In summary: All Fixedsmsh150 wrote:
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M4MGeneral
- Video is bit late to the music. Fix it by putting Video-offset to -185ms. Fixed.
- I didn't focus so much on Insane and Extra diff cause I saw more errors in lower diffs. Okay~
Easy
- 00:13:685 - I think you missed a finish sound here? Fixed.
- 00:14:444 (2) - You could improve flow by rotating this note bit right. Fixed.
- 00:15:584 (3) - missing clap sound Fixed.
- 00:19:761 - Add finish hitsound Fixed.
- 00:20:141 (1) - remove finish hitsound, since this isn't a right hit on the stroke Fixed.
- From 00:25:837 - to 00:37:989 - : I would recommend to use some kind of hitsounds in second and fourth hits, for example clap since it's meant for that. Fixed.
- 00:26:027 (1,2) - Hmmm, I wouldn't recommend to start mapping from red tick, when white ticks are okay here. Replace them so, that they start from 00:25:837 (1,2) - and make (2) longer to fix rhythm. Fixed.
- 00:32:103 (1) - Same goes here as above. Replace this note so, that it starts at 00:31:913 (1) - and end at 00:33:053 - Fixed.
- 00:42:926 (4) - blanket would be improved a bit Fixed.
- 00:50:141 - Missing finish hitsound Fixed.
- 00:50:901 (2) - Replace this with a cope of 00:51:660 (3) - , and make it CTRL + G and CTRL + H. Then it could look like Fixed.this. To my mind it look better than the current one. Fixed.
- From 01:02:293 - to 01:25:647 - : I would recommend to use clap hitsound instead of whiles, since it makes the play more rhythmical and whistles in that part are bit lame, tbh. Fixed.
- 01:12:546 (2,3) - To improve rhythm, you could swap the order of objects: first circle, then slider. It's not really recommended (usually) to end slider at downbeat. Fixed.
- 01:20:521 - add finish hitsound Fixed.
- 01:20:901 - delete finish hitsound Fixed.
- 01:25:078 - add finish hitsound Fixed.
Normal
- 00:15:584 (1) - Rotate the slider bit right so it would look bit better with (2) and flow would be improved a bit too. Fixed.
- 00:18:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm feels bit off from the music, try this one. Fixed.
- 00:19:761 - add finish hitsound and delete it from 00:20:141 (1) - Fixed.
- 00:21:660 - Tbh, you could add finish hitsound here. It fit really nicely here. Try it out! Fixed.
- 00:26:027 - Using finish hitsound in this play sounds really off the beat! Finish should belong to 00:25:837 - but since you follow vocal, there should not be a finish hitsound. Fixed.
- From 00:25:837 - to 00:37:989 - : Same about claps here as in Easy diff. Fixed.
- 00:31:913 - Add finish hitsound and delete it from 00:32:103 - Fixed.
- 00:59:445 (1) - You could add here finish hitsound. Fixed.
- 01:01:913 (1) - Delete finish hitsound and if you wanted to, you could add imo clap hitsound here. Fixed.
- 01:02:293 (1) - Add finish hitsound Fixed.
- 01:08:558 (3) - Delete finish hitsound and add it to 01:08:369 - Fixed.
- 01:24:888 (4,5) - This rhythm feels bit unwieldy. I'd improve it by replacing 01:24:888 (4) - with circle and then start slider from 01:25:078 - and reverse it back at 01:25:363 -. Fixed.
Hard
- 00:07:609 (1) - Missing finish hitsound Fixed.
- 00:10:647 (6) - I think here should be NC. Don't really see reason why to make combo longer than one stroke. Fixed.
- 00:12:165 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here, if you want to. Fixed.
- 00:15:583 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here to improve rhythm. Fixed.
- 00:17:293 - Somehow it feels so odd to not have a note here. You could put circle here to improve rhythm. Fixed.
- 00:16:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You are missing all the claps, which there should be. Fixed.
- 00:21:659 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here to improve rhythm.
- 00:22:799 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is fine here, but that how you cut those 1/4 slider isn't. In general, people are assume that those are cut to 4 packs, not to 5. This photo is giving you better explanation: http://puu.sh/nl10w/eb96a0e495.jpg . (On Green colour number 1 means that there should be start of the 1/4 reversing slider, 2 and 3 have reverses, and 4 is the end of slider. Things on red colour tells how you have done it now.) Fixed.
- 00:32:102 (1) - Delete finish and add it to 00:31:913 - Fixed.
- 00:46:723 - Missing clap hitsound Fixed.
- 00:49:761 (4,1) - This is bit overmapped. To fix it, you need to shorten slider 00:49:761 (4) - with one reverse, and replace 00:50:235 (1) - to 00:50:141 - . Fixed.
- 00:55:078 (2) - missing clap here and 00:55:837 - . Fixed.
- 00:56:597 - missing clap Fixed.
- 00:57:356 (3) - missing clap Fixed.
- 00:57:926 (5) - Remove NC. Fixed.
- 00:59:255 (4) - You need NC here. Fixed.
- 00:59:255 (4,5) - You have here pretty same problem as at 00:22:799 (1,2,3) -. In general people are assuming that 00:59:255 (4) - slider ends at 00:59:920 - , but you are now ending it at 00:59:825 - which is bit wrong in music theory. To fix this, you need to make 00:59:255 (4) - longer with one reverse, and replace 00:59:920 (5) - to 01:00:015 - and shorten it with one reverse. Fixed, but differently.
- 01:02:293 - missing finish hitsound Fixed.
- From 01:02:293 - to 01:25:647 - : Try to use claps always when possible. This music has climax on chorus, and now it sounds bit lame when there isn't almost any claps. Fixed.
Insane
- I recommend to check your hitsound as I have mentioned in previous diffs'. Fixed.
- 00:13:116 (2) - You are now mapping some melody that doesn't exist there. Replace this slider with one circle to 00:13:116 - , because there is no melody beats at 00:13:211 - . Fixed.
- 00:37:419 (6,1) - I expected these objects to have 1/4 intermediate, but it had 1/2. Overlapping them isn't best option here, so I recommend to replace 00:37:988 (1) - or 00:37:420 (6) - to somewhere else. Fixed.
- 00:49:666 (4) - Start slider at 00:49:761 - . Usually starting sliders from blue tick isn't recommend, especially when there is no melody in blue tick. Fixed.
World
- I recommend to check your hitsound as I have mentioned in previous diffs'. Fixed.
- 00:11:406 (9) - you could put NC here, to make stream better to be read. Fixed.
- 00:13:116 (2) - Same thing as I said in previous diff about melody. ^ Fixed.
- 00:27:165 (9) - I Highly recommend to replace this circle somewhere than just overlapping it with (8) Fixed.
- 00:51:755 (4,5) - Delete 00:51:755 (4) - since it's overmapping and you could replace 00:51:850 (5) - bit futher from (3) to make it flow better. Fixed.
- 01:26:597 - Missing important note here. Put here a circle. Fixed.
Good Luck!!
Thanks~ Updated
27/02 EDIT: Fixed red tick sliders (Insane), Updated!