Shoko Nakagawa - Namida no Tane, Egao no Hana · forum

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-12-12T12:18:07+00:00

[General]
- 2nd offset is late, use 20,876 as offset and don't forgot to resnap all notes
- dark blue combo color is hard to see to me, could you change it?

[MakJang's Taiko]
- add audio-lead-in? 1sec and then note is too fast i guess
~~- resnap all notes~~ i tried it didn't work because those unsnapped notes are 1/8(?) so snap it youself 00:51:002 (157,158)

[Normal] - fine
01:18:482 (2) - new combo?.. too close to (1) so.. (3) will look too far @_@

[Hard] - fine
01:04:922 (1) - move this spinner 1/4 backward or toward? but end at same place

[ykcarrot's Insane] - good

well done and i like this song lol, good job.

L i a

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L i a 2010-12-13T05:20:35+00:00

orioncomet//Thank you

hian_old

193 posts

Joined August 2009

hian_old 2010-12-13T14:15:31+00:00

별쾅 good

Lokamp

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Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2010-12-24T12:38:07+00:00

Sorry keep you waiting, dude S:

Normal
00:31:916 (2) - quite awful hitsounds during the slider-roll... Find something better,please!
00:40:556 (2,1,1) - "disorienting" spacing between the blue slider, the previous white slider and the next white beat. Make these 3 elements nearer!
01:05:036 (spinner) - pretty unsure about its end point, compared to the next beats. Maybe let it end at 01:06:476, and then add a beat on the spinner's previous end.
01:22:796 (2,3) - I found this 2-beat quite quite ununtuitive for a Normal mode... Move these beats elsewhere if you want, but this is just an opinion of mine...
01:41:516 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end

MakJang's Taiko
I REALLY loved the originality of the beat streams of the song. Just rise the overall volume of the Don/Katsu beats and you're fine!

Hard
00:46:796 (4,5,6) - I'm quite unsure about this part's spacing...
01:17:276 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Loved this part! Nice job.
01:24:956 (2,3,4) - ...nonsense spacing? Arrange these better,please...

ykcarrot's Insane
Nothing to complain. Maybe silence the last slider's end...

Your experimental spacing techniques need still some little improvement, but it isn't a great problem for this good map. Special mention to ykcarrot's mode for the fine hitsound placing! Have your star.

L i a

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L i a 2010-12-25T11:21:49+00:00

Lokamp//Thank you

LesTrucsRoses

271 posts

Joined July 2010

LesTrucsRoses 2010-12-28T02:08:26+00:00

*You might want to find a better background.

Hard

SPOILER

00:48:956 - Add a timing section here with the volume 4 ticks from maximum.
01:34:316 (7,8) - Combine 7 and 8 into a slider. [Suggestion]
01:41:516 - Add a beat here. Move the spinner one tick forward.

ykcarrot's Insane

SPOILER

00:02:595 (2,3,4,5) - Combine 2 and 3 into a slider. Combine 4 and 5 into a slider. Whistle hitsound on both sliders.
*But select the individual parts of the sliders and remove the whistle hitsound form them. This makes the beginning and end of the sliders to not have the hitsound, but the slider to have a 'tsssh' sound when it rolls.
00:47:756 (1) - It's hard to see this beat when it's overlayed like how it is.

Good.

L i a

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L i a 2010-12-28T06:44:59+00:00

LesTrucsRose//Thank you

Weez

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Weez 2010-12-28T19:32:58+00:00

General
- Instead of Gurren Lagann for the source, change it to Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann (that is the full name of the series)
- BG image should be 800*600 or 1024*768

Normal
Fine here

Hard
00:24:236 (4) Remove one repeat
00:42:956 Add a beat
00:46:556 ^same
00:53:756 (2,3,4) Line them up properly

ykcarrot's Insane
Fine here

Nice map plus love TTGL:D
Star

VTC

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VTC 2010-12-29T08:49:10+00:00

~ STAR ~

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L i a 2010-12-29T12:59:33+00:00

VocaloidTACU//Thanks

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-12-30T17:55:38+00:00

Bubbled~

Weez

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Weez 2010-12-31T01:23:23+00:00

Yaaay almost ranked

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L i a 2010-12-31T02:22:46+00:00

minyeob wrote:
Bubbled~

으악 민엽씨! 장판 2명에게 신청햇는데 이러시면! ㅠㅠ

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L i a 2010-12-31T02:28:10+00:00

Weezy wrote:
Yaaay almost ranked

yaaay~

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-12-31T02:30:06+00:00

왠지 터질 것 같네요 D:
관대모딩했는데 Orz
리버블 받으면 다시 알려주세요

Jarby

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Joined August 2008

Jarby 2010-12-31T10:51:46+00:00

soft-hitclap/normal-hitclap have a slight lead-in which threw me off. Replace them with this one. In addition to that, your mp3 is a fair bit quiet, so you should amplify it. Also, I think the kiai usage in all difficulties except Insane is a bit bad. It shouldn't activate and reactive so much.

Normal:

Missing the intro bit? Probably should map it, even if just for consistency's sake.
01:16:556 (1,1) - I think these would look better centered.

Hard:

01:07:676 (2) - I did not see this coming. Either set the tick rate to 2 so that the length is made obvious or (god forbid) storyboard some kind of warning there.

L i a

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L i a 2010-12-31T12:10:41+00:00

Jarby//Thank you

L i a

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L i a 2010-12-31T12:11:57+00:00

뭐이 찌콥놈아
버블인데 너같으면 고치겟냐
안고칠거다이놈아

[KOR]Extream_Sigma

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[KOR]Extream_Sigma 2011-01-05T05:53:26+00:00