HARD:Try to put the beats not so systematically, use more creativity and put them a bit randomly. Do not stack them as much as you do. It's way cooler so move the mouse to the beat than just have the cursor stayin' there. Make it more "Lesjuh" typish.
Use more SLIDERS!!!! to where he says stuff in the song. Long words = sliders. Short stuff which goes with the clap = normal beats like you'd done a great job with. Play around with the distance snap and make more jumps. Hard should be hard. Some jumps wouldn't hurt!
In the song setup the difficulty for approach rate and overall difficulty I'd like to see it twp snaps harder. It's hard right? Not normal..
Try out the HP drain rate too. And also.. Don't use the whistle too much.
I know you're a noob and all that but you must look at other beatmaps for inspiration, beatmaps with hight rating, famous makers etc and look how their beatmaps look like and is make.
Don't be afraid to put the beats closer not just in a simple pattern on the map. Make it more to the music. Slow down the music and use beats to it and such.. etc etc. Bla bla bla y'know?
I'd like bookmarks in these places: (Coz I love 'em)00:13:530
00:31:407
It's easier to find everything that way.
And I'd also like to see these beats gone:00:26:509
00:26:754
00:31:775 < Replace with slider or something, coz ee~eys
Do the similar thing to the other beats if ya' want.
Move these beats:00:30:428 to 00:30:305 < It sounds better to the music, don't ya' think?
Do the similar thing to the other beats if ya' want.
Add these beats: 00:15:367
00:30:795 < Sounds and looks a lot better IMO
Do the similar thing to the other beats if ya' want.
NORMAL:Uh.. There's so much.. wrong with all this.. sorry, (also the hard) But you can start with making it easier. Change the distance snap, setup, colors, etc etc. For both. I hope you'll do better with my tips. AND REMEMBER! Look at other beatmaps and make yours more.. like theirs. Easy is good enough I think.
Also! Another BG would be nice too.
STARED!! Kudosu me for this please!
Awesome work btw for your first beatmap! It's not easy the first time so I recomend playing around with ALL the tools you can find in the editors thing.
Make sure someone can try using double time for Easy, Normal and Hard
Make sure someone can try using hardrock for easy, normal and hard too.
Hidden and flashlight is ALWAYS possible.
Download new and good rating beatmaps which you can get ideas from. If a beatmaps has a good rating, it means people like that beatmap so you need to make it look more like that beatmap. Y'know what I'm saying? Get inspirating. Play a lot of different NEW, GOOD beatmaps. If you don't play Hard yourself, you can always start playing hard and learn more about it.
Let someone else make a difficulty too! Ask a good beatmapper to make a insane for example!