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meii18
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meii18
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 31, 2016 at 11:48:35 AM

Artist: Mr.Kitty
Title: Mother Mary
Tags: ETERNITY synthpop goth new wave post-punk witch house ByBy_ChAn
BPM: 120
Filesize: 8336kb
Play Time: 05:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dark (2.97 stars, 633 notes)
Download: Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary
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~Happy 19th Birthday Bakari!~




My 11th ranked map and also
My First Approved Mapset! \w/



Why I've chosen Mr.Kitty?
I know that Bakari really likes Mr.Kitty.Also he ranked many maps with Mr.Kitty I guess so that's why I've decided to map another Mr.Kitty song which haven't any version of it ranked.
@Bakari: This is a gift for you and I hope you will like this one since you really like Mr.Kitty.Happy Early Birthday,I wish you to have much bless,much good health and also good luck at university!

For approval


Thank you so much! <3
#1: Milan-
#2:Baraatje123
:Gero

Redownload the map if you downloaded it before 16 Jan 2016.Mp3 has been changed!


Done and Ready For Mods! \w/
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riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Aww, sweet. <3

Thank you so much!
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18

Bakari wrote:

Aww, sweet. <3

Thank you so much!
No problem!I'm glad that you like it c:
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Happy Birthday, Bakari~ <3
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
Happy Birthday to Bakari! \w/
riffy
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
riffy
Thank you! ♥
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18

Bakari wrote:

Thank you! ♥
No problem!I hope you will have a really nice day on your birthday c:
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg

ByBy13 wrote:

Happy Birthday to Bakari! \w/
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle
well, finally have time to do m4m thing map

[Dark]
Preview unsnapped?
00:36:119 (1,3) - Blanket is pretty off
01:04:119 - So like, the only thing that really bugs me about this section in particular is that the rhythm mapped varies quite a bit with the music being pretty repetitive at this section. I tried to think some of the 1/1 sliders were there as a form of a break from all the single tapping, but there's really not a set pattern in which you do the patterns, unless I'm missing something big since I somewhat understand why there's things like 01:20:119 (1) - because of vocals, but all those things are so drowned out by the electro w/e going on in the background to really focus on the quiet vocal thing in the bg, idk, I mainly focus on rhythm consistency in my maps so feel free to ignore this ;w;
02:44:119 (1,2,3) - I dunno, for this part, I don't really feel like it flows well since it's kinda the only time where you had a 1/1 1/2 circle stacked on 1/1 slider pattern be with curved sliders, so maybe change
I also kinda just now noticed that's it's w.i.p x.x
Btw, I was wondering, why are parts that are exactly identical (e.g. 01:48:119 (1,2,3) - and 02:52:119 (1,2,3) - ) mapped differently, with one being stacked and the other one not?

pls don't hate me for modding w.i.p ;w; (When you said "it needs to be done" I thought that meant calling bns to your FELT map needed to be done, if anything I can just edit this later ;w;)

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04:11:113 (3,4,5,6) - I don't really know, this part kinda struck me as different since the ds is pretty high, and it's pretty linear (I find those two things to be pretty hard)
04:26:613 (3,4) - I'm probably the only person who kinda finds it awkward that 2-> 3 angle with the curved slider on 3, but maybe make it a straight slider instead?
04:46:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is like, the only confusing pattern in the entire map (imo) so maybe try to make a bit clearer

sry for sleeping ><
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meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
Wow thanks for mod Battle! Also I'm at last kiai.In some minutes it will be done hype :) Finished everything!(Not really,planning to a 'surprise for Bakari).Waiting for your mod Battle! :3
ceLy
148 posts
Joined November 2014
ceLy
Happy Birthday, Bakari :)

M4M

[Dark]
  1. 00:27:119 (3,4) - should be 1.3x consistly
  2. 00:45:119 (3,1) - 1.5x
  3. 02:26:119 (1,2,3) - i think things like stack and change to 1.5x should not be here, for almost these things in kiai. it breaks consistence in the pattern imo.
  4. 02:38:119 (1,2,3,4) - can have larger ds
  5. 02:40:119 (1,2) - ^
  6. 02:52:119 (1,2) - about 1.5x
  7. 04:13:119 (4,5) - what about 1.5x here(like similar rhythm here 03:59:119 (3,4) -
  8. 04:26:119 (1,2) - a little larger to be 1.3x
  9. 04:23:119 (3,4) - to be 1.5x?
  10. 04:34:119 (1,2) - hmmm 1.3x or 1.5x? 1.4x is strange to me
  11. 04:38:619 (2,3) - a liitle larger
  12. 05:03:119 (3,4) - ^
btw here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395781
looking forward to seeing u~ :)
a star and GL~
Cellina
1,004 posts
Joined March 2013
Cellina
2016-01-30 20:09 Reana: um, does irc modding is available?
2016-01-30 20:09 ByBy13: yes
2016-01-30 20:09 ByBy13: from 00:00:119
2016-01-30 20:09 ByBy13: no I won't map :c
2016-01-30 20:09 ByBy13: it
2016-01-30 20:09 Reana: 02:38:119 (1,2) - i think you should make distance bigger
2016-01-30 20:10 Reana: 02:37:869 (6,1) - compare with this
2016-01-30 20:10 ByBy13: these are 1/2 sliders and it still looks like a jump.here is 1.3x distance
2016-01-30 20:12 ByBy13: and about that points to map,these are breaks.the player needs some rest not playing in row the map
2016-01-30 20:12 Reana: okay
2016-01-30 20:13 Reana: 00:19:869 (4) - , 00:27:869 (4) - , 00:29:869 (5) - ,00:35:869 (5) - ,
2016-01-30 20:14 Reana: i don't think note is needed
2016-01-30 20:14 Reana: cause i think this diff is like hard
2016-01-30 20:14 Reana: and you don't need to fill all the beats
2016-01-30 20:14 ByBy13: because it's a hard diff :p
2016-01-30 20:15 ByBy13: I guess yes
2016-01-30 20:15 Reana: but what about 00:43:869 -
2016-01-30 20:15 ByBy13: i leave it empty since there's no any beat to emphasize imo
2016-01-30 20:15 Reana: hmm
2016-01-30 20:16 Reana: well since this map is awesome i can find nothing about mistakes
2016-01-30 20:16 ByBy13: okay ^^
2016-01-30 20:16 ByBy13: thanks :)
2016-01-30 20:16 Reana: um
2016-01-30 20:16 Reana: no kds
2016-01-30 20:16 Reana: i think i've done nothing
2016-01-30 20:17 ByBy13: hmm
2016-01-30 20:17 ByBy13: yeah unfortunately :/
2016-01-30 20:17 Reana: Good luck :3
2016-01-30 20:17 Reana: and are you going to check my map?
2016-01-30 20:17 ByBy13: yes
2016-01-30 20:17 ByBy13: :3
2016-01-30 20:17 Reana: thanks
2016-01-30 20:18 ByBy13: you can post the irc log :)
2016-01-30 20:18 Reana: okay
no kds
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
Minor improvements through irc

log
10:55 *ByBy13 is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]] +Hidden +Nightcore |Autoplay|
10:55 ByBy13: l-am terminat azi noapte la 3 dimineata :))
10:56 Tony: ma uit sa vad cum e
10:56 Tony: felicitari :))
10:57 ByBy13: mersi :D
10:57 Tony: sunt inca in pat
10:57 ByBy13: oh XD
11:02 Tony: e draguta
11:02 ByBy13: mersi :3
11:02 Tony: din nefericire piesa nu ofera foarte mult din punct de vedere ritmic
11:02 ByBy13: stiu
11:02 Tony: si pare plictisitoare pe alocuri
11:02 ByBy13: adica muzica
11:02 Tony: dada
11:02 ByBy13: lol
11:03 Tony: dar e ok per ansamblu
11:03 Tony: parerea mea e pe la sfarsit sa schimbi putin ritmul, ce zici?
11:03 ByBy13: pai asta e mr.kitty
11:03 Tony: adica sa faci un pic de overmapping, dar sa nu para overmapping
11:03 ByBy13: pai hmm...
11:03 ByBy13: imi pare rau dar nu voi face :c
11:04 ByBy13: overmap
11:04 Tony: nu in sensul rau ma refer
11:04 Tony: adica sa adaugi ritm in plus fata de piesa
11:05 Tony: asta in general adauga originalitate la mapa
11:05 Tony: 04:18:119 - un exemplu ar fi slider-ul asta sa il faci gen... un triplet
11:07 ByBy13: bine stai putin ^^
11:07 Tony: si pentru consistenta si armonie faci si aici 04:26:119 - 04:34:119 - 04:42:119 -
11:08 ByBy13: bine :3
11:08 Tony: si lafel si la ultima sectiune de kiai
11:08 ByBy13: bine
11:08 Tony: e doar o sugestie, daca iti place aplica
11:08 Tony: :D
11:08 ByBy13: bine :D
11:10 Tony: 04:17:119 (3) - dubios slider-ul asta, adica nu formeaza un blanket dragut cu (4). poate ar fi ok sa-l faci simetric fata de punctul ala rosu (ascutitura sliderului) ?
11:11 ByBy13: am schimbat putin slider-ul
11:11 ByBy13: dar arata bine pentru mine :c
11:11 Tony: e ciudatel, in fine :))
11:11 ByBy13: XD
11:12 Tony: vad ca folosesti in unele locuri 1.3x si 1.5x distance space
11:12 Tony: e intentionat?
11:12 ByBy13: da este
11:12 ByBy13: asta e stilul meu XD
11:12 Tony: :))
11:12 Tony: interesant
11:12 ByBy13: mersi :3
11:12 Tony: :))
11:12 Tony: nu era neaparat un compliment, dar e bine ca esti pozitiva
11:13 ByBy13: oh sigur :D
11:13 Tony: 00:18:119 (1) - n-ar fi mai frumos daca ar fi blanket cu slider-ul serpuit?
11:14 Tony: 00:20:119 (1,4) - imi place blanket-ul asta :3
11:14 ByBy13: pai sa vedem
11:14 ByBy13: plus mersi :D
11:15 Tony: 00:56:119 (1) - nu e un pic prea jos asta? :))
11:15 Tony: nu te omoara nimeni daca il pui un pic mai aproape de cel de dinainte... ca oricum e NC acolo deci na :D
11:15 ByBy13: am folosit 1.5 aici
11:15 ByBy13: XD
11:16 Tony: eu nici nu prea folosesc diferente de distance snapping in felul asta
11:16 ByBy13: ah :o
11:16 Tony: deci nu imi e prea familiar modul asta de mapping
11:16 ByBy13: stiu XD
11:16 Tony: 00:21:119 (4,5,1) - in cazuri ca asta arata bine
11:17 ByBy13: :)
11:19 Tony: depinde cum folosesti
11:19 Tony: de exemplu
11:20 Tony: 00:40:119 (1,2,3) - aici mi se pare ca ar inbunatati flow-ul daca ai muta sliderul 3 mai sus https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432657
11:20 ByBy13: flow-ul arata bine pentru mine
11:20 ByBy13: ^^'
11:21 Tony: na nu stiu de ce zici asta :))
11:21 ByBy13: pai
11:22 Tony: eu zic ca unghiul format dintre
11:22 ByBy13: mai vazui exemple de astea (ma refer pe care o folosesc eu acuma)
11:22 Tony: cerculetul de la sf de slider
11:22 Tony: (2) si (3) e unul ascutit
11:22 ByBy13: oh
11:22 ByBy13: pai
11:22 ByBy13: am incercat sa fac diferite tipuri de slidere :))
11:23 Tony: na oricum nu prea e de corectat la mapa asa chestii grave. stii si tu :))
11:23 ByBy13: da XD
11:24 Tony: dar na, ultimele 2 kiai sections cred ca ai putea sa il faci mai challenging
11:24 ByBy13: hmm
11:24 ByBy13: okay
11:24 Tony: stii cum am zis de triplet-uri
11:24 ByBy13: da XD
11:25 Tony: de exemplu, ce mai fac eu in general
11:25 Tony: e sa fac jump la inceput de combo
11:25 ByBy13: hmm okay
11:25 ByBy13: pai asta fac si eu :p
11:25 ByBy13: XD
11:26 Tony: dar diferenta nu e observabila de un player
11:26 ByBy13: hmm da ;w;
11:26 Tony: fii mai indrazneata
11:26 Tony: :))
11:26 Tony: 04:21:619 (4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432680
11:26 ByBy13: bine :D
11:27 ByBy13: nu chiar acum XD
11:27 Tony: :))))\
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18

Battle wrote:

well, finally have time to do m4m thing

[Dark]
Preview unsnapped? fixed oops
00:36:119 (1,3) - Blanket is pretty off fixed
01:04:119 - So like, the only thing that really bugs me about this section in particular is that the rhythm mapped varies quite a bit with the music being pretty repetitive at this section. I tried to think some of the 1/1 sliders were there as a form of a break from all the single tapping, but there's really not a set pattern in which you do the patterns, unless I'm missing something big since I somewhat understand why there's things like 01:20:119 (1) - because of vocals, but all those things are so drowned out by the electro w/e going on in the background to really focus on the quiet vocal thing in the bg, idk, I mainly focus on rhythm consistency in my maps so feel free to ignore this ;w; ok XD.Well tried to follow the instruments and the vocals here XD
02:44:119 (1,2,3) - I dunno, for this part, I don't really feel like it flows well since it's kinda the only time where you had a 1/1 1/2 circle stacked on 1/1 slider pattern be with curved sliders, so maybe change this is a pattern so I will keep it for now ^^'
I also kinda just now noticed that's it's w.i.p x.x
Btw, I was wondering, why are parts that are exactly identical (e.g. 01:48:119 (1,2,3) - and 02:52:119 (1,2,3) - ) mapped differently, with one being stacked and the other one not? well it's the case where idk how I should put the note.I just want to avoid offscreening or touching the hp bar.Just saying.Sometimes I don't have inspiration XD

pls don't hate me for modding w.i.p ;w; (When you said "it needs to be done" I thought that meant calling bns to your FELT map needed to be done, if anything I can just edit this later ;w;) well it's done now.Waiting for you now x3

cHelli wrote:

Happy Birthday, Bakari :)

M4M

[Dark]
  1. 00:27:119 (3,4) - should be 1.3x consistly not really.I used 1.5x here to stack this note with 00:28:119(1)- and also to emphasize the reset of the instruments
  2. 00:45:119 (3,1) - 1.5x oops fixed now
  3. 02:26:119 (1,2,3) - i think things like stack and change to 1.5x should not be here, for almost these things in kiai. it breaks consistence in the pattern imo. not really.also it is still emphasize the instruments let's say
  4. 02:38:119 (1,2,3,4) - can have larger ds changed a bit.also used here 1.3 and 1.5 aswell
  5. 02:40:119 (1,2) - ^ okay :)
  6. 02:52:119 (1,2) - about 1.5x there is 1.5x already.also wanted to do a pattern here. a 'special' pattern
  7. 04:13:119 (4,5) - what about 1.5x here(like similar rhythm here 03:59:119 (3,4) - nice point fixed ^^
  8. 04:26:119 (1,2) - a little larger to be 1.3x I changed here a bit.The first 1/2 slider was replaced with triplets so here should be 1.3x surely
  9. 04:23:119 (3,4) - to be 1.5x? no.here must be 1.3x distance as I did for other kiais
  10. 04:34:119 (1,2) - hmmm 1.3x or 1.5x? 1.4x is strange to me already fixed ^^
  11. 04:38:619 (2,3) - a liitle larger I wanted too but I decided to stack it with 04:37:869(4)- to have it clean and avoiding overlapping ^^'
  12. 05:03:119 (3,4) - ^ it is as I can see o.o
btw here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395781
looking forward to seeing u~ :)
a star and GL~ Thanks <3

Tony wrote:

Minor improvements through irc

log
10:55 *ByBy13 is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]] +Hidden +Nightcore |Autoplay|
10:55 ByBy13: l-am terminat azi noapte la 3 dimineata :))
10:56 Tony: ma uit sa vad cum e
10:56 Tony: felicitari :))
10:57 ByBy13: mersi :D
10:57 Tony: sunt inca in pat
10:57 ByBy13: oh XD
11:02 Tony: e draguta
11:02 ByBy13: mersi :3
11:02 Tony: din nefericire piesa nu ofera foarte mult din punct de vedere ritmic
11:02 ByBy13: stiu
11:02 Tony: si pare plictisitoare pe alocuri
11:02 ByBy13: adica muzica
11:02 Tony: dada
11:02 ByBy13: lol
11:03 Tony: dar e ok per ansamblu
11:03 Tony: parerea mea e pe la sfarsit sa schimbi putin ritmul, ce zici?
11:03 ByBy13: pai asta e mr.kitty
11:03 Tony: adica sa faci un pic de overmapping, dar sa nu para overmapping
11:03 ByBy13: pai hmm...
11:03 ByBy13: imi pare rau dar nu voi face :c
11:04 ByBy13: overmap
11:04 Tony: nu in sensul rau ma refer
11:04 Tony: adica sa adaugi ritm in plus fata de piesa
11:05 Tony: asta in general adauga originalitate la mapa
11:05 Tony: 04:18:119 - un exemplu ar fi slider-ul asta sa il faci gen... un triplet
11:07 ByBy13: bine stai putin ^^
11:07 Tony: si pentru consistenta si armonie faci si aici 04:26:119 - 04:34:119 - 04:42:119 -
11:08 ByBy13: bine :3
11:08 Tony: si lafel si la ultima sectiune de kiai
11:08 ByBy13: bine
11:08 Tony: e doar o sugestie, daca iti place aplica
11:08 Tony: :D
11:08 ByBy13: bine :D
11:10 Tony: 04:17:119 (3) - dubios slider-ul asta, adica nu formeaza un blanket dragut cu (4). poate ar fi ok sa-l faci simetric fata de punctul ala rosu (ascutitura sliderului) ?
11:11 ByBy13: am schimbat putin slider-ul
11:11 ByBy13: dar arata bine pentru mine :c
11:11 Tony: e ciudatel, in fine :))
11:11 ByBy13: XD
11:12 Tony: vad ca folosesti in unele locuri 1.3x si 1.5x distance space
11:12 Tony: e intentionat?
11:12 ByBy13: da este
11:12 ByBy13: asta e stilul meu XD
11:12 Tony: :))
11:12 Tony: interesant
11:12 ByBy13: mersi :3
11:12 Tony: :))
11:12 Tony: nu era neaparat un compliment, dar e bine ca esti pozitiva
11:13 ByBy13: oh sigur :D
11:13 Tony: 00:18:119 (1) - n-ar fi mai frumos daca ar fi blanket cu slider-ul serpuit?
11:14 Tony: 00:20:119 (1,4) - imi place blanket-ul asta :3
11:14 ByBy13: pai sa vedem
11:14 ByBy13: plus mersi :D
11:15 Tony: 00:56:119 (1) - nu e un pic prea jos asta? :))
11:15 Tony: nu te omoara nimeni daca il pui un pic mai aproape de cel de dinainte... ca oricum e NC acolo deci na :D
11:15 ByBy13: am folosit 1.5 aici
11:15 ByBy13: XD
11:16 Tony: eu nici nu prea folosesc diferente de distance snapping in felul asta
11:16 ByBy13: ah :o
11:16 Tony: deci nu imi e prea familiar modul asta de mapping
11:16 ByBy13: stiu XD
11:16 Tony: 00:21:119 (4,5,1) - in cazuri ca asta arata bine
11:17 ByBy13: :)
11:19 Tony: depinde cum folosesti
11:19 Tony: de exemplu
11:20 Tony: 00:40:119 (1,2,3) - aici mi se pare ca ar inbunatati flow-ul daca ai muta sliderul 3 mai sus https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432657
11:20 ByBy13: flow-ul arata bine pentru mine
11:20 ByBy13: ^^'
11:21 Tony: na nu stiu de ce zici asta :))
11:21 ByBy13: pai
11:22 Tony: eu zic ca unghiul format dintre
11:22 ByBy13: mai vazui exemple de astea (ma refer pe care o folosesc eu acuma)
11:22 Tony: cerculetul de la sf de slider
11:22 Tony: (2) si (3) e unul ascutit
11:22 ByBy13: oh
11:22 ByBy13: pai
11:22 ByBy13: am incercat sa fac diferite tipuri de slidere :))
11:23 Tony: na oricum nu prea e de corectat la mapa asa chestii grave. stii si tu :))
11:23 ByBy13: da XD
11:24 Tony: dar na, ultimele 2 kiai sections cred ca ai putea sa il faci mai challenging
11:24 ByBy13: hmm
11:24 ByBy13: okay
11:24 Tony: stii cum am zis de triplet-uri
11:24 ByBy13: da XD
11:25 Tony: de exemplu, ce mai fac eu in general
11:25 Tony: e sa fac jump la inceput de combo
11:25 ByBy13: hmm okay
11:25 ByBy13: pai asta fac si eu :p
11:25 ByBy13: XD
11:26 Tony: dar diferenta nu e observabila de un player
11:26 ByBy13: hmm da ;w;
11:26 Tony: fii mai indrazneata
11:26 Tony: :))
11:26 Tony: 04:21:619 (4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432680
11:26 ByBy13: bine :D
11:27 ByBy13: nu chiar acum XD
11:27 Tony: :))))\
Iti multumesc Tony! :)

Also added triplets on the last 2 kiai at the end of the song to make it a bit challenging x3 and changed the offset to 113 (thx Bonsai :3/)
Updated!
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
I presume the unused SB files are because it needs to be made, right?

[Dark]
00:20:613 (2,3,4) - Please make them even distanced, the sounds are all of the same strength
00:27:863 (4,1) - This plays rather weird, because of the stack. Why not move (4) to 480:0 and make (3) a bit more aimed to the bottom
01:04:113 - In this part. Why not give the sounds with a clap a soft-hitclap (via additions and such)?
01:35:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please try to make it perfectly aligned so all DS is the same ^_^
01:42:863 (2,3) - Refer to above (with the stack)
02:00:113 (1,3) - Blanket please
02:26:863 (2,3) - That one stack issue
02:39:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - DS is good here, but if you follow the circular movement, (1) should be at 283:160. Why not redo the stream with "Convert slider to stream" with a sldier which follows the current stream
03:00:863 (2) - This is one of the better stacks, but still, stacks don't really work properly here. Please space it properly
03:16:113 (3,4) - Please make the blanket a bit better
03:54:113 (1,2) - Seems a bit cluttered
04:15:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - And this stream also needs more improvements, but in direct flow and DS
05:19:988 - Consider making kiai stop here

Nice map, but I think you need to map the break as well
That map starts at 00:16:113 and "stops"at 02:08:113
That is 01:52:000 total
Then fom 02:24:113 to 05:25:113 which is 03:01:000
This adds up to a total of 4:53:000<05:00:000
Call me when this is fixed (and you have 12 SP) for bubble
wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
short mod because this map wonderful/w\
[Dark]
  1. 01:21:613 (3,1) - blanket fix
  2. 01:29:113 (3,5) - spacing
  3. 01:44:113 (1,2,3) -
    maybe this
  4. 01:15:363 (5) - the distance can be increased as there are strong bits
  5. 03:02:113 (1,2) - you use 1.3x so 03:02:863 (2,3) - this 1.3x too
  6. 02:04:863 (2,3) - 1.3x
  7. 02:06:863 (2,3) - you use here 1.5x and this u use 02:07:113 (3,4) - 1.3x so use or 1.3x or 1.5x
  8. 04:13:613 (5) -
    slightly lower the end of the slider
  9. 04:15:613 (1,2,3,4) - move slightly to the right
02:24:113 - green tick remove
5% volume? why i think 10 would be better
GL~
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAKARI!

[General]
I dont quite know about Storyboard but some modding assistance software says there're some files unused:
{sb\five.png} {sb\four.png} {sb\senza titolo-1.png} {sb\three.png} {sb\two.png}

[Dark]
00:19:863 00:21:863 00:27:863 Actually I am not very fond of these notes. In fact there're no new sounds on them, thus they felt quite redundant. Removing them, namely purely following the main instrument would be better imo.

00:57:113 (3) - I recommend curving this slider where there's the sound.

01:49:113 (3,4,1,2) - Adjust the position of 4 and 1 so that you would have the same distance between these parallel slider-bodies.

03:11:613 (5) - NC like your previous 1/8 notes. (02:07:613 (1) - )

03:14:113 (2,3) - You could make a better blanket pattern by adjusting the position of the slider head of the inner slider: http://puu.sh/mPgnz/d18d4972ae.jpg

03:24:113 (3) - Not in favor of this sharp curve, not matching with the soft music here imo. Also other sliders you used in this section is with smooth curves.

03:39:113 (4) - Change this to two single notes like your other stanzas?

05:19:613 (4) - Still need an NC though.

05:25:113 Better add just maybe 2 more greenlines so that the volume wont suddenly vary from 30 to 5.

---------------------------------

00:20:113 (1,2,3,4) - Actually, the end of the 1 slider covers no sound, which makes the default hitsound of the slider end quite breaking the background music. If you combine these two 00:20:113 (1,2) - into one long slider, it would be better. Same as many other sections.

00:34:113 (1,2,3,4) - These several notes are a bit crowded, it's better if you make some changes on positions of them so that you would avoid the overlaps of 00:34:363 (2,4) -

00:56:113 (1) - The position of it is almost off-screen, which probably causes the overlap of slider ball circles and hit offset meter.

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Good Luck!
firedigger
183 posts
Joined November 2014
firedigger
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15:40 firedigger: My greetings
15:40 *firedigger is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]]
15:40 ByBy13: :)
15:40 ByBy13: yes?
15:41 firedigger: Firstly, why do you never space (5) away, which has a strong sound (in places like 01:07:113 (3,4,5) - )
15:41 ByBy13: wait a min
16:28 firedigger: I would assume the fact that you have returned to editing the map means that so called "min" has passed
16:29 ByBy13: oops
16:29 ByBy13: sorry
16:29 ByBy13: I'm trying to do a SB
16:30 firedigger: Is that a "yes, I am listening" or "Sorry, not right now"?
16:30 ByBy13: I'm listening ^^'
16:31 firedigger: Firstly, why do you never space away (5) in places like 01:14:863 (2,3,4,5) - which has a strong sound
16:32 ByBy13: just tried different patterns plus I'm using 1.5x
16:32 ByBy13: ^^
16:32 ByBy13: ^^'
16:32 firedigger: The (5) in particular has a clear strong sound, which suggest a slight jump to it
16:33 ByBy13: i know
16:33 ByBy13: ;w;
16:33 ByBy13: but at strong beats i'm using 1.5x while at others I'm using 1.3x
16:34 firedigger: But (5) is like THE STRONGEST, than others
16:36 firedigger: I think that 1.7x + would be appropriate but that's to your liking after all
16:36 ByBy13: it's an hard diff :(
16:36 ByBy13: well for now I'll keep sorry
16:37 firedigger: You don't to appologise
16:37 firedigger: I just wanted to make sure you understood my point
16:37 ByBy13: ah okay ^^
16:37 firedigger: Secondly, 03:12:113 (1) - this is a long straight slider at the end of kiai, which may seems like a Fast slider, but it a really Slow slider
16:37 firedigger: Usually, a curvy shape would hint players that the slider is slow
16:37 ByBy13: because I applied 0.50 sv there
16:38 firedigger: I think that would be a good idea to avoid accidental slider break here
16:38 ByBy13: it's a sv change there
16:38 ByBy13: sure
16:38 firedigger: Don't you want to make some kind of hitsounds on those long sliders?
16:39 ByBy13: I added hitsounds
16:39 ByBy13: there
16:39 ByBy13: o.o
16:39 ByBy13: whistles on their tails
16:39 firedigger: Oh, I see now
16:39 firedigger: nice
16:39 ByBy13: :)
16:39 firedigger: So the last thing I would like discuss is triplets
16:40 ByBy13: yeah
16:40 ByBy13: Tony said to add them
16:40 ByBy13: is the last kiai.It needs some challenge
16:40 firedigger: Yeah, I guess so, but they seems to be out of place, they lack a good purpose in my opinion
16:41 ByBy13: oh :c
16:41 firedigger: The most natural pattern with triplets would be on a sliderstart
16:42 ByBy13: o.o
16:42 firedigger: Let me give an example
16:42 ByBy13: ok
16:42 firedigger: 04:32:863 (2,3,4) - clear illustration
16:43 firedigger: the slider represents long vowel "yyyyeeeeees"
16:43 firedigger: and (2) and (3) would be "my ey.."
16:43 ByBy13: yes
16:43 firedigger: which feel natural on those 2 notes
16:43 ByBy13: I know
16:44 ByBy13: but let's have some challenge here x)
16:44 ByBy13: the triplets are fitting the vocals
16:44 firedigger: so you are saying that such a pattern is too easy?
16:44 ByBy13: nah
16:45 firedigger: If you want some challnge, what about 04:33:863 (5,6,7) -
16:45 firedigger: 04:33:863 (5) - slider and then 2 notes
16:45 firedigger: slider is for "beeeee", and note for "lieve"
16:45 ByBy13: nah :(
16:46 ByBy13: this will be a bit easier
16:46 firedigger: If you wanted more challenging fina kiai you should have used less 1/1 sliders
16:47 ByBy13: I will ask Bakari about this map ^^'
16:47 ByBy13: yeah sorry ;_;
16:47 ByBy13: I finished it at 3 am
16:47 firedigger: 04:22:113 (1,2) - this for example wants a slider + tap instead a single slider because of strong vocal "make"
16:48 firedigger: Okay, looks like you are finished
16:48 ByBy13: ^^'
16:48 ByBy13: also about that slider, 'please' lyric is extended as I can hear
16:49 firedigger: Yes it is
16:49 ByBy13: :)
16:49 firedigger: but the 1/2 slider would obviously me mapped for usual 1/2 beats
16:49 firedigger: so that's not a concern at all
16:50 ByBy13: oh
16:50 ByBy13: :o
16:50 ByBy13: oh okay ^^
16:50 firedigger: that change could be done nearly to any 1/1 slider there
16:51 firedigger: 04:39:113 (3,4,5) - btw that's a good place for triplet
16:52 firedigger: Because of variant syllables in the word "clear" C,L,R
16:53 firedigger: That trick works poorly with "..lieve" in believe, that's why the triplet looks unnatural
16:54 firedigger: 04:58:113 (1,2) - again, only 2 syllables here, two note look better than three
16:55 firedigger: 02:07:113 (3,1) - btw, why not prolong the slider with the vocals up to the stream?
16:57 ByBy13: the last issue: I prefer to keep as it is
16:57 ByBy13: 04:58:113 (1,2)- nice idea
16:57 ByBy13: the first one sounds weird to me :/
16:59 firedigger: I would still recommend making 02:07:113 (3) - into a 1/2 slider than, since the strong vocals deafen the beats
16:59 firedigger: for the notes
17:00 ByBy13: fixed
17:01 firedigger: 00:27:863 (4) - do you hear a beat here?
17:01 firedigger: I do not
17:01 firedigger: 00:29:863 (5) - ^
17:02 firedigger: This must be a hidden flow technique
17:04 ByBy13: both fixed perhaps
17:05 firedigger: 00:19:863 (4) -
17:05 firedigger: 00:21:863 (5) -
17:06 firedigger: 00:35:863 (5) -
17:06 ByBy13: fixing them now
17:06 firedigger: 00:37:863 (4) -
17:06 firedigger: Okay, that's all
riffy
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riffy
Thank you, everyone! ♥

Also, the mask like thingy in the description should be taking users to the artist's site.

Code for the forum:
[centre][url=http://mrkittydm.bandcamp.com/][img]http://puu.sh/dj6Qs.png[/img][/centre][/url]
meii18
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Topic Starter
meii18

Bakari wrote:

The mask like thingy in the description should be taking users to the artist's site.

Code for the forum:
[centre][url=http://mrkittydm.bandcamp.com/][img]http://puu.sh/dj6Qs.png[/img][/centre][/url]
Oops,thanks Bakari! \w/

EDIT:

Baraatje123 wrote:

I presume the unused SB files are because it needs to be made, right? killed them =w=)b

[Dark]
00:20:613 (2,3,4) - Please make them even distanced, the sounds are all of the same strength They are distanced.Also I've used 1.5x at (4) since there the instruments are stronger exactly on the slider's head
00:27:863 (4,1) - This plays rather weird, because of the stack. Why not move (4) to 480:0 and make (3) a bit more aimed to the bottom I have already removed the note (4)- so I blanketed (1) with the previous slider (of course I extended the previous slider to avoid any snapping issues ^^')
01:04:113 - In this part. Why not give the sounds with a clap a soft-hitclap (via additions and such)? It would sound really noisy so the drum hitclap will sound much better than the soft-hitclap
01:35:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please try to make it perfectly aligned so all DS is the same ^_^ I made a stream here so I used 0.8 for these notes.If I would use 1.5x distance for this stream,it would was a totally mess so I'll keep for now
01:42:863 (2,3) - Refer to above (with the stack) shouldn't be a problem also plays fine to me
02:00:113 (1,3) - Blanket please I didn't intend to do a blanket here :c
02:26:863 (2,3) - That one stack issue It isn't a problem and it plays fine in my opinion
02:39:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - DS is good here, but if you follow the circular movement, (1) should be at 283:160. Why not redo the stream with "Convert slider to stream" with a sldier which follows the current stream The current flow seems fine too,just wanted another structure of the stream or the posistion of the circles let's say XD.Keep it for now
03:00:863 (2) - This is one of the better stacks, but still, stacks don't really work properly here. Please space it properly it is stacked properly o.o
03:16:113 (3,4) - Please make the blanket a bit better tried already and seems fine now c:
03:54:113 (1,2) - Seems a bit cluttered I tried to be you know more inspirate idk how to say but I tried another kind of pattern and I guess it looks fine o.o
04:15:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - And this stream also needs more improvements, but in direct flow and DS here you're right fixed ^^
05:19:988 - Consider making kiai stop here Makes more sense ending the kiai here.Fixed c:

Nice map, but I think you need to map the break as well
That map starts at 00:16:113 and "stops"at 02:08:113
That is 01:52:000 total
Then fom 02:24:113 to 05:25:113 which is 03:01:000
This adds up to a total of 4:53:000<05:00:000 Mapped the breaks thanks :)
Call me when this is fixed (and you have 12 SP) for bubble Thank you so much~ <3

wajinshu wrote:

short mod because this map wonderful/w\
[Dark]
  1. 01:21:613 (3,1) - blanket fix should be fine now :)
  2. 01:29:113 (3,5) - spacing fixed =w=)
  3. 01:44:113 (1,2,3) -
    maybe this
    it will broke the flow as I can see.The current flow looks fine to me ;w;
  4. 01:15:363 (5) - the distance can be increased as there are strong bits Here I increased.It's 1.5x distance there because to emphasize the stronger beats* not bits
  5. 03:02:113 (1,2) - you use 1.3x so 03:02:863 (2,3) - this 1.3x too it was already fixed =w=)
  6. 02:04:863 (2,3) - 1.3x Here I have to use 1.5x distance since on 3's head the vocal is intensifying so here doesn't really need 1.3x distance
  7. 02:06:863 (2,3) - you use here 1.5x and this u use 02:07:113 (3,4) - 1.3x so use or 1.3x or 1.5x I think you made mistakes with the timing points here :/.Well,unfortunately I have to decline this because used between 2 and 3 1.5x to emphasize the stronger vocal from (3)'s head :3
  8. 04:13:613 (5) -
    slightly lower the end of the slider
    fixed c:
  9. 04:15:613 (1,2,3,4) - move slightly to the right already did it for a better flow XD
02:24:113 - green tick remove removed
5% volume? why i think 10 would be better 10 would be you know louder for fading out of the instruments and that's why I used 5% instead of 10% :/
GL~ Thanks my sister! <3

Regraz wrote:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAKARI! yay Bakari \w/

[General]
I dont quite know about Storyboard but some modding assistance software says there're some files unused:
{sb\five.png} {sb\four.png} {sb\senza titolo-1.png} {sb\three.png} {sb\two.png} deleted them ;)

[Dark]
00:19:863 00:21:863 00:27:863 Actually I am not very fond of these notes. In fact there're no new sounds on them, thus they felt quite redundant. Removing them, namely purely following the main instrument would be better imo. already removed them :3

00:57:113 (3) - I recommend curving this slider where there's the sound. I've just tried a sliderart let's say.Also the slider fits the music.Just imagine: The cursor goes up on the slider which represent the intensify of the instruments ;3

01:49:113 (3,4,1,2) - Adjust the position of 4 and 1 so that you would have the same distance between these parallel slider-bodies. Well then I will have a DS issue so I put this slider and note in this way to avoid DS errors (I used 1.5x distance)

03:11:613 (5) - NC like your previous 1/8 notes. (02:07:613 (1) - ) Completely forgot.Added the NC

03:14:113 (2,3) - You could make a better blanket pattern by adjusting the position of the slider head of the inner slider: http://puu.sh/mPgnz/d18d4972ae.jpg fixed

03:24:113 (3) - Not in favor of this sharp curve, not matching with the soft music here imo. Also other sliders you used in this section is with smooth curves. The tail of this slider will see that it fits the intensify of the vocals from music background I mean when the cursor goes up on that tail

03:39:113 (4) - Change this to two single notes like your other stanzas? I want to have a slider here.Just I don't want to do two notes spam XD

05:19:613 (4) - Still need an NC though. added ^^'

05:25:113 Better add just maybe 2 more greenlines so that the volume wont suddenly vary from 30 to 5. tried cx

---------------------------------

00:20:113 (1,2,3,4) - Actually, the end of the 1 slider covers no sound, which makes the default hitsound of the slider end quite breaking the background music. If you combine these two 00:20:113 (1,2) - into one long slider, it would be better. Same as many other sections.

00:34:113 (1,2,3,4) - These several notes are a bit crowded, it's better if you make some changes on positions of them so that you would avoid the overlaps of 00:34:363 (2,4) - tested and the overlap isn't visible in game so i think should be fine :/

00:56:113 (1) - The position of it is almost off-screen, which probably causes the overlap of slider ball circles and hit offset meter. it isn't offscreen as I can see.I think it was but I guess I fixed it already o.o

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Good Luck! Thanks :3/
@Battle: Fixed all these three issues thanks again! :)
Updated! and thanks RikiH_ for the sudden star! \w/
Milan-
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Milan-
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2016-01-30 20:20 Milan-: 02:22:863 (3) - move to 149/264 looks bit better xdd
2016-01-30 20:20 ByBy13: okay
2016-01-30 20:20 ByBy13: wait a min
2016-01-30 20:21 ByBy13: fixed
2016-01-30 20:21 ByBy13: :3
2016-01-30 20:21 Milan-: also 02:23:113 (4,5) - for stuff like this you could use slider leneancy instead of delaying in distance, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4437504
2016-01-30 20:22 ByBy13: hmm okay
2016-01-30 20:23 Milan-: 03:16:150 (3) - nc pls
2016-01-30 20:24 ByBy13: added xd
2016-01-30 20:24 Milan-: 03:24:150 (3) -
2016-01-30 20:24 ByBy13: added =w=)
2016-01-30 20:26 ByBy13: also
2016-01-30 20:26 ByBy13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4437526
2016-01-30 20:26 ByBy13: tried another pattern >w<
2016-01-30 20:26 Milan-: good
2016-01-30 20:27 ByBy13: :)
2016-01-30 20:27 Milan-: uhm
2016-01-30 20:27 ByBy13: yes?
2016-01-30 20:27 Milan-: drum section could use more volumen, like 10%
2016-01-30 20:27 ByBy13: where? :o
2016-01-30 20:27 Milan-: the music has similar instruments so it kinda hard to hear
2016-01-30 20:27 Milan-: the drum lines
2016-01-30 20:27 ByBy13: ok owo
2016-01-30 20:28 ByBy13: then I will set everything to 40 and 50 okay?
2016-01-30 20:28 Milan-: soft lines are fine tho
2016-01-30 20:28 Milan-: the whistles are hearable
2016-01-30 20:29 ByBy13: okay
2016-01-30 20:29 Milan-: 05:25:113 - use soft sampleset here xd
2016-01-30 20:29 ByBy13: used
2016-01-30 20:29 ByBy13: :3
2016-01-30 20:29 Milan-: then some overlaps like 04:53:113 (3,1) - that dont look too well
2016-01-30 20:30 ByBy13: ah yeah D:
2016-01-30 20:30 Milan-: 00:54:113 (1,4) - 01:28:613 (2,5) -
2016-01-30 20:30 Milan-: that's all
2016-01-30 20:31 ByBy13: okay :3
2016-01-30 20:31 Milan-: could use lower ar
2016-01-30 20:31 Milan-: i guess
2016-01-30 20:31 Milan-: but up to you
2016-01-30 20:31 ByBy13: okay XD
2016-01-30 20:32 Milan-: does it have sb
2016-01-30 20:32 Milan-: or you removed it xd
2016-01-30 20:33 ByBy13: I removed it
2016-01-30 20:33 Milan-: dam
2016-01-30 20:33 Milan-: well tell me it's updated
2016-01-30 20:33 ByBy13: okay
2016-01-30 20:41 ByBy13: updated
2016-01-30 20:41 ByBy13: fixed the overlaps
2016-01-30 20:42 ByBy13: increased the volume from 40% to 50%
2016-01-30 20:42 Milan-: ok
2016-01-30 20:42 Milan-: btw where's meta from
2016-01-30 20:43 ByBy13: http://mrkittydm.bandcamp.com/album/eternity
2016-01-30 20:44 ByBy13: 4th track
2016-01-30 20:48 Milan-: alright
2016-01-30 20:48 ByBy13: :3

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meii18
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meii18
Thank you so much for bubble #1 Milan- ~ <3
Bara-
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Bara-
01:35:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - What I meant with incorrect spacing is that (1,2,3,4) all have 0.8, but 01:36:113 (1) - has 0.87
02:09:113 (4,1) - Try to make them symmetrical
03:24:150 (1,2) - ^^
04:15:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - The stream still doesn't look great. Why not try the following coordinates
  1. 419:74 (1)
  2. 399:46 (2)
  3. 365:29 (3)
  4. 327:27 (4)
  5. Keep the slider at its current place
I'll #2 when this is fixed ^_^
meii18
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Topic Starter
meii18

Baraatje123 wrote:

01:35:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - What I meant with incorrect spacing is that (1,2,3,4) all have 0.8, but 01:36:113 (1) - has 0.87 my apologies fixed ^^'
02:09:113 (4,1) - Try to make them symmetrical fixed :)
03:24:150 (1,2) - ^^ tried to do.I thought they were symmetrical o.o
04:15:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - The stream still doesn't look great. Why not try the following coordinates
  1. 419:74 (1)
  2. 399:46 (2)
  3. 365:29 (3)
  4. 327:27 (4)
  5. Keep the slider at its current place fixed.Looks much better :D
I'll #2 when this is fixed ^_^ yay thanks~ <3
in addition,changed a rhythm for consistency let's say ^^',added an missing finish on 04:18:113(1)-.Also I used 1.5x distance on 03:12:150 because there is timing change plus sv change.Updated!
Bara-
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Bara-
I'll #2 because this is fixed
meii18
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meii18

Baraatje123 wrote:

I'll #2 because this is fixed
Yay thank you so much Baraatje! <3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Nothing much to say, good job.

~ Happy Birthday Bakari ~


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13:25 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]]
13:27 ByBy13: :3
13:27 Gero: alright
13:30 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]]
13:30 ByBy13: okay :)
13:31 Gero: 00:18:113 (1,2) - I know for which reason you broken the spacing but still feels inconsistent consider that the next note have the right one
13:31 Gero: fix the spacing
13:31 ByBy13: ok
13:32 Gero: 00:22:113 (1) - whistle at the tail of the slider
13:32 ByBy13: added ^^
13:32 ByBy13: and fixed the spacing
13:35 Gero: 00:34:113 (1,2,3,4) - nice one but his pattern could be improved so I would like to suggest you [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4443510 this] instead, just increase the spacing a bit and it will be fine, btw 00:34:613 (3,4) - try to clean a bit the blanket
13:36 Gero: 00:46:863 (3) - how about to move this to X:416 and Y:132? it looks better like this, you should try it imo
13:36 ByBy13: uhm I want to keep 1.5x here o.o
13:36 Gero: up to you
13:36 ByBy13: oki XD
13:37 Gero: 01:21:613 (3,1) - ByBy the Blanket please ;___;
13:37 ByBy13: the blanket looks fine to me ;__;
13:38 Gero: 02:01:113 (3) - you forgot the finish/clap at the head as you did before
13:38 ByBy13: there should be the clap.added
13:42 ByBy13: something else? o.o
13:44 Gero: 04:18:113 (1,2) - this is not that bad but how about adding a movement at this part? something like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4443579 this] could works well or you can try it another thing as well, consider it since the other parts you did almost the same
13:44 ByBy13: ok wait a min
13:45 Gero: okay
13:47 ByBy13: I wanted to make this kiai more special.Also asked a qat (Bakari) and he said the stacks are fine
13:48 Gero: alright 
13:48 Gero: update it
13:48 ByBy13: oki :3
13:50 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877745 Mr.Kitty - Mother Mary [Dark]]
13:50 ByBy13: updated
13:50 Gero: okay
13:51 ByBy13: I want to see the flame =w=
meii18
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Omg my first approved map finally! Thank you soooo much Gero!! <3
Bara-
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Bara-
Gratz! Good job, you deserve it :3
meii18
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Baraatje123 wrote:

Gratz! Good job, you deserve it :3
Thanks Baraatje! :3/
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