it too.
01:47:315 (2,3) - make them parallel and don't stack (3). Fixed

[Hard]
Normalize your spacing. Hope so it's okay now
00:14:082 (7,8) - 1.8x here, 00:21:987 (6,7) - 2x here but 01:02:585 (5,6) - 2.3x here. Done
01:11:568 (6,7) - between these two set 1.8x becuse of 01:11:208 (5,6) - those two spacing. Done
Else seem fine, just fix spacing.

good luck~

PulseOfSk8 wrote:

In-Game

[Hard]
100:18:394 (3,4,5) - Taka mała pierdoła, dla polepszenia designu zostawiłbym (4) i (5) takie jak (3), zaokrąglone będą raczej wygladać lepiej, design powinien nieco zyskać Akurat te chciałbym zostawić w spokoju
00:22:705 (8) - 1. x:160 y:280 2. Ctrl + Shift + R, rotate by: Selection Centre i 25 stopni dla usprawienia blanketu Tutaj koszyczek mi z deczka nie pasuje, ale trochę dopieściłem ten pattern
00:46:957 (2) - x:432 y:44 Ok, koszyczek tutaj to gut idea
00:47:316 (3) - x: 296 y: 188 Również dopasowałem
00:47:675 (4) - x: 156 y: 140 dla usprawnienia blanketu, potem wyrównaj DS do (5) Też zmieniłem, ale blanketa tutaj nie wsadzę
01:03:304 (7) - Mógłbyś bardziej to "przytulić" do (6), mocniej zaokrąglić żeby blanket się ładnie dopasował Mhm pomyślę nad tym, ale wolę tutaj koszyczka nie przytulać, jakoś tak mi bardziej pasuje
01:13:005 (3,4) - Mógłbyś poprawić pattern, nie podaję tu dokładnych współrzędnych, bo potem i tak trzeba poprawić dalsze obiekty, po prostu brzydki pattern :V Poprawione, dzięks!
01:49:292 (9,1) - Tu słabo z designem, też bym coś tu pomyślał więcej Nad tym też pomyślę, na razie nic innego mi do głowy nie przychodzi
02:09:771 (1) - Na upratego ujdzie, ale nie jest specjalnie ładny Zmieniłem trochę, ale chyba go jeszcze poprawię

~Nie zabrałem się za Easy ani Normala, bo nadal nie potrafię ich robić i modować

greenwood0301 wrote:

Can't mod perfect nice song

GL HF for the rank

Wow thanks Luck will be useful obviously ^^

M4M from my queue
[Cheesecake's Normal]

1. 00:00:070 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't really know about this recycling here.. little variation please
2. 00:48:573 (3,4) - Can be blaneketed better
3. 01:20:190 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:28:813 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:18:034 (5,6) - Lower a bit for a flow
6. 01:59:352 (6) - x:272 for flow
7. 02:02:585 (3,4) - I'd overlap better or avoid
8. 02:05:459 (7) - y:334 and 6 better between 2 sliders?

[Advanced]

1. Different kiai times than in Normal
2. 00:04:381 (2,3) - I'd not overlap
3. 00:06:717 (1) - y:120?
4. 00:20:549 (1,2) - copypaste?
5. 00:51:806 (7,1) - Not a pretty overlap/slider adaptation, improve it
6. 02:02:226 (4) - Good idea to make slider like bird's wings on the vocal fly! (If it was intentional )
7. 02:05:998 (6) - Sliderend pointing a bit lower for flow
8. 02:29:891 (1) - It's a bit lame to put last circle in the middle of the screen, Suggestion x:420 (blaze it) y:256 so it would be like captain america's shield

[Hard]

1. Same about kiai's
2. 00:02:944 (1) - y:308 and sliderend slightly lower, mirrors 2 then
3. 00:07:256 (3) - Bit lame imo
4. 00:16:597 (6) - x:308 y:180, reason slight difference in distance spacing in this triangle
5. 01:48:573 (6) - x:144 y:356 ^
6. 02:18:933 (2) - x:400 y:128^
7. 00:47:675 (4,5) - I'd make 4 point more to 5
8. 01:27:735 (6) - NC (over 10 combo ugly in Hard diff map)
9. 01:45:699 (8) - ^
10. 02:09:771 (1,2) - Pretty big distance spacing here o.o
11. 02:14:801 (7,8) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:03:304 (3,4) - Overlap
2. 00:13:364 (6) - I'd NC
3. 00:17:316 (9) - I'd NC this or 00:16:238 (5) - this (12 combo is ugly :/)
4. 00:19:112 (7) - NC
5. 00:21:447 (4) - y:216 (distance spacing)
6. You can place 00:24:412 timing point to 00:24:501 and it will have same effect, you do this a lot that you put timing points before notes
7. 00:30:250 (3) - Not so pretty
8. 00:36:358 (6) - NC
9. 00:39:591 (6) - NC
10. 00:42:825 (9,10) - NC other one or the other
11. Same for rest of streams, I won't point every one out, it's just that 13 combo etc is ugly specially in this kind of map and song (Over 10 combos are for stream songs imo, demetori etc)
12. 00:50:549 (5,7,8) - Make this triangle cleaner
13. 01:00:789 (1,3) - Overlap
14. Oh seems like this is Work in progress

That's all I got, hope this helps!

Lumin wrote:

M4M from my queue
[Cheesecake's Normal]

1. 00:00:070 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't really know about this recycling here.. little variation please Rotated and flipped a few things
2. 00:48:573 (3,4) - Can be blaneketed better Not really noticeable in-game
3. 01:20:190 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:28:813 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:18:034 (5,6) - Lower a bit for a flow Sure
6. 01:59:352 (6) - x:272 for flow Would break the blanket with 02:01:148 (1) - and mess up DS with 02:00:070 (7) -
7. 02:02:585 (3,4) - I'd overlap better or avoid That overlap is fine imo
8. 02:05:459 (7) - y:334 and 6 better between 2 sliders? Dont know why that was positioned like that lol

Thanks

http://puu.sh/n7uBB/c45344ee2e.osu

How about renaming Normal to Easy and Advanced to Normal, your rhythm choice on Normal seems more of a easy than a normal, and advanced has so low spacing for being a advanced.

Hmm, actually I changed them, but I'm not sure if that was as necessary as I thought then. So I'm gonna think about it again and check it with other modders. Thanks then!

m

[General]
Even though according to Oko, widescreen support being checked on or off with things without a storyboard literally does nothing, you might as well check it off lol
You could add League of Legends, LCK to tags, because this song plays after each match lol if you wanted proof

[Normal]
00:14:801 (3,4) - I don't like the current angle that you've put it at for 3, since there's a very sharp turn in movement required for players at the moment, not really making it flow very well, I don't feel like the beat 4 is on justifies the sharp movement you've put
00:43:543 (4,5,6) - This really feels like a lack of flow, since the movement to 5 already feels kinda clunky, the movement to 5 -> 6 doesn't feel smooth at all, maybe try something along the lines of the example, readjust accordingly
00:46:418 (1,2,3) - Again, it feels jagged, I feel like it could be a problem with the lack of rhythm density, despite it being a normal .3.
00:49:292 (4,5,6) - Maybe reposition 5 below 4 instead of to the right, to improve flow, and move 6 to a position where it'll flow as well
02:02:585 (3,4) - Overlap kinda looks gross, maybe just blanket instead? You seem to like them a lot lol
Overall, the diff kinda seems awkward, but not in a way you would expect. The rhythm density for the kiais are dense, which is kinda what you would expect, but at the end, the rhythm density is pretty dense compared to everything else that is non-kiai. I would suggest making sections like the start, and before the kiais a big denser, that way you can have less trouble making things flow, because for the times where the rhythm is dense, it flows quite nicely imo

[Advanced]
Tick rate of 2 might be an issue since there's some instances where there's no beats where the ticks are, making them useless, probably would suggest tick rate of 1 to avoid possible dq issues (there was a recent one for that one milk tea map so just to be safe)
00:01:507 (3,4,1) - Current angle of it is kinda awkward, try making 1 straight down or something? Adjust accordingly
00:19:830 (5,1,2) - Movement here is kinda not as you would expect, since you would expect that 1,2 would flow off of 5. The sharp movement kinda emphasizes the downbeat, but I think making it flow smoothly would work better
00:45:698 (4,1,2) - Maybe slight reposition like picture, the main point is to make 2 like the picture so there's clear flow from 2 -> 3
00:49:830 (2,3,4,5) - Very confusing, find an alternative
00:58:632 (3,4,5) - Movements here are pretty sharp, maybe reposition to make it flow smoother
01:02:226 (4,5,6) - Feels pretty cramped, maybe remove the 2nd anchor on 4 will make it feel less cramped, readjust visuals ofc
01:07:974 (4,5,6) - Confusing, try to find alternative
01:18:034 (1,2,3) - Kinda just looks messy, move 3 somewhere else
01:18:393 (2,4,5,6) - These will move when you move the above, it looks messy the way it is so try to make it feel cleaner
Points above can be applied to the map, try to make it feel cleaner as well as try to make things flow more

[Hard]
00:12:286 (1,2,3) - Either ds or make 2 a little closer to 1 or something, since 3 can be emphasized and this is a hard anyways, keeping it the way it currently is kinda just looks like ds got messed up
00:17:675 (1,2,3) - The positioning of 2 is pretty awkward since the flow off 1 is more toward 3

Kinda drained so I'll stop there orz

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:801 (3,4) - I don't like the current angle that you've put it at for 3, since there's a very sharp turn in movement required for players at the moment, not really making it flow very well, I don't feel like the beat 4 is on justifies the sharp movement you've put Curved a bit
00:43:543 (4,5,6) - This really feels like a lack of flow, since the movement to 5 already feels kinda clunky, the movement to 5 -> 6 doesn't feel smooth at all, maybe try something along the lines of the example, readjust accordingly I did the first part from (4) to (5), but I don't like your (5) to (6) so I kept mine

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00:46:418 (1,2,3) - Again, it feels jagged, I feel like it could be a problem with the lack of rhythm density, despite it being a normal .3. Fuck it just rename back to Easy
00:49:292 (4,5,6) - Maybe reposition 5 below 4 instead of to the right, to improve flow, and move 6 to a position where it'll flow as well Done
02:02:585 (3,4) - Overlap kinda looks gross, maybe just blanket instead? You seem to like them a lot lol Should have thought of that before tbh
Overall, the diff kinda seems awkward, but not in a way you would expect. The rhythm density for the kiais are dense, which is kinda what you would expect, but at the end, the rhythm density is pretty dense compared to everything else that is non-kiai. I would suggest making sections like the start, and before the kiais a big denser, that way you can have less trouble making things flow, because for the times where the rhythm is dense, it flows quite nicely imo Eh, no real way to make it denser while following what I'm following, although density should be according to the song and not kiai times. The part after the second time deserves that density and it would really be kiai time but I don't want to overuse it

Thanks

http://puu.sh/ndDv4/bf36f03083.osu

heyoo!

[General]
please check your red timing points! they must be consistent across all difficulties

[Cheesecake's Easy]
00:33:483 - why is the break like this? you should just make it a normal break
01:25:220 - ^
02:06:897 (1) - my only other comment with this diff is that from here to the end of the map you've used very high density rhythms in comparison to the way you used rhythms in kiai time. like from here to the end you haven't left a single 1/1 gap when in kiai times you did eg. 01:45:340 - 02:06:537 . i understand you can argue that it's just the way the song is played, but i can see opportunities where you can lower the density. like instead of having two sliders here 02:08:334 (4,5) - you could make 02:08:334 (4) - a 2/1 slider and then leave an empty note on 02:09:412 . so yah try reduce density here.

[Normal]
00:00:070 (1) - i feel the note on 00:00:430 - is so important and should be mapped. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qQ7mw/4028394dac.jpg instead
00:05:998 (3) - same story here. try rework this pattern to 00:06:178 - is clickable because its the downbeat of the music
00:48:213 (5,6) - i would ctrl g this rhythm. so the vocal on 00:48:573 - can be clicked
00:56:117 (2) - turn this into two circles on the 1/1 imo. this allows the downbeat on 00:56:477 - to be clicked
01:50:369 (3,4,5,6) - would prefer if you did something else here instead of so much 1/2 rhythm
01:58:274 - this beat is really important and you shouldn't have it on a slider's end. before hand you always have an object to click to represent this eg. 01:55:399 (1) - 01:52:525 (1)
02:09:052 (6,7,1,2,3) - again, it probably isn't good to have such a long 1/2 train

[Superhero]
00:07:256 (3) - you should position this further upwards to achieve circular flow. something like http://puu.sh/qQ8WB/ec8dbae468.jpg
00:18:753 (5,1,2) - it would be good to introduce an angle here, currently the player has to speed up their cursor while moving in the same direction which is very awkward. it's much more preferred to change direction and speed up
00:23:424 (1) - i dont think the nc here is necessary since you nced 00:23:962 (1) - already
00:30:250 (3) - tbh the slider's bend would look a lot nicer if you used a red slider point
00:36:178 (5) - perhaps you could remove this note. its a lot more preferred to map to the piano playing and this is mapped to vocals :v
00:39:052 (5) - same here. ctrl g this rhythm 00:38:873 (4,5)
01:10:489 (6) - i would avoid stacking here since stacking stops flow, yet the vocals are accented here so you want flow
01:43:543 (2) - nc this, like you did to 00:57:555 (1)
02:27:915 - 02:28:274 - why ignore these beats? i can here vocals on them

good luck!

Pentori wrote:

heyoo!

[General]
please check your red timing points! they must be consistent across all difficulties Kinda don't know what's wrong but gonna check that

[Normal]
00:00:070 (1) - i feel the note on 00:00:430 - is so important and should be mapped. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qQ7mw/4028394dac.jpg instead Okay!
00:05:998 (3) - same story here. try rework this pattern to 00:06:178 - is clickable because its the downbeat of the music Okay will remember about it
00:48:213 (5,6) - i would ctrl g this rhythm. so the vocal on 00:48:573 - can be clicked Sure
00:56:117 (2) - turn this into two circles on the 1/1 imo. this allows the downbeat on 00:56:477 - to be clicked Ok!
01:50:369 (3,4,5,6) - would prefer if you did something else here instead of so much 1/2 rhythm Ok... Something else sounds better
01:58:274 - this beat is really important and you shouldn't have it on a slider's end. before hand you always have an object to click to represent this eg. 01:55:399 (1) - 01:52:525 (1) Fixed
02:09:052 (6,7,1,2,3) - again, it probably isn't good to have such a long 1/2 train You are right, changed

[Superhero]
00:07:256 (3) - you should position this further upwards to achieve circular flow. something like http://puu.sh/qQ8WB/ec8dbae468.jpg wow that's much better thanks
00:18:753 (5,1,2) - it would be good to introduce an angle here, currently the player has to speed up their cursor while moving in the same direction which is very awkward. it's much more preferred to change direction and speed up Changed
00:23:424 (1) - i dont think the nc here is necessary since you nced 00:23:962 (1) - already Fixed
00:30:250 (3) - tbh the slider's bend would look a lot nicer if you used a red slider point Fixed
00:36:178 (5) - perhaps you could remove this note. its a lot more preferred to map to the piano playing and this is mapped to vocals :v Removed problematic note
00:39:052 (5) - same here. ctrl g this rhythm 00:38:873 (4,5) Changed
01:10:489 (6) - i would avoid stacking here since stacking stops flow, yet the vocals are accented here so you want flow Repatterned
01:43:543 (2) - nc this, like you did to 00:57:555 (1) Added
02:27:915 - 02:28:274 - why ignore these beats? i can here vocals on them That was intentional but actually you are right, fixed

good luck!

Thanks a lot!

Pentori wrote:

heyoo! Hi!

[General]
please check your red timing points! they must be consistent across all difficulties I'll let Loony handle this one :0

[Cheesecake's Easy]
00:33:483 - why is the break like this? you should just make it a normal break Lol, I had the exact same thing with another Easy GD. My diffs just like to break themselves :c
01:25:220 - ^
02:06:897 (1) - my only other comment with this diff is that from here to the end of the map you've used very high density rhythms in comparison to the way you used rhythms in kiai time. like from here to the end you haven't left a single 1/1 gap when in kiai times you did eg. 01:45:340 - 02:06:537 . i understand you can argue that it's just the way the song is played, but i can see opportunities where you can lower the density. like instead of having two sliders here 02:08:334 (4,5) - you could make 02:08:334 (4) - a 2/1 slider and then leave an empty note on 02:09:412 . so yah try reduce density here. Did it for every other combo just so that it's not too sparse

Thanks! This map is pretty old I need to touch it up a bit

yooo, NM from queue!

I wasn't sure if you meant the GD insane or Superheroes so i modded both o/

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good luck with the mapset guys! i love this song have my babies pls

Thank you! Gonna answer it as soon as I come home - I'm on the road atm
*Here lies nothing at all*

Firetruck wrote:

yooo, NM from queue!

I wasn't sure if you meant the GD insane or Superheroes so i modded both o/ Baka me, should have precisised which Insane

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Superhero

00:06:178 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved Of course, improved now
00:11:208 - Add clap here maybe? Why not
00:18:214 (3) - Blanket with 00:18:394 (4) - Good idea
00:19:831 (5) - Stack with 00:20:549 (1) - slider end Why haven't I noticed it? Thx
00:43:543 (1) - Maybe this could be placed at x:488 y:302 Nice pattern! Moved
01:14:801 - Should be a stream here In fact it should be, added
02:05:100 (1) - Random spinner usage lul, map this part pls I think I won't run from mapping this part, mapped!
02:23:783 - Should be a streamerino here Ok!

ok that's all c: Great diff as well, i like it! Wow thanks!

good luck with the mapset guys! i love this song have my babies pls

Thank you for the mod! Everything was more than helpful

EDIT: Lol rip edit option, let's assume there's no post above

god it's been almost 2 years since the release of No Sound Without Silence. from #modreqs tho
[General]

1. maybe add cut version to tags since it's not full. ho l y sh i t it's nt f ull
2. and also put the artist and song information in the descriptions? just sharing the initiative to let others be thankful too for the contributions of the artists to the music industry
3. not sure but maybe type the BPM and offset again in Normal diff and Superhero diff. it works for me so I guess that's how you should fix it. maybe there is some really minor decimal things that cause the problem. btw remember to resnap everything after you fix the timing issue
4. 00:34:921 (1) - doesn't seem fitting since the crescendo isn't strong enough to be emphasized with a spinner

[Easy]

• gonna be picky

1. 00:00:070 (1,2) - 00:02:944 (1,2) - might be really nitpicking but the circular flow is disrupted and doing a comparison, 00:05:819 (1,2) - would be so much better. and repeated patterns for these three parts is like meh too so idk
2. 00:08:334 (3) - a w k w a r d. consider to use the pattern as in Hard diff. and 00:09:052 (1) - a w kward zz consider to make it as a long spinner to show off your aesthetics + the spinning time is too short for the players + it doesn't have any (de)crescendos to represent + you could then emphasize the snare beat at 00:11:208 - instead of ignoring it due to the react time criteria.
3. 00:40:669 (1,2) - personally don't agree with second downbeat clicks and the reason is obvious. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966007 didn't think of this pattern before? if you want to do it then it will be like remapping half of the map so tbh just think wisely and follow your feelz train
4. 02:05:459 (7,1) - 02:05:459 (7,1) - 02:05:459 (7,1) - the flow- 02:05:459 (7,1) - 02:05:459 (7,1) - 02:05:459 (7,1) -

[Normal]

1. 00:46:237 (1,2) - swap nc + 01:58:633 (1) - remove nc
2. 02:27:016 (1) - same thing as of 00:34:920 (1) -
3. 00:22:705 (5) - 01:20:190 (6) - 02:05:998 (6) - providing clicks in starts and ends of music sections would make more sense since it could give players indications like accomplishing something really meaningful. like they actually activate them like ykno wh i mean rite
4. 01:15:160 (1,2) - just a suggestion to improve the flow though https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966130

[Hard]

1. 00:00:071 (1,2,3) - try to make some cursor movements in the editor to experience the flow though. would be better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966237
2. 00:02:945 (1,2,3) - distance between 00:02:945 (1,2) - should be relatively smaller than 00:03:304 (2,3) - to follow the distance-time concept
3. 00:10:131 (2) - 00:11:208 (1) - 00:22:705 (8) - 00:39:591 (1) - 01:03:304 (7) - 01:42:106 (4) - 02:17:855 (9) - 02:29:172 (7) - well again the issue is that slider reverses or other things but mostly reverses, may cover some possible clicks which could emphasize the indications of music section starts and ends. some would be better if the reverses are replaced with circles to provide the clicks and some need extra work to shorten the sliders. this could be really personal opinions but I hope you would make considerations if you understand my viewpoint
4. 01:20:190 (7,8) - err imo 01:20:190 (7) - should be a 1/2 instead of 3/4 to emphasize both pronunciation part /po-wer/ and also fix (8) if you agree
5. 01:26:657 (3) - nc stuffs
6. 02:03:843 - 02:12:465 - missed a circle + let 02:04:023 (1) - hide under the shadows of 02:02:226 (4) - is nt tragic love ;_;
7. 02:09:771 (1) - and it is like the only 3/2 slider in the whole kiai part + why not provide a click at 02:10:310 - to emphasize the guitar

[Insane]

1. 00:10:130 (1) - making 3/1 sliders followed by two circles would be so much better in the clicking sense
2. 00:18:753 (6,1,2) - minor aesthetic fixes by making the two sliders at the side more further apart from the middle slider
3. 00:43:543 (1) - remove finish + 01:37:795 (1) - unnecessary nc
4. 01:45:699 (1) - the flow would be so much better if it is horizontally flipped + 01:51:268 (5) - the flow would be so much better if it is flat

[Superhero]

• couldn't help much with highest diffs as always so gonna pick out some minor ones

1. 00:10:489 (2) -
2. 00:23:424 (9,1,2) - would be nice if you could apply the anti-jump pattern you used afterwards + swap ncs for 00:23:424 (9,1) -
3. 00:36:358 (1,2) - expected to be on the other side like adele
4. 00:39:950 (5,6) - the distance-time concept is rather poor. either stack them and apply interesting patterns afterwards or you could actually try out my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966445
5. 00:52:166 (1) - until before kiai are like random placements. maybe try to rearrange to give out a clearer message/emphasis
6. 01:20:370 (6,1) - flow stuffs https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966464 + 01:50:190 (3,4) - minor flow stuffs
7. 02:29:172 (5,6) - using 1/2 sliders here would work better for a slowdown since it emphasizes w/ the vocals in the same time

that's it. hope to see some more progress. good luck!

Thanks man, gonna reply to your mod as soon as I come back home (lots of travelling lol)
So here I am:

HootOwlStar wrote:

god it's been almost 2 years since the release of No Sound Without Silence. from #modreqs tho Then it's hime time to rank it I guess
[General]

1. maybe add cut version to tags since it's not full. ho l y sh i t it's nt f ull Naah is my cut that visible? Added
2. and also put the artist and song information in the descriptions? just sharing the initiative to let others be thankful too for the contributions of the artists to the music industry Okok
3. not sure but maybe type the BPM and offset again in Normal diff and Superhero diff. it works for me so I guess that's how you should fix it. maybe there is some really minor decimal things that cause the problem. btw remember to resnap everything after you fix the timing issue omg how, you're god thanks!
4. 00:34:921 (1) - doesn't seem fitting since the crescendo isn't strong enough to be emphasized with a spinner Gonna consider it

[Normal]

1. 00:46:237 (1,2) - swap nc + 01:58:633 (1) - remove nc of course
2. 02:27:016 (1) - same thing as of 00:34:920 (1) - Hmm I would rather get rid of this spinner and map this than keepin it, so gonna consider where to move it
3. 00:22:705 (5) - 01:20:190 (6) - 02:05:998 (6) - providing clicks in starts and ends of music sections would make more sense since it could give players indications like accomplishing something really meaningful. like they actually activate them like ykno wh i mean rite I completely understand ya but in Normal I'd like to keep these things as they are (though actually changed it in 02:05:998 (6) )
4. 01:15:160 (1,2) - just a suggestion to improve the flow though https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966130 Nice suggestion, accepted!

[Hard]

1. 00:00:071 (1,2,3) - try to make some cursor movements in the editor to experience the flow though. would be better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966237 yeah it's defienietely better now
2. 00:02:945 (1,2,3) - distance between 00:02:945 (1,2) - should be relatively smaller than 00:03:304 (2,3) - to follow the distance-time concept Ok!
3. 00:10:131 (2) - 00:11:208 (1) - 00:22:705 (8) - 00:39:591 (1) - 01:03:304 (7) - 01:42:106 (4) - 02:17:855 (9) - 02:29:172 (7) - well again the issue is that slider reverses or other things but mostly reverses, may cover some possible clicks which could emphasize the indications of music section starts and ends. some would be better if the reverses are replaced with circles to provide the clicks and some need extra work to shorten the sliders. this could be really personal opinions but I hope you would make considerations if you understand my viewpoint Of course I get it, reworked it all but 01:03:304 (7) - gonna consider what to do with it though
4. 01:20:190 (7,8) - err imo 01:20:190 (7) - should be a 1/2 instead of 3/4 to emphasize both pronunciation part /po-wer/ and also fix (8) if you agree Good point, fixed!
5. 01:26:657 (3) - nc stuffs how could I miss it lol thx
6. 02:03:843 - 02:12:465 - missed a circle + let 02:04:023 (1) - hide under the shadows of 02:02:226 (4) - is nt tragic love ;_; Added a circle there and also changed a bit the pattern
7. 02:09:771 (1) - and it is like the only 3/2 slider in the whole kiai part + why not provide a click at 02:10:310 - to emphasize the guitar my precious slider, cya in a better world... means fixed

[Superhero]

• couldn't help much with highest diffs as always so gonna pick out some minor ones

1. 00:10:489 (2) - ?? sorry I don't get it
2. 00:23:424 (9,1,2) - would be nice if you could apply the anti-jump pattern you used afterwards + swap ncs for 00:23:424 (9,1) - Idk what you mean but swapped nc's
3. 00:36:358 (1,2) - expected to be on the other side like adele I must have mapped a thousand times ... but still make shit, anyway fixed
4. 00:39:950 (5,6) - the distance-time concept is rather poor. either stack them and apply interesting patterns afterwards or you could actually try out my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966445 your suggestion is cool but idk I like this, gonna consider it too though
5. 00:52:166 (1) - until before kiai are like random placements. maybe try to rearrange to give out a clearer message/emphasis Sorry, I really really like it, not gonna change
6. 01:20:370 (6,1) - flow stuffs https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966464 + 01:50:190 (3,4) - minor flow stuffs First fixed, but the second issue? Idk what to do lol
7. 02:29:172 (5,6) - using 1/2 sliders here would work better for a slowdown since it emphasizes w/ the vocals in the same time Ok ok changed

that's it. hope to see some more progress. good luck!

Thanks so much for pointing out it all and oh god thanks for the timing solution! Naturally luck's gonna be useful too

okay, I did the mod 7 months ago and seems like mapper forgot to kd my post, so this post is for it.

helo

Cheesecake EZ:
general thing to do: add cut version league of legends lck to tags

00:23:424 (1) - remove NC for combo consistency with 00:05:819 (1,2,3)

i hate EZ's so that's all ur getting LO

normal:

00:49:291 (1,2,3) - this is hard for newer players to hit 300's consistently on, seems wayyy too dense
00:57:555 (4) - why is this part of the same combo lol

hard:
nothing to say wowie i like this diff!!

mari's insane:

01:19:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing random?

also good diff

superhero:
00:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels mega overmap, spacing random jump to a relatively calm section
02:23:603 (6) - antiflow note for seemingly no reason

lazy mod because im still trying to get my groove back.

cool set.

Dawnsday wrote:

helo wooo hi there!

normal:

00:49:291 (1,2,3) - this is hard for newer players to hit 300's consistently on, seems wayyy too dense Sorry it looks good for me, not changing
00:57:555 (4) - why is this part of the same combo lol Thx a lot! I applied this fix also to Hard diff

hard:
nothing to say wowie i like this diff!! Lol thanks I like it too

superhero:
00:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels mega overmap, spacing random jump to a relatively calm section Touched up a really little bit, but generally won't change it because it actually isn't random, there are triangles, shapes, and other kind of triangles lol
02:23:603 (6) - antiflow note for seemingly no reason You are right

lazy mod because im still trying to get my groove back. Mod is a mod anyway so thanks

cool set.

Nice to see #modreqs is working properly, thanks for a mod then!