00:10:021 (1) - The rhythm felt quite unnatural since a metronome change happens here. According to that, 00:10:159 becomes a new downbeat, and making it clickable would work better.
00:21:270 (1) - Not bad in actual patterns, but the music is different with 00:20:436 (1,1,1). A strong beat exists at 00:21:409, and ignoring by using a 3/4 slider for the sake of patterning didn't fits the music nicely.
00:38:029 (8,1) - Well.. personally the transition from 1/3 to 1/4 felt too sudden. Maybe taking advantage of sliders would suit better.
00:40:436 (7,1,2,3) - The rhythm transition along the pattern is really bad. Using a 1/3 reverse slider at 00:40:714 will make things a little better, but considering the distance usage, I think this pattern needs a rework.
00:42:936 (3,1,2,3) - These are 1/2, while having a same spacing with the previous 1/1. Mind giving some difference to increase its readability?
00:59:881 (10) - I've got a feeling that this is few pixel off from being perfectly linear.
01:09:325 - 01:09:881 - I feel the hitsound should be something more representing the strong sound here.
01:47:010 (3,4,5) - These clicks being in a random 1/3 spot instead a downbeat seems to be hard to catch the actual rhythm while playing.
01:51:733 (4,5,6) - This 1/4 transition is too sudden again imo. Just fyi, the transition of 02:17:659 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3) was rather good since 1/4 and 1/3 has a clearly different spacing to indicate its rhythm, and the actual transition was done by a slider, giving players an information that a rhythm change happened.
03:08:770 (4) - 04:59:881 (4) - 05:11:270 (4) - Consider NC for pattern distribution?
03:10:992 (2,3,4) - This 1/3 transition wasn't good too imo.
03:30:159 (1,2) - Add NC at (2). It is hard to read the rhythms properly currently. Also giving a bigger spacing between these such as 03:30:992 (7,1) will benefit.
04:53:492 (1,2) - Wouldn't making a transition using a 1/3 reverse be more readable?
I felt the quality is fine, but some transition between 1/3 and 1/4 needs an improvement in my opinion. Popping over those intuitive readability stuff. I'd appreciate if you can seek like more than 3 decent mods from the community, and then call me again. I don't feel the set is perfectly readied currently.