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Topic Starter
Hazu-

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
-Kazuki-

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
World 3:
Topic Starter
Hazu-

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here Fixed.

00:17:311 - same here Fixed.

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there Fixed.

00:51:298 - remove this circle Fixed.

;w;

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Wou_old_1

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Yes, I had one (720) but it was heavy.
I'm sorry for my English xD
Wou_old_1
Here the video if you need
Size : 17.9 mb ( 18 mb )
If you have any questions please chat with me or pm ...
If you reject the video please say
Wou_old_1
[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A )

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note


[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 -
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 -
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -


[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this


Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A ) Fixed Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane and World.

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this Fixed.
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this Fixed.
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image Fixed.
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket Fixed.
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note


[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good Fixed.
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 - Fixed.
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 - Fixed.
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then Fixed.
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid Fixed.
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then Fixed.
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -
Fixed.

[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this
Fixed.

Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Thanks! Updated :)
NoSoupfOu
From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful
01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly.
00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 .
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward.
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here.
00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in
00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is.
Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Bukkake Blast wrote:

From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful Don't worry c:
01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly. Okay, Fixed Hard and Insane.
00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 . Fixed.
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg Fixed.
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm. I don't think so.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward. I think it's okay xD
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here. It is what I hear, Fixed.
00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater Fixed.
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in Fixed.
00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to Fixed.
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above Fixed.
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here Fixed.
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is. Fixed.
Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it Don't worry

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful
Thanks! Updated
Dyl-Byl


Hi! From My Queue!

[General]
Timing:

Delete the second timing point as those two are on the same offset.

[Easy]
00:27:181 (2) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs.
00:29:649 (4) - ^
00:32:118 (1) - This slider doesn't look right.
00:48:637 (3) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs.
01:25:094 (4) - Add spinner or whatever after this.

Good luck with the map.
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Dyl-Byl wrote:



Hi! From My Queue!

[General]
Timing:

Delete the second timing point as those two are on the same offset.
Delete in Hard, Insane and World (Easy and Normal is for slider's speed)

[Easy]
00:27:181 (2) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
00:29:649 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:32:118 (1) - This slider doesn't look right. Fixed.
00:48:637 (3) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
01:25:094 (4) - Add spinner or whatever after this. No, I think it's okay

Good luck with the map. Thanks!
Thanks, Updated!
Ayucchi
First mod so I hope this was helpful >.<
From #modreqs

00:36:485 (3) - Add a note on the white tick/line after this, would make the map fit the music more IMO
00:28:130 (5,6) - Move the notes to 27:941 and 28:131 respectively? Again, fits the music better
Mostly of these are just making it fit the music better
00:17:307 (2) - Remove this note and
00:17:498 (3) - Move this slider's start point to where it was but keep the end point the same, something like this :
00:21:959 (2) - Move this note to 21:856 and add one more note at 22:055
00:51:580 (4) - Move this slider to 51:485
I didn't see much problems with this, well done :D but I think you could make the spacing between the streams smaller? Would make it less frustrating for people playing Insanes but just my opinion
01:00:030 (9) - I think you should start a new combo here
01:00:789 (1) - Remove this note or add it to the stream, because currently it's fairly difficult to hit and kind of out of place
01:09:713 (6) - new combo
01:11:232 (12) - new combo
01:12:941 (1) - this shouldn't be a new combo
01:13:511 (3) - new combo
00:12:181 (1) - shouldn't be a new combo
00:12:940 (2) - new combo here
00:26:991 (4) and 00:27:560 (3) - should be removed, it's overmapped
00:34:396 (4) - remove this, overmapped
00:35:536 (1) - remove
00:36:105 (4) - remove

That's all I could do, like I said, first time modding so I hope this was helpful :)
I had fun playing this mapset, good luck with it!
Topic Starter
Hazu-

DesuNuts wrote:

First mod so I hope this was helpful >.<
From #modreqs

00:36:485 (3) - Add a note on the white tick/line after this, would make the map fit the music more IMO Fixed.
00:28:130 (5,6) - Move the notes to 27:941 and 28:131 respectively? Again, fits the music better Okay, Fixed~
Mostly of these are just making it fit the music better
00:17:307 (2) - Remove this note Fixed.
and 00:17:498 (3) - Move this slider's start point to where it was but keep the end point the same, something like this : No.
00:21:959 (2) - Move this note to 21:856 and add one more note at 22:055 Fixed.
00:51:580 (4) - Move this slider to 51:485 Fixed.
I didn't see much problems with this, well done :D but I think you could make the spacing between the streams smaller? Would make it less frustrating for people playing Insanes but just my opinion Thanks! :3
00:12:181 (1) - shouldn't be a new combo Fixed.
00:12:940 (2) - new combo here Fixed.
00:26:991 (4) and 00:27:560 (3) - should be removed, it's overmapped Fixed.
00:34:396 (4) - remove this, overmapped Fixed.
00:35:536 (1) - remove Fixed.
00:36:105 (4) - remove Fixed.

That's all I could do, like I said, first time modding so I hope this was helpful :)
I had fun playing this mapset, good luck with it! Thanks!!
Updated!
Akunosu
Cuando lo aprobaran?? lo espero con ansias :)
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Acnos wrote:

Cuando lo aprobaran?? lo espero con ansias :)
Ni idea, ojalá no me demore mucho xdd
Además la diff de octaforce aun está WIP.
__Ag
hi,sorry,Im late

00:09:332 (1,2) - its in hard diff I think too difficult,change to slider?
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap,try it,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563755
00:28:321 (5) - its too bad temp
00:51:485 (4) - its too bad temp,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563788
00:59:934 (5) - unsnap,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563797
00:09:428 - you missed drumbeat on here
00:19:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too bad temp,nothing on 00:19:302 - and00:19:681 - ,then you missed voice on the00:19:492 -
00:22:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - why are you made this stream style in insane diff????
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap
00:40:472 (7) - so bad
00:51:485 (1) - .....


I think you should make maps be more efforts
Topic Starter
Hazu-

__Ag wrote:

hi,sorry,Im late

00:09:332 (1,2) - its in hard diff I think too difficult,change to slider? Fixed.
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap,try it,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563755 Fixed.
00:28:321 (5) - its too bad temp Fixed.
00:51:485 (4) - its too bad temp,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563788 Fixed.
00:59:934 (5) - unsnap,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563797 Nop.
00:09:428 - you missed drumbeat on here Fixed.
00:19:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too bad temp,nothing on 00:19:302 - and00:19:681 - ,then you missed voice on the00:19:492 - Fixed.
00:22:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - why are you made this stream style in insane diff???? Fixed?
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap Fixed.
00:40:472 (7) - so bad Fixed.
00:51:485 (1) - ..... You. Didn't. See. Anything. (Fixed.)


I think you should make maps be more efforts
Thanks, Updated!
Kyle Y

21:21 Kyle Y: hi(?
21:21 Siiilver: Hi :3
21:22 *Kyle Y is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878217 SCREEN mode - Naked Dive [Insane]]
21:22 Kyle Y: I am keep trying playing on it..
21:23 Kyle Y: seems not suitable for me to play..
21:24 Siiilver: oh
21:24 Kyle Y: maybe it is becasue of my ability
21:25 Kyle Y: could you mind to play it once?
21:25 Kyle Y: Insane diff
21:27 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4585573
21:27 Kyle Y: are you free to have a in-game modding?
21:28 Siiilver: yes
21:28 Kyle Y: which diff you think it is the worst, except World diff
21:29 Kyle Y: I cannot mod expert diff
21:30 Siiilver: Insane
21:30 Kyle Y: could you mind I only mod one diff?
21:31 Siiilver: No problem ^^
21:31 Kyle Y: okay let start
21:31 *Kyle Y is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878217 SCREEN mode - Naked Dive [Insane]]
21:32 Siiilver: Okay~
21:32 Kyle Y: you want me to say something harsh or kind words?
21:33 Siiilver: harsh
21:33 Kyle Y: then don;t cry
21:34 Siiilver: okay
21:35 Kyle Y: becasue some mapper said I am only comment on their map and then bit me
21:35 Kyle Y: slap me
21:36 Kyle Y: I think offset -15ms sth like that
21:37 Siiilver: okay
21:37 Kyle Y: then I use new timing (-15 ms one )
21:38 Kyle Y: when I play this map once, I just feel I am clicking circle and sliding, but seems not like playing the song
21:38 Kyle Y: I think the most seriours problem is about the pattern you use
21:39 Kyle Y: rhythm seems not a big deal
21:39 Kyle Y: btw SV you use is higher than normal
21:40 Kyle Y: you used 1.4 x1.5 =2.1 SV but normally 1.6~1.8, it is not unrankable, but only for convention
21:40 Kyle Y: if you planned to remap you map, just consider to lower a little bit
21:40 Kyle Y: fast is not equal to difficult
21:40 Kyle Y: I don't know if you agree to it or not
21:43 Kyle Y: 00:10:173 - you missed this sound seems weird feeling
21:43 Kyle Y: 00:08:654 - this also
21:44 Siiilver: fixed
21:45 Kyle Y: if you listen to the music very carefully, it is full of 1/4 sound
21:45 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/nhhk6/8c45945cb9.jpg
21:46 Kyle Y: 00:07:609 (1) - also, 3/4 extented suggested
21:48 Siiilver: Fixed
21:48 Kyle Y: btw, you can reject my modding, just provide your reason is okay
21:48 Kyle Y: 00:12:166 - you suddently spaced out this circle, not quite common in Insane diff but Expert
21:48 Kyle Y: at least I never read a map like you, or maybe seldom?
21:49 Kyle Y: I mean, like this note
21:50 Kyle Y: 00:10:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I also worry about this pattern, becasue stream jump is not that common also, but slider jump is okay
21:51 Kyle Y: you use a high ds for the stream (1.0) and I think it is not quite suitable here, becasue if you use that high ds stream, unless you want to emphasis it a lot, or expert diff, otherwise I think better avoid using it imo
21:54 Kyle Y: 00:15:204 - slider end like this I will avoid using slider end, unless you intend to use it, becasue slider end usually contain a strong beat, which suitable for clickable objects
21:54 Kyle Y: 00:15:204 - for this, I suggested you can ctrl+g 00:14:444 (4,5,6) - this rhythm, it is totally the same in term of sound, but different feeling
21:54 Kyle Y: you can try it later on
21:56 Kyle Y: 00:15:394 - for this circle, I think a little bit extra, of course you can keep it, but imo, removing it and use a 1/1 slider on 00:15:204 - is more suitable for the song
21:57 Kyle Y: 00:16:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - still ds too high
21:57 Kyle Y: I think here also nothing special to emphasis a lot
21:58 Kyle Y: I just leave a question for you, do you like using extented slider (3/4 beat slider)
22:00 Kyle Y: 00:19:761 - if you like, you can use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/nhi0a/d22819a930.jpg
22:01 Kyle Y: btw, if you like to use extented slider, you need to have lots improve on patterns also, and extented slider is not liked by every player
22:02 Kyle Y: am I go too fast?
22:04 Kyle Y: btw, you are fixing while I am talking?
22:04 Siiilver: i'm too slow xD
22:04 Kyle Y: um... in-game modding not assume for you to fix it now
22:05 Kyle Y: intended to see if you agree to the modding and giving responses
22:05 Kyle Y: it is aimed to know if you agree or not and raise question if you not sure about that modding
22:07 Siiilver: it's my bad english more than anything
22:09 Kyle Y: Language just for communiate, if I understand, then it is enough
22:11 Siiilver: i understand
22:11 Kyle Y: from 00:19:761 - to 00:36:470 - It is only pattern problem, I am not point it out here
22:11 Kyle Y: just find another modder, I cannot point all the modding to you, just leave some kudosu to next modder
22:12 Kyle Y: 00:36:470 - again, slider end problem
22:12 Kyle Y: 00:37:230 - also, check if you missed any sound
22:14 Kyle Y: you just have a lot of slider end problem, I think you can check it on your won?
22:14 Kyle Y: own*
22:15 Siiilver: yes
22:16 Kyle Y: 00:59:920 (8,1) - stream jump, also avoid in Insane but you can use in expert
22:16 Kyle Y: 01:01:628 - check missing sound? stream sound here if my ear is fine
22:18 Kyle Y: pattern here is like this http://puu.sh/nhiKj/ae6b65aea6.jpg
22:19 Kyle Y: 01:02:293 - 01:08:369 - this 2 rhythm is similar
22:19 Kyle Y: if you are not sure about it, you can try to use same rhythm
22:19 Kyle Y: 01:13:684 (3) - unsnapped end
22:20 Kyle Y: 01:14:445 (1) - 1/1 slider is more suitable for feeling, I cannot further explain this for you, casue it is all about experience
22:20 Kyle Y: like http://puu.sh/nhiRQ/cd3f83e7c0.jpg
22:21 Kyle Y: 01:24:128 (3) - this slider off-screen, this one really unrankable
22:21 Kyle Y: check ailmod (ctrl+shift+a)
22:23 Kyle Y: any question?
22:23 Siiilver: no
22:24 Siiilver: all fixed
22:26 Kyle Y: anymore want to ask?
22:26 Kyle Y: maybe I can only tell you just as stated above, casue even if those problem, you need to fix a lot
22:27 Kyle Y: usually this problem not only appear in one single diff, just check the other diff also
22:28 Siiilver: okay, i'll check
22:29 Kyle Y: if you all okay about it, then I will pose it on forum for kudos
WazZzaA123
[World]
00:13:700 (1) - Add finish to the start (maybe at the end ? you check for yourself)
00:19:776 (1) - Add finish to the start
00:22:814 (1) - Finish
00:24:333 (5) - ^
00:31:927 (8) - ^
00:36:484 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:079 (1) - ^
00:48:636 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:042 (1) - Finish at the end
00:59:269 (1) - Finish
01:00:789 (1) - Finish at the start
01:01:169 (2,3) - Finish
01:08:383 (1) - ^
01:12:941 (1) - 01:13:321 (4) - 01:13:511 (6) - ^
01:14:460 (1) - Finish at the start
01:20:536 (1) - Finish
01:23:574 (1) - Finish at the start
01:25:093 (3,4,5) - Finish

I was about to mod it like a normal mod but I saw that you needed Hitsounds so I did that for you \:D/


AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]
Background
naked dive.jpg is 1302x738, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
world bg.png is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[Insane]
Snapping
00:22:623 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:699 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
If you want I can do the rest of the Hitsounds just pm
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