SpectorDG wrote:

Монголын мапперууд улам олуулаа болох болтугай! XD

Ранкэд болгоорой амжилт хүсье!~

1. 00:10:661 (2) - blanket?
2. 02:13:400 - add a spinner starting here ending at 02:14:410 - ?
3. 02:36:334 (2,3,4,1) - space this part equally?
4. 03:35:180 (1,2) - fix blanket?
5. 03:41:526 (6) - curve this the other way for flow?
6. 03:48:737 - add something here for the vocals
7. why not map the rest :3

1. 00:13:256 (3,4,5,6) - even?
2. 00:16:429 - add a note here?
3. 00:52:487 - ^
4. 00:57:102 (2) - end at white tick?
5. 01:23:064 - note here?
6. 03:40:948 (5) - sudden jump

Maphi wrote:

From modding queue ~

wee nice map

[Normal]

1. 00:10:661 (2) - blanket? Done.
2. 02:13:400 - add a spinner starting here ending at 02:14:410 - ? Added. Edit: Sorry, It's too short for normal. Removed.
3. 02:36:334 (2,3,4,1) - space this part equally? - Done. Plus, fixed the position of this pattern.
4. 03:35:180 (1,2) - fix blanket? Didn't mean to blanket originally, but why not.
5. 03:41:526 (6) - curve this the other way for flow? Done.
6. 03:48:737 - add something here for the vocals Added a circle.
7. why not map the rest :3 It felt too repetitive. But I'll keep in mind. Edit: Done \o/

[Hard]

1. 00:13:256 (3,4,5,6) - even? It's resonating, kind of.
2. 00:16:429 - add a note here? Not following the vocals.
3. 00:52:487 - ^ Added
4. 00:57:102 (2) - end at white tick? Done
5. 01:23:064 - note here? There's only vocals.
6. 03:40:948 (5) - sudden jump Decreased the space.

thats it from me~
this is a nice song and map hehe
gl

Spiral527 wrote:

From my queue

Hard

00:09:795 (1,2) - I would recommend blanketing closer Okay.
00:16:718 (1) - make the end of this slider a triangle with the next two circles. Without rotating, the slider would go at x:398 y:298 That's great!
00:23:352 - maybe put a circle here, I hear it in the music I think it doesn't quite fit here since all the previous notes (1,2,3,4,5,6) are on guitar sound.
00:28:833 (2) - even the spacing before and after Done
00:43:833 (6) - Add hitclap, remove hitwhistle Ahh, I must've removed the clap accidentally.
00:51:910 (2) - stack the tail of this on 00:50:468 (5) Done.
00:55:948 (1) - make this a round curve and blanket 00:55:371 (6) Done.
01:20:900 (5) - this could just be a circle instead It's on a blue tick which would make it pretty awkward to follow up on 01:21:333. That's why i used a slider.
02:36:621 (5) - either even the spacing before and after, or exaggerate the difference more Increased the space between 5 and 6
02:49:891 (3) - even the spacing before and after Done.
03:27:679 (4,1) - kind of large jump for a map of this difficulty in this softer part of the music Decreased the space a little bit.
03:29:554 (5) - almost seems like this could just be a circle Awkward to play.
03:32:295 (2) - even spacing before and after (maybe make a triangle) Triangle.

Very lovely song and map! I'm not very good at modding normal though, sorry that I didn't get to it No worries

Lily Bread wrote:

from my queue.

青い花! shoot star!

[General]
add tag: "yuri" and "百合"? I don't think it's necessary

kiai part from - 02:05:179 - to - 02:13:256 -? Added.

[Normal]
changing SV is not recommended in Normal diff. if you changed SV, better to add a Easy diff. I'll consider mapping an easy diff

00:42:679 - what about this? The whole point of this pattern is to emphasize the piano, especially those 3 on 00:43:545 (3). Yours do play nicely, but I'll keep it unchanged for now.
01:23:064 - i know you only follow piano here, but the vocal is so strong, better to map it. Added a slider

[Hard]
02:12:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - though their tone is from high to low, use a DS from low to high is better imo, because it's the end of the kiai. Done.

make 1/4 DS equal to get a better quality. such as - 01:57:102 (3,4,5) - and - 01:52:487 (3,4,5) - . it's necessary to equal 1/4 DS in Hard diff. Good advice. Fixed them.

good mapset.
good luck!

Spotty wrote:

Normal ~ ♥

00:57:679 • I would end the slider here ~ That slider is emphasizing the ambient. But you have a point. The vocals are much stronger here. i'll wait for second opinion though.
01:27:968 • I would add a note here :3 But it's a nice little breathing room. Also I'm very reluctant to follow the vocals.
01:30:275 • And one more here o/
01:51:910 • I would add a slider here to 01:52:198 Hmm too many 1/2 sliders here.
02:45:564 • I would end the slider here o/ I'll remap this part.
03:50:756 • End slider here imo That's too repetitive, i think
04:09:218 • Add another note here imo :p I need a second opinion here.
04:13:977 • This part is quite weird, it's well timed, but Idk why, it sounds weird owo Added a repeat. Should be fine now :3

Hard ~ ♥

00:13:545 • The spacing with the 3rd notes of the combo is quite wrong is it? DS is increasing with each note : )
00:17:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) • The spacing on these notes are wrong too ^^ ^^
00:19:891 • You should add a note here o/ This part is strictly mapped to the piano/guitar. It would get overcrowded if I add vocals as well.
00:21:045 • Here too ~ ^
01:27:968 • Add a note here ~
02:20:323 • You shouldn't do a reversed slider, maybe a simple slider is better, because the slider is not made on 1/4 timing :/ Yes, it's bit complicated. I'll fix it soon.

There is my mod, hope it helped you ;w;
I love the music tho ♥

Reditum wrote:

Poppin.

Hard:
00:12:679 (2) - You can sacrifice a little bit of DS to have these not touch Done
00:17:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - you'd think that as things got softer the DS would get smaller but uhhhh It was like that before. Was somewhat awkward to play.
People might complain about the silent sliderends but I don't have so much of an issue with them. But I'm not the one bubbling the beatmap so uhhhh Thought so. But I'll try my luck.

Normal:
It feels like at times that there's a lot of notes here for this to be the easiest difficulty. I'd say make an easy but i know that that's kind of a bitch so uhhhhh ask a BN about it. Mapping an easy is much harder than it seems TT.
01:47:872 (4) - clap on end of slider I don't add hitsounds on end of slider. Not sure how that works for easier diffs. Maybe I'm wrong.
01:57:103 (4) - make this curve a lot more defined Done.
02:09:795 - you forgot to hitsound this part Whistles are there. No clap, because it's on slider end.
03:12:103 (1) - you probs need more space after the end of the spinner before the next note. Shortened the spinner.

it's mostly fine yay

you waited almost a month for like 5 really small things woohoo B) It doesn't matter. Only wanted some feedback.

go get this bubbled

1. 00:30:852 (2,3) - remove whistles so 00:30:564 (1,4) - receives more emphasis?
2. 01:39:795 (1) - rotate -20 degrees for better flow
3. 01:44:410 (1,2,3,4) - I think spacing should increase with each note to match growing song intensity. also stack at 01:44:987 (3,4) - doesn't make sense since they aren't the same sound in the song
4. 01:52:487 (3,4,5) - triplet ending on red ticks don't generally play well. the 1/4 instrument also has sound at 01:52:343 - so I would move 01:52:631 (4) - to 01:52:343 - same thing for 01:57:102 (3,4,5) - 02:01:718 (3,4,5) 02:38:641 (3,4,5) - etc... keeps it consistent with your first kiai section.
5. 02:04:025 (2,3) - make spacing smaller so 1/1 rhythm is more obvious compared to the 2/1 rhythm of 02:02:871 (1,2) -
6. 02:18:881 (1) - timing doesn't seem to match piano, i hear 4 distinct piano notes
7. 02:51:333 - start break here instead for better visual effect to match start of vocal http://puu.sh/n07VQ/ac58d76010.jpg
8. 04:13:977 (4) - maybe lower SV to ~0.65x here

1. In the future, I would recommend using a DS that makes notes overlap more or not at all. Very small overlaps don't look as good
2. 00:13:833 (4) - 00:18:449 (4) - could make these circles instead to reduce note density and signal start of new vocal phrase
3. 00:32:007 (3) - make slightly curved since all the other sliders are curved?
4. 00:36:911 (3) - maybe change this to circle so both piano notes are represented the same way
5. 00:41:237 (4) - 00:50:468 (4) - 01:18:738 (5) - good places to remove note if you want to lower note density if you want
6. 01:20:757 (3) - not sure about 1/4 slider in normal diff. i've seen many people complain that this is too hard to read for new players
7. 01:34:314 (2) - add repeat to slider to capture vocal?
8. 02:44:122 (1) - move slider to 02:44:410 - and stack note on slider at 02:44:121 - so you don't miss strong downbeat
9. 02:45:565 (2,3,4,5) - since you don't have easy diff, change these to 1/1 sliders to make them simpler to play
10. 02:51:333 - same comment about break time as hard
11. 03:42:679 - 03:43:833 - 03:44:987 - 03:46:141 - 03:47:295 - etc... missing claps?
12. 04:11:237 (2) - I would point this other way for better flow between 04:09:795 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/n09eT/96cfb8805a.jpg

MokouSmoke wrote:

from #modreqs
just small suggestions
[Hard]

1. 00:30:852 (2,3) - remove whistles so 00:30:564 (1,4) - receives more emphasis? Yes
2. 01:39:795 (1) - rotate -20 degrees for better flow -10 should be enough.
3. 01:44:410 (1,2,3,4) - I think spacing should increase with each note to match growing song intensity. also stack at 01:44:987 (3,4) - doesn't make sense since they aren't the same sound in the song Remapped a bit.
4. 01:52:487 (3,4,5) - triplet ending on red ticks don't generally play well. the 1/4 instrument also has sound at 01:52:343 - so I would move 01:52:631 (4) - to 01:52:343 - same thing for 01:57:102 (3,4,5) - 02:01:718 (3,4,5) 02:38:641 (3,4,5) - etc... keeps it consistent with your first kiai section. I see. I'll do something about it when I'm not too tired.
5. 02:04:025 (2,3) - make spacing smaller so 1/1 rhythm is more obvious compared to the 2/1 rhythm of 02:02:871 (1,2) - Done
6. 02:18:881 (1) - timing doesn't seem to match piano, i hear 4 distinct piano notes What headset are you using? i only hear 3
7. 02:51:333 - start break here instead for better visual effect to match start of vocal http://puu.sh/n07VQ/ac58d76010.jpg Done
8. 04:13:977 (4) - maybe lower SV to ~0.65x here Yea, why not

[Normal]

1. In the future, I would recommend using a DS that makes notes overlap more or not at all. Very small overlaps don't look as good Fair enough
2. 00:13:833 (4) - 00:18:449 (4) - could make these circles instead to reduce note density and signal start of new vocal phrase Seems reasonable
3. 00:32:007 (3) - make slightly curved since all the other sliders are curved? Very slightly
4. 00:36:911 (3) - maybe change this to circle so both piano notes are represented the same way Yes it's a little overmapped. But i think it plays better.
5. 00:41:237 (4) - 00:50:468 (4) - 01:18:738 (5) - good places to remove note if you want to lower note density if you want 01:18:737 (5) - is an essential part of the pattern. i do want to get rid of the other two. But it feels weird without them.
6. 01:20:757 (3) - not sure about 1/4 slider in normal diff. I've seen many people complain that this is too hard to read for new players Replaced with a simple circle.
7. 01:34:314 (2) - add repeat to slider to capture vocal? Think it's better without it
8. 02:44:122 (1) - move slider to 02:44:410 - and stack note on slider at 02:44:121 - so you don't miss strong downbeat Violin from 02:44:121 - to 02:45:564 - is one hold note from start to finish. Having to click more than once would pretty much ruin it. Downbeat is sacrificed i guess.
9. 02:45:565 (2,3,4,5) - since you don't have easy diff, change these to 1/1 sliders to make them simpler to play I really wanna keep these. Sliders are fine but it's the climax of this section, they would feel dull.
10. 02:51:333 - same comment about break time as hard Of course
11. 03:42:679 - 03:43:833 - 03:44:987 - 03:46:141 - 03:47:295 - etc... missing claps? Actually, none of my sliders have hitsound on their end. it's something i don't like. But i guess there's no other way around for easier difficulties. Added clap and whatever else they needed. I'm not sure how did I miss 03:44:987 - 03:46:141 - though.
12. 04:11:237 (2) - I would point this other way for better flow between 04:09:795 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/n09eT/96cfb8805a.jpg Okay

Nice mapset. This song always makes me sad T.T

1. I suck, and I hit too early
2. Your offset is late by 5ms (it is within rankable threshold, but players like me whose taps mainly rely on the music over reading approach circles will definitely notice this)

Nekomata wrote:

[General]
During gameplay, I had most of my hit errors towards the left side which indicates either one of the following:

1. I suck, and I hit too early
2. Your offset is late by 5ms (it is within rankable threshold, but players like me whose taps mainly rely on the music over reading approach circles will definitely notice this)

Anyways, the better offset is 9790. If you choose to apply this, do it after applying mods. Thanks, I needed a timing check. Fixed

[Easy]
00:47:583 (2,3) - I highly advise against stacking in Easy difficulties. New players (on first try) may notice just the slider and end up only clicking the circle. Unstacked all of them
01:54:506 (2,3) - ^
03:42:968 (2,3) - ^
03:49:891 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:12:679 (2) - The overlap does not look nice here in my opinion, just slightly move (2) to the left so that it doesn't touch (1). You will have to increase the distance snap. Done
00:17:295 (2,3) - This jump is unexpected, and it actually seems to contrast from the music in terms of pitch and the position of these circles. Besides that, I would actually expect the same tapping rhythm as 00:12:679 (2) - since it's pretty much the same rhythm based on the music. The way the guitar notes are played also remains the same here. I would recommend that you take it easy at this mostly calm part and just use a 1/2 slider. example Changed
00:21:333 (1,2,3) - Over here, the jump and circles are acceptable because now the guitar sounds much sharper. Changed
00:35:179 (1,2) - There is actually a sound starting at 00:35:468 - which really makes this a 1/2-triple, and not a 3/4-1/4 rhythm. I am following the strings here. In general some of the less audible sounds are ignored, some are used. I try use the ones that are better for playing.
00:38:641 - I really think a 1/1 slider into antijump will work nicely here. example That works nicely as well but I think the break suits here more to emphasize the drop.
01:20:756 (4,5) - Considering that you never actually used a double rhythm prior to this point, this actually is unexpected and is also a bit awkward to play. I suggest turning 01:20:468 (3,4) - into a slider. I'll wait for some more testplay.
03:29:410 (4,5) - similar to ^, but I think a triple is fine here. although it probably doesn't match that drum you are following :/ then again you have 03:30:131 (2) - so lol Same as above. And to be fair there is a drum sound on 03:30:131 (2), not as strong as the other notes in the pattern however.

Nice flow. It flows? No wai!!

Thanks for the mod!

SolrosRepica wrote:

hiya~
came from modding queue

Hard Diff

00:19:886 - Add new note here. This part is mapped to the instruments.
00:21:040 - ^^
00:57:097 (2) - 01:41:809 (1) - hmm.. I don't like this slider But maybe,you don't change anyway.. Changed the first one. Simple curves are the best.
01:28:251 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you place distance a unified to? I'm very sorry, i don't get what you mean
01:54:213 (3) - set to x:360 y:268,and 01:54:790 (5) - x:322 y:357. Okay
02:31:713 (2) - New combo recommend. Done
02:34:020 (1) - ^ Not necessary
03:50:174 (6) - ^ Okay
03:59:405 (5) - ^ Not necessary

Thanks.
Good luck o/

Yahuri wrote:

M4M from my queue!
Your mod: 1:32 + 1:32 + 0:45 = 3:49
Your song = 3:55~4:21 -> 1 difficulty
Since you asked for Easy, I'll mod that.

Easy
00:14:405 (1,1) - you can blanket these ok
00:17:866 (2,1) - slight blanket improvement fixed
00:27:097 (3,2) - blanket the end of 3 (tip: move the notes closer together on the timeline temporarily so you can use the approach circle) done
00:29:116 (2,1) - blanket fixed
00:34:020 (2,1) - blanket fixed
00:42:097 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:51:328 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:51:905 (2) - if you want, you can remove the last anchor and make that section parallel to 00:50:174 (2) done
00:58:828 - 01:00:559 i feel like this would be a good place to put a spinner Too short. Maybe can start the spinner on 00:58:395 - but let's not for now.
01:45:559 (2,3) - are you sure these notes should be claps? the background music sounds different than the claps in the kiai. Replaced with whistles
01:59:982 (3,1) - blanket fixed
02:05:174 (1,2) - ^ blanket police :p
02:32:866 (1) - clap added
02:35:174 (1) - clap added
Overall, really neat design! Sorry about being so nitpicky with the blankets, but I really couldnt find much else wrong with this difficulty. I don't mind. I'd like to optimize this as much as possible. There are so many broken blankets probably caused by mass moving and I want to fix every single one.
Hope this helps, good luck~

Xinchii wrote:

Hiii from queue ~~

[General]

1. Seems good

[Easy]

1. 01:16:713 (1,2) - how about do a symmetry here ? Done
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:13:251 (3,4,5,6) - In my view , this part's sound is soft by degrees , so I will suggest to make your DS from big to small
   it will fit the song better
   If you accept this , I thing you can do this from (1) also
   
   SPOILER

   
   (For this img , I change your flow here for keep (6) to (1)'s bigger DS , cus strong sound there
   but anyway , It just for reference) Yeah, everyone's suggesting this.
2. 00:17:866 (3,4,5,6) - same like previously point changed
3. 00:32:290 (6) - how about changr to a slider ? 00:32:578 - have a sound , also the vocal is quite fit with that Sound is very weak, and i'm only following the instruments in this verse. Otherwise I would also have to add notes on 00:23:347 - 00:27:963 - 00:30:270 - etc.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:347 - Hummm , I will strong to suggest adding a note here , it will be a better break point than 00:37:915 - , and make the feedback more stable Replaced the previous circle with a slider.
5. 00:41:520 (6,1) - these two slider have a nice horizontal flow , so according to that , I will suggest to make them similar
   
   SPOILER

   
   will have a great symmetry effect Done
6. 00:45:559 (5) - how about make this straight or angle , this one is between (1) and (6) , both of them are straight (or heve angle) , make these unified will be good I think Straight
7. 01:20:751 (4,5) - these 3 sound are same level strong , so 3 single note or 1 slider with return will be better feedback during playing Changed as you suggested for better playability. Still to me 01:21:040 - is weaker than the first 2 notes and not even the same instrument.
8. 01:22:193 (3) - why not overlapping with 01:20:463 (1) - xD ? I think that circle tried to escape.
9. 01:24:501 (3) - also , it can overlapping with 01:22:770 (4) - 's slider start Sure
10. 03:14:982 (2) - how about add a return ? 03:15:559 - have a sound and I think it's enough strong to be follow by something Done. Stuff like what sound to follow or when to follow etc are still very complicated

easier diff seems good already , so mods are focus on harder diff

nice song and map
good luck ~