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My Chemical Romance - Na Na Na (Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na)

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aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 April 2011 at 19:39:56

Artist: My Chemical Romance
Title: Na Na Na (Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na)
Tags: Danger Days The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys
BPM: 166
Filesize: 8558kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. BeginNa (2.04 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Nard (4.99 stars, 452 notes)
  3. Narmal (4.03 stars, 233 notes)
Download: My Chemical Romance - Na Na Na (Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na)
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THIS HAS TAKEN FOREVER GAH

Thanks to RandomJibberish for helping with some of that ending SB, and Larto for the chipmunks.
Last edited by aRiskOfRain , edited 21 times in total.
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
General:
Tags "the" and "of"?

BeginNa:
01:43:307 (1) - Not sNapped.

Nard:
01:31:558 - I think you should put a note here, to make it match the combos that start at (01:28:667) and (01:34:450). I know it doesn't follow the lyrics exactly, but I found myself wanting to click. :)

Fun maps!
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922
Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na

Has Gerard become thin?

star (*´ω｀)
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
MusicBoX
Perfectly. Awesome SB. o(>.<;)

*sends a star to map*
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
Offset 93 to fix main menu flashin'
Stick black borders on the More, Sad man and Jazz hands images
00:56:479 - Either get rid of this V, or SB shit in the other chorus gaps. Preferably the Latter.
02:01:539 - This section needs moar emo black shit.
02:21:690 - Srsly, you can do a better transition than that
03:02:262 - I was expecting some kind of epic ending shit and it didn't happen

Nard
Here are your sliders. Grid 4 did my head in, be thankful
Download: My Chemical Romance - Na Na Na (Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na) (DiamondCrash) [Nard].osu
01:24:672 (5,6) - A jump here would be cool

Narmal
00:55:033 (1,2) - 1 down 3 grids, 2 up
Fix others similarly
02:01:539 (1,1,1,1) - Newcombonewcombonewcombo
02:52:142 (2,1) - That isn't not an overlap

Beginna
02:08:768 (2) - Horizontal flip, reverse selection
02:13:467 (1,2,3,4) - You can totally find a way of horizontally flipping this in a non ugly way
02:26:298 (1) - Move out of the way of your detonator
03:06:600 (2) - Make this a 180 flip of (1)

Sexysexysexy
hedgeberg
8 posts
Joined March 2010
hedgeberg
I personally love this map. can't see anything wrong with it. then again, I'm not a very advanced osu! player (which is why I find this tough on normal) but I enjoy it. good luck.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Nah.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Sorry for taking so long.

[SB]
Bad-ass.
sadman and the the letmesee zooms up against the spider in the background is kind of hard to see - especially while you're playing. Maybe try a different color shade? Or a black border as RJ suggested.

[BeginNa]
01:04:249 - There a reason this tick is silenced? Felt weird.
02:15:635 (3,4) - Not a fan of stacks in easy diffs but
02:18:889 (2,3) - This is just bad imo. Slider stacks are :< for easies.
03:08:045 (1) - End this at 03:11:297 - to fit the lyrics better.

[Narmal]
Unsnapped notes lol
The transitions between the soft and normal claps don't sound very good to me.
01:32:262 (3,2) - Little bit of overlap with this pattern, if you care (same with copy pastes in the same chorus)
02:53:588 (1) - It flows better if you h-flipped from here imo
03:08:045 (1) - End this at 03:11:297 - to fit the lyrics better.

[Nard]
Unsnapped notes lol
Maybe it just took a few plays to get used to them, but the clap changes aren't sounding so bad now. Eh.
03:08:045 (1) - End this at 03:11:297 - to fit the lyrics better.
itz Leberwurst
6 posts
Joined March 2010
itz Leberwurst
Pure Awsumnes!
Another star for your collection ;)
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
[BeginNa]
00:57:925 (1,1,1) - These (The sliders) are cut off on the edges of the screen. I don't think you want it to look like shit.

ALSO YOUR MAP HAS m980 SYNDROME HITSOUNDS OMFG TYHEY SUCKASHFJKH.

And well.. Yeah... A whole bunch of snapping errors (according to AIMod, but I didn't notice anything while playing) across all three difficulties. Snap them just to be on the safe side.

Also, some of Garven's suggestions are pretty good (Namely that flow one, and definitely the spinner)

But other than that, I enjoyed this a lot.
mm201
osu! Alumni
4,495 posts
Joined August 2008
mm201
I hate the strange thing you do with the soft sliderticks on Easy.

I'll map a diff for this if you want it. I kind of had it in my mind to m980 this album anyway.
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
SB
Is this finished
Where's my gas can and more bridge shit
http://puu.sh/w7s This bugs me every time.

Nard:
01:35:515 (1) - I spotted an overlap.
03:08:045 (1) - Any particular reason this ends on 1/4?

Narmal
01:34:431 (1,2,3,1) - :-)
Overlap hell but who cares

INagine random letters being replaced with Na through this post if you so wish
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980

NotShinta wrote:

Nard:
01:35:515 (1) - I spotted an overlap.
I'd like to know who would notice this in-game and gives a shit.
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta

m980 wrote:

NotShinta wrote:

Nard:
01:35:515 (1) - I spotted an overlap.
I'd like to know who would notice this in-game and gives a shit.
next to nobody, nobody. whee.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
HEY LOOK HERE'S A MOTHERFUCKIN' ENDING SB

Download: sbshit.rar
hedgeberg
8 posts
Joined March 2010
hedgeberg
why is it that sliders sound so different when I use the "osu ends with you" theme on this map? It only does that on this map. Is it something about the theme? Are you using a different type of slider? it seems sorta pointless.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
It's probably just that skin.
Kalotaku
29 posts
Joined April 2010
Kalotaku
<3
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
Love the SB for this. Starred.
laport
1,239 posts
Joined June 2010
laport
star 8-)
Ruisu-kun_old
341 posts
Joined June 2010
Ruisu-kun_old
Great song, I'm a fan of MCR, Star!
[Dellirium]
1,551 posts
Joined October 2010
[Dellirium]
I star this
Ruisu-kun_old
341 posts
Joined June 2010
Ruisu-kun_old
Mod:

BegiNa:
Slidertick: 1 instead 2
01:49:972 (x) - add a note with finish hitsound?
02:10:213 (1) - Delete it and make the start of the spinner
02:14:550 (2) - This slider should end in 02:15:273
02:17:442 (2) - slider should end in 02:18:165
02:21:779 (1) - Spinner should start in 02:22:141
02:26:297 (1) - Don't try to follow vocals here, make this slider start in 02:26:117 and end in 02:27:562 and don't make it linear

Great diff :)

Narmal:
01:21:779 (2) - Only if you want, make the start of the slider linear with the end of slider (1)
01:49:972 (x) - add a note with finish hitsound?
02:10:213 (1) - Delete it and make the start of the spinner
02:21:779 (1) - Spinner should start in 02:22:141

This is my favorite diff

Nard:
00:47:984 (1) - Ugly jump :(
00:50:876 (1) - ^
00:53:767 (1) - ^
01:28:466 (1) - ^
01:31:358 (1) - ^
01:34:249 (1) - ^
and so much jumps...

Like this :)

P.D.: Only follow my mod if you want because is my 2nd mod and i'm a noob in mod stuff :)
P.D.2: Great map... Lucky with this ;)
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Revived
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Because Larto forced me to.
Gonna be a bit nazi too. (Or a lot dunno yet)

General:
- The SB is awesome but maybe don't have a blaxck screen all of a sudden at the end.


BeginNa:
00:29:008 (1) - End point one grid 4 tick up so the middle tick is symmetric.
00:30:454 (2) - ^ Except one grid 4 tick down
Also apply these in the copy paste after.
01:21:056 (1,2) - Move both end points one grid 4 tick to the middle so the edn points are exactly in the middle.
03:05:153 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+v for flow improvement?

Narmal:
00:24:671 (4) - One tick down to have it on the middle line symmetric?
00:36:237 (4) - One tick up ^

Nard:
03:07:321 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you already have that stream effect of the Nas going down, why not unstack this stream and make it move down?

All I wanna say. Apply want you think is right. My Job is done.
Quaraezha
1,491 posts
Joined February 2011
Quaraezha
Star! \o/
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
CRASH AND BURN, YOUNG AND BUBBLED!
Man I love this song
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Let this map explode
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Make some noise.

SB <3
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
lol
Anime (Korean)
foulcoon
osu! Alumni
1,384 posts
Joined July 2008
foulcoon
srsly impressed.
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol

foulcoon wrote:

srsly impressed.
The storyboard, holy shit man nice job.
My first 10/10 in ages time goes to you~
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