SCREEN mode - Naked Dive (TV Ver.)

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Topic Starter
Hazu-

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ If you have any questions you can ask me in game.

[General]

  1. The bitrate for .mp3 is 229 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. Generally this is an unrankable issue so you must convert it somehow. Fixed.


[Easy]

  1. 00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) . ¿?
  2. 00:12:849 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - Why did you use 1.0 DS on this part? You should keep a constant DS in Easy so I strongly recommend you to use 1.1 DS here. Fixed.
  3. 00:15:887 (4,1) - Try blanket this, like what you did here 00:12:849 (2,1) . Fixed.
  4. 00:17:406 (2,3) - 00:18:925 (4,1) - I won't spam any more, hope you get what I'm trying to get across. Blanket in a nice place and time will make your map much more appealing.
  5. Try to mainly stick on white/red ticks when you're mapping Easy/Normal. Also sometimes it's easier to stick on instruments than vocals, like this part for example 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4) . You can just simply put that reverse on the white tick here 00:51:203 to match the drums. You will notice that drums will land on most white ticks, drum is the one of the most easiest instruments to follow for beginners so make sure you keep on track with that. (If you can't here the drum, try listen to the song with 25% speed, that will help a lot) Fixed.
  6. 01:23:862 (3) - Try avoid putting objects near the life bar please. Fixed.
  7. Downbeats should be clickable so it'll become easier to follow the rhythm.


[Normal]

  1. Please make your spacing consistent with DS. The spacing in this diff are pretty messed up, try to recheck and fix them all. After you fixed all that you can call me for a remod. Fixed.


Sorry for modding just Easy, cuz I feel like my modding quality has been sub-par lately so I'm not confident with things I pointed out. Good luck~ Oh, don't worry :)

Thanks~ Updated!
Electoz
00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) - Spacing errors, sry. I was too tired and I missed this one for some reason.
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Electoz wrote:

00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) - Spacing errors, sry. I was too tired and I missed this one for some reason. Fixed, no problem :3

Updated!
octaforce
Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Topic Starter
Hazu-

octaforce wrote:

Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Of course ฅ•ω•ฅ
octaforce
Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce wrote:

Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Of course ฅ•ω•ฅ
-Kazuki-
00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;
Topic Starter
Hazu-

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
-Kazuki-

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
World 3:
Topic Starter
Hazu-

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here Fixed.

00:17:311 - same here Fixed.

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there Fixed.

00:51:298 - remove this circle Fixed.

;w;

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Wou

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Yes, I had one (720) but it was heavy.
I'm sorry for my English xD
Wou
Here the video if you need
Size : 17.9 mb ( 18 mb )
If you have any questions please chat with me or pm ...
If you reject the video please say
Wou
[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A )

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note


[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 -
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 -
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -


[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this


Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A ) Fixed Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane and World.

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this Fixed.
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this Fixed.
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image Fixed.
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket Fixed.
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note


[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good Fixed.
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 - Fixed.
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 - Fixed.
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then Fixed.
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid Fixed.
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then Fixed.
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -
Fixed.

[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this
Fixed.

Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Thanks! Updated :)
NoSoupfOu
From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful
01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly.
00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 .
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward.
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here.
00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in
00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is.
Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Bukkake Blast wrote:

From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful Don't worry c:
01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly. Okay, Fixed Hard and Insane.
00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 . Fixed.
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg Fixed.
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm. I don't think so.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward. I think it's okay xD
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here. It is what I hear, Fixed.
00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater Fixed.
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in Fixed.
00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to Fixed.
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above Fixed.
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here Fixed.
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is. Fixed.
Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it Don't worry

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful
Thanks! Updated
Dyl-Byl


Hi! From My Queue!

[General]
Timing:

Delete the second timing point as those two are on the same offset.

[Easy]
00:27:181 (2) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs.
00:29:649 (4) - ^
00:32:118 (1) - This slider doesn't look right.
00:48:637 (3) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs.
01:25:094 (4) - Add spinner or whatever after this.

Good luck with the map.
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Dyl-Byl wrote:



Hi! From My Queue!

[General]
Timing:

Delete the second timing point as those two are on the same offset.
Delete in Hard, Insane and World (Easy and Normal is for slider's speed)

[Easy]
00:27:181 (2) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
00:29:649 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:32:118 (1) - This slider doesn't look right. Fixed.
00:48:637 (3) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
01:25:094 (4) - Add spinner or whatever after this. No, I think it's okay

Good luck with the map. Thanks!
Thanks, Updated!
Ayucchi
First mod so I hope this was helpful >.<
From #modreqs

00:36:485 (3) - Add a note on the white tick/line after this, would make the map fit the music more IMO
00:28:130 (5,6) - Move the notes to 27:941 and 28:131 respectively? Again, fits the music better
Mostly of these are just making it fit the music better
00:17:307 (2) - Remove this note and
00:17:498 (3) - Move this slider's start point to where it was but keep the end point the same, something like this :
00:21:959 (2) - Move this note to 21:856 and add one more note at 22:055
00:51:580 (4) - Move this slider to 51:485
I didn't see much problems with this, well done :D but I think you could make the spacing between the streams smaller? Would make it less frustrating for people playing Insanes but just my opinion
01:00:030 (9) - I think you should start a new combo here
01:00:789 (1) - Remove this note or add it to the stream, because currently it's fairly difficult to hit and kind of out of place
01:09:713 (6) - new combo
01:11:232 (12) - new combo
01:12:941 (1) - this shouldn't be a new combo
01:13:511 (3) - new combo
00:12:181 (1) - shouldn't be a new combo
00:12:940 (2) - new combo here
00:26:991 (4) and 00:27:560 (3) - should be removed, it's overmapped
00:34:396 (4) - remove this, overmapped
00:35:536 (1) - remove
00:36:105 (4) - remove

That's all I could do, like I said, first time modding so I hope this was helpful :)
I had fun playing this mapset, good luck with it!
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