General :
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http://puu.sh/qjbM8/d5a5a6b27d.png unsnapped on normal diff
- 01:28:130 (3,1) - probably change your combo colors for 4th and 1st.. in here (easy diff) is hardly noticeable
Easy :
- 00:28:307 (1) - end the slider at 00:28:836 - , music and vocal appear in there when whitetick has weak sound
- 00:33:954 (1) - ^
- 00:55:130 (3) - tiny spacing error
- 01:51:601 (1,2,3,4) - cant understand what is following by here 01:53:366 - 01:54:071 - are something you follow 01:51:954 - , if you follow crystal sound then 01:52:660 (2) - is better removed
- for 0,8x part how about use 1,3x spacing instead? stuff like 03:06:424 (1,2,3,4) - look too close each other imo
Normal :
- 00:05:719 - consider to reduce volume like 40% or 50%, 70% is too loud for calm part
- 00:33:954 (1) - try make the shape more symmetrical? it affects to flow as well
- 00:52:130 (3) - 01:30:248 (5) - 01:33:954 (5) - 01:53:013 (4) - 01:55:836 (3) - 02:23:718 (2) - tiny spacing error (1,06x)
- 01:02:895 (1) - 02:23:366 (1) - 03:11:366 (1) - i dont recommend this, as i see easy doesnt contain 1/2 slider repeat and much of it just 2/1 gap rhythm. this might cause wrong read for newbie
- 01:07:307 - imo this should keep mapped, i hear drum which you follow here
- 01:17:366 - skip this feels weird actually, there is strong drum and you've followed it since start of kiai
- 01:19:130 (5) - 03:54:248 (10) - spacing error (0.93x)
- 01:27:777 - end the slider here, it has trumpet instrument which you followed since 01:26:189 (1,2,3) -
- 01:37:483 (1) - 03:29:542 (2) - 03:39:601 (5) - 03:41:013 (2) - 03:45:777 (7) - tiny error 0,94x spacing
- 01:58:307 (3) - ^ (1,07x here)
- 02:04:660 - feel weird if skipped to map, drum is strong here even i know you follow vocal
- 02:06:248 (3) - spacing
- 02:19:483 (4) - 1,08x spacing
- 03:14:366 - map this is possible, drum is strong
- 03:24:777 (3,4) - stack isnt recommended for normal btw
- 03:26:895 (2) - 0,91x spacing
- 03:28:307 - 03:30:777 - intentional whistle? previous part doesnt have it
- 03:56:542 (3) - whatthefuck 1/4 slider repeats for normal
Hard :
- 00:42:071 (4) - imo rotate 20 degree 136,168 is better to make better flow to 00:41:718 (3,4) -
- 00:50:366 (3) - 152,248 to make a bit jump for cymbal in next?
- 00:54:777 (4) - i cant understand why jump here, vocal is weak, which is in pitch only 00:54:601 - 00:55:130 -
- 01:15:601 (3) - ^ (but the music is very weak on whitetick)
- 01:35:895 (1) - flow to this slider feels sharp enough here, try smooth it a bit :C
- 01:48:071 (5,6,7,8) - consider the spread, they should be slider repeat here. 4 circles for stream + 1 slider repeat is too hard unless for low bpm
- 02:10:660 (5,6,7,8) - 03:56:542 (5,6,7,8) - ^
- 02:44:895 (4) - inconsistency spacing and makes the design looks bad :C
- 03:15:601 (4,1) - hope overlap can avoided here, it looks not really good
- 03:51:425 (7) - random jump? because 03:50:895 - same sound which is strong mapped with low spacing. feel like inconsistent
Insane :
- OD 7,5 HP 6,5 for make spread with iyacat diff
- 00:29:366 (4) - too far for begining, consider to reduce the jump
- since 00:41:542 (3) - high vocal is mapped with normal spacing so 00:40:836 (6) - i guess 352,240 will be better to keep consistent
- 00:54:954 (5,1) - reduce the spacing a bit. they feel too far for me when music is relax
- 01:00:424 (7) - feel weird to see consistent spacing here because you do jump for 00:59:895 (4) - when music on 00:59:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are totally same (at least jump on 7 will be better)
good luck
some fixed!
