Yo.
[Lunatic]
[Hard]
[Lunatic]
- 00:30:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - The first 4 notes are not really complimenting the slider at the end, it felt odd, the angles of the 1/4 slider, the whole 4 note pattern adn the last slider are not going very well together, perhaps because of the 1/4 gap as well, I'd suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/mXSbQ/6908653487.jpg
- 00:40:093 (6,1,2) - Pretty sure this could be more interesting like the music, almost linear pattern is not justified here imo, something like this would be nice: http://puu.sh/mXSkF/059f59cb99.jpg It creates a nice pressure on 1 with the direction shift and then it happens again with 2 with bigger distance.
- 00:44:885 (4,5) - Like before, the angle and gap is quite odd, I realise there's a strong beat on the blue tick but with such tight pattern it's not really fun.
- 00:53:010 (3,1) - I don't recommend that at all, 3/4 gap stacked, pretty unexpected, anything else is preferable imo.
- 01:05:718 (2,3) - Muting the sliderends here is great, highly recommended.
- 01:14:052 (7,1) - Could add a bit more spacing to support the strong note and give the pattern some room to breath.
- 01:21:552 (3) - Try placing it at x73 y247 to go with the slider shape and movement a bit better.
- 02:08:843 (6,1) - No 1/4 to follow vocals?
- 02:20:927 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/mXSLg/207701a452.jpg This pattern goes much much better with the vocals, even if you aimed to follow the instruments only, this goes really really well.
- 03:07:177 (5) - Some emphasization here would be nice
- 03:15:718 (1,2) - Two 1/1 circles then 1/2 sliders twice? A bit odd, either make them all the same pattern, or just switch, like circles -> sliders -> circles, or sliders -> circles -> sliders just like at the Hard diff, both are going to be cool.
[Hard]
- 00:39:260 (1,2,3) - I think that's a bit too much for a Hard, triplet, circle and a triplet works fairly well.
- 00:53:010 (3,1) - Like before, I don't recommend that, especially on a Hard lol.
- 01:05:718 (2,3) - Mute the sliderends here as well!
- 01:17:385 (5,1,2) - A bit odd, the vocals deserve some better emphasization and the static movement doesn't seem justified, try this instead: http://puu.sh/mXThp/a9c82f7244.jpg
- 01:39:260 (1,2,3) - Like before, I want to ask, why do you ignore so many rhythms but you decided to follow this on that diff? It's kinda weird. Regardless, I won't mention it again.
- 03:40:093 (3) - Don't ignore the 1/2 here, it's quite significant and unsettling this way.
- 03:55:718 (5,1,2,3) - This looks really really weird lol, might be confusing for some players.
- 00:32:593 (3) - Egh.. pretty sure that's not supposed to be snapped to end on the blue tick.
- 00:35:093 (2,3) - 1/4 is not suitable for a Normal difficulty.
- 00:46:760 (5) - Snapped incorrectly.
- 00:50:927 (1) - Remove clap from end, it doesn't fit really well.
- 02:14:260 (1,2) - Gap is pretty big for no reason, I'd suggest mapping 02:15:302 as well. Erm this repeats twice right afterwards, 6/4 gap is really weird especially when there's something in the song to avoid that, so..
- 02:24:260 (1) - How about this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/mXUtP/b8ce6b6c94.jpg
- 03:12:177 (4) - Remove clap from sliderend, it's wrong.
- 03:39:885 (5) - Rhythm is quite odd compared to the other diffs, you can either use this http://puu.sh/mXUCU/11ce4dcccb.jpg or this http://puu.sh/mXUF2/9be457e878.jpg