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gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [OsuMania]

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[Emiria]
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[Emiria]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年7月15日 at 0:51:30

Artist: gmtn. (witch's slave)
Title: furioso melodia
Source: BMS
Tags: OF FIGHTERS 2010 BOF gumtune lr2 gothic hardcore
BPM: 155
Filesize: 30697kb
Play Time: 02:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (3.12 stars, 1218 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (4.14 stars, 1748 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1.96 stars, 673 notes)
Download: gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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IMPORTANT:Audio Setting
Last edited by [Emiria] , edited 11 times in total.
richardfeder
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richardfeder
叼
Sky_Demon
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Joined April 2012
Sky_Demon
跪了
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Emiria]
累死我了。。。
paperlens
505 posts
Joined August 2014
paperlens
像我这种射两颗星的阔绰人 都瞧不起你们这些只射一颗星的乐色啦

楼下笑死
Last edited by paperlens , edited 1 time in total.
LastExceed
Master of the Fade
394 posts
Joined March 2015
LastExceed
All 3 diffs modded

General: You are very good in choosing patterns (apart from the random noodle parts o.O) but you need to improve the note placement (as you can see 90% of my modding is about moving notes to different columns because you caused alot of unnecessary jacks)

COLUMNS: 0|1|2|3

Normal
00:19:870 (19870|2) - make this one a slider (until the double) and remove the single note in between
00:24:322 (24322|1) - move
00:24:709 (24709|3) - move
00:25:870 (25870|0) - move
00:29:160 (29160|0) - move
00:32:160 (32160|1) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
00:35:257 (35257|2) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
00:38:354 (38354|2) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
00:44:257 (44257|3,44451|1,44644|2) - move 1col to the left
00:47:644 (47644|2) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
00:50:741 (50741|2) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
00:53:806 (53806|0) - what happened here? anyway remove this one too
01:05:160 (65160|3,65160|0,65451|0,65451|3,65741|3,65741|0,66128|3,66128|0,66322|3,66322|0,66515|0,66515|3,66709|0,66709|3) - these shouldn't be all the same
01:09:225 (69225|0,69418|1) - move 2col to the right
01:11:547 (71547|3) - move
01:23:935 (83935|3) - move
01:30:322 (90322|2) - move to col1
01:34:580 (94580|3,94967|3,95354|3,95741|3,96128|3) - move them all to col2
01:37:547 (97547|0) - move to col3
01:37:676 (97676|3,97676|1,98064|3,98064|1,98451|3,98451|1,98838|3,98838|1,99225|3,99225|1,99612|3,99612|1,99999|3,99999|1,100386|3,100386|1) - move them all 1col to the left
01:40:644 (100644|0) - move to col3
01:40:773 (100773|3,100773|1,101160|3,101160|1,101547|3,101547|1,101935|3,101935|1,102322|3,102322|1,102709|3,102709|1) - move them all to col0 and col1
01:51:483 (111483|0,111483|3,111612|3,111612|0) - two-handed jacks are too hard for this diff, try this instead: http://i.imgur.com/rDyX4Ae.png
01:53:031 (113031|0,113031|3,113160|3,113160|0) - same as before
02:03:515 (123515|2) - remove (unsuitable for the diff)
02:13:289 (133289|2,133676|1,134064|0,134451|3,134838|2,135225|1) - either make these doubles or put single notes in between
02:15:418 (135418|0) - remove in case you made the previous notes doubles, keep if you placed singles in between
02:19:483 (139483|0,139870|1,140257|2,140644|3,140838|1) - same as before

Insane
00:07:483 (7483|2) - move to avoid jacks
00:10:193 (10193|2) - move to avoid jacks
00:13:289 (13289|2) - move to avoid jacks
00:22:386 (22386|2,22483|2) - move to avoid jacks
00:26:838 (26838|2,26935|2) - move to avoid jacks
00:27:418 (27418|3,27515|3) - move to avoid jacks
00:33:418 (33418|1) - move to col0
00:41:838 (41838|1,41935|1) - move to avoid jacks
00:43:773 (43773|0,43870|0) - jacks
00:44:160 (44160|0,44257|0) - jacks
00:49:676 (49676|3,49773|2,49870|1,49967|0) - I don't see why you suddenly started using sliders (make them single notes)
00:50:354 (50354|0,50451|0) - jacks
00:57:418 (57418|3,57515|2,57612|1,57709|0,57806|3,57902|2,57999|1,58096|0,58193|3,58289|2,58386|1,58483|0,58580|3,58676|2,58773|1,58870|0) - again, there is no reason to use sliders in here
01:03:612 (63612|3,63709|2,63806|1,63902|3,63999|2,64096|1,64193|2,64289|3,64386|1,64483|2,64580|3,64676|1,64773|2,64870|1,64870|3,64967|2,65064|3,65160|1) - UARGH NOODLE HELL!!
01:12:709 (72709|0,72902|0) - move them apart since they aren't the same sound
01:13:483 (73483|3,73676|3) - move them apart since they aren't the same sound
01:32:128 (92128|2) - move to col1
01:32:515 (92515|1) - move to col2
01:33:031 - add a note in col1
01:34:580 - add a note in col1
01:34:838 (94838|0) - mote to col2
01:35:225 (95225|1) - move to col2
01:35:612 (95612|3) - move to col2
01:36:128 - add a note in col1
01:37:676 - add a note in col1
01:44:160 -> 01:54:322 - quite alot of unnecessary jacks in this part (I know some of them are necessary), try to get rid of them by moving stuff around
02:03:806 (123806|0,123902|0,123999|0) - triple jacks are an absolute NO GO!
02:12:902 (132902|0,132902|2,132999|2,132999|0) - you can avoid one of these jacks if you move around the surroundings

Hard
00:05:741 (5741|1) - move to col2
00:07:483 (7483|0) - move to col1
00:07:870 (7870|3) - move to col2
00:08:257 (8257|1) - move to col2
00:12:515 (12515|0,12709|3) - switch lanes
00:51:999 (51999|0) - move to col1
00:55:096 (55096|2) - move to col3
00:55:483 (55483|1) - move to col0
01:12:322 (72322|0,72515|1,72709|0,72902|1,73096|0,73289|1) - balance
01:30:709 (90709|2,90709|0,90838|2,90838|0,90967|0,90967|2,91096|0,91096|2) - a bit hard. try this instead: http://i.imgur.com/V5Mz8D0.png
01:49:676 (109676|2) - move to col1
01:51:612 (111612|0) - move to col1
01:53:806 (113806|3,113935|3,114193|3,114322|3) - these jacks are avoidable
01:58:386 (118386|2) - move to col0
01:58:580 (118580|0) - move to col3
02:00:902 (120902|0) - move to col2
02:01:676 (121676|0) - move to col2
02:02:709 (122709|3) - move to col2
02:04:580 (124580|2) - move to col1
02:16:580 (136580|2,136773|2,136773|0,136967|1,136967|3,137160|0,137160|2,137354|3,137354|1) - shuffle this part
02:18:128 - add a second note in here

I normally do more detailed mods, but your mapset is already very good and there wasn't much that had to be fixed!
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Bad Apple
Hi Victorica! o/

Fully hitsounded, nice! We need more of those.
Just a quick little Mod/suggestion, since I really like the song itself.

Those 3 parts;
00:49:676 -
00:57:418 -
01:03:612 -
Please try to avoid these. While the map itself might not fully suite my personal style of mapping and playing, I'm pretty sure that most people will agree with me when I say those LN-Walls really don't fit the song. I know, it might be your style, but sometimes it just doesn't fit the song
I think it was perfectly fine the way you mapped it here; 00:43:483 - .
Maybe reconsider those parts, the map is fun aside of those 3 LN Walls! :)
(Yes, I've read the beatmap description, but I still thing positive criticism isn't wrong at any time.)

Also, why do I keep hearing Vert (from Hyperdimension Neptunia) at random places. (at least it sounds like her.) I mean, I love Vert, but that's creepy. Really creepy. (http://puu.sh/mBVKP/e31dd4874c.png those 3).
I'm also assuming that might be an issue when trying to rank it, I'm not entirely sure though.

Random Metadata Stuff;
Artist should be; "gmtn. (witch's slave)" (source; https://soundcloud.com/gmtn/furioso-melodia-web-album)
Tags; add "gumtune"

Rest looks good. Good luck with getting this ranked!
Apple
zwc7086
39 posts
Joined December 2010
zwc7086
新人水摸
[Norma]
00:31:967 - 感觉类似于这种地方的全都加个Note

[Hard]
00:50:451 (50451|3,50547|2,50644|1,50741|0) - 这个感觉还是变下位置好

00:57:418 - 我感觉 还是有点没诚意

顶难度无法帮上忙 就这样，太神了！
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao
sikao
[General]
Song Setup - Audio - Samples match playback rate这个勾上，某个paper就是因为这个被dq了
mp3后面一大坨空的。。考虑剪掉？
[Normal]
00:26:257 (26257|1) - 移到4?
[Insane]
01:18:128 (78128|3) - 这个好像弄错了音效文件了吧..?
02:02:644 试试这样?
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot
Hi victoria~

here the mods...

Normal
01:31:870 - 01:42:806 avoid many jacks here
00:17:257 - 00:18:612 better u add notes there
00:23:160 add one note there, i felt weird when im approaching there

Hard
01:01:870 & 01:02:064 i think it will better if u use double notes at that time
01:58:193 - 02:00:902 the notes is not balance, too many jacks here

i think Insane is good at all.. sorry i just give a few mods :3 hope it useful.
-Keitaro
1,013 posts
Joined October 2013
-Keitaro
For your modding queue~

1/2/3/4
Normal
02:12:902 (132902|3) - 02:13:289 (133289|2) - 02:13:676 (133676|1) - 02:14:064 (134064|0) - 02:14:451 (134451|3) - 02:14:838 (134838|2) - Hold Note. It more confident with the musicI Hope so
02:19:483 (139483|0) - 02:19:870 (139870|1) - 02:20:257 (140257|2) - ^
Hard
00:25:967 (25967|3,26064|1,26128|3,26193|1,26257|3,26322|1,26386|3) - wtf? change to

Sorry i cant mod the insane, my pc wasn't responding when i try to mod insane diff.
Lude
637 posts
Joined August 2015
Lude
Hello :)

Mod | Hard
00:15:612 - Add a note here? For an impact
00:16:386 - 00:17:160 - Add long notes instead of normal notes? I hear a SFX sound of quite long length *well, not DAT long, but yeah
00:35:257 (35257|1) - This should be moved to other lane, and 00:35:354 (35354|0) - This on 2
00:35:064 (35064|0) - This to 2, and 00:35:160 (35160|2,35257|1) - Move to 1 and 4?
*I personally thought this way, because the 5 jacks got same sound, like you did on 02:03:612 -
00:39:612 - 00:40:386 - 00:41:160 - Add notes?

Mod | Insane
00:16:386 - 00:16:967 - Add long notes like i recommended on Hard?
00:51:418 - Add a note here?
00:54:515 - Add a note here?
01:00:322 - Add a note?
01:34:580 - 01:36:128 - 01:37:676 - 01:40:773 - Why not add another notes? Jack part of the song
01:56:644 - Add another note?

Nice Hitsounds ! Not shtty at all :o
MeowPaz
499 posts
Joined March 2012
MeowPaz
Yahalo.db
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
Open
[Normal]
00:16:773 (16773|2) - 考虑换成LN
00:22:967 (22967|3) - 同上，类似这里00:32:257 (32257|3) -
00:26:064 (26064|3) - 这个跟上面提到的音差不多。看情况吧
00:44:257 (44257|3,44451|1) - 移到13
02:02:451 (122451|1) - 移到1好点

[Hard]
00:23:354 - 加一个？
00:35:741 (35741|2) - 移到4
00:54:322 - 加
02:22:193 (142193|0,142257|2,142322|0,142386|2) - 推荐类似这样的http://puu.sh/mPgs7/1cae9d0444.png

[Insane]
01:00:128 (60128|1) - 换到3或者4吧，手感会好一点

水
Feerum
osu! Alumni
2,042 posts
Joined August 2014
Feerum
Yo victorica o/
No Kudosu pls
I found a keysound issue that really was bugging me. I have hear while playing in the part between 01:06:709 - and 01:28:386 - that some keysounds are wrong. The biggest problem here was that your vibra_09 hitsound was waaaaay to low. The lowest from Pitch, but it needs to be the highest.

I have also a BMS Converted version of this Song with all Keysounds and the right one is this one: click

just replace it. i already changet it from ogg to wav.
Uhm.. i will recheck the whole Part later next week because there could be still soooome slightly issues but i'm not sure!
Anyways. What is really important that you replace the Keysound because you cant Rank it with wrong Keysounds.

by the way. I laugh so hard when i hear the Voice. I told this Apple, thats why he write here xP
C'mon its Vert from Hyperdimension Neptunia, right? xD
paperlens
505 posts
Joined August 2014
paperlens
嘻嘻摸图

首先一说 因为是key图 只要谱面里有一点地方不顺手都可能会导致玩家全盘乱掉

[顶难度叫什么忘了]
00:03:225 - 此前是1/3，此后是1/4，对于一周目玩家打这里的判定会乱掉，所以建议从这里的谱面和前面风格分开一下来让玩家更好判定
00:03:225 (3225|3,3418|3) - 挪到3 00:03:515 (3515|2) - 挪到4：否则你的00:03:225 (3225|3,3322|1,3418|3) - 和前面实在很像让人以为是一样的1/3音

00:07:193 - 我严重怀疑这里少了个key？

00:22:580 - 这里突然搞不清在抓什么音 建议还是抓主音

00:49:676 - nice

00:57:418 - 不是很好（？）感觉前后音高也不一样，音也没有长到要按面海，还是按音高区分一下谱面（？）
我的垃圾pattern（我只是举例 这个真的有点垃圾）https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4479686

01:04:870 - 道理我都懂 为什么双键
另外我还是觉得这个音没有长到要面海，每小节让面条结束一下好些我感觉

02:15:483 (135483|1,135547|2,135612|1,135676|2,135741|1,135806|2,135870|1,135935|2,135999|1,136064|2,136128|1,136193|2,136257|1,136322|2,136386|1) - 要不要这么暴力，如果不想让玩家到这里突然抽筋死掉就改成14231423对点


5分钟乱摸的 别介意
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Sakura Kyoko wrote:

Hi Victorica! o/

Fully hitsounded, nice! We need more of those.
Just a quick little Mod/suggestion, since I really like the song itself.

Those 3 parts;
00:49:676 -
00:57:418 -
01:03:612 -
Please try to avoid these. While the map itself might not fully suite my personal style of mapping and playing, I'm pretty sure that most people will agree with me when I say those LN-Walls really don't fit the song. I know, it might be your style, but sometimes it just doesn't fit the song
I think it was perfectly fine the way you mapped it here; 00:43:483 - .
Maybe reconsider those parts, the map is fun aside of those 3 LN Walls! :)
(Yes, I've read the beatmap description, but I still thing positive criticism isn't wrong at any time.)

Also, why do I keep hearing Vert (from Hyperdimension Neptunia) at random places. (at least it sounds like her.) I mean, I love Vert, but that's creepy. Really creepy. (http://puu.sh/mBVKP/e31dd4874c.png those 3).
I'm also assuming that might be an issue when trying to rank it, I'm not entirely sure though.

Random Metadata Stuff;
Artist should be; "gmtn. (witch's slave)" (source; https://soundcloud.com/gmtn/furioso-melodia-web-album)
Tags; add "gumtune"

Rest looks good. Good luck with getting this ranked!
Apple
ihave change some pattern thanks for mod

zwc7086 wrote:

新人水摸
[Norma]
00:31:967 - 感觉类似于这种地方的全都加个Note

[Hard]
00:50:451 (50451|3,50547|2,50644|1,50741|0) - 这个感觉还是变下位置好

00:57:418 - 我感觉 还是有点没诚意

顶难度无法帮上忙 就这样，太神了！
感谢摸

liaoxingyao wrote:

sikao
[General]
Song Setup - Audio - Samples match playback rate这个勾上，某个paper就是因为这个被dq了
mp3后面一大坨空的。。考虑剪掉？
[Normal]
00:26:257 (26257|1) - 移到4?
[Insane]
01:18:128 (78128|3) - 这个好像弄错了音效文件了吧..?我刚刚看了看好像就这个 感觉没错
02:02:644 试试这样?

paperlens wrote:

嘻嘻摸图

首先一说 因为是key图 只要谱面里有一点地方不顺手都可能会导致玩家全盘乱掉

[顶难度叫什么忘了]
00:03:225 - 此前是1/3，此后是1/4，对于一周目玩家打这里的判定会乱掉，所以建议从这里的谱面和前面风格分开一下来让玩家更好判定
00:03:225 (3225|3,3418|3) - 挪到3 00:03:515 (3515|2) - 挪到4：否则你的00:03:225 (3225|3,3322|1,3418|3) - 和前面实在很像让人以为是一样的1/3音

00:07:193 - 我严重怀疑这里少了个key？

00:22:580 - 这里突然搞不清在抓什么音 建议还是抓主音

00:49:676 - nice

00:57:418 - 不是很好（？）感觉前后音高也不一样，音也没有长到要按面海，还是按音高区分一下谱面（？）
我的垃圾pattern（我只是举例 这个真的有点垃圾）https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4479686

01:04:870 - 道理我都懂 为什么双键
另外我还是觉得这个音没有长到要面海，每小节让面条结束一下好些我感觉

02:15:483 (135483|1,135547|2,135612|1,135676|2,135741|1,135806|2,135870|1,135935|2,135999|1,136064|2,136128|1,136193|2,136257|1,136322|2,136386|1) - 要不要这么暴力，如果不想让玩家到这里突然抽筋死掉就改成14231423对点


5分钟乱摸的 别介意
修了 就第一处面条没改

Feerum wrote:

Yo victorica o/
No Kudosu pls
I found a keysound issue that really was bugging me. I have hear while playing in the part between 01:06:709 - and 01:28:386 - that some keysounds are wrong. The biggest problem here was that your vibra_09 hitsound was waaaaay to low. The lowest from Pitch, but it needs to be the highest.

I have also a BMS Converted version of this Song with all Keysounds and the right one is this one: click

just replace it. i already changet it from ogg to wav.
Uhm.. i will recheck the whole Part later next week because there could be still soooome slightly issues but i'm not sure!
Anyways. What is really important that you replace the Keysound because you cant Rank it with wrong Keysounds.

by the way. I laugh so hard when i hear the Voice. I told this Apple, thats why he write here xP
C'mon its Vert from Hyperdimension Neptunia, right? xD
i have check it that part my bms is same as the diff here ..
Feerum
osu! Alumni
2,042 posts
Joined August 2014
Feerum
Okay. Let me explain it in an other way by showing it you.

The Sample you have is simply wrong.
I got my BMS vers of a friend who plays LR2 and i am pretty sure he did convert it me directly from the game.

Here's the link to my vers: click

Please take a look from 01:06:580 - (In my Vers) there you can see the whole part and form 01:17:419 - you can see that you have a totally different keysound in, which is wrong.

You can also look in the Extended, non keysounded version of the song by Harbyter.
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/725897

From 01:50:030 - this Part and from 02:00:868 - you can also see it used the higher sample.


That's why i think this one keysound you used is simply wrong.
I really don't mean it bad and i really like the idea to make a Keysounded Map but then please with all notes right keysounded (:
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Feerum wrote:

Okay. Let me explain it in an other way by showing it you.

The Sample you have is simply wrong.
I got my BMS vers of a friend who plays LR2 and i am pretty sure he did convert it me directly from the game.

Here's the link to my vers: click

Please take a look from 01:06:580 - (In my Vers) there you can see the whole part and form 01:17:419 - you can see that you have a totally different keysound in, which is wrong.

You can also look in the Extended, non keysounded version of the song by Harbyter.
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/725897

From 01:50:030 - this Part and from 02:00:868 - you can also see it used the higher sample.


That's why i think this one keysound you used is simply wrong.
I really don't mean it bad and i really like the idea to make a Keysounded Map but then please with all notes right keysounded (:

can u link me your (.bms) :(
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