Yales wrote:

[Easy]

1. You skipped all the downbeats in the intro in the whole map, modders gonna get mad lol. I don't think it sounds bad though
2. 00:22:798 (1) - Make that spinner finish on 00:24:318 - Would sound way more natural Fixed.
3. 00:25:837 (1) - Stck on 1/1, that reverse on red tick sounds really off Fixed.
4. 01:00:774 (1) - The reverse should be on blue tick right? I agree that I'm not sure how's it percieve on easy diff, but it sounds off right now :c Mmm... Nop.

[Normal]

1. 00:34:192 (6) - Object isn't snapped Fixed.
2. 00:59:445 (1) - Mind the gap http://puu.sh/nmWrd/8191b4e403.jpg Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:684 (4) - NC should be here instead of 00:14:064 (1) - for the new rhythm Fixed.
2. 00:19:760 (4) - ^ Fixed.
3. 00:49:761 (4) - You missed the timing :O http://puu.sh/nmWAY/bae8133d96.jpg Looool xDD You didn't see anything
4. 00:50:900 (3) - Rhythm inconstancity with 00:56:977 (2) - I prefer the second one tbh, but well Fixed.
5. 01:01:154 (2) - Overmapped, just add a reverse on 01:00:774 (1) - Fixed.
6. 01:05:141 (1) - Overmapped and it makes hide the stronger beat+ vocal Fixed.
7. 01:06:850 (6,7) - Could improve blanket Fixed.

[Insane]

1. 00:07:894 - add note, would also fix ds with 00:07:989 (2) - Fixed.
2. 00:18:528 (6,7) - spacing error Fixed.
3. 00:21:945 - You map the streams but not the funny burst 00:22:325 - I personally think burst are 100% funnier than streams

[World]

1. 01:01:154 (2) - totally off timed, starts on nothing and finish on nothing. The point on the music is here 01:01:344 - Fixed.

Not checking "World" more in detail though, not my style.

Good luck!
If you have any question feel free to PM me.

uuuget wrote:

Hi,from my modding queue
[World]
00:40:647 (6,7,8) - distance snap? Fixed.
00:52:230 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow better Fixed.
[Hard]
00:16:723 (1,3,4) - can make one more backtracking Nop.
[Normal]
00:10:078 it would be better if there has an object Nop.

Staiken wrote:

I'm not pro modder

Easy :

00:28:496 (4) - You could put a new combo, it could look better for beginner who count 1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4 Fixed.
01:05:331 (5) - " " " " " " Fixed.

That's all D: I did normal and hard too but i didn't find anything else D/

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General

1. Nothing to say

Insane

1. 00:07:609 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit weird, maybe try to move the slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4655879
2. 00:27:165 (1,2) - Fix blanket (nazi)
3. 00:29:255 (2,3) - I don't really understand why 3 is so close to the slider
4. 00:35:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe make a star
5. 00:38:748 (4,1) - Fix blanket
6. Maybe you could try to have less stacks

World

1. 00:09:888 (3,4) - Make them closer
2. 00:13:116 (2,1) - Collides
3. 00:28:401 (4,1,2) - This direction change might be too brutal, maybe try to make a little curve
4. 00:34:002 (3,5) - This overlap makes it hard to read
5. 00:39:698 (2,3) - Collides
6. 00:57:546 (2,3,4) - Stack 2 with 00:56:976 (4) -
7. 01:05:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much spaced imo decrease the spacing a bit
8. 01:15:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:19:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ rip
10. 01:21:849 (1,2,3) - This one may be fine because it's only a triple but it's still a bit too much spaced imo
11. 01:24:887 (1,2,3) - ^ but after the previous jump (7) it's almost impossible to hit them correclty lol, try to make it flow better

Nice map, some jumps feel a bit random though, try to make some shapes like squares triangles and stuff
Good luck! damn so much baguettes here

Deadmadeon wrote:

Hello, i wish this mod helps
Easy
I think it's fine
Normal
00:10:268 (1) - i think that this slider should be here: 00:10:173 - because you are following the melody No creo, tick azul en normal.
00:52:040 - in this time would be a circle i think Fixed.
00:58:116 - the same Fixed.
Hard
i think is good
Insane
00:10:268 (7) - move this slider to 00:10:173 - Reemplazado por un slider de 00:09:888 (6) - hasta 00:10:173 -
World diificulty it's great :3
an amazing work here xD
PS: Sorry for my bad english :c

[ Koneko-Chan ] wrote:

Just a suggestion, it's completely up to you but the majority of 3 star beat maps have a HP Drain of 5, so I would recommend lowering the 3 star version down one level of HP Drain. Fixed.

Namki wrote:

yo.

[General]
. o.O
Add one more combocolor for better view. I'll find one xD

[Easy]
00:08:368 (2) - this slider looks weird for me, because of 00:09:318 - this strong part. Fixed.
00:16:344 - you have skipped beat here, so this is inconsistent for whole diff, don't skip those beats or skip more. That look strange if you mapped without skipping and there appears some random skip. Fixed.
00:19:001 (4) - bad idea to end the slider with the big white tick, especially here, this beat is so strong, place a circle. Fixed.
01:14:824 (1) - sounds bad, because 01:15:774 - vocal starts from here, I request do a 2/1 slider and place a circle. Fixed.
I noticed some bad blanket sliders, I think you can find those. Fixed.
Else looks fine.

[Normal]
There are some rhythm issues.
00:21:090 (3) - okay, delete this and place circle 00:21:280 - here. Fixed.
00:18:052 (1,2) - place 1/1 slider instead of those two. yeah Fixed.
I really don't like sliders like 00:54:318 (3) - this one, I hear circle at the big white tick, yeah, Does it sounds better? It perfectly fit's the vocal! Fixed.
Oh, I don't sure about 1/4 sliders, because I asked Mako long time ago and she said that this is a bit complex for normal diff. It's also that I wonder :/

[Hard]
00:28:306 (5) - this is do overmapped, I don't hear 1/4 repeat here, I hear only 1/2. Fixed.
00:52:610 (2,3) - seems like you accidentally put 1.4 spacing here. ?
00:19:191 (1) - this circle is overmapped, there is no sound in music to put this circle there. Fixed.
Else if good.

good luck~ Thanks~

DesuNuts wrote:

remodding coz I want to see a ranked version of this song Same :'c

Normal

I don't quite understand what you mean by "overlap"
00:15:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - overlap the notes notes with the slider start/end, I dont think this is suitable for 2* (doesnt have to be fully overlapped, but a bit more) Fixed?
00:43:685 (5,1) - same as above, overlap a bit more Fixed?
00:50:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed?
00:56:976 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed?
01:05:521 (1,2,3) - one note between 2 and 3? sounds empty, maybe repeat the slider or something Nop.
01:11:407 (1,2,3) - repeat 1, change 2 to a single note at 01:12:356 Fixed.

All of this are not grave mistakes, so it's up to how you want the map

Hard

00:33:052 (5) - this sounds overmapped, remove? Nop
00:33:242 (1) - change to 1/4 repeating slider or triplet? ???
Also you might wanna increase DS for the kial time, but that's up to you

Insane

Nothing much I can say about this, but some non-1/4 sliders in the kial time, maybe you wanna change SV for them? IMO SV changes would fit the music more
eg : 01:03:053 (4) and 01:03:812 (1) Fixed.

World

gib more pp pls
On a serious note, this is cool, but I would suggest adding SV changes and DS changes, makes the map more 'colourful' if you get what i mean
Fixed?

Good luck with this!

Siiilver wrote:

DesuNuts wrote:

remodding coz I want to see a ranked version of this song Same :'c

Normal

I don't quite understand what you mean by "overlap"
00:15:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - overlap the notes notes with the slider start/end, I dont think this is suitable for 2* (doesnt have to be fully overlapped, but a bit more) Fixed?
00:43:685 (5,1) - same as above, overlap a bit more Fixed?
00:50:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed?
00:56:976 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed?
01:05:521 (1,2,3) - one note between 2 and 3? sounds empty, maybe repeat the slider or something Nop.
01:11:407 (1,2,3) - repeat 1, change 2 to a single note at 01:12:356 Fixed.

All of this are not grave mistakes, so it's up to how you want the map

Hard

00:33:052 (5) - this sounds overmapped, remove? Nop
00:33:242 (1) - change to 1/4 repeating slider or triplet? ???
Also you might wanna increase DS for the kial time, but that's up to you

Insane

Nothing much I can say about this, but some non-1/4 sliders in the kial time, maybe you wanna change SV for them? IMO SV changes would fit the music more
eg : 01:03:053 (4) and 01:03:812 (1) Fixed.

World

gib more pp pls
On a serious note, this is cool, but I would suggest adding SV changes and DS changes, makes the map more 'colourful' if you get what i mean
Fixed?

Good luck with this!

Not giving kudosu since you already have had one. ( )

Spagett wrote:

EASY

SPOILER

00:08:369 (2) - Should be a repeat slider. Fixed.
00:10:647 (1,2,1) - Should be just one whole slider, make it simple, though. Fixed.
00:19:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should have sliders and circles in the same order, that can throw beginners off 00:13:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed.
00:49:571 (4) - Should have circle where white tick in slider is (00:49:761), and a new slider should start where 4 ends to where 1 begins. Fixed.
01:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - Should be all sliders, like 01:05:331 (1,2,3,4) - is. Fixed.
01:17:482 (5) - is mapped to lyrics, so when you map 01:20:521 (3,4) - , it should be the same. We're talking about beginners, don't want to throw them off
^^ Fixed.
1:24:888 A spinner should go here, and replace the slider inside of it. Fixed.

NORMAL

SPOILER

00:09:318 (3) - end this on blue tick Fixed.
00:09:698 (4) - end this on blue tick Fixed.
00:10:268 (1) - start on blue tick No, blue tick (start) in normal :/
00:12:926 (1) - have this slider repeat starting on the first red tick inside(00:13:116) to the closest red tick (00:13:496) Fixed.
00:52:230 (5,6) - have a slider replace five, and have the slider go to where 6 begins, then have a circle for the slider end of 6 to replace that. Fixed.

I'm stopping here. The mapping is fine, you're good on that, it's just the flow of it that needs improvement. If you notice a similar point in the song that you've already mapped, don't be afraid to copy and paste it, as long as you make slider shapes different and move circle around accordingly, it'll flow significantly better. Great Mapping.
(P.S.) I would've called "Expert" "FOUR DIMENSIONS", but that's just a personal preference.

Chewy-san wrote:

From my queue

Expert

00:14:445 (3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8lio Fixed.
00:15:774 (2,3) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8miz Fixed.
00:18:622 (5) - this looks okay, but this looks better http://prntscr.com/ag8muv Fixed.
00:18:622 (5,6) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8n5s Fixed.
00:21:850 (2,3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8nd5 Fixed.
00:25:647 (3,4,1) - move this over right http://prntscr.com/ag8o2v Fixed.
00:30:394 (1,2) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8ohf Fixed.
00:32:293 (2,3,4) - move this down http://prntscr.com/ag8oqj Fixed.
00:33:432 (1) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop, I think it follows better the rhythm.
00:34:572 (4) - move it closer to 00:34:192 (3) - http://prntscr.com/ag8p1j Nop.
00:35:711 (3) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop.
00:39:508 (1) - ctrl+g Nop.
00:41:027 (1) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop.
00:41:787 (4) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Fixed.
00:42:546 (1) - ^ Nop.
00:44:065 (1) - ^^ Nop.
00:44:635 (2,3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8pv4 Fixed.
00:47:483 (2) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Fixed.
00:47:863 (3) - make a 1/2 circle Fixed.
00:54:318 (5) - ctrl+g Fixed.
01:03:432 (4) - ctrl+g Fixed.
01:26:597 (1) - move this up a little Fixed.

END OF MOD

KDS PLZ Obvious~

• [Expert]
  test play

1. plz change to ar9 since it's only 158 BPM, this bpm is not fit with ar9.4
2. 00:09:318 (4) - NC
3. 00:38:369 (2,4) - not good blanket
4. 00:47:483 (2,3) - i would change this to 2 1/2 slider since it seems like you are mapping with the vocal
5. 00:52:420 (3,4,5) - a little bit overmapping imo, triplet just doesnt fit the music at all and the music doesnt sound like there should be a triplet either
6. 01:23:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - here should be a nice stream not triplet lol

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

• [Expert]
  test play

1. plz change to ar9 since it's only 158 BPM, this bpm is not fit with ar9.4
2. 00:09:318 (4) - NC
3. 00:38:369 (2,4) - not good blanket
4. 00:47:483 (2,3) - i would change this to 2 1/2 slider since it seems like you are mapping with the vocal
5. 00:52:420 (3,4,5) - a little bit overmapping imo, triplet just doesnt fit the music at all and the music doesnt sound like there should be a triplet either
6. 01:23:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - here should be a nice stream not triplet lol

GL~

WhozChaos wrote:

[Easy]
00:49:572 - instead of a short slider keep extending the slider before ending it at 00:49:761 (4) - or you can bounce like this Fixed.
01:11:406 (1) - End not snapped Fixed.
[Normal]
00:08:559 (2) - I don't hear anything here? Fixed.
add a 1/2 slider here 00:08:749 (2) - Fixed.
00:12:166 (5) - I may be deaf but I don't hear anything here as well remove note deaf xD
[Hard]
Couldn't Find Anything Nice! Thanks~

1. No deben de haber elementos en el folder que no están siendo usados: esto es para reducir el peso del folder a la hora que los jugadores descarguen tu mapa. Por lo tanto procura eliminar soft-hitclap13.wav y World.png respectivamente.
2. Todas las lineas verdes deben estar debidabemente snapeadas a la línea de tiempo esto es para evitar posibles errores en el futuro con el efecto de hitsound que hayas utilizado. De esta manera, mueve 00:11:032 - para aquí 00:11:027 - para arreglar esto.
   Nota: Debes de aplicar esto en todas las dificultades.
3. No sé si soy yo pero el mp3 está cortado en una parte muy rara creando un punto incómodo una vez terminan de clickear el último objeto. Sería bueno que recortaras el mp3 en esa parte para reducir su volumen porque honestamente me dejó esperando por más. XD

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hola, desde #modreqs :3/ Vengo a hacer un comentario pequeño de las cosas que deberías evitar antes de que llamer a un BN.

[General]

1. No deben de haber elementos en el folder que no están siendo usados: esto es para reducir el peso del folder a la hora que los jugadores descarguen tu mapa. Por lo tanto procura eliminar soft-hitclap13.wav y World.png respectivamente. Si, esto era de antes de remapear todas las dificultades, usaba 13 y la otra bg era de expert, pero decidí dejarlo igual, gracias por recordármelo.
2. Todas las lineas verdes deben estar debidabemente snapeadas a la línea de tiempo esto es para evitar posibles errores en el futuro con el efecto de hitsound que hayas utilizado. De esta manera, mueve 00:11:032 - para aquí 00:11:027 - para arreglar esto.
   Nota: Debes de aplicar esto en todas las dificultades. Cambié el offset muchas veces, creo que esto era normal que pase creo :'c
3. No sé si soy yo pero el mp3 está cortado en una parte muy rara creando un punto incómodo una vez terminan de clickear el último objeto. Sería bueno que recortaras el mp3 en esa parte para reducir su volumen porque honestamente me dejó esperando por más. XD Creo que podría cambiar de short size a tv size, es lo mismo pero termina en 01:25:647 -

Good luck!

Atmino wrote:

There's a big issue with the offset on the expert diff, I thought it was me, but not. Great map btw

Siiilver wrote:

Atmino wrote:

There's a big issue with the offset on the expert diff, I thought it was me, but not. Great map btw

Lol, I will check, Thanks~

Atmino wrote:

My bad, I think I was drunk , everything is ok ^^

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Siiilver wrote:

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Oh, Thanks <3
Trataré de insistir mas en #modreqs por BN xD

Deadmadeon wrote:

haz un foro de M4M :S a mi me sirvio harto :3

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
what a coincidence, me and Kuro actually doing the same project to https://osu.ppy.sh/b/883063
you can mod if you want

Insane

OD too much for this diff, i prefer lower it
the AR tho, please 9 better
00:12:486 (1) - why NC? I think it's okay 00:11:346 (5,9,13) - NC should be here instead of there Fixed.
00:23:498 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
00:34:892 (4,5) - it feels weird to be clickable
00:35:651 (2) - triplet Fixed.
00:38:689 (2,3) - flow not good, and better the blanket Fixed.
00:47:138 (6,7,8) - no sound I think it's okay
00:59:954 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
01:01:094 (1,2) - you decided to follow vocal here, and then you suddenly follow drum here 01:01:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - feel weird Not follow vocal.
01:03:373 (3,4,5) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:06:411 (3) - end at blue tick Fixed.
01:26:157 - still a sound here, dont ignore Fixed.

Expert

00:10:967 (1) - same suggestion NC with the Insane diff Fixed.
00:13:911 (7) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay
00:17:043 (1,2,3) - this feels pushy, try ctrl + g at (2) and reposition (3) to somewhere arround x:164 y:240 Fixed.
00:22:265 - missing note Fixed.
00:23:119 (1,2,3) - stream better than kickslider I think it's okay
00:41:727 (2,3,4) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:02:328 (6) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay

overall your map need more improvement at designing the pattern.

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map

Acnos wrote:

Por que todavia no aprueban este beatmap, estoy esperando que lo aprueben hace meses

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~

[General]
01:14:765 - end of kiai time must be here Nah, I think it's fine.

[Easy]
00:07:929 - finish Fixed.
00:08:309 (1) - clap? I don't see it necessary.
00:08:689 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:208 (3) - ^ ^
00:21:600 (4) - ^ No, but I put in 00:21:221 (3) and 00:22:740 (5) Thanks~
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.

[Normal]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:08:689 (2) - clap Same as Easy
00:09:069 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:588 (1) - ^ ^
00:15:524 (1) - remove finish Okay
00:21:600 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:575 (2) - clap ;w;
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ~

[Hard]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:841 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:23:119 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:27:676 (1) - remove finish ^
00:38:309 (1) - finish ^
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:803 (1) - ^ Nah.
01:20:841 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^

GL ~
and if you dont mind please mod my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/445845 Thanks ~