1. Desire (5,24 stars, 1218 notes)

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs, wanna M4M? Here's my map if you accept: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/371634

General

1. The white combo colour is too bright Combo 3 and 4 colors are now darker, if it's what you meant

Desire

1. 00:09:520 (1) - This stack can be hard to read Moved it to have better reading
2. 00:09:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - A bit too much spaced imo I'll leave it like it is for now.
3. 00:31:402 (1,2) - Collides Not anymore
4. 00:32:638 (6,1) - Nazi blanket Changed the position to fit better with the flow
5. 00:55:402 (9,1) - ^ ^
6. 00:59:990 (5,6,7) - Maybe blanket them Tried to make some + added some blankets to the next ones too
7. 01:08:109 (1,2) - Looks a bit awkward LOL it does, made less curvy
8. 01:11:286 (5) - Maybe a bit less curvy Done
9. 01:31:932 (4,5) - Maybe blanket Added
10. 01:41:991 (1,2,3) - Space it a bit more imo Spaced more
11. 01:42:697 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
12. 01:46:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^
13. 01:49:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^
14. 01:51:432 (2) - A bit weird, why not a little stream instead? Changed to stream
15. 01:51:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit too much spaced imo Made it less spaced
16. 02:01:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as ^ but way too much this time Made 2 parts of the stream less spaced and rest of the stream as it is
17. 02:03:167 (1,1) - Fix blanket Done
18. 02:06:961 (2) - Less curvy or no curve at all No curve at all
19. 02:08:373 (2,3) - A bit weird too, why not a stream? Changed to stream
20. 02:14:020 (2,3) - ^ ^
21. 02:19:667 (2,3) - ^ ^
22. 02:22:226 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing also it feels a bit too repetitive doing always the same stack, maybe try to alternate 2 normal stacks like this one and "spaced" stacks like I said for 01:46:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good
23. 02:25:314 (2,3) - Same as 02:19:667 (2,3) - Done
24. 02:28:932 (2) - Fix stack Done
25. 02:41:814 (3,5) - Collides Done
26. 03:10:932 (1,1) - ^ ^
27. 03:21:167 (3,4) - Fix blanket Done
28. 04:05:991 (1,2) - Fix stack Done
29. 04:13:755 (1) - Too curvy, it doesn't flow well with the next jumps Less curvy
30. 04:16:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much spaced Did the same thing like in 02:01:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
31. 04:25:049 (1,2) - Collides, blanket maybe Done
32. 05:02:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Too much spaced Lowered little
33. 05:20:461 (5,1,2) - It doesn't flow very well No it doesn't. I remember that part felting weird but forgot to fix it

That's it! Nice map for a first time
Good luck!

I also added those mods to last chorus and for other modders 3rd Kiai mode is the place to give special attention. Because imo it's a mess sorta.

agusch wrote:

Hi! I'm new to mod but I hope this help you

00:15:520 (6) - place that note on x:275 y:172? I think these 3 notes 00:15:167 (5,6,7) - will be more symmetrical that way Moved it to match snapping and little more symmetrical
00:19:226 (4) - Ctrl+g? Fine imo
00:32:814 (1) - blanket? Fine imo, but made it little more blanket-ish
00:36:167 (3) - Here I think Crtl+g will be better Really good idea, gives good flow imo
00:38:814 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can increase the distance between all this circles here, jumps will look fine here. I'd like to have kind of easing part here, but I made spacing to be more even, cause it was all over the place
02:08:814 (6,7,8) - you should space this notes, the kiai stats and the song starts going faster but there I need to stop my cursor Fixed
I think that u can improve this sliders 02:39:696 (1) - Fixed it to be quite fun imo 02:41:814 (3) - Did the same thing as in previous 03:10:932 (1) - Tried to think something clever there, but I ended up just smoothing it
03:33:520 (1,1) - blanket? Fine imo
04:24:343 (1,2,3) - same I mentioned before. But if you want to use that distance between those notes I would prefer replace the sliders for circles like this >> http://puu.sh/mYcqG/492bbaeb50.jpg Like I said in the previous post, that part is a mess and seems like that was the reason where the shoe was tight + that circle suggestion is nice. It would give more variation for the chorus, but not sure about this. Let's put it in the bag of ideas for later.
04:35:638 (1,2,3) - same here Fixed

good luck with your map, it's really funny to play

SnivehNDraegonz wrote:

M4M here

lmao mod

If non-standard slider velocity multipliers are used, they must be announced in the beatmap description during the modding process. Forgot that just wanted to some to point that out, but how I waited it if I forgot it >:3
Is the last timing point supposed to be like this? Whoa, no
00:29:638 (4) - move 2nd white slider point to x:291 y:293 to make the curve look better (imo) Well that was a lot of change Changed it though
00:31:402 (5) - del NC Deleted NC's after them, don't have no idea how they appeared there
00:42:696 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:814 (1) - nazi blanket fix by moving end slider point to x:327 y:70 and middle slider point to x:452 y:65 Ok
01:26:991 (4) - another nazi blanket fix by moving to x:328 y:191 and moving 01:27:873 (1,2) to x:267 y:99 I like this
00:53:285 (4) - is this supposed to be a blanket? No, but I trimmed it a little
02:53:991 (1,2,3) - was this supposed to be straight? Apparently, yes
03:10:932 (1) - the curves on this slider are a little weird (imo) so move them to something like this move 1st slider point (not including start) to x:156 y:302, move anchor point (red) to x:144 y:220, move 3rd point to x:131 y:151, move end to x:63 y:150 Fixed

03:21:343 (4) - move 3rd slider point to x:345 y:131 to make the blanket look better (imo) Fixed

1. 00:44:991 (1) - remove nc
2. 01:02:461 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 02:00:520 (1) - remove nc
4. 02:23:638 (1) - make it more curved and try to make blanket with 2
5. 03:12:343 - add finish
6. 03:13:755 (1) - remove finish? @ - @
7. 03:21:167 (3) - move to 242,166
8. 04:06:520 (2) - fix slider lel
9. 04:17:285 (1) - add finish
10. 04:27:873 (1) - move to 246,269 and move 04:28:138 (2) - with it
11. 04:42:696 (1) - add finish
12. 05:12:167 (1) - finish a 1/2 on big white tick is meh . maybe change pattern a bit?
13. 05:16:932 - remove finish
14. 05:29:285 - there is no spinner so u should remove the timing point here ~ its not necassory

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Yo~

SPOILER

Desire :

1. 00:44:991 (1) - remove nc Fixed
2. 01:02:461 (1,2) - fix blanket Fixed
3. 02:00:520 (1) - remove nc Fixed
4. 02:23:638 (1) - make it more curved and try to make blanket with 2 Fixed
5. 03:12:343 - add finish Fixed
6. 03:13:755 (1) - remove finish? @ - @ Fixed
7. 03:21:167 (3) - move to 242,166 Fixed
8. 04:06:520 (2) - fix slider lel Whoops... Fixed
9. 04:17:285 (1) - add finish Fixed
10. 04:27:873 (1) - move to 246,269 and move 04:28:138 (2) - with it Fixed
11. 04:42:696 (1) - add finish Fixed
12. 05:12:167 (1) - finish a 1/2 on big white tick is meh . maybe change pattern a bit? I don't really get this + pattern is just fine and goes well with song
13. 05:16:932 - remove finish Fixed
14. 05:29:285 - there is no spinner so u should remove the timing point here ~ its not necassory I guess I had a spinner at the at some point and that was left of it, Fixed

Nice Map owo

Good Luck~

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