fizzn1 wrote:

General

* Добавь тэги: Enjoykin, Enjoyker, Youtube
* Киаи раздели, больно длинные
* Я наверное придираюсь, но комбо цвета слишком яркие, попробуй эти. Вот цвета в HEX: #fefba7, #ffa478, #f75b99, #59d181
* Немнoго бэкграунд не в тему. Попробуй сделать скриншот из видео и его поставить.
* Если меняешь бг, то и комбо цвета новые не забудь

Beginner

00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - Ближе их, изи же. Не издевайся над новичками.
* Как же мало хитсёрклов от 00:14:165 (1) до 00:21:780 (2)

Advanced

00:00:550(1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - как и на бегиннере

Rilene wrote:

Random mod but feel free to request more mod once you got more mod.
AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________

Beginner

00:09:780 (1) - Remove New Combo?
00:20:857 (1,2) - This plays ok but looks strange, maybe space them out by tiny bit?
00:24:550 (1,2) - Same as above.
00:26:857 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:45:780 (3,1) - Try space them out by a tiny bit and make a better blanket.
00:50:857 (2,3) - Same as above.

Advanced

00:15:319 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles?
00:25:473 (3) - Maybe reduce them the length by 1/2 beat? It feels kinda strange to ignore the strong beat.
00:44:857 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles? Copy pasted from above.
00:54:088 (1,2,3) - Looks aesthetically pleasing but feels weird to play

Good luck on getting ranked!

Namki wrote:

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osu file format v14

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6th wrote:

SPOILER

[Beginner]
[Namki's Hard]
Increase AR to 8 ar=7
Increase OD/HP drain increased
I suggest remapping the first kiai, spacing is too high at many moments :/
00:30:088 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292727 I'll fix blankets later
00:34:473 (2) - Move it to the right fine
00:38:396 (2) - CTRL+H ye
00:41:165 (1) - Move it down? ok
00:45:319 (2,3) - spacing I won't shange spacing, cuz those jumps is quite easy, btw I used same spacing 00:15:780 (2,3) - here.
00:51:550 (4) - ^ ^this is jump pattern, why not use them?
00:52:242 (1) - CTRL+G? It doesn't matter, both is good
00:55:473 (5) - I suggest adding a circle instead of repeating it okay

6th wrote:

SPOILER

[Beginner]
Increase DS to avoid overlaps


[Advanced]
00:19:934 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:27:319 (3,4) - Move it a little bit up
00:28:242 (1) - This should start at 00:28:011 - doesn't it ?
00:43:011 (1,2,1,2) - Flow is like squared, it is awkard
00:45:780 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:55:242 - I advise using that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292692 or repeating the last slider

[Namki's Hard]
Increase AR to 8
Increase OD/HP drain
I suggest remapping the first kiai, spacing is too high at many moments :/
00:30:088 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292727
00:34:473 (2) - Move it to the right
00:38:396 (2) - CTRL+H
00:41:165 (1) - Move it down ?
00:45:319 (2,3) - spacing
00:51:550 (4) - ^
00:52:242 (1) - CTRL+G ?
00:55:473 (5) - I suggest adding a circle instead of repeating it

TheMefisto wrote:

Совсем слабый мод здесь о/

Beginner

1. OD +1, HP +1
2. 00:17:626 (2) - x:91, y:138 и 00:18:088 (3) - х:42, у:225 (ну и изогнуть чуть-чуть можно, чтобы флоу на следующий слайдер плавно шло)
3. 00:23:164 (2,3) - Ну и бланкеты не совсем бланкеты тут. Не буду заострять внимание, но можно же ровнее ._.

Advanced

1. 00:55:242 (2) - Может, лучше передвинуть слайдер на 1 тик дальше? Вот начать его отсюда 00:55:473 -

Namki's Hard

• 
  Ничего :^)

Удачи!

Prismetical wrote:

Heya!

Beginner

- you can call it Easy
00:01:473 - if you call it Easy you can map this then (maybe you can space it better when the circle is there)
00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - this is totally weird, so first we have white and red tick, then we have two white ticks after another, just because this isn't spaced or possible to space this is unreadable, you need to make it consistent
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - inconsitency in combo
00:30:088 - map that break, do something like that: (PS: remove the spinner then)

00:20:857 (1) - reverse and put a circle, remove 00:21:780 (2) -
00:55:934 - spinner here then?

Advanced

- you can call it Normal
00:04:242 (1,2) - rotate -> selection centre -> 70°
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - again the inconsistency of white and red ticks, no spacing so the player has no idea
00:17:165 - I would do this:

00:46:703 (1,2,3,4) - same here as above
00:30:088 - you can easily map the voice here, example:

00:44:396 (2) - move it, that it looks better with the slider

00:56:050 - spinner

Hard

00:09:780 (1) - fix, I want this to be symmetrical
- oh please, distance snap that thing... and map it like a Hard, without your weird spacing this would be the lost Easy+ diff
00:56:050 - spinner

Much luck!

Prismetical wrote:

Hard

00:09:780 (1) - fix, I want this to be symmetrical I don't want
- oh please, distance snap that thing... and map it like a Hard, without your weird spacing this would be the lost Easy+ diff what thing?
00:56:050 - spinner nah

freebird42 wrote:

Prisme's Hard

00:05:626 (1,2) - just a suggestion; how about copy 00:04:242 (2,3) - and then ctrl+h, ctrl+g and new combo? it doesnt really change anything, just makes here a bit simmeetry
00:09:780 - here how about just 3/4 reversal slider? http://puu.sh/mrEFh/d5c353862d.jpg
00:13:242 - i suggest here smth like this http://puu.sh/mrF5k/aaae6a94a8.jpg 1 is a spinner if anything
00:17:165 - i think here should be slider like this http://puu.sh/mrFez/60bc321e29.jpg
00:31:011 (4,5) - i personally think you should swap them on time scale
00:35:145 - shia says "over" here and it cant be emphasized just by a single note, so maybe 1/2 slider?
00:39:068 - i think you should add note here
00:41:145 - 00:44:376 - i think its better to map this part folowing the rhythm but not voice, also better start spinner here 00:43:914 -
00:53:145 (4,5) - swap them on time scale

you can use more hitsounds i think, not just whistles sometimes

overall diff is good, well mapped

Message to Shmiklak

попробуй поставить офсет 530, по-моему ноты немного отстают от музыки

если сделаешь, не забудь реснапнуть все зеленые таймсекции

Fluttershy552 wrote:

General:

Beginner- Nothing Special
But Maybe Changing the patterns on the Beginning. To Spaced.

Advanced - Try to change the Layout of The map on the Begining it looks a bit Spaced. Place the notes more in the cencter.
Put The Distance Snap on 1.2x or 1.3x

Beginner:

It Looks a bit like a 2009 map with the Straight Sliders... Maybe chaning it a bit

Advanced:

00:05:626 - Maybe put here a Note because it sounds go to the following note you can make a Slider aswell
00:10:473 - Put a Slider for the POOOOOIIIIINNNTT
00:12:550 - Start Slider there and end it on 00:13:242 -
00:16:011 - You must Put here a Note Because it sounds in My Opinion a bit Wierd without it.
00:19:703 - Same as Above
00:23:396 - Same Again
00:26:857 (2) - Maybe delete the Slider and put 2 Notes there
00:28:242 (1) - Let the Spinner Start here 00:28:011 -

00:30:203 - Start Mapping here its and Advanced Dif (Its Over Normal) and i think you CAN DO something good here "JUST DO IT"
00:45:550 - JUST place a Note there.
00:49:242 - Same
00:52:934 - Same Again


Conclusion:

Good Map so far Maybe put Some Harder Difs in the Set.
and Good Luck

shmiklak wrote:

I have one question. When you downloaded it? Nearly most part of your mod was made before D:

Revialink wrote:

Ентак, на м4м, все равно делать нечего

General
Во всех диффах переместите превью на 00:14:837 ну ок
В БГ можно убрать нижнюю левую белую надпись: зачем она? Если хочешь, вставь ее как сториборд перед началом карты, или же в конце уберу позже, к тому же я БГ менять хотел
А с кем Collab Advanced то? В диффе непонятно где-чье. Подпишите в названии карты и сделайте сториборд с указыванием моментов, где вы маппили Вообще я планировал с Намки, но пока что он чтот не отвечает, поэтому адвансед пока что не трожь

Easy

00:09:760 (1) - NC убери Задолбали уже. Почему все не любят этот НК?! НЕ УБЕРУ!
00:18:068 (3) - изогни, чтобы конец плавно переходил к след. слайдеру ладн
00:49:453 (2,1) - ^ а тут не соглашусь
00:23:145 (2) - на х:192 у:312 ладно
00:25:453 (2,1) - паттерн для изи не подходящий. Сделай переход по движению слайдера ок
00:45:760 (3) - ^ воздержусь
00:47:606 (2,1) - ^
00:48:530 (1,2) - ^
00:52:222 (1,2) - ^
00:26:837 (2) - х:360 у:336 Какая корова укусила тебя?
00:50:837 (2) - x:64 y:208 ладно

Normal

00:09:760 (1) - NC убери ._.
00:32:837 (3) - начальную точку поверни в сторону по направлению слайдера 00:33:760 (1) нуу хз

Collab Advanced

00:09:760 (1) - NC ._.

SushiDOTO wrote:

[Hard]

00:16:222 (4) - Прямой слайдер лучше закруглить немного, сейчас не 2007, поэтому старайся использовать меньше прямых слайдеров.
00:34:222 (2) - Этот слайдер я бы повернул на градусов 5 по часовой, для симметрии.
00:35:145 (3) - Эту ноту стоит передвинуть выше, или убрать вовсе.
00:42:068 (2) - Слайдер нужно сместить влево.
00:57:760 - Как насчёт спинера здесь? уже сколько раз пишу модерам что нет

Easy и Normal выглядят неплохо. Ня :3

Cheesecake wrote:

Hey, M4M

[Metadata]

Title should be "Just Do it! (Auto-tuned)" like in the source i'll ask BN about it

[General]

Maybe put a link to that video^ somewhere in the description, perhaps on your banner (not necessary ofc) Yeah cool!

[Easy]

00:00:530 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - You should resnap these to 1.0x, since you're only allowed to use one DS in a whole Easy difficulty.
00:23:606 (3) - Move the middle anchor point to X:81 Y:252 so it looks nicer with 00:26:376 (1) - (remember to have grid snap off)
00:41:145 (1) - I don't really like how this looks nor is it allowed in an Easy (I think), it also breaks 1.0x DS
00:53:145 (2,1,2) - For things like this it's good to create a Structural Triangle™ between the slider end and (1,2), I'll help you out here with an example: Move (2) to X:484 Y:185 (remember to resnap 00:54:991 (3,4) - )

[Normal]

00:17:145 (1,2,3) - Looks cramped and a little messy to me idk what do
00:24:530 (1,2,3) - Spaced a bit too much, resnap it (it'll also look better on the overlaps)
00:32:606 (2,3,4) - Don't like this for the same reason as above
00:50:376 (1) - The sudden loud normal sampleset surprised me a bit

[Hard]

00:17:145 (1,2) - I don't like how tiny this overlap is
00:17:606 (2,3,4,5) - Best to not try and blanket triplets at difficulties like this because that happens
00:21:183 (2,3) - You can get away with spacing this out a bit more so that it looks better
00:31:914 (1,2) - Tiny overlap triggers me again
00:37:453 (1) - Move this so that it's perfectly diagonal to (2) (use control and distance snap) Would look better
00:39:299 (1) - Underlap it to 00:37:914 (2) -
00:42:068 (2) - Looks better if you fix the DS

Pretty good, just needs some polishing. Good luck!

-Bumblebee- wrote:

Hi there! random mod ^^ lol

Easy

1. 00:31:914 - create an Inherited Point here and set the volume to 30/35%
2. 00:38:376 (2) - add a clap here and remove it from 00:38:837 (3)
3. 00:41:145 - add an Inherited Point and set again the volume to 65% here
4. 00:56:376 - add a spinner here and make it finish at 00:59:376 pls no

Normal

1. 00:31:914 - as on the other diff, create an Inherited Point here and set the volume at 30/35%
2. 00:32:606 (2,4) - fix this overlap
3. 00:56:376 - add a spinner here and make it finish at 00:59:376 no

Hard

[Song Setup]

1. Set HP Drain Rate to 4.5 or 5
2. Circles are too large for a hard diff, so set the Circle Size to 3.8/4
3. Set AR to 6.5/7

[Beatmap]

1. 00:22:683 (1,2,3,4) - that's a huge jump, reduce a bit that distance
2. 00:21:991 - a note is missing here :/
3. 00:31:914 - as on the other diffs (Inherited Point)
4. 00:37:914 (2,3) - ^ (hitsounds)
5. 00:41:145 - ^ (Inherited Point)
6. 00:46:683 (1,2,3) - this sound like old school, try to arrotondate a bit them
7. 00:50:376 (1) - hitsounds here are too louds, so create an Inherited Point here and set the volume to 30/35%, after that create another Inherited Point here 00:50:606 and set the volume to 65%
8. 00:56:376 - add a spinner here and make it finish at 00:59:376

Keep mapping, good luck for ranking
Btw Sam, that the f*ck are u doing? LOL

Slayed wrote:

генерал

превью анснапнуто

метадата должна быть Enjoykin - Just Do it! по идее
а вот в теги можно засунуть Shia LaBeouf
имеет смысл также запихнуть Auto-tuned в теги, но это такое

изи

00:02:145 (2,1) - спейсинг очень неправильный и довольно нечитаемый для изи
я бы замапал лонг слайдеры вместо этих нот с сомнительным спейсингом вот ты и мапай, а я не буду

00:15:299 (1,2) - спейсинг пляшет

00:16:222 (2) - вистл на голову

00:17:145 (1) - можно поставить сэмплсет нормал (аддишнс - софт), чтобы показать, что на этом месте сильный бит. можно такое проделать со всеми большими белыми тиками в мапе (кроме начала)

00:20:837 - убери клэп, добавь финиш

00:22:683 (1) - убери клэп, поставь вистл и финиш бы снова я поставил

00:23:145 (2,3) - снова спейсинг

00:23:606 - вистл

вообще мелодия довольно легкая, так что смотри: на первый и третий белый тик ставишь вистл, на 2 и 4 - клэп. финиши по желаю, попробую указать

00:23:606 (3,1) - опять спейсинг

00:31:914 (1) - убери клэпы 00:33:760 (1) - с голов 00:35:606 (1) - 00:37:453 (1) - 00:39:299 (1) -. вистлы в вокальной части будут работать лучше

00:46:683 (1) - x=192 y=45 для лучшего флоу

и в киае снова продолжаешь вистл - клэп - вистл - клэп

00:50:376 (1) - на дуит лучше не юзать клэп. финиш смотрится увереннее

нормл

та же х с хсами, указывать не буду, скопируешь с изи

и снова то же самое про ноты в начале

00:18:068 (3) - мы что, в 2003? что это за линии. сделай кривую какую-нибудь, но это выглядит оч плохо в 2003 осу не было. Но в прочем ты прав

00:24:530 (1,2,3) - скопировать один слайдер и ктрл J? а то выглядит странно

00:26:376 (1,2) - флоу здесь должен смотреться вот так: http://cs630526.vk.me/v630526809/18da1/Kon0d7KRX7I.jpg

00:33:760 (1) - эта линия смотрится очень странно и не к месту

00:54:068 (1) - не, так ноты в нормале стакать нельзя, нечитабельно

а в конце спиннер не хочешь? не хочу, он не секас

в процессе