1. Firmato's Novice (1,59 stars, 203 notes)
2. Hard (3,24 stars, 99 notes)
3. HP's Insane (4,24 stars, 302 notes)
4. Loyalty (5,24 stars, 877 notes)
5. Normal (2,25 stars, 93 notes)
6. Rivals_7's HD - 4Key (3,26 stars, 1987 notes)
7. Rivals_7's NM - 4Key (2,18 stars, 1275 notes)
8. Tulner Extra (5,6 stars, 846 notes)

1. Center sun.png because it doesn't rotate around its center and this is noticeable.
2. Fix this:
   

1. 00:21:494 (4,6) - Swap finish an whistle. Sounds better for me (also I love this hitsound)
2. 00:38:482 (4) - I really dislike this slider because you used a very similar one 00:37:759 (1) - here and you're not repeating the rotative motion followed by 00:38:121 (2,3) - . In short, this slider should turn right
3. 00:40:651 (4) - NC
4. 00:46:343 (8,1) - That's a bit too much imo. You're using similar spacing to circle-slider pattern and slider - slider. Maximum 1,4 DS here
5. 00:53:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is one pattern on one combo following one sound. There's no reason to change spacing here. It might be even unreadable. Use constant spacing
6. 01:04:506 (6,7,8) - Flowbreak here. It you have started a nice rotative motion from 01:04:145 (5,6) - these sliders, you should continue it.
7. 01:10:651 (7) - NC because of the slow down
8. 01:33:422 (4,5,6,7) - Unexpected speedup and then suddenly slowdown even if the music doesn't sound like it. Im pretty sure this is unrankable. I would change 1/4 sliders into circles
9. 01:42:458 (5) - What about this?
   
10. 01:47:880 (5,1,1) - 01:50:048 (1,2,3) - This is pretty much the same sound and you used different combos. Decide which one you want to use
11. 01:58:542 (4) - Very off-beat slider. Try this:
    
12. 01:59:807 (1,2,3) - You're building up a straight line. There's no reason to use different spacing between them
13. 02:19:145 (1,2,3) - Im pretty sure most of the player will have difficulties to click these ones. Maybe change them into sliders?
14. 02:32:157 (2,3,4) - Woah! That's a bit too much
15. 02:39:928 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - To be honest, this part looks very unsightly imo. You're changing spacing 02:40:199 (6) - here for no reason, you could make a blanket from 02:40:741 (1,2,3,4) - them, 02:41:916 (2,1) - the spacing between them should be 2.0 like on the others
16. 03:06:675 (1) - Maybe place it on the sun?
17. 00:01:615 - This pattern sounds a LOT better:
    

1. 00:01:615 - Same to Loyalty
2. Well, fix this:
   
3. In Normal Diff you have to use constant distance snap and slider velocity! This means you will have to remap the whole difficulty because its unrankable.
   And this looks overmapped for a Normal, well... the star rating is 4,8*!
   If this was supposed to be an Insane Diff then you should change AR to 9 and increase OD and HP as well because it doesn't seem like a Normal

Exile- wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. Center sun.png because it doesn't rotate around its center and this is noticeable. SB will be changed
2. Fix this:
   

w8

[Loyalty]

1. 00:21:494 (4,6) - Swap finish an whistle. Sounds better for me (also I love this hitsound) ok
2. 00:38:482 (4) - I really dislike this slider because you used a very similar one 00:37:759 (1) - here and you're not repeating the rotative motion followed by 00:38:121 (2,3) - . In short, this slider should turn right only fixed the spacement
3. 00:40:651 (4) - NC ok
4. 00:46:343 (8,1) - That's a bit too much imo. You're using similar spacing to circle-slider pattern and slider - slider. Maximum 1,4 DS here ok
5. 00:53:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is one pattern on one combo following one sound. There's no reason to change spacing here. It might be even unreadable. Use constant spacing i m using a spacement bigger when have the sequence slider-hit-slider and sometimes on strong triples, and i played it much times and in my tests it is ok and readable for a extra difficult
6. 01:04:506 (6,7,8) - Flowbreak here. It you have started a nice rotative motion from 01:04:145 (5,6) - these sliders, you should continue it. the flow is same 00:58:000 (1) - and i dont find way to continue this rotative flow to fit the style without overlap
7. 01:10:651 (7) - NC because of the slow down im not sure about a nc here but ok
   
8. 01:33:422 (4,5,6,7) - Unexpected speedup and then suddenly slowdown even if the music doesn't sound like it. Im pretty sure this is unrankable. I would change 1/4 sliders into circles nah i liked this at gameplay and it fit the piano sound change of the previus part
   
9. 01:42:458 (5) - What about this? looks strange at gameplay and weird with hitsounds
   
10. 01:47:880 (5,1,1) - 01:50:048 (1,2,3) - This is pretty much the same sound and you used different combos. Decide which one you want to use 2nd
    
11. 01:58:542 (4) - Very off-beat slider. Try this: nop, here im following the voice and pad sound, not the beat
    
12. 01:59:807 (1,2,3) - You're building up a straight line. There's no reason to use different spacing between them emphasis to the strong beatsound
13. 02:19:145 (1,2,3) - Im pretty sure most of the player will have difficulties to click these ones. Maybe change them into sliders? nope, ppl need to have reading skills at extra kek
14. 02:32:157 (2,3,4) - Woah! That's a bit too much
15. 02:39:928 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - To be honest, this part looks very unsightly imo. You're changing spacing 02:40:199 (6) - here for no reason, you could make a blanket from 02:40:741 (1,2,3,4) - them, 02:41:916 (2,1) - the spacing between them should be 2.0 like on the others improved somethings
    
16. 03:06:675 (1) - Maybe place it on the sun? brilhant ideia
17. 00:01:615 - This pattern sounds a LOT better: i think is better keep triple giving to the player a intro to the rhithm
    

[Normal]

1. 00:01:615 - Same to Loyalty
2. Well, fix this:
   
3. In Normal Diff you have to use constant distance snap and slider velocity! This means you will have to remap the whole difficulty because its unrankable.
   And this looks overmapped for a Normal, well... the star rating is 4,8*! WTF Hahaha i said to u mod the novice, not the normal, its is just a copy of the extra with few changes kek , the novice is read 4 mods
   If this was supposed to be an Insane Diff then you should change AR to 9 and increase OD and HP as well because it doesn't seem like a Normal

Good luck!

Thanks 4 the 1st Mod m8 i hope finish the mapset