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Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size)

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Mok
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 27 gennaio 2011 at 23:15:37

Artist: Cristina D'Avena
Title: Sailor Moon (TV Size)
Source: Sailor Moon
Tags: Bishoujo Senshi Mahou Pretty Guardian Kuroneko-sHerald Kaneko Italian Openings Project
BPM: 132,7
Filesize: 15690kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Sailor ChibiMok (4,52 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Sailor Kaneko (3,3 stars, 166 notes)
  3. Sailor Kuro (1,55 stars, 75 notes)
  4. Sailor Mok (4,85 stars, 310 notes)
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size)
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Italian Opening for Sailor Moon anime. Now is Pending :D Please enjoy!

Skin: Ready!
Timing by Armin, Card N' FoRcE! <3
Insane: [Sailor Mok] Done! (Hitsounds by Myrko <3)
Hard: [Sailor ChibiMok] Done! (Hitsounds by TuningSquall <3)
Normal: [Sailor Kaneko] Done by Kaneko, thanks!
Easy: [Sailor Kuro] Done by Kuroneko-sHerald, thanks!
Last edited by Mok , edited 52 times in total.
Armin
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Nuovo mp3 HQ: http://www.mediafire.com/?xz4mmybkz6nxb7l

BPM:132,69
Offset:208
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Better Video :D

Sailor Moon

EDIT: Download: Sailor moon.rar

BG
fuffolo
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fuffolo
New Hitsound for Sailor Mok difficulty :)

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Mok].osu
Anto
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Anto
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mks_old
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mks_old
omg beautiful map!
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Sailor Mok
- 00:43:617 - Start kiai here
- 00:58:087 - ^
- 01:28:835 - ^
- 01:39:687 - ^
- 01:41:270 (1,7) - I don't think these two 0.5x slider go very well, they seem really random imo. Maybe leave as normal?
- 01:43:079 (7,8,9) - If you do ^ then make this start on 01:43:305 - with a triple, the rhythm you kinda have going now is kinda weird 01:43:079 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) -
- I can hear a lot of finishes in the song that you don't hitsound, I usually don't like to critique people's hitsounds, but maybe go through the song and listen where there are finish as add some soft-finish hitsounds where you hear em? Lemme know if you need me to point out a few.

Just those suggestions, is fine.

Sailor ChibiMok
Same kiai suggestion as Sailor Mok

Sailor Kaneko
- 00:19:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't understand the point of the kiai here? Plus, you're not allowed to spam kiai like this.
- 01:03:513 (5) - Start the kiai on the note?
- 00:56:504 - Again don't see point in this kiai?
- 00:58:087 - Start kiai here.
- 01:10:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kiai spam
- 01:21:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
- 01:28:835 - Start kiai here

Sailor Kuro
Since it seems you have the same kiai at Sailor Kaneko, same changes.
Also, bigger hit circles? Just seems natural for an easy? o.o
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Fixes.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kuro].osu
Last edited by Kuroneko-sHerald , edited 1 time in total.
Lunah_old
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^^
Gonzvlo
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General
  1. Sexy~
  2. You need a "section-fail.png"
  3. You also need "approachcircle.png"
  4. Add a Preview Point to "Sailor Kuro"
  5. Also add Lead In to "Sailor Kuro"
  6. Oh, Why is spinner-metre covering, spinner circle ): ?
Sailor Kuro:
  1. 00:19:086 - The kiai fountains are not creating a nice effect, I suggest to remove them.
  2. 00:08:799 (5,6) - Unstack to make it easier for beginners.
  3. 00:35:025 (2) - Unstack too hard for beginners.
  4. 00:38:643 (3) - ^
  5. 01:37:427 (2) - ^
  6. 01:39:687 (1) - Increase Spacing, a vertical flip would fix it.
  7. 01:46:470 - End this difficulty here. (Like the other ones.)
Sailor Kaneko:
  1. 00:27:564 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  2. 00:35:704 (7,1) - Swap New Combo.
  3. 00:39:547 (1,2) - You used the same sliders for Easy, Try to use circles this time?
  4. 00:52:661 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:54:695 (4) - New Combo.
  6. 01:10:296 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  7. 01:37:879 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  8. 01:39:913 (4) - New Combo.
  9. 01:41:044 (1) - Remove New Combo.
Sailor ChibiMok
  1. Custom Hitsounds would sound nice here too.
  2. 00:53:339 (5,6,7,8) - Make spacing regular.
Sailor Mok
  1. 01:46:470 - End this difficulty here. (Like the other ones.)
  2. 00:09:025 (5) - Move it 2 grids to the right.
  3. No major problems.
Great Job, Star.
Last edited by Gonzvlo , edited 1 time in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Add a Preview Point to "Sailor Kuro" Added.
  2. Also add Lead In to "Sailor Kuro" Added.
Sailor Kuro:
  1. 00:19:086 - The kiai fountains are not creating a nice effect, I suggest to remove them. Done.
  2. 00:08:799 (5,6) - Unstack to make it easier for beginners. I've re-done the diff.
  3. 00:35:025 (2) - Unstack too hard for beginners. I've re-done the diff.
  4. 00:38:643 (3) - ^ ^
  5. 01:37:427 (2) - ^ ^
  6. 01:39:687 (1) - Increase Spacing, a vertical flip would fix it. ^
  7. 01:46:470 - End this difficulty here. (Like the other ones.) Done.
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kuro].osu
Teara
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Teara
Thanks.

Did most of them.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kaneko].osu
Cyclohexane
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Cyclohexane
Okay, here comes.

General
-Yay, custom hitsounds.
-Awesome sliders.
-Excellent work on the custom skin, I already enjoyed that on Listen To The Stereo!!
-Sorry if this mod is crappy/extremely tight, but your map is already pretty awesome.

Sailor Kuro
00:08:799 (4) - This one is far from the last circle, so I'd suggest maybe a new combo.
01:10:635 - I'd remove those since it made me lag with all the fountains.
01:21:487 - ^
01:43:305 (1) - Isn't that spinner a little too... Silent?
Other than that, awesome.

Sailor Kaneko
00:26:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Few spacing differences between some of the circles, maybe set them equal for the sake of the design.
00:31:408 (6) - Maybe move this one so that (1), (4) and (5) make a triangular pattern ? http://puu.sh/vQm
00:33:895 (1) - This tricked me, I thought when I first played it that it was a 1/2 space between 00:33:443 (6) and this one. Maybe move it here ? http://puu.sh/vQn
00:57:635 (1) - I got misled here too. I'd move it over here: http://puu.sh/vQr
01:03:513 (5) - This slider doesn't fit with the other one. Maybe change it around a little bit ? Just so that it fits a little better.
01:10:522 (8) - Instead of placing it here I'd place it under the (7).
01:21:600 (1) - I still lag here.
01:33:809 (5) - It feels a little off-centered. How about moving it 1 grid to the right ?
Still, very nice one.

Sailor ChibiMok
01:40:366 (2,3) - Wow. It think this is out of place. Maybe move the (3) to 01:40:592 ?
Awesome. I barely have anything to say about this one.

Sailor Mok
00:54:469 (1) - This is a personal preference, but I like to have space between a slider end and the next circle.
01:03:965 (9) - I already said I like your sliders, however this one is a little odd.
Other than that, very very cool.

And this totally deserves a star.
Teara
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Teara
Mod done =p

Thank you.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kaneko].osu
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Mr Color wrote:

Sailor Kuro
00:08:799 (4) - This one is far from the last circle, so I'd suggest maybe a new combo. Well, there is a continuity in ther song, so I don't change it.
01:10:635 - I'd remove those since it made me lag with all the fountains. If others will experience lags, maybe I'll remove it :(
01:21:487 - ^ ^
01:43:305 (1) - Isn't that spinner a little too... Silent? It's done on purpouse :P
Other than that, awesome.
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Volevo rimuovere l'audio dal video ma ancora una volta non me lo fa fare .-.
- Sailor Kuro:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Lol le fontane nella pausa a 01:11:991 e 01:23:754. Chissà, essendo in pausa per me possono andare.
    Bel miglioramento, direi :)
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:18:069 (4) - secondo me una nuova combo aiuta a capire che si spezza il ritmo.
    00:25:077 (5) - stesso motivo, per far capire che non è più da "3 rimbalzi"
- Sailor Kaneko:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    00:20:103 - 01:11:539 - Let's hope all these kiai will be allowed!
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:36:156 (2) - how about making this start 1/2 later and add an hitcircle at 00:36:156?
- Sailor ChibiMok:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    "Chibi" lol.
    Magari abbassa leggermente il volume delle sezioni Normal
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:34:121 (7,8) - metti il finish alla fine del 7 invece che nell'8?
    00:54:469 (1) - fallo finire a 00:56:956?
- Sailor mok:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Slidertick rate 0.5 rovina molti slider secondo me.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:17:164 (6) - un pelino più a sinistra? non vedo il motivo per farlo più lontano qui
    01:33:809 (5) - 01:34:261 (1) - ^ stessa cosa?
Mi pare tutto ok, ben fatto :)
Teara
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Teara
Thank you for the mod.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kaneko].osu
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Volevo rimuovere l'audio dal video ma ancora una volta non me lo fa fare .-. Ma non c'è l'audio D:
- Sailor Kuro:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Lol le fontane nella pausa a 01:11:991 e 01:23:754. Chissà, essendo in pausa per me possono andare.
    Bel miglioramento, direi :)
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:18:069 (4) - secondo me una nuova combo aiuta a capire che si spezza il ritmo. Fatto.
    00:25:077 (5) - stesso motivo, per far capire che non è più da "3 rimbalzi" Fatto.
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kuro].osu
kodomonoyume
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kodomonoyume
nice Italian song~ :)
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Easy:
10:608(6) New combo.

Medium:
55:826(1) Remove combo.
1:04:643(1) ^

I'll mod the other 2 diffs later.
NotShinta
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NotShinta
General:
Inconsistent kiai and breaks between all diffs. Please fix.

Sailor Mok:
Meh, slow slider speed.
I nazi spacing a lot here. I'm fine with spacing not being perfect, but it changing in the middle of the combo is just ugly and potentially confusing.
00:08:573 (3,4) - Move these 1 grid closer to the center each
00:21:008 (1,3) - These claps are awfully loud and ugly D: Finishes there sound fine.
00:25:756 (4) - Spacing
00:27:564 (1) - Anti-jump, it trips me up.
00:38:643 (3) - move this into the center here
00:50:174 (5) - This doesn't sound like it's mapped to anything.
01:33:809 (5) - Spacing...
01:42:627 (5) - Remove this note, rearrange the combo.

Sailor ChibiMok
00:11:286 - This break is random and unnecessary.
01:08:035 (4,5,6,7,8) - This ain't mapped to anything obvious. And it plays really badly anyway if it is.
01:25:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is sexy.

Sailor Kaneko:
Custom hitsounds here but not anywhere else? D:

Sailor Kuro:
Those kiai restreams during the breaks are... silly. Plus not all of them start at the right time, e.g 01:12:217, 01:22:165
00:32:312 (1,2,3) - :3
Somewhat random spinners, especially for an Easy (?) difficulty.

Yeah, not much technically wrong with the mapping then. Hitsounds and spacing do need work in your diffs though.

Good luck with this.
Aleks719
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Sailor Kuro
00:54:017 - add note
remove unused timing points.

Sailor Kaneko
00:19:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont sense music. increase the volume
00:26:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Imho, it sounds better :
00:36:382 (3) - finish it at 00:37:512.
00:37:739 - add note
00:37:965 - ^
00:38:191 - ^
00:38:417 - ^

Sailor ChibiMok
00:21:008 (1,2,3,4) - remove clap, add whistle
01:05:322 (1,2,3) - remove whistle from the end of every slider
01:15:270 (3,4) - remove clap

Sailor Mok
00:46:443 - remove note
01:11:539 - ^


That's all. Star. Good luck.
Mok
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Mok
Thanks you both, They will fix themselves :D
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
! :3
theMikeAG
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theMikeAG
Oh boy, Italian Sailor Moon. My... favorite?
[General] I find it kind of silly how you have those custom hitsounds, but I only remember hearing them in one difficulty. Try to incorperate them into all difficulties, they're pretty cool. :)

[Sailor Kuro] 01:46:244 (1) - I find it strange that this and Sailor Mok are the only difficulties that have a note like this. The other two difficuties have the spinner end here. Just an oddity I noticed.

[Sailor Kaneko] 00:50:852 (1) - This kind of slider appears numerous times in this difficulty and it's not completely straight. Here's a picture to help you perfect it. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43197 (Also, sorry about the black background. I deleted the storyboard and background elements while modding. Too distracting.)
These sliders appear at 00:53:113 (4), 00:58:087 (3), and 01:17:983 (4).

[Sailor ChibiMok] 00:06:538 (8,1,2,3,4) - This star pattern looks kind of wonky. Move (2) up two spaces and (3) up one space.
00:09:251 (6,7,8,9,10) - Why does this look so familiar? (see above) Scoot (7) and (8) up one space.
00:39:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another star pattern. Scoot note (2) to the right one space.
00:43:617 (1) - Scoot one space to the left.
01:00:574 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Wow, for being a Sailor Moon Map, there are a lot of stars. Scoot notes (6) and (5) right one space.

[Sailor Mok] 01:23:183 (2,3,4,5,6) - You need to make this pattern symmetrical. Scoot note (4) up and left one space and scoot note (6) up one space.
01:33:357 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Again, this pattern needs to be symmetrical. Scoot note (1) over one space.

I can't say I'm a big fan of the song, but the map is really good. I'm afraid I can't give you a moon, but I can give you a star. ;)
Mok
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Mok
I've chosen to not follow your advices for my difficulties
Mint Bunny
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Mint Bunny
suggestions

Sailor Kuro:
00:25:077 (1): delete two repeats and add a note with finish at 00:25:982 ?
I think sliders like 01:08:713 aren't that great to use as there harder to read.
a little tricky for easiest diff?

Sailor Kaneko
00:25:982 (7): i don't like where that is placed D:
00:38:211 (x): put something here?
00:56:504 (1,2,3): stack these?
01:13:235 (8): what's the point of this note? delete it
01:24:087 (4): new combo? also, stack dosn't seem to fit here imo

Sailor ChibiMok
00:13:999 (1): that dosn't fit right D:
00:28:243 (5): ^
00:31:860 (3): add finish sound?
00:31:860 (9): remove clap and ^
01:40:479 (3): move to 01:40:592 ?

Sailor Mok
00:19:651 (5): align with 4?
00:45:878 (1): align with 5?

General
nice sliders and skin elements :oops:
star~
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Yeah , just delete that "section-fail.png".

STAR :D
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Kuroneko-sHerald
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NotShinta wrote:

Sailor Kuro:
Those kiai restreams during the breaks are... silly. lol Plus not all of them start at the right time, e.g 01:12:217, 01:22:165 Thats not totally true, because they follow the "finish" sounds instead of the main melody.
00:32:312 (1,2,3) - :3 Oh, it's true XD
Somewhat random spinners, especially for an Easy (?) difficulty. Well, maybe one :P

Aleks719 wrote:

Sailor Kuro
00:54:017 - add note No.
remove unused timing points. Where? I can't find any unused timing point D:

theMikeAG wrote:

[Sailor Kuro] 01:46:244 (1) - I find it strange that this and Sailor Mok are the only difficulties that have a note like this. The other two difficuties have the spinner end here. Just an oddity I noticed. Yeah 8-)

animelover1432 wrote:

Sailor Kuro:
00:25:077 (1): delete two repeats and add a note with finish at 00:25:982 ? That was a hard choice, they sounds well in both way. Btw, I've choosed to change (without the finish).
I think sliders like 01:08:713 aren't that great to use as there harder to read. I've tried other combinations but I don't like them.
a little tricky for easiest diff?
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Sailor Moon (TV Size) (Mok) [Sailor Kuro].osu


P.S. Mok, solo perché non controllo due giorni non significa che ho abbandonato XD
Mok
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Mok
Però è sempre meglio controllarvi per non dovervi far controllare fantastiliardi di mod, Kuroneko-mAid :D

Kaneko will fix on her own.
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
SailorMok
01:03:965 (9) - make symmetrical
01:35:392 (7) - use this? 


344,288,95392,2,0,B|344:368|256:424|168:368|168:288,1,280,2|0

Chibi
00:19:877 (4) - make symmetrical to (1)
00:39:321 (2,5) - make symmetrical to (5)
00:43:617 (1) - 1 grid right to be symmetrical with (5) of the previous combo
00:52:208 (3,4) - sounds better if you swap (3) with (4) on the timeline
01:01:026 (2) - 1 grid right
01:09:165 (3) - use this code in the .osu , makes slider symmetrical like this: http://puu.sh/CoD
176,112,69165,2,2,B|112:112|56:192|112:272|176:272,1,240,8|4
01:11:878 (3) - 1 grid left? and then move 01:12:783 (5,6) - 1 grid right?
01:19:113 (5) - 1 grid up
01:26:348 (6,7,8) - 1 grid left
01:37:426 (3,4) - same as 00:52:208 (3,4)

Kaneko - Too many kiai fountains!
01:03:513 (5) - make where it doesn't touch the previous slider?
01:42:853 (5,6) - 1 grid left

Kuro - Too many kiai fountains!
00:10:608 (6) - new combo
01:36:070 (1) - make symmetrical?
Diasios
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Diasios
[General]

  • • Aggiungi nelle tags "op project" (ti ricordo inoltre che le tags devono essere uguali in tutte le difficoltà)
[Sailor Kuro]

  • • Come forse già avrai capito in canzoni così corte non vedo il motivo di aggiungere dei break, quindi rimuovili e mappa la canzone per intero.
    • Troppe fontane kiai per i miei gusti :S Elimina quelle che si trovano nei break.
    • 00:06:764 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
    • 00:10:608 (6) - ^
[Sailor Kaneko]

  • • Remove some kiai fountains, they're useless imo.
    • 00:12:000 (break) - Delete this break and map this part.
[Sailor ChibiMok]

  • • Ti piacciono i clap soft, eh? Io ti consiglierei di toglierli e di usare dei whistle soft al loro posto.
    • 00:12:000 (x) - Perchè questa parte non l'hai mappata? Cerca di aggiungere qualche pattern.
    • 01:40:479 (3) - Spostalo sul tick bianco (01:40:592)
[Sailor Mok]

  • • Stesso discorso per i clap soft anche in questa difficoltà: cerca di rimuoverli e di sostituirli con qualcos'altro.
    • 00:12:416 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo"
    • 00:13:547 (1) - ^
    • 01:08:487 (1) - ^
    • 01:10:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Questa parte suona male: elimina il (2), il (3) e il (5) e aggiungi un cerchio qui 01:12:330 (tick rosso)
    • 01:13:913 (4) - Fai finire questo slider qui 01:14:365 (tick bianco)
    • 01:35:392 (7) - Fai finire questo slider qui 01:36:070 (tick bianco)
    • 01:46:244 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo"
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