Atmino wrote:

My bad, I think I was drunk , everything is ok ^^

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Siiilver wrote:

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Oh, Thanks <3
Trataré de insistir mas en #modreqs por BN xD

Deadmadeon wrote:

haz un foro de M4M :S a mi me sirvio harto :3

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
what a coincidence, me and Kuro actually doing the same project to https://osu.ppy.sh/b/883063
you can mod if you want

Insane

OD too much for this diff, i prefer lower it
the AR tho, please 9 better
00:12:486 (1) - why NC? I think it's okay 00:11:346 (5,9,13) - NC should be here instead of there Fixed.
00:23:498 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
00:34:892 (4,5) - it feels weird to be clickable
00:35:651 (2) - triplet Fixed.
00:38:689 (2,3) - flow not good, and better the blanket Fixed.
00:47:138 (6,7,8) - no sound I think it's okay
00:59:954 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
01:01:094 (1,2) - you decided to follow vocal here, and then you suddenly follow drum here 01:01:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - feel weird Not follow vocal.
01:03:373 (3,4,5) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:06:411 (3) - end at blue tick Fixed.
01:26:157 - still a sound here, dont ignore Fixed.

Expert

00:10:967 (1) - same suggestion NC with the Insane diff Fixed.
00:13:911 (7) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay
00:17:043 (1,2,3) - this feels pushy, try ctrl + g at (2) and reposition (3) to somewhere arround x:164 y:240 Fixed.
00:22:265 - missing note Fixed.
00:23:119 (1,2,3) - stream better than kickslider I think it's okay
00:41:727 (2,3,4) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:02:328 (6) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay

overall your map need more improvement at designing the pattern.

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map

Acnos wrote:

Por que todavia no aprueban este beatmap, estoy esperando que lo aprueben hace meses

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~

[General]
01:14:765 - end of kiai time must be here Nah, I think it's fine.

[Easy]
00:07:929 - finish Fixed.
00:08:309 (1) - clap? I don't see it necessary.
00:08:689 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:208 (3) - ^ ^
00:21:600 (4) - ^ No, but I put in 00:21:221 (3) and 00:22:740 (5) Thanks~
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.

[Normal]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:08:689 (2) - clap Same as Easy
00:09:069 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:588 (1) - ^ ^
00:15:524 (1) - remove finish Okay
00:21:600 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:575 (2) - clap ;w;
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ~

[Hard]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:841 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:23:119 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:27:676 (1) - remove finish ^
00:38:309 (1) - finish ^
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:803 (1) - ^ Nah.
01:20:841 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^

GL ~
and if you dont mind please mod my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/445845 Thanks ~

Shad0w1and wrote:

will post my diff here and might give a mod later Okay~

BG

http://puu.sh/pqOKM/aa5aae2450.png

Video

http://puu.sh/pqQMN/8f26355f61.flv

Added, really thanks :3
uhm

xD

• 
  00:11:537 (5,6,1) - 后面连打变距的话这里DS大点怎么样
  00:13:246 (1) - 感觉三连更爽
  00:19:702 (3,4,5) - 这个......无法形容
  00:51:790 (6,7,1) - 有点几把
  01:19:702 (3,4,5,6) - 体感不怎么适合短滑条
  01:26:347 (1) - 拉到大白线？（

Agatsu wrote:

hi
nm from my q

• [Insane]

1. 00:22:645 - add note
2. 00:26:442 - ^
3. 00:28:626 - make clickable Okay.
4. 00:29:480 - add note
5. 00:34:797 - ^
6. 00:35:556 - ^
7. 00:46:569 - ^
8. 00:47:708 - ^

sorry for short shit mod

Chalwa wrote:

Hello!!! M4M4M4M4M from my queue

Colours legend

black - normal suggest
pink - unrankable
[/color]

General

1. I think in Artist you may put スクリーンモード. Source: click!
2. Make a video offset in Shad0w1and diff like in other diffs Okay -w-

Easy

RHYTHM:

1. All is fine

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:20:841 (2) - You can make a little right curve here for better flow from 00:20:081 (1). Also it will look better with curved 00:21:980 (4) slider Fixed.
2. 00:29:955 (2,3) - Make here something like this for better look? Fixed.
3. 00:48:943 (3) - Make it curved and put a slidernode to 242/270 for make this slider to natural movement? Something very similar.
4. 01:08:689 (1) - Here my suggetsion is Ctrl + J this and move to 176/102. Like in Snickers... Better? Better! I will consider it~

Normal

RHYTHM:

1. 00:17:613 - Put a note here, cause you put it a combo before and two combos after, so it's better consistency if you put note here Different sounds.
2. Rest is good

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:23:879 (3) - Here you can delete a slider node for better look in this combo, cause it's only one a little curved slider. Fixed.
2. 01:24:638 (3) - Make this two sliders both same? It looks nicer then. two?

Hard

RHYTHM:

1. 00:46:186 - You can add note here, cause you put it at 00:40:113 (2) and this parts of song hears simmiliar Vocal.
2. 01:19:229 - Same like above. You can put a note here, cause you put it before in simmiliar part of song Vocal.

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:16:664 (4) - I think you can Ctrl + H this slider, cause you didn't make flow like this before in this part Fixed.
2. 01:01:094 (1,2) - Make this two parallel? Put end of second slider at 24/276 and move this slider a little down Something very similar.

Insane

RHYTHM:

1. 00:12:107 (4) - I think you can make a little stream here, cause it's Insane diff and I personally like streams (NAZI ) I don't want to put too many streams, because there is the last difficulty.
2. 00:42:012 - I think you can put a note here for makes it a little less confusing Okay~
3. 00:43:531 - Same like above ^
4. 01:20:651 (5) - Imo better consistency will be if you make here 1/4 slider. Thats hears better! maybe...

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 01:04:132 (1) - Make this slider straight, cause you have many straight sliders in this part and not many little curved sliders Fixed.
2. 01:25:398 (1) - I think you can Ctrl + H this slider. From 01:16:284 (1) you have always something like circular flow. This slider is once when I can make a something like cursor-dance. Fixed.

END!
It's very well map. I hope to see it ranked. Also I'll mod Shad0w1and's diff in another post, cause now i'm a little busy irl. Okay~
GOOD LUCK!!!

Pentori wrote:

[Shad0w1and]
Shad0w1and's Shadowland -> no, think of something else It is surely acceptable. additionally the word Shadowland = Phantom world according to the dictionary. Would like to keep unless you have other concerns about it.

00:09:638 (2,3,4,5) - the music presents something else here since there r duplets. why not do sth like http://puu.sh/ssBeQ/c66ed6f39f.jpg I prefer current.
00:12:866 (2) - what is this following? ok
00:12:486 (1,2) - u should also silence ur slider ends I do not like to silence slider ends at most time. slienced sliderends always seem confusing to me.
00:26:157 (1) - u could place this better to fit with the groove of 00:25:778 (1)
00:57:297 (3,4,5) - restack this
01:02:613 (1,2) - visually equal spacing pls, probably just move this down a bit
01:07:455 - why clap? there is no beat to represent here
01:14:385 - remove the whistle here ^ I can hear drums, they are weak but surely exist.
01:24:164 (1) - i dont think u need nc. nc'ing this implies that it starts on a white tick This will help a lot on reading because it hint for the track change from vocal to drum.

call me back!

Azrael_- wrote:

Hazu- wrote:

If you want, but the only thing I can do is add it to the description since the map is about to be ranked.
Sorry >_<

Ok no matter, put it as an external map

Thanks!!!

1. 01:00:335 (2) - This slider can be blanket-d I guess
2. 01:05:651 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYbV/ed2122face.png Why not trying something like that?
3. 01:17:043 (3) - Think you can blanket this slider

1. 00:37:550 - Why not adding a note here? o/
2. 01:20:841 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/sPYmV/8c292cdc5c.png Probably?

1. 00:21:600 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYre/6756a62ea8.png Moving a bit the red anchor?

Pachiru wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:00:335 (2) - This slider can be blanket-d I guess Ok
2. 01:05:651 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYbV/ed2122face.png Why not trying something like that? I want to have the red anchor in the "clap"
3. 01:17:043 (3) - Think you can blanket this slider Okay.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:550 - Why not adding a note here? o/ No follow vocals.
2. 01:20:841 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/sPYmV/8c292cdc5c.png Probably? I like how it is now.

[Hard]

1. 00:21:600 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYre/6756a62ea8.png Moving a bit the red anchor? I don't like that shape very much xd

Hope it will help you at least a little :c
The map and the song are very nice, so go for rank!

• 00:19:702 (3,4,5) - yes its questionable
  00:51:790 (6,7,1) - its feel really bad if completely covered
  00:55:683 (4) - i would prefer remove, rhythm will more nature
  01:05:936 (3) - i think you placed wrong clap hitsound at the slider head
  01:04:132 (1) - 01:08:689 (1) - 01:10:208 (1) - 01:14:765 (1) - 01:17:803 (1) - 01:20:841 (1) - i dont get the idea of hitsounding, clap placed on 3/4 end is sounds too weird
  01:14:765 - to 01:19:132 - 豐富一下節奏 有的1/2部份確實感覺有點空
  01:24:164 (1) - imo it dont need to nc, it will easy to misread the stream