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Rave-up

AkinOppai wrote:

For the "Insane" difficulty

00:39:972 (1) - You could replace it with a spinner until the scream ends instead of a break. i feel like a break here would be better

00:43:010 (1,2,3,4) - You should replace those with a slider or remove them completely. I think it's fine

For the "Normal" difficulty

00:12:630 (1,2) - Do not stack the 2 at the end of 1 move it to right like this https://www.dropbox.com/s/un4wu1slyn7bv1g/Screenshot%202016-01-24%2008.03.43.png?dl=0 done

00:35:415 (4) - Change the slider to a half circle like this instead of that shape https://www.dropbox.com/s/2kanysbvk4if6sy/Screenshot%202016-01-24%2008.07.21.png?dl=0

00:39:972 (1) - Make that slider until 00:42:441 then at 00:42:820 add a long half circle shaped slider until 00:44:149 then add 2 circles First circle to 00:44:529 Second circle to 00:45:099 In final it should look something like this https://www.dropbox.com/s/6so5eoljss0iow5/Screenshot%202016-01-24%2008.12.56.png?dl=0 I think this shape is ok

01:02:187 (3,4) - Do not stack them make them like this https://www.dropbox.com/s/iw0tjxdwilfcyx7/Screenshot%202016-01-24%2008.15.14.png?dl=0 I think it's fine

01:12:820 (3,4) - Make the same thing that i said at the top! 01:02:187 Same as above

That's it Good Luck ! :lol:
Thanks.
Janpai
Wao :O
I really love this song maybe you can use this as BG to be more related to the anime (if you wanted to)
anime.wall404.com/fubuki-blizzard_of_hell-girl-art-2560x1600/
Resize it for the sake of ranking, goodluck hope this get ranked!
Jonarwhal
Hey there~ NM from my queue~

Easy
  1. 00:17:187 (3) - Consider curving it downwards for slightly better flow. Example
  2. 01:01:238 (1) - Curve this or do something to make it different from the previous two sliders.
Normal
  1. Make the circles a bit smaller. They look too puffy and big.
  2. Also, consider 3.5 for AR.
  3. 00:20:605 (4,5) - Move both of these farther left for flow. (Trust me. I tried it.)
  4. 00:22:314 (2,3) - ^Same, but move them both farther right.
  5. 00:25:542 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
  6. 00:59:719 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Too many straight sliders.
  7. 01:18:896 (6) - Make this more horizontal, 01:18:896 (6,1) - and raise these because 01:18:896 (6,1) - this goes really far down. And then, raise 01:22:504 (1,2) - these too.
Nya's Hard
  1. Great diff~!!
  2. 01:20:985 (1) - Make this sliderwave a bit more neat. That's all I could find.
Insane
  1. 00:33:896 (1) - Blanket this with 00:33:137 (5) - this and stack 00:34:656 (3) - this with 00:33:137 (5) - this.
  2. 00:36:934 (1,2) - These aren't fully stacked.
  3. 00:39:403 (3) - There's no real reason to start this on a red tick, try this.
  4. 00:49:086 (1,2) - These aren't fully stacked.
  5. 00:57:820 (3,4) - Consider stacking these.
  6. 00:59:719 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
  7. 01:13:390 (1,2) - ^, curve (2) a bit less.
  8. 01:15:289 (3,4) - Fix Blanket.
That's all~ Good Luck!! ;)
Topic Starter
Rave-up

jonawaga wrote:

Hey there~ NM from my queue~


Normal
  1. Make the circles a bit smaller. They look too puffy and big. nah
Insane
  1. 00:57:820 (3,4) - Consider stacking these. nah
That's all~ Good Luck!! ;)
everything else fixed. thanks
Shurelia
A beautiful song coming from a good anime.



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- Based on the artist's name from : http://vgmdb.net/artist/2055 . The real name is "森口 博子" not "博子森口".
- Not very important but you can add "Kenichi Maeyamada" to the tags. He's the song's composer.
- Remove .osb cause you don't seem to use any SB.
- The title also should be "星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)" not "星より先に見つけてあげる"

[elNess' Easy]
  1. Ok.

[Normal]
  1. Are you sure to ignore these strong sound on 00:44:529 - and 00:45:099 - ? If you want to add it reduce the spinner length into 00:43:010 - . This is better for me.
  2. 01:02:187 (3,4) - Not going to make another 1/2 slider like the others?

[Nya's Hard]
  1. 00:35:415 (1) - bit too hard to play because of the sudden jump with the same tempo. Would prefer something like this : http://puu.sh/mJX0E.jpg .
  2. 01:19:086 (3) - Try to stack it with 01:19:466 (1) - ? I dunno but it maybe because there's so much sudden jump at here and there so this one kinda suprising for me.

[Insane]
  1. 01:02:187 (3,4) - This one is unstacked while 01:03:706 (3,4) - this one is stacked it could make the players confused including me so try to make it same.
  2. Increase the AR into 8,3 - 8,5 so the jumps would be more readable.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Shurelia wrote:

A beautiful song coming from a good anime.



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- - Remove .osb cause you don't seem to use any SB. idk where the .osb file is lol
- The title also should be "星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)" not "星より先に見つけてあげる" current title should be fine

[Normal]
  1. 01:02:187 (3,4) - Not going to make another 1/2 slider like the others? I wanted a little bit of variation here, so I will keep

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
All others fixed, thanks.

Jana Marie wrote:

Wao :O
I really love this song maybe you can use this as BG to be more related to the anime (if you wanted to)
anime.wall404.com/fubuki-blizzard_of_hell-girl-art-2560x1600/
Resize it for the sake of ranking, goodluck hope this get ranked!
Well the current picture is relevant to the context of the song (If you've read the lyrics that is.)
Shurelia

Rave-up wrote:

- The title also should be "星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)" not "星より先に見つけてあげる" current title should be fine
All others fixed, thanks.
Should see this : http://vgmdb.net/album/55383 and use the "Japanese" one.
Topic Starter
Rave-up
ehhh k, changed title.
Ujimatsu Chiya
all fixed except nazi things

SPOILER
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55159
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru
TitleUnicode:星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)
Artist:Hiroko Moriguchi
ArtistUnicode:森口 博子
Creator:Rave-up
Version:eINess' Easy
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:-Nya- eINess ending 1 hero home saitama genos city one punch man Kenichi Maeyamada
BeatmapID:883798
BeatmapSetID:404204

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CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3.5
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thanks mod~
SuperMIC
queue

[eINess' Easy]

00:39:972 (1) - tbh I think you can make a much cooler slider than this. I'd go here for tips/inspiration.
01:22:504 (1) - I actually think this spinner should start here: 01:24:023. Either way, you should also add an inherited timing point to soften the ending hitsound.

Super polished, nothing terribly wrong for me.

[Normal]

01:03:706 (3) - Consider making this curve the other way for better flow.


01:17:757 - To match the vocals, I think there should be some hitobject here. However, you'd probably have to change (4) and (5) for this.
01:24:213 (1) - As with easy, you should add an inherited timing point to soften the ending hitsound.

Very polished diff as well.

[Nya's Hard]

00:14:529 (3) - Very Nazi, but consider moving this 2-3 grid spaces right for better curve.
00:35:415 (1) - I don't think it's necessary to have a jump here, especially with all the previous 1/2.
01:20:985 (1) - Ahhhh this slider can be improved.


super good

[Insane]

00:30:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these should all be spaced further apart, but the spacing in between them should be more or less constant.
00:38:833 (2,3) - Space these further away.
01:18:896 (5) - This needs to be spaced further away from (4).
01:22:504 (1,2) - Consider having these at a lower slider velocity.
01:24:213 (1) - Same thing with silencing the ending.

---

Super polished mapset! GL

-SMIC
Topic Starter
Rave-up

SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

[Normal]

01:17:757 - To match the vocals, I think there should be some hitobject here. However, you'd probably have to change (4) and (5) for this. I think it's fine the way it is.

Very polished diff as well.

[Insane]

01:22:504 (1,2) - Consider having these at a lower slider velocity. It's fine

---

Super polished mapset! GL

-SMIC
Everything else fixed, thanks.
Mikara
Really liked it, :D i hope it gets ranked soon, time for me to look at your other maps :)
SoySauce
Hi from my queue :D

eINess' Easy
  1. 00:20:225 (3) - Make the slider do the sharp corner at the white tick to emphasize on the drum
  2. Everything else looks very good
Normal
  1. 00:38:453 (4) - ctrl+h this?
  2. 01:02:187 (3,4) - Why this random 2 notes that is suddenly different with than the others? Suggest you keep the consistency of the slider pattern
  3. 01:12:820 (3,4) - ^
Nya's Hard
  1. This feels like a jump from Normal diff honestly with the new combo jumps in it. The Normal is not even 2* and this almost went to 3*
  2. 00:17:187 (1) - Maybe you can put the red anchor at the middle instead?
  3. 00:24:782 (1) - The small curve at the start just looks kinda weird. Maybe you could do another shape though it's fine as it is
  4. 01:15:858 - This beat is unmapped
  5. 01:18:896 - ^
  6. 01:20:985 (1) - This sliderwave can be improved
Insane
  1. 00:13:200 (2,3) - I recommend switching (2)'s and (3)'s place (means that 2 starts at 3's position) so that it will flow better
  2. 00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps here? Maybe something like this where 7 is at 1's position. Just my suggestion
  3. 00:39:972 (1) - Maybe you could put this at the top-right area of the screen so that it doesn't reverse the flow of 00:39:213 (3)?

And that's all from me! Hope this helps and good luck with your map :D
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue :D

Insane
  1. 00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps here? Maybe something like this where 7 is at 1's position. Just my suggestion for now I'll say no to this one but might consider it later on.
And that's all from me! Hope this helps and good luck with your map :D
everything else fixed. thanks
-Nya-
Made the necessary changes. Thanks everyone for the mods~
Btw, the current gap between my diff and the Normal should be totally fine since the Normal has a lot of 1/2 rhythms and isn't really that easy. Don't just look at star ratings to judge the difficulty of a diff.

Update
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55159
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SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15665,27817,43007,55159,67311,70349
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

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Title:Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru
TitleUnicode:星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)
Artist:Hiroko Moriguchi
ArtistUnicode:森口 博子
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Nya's Hard
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:-Nya- eINess ending 1 hero home saitama genos city one punch man Kenichi Maeyamada
BeatmapID:879462
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CircleSize:4
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ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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460,352,38074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Rave-up
updated
Ujimatsu Chiya
@SuperMICrophone : 1st one,cool engough I think o3o and 2nd one, I want to emphasize vocals
@Cagrux : I don't want use slidertick sounds orz

thanks mod but I don't want change those.

2000 post!!
Electoz
ayy lmao

[General]

  1. Tbh I think your bg is quite misleading, the source of bg you used is from a visual novel named "Grisaia no Kajitsu". I can understand that you're trying to relate your bg with the context but it doesn't look so "anime-like" compared to the video lol.
  2. Add a video in Nya's Hard pls.
[eINess' Easy]

  1. 01:05:036 (2,3) - Can you improve this blanket? It could have been neater imo.
  2. 01:22:504 (1) - Maybe lower/silence the volume at the spinner's end?
[Normal]

  1. Why using the same AR as Easy lol, and your SV is pretty high for Normal so I think AR5 would fit better.
  2. Imo OD and HP should be at least 4 since you already have Easy.
  3. 00:15:289 (2) - Is there any reason for putting a whistle here? Imo the really audible sound is on 00:15:099 not 00:15:289 . Easy has this as well but I guess adding 1/2 stuff might be too hard for that diff so yeah.
  4. 00:37:504 (2) - Could have been moved a bit to the right for a better angle with 00:36:934 (1) . (Well of course if you fixed that you have to move some stuff around there to keep DS)
  5. 01:19:276 - Nothing lands here lol, I would recommend you to either remove the finish or just skip that beat.
  6. 01:19:466 (1,1,2) - I don't want to be nitpicking but you can improve the symmetry here. > http://puu.sh/mONbD/444c543fea.jpg
[Nya's Hard]

  1. 00:32:377 (1) - Just my opinion but I think this slider should be placed differently from the rest of your pattern because the chime(bell, or whatever) landed only on this slider and it feels much stronger compared to 00:32:757 (2,3,4) .
  2. 01:17:187 (3,4) - Maybe it's just me, but I find the flow here a bit uncomfortable, I feel like you're running out of space or sth.
[Insane]

  1. 01:01:048 (4,1) - The flow here is very uncomfortable imo. The angle just doesn't feel right.
  2. 01:18:896 (5) - Just a random nazi but how about putting an NC here for a better readability?
  3. 01:22:504 (1,2) - Bro pls you can use a lower SV for these.
lol hope this helps, good luck~
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Electoz wrote:

ayy lmao

[Normal]

  1. 00:15:289 (2) - Is there any reason for putting a whistle here? Imo the really audible sound is on 00:15:099 not 00:15:289 . Easy has this as well but I guess adding 1/2 stuff might be too hard for that diff so yeah. keepin the whistle
lol hope this helps, good luck~
Everything else fixed, teefd new bg off some guy and updated. Thanks
Aoba Misaki
wow i like this map, but my modding is low qual. sorry ;w;;

[Normal]
00:15:289 (2) - move 00:15:099 - follow strong rhythm
00:53:263 (4) - try move body's red dot move can be full-overlap with 00:50:985 - head? (http://puu.sh/mPopz.jpg)
00:43:770 (1) - delete circle. cuz spinner's delay is short. i know that is unrankable! (http://puu.sh/mPg7U.jpg)

[NyardHard]
00:15:668 (1) - make ds 1.2?
00:24:782 (1) - hmm is this curve for 00:24:213 - blanket? asdf
00:25:922 (4) - how about reduce 1.7?
00:35:036 (5,6) - not bad change slider. if you ok
00:47:187 (3,4) - ^
01:05:795 (1) - no fit rhythm ds 2.0 change 1.2

good luck!
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Hello- wrote:

wow i like this map, but my modding is low qual. sorry ;w;;

[Normal]
00:15:289 (2) - move 00:15:099 - follow strong rhythm
00:53:263 (4) - try move body's red dot move can be full-overlap with 00:50:985 - head? (http://puu.sh/mPopz.jpg)
00:43:770 (1) - delete circle. cuz spinner's delay is short. i know that is unrankable! (http://puu.sh/mPg7U.jpg)

good luck!
All fixed. Thanks for mod.
lit120
i'll just go for Insane diff since i'm kinda tired now...

[Insane]
  1. Fix those blankets man. There are some that is off. I'm not going to point all of them though
  2. 00:12:061 (3,1) - this blanket can make it better a little
  3. 00:16:998 (4,5,6) - try to make the blanket more better here
  4. 00:27:820 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:29:339 (5,6) - ^
  6. 00:40:067 - use a spinner here for following the vocal's sound only
  7. 00:57:251 (2,4) - proper blanket, please
  8. 01:19:466 (1) - why is this closer to (7)?
  9. 01:24:213 (1) - remove whistle, since i don't think whistle is really fit to this song at the ending part
GL!
Topic Starter
Rave-up

-Hakurei- wrote:

i'll just go for Insane diff since i'm kinda tired now...

[Insane]
  1. Fix those blankets man. There are some that is off. I'm not going to point all of them though
  2. 00:12:061 (3,1) - this blanket can make it better a little
  3. 00:16:998 (4,5,6) - try to make the blanket more better here
  4. 00:27:820 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:29:339 (5,6) - ^
  6. 00:40:067 - use a spinner here for following the vocal's sound only
  7. 00:57:251 (2,4) - proper blanket, please
  8. 01:19:466 (1) - why is this closer to (7)?
  9. 01:24:213 (1) - remove whistle, since i don't think whistle is really fit to this song at the ending part
GL!
Everything fixed. Thanks
Wou_old_1
Request from my queues

Normal
  1. Perhaps slider velocity is too fast? .. That makes people surprised that it looks fast
  2. Do you feel DS is too far?
  3. 00:53:263 (4,3) - Looks ugly
  4. 01:16:428 (1,3) - There is a possibility of overlap like this make beginners feel confused. Cuz this overlap only good like this 01:17:947 (4,5) -
eINess' Easy
  1. 00:39:972 (1) - Not a spinner ?.. why i have a question like that ? Cuz, usually slider like this 00: 39: 972 (1) - make the beginner difficulty. Cuz, it will look like slow motion? maybe ?
  2. 00:51:365 (4) - Maybe turn it into a circle? Then move this spin 00:52:124 (1) - to 00:51:744 - So that spin look longer
GL ( '-' )
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Wou wrote:

Request from my queues

Normal
  1. Perhaps slider velocity is too fast? .. That makes people surprised that it looks fast it's fine
  2. Do you feel DS is too far? nope
  3. 00:53:263 (4,3) - Looks ugly i like it /:
  4. 01:16:428 (1,3) - There is a possibility of overlap like this make beginners feel confused. Cuz this overlap only good like this 01:17:947 (4,5) - fixed

GL ( '-' )
Thanks for mod.
-Nya-
Fixed a couple of stuff.

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: One-Punch Man - Ending LYRICS [JAP ENG] "Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru ()" [1080p].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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ArtistUnicode:森口 博子
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Nya's Hard
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Ujimatsu Chiya
@Wou
00:39:972 (1) - still playable so I want to keep this slider
00:51:365 (4,1) - follow drum beats


@Electoz
all fixed

thanks mod~

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Kalibe
Idk why am i mod this, looks ok, but anyways xd. Mayb no kd?

eINess

- Uncheck Widescreen
- Btw AR seems high a bit.. idk if 3 would be enough tho. Also OD -> it'll be cool decrease it to 2,5 as you did with HP B)
- 01:05:795 (3,4) - Please, uncheck Grid Snap and fix spacing.

Normal

- 00:45:479 (1,2) - Switch NC, bcs 00:46:048 (2) - that note starts a new measure of song.
- 01:19:466 (1) - Maybe make a slider art? This slider looks weird pls /w\
- 01:23:263 - This is the most worry from me. As you hear, that beat is inaudiable - there's nothing to map www. Consider and probably change it.

Nya

- AR seems also high a little. AR 7 looks cool and plays nice o/
- 01:27:061 - Delete this greenline - it's useless imo.

Insane

- 00:16:238 (2,5) - Nazi stack ;w;
- 00:39:972 (1) - Add whistle ? Sounds cool with those beats :p

Well, that's all. Nothing to say.. just perfect, also anime is intresting. Good lucck o/
Topic Starter
Rave-up

Kalibe wrote:

Idk why am i mod this, looks ok, but anyways xd. Mayb no kd?

Normal

- 00:45:479 (1,2) - Switch NC, bcs 00:46:048 (2) - that note starts a new measure of song.
- 01:19:466 (1) - Maybe make a slider art? This slider looks weird pls /w\
- 01:23:263 - This is the most worry from me. As you hear, that beat is inaudiable - there's nothing to map www. Consider and probably change it. removed sliders and added a spinner at 01:22:504 instead

Insane

- 00:16:238 (2,5) - Nazi stack ;w;
- 00:39:972 (1) - Add whistle ? Sounds cool with those beats :p

Well, that's all. Nothing to say.. just perfect, also anime is intresting. Good lucck o/
All fixed, thanks.
CookieBite
Hello there, from my queue.

[eINess's Easy]
HP = 2
00:16:808 (2,4) - stacking is not the taste for Easy, fix it.
00:32:377 (3,1) - ^
00:49:086 (1,2) - blanket improve
01:11:871 (2,1) - do a blanket?

[Normal]
00:25:542 (2,3) - do a blanket?
01:19:466 (1) - bad shape

[Nya's Hard]
HP = 5
00:11:111 (1,2) - blanket improve
00:34:466 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix it with sliders?
00:39:972 - map something?

[Insane]
HP = 6
Seem to be perfect for me.

gl with your map!
Topic Starter
Rave-up

small_hins wrote:

Hello there, from my queue.

[Normal]
01:19:466 (1) - bad shape ill keep for now

gl with your map!
All fixed. Thanks
-Nya-
Fixed a few stuff. Thanks for the mods~

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: One-Punch Man - Ending LYRICS [JAP ENG] "Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru ()" [1080p].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15665,27817,43007,55159,67311,70349
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru
TitleUnicode:星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)
Artist:Hiroko Moriguchi
ArtistUnicode:森口 博子
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Nya's Hard
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:-Nya- eINess ending 1 hero home saitama genos city one punch man Kenichi Maeyamada
BeatmapID:879462
BeatmapSetID:404204

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Ipas
Hello!
Why I feel rather weird with timings :/ At the outro, I think there was a timing change. Maybe you want to ask this to timing experts
If you sure about the metadata, (TV Size) from title should be added too to Romanised, or you might want to delete it guessing that the metadata is wrong. I can't help you to check it

[eINess' Easy]
  1. 00:46:048 (2) - New phrase of vocal is there, why not have it with new combo?
  2. 00:49:086 (1,2) - If you want to reduce the complexity of patterns, you can just stick them into 3/2 slider like previous 3 sliders. I guess it would play better than the current. I feel the current force to move faster, though the vocal was rather same with previous
  3. 00:55:162 (1,2) - Why only they that have 1/1 pattern for the similar rhythm of whole kiai? I guess you can use similar too at some beat that supported by vocals and gone a little bit intense, such like 01:01:238 (1) - 01:07:314 (1) - (I pick each 2 downbeat). It would erase the rigid rhythm to play over kiai
[Normal]
  1. Clear
[Nya's Hard]
  1. 00:10:922 (4,4) - Because the sound is rather low, I suggest you to make slider (1/2) only on 00:10:732 (3) - and 00:12:251 (3) - . They would play even better in my opinion
  2. 00:32:377 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like their placements :/ I guess you can try some curve to make them more flexible
  3. 00:36:744 (5) - Same as top
  4. 01:22:504 (1,2,3,4) - Yes, they felt weird because I think the timing should be changed somewhere on this part. They sounded really offbeat
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:510 - Fill this one! This should help to make this part more sweet~ I mean, use triple here to make it more interpret the music
[]
Nice one!
Call me to get your icon. But, I really recommend you to ask the timing first before I could give you an icon
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Rave-up
All fixed on my diffs, will confirm timing soon. Thanks
-Nya-
Fixed everything in ipas' mod except the last bullet, cuz I'm waiting for the correct timing.

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: One-Punch Man - Ending LYRICS [JAP ENG] "Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru ()" [1080p].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15665,27817,43007,55159,67311,70349
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hoshi yori Saki ni Mitsukete Ageru (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:星より先に見つけてあげる (TV Size)
Artist:Hiroko Moriguchi
ArtistUnicode:森口 博子
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Nya's Hard
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:-Nya- eINess ending 1 hero home saitama genos city one punch man Kenichi Maeyamada
BeatmapID:879462
BeatmapSetID:404204

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"optc (1).flv"
0,0,"rain.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,40172,42185
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Rave-up
iycyfdyfuififi
Ujimatsu Chiya
@Kalibe : all fixed
@small_hins : I think blanket is ok
@Ipas : 00:46:048 (2) - too short combo if I add NC

thanks mod~

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Bonsai
Hellö, I timed everything in the outro, and the main part was late by 8ms too, so here's the code for all the red lines now:

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I love this song, good luck!
Topic Starter
Rave-up
Timing fixed for my diffs, thanks.
Ujimatsu Chiya
sorry for the deley

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460,320,76040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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