Buttle #1
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.
(These two objects aren't that bad, but I thought I'd point them out to you.)Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitobjects must never be off-screen. All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following. Test play your map to confirm this.
now fixing wave delay Thnk you so much !!Ayyri wrote:
[General][Adrenaline]
- Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
drum-hitwhistle3.wav (17ms)Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.- Slightly off-screen objects:
03:31:479 (4)
04:00:332 (4)(These two objects aren't that bad, but I thought I'd point them out to you.)Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitobjects must never be off-screen. All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following. Test play your map to confirm this.Call me back. o7
- 00:22:627 - Consider Ctrl+G'ing this note. Having two 1/4 sliders going down, right after each other, when they're going down them up, feels pretty odd. Flows a bit better when they're opposites. yuss
- 00:35:741 - Seems a bit weird that you went with a slider and circle here, rather than having another reverse slider, like all the other times this rhythm appeared. reversald and moved
- 00:38:037 - To be honest, this slider looks really weird with that wiggle at the end, at this angel. angle'd it differently seems oki now
- 00:53:119 - In a place like this, a normal whistle could be used for a slider slide. I'll mention it here instead of by itself but, it's a bit odd that you're using a hitsound like at 00:44:922 - , in place a slider slide. Just wondering why you did that instead of using a normal whistle. tru, fix
- 01:18:692 - , 01:18:938 - , and 01:19:184 - To be honest, it'd sound pretty cool to have a normal whistle for the slider slides here. ur right its cool stuff ; o;
- 01:27:217 - and 01:27:709 - These two sliders feel weirdly close if they're a tick a part from each other. They're spaced more like pattern you had at 01:26:069 - .
- 01:29:840 - Cool normal whistle?
- 01:40:004 - to 01:40:332 - These notes should be touching each other at least a bit. It seems weird to so drastically change the spacing between the notes, when the buildup is still the same. fixed to something easier and more readable
- 02:01:315 - Not really a fan of having opposite flow like this. It plays a bit awkwardly, to be honest. Try Ctrl+G'ing this note so it's at least flowing into the next note. oki turned around
- 02:07:545 - and 02:07:709 - Ctrl+G so 3 is closer to 2. Like in the beginning, I think having all of these 1/4 sliders going the same direction flows pretty poorly, and plays awkwardly. oh ya !
- 02:38:037 - , 03:03:610 - , 03:03:856 - , 03:04:102 - , 03:14:758 - , and 04:43:938 - Cool normal whistle? cool normal whistle
- 03:29:020 - This feels a bit too close to 03:28:856 - for how big the next jump is. It might fit a bit better if you moved 03:29:020 - to be under the head of 03:28:364 - so the jump up isn't so sharp.
- 04:44:922 - Looks really weirdly placed with 04:44:594 - and 04:44:758 - overlapping it so much. fixfix
2016-09-19 17:39 Ayyri: Hey, can I ask you something?
2016-09-19 17:39 Lazer: uh huuh
2016-09-19 17:39 Ayyri: 01:28:528 - to 01:29:758 - Why did you suddenly start using the harder clap here if the music is still the same as the hitsounded section before those notes?
2016-09-19 17:40 Lazer: uhh let me see
2016-09-19 17:40 Lazer: oh uhh
2016-09-19 17:40 Lazer: idk i thought it was fitting
2016-09-19 17:42 Ayyri: Hmm
2016-09-19 17:42 Ayyri: Mind lowering the volume of that section a bit then?
2016-09-19 17:42 Lazer: do you suggest otherwise?
2016-09-19 17:42 Lazer: oh yus sure
2016-09-19 17:42 Lazer: i was just thinking the same
2016-09-19 17:43 Ayyri: Yeahh. Just sounds a bit strong in comparison to everything else.
2016-09-19 17:44 Ayyri: 01:35:741 - and 01:37:053 - What's your opinion of removing the finishes here?
2016-09-19 17:44 Ayyri: I think that would make 01:37:709 - to 01:38:856 - a bit more emphasized.
2016-09-19 17:45 Lazer: hmmm let me see
2016-09-19 17:46 Lazer: ya youre right good oneee
2016-09-19 17:46 Lazer: dang what a notice
2016-09-19 17:46 Lazer: lol
2016-09-19 17:49 Ayyri: 02:00:250 - and 02:00:332 - See how these sound without finishes, but add a finish at 02:00:496 -
2016-09-19 17:49 Ayyri: Imo, it sounds a bit less cluttered and goes with the vocal better.
2016-09-19 17:51 Lazer: hoh yuh youre right
2016-09-19 17:51 Lazer: added and remove finishess
2016-09-19 17:53 Ayyri: 02:07:545 - and 02:07:709 - Did you not agree with 3 and for being switched? D:
2016-09-19 17:53 Ayyri: You changed the direction, but not the other thing ;;
2016-09-19 17:54 Lazer: uuw ;w ; i thoguht that was what you meant
2016-09-19 17:55 Lazer: but like this it plays very nicely so i think ill keep it !
2016-09-19 17:55 Ayyri: Alright, that's fine. :D
2016-09-19 17:55 Ayyri: Just wanted to know if you understood it or not. :3/
2016-09-19 17:57 Lazer: !! ~
2016-09-19 18:01 Ayyri: 03:20:659 - and 03:21:971 - Should have their finishes removed, since it's the same section as before.
2016-09-19 18:02 Lazer: got et
2016-09-19 18:05 Ayyri: Has anyone checked the metadata for this?
2016-09-19 18:06 Lazer: nope, besides myself
2016-09-19 18:06 Lazer: it should be correct i believe
2016-09-19 18:07 Ayyri: Even if it's a remix, shouldn't とある科学の超電磁砲 be the source?
2016-09-19 18:08 Lazer: i suppose all those japan moonrunes are railgun ?
2016-09-19 18:09 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-09-19 18:09 Lazer: hmmmmmmm
2016-09-19 18:09 Lazer: im not actually sure where this plays or if its officially part of the anime
2016-09-19 18:10 Lazer: i suppose i could go with the safe route and just put it there
2016-09-19 18:10 Lazer: cause im unsure
2016-09-19 18:10 Ayyri: The remix isn't official, no.
2016-09-19 18:10 Ayyri: But the song it's a remix of, is.
2016-09-19 18:10 Ayyri: And that song comes from the anime.
2016-09-19 18:10 Lazer: Oh, i didnt know 100% if that song was from the anime, then
2016-09-19 18:10 Lazer: yes! that is the souurce
2016-09-19 18:10 Lazer: let me addd
2016-09-19 18:11 Ayyri: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/83159 Kawada Mami - No buts! (TV Size)]
2016-09-19 18:12 Lazer: ohh i should add toaru majutsu no index ii instead then
2016-09-19 18:12 Ayyri: (I've never seen the anime.)
2016-09-19 18:12 Lazer: (me neither haha)
2016-09-19 18:12 Ayyri: Let me ask my friend when it actually plays. lol
2016-09-19 18:14 Lazer: oh
2016-09-19 18:14 Lazer: its an OP
2016-09-19 18:14 Lazer: https://youtu.be/0_61Bf25q5w
2016-09-19 18:15 Lazer: from To Aru Majutsu no Index II
2016-09-19 18:15 Ayyri: Yee
2016-09-19 18:15 Ayyri: That's what I assumed.
2016-09-19 18:15 Ayyri: That's an old map, so the source is kind of outdated. >w<
2016-09-19 18:15 Lazer: >w< yaa i saw
2016-09-19 18:15 Lazer: Toaru was misspelled
2016-09-19 18:15 Lazer: was
2016-09-19 18:15 Lazer: To Aru
2016-09-19 18:16 Ayyri: Yeahh.
2016-09-19 18:17 Ayyri: We don't use romanized sources too much anymore.
2016-09-19 18:17 Lazer: oh, does that mean i should just use the japanese you said?
2016-09-19 18:17 Ayyri: Preferably, yes.
2016-09-19 18:18 Lazer: okii got it
2016-09-19 18:21 Lazer: side questiun whats your fave animu = w = ?
2016-09-19 18:22 Ayyri: Probably should add "Kawada Mami" to tags, since that's the singer in this song. :p
2016-09-19 18:22 Ayyri: And hmmm. I don't really know. I stopped watching anime some years ago.
2016-09-19 18:23 Lazer: oo dang
2016-09-19 18:23 Ayyri: I'm only really into like Touhou at this point, and that's just a Japanese game. >w<
2016-09-19 18:23 Lazer: whats the cause of that huuh
2016-09-19 18:23 Ayyri: Oh, it just got tedious to sit and watch it. lol
2016-09-19 18:23 Lazer: ; 3 ; i tried getting into touhou but my brain says no
2016-09-19 18:23 Ayyri: I like to be doing things, rather than be sitting and doing nothing.
2016-09-19 18:23 Ayyri: D:
2016-09-19 18:24 Lazer: ; 3 ;
2016-09-19 18:24 Lazer: well i meaaaaaan
2016-09-19 18:24 Lazer: idk i dont watch anime too often though because of the same reason
2016-09-19 18:25 Ayyri: Understandable.
2016-09-19 18:25 Lazer: should i update map ?
2016-09-19 18:26 Ayyri: That would be nice. :D
2016-09-19 18:26 Lazer: okiiii
2016-09-19 18:28 Ayyri: Hmm
2016-09-19 18:28 Ayyri: You might want to ask Bara- to recheck the map.
2016-09-19 18:28 Ayyri: Since a handful of stuff has been changed.
2016-09-19 18:28 Lazer: oki got it
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: As well as the metadata.
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: Alright.
2016-09-19 18:29 Lazer: aaand at the end
2016-09-19 18:29 Lazer: wait wait ok soooo
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: ?
2016-09-19 18:29 Lazer: ask bara- then ask you again... and then ?
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: Ask another BN.
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: You need a third one for a flame.
2016-09-19 18:29 Lazer: ok well i have the last bn set thats good
2016-09-19 18:29 Ayyri: Neat!
2016-09-19 18:30 Lazer: more like
2016-09-19 18:30 Lazer: neatsu
2016-09-19 18:30 Ayyri: Heh.
2016-09-19 18:30 Lazer: cus the last bn is natsu H H HH AAH A
2016-09-19 18:30 Ayyri: HA.
2016-09-19 18:30 Ayyri: HAHA.
2016-09-19 18:30 Ayyri: :D/
2016-09-19 18:30 Lazer: xxxdd !
; o ; take your time thats awful ;; i wish you good luck !Bara- wrote:
Dat double kd
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