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Tari

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Topic Starter

Tari 2016-01-18T05:02:33+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
god you did not tell me it is for a yuiko<3 ver. ;w;
btw you could add Primary to tags, because that's also her

thank you, added primary to tags.

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2016-01-19T16:50:39+00:00

Hi, from your PM request

[Extra]

00:10:043 (2,3) - blanketing is off between these two
00:23:168 (1,2,3) - maybe its on purpose but its not a perfect triangle ;_; http://puu.sh/mAlB3/30977f3d42.jpg VS http://puu.sh/mAlzc/5d525aeac3.jpg
01:21:975 (1) - try ctrl+g on this i think it would flow more naturally
01:43:282 (4) - try ctrl+g on this so the next one doesn't end up being so close. also ya i think it would be fun c:
02:07:827 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - try to make this stream flow more nicely into the slider lol. mostly i think 8 is in the wrong spot
02:20:100 (1,2,3,4) - kinda bothers me that the spacing for this is so large cuz its just a nice little piano here whereas 02:23:339 (1,2,3) - is guitar so its ok. but its not extremely hard so you don't have to change it. up to you
02:51:293 (7) - NC here for consistency with 02:50:100 (6,1) -
02:49:248 - though i would have divided this whole section by 4 notes for consistency with 02:46:521 - the music is pretty much the same
03:00:498 (3,4) - hmm i don't really hear the 3/4 1/4 here it should sound different from 02:59:986 (1,2) - i would suggest using a 1/1 slider instead
03:04:248 (7) - NC here instead of 03:04:640 (1) -

[captin's Insane]

01:20:151 (3,1) - try moving 3 a little further from 1 to be similar to 01:19:640 (2,4) -
01:24:072 (4,5,6,7,1) - try putting the triple a little closer to 4 since the triple is going in the opposite direction i think that will be quite difficult
01:43:333 (4) - check hitsound of sliderslide
01:59:015 (3,4) - try ctrl+g on both of these individually. i think that would flow more naturally
02:32:935 (1) - check sliderslide
02:49:214 (6) - i don't hear anything here lol. it plays alright but definitely overmapped

[Hard]
Try to avoid so many overlaps especially when using a mix of circles/sliders/reversers because it can get difficult to read ;_;

00:07:708 (3,1) - check stack
00:08:390 (1,2) - it looks cool but the spacing is just too large
00:09:753 (1) - maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/mBCX3/f7f69a3f5c.jpg not a big fan of the 4 reverses
00:12:736 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - err the problem with this is that the 1/4 sliders and everything else after it starting on blue ticks, forcing the player to click off beat. Hard to time and doesn't play well imo. I suggest something like these http://puu.sh/mBDhA/c923e03224.jpg OR http://puu.sh/mBDjI/f2a0711d8b.jpg
00:16:572 (1,4) - check stack
00:19:640 (2) - try moving it like this http://puu.sh/mBDsg/8c63014bde.jpg to improve readability of 00:18:958 (4,5,1,2) -
00:29:356 (2) - should be closer to 1
00:36:344 (3,4,1) - make 4 equidistant to 3 and 1
00:46:231 (5,1) - try to make these touch for consistency 00:51:685 (2,1) - 00:24:412 (3,1) - 01:08:049 (6,1) - etc
01:07:367 (2,3,4,5,6) - this might be too hard to read because of all the stacking and touching notes. i can't really think of an easy solution though :L
01:22:708 (3) - i think you wanted this to be centered, check
01:42:310 (4,1,2,3) - try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/mBE1m/242e7e5f9d.jpg
01:57:822 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe reading issue as well. try this http://puu.sh/mBEsc/aa56fba3e7.jpg
02:34:981 (4,5,1) - should be touching again

[Normal]
yo what the offset is wrong

Sorry I grow lazy and didn't want to mod the normal lol

Of course feel free to message me if you need any further explanation
This song is so amazingly refreshing and the extra is quite pleasant ^^
Good luck!

Tari

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1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Tari 2016-01-20T07:02:08+00:00

Intone wrote:
hello! modding complete

Extra
00:28:989 (6) positioning is kind of wonky. The sudden spacing change from 4->5 into 5->6 into 6->1 is really connfusing. Consider altering the positions of 3-4-5-6-1
00:30:327 (1) flow here? 1->2, consider flipping 1 to curve upwards instead of down
00:56:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) this selection feels a little random inn terms of placement. Connsider distance spacing it and making a more reliable pattern scheme (lead into the next note more I think is whatI'm tryinng to say.)
01:26:151 (1) curve upwards?
02:53:789 (1) remove NC. Too many 1+2 here makes it really confusing since its not in a standard/obvious pattern

captin's insane
00:15:242 (1,2) make 1 and 2 nest better here. Probably lower 1 andn curve it a little more
00:40:708 (3) curve this more to lead into 1 more
00:42:515 (2) ahh nitpicking here but its innterfering with the 5 which makes it look out of place annd stuff s and ahhh idk stuff like this bothers me more than it should QAQ

Hard
00:16:201 (4) kind of off the screen, fix for looks
00:41:138 (1) this onne too^
01:30:666 (1,2) this doesnnt flow well. Consider movinng 1 up a bit?
02:36:612 (4) off screenn
02:40:182 (1) i'm nitpicking a bit here but this onne too ^
03:03:140 (3,4) I thinkn you're bet ter off making the 3 annndn 4 follow the sliding downn path of the 1+2 (pm me if I'm nont explaining what I meannt well :O) It's prettier that way I think I prefer my symmetry pattern D:

Normal
00:11:144 (1) up curve instnead of down here. The flow is a little wonnky XD
00:43:793 (1) remove nc? put it onn the 2 after it instead. More clear because of the huge spacinng
01:22:658 (3) curve this inwards
Hope my mod was helpful

Everything fixed except one suggestion.

eeezzzeee

eeezzzeee wrote:
Hi, from your PM request

[Extra]
00:10:043 (2,3) - blanketing is off between these two
00:23:168 (1,2,3) - maybe its on purpose but its not a perfect triangle ;_; http://puu.sh/mAlB3/30977f3d42.jpg VS http://puu.sh/mAlzc/5d525aeac3.jpg
01:21:975 (1) - try ctrl+g on this i think it would flow more naturally
01:43:282 (4) - try ctrl+g on this so the next one doesn't end up being so close. also ya i think it would be fun c: the music is weak here so I'd prefer not huge jumps.
02:07:827 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - try to make this stream flow more nicely into the slider lol. mostly i think 8 is in the wrong spot
02:20:100 (1,2,3,4) - kinda bothers me that the spacing for this is so large cuz its just a nice little piano here whereas 02:23:339 (1,2,3) - is guitar so its ok. but its not extremely hard so you don't have to change it. up to you
02:51:293 (7) - NC here for consistency with 02:50:100 (6,1) - no,more constant drums here to fit in the combo.
02:49:248 - though i would have divided this whole section by 4 notes for consistency with 02:46:521 - the music is pretty much the same
03:00:498 (3,4) - hmm i don't really hear the 3/4 1/4 here it should sound different from 02:59:986 (1,2) - i would suggest using a 1/1 slider instead , it's to emphasize the next slider.
03:04:248 (7) - NC here instead of 03:04:640 (1) - no, the jumps would be harder to read if I changed ncs.
[captin's Insane]
01:20:151 (3,1) - try moving 3 a little further from 1 to be similar to 01:19:640 (2,4) -
01:24:072 (4,5,6,7,1) - try putting the triple a little closer to 4 since the triple is going in the opposite direction i think that will be quite difficult
01:43:333 (4) - check hitsound of sliderslide
01:59:015 (3,4) - try ctrl+g on both of these individually. i think that would flow more naturally
02:32:935 (1) - check sliderslide
02:49:214 (6) - i don't hear anything here lol. it plays alright but definitely overmapped
[Hard]
Try to avoid so many overlaps especially when using a mix of circles/sliders/reversers because it can get difficult to read ;_;
00:07:708 (3,1) - check stack
00:08:390 (1,2) - it looks cool but the spacing is just too large
00:09:753 (1) - maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/mBCX3/f7f69a3f5c.jpg not a big fan of the 4 reverses it fits with the music imo
00:12:736 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - err the problem with this is that the 1/4 sliders and everything else after it starting on blue ticks, forcing the player to click off beat. Hard to time and doesn't play well imo. I suggest something like these http://puu.sh/mBDhA/c923e03224.jpg OR http://puu.sh/mBDjI/f2a0711d8b.jpg
00:16:572 (1,4) - check stack
00:19:640 (2) - try moving it like this http://puu.sh/mBDsg/8c63014bde.jpg to improve readability of 00:18:958 (4,5,1,2) -
00:29:356 (2) - should be closer to 1 intended jump to emphasize piano.
00:36:344 (3,4,1) - make 4 equidistant to 3 and 1 no, that would make the spacing too huge.
00:46:231 (5,1) - try to make these touch for consistency 00:51:685 (2,1) - 00:24:412 (3,1) - 01:08:049 (6,1) - etc
01:07:367 (2,3,4,5,6) - this might be too hard to read because of all the stacking and touching notes. i can't really think of an easy solution though :L
01:22:708 (3) - i think you wanted this to be centered, check
01:42:310 (4,1,2,3) - try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/mBE1m/242e7e5f9d.jpg no, white ticks are stronger than the red ones here.
01:57:822 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe reading issue as well. try this http://puu.sh/mBEsc/aa56fba3e7.jpg
02:34:981 (4,5,1) - should be touching again
[Normal]
yo what the offset is wrong

Sorry I grow lazy and didn't want to mod the normal lol
Of course feel free to message me if you need any further explanation
This song is so amazingly refreshing and the extra is quite pleasant ^^
Good luck!

Fixed everything but the red replies.

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2016-01-22T23:54:03+00:00

Hi, Modding from PM Request!

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may not be useful! If this is the case feel free to ignore this mod, although feedback would be much appreciated! All mods are my opinion

[General]

No Kiai time on the normal diff? o.o

[Normal]

00:13:844 (1) - I would prefer a much tighter circle here since the flow reverses back on itself and I think the flow could be improved by changing this slider into a more hairpin like shape

00:32:253 (2) - Instead of doing this, I would actually make this slightly more complex to follow the hihat pattern whilst also following the vocal at 00:32:765

Suggestion One

This suggestion adds circles at 00:32:765 - and 00:31:912 - to follow the vocals and hihats in the music whilst also adjusting slider angle on the second slider for a more intuitive flow into the long slider (this adds to the star rating of the map, but still keeps is under 2*)

00:42:481 (3,4) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but you have a nice blanket here on the 3, but it's slightly out so I would suggest altering the wave slider to fit the blanket better

00:45:037 - I would place a note/short 1/2 slider here since you start following the drums from 00:45:549 (1) - and this it a really audible hihat that opens on the red tick and closes on the downbeat

01:09:753 (3,4) - Blanket is slightly out

[Hard]

00:12:736 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is waaaay to hard for a hard difficulty in my opinion and is more suited to insane difficulties, I would reconsider this pattern and make it easier, maybe using repeat sliders instead of 1/4? (This is even harder than the pattern in the insane diff for this section)

00:34:810 (3,4) - Double check these are parallel

01:03:447 (3,4) - I would consider making 4 blanket 3, this would also make a nicer wave shape going into 01:04:299 (1) -

02:00:890 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved

02:03:617 (3,1) - Double check these are parallel, if this is intentional I would adjust the angles of both sliders to make it more obvious that these shouldn't be parallel

02:47:083 - 02:47:765 - 02:48:447 - 02:49:128 - There are audible bass drum kicks on these red ticks although you haven't made them clickable, I would at least make 02:49:128 - and 02:47:765 - clickable?

02:57:310 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved

[captin's Insane]

Only blanket/aesthetic mods here, flow is really good ^^

00:18:787 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved (pretty sure this was intended as a blanket anyway)

00:23:219 (1) - Make this the inverse of 00:22:878 (4) - ? I think it would look just that little bit better than just using a straight slider here

01:45:719 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved

01:55:094 (2) - I would prefer a smoother wave shape here instead of an angular one so you can have a nice blanket on 01:55:606 (3) - (similar effect at 00:42:481 (3,4) - in the Normal difficulty)

02:54:753 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved

[]

I didn't mod extra as i'm not very comfortable at modding over 5* diffs q.q

Hope this helped!

captin1

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2016-01-25T02:36:14+00:00

Intone wrote:
captin's insane
00:15:242 (1,2) make 1 and 2 nest better here. Probably lower 1 andn curve it a little more eh not what i intended
00:40:708 (3) curve this more to lead into 1 more like pattern as is
00:42:515 (2) ahh nitpicking here but its innterfering with the 5 which makes it look out of place annd stuff s and ahhh idk stuff like this bothers me more than it should QAQ overlapped it more so it's neater lol

eeezzzeee wrote:
[captin's Insane]
01:20:151 (3,1) - try moving 3 a little further from 1 to be similar to 01:19:640 (2,4) -
01:24:072 (4,5,6,7,1) - try putting the triple a little closer to 4 since the triple is going in the opposite direction i think that will be quite difficult
01:43:333 (4) - check hitsound of sliderslide
01:59:015 (3,4) - try ctrl+g on both of these individually. i think that would flow more naturally going for a different flow type here, trying to copy frostmourne lol
02:32:935 (1) - check sliderslide
02:49:214 (6) - i don't hear anything here lol. it plays alright but definitely overmapped y r u oppress me (fixed)
fixed rest

Log Off Now wrote:
[captin's Insane]

Only blanket/aesthetic mods here, flow is really good ^^

00:18:787 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved (pretty sure this was intended as a blanket anyway)

00:23:219 (1) - Make this the inverse of 00:22:878 (4) - ? I think it would look just that little bit better than just using a straight slider here

01:45:719 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved

01:55:094 (2) - I would prefer a smoother wave shape here instead of an angular one so you can have a nice blanket on 01:55:606 (3) - (similar effect at 00:42:481 (3,4) - in the Normal difficulty) nah i like the angled

02:54:753 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
same

thank

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492,193,168617,2,0,L|485:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,14,168958,2,0,L|273:127,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,252,169299,6,0,P|261:243|215:241,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
38,144,169640,2,0,P|93:132|142:117,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
150,332,169981,2,0,L|142:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
324,85,170322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,265,170492,1,0,1:0:0:0:
202,155,170662,6,0,L|110:163,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,171003,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,84,171174,1,0,1:0:0:0:
195,239,171344,2,0,P|187:289|179:328,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
339,156,171685,2,0,P|342:179|345:201,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,264,171856,1,0,1:0:0:0:
370,34,172026,6,0,P|310:40|256:51,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
42,103,172367,2,0,P|86:110|131:114,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
301,259,172708,2,0,L|269:174,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
171,42,173049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,242,173219,1,0,1:0:0:0:
339,157,173390,6,0,P|395:159|443:162,1,90,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,227,173731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
429,268,173901,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,131,174072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,63,174242,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,288,174412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,196,174583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,196,174668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,196,174753,6,0,P|83:242|-1:219,1,180,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
69,141,175265,1,0,1:0:0:0:
173,336,175435,2,0,B|231:347|231:347|284:313|284:313|367:332,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,359,175947,1,0,1:0:0:0:
449,157,176117,5,4,1:0:0:0:
450,157,176287,2,0,P|364:143|306:207,1,180,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
390,320,176799,2,0,L|395:231,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,48,177140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,249,177310,6,0,B|198:281|198:281|59:254,1,180,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,135,177822,2,0,B|314:103|314:103|453:130,1,180,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
411,237,178333,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,268,178503,2,0,P|249:266|183:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,217,179697,1,0,1:0:0:0:
291,44,179867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
74,78,180037,6,0,B|31:127|31:127|43:251,1,180,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,375,180549,2,0,B|281:326|281:326|269:202,1,180,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
131,143,181060,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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400,249,181572,6,0,P|415:313|416:351,1,90,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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357,112,182424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
174,72,182594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,153,183276,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,153,183447,1,0,1:0:0:0:
301,65,183617,1,0,1:0:0:0:
301,65,183787,1,0,1:0:0:0:
283,208,183958,1,0,1:0:0:0:
283,208,184128,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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195,130,184810,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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317,189,185322,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,333,185492,5,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,185577,12,0,186685,1:0:0:0:
256,192,186856,5,0,1:0:0:0:

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2016-01-27T00:36:21+00:00

where are the whisttllleesss ;w;

Tari

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Tari 2016-01-28T00:28:55+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
where are the whisttllleesss ;w;

I already added whistles, mines is just different from captin's.
Updated all difficulties.

captin1

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captin1 2016-02-10T09:59:23+00:00

can you update my diff for real cause it isn't right now LOL

Battle

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Battle 2016-02-11T01:42:14+00:00

As requested

[Normal]
Are the kiais missing? .3. (They're missing on the thing I downloaded when we last talked ><)
00:07:197 (2,3) - Kinda a picky thing but make these parallel pls
00:11:117 (1,2,3) - Sudden 1.0x ds change from 1.1 previously
00:57:481 (1,2,3) - I dunno, this looked really jagged compared to how you flowed some of the other things, maybe slight reposition notes? (if not make line completely straight?)
01:35:662 (1) - Maybe it's position relative to 4 so that way 1 -> 2 flows smoother
I kinda noticed, did you like give up on dsing it in 1.1x after the start lol

[Hard]
Are you going to have a diff called "Advanced" or something similar to it in the future? The current spread of normal -> hard is pretty poor atm since Normal has pretty simplistic beats with some of the things being 2/1 or having pauses while Hard has 1/4 and a bunch of crazy (to play) things in it
00:59:526 (3,1) - Obligatory "you can blanket these" but in all seriousness I think it would look a bit nicer if you did ><
01:34:981 (3,4,1) - I think positioning 4 in the middle of 3 and 1 more would make it look nicer, however, if you do decide to keep this, maybe consider having 4 closer to 3 instead of 1 to emphasize the downbeat on 1
01:44:356 (2,3) - Blanket could be better
02:34:981 (4,5,1) - Maybe have 1 close to 5 like you did for 4 - 5? The jump is a little harsh for a hard imo

I don't really have any qualms with the harder diffs, they play fine and looks really nice~

GL on the map!

Tari

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Tari 2016-02-12T02:37:25+00:00

captin1 wrote:
can you update my diff for real cause it isn't right now LOL

Oops, updated for real now.

@Battle : All fixed. Thank you for modding!

_handholding

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_handholding 2016-02-12T03:45:06+00:00

hi m4m

[Normal]

01:06:856 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4515826 This would look better if the first part of the slider was curved so it wraps around 01:05:662 (1) - a bit
01:08:219 (6) - I would suggest deleting this since it is a very minor hit and you've barely mapped any other minor hits throughout the song so far. This note also makes the slider end of 01:07:708 (5) lose emphasis
01:13:674 (4) - use the same rhythm you did for 01:06:685 (3,4) ?
What ever you decide to do for the above I'd at least recommend ctrl + g these 2 notes 01:14:867 (3,4) for a number of reasons but the main one is the beat of the notes 01:13:844 (1,2,3,4) - is fluent throughout so it shouldnt change from circle - slider to slider - circle
01:28:674 (3) - I thought this would look prettier curved a bit more, up to you.
01:40:776 (4,5) - This point is more difficulty but I think you can get away with it idk. This is the only place in the song where you have 2 half circles together and it is then followed by slider so basically you are clciking 3 objects in a succession of 1/2 spacings and the SR is 1.96 too. How about turning them into a slider like you've done for similar rhythms through out the map?
02:22:878 - map this part of the drums since you mapped the part right after it? again this is optional so yh
02:38:390 (1,2) - Im not a person to go nazi over blankets but this one could do with tweaking a bit
02:46:572 (1,2,3,4) - The idea is nice but prettier sliders can be used of for this; from looking at your map im sure youre capable of it. This goes for the pattern after it too
02:54:753 (1) - This section to me suffers from bad flow and inconsistent rhythm problems.
First off you could turn into 02:56:117 (2) into a slider since you mapped the vocals for 02:54:753 (1)
The main problem for me is I think 02:56:799 (3) shoudlnt be a reverse slider at all. It maps different sections and combines them making it feel weird on what youre following.
My recommendation would be to turn 02:56:117 (2) - into a 2/1 slider, take out the reverse of 02:56:799 (3) and start it at 02:57:310 and finally add a circle at 02:58:162 (4)
The rhythm would look like this
03:00:890 - add circle if you plan on doing the above

[Hard]

00:27:992 (2,3) - The jump between these notes just doesnt feel justified as there is no emphasis on it. You can ctrl g as a shortcut if you wanted
00:59:356 (2) - Change the sample set to normal like you did for 00:58:333 (3)
01:02:083 (2) - ^
01:02:765 (4) - ^
There seems to be more so I'd just suggest listening to it in editor and listen for the ones that sound quiet.
02:24:753 (4) - This is a bit of a nazi mod but the break should be here
02:30:719 (3) - This would flow better if you moved it to 02:30:890 and because the first notes would be 1/1 you can turn the whole pattern into a star shape or something along those lines if you wanted
02:53:390 (1,2) - I feel like you should stick to 1/2 sliders for this measure like you did for the previous one

edit: I'll mod the Insane at a later date its 4 am in the UK atm zzzzz

Exa

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Exa 2016-02-14T19:10:52+00:00

Normal:

00:05:322 (4,1) - I suggest rotating (1) by about 20 degrees so it flows in from (4) more smoothly. The object placement allows you to easily blanket 00:05:662 (1,2).
00:08:390 (1,2) - The blanket is off by a bit, you don't //need// to change it.
00:14:185 and 00:14:526 - Seem weird to not be mapped. I get that you are trying to follow the piano here but you've mapped similar beats afterward like 00:15:208 (3). You could do something like this and stay true to mapping both the piano and the beats. Begone rhythmical inconsistencies :3
00:16:572 (1) - This is pretty much the same as 00:13:844 (1,2,3) with the only difference being that they are more audible. It's cool to have diversity but how about having consistent rhythm and diversify your map by using different patterns? It just seems weird to tap the the same sound in a different way.
00:19:128 - Now this confuses me even more. You've been mapping the piano up until now but you suddenly decide to ignore it o.o
00:19:640 (2,3) - How about you make these ones completely linear?
00:21:344 (2) - And that's even more weird, you ignore both the beats on the white ticks and you even ignore the piano on the last red tick! Now there are three ways that I can see going about it: This one which might be too hard. This one in case you decide to keep randomly ignoring white ticks which also prides the player with the same time gap between objects at all times. Or this one which I find to be most fitting since it is diverse, it skips nothings and also goes well with 00:22:708 (5) as it provides a familiar object.
00:22:708 (5) - However this one contains the exact same sound with 00:21:344 (2) with the only difference being that it's easier to hear.
00:21:344 (2) - I general this one up until it's first reverse point maps the exact same sounds that 00:22:708 (3) and the next red tick should be mapping. Using the same rhythm in both instances is greatly suggested.
00:29:526 (2,1) - This blanket could clearly be much better.
00:32:083 - I can tell that in this section you favor the vocals more than the beats. A crafty way to go about it indeed since the whole thing is much more calm. However, if that's the actual logic behind it, you should map this sound and the ones after it that are of the same nature. Simply doing something like this or this which is easier should do the trick.
00:34:128 - Of course both the prominence of these sounds that come after a bit and the need for consistency are good enough reasons to map them. Even though it seems a bit complicated to change your current patterns, I would still like using this rhythm which seems to fit much better.
00:37:026 (3,2) - Stack properly.
00:34:299 (1) - As the song is closing to the strong vocals it's good to keep mapping prominent beats and ultimately increase tension. How about doing something like this instead? It seems a bit harder than the rest of the difficulty so don't have to use it unless you also find it to be fitting.
00:46:572 (1,4) - Stack? o.o
00:46:572 (1,4) - Move to 96,348. Much better isn't it? :>
00:50:322 (2,3) - Of course, if you moved the last slider you will have to reposition these accordingly.
00:51:344 (4,1) - This blanket could also be a bit better.
01:01:572 (3,4) - I don't know about this. I doubt any newbie would complete the first slider in order to transit to the next. Instead they will just leave from the middle/start of the first slider with a high chance of breaking their combo

01:06:685 (3,4) - Wow randomly introducing a stack in the chorus seems like a really sudden move, some players might not be able to properly react to this.
01:19:299 (1,2) - And you even have two different types of stacks! It seems very likely that most people will either fail to react to the first, or misread the second. If you have to keep a stack I suggest that you keep this one and change the previous one since you use 1/1 stacks more often.
01:45:890 (3,2) - Stack properly.
01:53:049 (2,3) - Tend to this stack in case you changed the last one.
01:55:776 (2,3) - Oh darn you use it more than once

Maybe try a manual stack on either this ones or on the 1/1 ones?
02:30:208 (1,2) - You could easily have made a proper blanket here, please do

02:38:390 (1,2) - You could have also blanketed this one. Blankets simply add up to the aesthetics since it doesn't seem like you randomly placed objects so it's always nice to use them. I really can't find a reason explaining why wouldn't when you clearly can.
02:40:435 (3,1) - Even this little guy can be blanketed.
02:46:572 (1,2,3,4) - I am extremely unsure about this. The sliderball area is not big enough to cover more than half of the slider's track. I am afraid some newbies will not be able to complete this pattern without getting some 100s or even breaking combo. Not to mention that the continues overlaps outta nowhere make it even harder to read.
02:49:299 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this and even more, since the last one was more cramped, the possibilities of breaking combo were less because of the sliderball's area.
03:00:037 - Why not have it perfectly straight?

Hard

00:09:412 (3,1) - The jump on these is the exact same spacing as the jump on 00:07:197 (1,3) but they have different time gaps. It's very misleading and might cause spread problems since there was nothing even remotely as misleading as that on normal

00:18:276 (2) - Ctrl+G'ing this one seems to make a much more fun pattern and also emphasized the upcoming beat much better.
00:18:958 (4,1) - Stack nicely?
00:22:026 - Why do you randomly skip that ;w;
00:23:901 - It's weird that you skip that in order to make a much more pleasant rhythm but right after 00:25:094 (2,3,4,5,6) you force the player to suddenly single tap 176 bpm

00:31:742 - These are far more prominent than the white ticks. Staying true to the structure is cool, but at least use 1/2 sliders to not let these little guys unmapped.
00:39:583 (6,1) - I suggest spacing these out. Denying movement when is a prominent beat doesn't really make much sense.
00:59:867 (4,2) - Stack?
01:12:310 (4,2) - Stack? o.o
01:15:208 (1,2,3) - Wow that's both misleading in terms of spacing and also really hard to read because of the full stack. Please consider doing at least a manual stack more upwards.
01:20:492 (1,2,3) - This is also extremely uncomfortable to play to and even more uncomfortable to read. There's decreasing spacing on a completely linear pattern but you also force the player to completely change direction. It seems very forceful and I would really like to see this changed.
01:26:628 (3) - I really can't find a good enough reason to space these out that much, especially given the fact that the second object is on a red tick.
01:32:765 (4,1) - I would suggest spacing these out as well but I see that you do that more than a few times and I am not sure if you will be able to fix all of them ;w;. I am not going to stop pointing these out because I am starting to feel bad >.<
01:55:435 (3,1) - Is it possible to curve 3 so that 1 blankets with it?
01:55:435 (3,3) - Please get rid of that overlap.
02:44:185 (2,1) - These are not stacked.
02:50:322 (4,2) - These are not stacked either ._.
02:57:310 (1,2) - Pls blanket pls thanks.
03:00:037 (1,3) - Get rid of that overlap as well!

Honestly I couldn't find anything worth mentioning on the harder difficulties and I didn't want to bother you with blankets >.<

General

- Offset is fine.
- I don't think you need the OSB unless I randomly created it.
- BG is fine.
- All fine kek

GL with this o/

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-02-16T00:11:31+00:00

Oh darn, I fall in love with every song yuiko does.
I might throw a mod in the future once I get the possibility~

Tari

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Tari 2016-02-20T03:55:13+00:00

Nathan

Nathan Kiss wrote:
hi m4m

[Normal]
01:06:856 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4515826 This would look better if the first part of the slider was curved so it wraps around 01:05:662 (1) - a bit
01:08:219 (6) - I would suggest deleting this since it is a very minor hit and you've barely mapped any other minor hits throughout the song so far. This note also makes the slider end of 01:07:708 (5) lose emphasis
01:13:674 (4) - use the same rhythm you did for 01:06:685 (3,4) ? I wanted rhythm variation + current rhythm fits more.
What ever you decide to do for the above I'd at least recommend ctrl + g these 2 notes 01:14:867 (3,4) for a number of reasons but the main one is the beat of the notes 01:13:844 (1,2,3,4) - is fluent throughout so it shouldnt change from circle - slider to slider - circle ^
01:28:674 (3) - I thought this would look prettier curved a bit more, up to you. I prefer to leave as is.
01:40:776 (4,5) - This point is more difficulty but I think you can get away with it idk. This is the only place in the song where you have 2 half circles together and it is then followed by slider so basically you are clciking 3 objects in a succession of 1/2 spacings and the SR is 1.96 too. How about turning them into a slider like you've done for similar rhythms through out the map? Same reason : rhythm variation
02:22:878 - map this part of the drums since you mapped the part right after it? again this is optional so yh I wanted to map only the strongest beats.
02:38:390 (1,2) - Im not a person to go nazi over blankets but this one could do with tweaking a bit
02:46:572 (1,2,3,4) - The idea is nice but prettier sliders can be used of for this; from looking at your map im sure youre capable of it. This goes for the pattern after it too It's matter a preference.
02:54:753 (1) - This section to me suffers from bad flow and inconsistent rhythm problems. I'm reducing density slowly.
First off you could turn into 02:56:117 (2) into a slider since you mapped the vocals for 02:54:753 (1) I'll think about it.
The main problem for me is I think 02:56:799 (3) shoudlnt be a reverse slider at all. It maps different sections and combines them making it feel weird on what youre following.
My recommendation would be to turn 02:56:117 (2) - into a 2/1 slider, take out the reverse of 02:56:799 (3) and start it at 02:57:310 and finally add a circle at 02:58:162 (4)
03:00:890 - add circle if you plan on doing the above

[Hard]
00:27:992 (2,3) - The jump between these notes just doesnt feel justified as there is no emphasis on it. You can ctrl g as a shortcut if you wanted
00:59:356 (2) - Change the sample set to normal like you did for 00:58:333 (3) Nope, I put it before the clap.
01:02:083 (2) - ^
01:02:765 (4) - ^
There seems to be more so I'd just suggest listening to it in editor and listen for the ones that sound quiet.
02:24:753 (4) - This is a bit of a nazi mod but the break should be here
02:30:719 (3) - This would flow better if you moved it to 02:30:890 and because the first notes would be 1/1 you can turn the whole pattern into a star shape or something along those lines if you wanted I really want to keep my symmetry.
02:53:390 (1,2) - I feel like you should stick to 1/2 sliders for this measure like you did for the previous one Both could work, but I'd prefer mine because i want a pause.
edit: I'll mod the Insane at a later date its 4 am in the UK atm zzzzz

Exa

Exa wrote:
Normal:

00:05:322 (4,1) - I suggest rotating (1) by about 20 degrees so it flows in from (4) more smoothly. The object placement allows you to easily blanket 00:05:662 (1,2).
00:08:390 (1,2) - The blanket is off by a bit, you don't //need// to change it.
00:14:185 and 00:14:526 - Seem weird to not be mapped. I get that you are trying to follow the piano here but you've mapped similar beats afterward like 00:15:208 (3). You could do something like this and stay true to mapping both the piano and the beats. Begone rhythmical inconsistencies :3 Exactly, I'm following the piano!
00:16:572 (1) - This is pretty much the same as 00:13:844 (1,2,3) with the only difference being that they are more audible. It's cool to have diversity but how about having consistent rhythm and diversify your map by using different patterns? It just seems weird to tap the the same sound in a different way. I introduce rhythms before i make them more apparent.
00:19:128 - Now this confuses me even more. You've been mapping the piano up until now but you suddenly decide to ignore it o.o If I have 1/2 rhythms in this difficulty, it would cause a difficulty spike.
00:19:640 (2,3) - How about you make these ones completely linear? Was never my intention.
00:21:344 (2) - And that's even more weird, you ignore both the beats on the white ticks and you even ignore the piano on the last red tick! Now there are three ways that I can see going about it: This one which might be too hard. This one in case you decide to keep randomly ignoring white ticks which also prides the player with the same time gap between objects at all times. Or this one which I find to be most fitting since it is diverse, it skips nothings and also goes well with 00:22:708 (5) as it provides a familiar object. They are the easiest recognizable beats in the entire section, so yes I am mapping by the loudest and clearly recognizable sounds.
00:22:708 (5) - However this one contains the exact same sound with 00:21:344 (2) with the only difference being that it's easier to hear.
00:21:344 (2) - I general this one up until it's first reverse point maps the exact same sounds that 00:22:708 (3) and the next red tick should be mapping. Using the same rhythm in both instances is greatly suggested.
00:29:526 (2,1) - This blanket could clearly be much better.
00:32:083 - I can tell that in this section you favor the vocals more than the beats. A crafty way to go about it indeed since the whole thing is much more calm. However, if that's the actual logic behind it, you should map this sound and the ones after it that are of the same nature. Simply doing something like this or this which is easier should do the trick. I don't know man; white ticks are usually what people click based on intuition. I'll have to think about this.
00:34:128 - Of course both the prominence of these sounds that come after a bit and the need for consistency are good enough reasons to map them. Even though it seems a bit complicated to change your current patterns, I would still like using this rhythm which seems to fit much better. I'll have to get more thoughts about this since the white ticks are always more simple to click.
00:37:026 (3,2) - Stack properly.
00:34:299 (1) - As the song is closing to the strong vocals it's good to keep mapping prominent beats and ultimately increase tension. How about doing something like this instead? It seems a bit harder than the rest of the difficulty so don't have to use it unless you also find it to be fitting. I'll have to get more thoughts about this since the white ticks are always more simple to click.
00:46:572 (1,4) - Stack? o.o
00:46:572 (1,4) - Move to 96,348. Much better isn't it? :>
00:50:322 (2,3) - Of course, if you moved the last slider you will have to reposition these accordingly.
00:51:344 (4,1) - This blanket could also be a bit better.
01:01:572 (3,4) - I don't know about this. I doubt any newbie would complete the first slider in order to transit to the next. Instead they will just leave from the middle/start of the first slider with a high chance of breaking their combo What? this is up and down movement.
01:06:685 (3,4) - Wow randomly introducing a stack in the chorus seems like a really sudden move, some players might not be able to properly react to this. The rhythm is obvious and you have to remember this is a normal difficulty.
01:19:299 (1,2) - And you even have two different types of stacks! It seems very likely that most people will either fail to react to the first, or misread the second. If you have to keep a stack I suggest that you keep this one and change the previous one since you use 1/1 stacks more often. What's wrong with stacking on normals? I can use one or two techniques since this is not a typical easy diff. The usage of stacks is consistent here anyways.
01:45:890 (3,2) - Stack properly.
01:53:049 (2,3) - Tend to this stack in case you changed the last one.
01:55:776 (2,3) - Oh darn you use it more than once Maybe try a manual stack on either this ones or on the 1/1 ones?
02:30:208 (1,2) - You could easily have made a proper blanket here, please do I want to emphasize the pattern more
02:38:390 (1,2) - You could have also blanketed this one. Blankets simply add up to the aesthetics since it doesn't seem like you randomly placed objects so it's always nice to use them. I really can't find a reason explaining why wouldn't when you clearly can.
02:40:435 (3,1) - Even this little guy can be blanketed.
02:46:572 (1,2,3,4) - I am extremely unsure about this. The sliderball area is not big enough to cover more than half of the slider's track. I am afraid some newbies will not be able to complete this pattern without getting some 100s or even breaking combo. Not to mention that the continues overlaps outta nowhere make it even harder to read.
02:49:299 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this and even more, since the last one was more cramped, the possibilities of breaking combo were less because of the sliderball's area.
03:00:037 - Why not have it perfectly straight?

Hard

00:09:412 (3,1) - The jump on these is the exact same spacing as the jump on 00:07:197 (1,3) but they have different time gaps. It's very misleading and might cause spread problems since there was nothing even remotely as misleading as that on normal
00:18:276 (2) - Ctrl+G'ing this one seems to make a much more fun pattern and also emphasized the upcoming beat much better.
00:18:958 (4,1) - Stack nicely?
00:22:026 - Why do you randomly skip that ;w; I'm mapping the chime sound here.
00:23:901 - It's weird that you skip that in order to make a much more pleasant rhythm but right after 00:25:094 (2,3,4,5,6) you force the player to suddenly single tap 176 bpm Too hard
00:31:742 - These are far more prominent than the white ticks. Staying true to the structure is cool, but at least use 1/2 sliders to not let these little guys unmapped. uhhh let me get back to you on this.
00:39:583 (6,1) - I suggest spacing these out. Denying movement when is a prominent beat doesn't really make much sense. That would make this part too hard.
00:59:867 (4,2) - Stack?
01:12:310 (4,2) - Stack? o.o
01:15:208 (1,2,3) - Wow that's both misleading in terms of spacing and also really hard to read because of the full stack. Please consider doing at least a manual stack more upwards.
01:20:492 (1,2,3) - This is also extremely uncomfortable to play to and even more uncomfortable to read. There's decreasing spacing on a completely linear pattern but you also force the player to completely change direction. It seems very forceful and I would really like to see this changed. First of all, there is no change in direction here. Secondly, this is just a simple straight movement.
01:26:628 (3) - I really can't find a good enough reason to space these out that much, especially given the fact that the second object is on a red tick.
01:32:765 (4,1) - I would suggest spacing these out as well but I see that you do that more than a few times and I am not sure if you will be able to fix all of them ;w;. I am not going to stop pointing these out because I am starting to feel bad >.<
01:55:435 (3,1) - Is it possible to curve 3 so that 1 blankets with it? I don't want a blanket .
01:55:435 (3,3) - Please get rid of that overlap.
02:44:185 (2,1) - These are not stacked.
02:50:322 (4,2) - These are not stacked either ._.
02:57:310 (1,2) - Pls blanket pls thanks.
03:00:037 (1,3) - Get rid of that overlap as well! uhm, this one is on purpose, as you can see.

Honestly I couldn't find anything worth mentioning on the harder difficulties and I didn't want to bother you with blankets >.<

General

- Offset is fine.
- I don't think you need the OSB unless I randomly created it.
- BG is fine.
- All fine kek

GL with this o/

Thanks for modding! Sorry for the late mod replies.

@MrSergio : No problem! Mod it whenever you want.

Rizia

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Rizia 2016-03-05T07:53:05+00:00

very nice song

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2016-03-05T09:24:00+00:00

To help you finish things up, a small gift from me. (Please don't kds this because I didn't even finish a mod for 1 diff)

Normal:
00:05:662 (1) - blanket the end 00:07:197 (2) - or at least lower change the opening angle to form a smooth curve with 00:05:322 (4) -
00:09:753 (2) - blanket the start/end of 00:08:390 (1) -
00:20:662 (1) - why did you start your new combo here instead of later on to follow your pattern of a new combo every 2 measures
00:22:708 (3) - angle the slider to the right a bit to better lead into 00:23:390 (1) - ?
00:26:117 (3) - trying to decide how you want your combos to be like because you keep switching between 2 measures and 1 measure combos in your verse. For this first section, you seem to do 1 measure combos, so I suggest adding a new combo here
00:27:481 (1) - slider edge slightly offscreen on 5:4

SPOILER

00:43:844 (5) - not symmetrical
00:49:299 (1) - blanket the end of 4
00:54:753 (3) - new combo to denote the end of 2 measures
01:28:674 (3) - move down a bit so 01:28:162 (2) - points more directly at the head
03:01:572 (1) - slightly imperfect, but I believe you can fix it 144,368,181572,6,0,B|188:384|320:340|396:240|340:184|256:154|172:184|116:240|192:340|324:384|368:368,1,600,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

I have a headache forming now, so will continue the mod later. Also, before I go on, I want to ask you a few questions so I know what I should be focusing on in the mod.

Edit: For various reasons, I won't be continuing this mod.

Last edited by blissfulyoshi 2016-03-11T06:25:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Karen

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Karen 2016-03-09T08:59:05+00:00

M4M

[Normal]

increase difficulty settings a bit for a better spread, like AR5, OD4 and HP3
00:57:481 (1,2) - 1,0x DS?
00:35:662 (1,2) - why break the DS here x.x
02:16:401 - this green line doesn't make much sense imo, too short time before the spinner ends.
02:49:299 (1,2) - slider heads should be near like 02:46:572 (1,2) - this for consistent.
03:01:231 (3,1) - DS
not serious but you can make this diff more interesting by reducing some 1/1 spams and map some stronger sound instead

[Hard]

00:13:503 (4,1) - this is pretty hard in this level if difficulty, be kind for players.
SPOILER
02:35:322 (5,1) - ^
00:19:128 (5,2) - the reserve arrow is visible to me but i don't know if it's fine for other people, suggest to avoid it for safety.
01:12:310 (4,2) - ^
01:01:060 (2,3) - DS?
01:07:367 (2,3,4,5) - this is too hard , too big gap with Normal

[Extra]

00:02:765 (2,1) - AHH
00:50:833 (1,2,3,4) - this is badly overmapped and inconsistent with the previous pattern 00:48:106 (7,1) -
01:02:935 (1,2) - hmm it's better to overlap instead for a better readability of 3/4 rhythm.
02:16:401 - same with Normal
02:17:935 (1) - this is wrongly snapped, it should be on 1/8, starting from 02:17:893 - here, pic:
SPOILER

Both Insane and Extra diffs are well mapped :3 you may call me back for a bubble when you feel ready.

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2016-03-09T12:04:43+00:00

i wrote a similar mod like what karen wrote emmm...so i think it's unnecessary to post it here
call me after you finish working on previous mods if you still need me, then i will check it again and find if there still have anything to fix ._.

Tari

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Tari 2016-03-11T06:19:32+00:00

@blissfulyoshi : I basically fixed everything. What a beautiful slider. THANK YOU!!!

@Karen : I fixed everything but 00:50:833 (1,2,3,4) - because I wanted to distinguish instruments there.

Karen

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Karen 2016-03-11T06:26:16+00:00

Bubbled

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2016-03-11T08:50:48+00:00

hi Tari, i'm coming

[General]

widescreen support is unnecessary, uncheck it
about hp setting, i suggest to use hp 4.5-5 in Hard diff, because use same od in Hard and Insane is not good for a proper difficult spread.
beside hp, consider to use lower od in captin's Insane? try to use od 5.5 in Hard and od 7 in Insane would make spread better.

[Normal]

00:13:844 (1,2) - 3/2 beats gap would make new players be confused here, consider to use a repeat slider here like what you did at 00:16:572 (1) - , also can make this part's rhythm be more consistent.
02:17:935 (1) - this sound is unnecessary to follow imo, it's different from other sounds here, so maybe this circle can be removed to make rhythm here clear?
02:30:208 (1,2) - try this nicer blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697064
02:58:844 (1,2) - curve these slider to make here nicer? linear slider would be a little fast for new players to play imo
03:05:577 (1) - this spinner is too short in lowest diff, why not use a slider to instead of this short spinner?

[Hard]

00:02:935 - why not use 0.75x sv like what you did in Normal?
00:07:708 (3) - let 00:07:878 - this sound on a slider's tail is not good imo, maybe you can use two circles instead of this slider here?
00:11:287 (2) - i can't here a clear drum here, so consider to remove this circle? it's a little overmap imo o.o
00:54:924 (2) - ^
01:17:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large in a Hard diff and it would break a proper gap between Hard and Normal diff, so consider to move them closer?
02:37:708 (2,3) - make a better blanket like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697102
02:46:145 - seems here has no clear sound, so rhythm here should be this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697106
02:57:310 (1,2) - make a better blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697111

[captin's Insane]

01:51:344 (3,4,5) - jump is too large here, consider to move them closer?
02:24:753 - start break time from here like other diffs?

[Extra]

00:21:003 (2) - maybe make this slider parallel with 00:21:344 (3) - will make flow better here?
01:56:458 (2) - move to around 248 360 will make here looks nicer? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697146
03:05:236 (6,7,8,9) - they haven't constitute a perfect line, maybe you can move 4 pix left and 4pix down(one tiny grid) to fix that. btw consider set nc at 03:05:492 - ?

that's all, call me back when you are ready

captin1

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captin1 2016-03-11T20:43:41+00:00

go ahead and fix the break for me tari, i'd like to keep the jump as is since i really want that part to be impactful

Tari

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Tari 2016-03-14T03:55:47+00:00

"ZZHBOY"

ZZHBOY wrote:
hi Tari, i'm coming

[General]
widescreen support is unnecessary, uncheck it
about hp setting, i suggest to use hp 4.5-5 in Hard diff, because use same od in Hard and Insane is not good for a proper difficult spread.
beside hp, consider to use lower od in captin's Insane? try to use od 5.5 in Hard and od 7 in Insane would make spread better.
[Normal]
00:13:844 (1,2) - 3/2 beats gap would make new players be confused here, consider to use a repeat slider here like what you did at 00:16:572 (1) - , also can make this part's rhythm be more consistent. I was told by people to add some variety to rhythm instead of 1/1 spam and so i agreed. This is one of the parts I thought rhythm variation was good.
02:17:935 (1) - this sound is unnecessary to follow imo, it's different from other sounds here, so maybe this circle can be removed to make rhythm here clear? It would create large gap in the HP and only feels natural to follow white ticks after, so no change.
02:30:208 (1,2) - try this nicer blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697064
02:58:844 (1,2) - curve these slider to make here nicer? linear slider would be a little fast for new players to play imo I'd prefer linear these is no need to curve here.
03:05:577 (1) - this spinner is too short in lowest diff, why not use a slider to instead of this short spinner?
[Hard]
00:02:935 - why not use 0.75x sv like what you did in Normal? I changed sv at normal instead.
00:07:708 (3) - let 00:07:878 - this sound on a slider's tail is not good imo, maybe you can use two circles instead of this slider here? hmmm, I'm following drums but I ctrl+ged next slider
00:11:287 (2) - i can't here a clear drum here, so consider to remove this circle? it's a little overmap imo o.o hmm, I think it's okay. I stacked and drums are very strong here
00:54:924 (2) - ^
01:17:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large in a Hard diff and it would break a proper gap between Hard and Normal diff, so consider to move them closer?
02:37:708 (2,3) - make a better blanket like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697102
02:46:145 - seems here has no clear sound, so rhythm here should be this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697106 No, this is just a hold for the apparent drums here.
02:57:310 (1,2) - make a better blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697111
[captin's Insane]
01:51:344 (3,4,5) - jump is too large here, consider to move them closer?
02:24:753 - start break time from here like other diffs?
[Extra]
00:21:003 (2) - maybe make this slider parallel with 00:21:344 (3) - will make flow better here? hmm no, it was not my intention.
01:56:458 (2) - move to around 248 360 will make here looks nicer? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4697146
03:05:236 (6,7,8,9) - they haven't constitute a perfect line, maybe you can move 4 pix left and 4pix down(one tiny grid) to fix that. btw consider set nc at 03:05:492 - ?
that's all, call me back when you are ready