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Megpoid GUMI - For my soul

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val0108

S i R i R u wrote:

ふぁいてぃん~ ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛

あ、赤コンボの色少し見にくいかも。背景に溶け込んでるかもかなぁ。 w

と言うかジャンプ派に連打は拷問ですたwwww’
頑張りますー><お星様ありです(。・・!
コンボカラーちょっと変えました!
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val0108
Muyaさん loli_milkさん Lunetさん Patchさん taNaさん お星様ありです!><
Thank you For pleying! :)
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val0108

Apricot wrote:

umu
お星様ありです :)
umu!?どこか気になるとこありますか?lol
Kotone
GUMI!<3
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val0108

karenying wrote:

GUMI!<3
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you star ;)
Orz-
8-)
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val0108

Orz- wrote:

8-)
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you star ;)
Viola
nice map!
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val0108

Viola wrote:

nice map!
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you star ;)
kusakabe001
star~ヘ(・ω・ヘ)
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val0108

kusakabe001 wrote:

star~ヘ(・ω・ヘ)
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you star! :)
Holoaz
基本的にただの意見なのでスルーしてくれても構いません
Timing
offset -535(+7)くらいが丁度いいと思います
General
赤線が2本ありますが2本目はいらないと思う
timing線(緑線)はCircleと重ならないようにした方がいいみたいです
こんな感じにずらす
Normal
SPOILER
00:30:404 (4) - new combo
00:46:825 (5) - ^
00:51:246 (7) - ^
00:54:404 (3) - ^
01:01:983 (6) - ^
01:07:036 (6) - ^
01:31:667 (5) - ^
01:33:562 (4) - ^
02:03:878 (1) - ^
02:11:457 (2) - ^
02:38:614 (7) - ^
02:41:772 (3) - ^
02:49:351 (1) - ^
02:54:404 (6) - ^
03:03:23 の緑線削除
Hard
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除
01:03:878 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:510 (5) - new combo
03:03:23の緑線削除
Insane
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除(Hardと同じ)
02:41:141 (3) - new combo
02:46:194 (8) - ^

nice map set! :)
Topic Starter
val0108
Timing
offset -535(+7)くらいが丁度いいと思います
直しましたー :)
General
赤線が2本ありますが2本目はいらないと思う
これいるのかいらないのかすごく迷ってたんです :( ありです!
timing線(緑線)はCircleと重ならないようにした方がいいみたいです
こんな感じにずらす
Normal.hard.insane全部修正しました! :)
Normal
SPOILER
00:30:404 (4) - new combo
00:46:825 (5) - ^
00:51:246 (7) - ^
00:54:404 (3) - ^
01:01:983 (6) - ^
01:07:036 (6) - ^
01:31:667 (5) - ^
01:33:562 (4) - ^
02:03:878 (1) - ^
02:11:457 (2) - ^
02:38:614 (7) - ^
02:41:772 (3) - ^
02:49:351 (1) - ^
02:54:404 (6) - ^
03:03:23 の緑線削除
Hard
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除
01:03:878 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:510 (5) - new combo
03:03:23の緑線削除
Insane
最初の赤線で音量調整して一本目の緑線削除(Hardと同じ)
02:41:141 (3) - new combo
02:46:194 (8) - ^

↑全部修正しました!
ノーマルに関しては酷い作りようでしたlol
細かいところまでありがとうございます! :)
banvi
ボカロ+好きな曲なので勝手ながら見てみました>_<;
緑(=直すべき所)以外はただの私の意見なのでスルーしても構いませんw
General
ボカロの場合
Source : Vocaloid
Tag: (作曲者=Junky)
または、これの逆がいいです、ニコ動はTagに入れても入れなくてもいいです
BGを800*600にするのが好ましい

全難易度のsong setup > enable countdownを外してください

Normal
HP -1 , AR -1 or -2 , OD -1 or -2 (normalにしては早い)
00:49:043 (4,1) この間がnormalとして気になるので(4)を(3)に重ねてみてください

01:40:201 (1) normalにしてはちょっと短いspinner
02:36:411 (2,1) この間がnormalとして気になります、02:36:096 (1,2)は元のspeed/spacingでいいと思います

Hard
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:33:571 (9) new combo?
00:43:676 (8) ^
02:00:729 (1) remove new combo?
02:52:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 左右対称にしたほうがキレイだと思います(後のspacing調整を考えながら)

Insane
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:23:622 (7) 不自然なジャンプ
01:34:832 (3) はみだしすぎです;;
02:49:832 (1) remove new combo
Too difficult for me , but very fun (:

starrrr & gl
Topic Starter
val0108
General
ボカロの場合
Source : Vocaloid
Tag: (作曲者=Junky)
または、これの逆がいいです、ニコ動はTagに入れても入れなくてもいいです
BGを800*600にするのが好ましい

全難易度のsong setup > enable countdownを外してください

Normal
HP -1 , AR -1 or -2 , OD -1 or -2 (normalにしては早い)
00:49:043 (4,1) この間がnormalとして気になるので(4)を(3)に重ねてみてください

01:40:201 (1) normalにしてはちょっと短いspinner
02:36:411 (2,1) この間がnormalとして気になります、02:36:096 (1,2)は元のspeed/spacingでいいと思います

Hard
song setup > Audio lead in +1
00:33:571 (9) new combo?
00:43:676 (8) ^
02:00:729 (1) remove new combo?
02:52:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 左右対称にしたほうがキレイだと思います(後のspacing調整を考えながら)

Insane
song setup > Audio lead in +1
01:34:832 (3) はみだしすぎです;;
02:49:832 (1) remove new combo
↑修正しました! :)
00:23:622 (7) 不自然なジャンプ
このジャンプ実は結構好きなんです :o
一応New comboにしました><sorry :(
問題あるようでしたら妥協します。

アドバイスありがとうございます! :) 譜面作成初心者なのですごく勉強になります! ;)
Thank you For pleying! :)
valuable_old
:roll:
Topic Starter
val0108

valuable wrote:

:roll:
Thank you For pleying! :) Thank you Star! :D
K o h a k u
so fasssstttt maps!!
駆け抜けるところのスライダー好きです!

star~ fightiiiiing!!!
gowww
8-)
Topic Starter
val0108
あんばーさんGoさんお星様ありがとううう! :)
Thank you For pleying! :)
orioncomet
[Normal]
01:39:253 (6) - new combo? seem like spacing changed on (6,7,8,9)
02:36:727 (1) - a bit too far from (2)? I know it's new combo but dont add jump on Normal diff >_<!
02:56:937 (1) - end this spinner at 03:00:412? just asking, for same as Hard diff

hmm.. maybe you need easer difficulity o-o

[Hard]
- resnap all notes
- [suggestion] circle size -1
- i think this diff a bit hard to click for Hard x-x; may be because of high bpm
00:36:728 (1) - too jump? move this note closer to (4) then this plz
01:28:043 (1,2,3) - move them a bit closer?
01:37:991 (6) - too far from (5)?
01:40:517 (6) - ^
02:16:517 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - are those silder really need to add new combo on every single silder o-o;;
02:43:359 (8) - move a bit closer to (7)

[Insane]
- resnap all notes
I'd ask you like Hard diff about new combo on every single silder, and seem like those streams I can't play XD [I'm bad at streamming anyways] and feel like some part/jump need to add new combo, and those dark combo colors really hard to see on this diff (when playing) IMO, could you make them lighter then this a bit? and crazy diff #_#;; not that bad though

Fighto!
Topic Starter
val0108

orioncomet wrote:

[Normal]
01:39:253 (6) - new combo? seem like spacing changed on (6,7,8,9)
02:36:727 (1) - a bit too far from (2)? I know it's new combo but dont add jump on Normal diff >_<!
02:56:937 (1) - end this spinner at 03:00:412? just asking, for same as Hard diff ok


hmm.. maybe you need easer difficulity o-o

[Hard]
- resnap all notes
- [suggestion] circle size -1
- i think this diff a bit hard to click for Hard x-x; may be because of high bpm
00:36:728 (1) - too jump? move this note closer to (4) then this plz
01:28:043 (1,2,3) - move them a bit closer?
01:37:991 (6) - too far from (5)?
01:40:517 (6) - ^
02:16:517 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - are those silder really need to add new combo on every single silder o-o;;
02:43:359 (8) - move a bit closer to (7)

[Insane]
- resnap all notes
I'd ask you like Hard diff about new combo on every single silder, and seem like those streams I can't play XD [I'm bad at streamming anyways] and feel like some part/jump need to add new combo, and those dark combo colors really hard to see on this diff (when playing) IMO, could you make them lighter then this a bit? and crazy diff #_#;; not that bad though

Fighto!
I all revised it :)
It was helped very much. I am glad :)
Flute
good slider('ε')
Shinespark
superb work
Topic Starter
val0108

Flute wrote:

good slider('ε')
thx :) me too love sliderXD

お星様ありがとううう 8-)
Topic Starter
val0108

Shinespark wrote:

superb work
thxXD The making of this sheet of music was great :o
But I think that a good sheet of music was completed!!

Thanl you for pleynig and star :)
Shinkuu
nice work
Topic Starter
val0108

Shinkuu wrote:

nice work
Thank you pley and star :)
MayBe
nice~!
ReimuSS
神譜面!
Kotone
GUMI<3

Artist:Megpoid GUMI
or add Megpoid to tag
Topic Starter
val0108

karenying wrote:

GUMI<3

Artist:Megpoid GUMI ok
or add Megpoid to tag
I revised it :) thx 8-)

>Maybeeさん,ReimuSSさん
お星様ありがとうう ;)
LaceWingfield
its a star!!!
i love GUMI :3
Topic Starter
val0108

Izayoi Scarlet wrote:

its a star!!!
i love GUMI :3
Thank you star :)
I love GUMI, too 8-)
Kitsuneko
nice mapヾ(*'ω')ノ~☆Star!
modding in IRC.
no kudos,thx~
Topic Starter
val0108

Rikei wrote:

nice mapヾ(*'ω')ノ~☆Star!
modding in IRC.
no kudos,thx~
Thank you star :)
Garven
I can't remember if you requested this or I picked it up from #modreqs. ;_;

[General]
Add Parmy to tags
Maybe darubisshuP (guitar solo) and karu (for illustration) to tags as well?
Please rename GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu to Megpoid GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu
Also delete GUMI - For my soul (val0108).osb and full resubmit.

[Normal]
There are a lot of tricky techniques that you have used in this difficulty that leaves me wary for this to be the easiest difficulty of the set. If you could get an easy difficulty mapped, I think this mapset would benefit greatly.
00:40:521 (2,3) - I have found with cutting sliders like these that if you can arrange them so that the hitcircles are not overlapping with the slider body, it will look 1000x better. So maybe something like this would look better:
02:16:522 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row. D: Think you can maybe map through 02:21:574 (1,1) - ? 4 of them is tiring.
Kind of wish you didn't copy/paste the chorus, but oh well.

[Hard]
00:19:047 (4,5,6) - This overlap is a little ugly.
02:41:784 (1) - This is really hard to tell if it's a slider or note. Maybe rearrange to something like this?
02:44:311 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:574 (1,1,1) - ^
02:46:837 (1) - ^
Not much wrong here, though it felt a little streamy considering the part of the song you decided to map. You could make this a little simpler with the rhythms and still have it fun, imo.

[Insane]
Can you even play this well? @_@
00:11:469 (2,3,4,5) - This seems a little ridiculous. :/
00:17:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:44:626 (2,3) - Control + R these? Confusing as is.
02:16:521 (1) - This part is neat with the video, but too many new combos. Please reduce some. ><
02:39:890 (1) - Kind of expected this to be at 02:39:732 - and a note added at 02:40:363 -
Feels really over-the-top for this song.

複雑の英語はすみません。
Topic Starter
val0108

Garven wrote:

I can't remember if you requested this or I picked it up from #modreqs. ;_;

[General]
Add Parmy to tags
Maybe darubisshuP (guitar solo) and karu (for illustration) to tags as well?
Please rename GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu to Megpoid GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu
Also delete GUMI - For my soul (val0108).osb and full resubmit.

[Normal]
There are a lot of tricky techniques that you have used in this difficulty that leaves me wary for this to be the easiest difficulty of the set. If you could get an easy difficulty mapped, I think this mapset would benefit greatly.
00:40:521 (2,3) - I have found with cutting sliders like these that if you can arrange them so that the hitcircles are not overlapping with the slider body, it will look 1000x better. So maybe something like this would look better:
02:16:522 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row. D: Think you can maybe map through 02:21:574 (1,1) - ? 4 of them is tiring.
Kind of wish you didn't copy/paste the chorus, but oh well.

[Hard]
00:19:047 (4,5,6) - This overlap is a little ugly.
02:41:784 (1) - This is really hard to tell if it's a slider or note. Maybe rearrange to something like this?
02:44:311 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:574 (1,1,1) - ^
02:46:837 (1) - ^
Not much wrong here, though it felt a little streamy considering the part of the song you decided to map. You could make this a little simpler with the rhythms and still have it fun, imo.

[Insane]
Can you even play this well? @_@ No proglem 8-)
00:11:469 (2,3,4,5) - This seems a little ridiculous. :/ I put New combo
00:17:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I put New combo
00:44:626 (2,3) - Control + R these? Confusing as is.
02:16:521 (1) - This part is neat with the video, but too many new combos. Please reduce some. ><
02:39:890 (1) - Kind of expected this to be at 02:39:732 - and a note added at 02:40:363 -
Feels really over-the-top for this song.

複雑の英語はすみません。
I revised all these :)
Thank you Mod :) I'm glad :roll:
mooai
nice map~!!'-'*
Topic Starter
val0108

mooai wrote:

nice map~!!'-'*
thank you :roll:
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