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Holoaz
基本的にただの意見なのでスルーしてくれても構いません
Timing
offset -535(+7)くらいが丁度いいと思います
General
赤線が2本ありますが2本目はいらないと思う
timing線(緑線)はCircleと重ならないようにした方がいいみたいです
こんな感じにずらす
Normal
00:30:404 (4) - new combo
00:46:825 (5) - ^
00:51:246 (7) - ^
00:54:404 (3) - ^
01:01:983 (6) - ^
01:07:036 (6) - ^
01:31:667 (5) - ^
01:33:562 (4) - ^
02:03:878 (1) - ^
02:11:457 (2) - ^
02:38:614 (7) - ^
02:41:772 (3) - ^
02:49:351 (1) - ^
02:54:404 (6) - ^
03:03:23 の緑線削除
Hard
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除
01:03:878 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:510 (5) - new combo
03:03:23の緑線削除
Insane
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除(Hardと同じ)
02:41:141 (3) - new combo
02:46:194 (8) - ^

nice map set! :)
Topic Starter
val0108
Timing
offset -535(+7)くらいが丁度いいと思います
直しましたー :)
General
赤線が2本ありますが2本目はいらないと思う
これいるのかいらないのかすごく迷ってたんです :( ありです!
timing線(緑線)はCircleと重ならないようにした方がいいみたいです
こんな感じにずらす
Normal.hard.insane全部修正しました! :)
Normal
00:30:404 (4) - new combo
00:46:825 (5) - ^
00:51:246 (7) - ^
00:54:404 (3) - ^
01:01:983 (6) - ^
01:07:036 (6) - ^
01:31:667 (5) - ^
01:33:562 (4) - ^
02:03:878 (1) - ^
02:11:457 (2) - ^
02:38:614 (7) - ^
02:41:772 (3) - ^
02:49:351 (1) - ^
02:54:404 (6) - ^
03:03:23 の緑線削除
Hard
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除
01:03:878 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:510 (5) - new combo
03:03:23の緑線削除
Insane
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除(Hardと同じ)
02:41:141 (3) - new combo
02:46:194 (8) - ^

↑全部修正しました!
ノーマルに関しては酷い作りようでしたlol
細かいところまでありがとうございます! :)
banvi
ボカロ+好きな曲なので勝手ながら見てみました>_<;
緑(=直すべき所)以外はただの私の意見なのでスルーしても構いませんw
General
ボカロの場合
Source : Vocaloid
Tag: (作曲者=Junky)
または、これの逆がいいです、ニコ動はTagに入れても入れなくてもいいです
BGを800*600にするのが好ましい

全難易度のsong setup > enable countdownを外してください

Normal
HP -1 , AR -1 or -2 , OD -1 or -2 (normalにしては早い)
00:49:043 (4,1) この間がnormalとして気になるので(4)を(3)に重ねてみてください

01:40:201 (1) normalにしてはちょっと短いspinner
02:36:411 (2,1) この間がnormalとして気になります、02:36:096 (1,2)は元のspeed/spacingでいいと思います

Hard
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:33:571 (9) new combo?
00:43:676 (8) ^
02:00:729 (1) remove new combo?
02:52:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 左右対称にしたほうがキレイだと思います(後のspacing調整を考えながら)

Insane
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:23:622 (7) 不自然なジャンプ
01:34:832 (3) はみだしすぎです;;
02:49:832 (1) remove new combo
Too difficult for me , but very fun (:

starrrr & gl
Topic Starter
val0108
General
ボカロの場合
Source : Vocaloid
Tag: (作曲者=Junky)
または、これの逆がいいです、ニコ動はTagに入れても入れなくてもいいです
BGを800*600にするのが好ましい

全難易度のsong setup > enable countdownを外してください

Normal
HP -1 , AR -1 or -2 , OD -1 or -2 (normalにしては早い)
00:49:043 (4,1) この間がnormalとして気になるので(4)を(3)に重ねてみてください

01:40:201 (1) normalにしてはちょっと短いspinner
02:36:411 (2,1) この間がnormalとして気になります、02:36:096 (1,2)は元のspeed/spacingでいいと思います

Hard
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:33:571 (9) new combo?
00:43:676 (8) ^
02:00:729 (1) remove new combo?
02:52:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 左右対称にしたほうがキレイだと思います(後のspacing調整を考えながら)

Insane
song setup > Audio lead in +1
01:34:832 (3) はみだしすぎです;;
02:49:832 (1) remove new combo
↑修正しました! :)
00:23:622 (7) 不自然なジャンプ
このジャンプ実は結構好きなんです :o
一応New comboにしました><sorry :(
問題あるようでしたら妥協します。

アドバイスありがとうございます! :) 譜面作成初心者なのですごく勉強になります! ;)
Thank you For pleying! :)
valuable
:roll:
Topic Starter
val0108

valuable wrote:

:roll:
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you Star! :D
K o h a k u
so fasssstttt maps!!
駆け抜けるところのスライダー好きです!

star~ fightiiiiing!!!
gowww
8-)
Topic Starter
val0108
あんばーさんGoさんお星様ありがとううう! :)
Thank you For pleying! :)
orioncomet
[Normal]
01:39:253 (6) - new combo? seem like spacing changed on (6,7,8,9)
02:36:727 (1) - a bit too far from (2)? I know it's new combo but dont add jump on Normal diff >_<!
02:56:937 (1) - end this spinner at 03:00:412? just asking, for same as Hard diff

hmm.. maybe you need easer difficulity o-o

[Hard]
- resnap all notes
- [suggestion] circle size -1
- i think this diff a bit hard to click for Hard x-x; may be because of high bpm
00:36:728 (1) - too jump? move this note closer to (4) then this plz
01:28:043 (1,2,3) - move them a bit closer?
01:37:991 (6) - too far from (5)?
01:40:517 (6) - ^
02:16:517 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - are those silder really need to add new combo on every single silder o-o;;
02:43:359 (8) - move a bit closer to (7)

[Insane]
- resnap all notes
I'd ask you like Hard diff about new combo on every single silder, and seem like those streams I can't play XD [I'm bad at streamming anyways] and feel like some part/jump need to add new combo, and those dark combo colors really hard to see on this diff (when playing) IMO, could you make them lighter then this a bit? and crazy diff #_#;; not that bad though

Fighto!
Topic Starter
val0108

orioncomet wrote:

[Normal]
01:39:253 (6) - new combo? seem like spacing changed on (6,7,8,9)
02:36:727 (1) - a bit too far from (2)? I know it's new combo but dont add jump on Normal diff >_<!
02:56:937 (1) - end this spinner at 03:00:412? just asking, for same as Hard diff ok


hmm.. maybe you need easer difficulity o-o

[Hard]
- resnap all notes
- [suggestion] circle size -1
- i think this diff a bit hard to click for Hard x-x; may be because of high bpm
00:36:728 (1) - too jump? move this note closer to (4) then this plz
01:28:043 (1,2,3) - move them a bit closer?
01:37:991 (6) - too far from (5)?
01:40:517 (6) - ^
02:16:517 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - are those silder really need to add new combo on every single silder o-o;;
02:43:359 (8) - move a bit closer to (7)

[Insane]
- resnap all notes
I'd ask you like Hard diff about new combo on every single silder, and seem like those streams I can't play XD [I'm bad at streamming anyways] and feel like some part/jump need to add new combo, and those dark combo colors really hard to see on this diff (when playing) IMO, could you make them lighter then this a bit? and crazy diff #_#;; not that bad though

Fighto!
I all revised it :)
It was helped very much. I am glad :)
Flute
good slider('ε')
Shinespark
superb work
Topic Starter
val0108

Flute wrote:

good slider('ε')
thx :) me too love sliderXD

お星様ありがとううう 8-)
Topic Starter
val0108

Shinespark wrote:

superb work
thxXD The making of this sheet of music was great :o
But I think that a good sheet of music was completed!!

Thanl you for pleynig and star :)
Shinkuu
nice work
Topic Starter
val0108

Shinkuu wrote:

nice work
Thank you pley and star :)
MayBe
nice~!
ReimuSS
神譜面!
Kotone
GUMI<3

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