• General

1. ReGochiUsa9.jpg / ReGochiUsa2.jpg 두 bg가 16:9 에 맞지 않네요. 비율맞춰 수정한거 링크 올려둘게요
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PsVyP8c.jpg
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0touYsi.jpg
2. tags에 보면 "chiya"와 "satou"사이에 스페이스 하나 더 들어가 있네요 이름고유특징아니면 지워주세요

• Easy

1. 00:07:795 (1,2,3) - 이 부분 전에는 보컬로 오다가(00:05:995 (3) - ) 갑자기 리듬형식으로 바뀌니 조금 혼란스러운데요. 1/1공백으로 꾸준히 가실거 아닌이상 타임라인 조금 변경해서 앞부분과 통일시키는게 게임할때 더 편할거에요. 타임라인 올려두고 갈게요~
   
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2. 치기 정말편해요

• Dailycare's Normal

1. 01:18:195 (1) - 머리에 휘슬정도만이라고 넣어주심 좋겠네요 전부분인 01:05:395 (1) - 와 비교하여 너무 빈 느낌이 나네요.
2. 맵이 흠잡을 곳없이 훌륭해요. 저기 힛사만 좀 넣어주세요~

• Taeyang's Hard

1. 00:53:795 (4) - 이거 별다르게 음향이 커지는 부분도 아니고 00:54:595 (6,8,2,4) - 얘네처럼 1.18~1.20 사이로 디스턴스 맞추는게 낫지 않을까싶어요
2. 솔직히 말해 1플만에 하락풀콤인데 엎어놔도 풀콤잘되는 이 맵에 따로 고칠게 없는거같아요 자잘한 1~3그리드 스택문제나 블랭킷은 안잡을게요 알아서 랭크전 잘 고치시리라 믿기에.

• Cappuccino

1. 00:23:695 (6) - 제가 듣기엔 음이 희미한데 그냥 지우시고 작은 점프처리하시는거 어떠세요
2. 00:26:395 (3) - 1/8인거 감안하고 봐도 차라리 조금 옆에다 위치시키는게 리딩에 도움줄거같아요 60l64주위로 다시 배치해보시는거 추천드릴게요.
3. 00:36:395 (6,7,1) - 셋 (4)랑 오버랩 시키기 보다 (3) 과 (5)처럼 비슷한 선상에 두시는게 더 가독성 좋을거같은데 어떠세요
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:895 (9) - 여길 살려 3타로 넣으실거면 같은 음인 00:42:695 - 이부분도 같이 넣어야 할거 같아요. 아님 아예 (9)를 지우시던지..
5. 00:58:995 (1,2,3) - 매우 애매한 부분인데요, 보컬을 죽이기로 결정하셨으면 00:59:695 - 여기 소릴 강조하셔야 하는거 아닌가 생각드네요 25%로 두어번 들어보심 제가 말씀드리고자 하는거 아실거에요. 저 부분 추천 예시로 두개정도 드려볼게요
   
   SPOILER

   
   
6. 01:14:795 (5,1) - 전에 같은 파트(01:01:795 (6,1) - )에선 이런 안티점프가 없었는데 나타나니까 잠깐 혼돈이 올 수 있는부분이라 생각들어요 01:14:795 (5) - 를 01:13:795 (2) - 의 꼬리나 그 근처로 넣어서 점프형식으로 대체해버리시는게 더 나을거같아요.
7. 저번보다 맵 더 이뻐졌네요 어서 bn구하세요~

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

• General

1. ReGochiUsa9.jpg / ReGochiUsa2.jpg 두 bg가 16:9 에 맞지 않네요. 비율맞춰 수정한거 링크 올려둘게요
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PsVyP8c.jpg
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0touYsi.jpg - 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ 사진수정할줄몰라서 지적와도 그대로둿던것들인데 ㅠㅠ 넘나감사드림
2. tags에 보면 "chiya"와 "satou"사이에 스페이스 하나 더 들어가 있네요 이름고유특징아니면 지워주세요 - fix

• Easy

1. 00:07:795 (1,2,3) - 이 부분 전에는 보컬로 오다가(00:05:995 (3) - ) 갑자기 리듬형식으로 바뀌니 조금 혼란스러운데요. 1/1공백으로 꾸준히 가실거 아닌이상 타임라인 조금 변경해서 앞부분과 통일시키는게 게임할때 더 편할거에요. 타임라인 올려두고 갈게요~ - '강조 될만한 백그라운드 음악이 없는이상' 전부 보컬 위주 매핑했습니당 저부분도 보컬매핑인데...? 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4) - 이런부분만 리듬 배치
   
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2. 치기 정말편해요 - 감사합니다!!!!

• Dailycare's Normal

1. 01:18:195 (1) - 머리에 휘슬정도만이라고 넣어주심 좋겠네요 전부분인 01:05:395 (1) - 와 비교하여 너무 빈 느낌이 나네요. - 전과같이 피니시 넣엇습니다
2. 맵이 흠잡을 곳없이 훌륭해요. 저기 힛사만 좀 넣어주세요~

• Moa만의 Cappuccino

1. 00:23:695 (6) - 제가 듣기엔 음이 희미한데 그냥 지우시고 작은 점프처리하시는거 어떠세요 - 이~타즈라 이렇게 이~ 이가사를 길게 끌어서 괜찮다고봅니다
2. 00:26:395 (3) - 1/8인거 감안하고 봐도 차라리 조금 옆에다 위치시키는게 리딩에 도움줄거같아요 60l64주위로 다시 배치해보시는거 추천드릴게요. - 고췸
3. 00:36:395 (6,7,1) - 셋 (4)랑 오버랩 시키기 보다 (3) 과 (5)처럼 비슷한 선상에 두시는게 더 가독성 좋을거같은데 어떠세요 - fix!
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:895 (9) - 여길 살려 3타로 넣으실거면 같은 음인 00:42:695 - 이부분도 같이 넣어야 할거 같아요. 아님 아예 (9)를 지우시던지.. - 42:695엔 3연타 넣을만한게 없는거같은데..
5. 00:58:995 (1,2,3) - 매우 애매한 부분인데요, 보컬을 죽이기로 결정하셨으면 00:59:695 - 여기 소릴 강조하셔야 하는거 아닌가 생각드네요 25%로 두어번 들어보심 제가 말씀드리고자 하는거 아실거에요. 저 부분 추천 예시로 두개정도 드려볼게요 - 아예 배치를 바꾸고 3연타 넣엇습니당
   
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6. 01:14:795 (5,1) - 전에 같은 파트(01:01:795 (6,1) - )에선 이런 안티점프가 없었는데 나타나니까 잠깐 혼돈이 올 수 있는부분이라 생각들어요 01:14:795 (5) - 를 01:13:795 (2) - 의 꼬리나 그 근처로 넣어서 점프형식으로 대체해버리시는게 더 나을거같아요. - 고쳣습니당
7. 저번보다 맵 더 이뻐졌네요 어서 bn구하세요~ 핡 혼토니 아리가또!

난이도들이 다 재밌고 좋아요. 왜 모딩을 더 구하시는지 모르겠네요 ㅎㅎ 잡을게 없어 별다른거 안적고 제너럴 bg랑 태그 스페이스만 좀 적어두고갑니다
감사합니다~!

• [Cappuccino]

1. well i think the offset is a little but wrong, since i played this with original offset, and this with the offset -20m/s, so i think you should try offset -225 instead of -205
2. 00:06:975 (4,5) - could change to 1/1 slider to match the vocal (suggestion
3. 00:11:575 (4,5) - the ds should be bigger imo cause the vocal is getting higher
4. 00:17:775 (3,4) - awkward spacing, try 00:18:175 (4,5) - crtl + G to consist the spacing with 00:18:575 (6,7,1) -
5. 00:24:775 (5,6,7) - the spacing 6>7 should be smaller then the spacing 5>6, and 7>1 should be samller then 6>7
6. 00:40:175 (2) - move a little bit right to make the sliderend stick with 00:39:575 (7) -
7. 00:42:775 (8,9) - i wont map here, just like you do it at 00:43:475 - (suggestion
8. 00:44:975 (2,3,4) - make spacing bigger imo, to consist the whole pattern
9. 00:46:575 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:58:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - really awkward sapcing since you map 1>2 and 4>5 with small spacing but 5>1 is big, i cant hear the music should be emphasizing 5>1, should be the same imo
11. 01:01:595 (5) - stick with 01:00:395 (1) - sliderend
12. 01:02:195 (1,2) - same problem i mention at 00:44:975 (2,3,4) -
13. 01:06:395 (4) - stick with 01:05:195 (6) - maybe?
14. 01:06:595 (5,1) - this should be emphasize more, make bigger spacing
15. 01:28:195 (2) - move a little bit left to stick with 01:26:795 (2) - sliderend
16. 01:27:995 (1,2,3) - i would make the sapcing bigger then other part (suggestion

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

as you request :3
ill still do the test play anyway

• [Cappuccino]

1. well i think the offset is a little but wrong, since i played this with original offset, and this with the offset -20m/s, so i think you should try offset -225 instead of -205 - my offset is get in rank map so i think it's ok
2. 00:06:975 (4,5) - could change to 1/1 slider to match the vocal (suggestion - sorry i like now
3. 00:11:575 (4,5) - the ds should be bigger imo cause the vocal is getting higher - 00:11:595 (4,5,1) - it's get higher DS so it's ok and that part is hhighlight
4. 00:17:775 (3,4) - awkward spacing, try 00:18:175 (4,5) - crtl + G to consist the spacing with 00:18:575 (6,7,1) - fix~
5. 00:24:775 (5,6,7) - the spacing 6>7 should be smaller then the spacing 5>6, and 7>1 should be samller then 6>7 - fix
6. 00:40:175 (2) - move a little bit right to make the sliderend stick with 00:39:575 (7) - that stack miss is editor's error
7. 00:42:775 (8,9) - i wont map here, just like you do it at 00:43:475 - (suggestion - fix i'll add circles 00:43:595 (3,4) - here
8. 00:44:975 (2,3,4) - make spacing bigger imo, to consist the whole pattern - fix
9. 00:46:575 (2,3) - ^ - nope
10. 00:58:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - really awkward sapcing since you map 1>2 and 4>5 with small spacing but 5>1 is big, i cant hear the music should be emphasizing 5>1, should be the same imo - i don't think so 01:00:195 (5,1) - that part is finished vocal part so i make some jump but 00:58:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - that's not
11. 01:01:595 (5) - stick with 01:00:395 (1) - sliderend - ok
12. 01:02:195 (1,2) - same problem i mention at 00:44:975 (2,3,4) -
13. 01:06:395 (4) - stick with 01:05:195 (6) - maybe? - nope
14. 01:06:595 (5,1) - this should be emphasize more, make bigger spacing - fix
15. 01:28:195 (2) - move a little bit left to stick with 01:26:795 (2) - sliderend - that stack miss is editor's error
16. 01:27:995 (1,2,3) - i would make the sapcing bigger then other part (suggestion - sorry that's stack with slider head,tail so small

well good luck ><

1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
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2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

Rizia wrote:

[General]
you should move preview point to 00:58:295 - , so we can listen more preview time fix

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
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2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish all fix

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

nice song
good luck

Karen wrote:

hello. m4m with Taeyang.

[Easy]

1. 01:28:395 - increase volume here, the finish sound is hard to hear, also it's unnecessary to mute the spinner. (same for Normal) fix with normal

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. OD6 is enough, 6,2 looks weird
2. 00:05:595 (2) - delete this note or move it to 00:05:795 - , it sounds unnecessary here
3. 00:12:195 (4) - whistle?

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - notice the spacing of these objects, you can find that 00:02:195 (2,3) - this 1/2 rhythm spacing is the same with 00:01:395 (1,2) - this 1/1 rhythm spacing, i suggest to avoid it defer
2. 00:17:395 (1,2,3) - a bit uncomfortable to play i think, that blanket looks forced, suggestion:
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3. 00:46:595 (2,3,4) - forced blanket again, suggestion:
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4. 01:05:395 (1) - try ctrl+g, looks more comfortable
5. overall this diff needs more improvements on details, like those unnatural blankets and stacks, try to make a balance between flow and aesthetics, but playability always has more priority. all fix others

cute BGs ww
Good luck~

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) -
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

Satellite wrote:

Hello.
some hitsound modding

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   - sorry it's follow vocal
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - - sorry it's follow vocal
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

GL ~

Karen wrote:

Recheck, don't kudosu this post.

Cappuccino

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - uh this is so noticable but you rejected it in my previous mod so up to you, 00:02:195 (2,3) - such a big jump isn't needed i think
2. 00:05:995 (1) - try ctrl+g, more fun imo.
3. 00:19:595 (2,3) - enlarge the spacing since it looks so small comparing with your large spacings before this 00:18:595 (6,7,1,2) -
4. 00:27:395 (2,3) - this looks too near while you made a jump at 00:27:795 (3,4) - this
5. 00:32:395 (3) - the rhythm here is strange, you added clap on 00:32:595 - and also the vocal which should be emphasized is on 00:32:595 - this tick too, so try another rhythm like
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:895 (6) - remove this note since it's badly overmapped i think
7. 00:33:295 - then why skip this?
8. 00:48:595 (3,5) - this looks ugly, try overlap them less or just stack them
9. 00:55:595 (1,2,3) - stack them as well for consistency with 00:52:395 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
10. 01:01:595 (5) - i know you wanted to stack this with a slider tail but that destroys the flow i think, moving this to another place like (368,322) would be better i think
11. 01:01:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - in this part, your flows are all with the same direction (from left to right), which is kinda weird to play, try to use various kinds of flows to make your map more interesting instead of spamming one
12. 01:26:195 (1,2,3) - just personal opinion, these 3 sliders skipped some interesting 1/4 beats ;w; .. i like now sorry... bb
13. 00:22:795 (3) - remove the slider body whistle

hmm flow still has the space of being improved i my opinion, but this map has reached the standard of ranked maps in my opinion, so poke me back after you reply this mod, let's see what we can do.

Karen wrote:

pyon pyon~

Satellite wrote:

recheck and looks good! so Qualified!

Congrats on 1st <3

Shioi wrote:

앙 모아띠

Taeyang wrote:

굳 츄카츄카~!

Down wrote:

ㅊㅊㅊㅊ

Karen wrote:

Congratz again!
looking forward to more moe moe maps from you :3

Gloria Guard wrote:

축하드려요 ~

guineaQ wrote:

옹

뒷세계(?)에 오신걸 환영합니다.

Len wrote:

우와 친목 조진다 너도나도 다와서 축하한다고하네 부럽다........

Aco wrote:

Congraz

alacat wrote:

<3