Hello Lazer! Here is my mod
Spooky SkeletonGeneral things that need improvement:
- The map isn't hitsounded at all so you should really do that
- Adding custom combo colors is something that you should really do
- The background of the map is not in a supported resolution. Those would be 1366x768 or 1024x768
00:01:151 (2,3) - The blanket here could be better. In case you are not familiar with how to make a proper blanket I'll leave a pic for you. See how the outer circle of (2) lines up perfectly with the curve of (3)? That is what we're aiming for.
00:01:807 (4,1) - Don't you feel like the spacing here is a bit random? I'd move the (4) further down to make a distance that is more similiar to the spacing in the rest of the intro
00:02:299 (2,1) - Maybe stack the (1) where (2) ends? It's not a big deal but something that I thought of
00:04:594 (1,3) - Again with the somewhat random feeling spacing. Maybe make it something more like in the example below. In case you do this make sure to adjust the circles afterwards so that they still stack!
00:06:561 (4,1) - Move the (1) so that it blankets the (4) with it's curve for maximum visuals
00:08:528 (1,2,3,4) - I thought that a good alternative to this would be something like I did in this picture, since the current flow is a bit weird
00:08:856 (3,5) - Again with the close spacing between these. Move the (5) further to the right 8)
00:12:463 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here feels really underwhelming because of the big distance between 00:11:971 (4,5) - Make the pattern have larger spacing or reduce the spacing on 00:11:971 (4,5) -
00:16:561 (2,6) - Really minor thing but you could stack the (2) with the tail of (6) since it's off by a bit at the moment. Remember to change these aswell 00:17:873 (2,1) - !
00:19:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would make this a lot harder since the map is 5,75 stars overall. This buildup is super easy compared to that
00:22:791 (6,1) - This spacing feels a bit too easy compared to the sliders just before this. Maybe add some distance here?
00:23:774 (5) - Put this at X:199 Y:118
00:23:938 (6,1) - Stack these properly
00:28:856 (5,6) - This is gameplaywise the most weirdest part of the map. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND that you change these objects to be a jump instead of being stacked on top of eachother.
00:29:512 (1) - The ending of this slider looks a bit weird xD Maybe just go with a simpler design here since I think this would work just fine.
00:30:168 (1,2,3) - Okay so this part is 1/3 rhythm instead of 1/4 so don't try to resemble the wubs with sliders that are 1/4. 00:24:922 (3,4,5) - Here you ignore the wubs using 1/4 rhythm which works really well so maybe remap the part to be like this?
00:32:463 (2,4) - Blanket here can be improved the way I taught you
00:34:758 (1,2) - Same here if you want to
00:35:905 (3,2) - Stack these
00:37:545 (2,3,4) - Maybe make this like here in the picture to fix a weird overlap and a blanket x)
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00:38:692 (1,2) - The distance between these is a bit too much.
00:41:151 (4,1) - Why put these so close to eachother? Make them have atleast a bit more distance since now it just looks weird xD
00:44:430 (4,7) - Stack these
00:46:233 (4,2) - Same here o3o
00:53:119 (1,3) - And here
00:55:414 (6,1) - Don't hate me for this ;_;
00:55:741 (1,2) - This overlap looks weird. Maybe something like this? Make sure to stack 00:56:069 (2,4) - if you change this!
00:57:381 (2,5) - Maybe make the (5) be a bit further away from (2)?
01:02:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I feel like this stream is a bit too easy too for 5,75 x)
01:18:692 (6,7,8) - You have 2 choices here. Easy solution is to make all of these sliders have new combo, so that the players can anticipate the rhythm change more. Right now most people would play the sliders 2/4 too early!!! The harder solution would be to just simply space these out a LOT more.
01:28:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I like the stream here. It's so much better than the earlier ones I mentioned ^^ (nothing to be fixed here)
01:39:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Again too easyy ;___;
01:49:512 (1,3) - Stack ;w;
01:50:823 (1) - I think that this slider is "out of place". There is nothing to be emphasized here in the music so maybe go with a more regular slider? You can keep it if you like it though. Having cool sliders on parts like these just take away from how "special" they are in my opinion
02:00:496 (4,1) - This is the last stack that I'm going to point out, since I think you get the point with these already xD
02:06:561 (1) - New combo!
02:09:184 (7) - New combo!
02:11:807 (7) - New combo!
02:17:053 (1,1) - C-c-c-c-combobreaker! These are too close to eachother. Make them further away from eachother so that the gap inbetween them doesn't look so weird.
02:17:381 (1,2) - Blanket x)
02:25:905 (3) - Remove combo
02:26:233 (1) - New combo :p
02:26:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream is again so easy ;_;
02:45:741 (1) - Remove combo
02:47:217 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ;_____________________; You probably get the point with the streams already xD
03:03:610 (1,1,1) - Here you used NC really well! Since this part is like this I suggest you do the same treatment to the previous one I mentioned earlier with the 2 choices
03:14:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream has enough challenge (could still be a bit harder if you want to >:D)
03:17:381 - 03:20:004 - Insert a break here.
03:25:250 (1,2,3) - This is a bit tricky. The (2) looks super weird when the (1) is so close to it so I suggest you try to come up with a solution that puts (2) further apart
03:34:758 (3,4) - This spacing is just WAY too big. Make the spacing here smaller. Easiest thing to do would be to flip 03:34:758 (3) - with ctrl+g and do some readjustments to the circles before. I'll leave a pic of a working solution
The map got getting better and better and better towards the end. The biggest issues are with the beginning half of the map and the second half just improves so much while getting closer to the end! I didn't point out even remotely all of the blankets or the unproprely stacked circles since you can look for them yourself (I feel like pointing out all of those would be really annoying to fix xD) and like I said. There were 2 streams in the map that were hard enough for them to be interesting. The final one and 03:14:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - . You should really make all of the others harder.
That's it for the mod then. Overall I love the song and feel like if you try to improve the map with the things I pointed out this one can improve to be instead of a good map, to a really great map